/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Redpill me on breasts and tummies

>>6931489
I have trouble finishing my projects.

>>6931531
Are you still doing this one?
Damn what has it been, months?

>>6931555
I haven't been working on this since march this year. I was cleaning up my folders and it made me depressed at how many things I left unfinished.

>>6931563
You started some new things along the way?
Also what's stopping you from continueing on the project?
You can take your time too.
What you've done so far is really good imo

Do you guys have trouble drawing certain specific characters? Even after doing countless studies and pieces I can't get them to look right while others are pretty much effortless. This is driving me crazy.

>>6931489
This is 9/10, only improvement I'd make is adjusting the tits on a light delay to jiggle separately.
Also anon who made this, please join us in the animation general. Our thread is on life support.

lookin for critique, especially in lower body part.

>>6931531
Same, got many pieces in different states. Always telling myself that i will come back and finish them, but you know how it is.
Also nice expressions, well done.

>>6932474
Nice, but a succ needs wings and tails.

still waiting for help

drew this for aco a while bac
can't get a sense of rendering stuff

Drew this not to long ago, any words of advice

>>6931531
That felt like a year ago. Isn't it already done. You're only missing a few lines honestly.

>>6921111
thanks for asking :) i dont get to talk about that sort of stuff too often and i hope it was of help. i think this piece is about done.

Working on faces, practicing from reference.

>>6932520
This looks great! The rendering looks fine to me, I don't think that's what you're actually unsatisfied with.
Check your values, look at the histogram, and adjust your levels.
Your mid tones are perfect, but I'd set the black end to 30 and the white end to 200.

70min all up

55min. Wanted to do more but I got hit by a car.

Resuming this

>>6932482
There's nothing that needs fixing but if you mess around with some cool lighting it could really pop.

>>6932944
your top left face looks fine but the bottom one is loosing a bit of it's form, you are on the right path but do practice face construction even with reference.

>>6932520
Love me some Power Girl. Really solid linework and her expression is incredibly hot. Would love to see more.

I'm pretty happy with this one, only I'm not sure the eyes, nose and mouth are actually aligned with the perspective of the character. I'm really bad at perspective. Could someone show me how to reorient the face details?

Skill level is getting way too high in for me, everybody relax
>>6934270
Hand over the blog now

>>6934662
That just looks silly. Needs better anatomy.

>>6934662
in here*

>>6932474
It seems that you have a placement problem, as if the pose for the character is in a different perspective compared to the throne. It feels more like she is floating over the seat rather than sitting on it, which gives the impression that the vagina is misplaced. I'd move her closer to the throne or change the pose a bit but I get where you're coming from

>>6934270
I recommend that you use human references for your practices, you will learn faster and more correctly using references.

>>6934856
My boiii. Is that a flying dick and balls? I need a quick rundown, kek. I dig it

Playing with animation

>>6934856
Some uncanny looking shit there. No appeal

>>6933929
Thanks man, good advice.
It's easy to skip steps when you're comfortable with something but important to reinforce good habits when practicing something new or different.

This looks good! Nice value range, good pose.
I'd work on your drapery a bit and the positioning of the arm on the left looks a bit off, but aside from that, great work!

>>6935097
>t. soulless npc
>>6935098
Nta, but would you say you can you get an intuitive understanding of folds or is it more of just memorizing common patterns and just kinda fudging it?

>>6935581
I'd say the only difference between the 2 options you laid out is confidence.

There are plenty of videos on the internet by incredibly skilled artists that explain how to analyze and draw drapery, but to me there is a major difference between understanding something in theory and being able to do something in practice. You can watch a video and "get it", but that doesn't mean you can watch a video and "do it". Just doesn't work like that. You have to "try it" and you have to fail a lot and often.

"Getting it" is important, because that's how you know what you're working towards, and that's how you build your road map on how to get there. "Trying it" and failing is how you build the experience and create the rules in your head to get it closer to what you want. And yeah, eventually before you know it, you wont be trying any more, you'll be "doing it".

I'm getting up my own ass, I'm sorry. This is all a long way of saying don't listen to the shit posters. You have to believe that you can do it, maybe not today, but one day with enough practice. Honestly, you may never get there, but you'll never stand a chance if you don't believe that you can.

>>6932520
hot expression, post blog c:

>>6935800
I don't think I communicated my question very well, but I appreciate the thorough response regardless!

>>6936820
Why do you even come here?

>>6936885
Oh come on it's not THAT bad.

How the fuck do i get soft blending in pixel art without having to use hundreds of colors?
I want to render like this but not only is my linework too damn thick the blush is so hard to replicate without looking funky

>>6936885
cause i can

>>6932338
based :))
here is my pomni piece.

>>6937218
Finally you admit you don't come here for critique and to learn.
That's a start. You needed just 5-6 years to stop drawing microcephaly, 10 more and you'll realize form lines aren't the same as countour lines. Keep it up.

This is the only body type that gets any kind of engagement on the internet these days.
Where are the communities that like pretty, fit girls?

>>6937479
Not entirely true. I get the most engagement both from thicc and very fit girls with abs.
It's true though that the more extreme you are, the better the engagement. At least in my case.

Am I on the right track with this?

>>6937353
At least he regularly finishes drawings, as opposed to this idiot
>>6934856
He’s plagued this place with his half assed sketches for years and never takes advice. I really wish we could lose these trolls.

>>6937353
>>6937654
Neck yourselves
>>6937622
I'm probably not the one to ask, but the poses feel stiff, especially Velma's.
The background feels very much tacked on and not like an actual portion of space that the characters are occupying due to perspective issues (horizon is too high I think). Good on you for drawing one though, keep it up

I did this one recently

>>6937838
You probably shouldn’t have.
>>6937682
>Neck yourselves
Sorry for wanting these threads to stop sucking.

>>6937846
The only low quality posts in this thread are ones like yours. If you want the threada to improve then work on yourself, or stop posting altogether

>>6937855
>threada
Kek. Someone here is low quality but it ain’t me.

>>6937903
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>>6937903
Oof, devastating. I concede, my friend

im trying to draw tifa but I'm having trouble finding reference for how she should look from the side. maybe I'll just start another drawing from a different angle instead

>>6938057
I got a good 50% chub from this but I'm biased towards blowjobs.

>>6937682
Thanks for the feedback! I think you are right, I need to work on giving my figures more dynamism. I’ll keep cracking away at it.

hey bros, finally getting my art out there, touched up this piece that i made a year ago

>>6938057
Tifa has enough content online you can google "Tifa side profile" and tons of refs will pop up.
>different angle instead
Her hair from the right is covering up most of her face, its an angle that is rarely (probably never) used. From the left is a better angle, it captures her hair and face better.

>>6938348
Kek, I love anon's expression. Very fun. I look forward to more
>>6937838
I like :) Went a little crazy with the soft shading, the legs and hips look like pillow shading and I think there's a bit too much blush/shadow in the armpit area and face. Keep it up

>>6938426
thanks anon, I'll try and redraw it from that side. hopefully it turns out okay since I don't have a ton of experience with 3D models as ref

>>6938426
>>6938057
Her animal motif is dolphin and her original concept art of her makes her hair dolphin like. I use that as way to break down and portray her hair with the hair reacting things happening to Tifa as if it was live dolphin and the big strand running down by the right side hair as dolphin's front limb

anyone else getting a steady stream of bots following them? I am getting 1 - 2 a day for some reason

>>6938723
I've noticed anytime I use tag #commission it brings bots and their message requests. So i dont use that tag anymore and instead just type commission with no hasthag

>>6937906
>>6937946
The patronizing tone of the poster is what makes the error funny. Especially cause it comes from a crappy artist.

>>6937838
Good stuff
Navel's a little low
I like the asymmetrical tits but they should show some motion

>>6932954
>female FUB
YESSSSSS

>>6932308
This is great stuff and it's a crime it got ignored

I don't know what thread to post this on but I thought maybe here for criticism.
Working on a smut comic from Starbound OCs for fun, can't actually show it to anyone I know or in person. I know I've got a long way to go. Lay it on me

>>6939223
I like the dynamics between the two characters. You did a pretty good job conveying they're personalities through their poses and expressions.
I think you should divide the left and right halves more do it's first that you don't read from left to right. Nice work
>>6932867
Went too dark with most of the shadows on this imo. You should take that ambient blue light and make it overtake the majority of that shadow and just leave a little sliver of dark core shadow. Especially on the boobs and face. I like everything else though!

Nice

>>6937838
Very nice work with the rendering

>>6939762
can't say the same for you

>>6938057
Is that you minotaur NTR anon from months back? If so I recognize you

>>6939762
>can't draw
>can't paint
>just can't

>>6940100
the only way to get better at it, is by keep doing it, wouldn't you agree anon?

>>6938348
blog NOW

>>6938057
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>>6940446
thanks anon

>>6932482
garbage bin material

>>6932482
The only thing that will help you now is a bullet to the brain.

>>6939762
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>>6932482
This thread has been so fucking bad so far.
It's over.

Kino thread boys, we're back. Keep it up

>>6940111
nta but no
practice makes permanent, not perfect

>>6941212
Good bait, I almost responded seriously

>>6941761
why you got light mode

>>6938805
no love for traps on ic

>>6931489
Oh no! Tifa has been gooed!

at what point can you make a living off porn? my best twitter post has 70 likes

>>6942097
That depends on a million factors, not the least of which is cost of living

>>6942147
if i want to make 1000 USD per week, i'd need to do something like 2 $100 commissions each day that maybe take 4 hours each. and this is without considering taxes. somethings not adding up

>>6942172
Where ever you live I need to avoid it like the plague. $4k per month just to break even, holy fuck.
For reference a typical mortgage is about $600 and rent (no utilities) is around $1k where Iive.

>>6941761
blogerino?

>>6942172
You got about 8 years before you can live off of art, unless you just started your Twitter recently and have incredibly appealing artwork already

I'm trying to practice perspective with a low angle shot of a nude woman flashing but it's pretty difficult. does her pelvis even look right?

your a nigger

Cait wip

>>6942097
Dont count on Twitter. Go to art sites and build following on your niche

>>6941976
Love Tifa in compromising situations

Imma make my current 3 pics comm into animation too

>>6942623
Why don't you clean up your coloring? In this particular instance, why didn't you delete the hair color outside of the lines? Any particular reason for this?

>>6942623
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>>6942828
>the three horsemen of stagnation
now we just need sizefag in here and it will be the complete tetrad of NGMI

>>6942960
I have already made it :3

Are the boobs too high?

>>6943078
yeah always leave room for the delicious upper chest clavicle area. maybe think of where the nipples are on a male chest, should be in the same spot on a female chest. i tried to demonstrate this but it didnt work out too well

>>6942960
Wdym, I've already posted work ITT
>>6943021
Very nice

>>6942962
If you consider those childlike wrestling illustration making it, then you are completely retarded.
Come back in 4-5 years and maybe then we can talk. Right now your stuff is beginner tier.
Unless you consider being able to hold a pencil making it. Then you definitely made it.

>>6942962
Don't kick the man while he's down

>>6932482
There you go, glad I could help.

>>6932482
>All these bitter replies
I genuinely dont know where these are coming from, this is a well done piece for all it's worth, good anatomy and styling here. And even if it wasnt and this is the begest shit on the whole thread, I dont see how this is worth a "kys" or "absolute trash" comment.

Am I missing something? Are these characters supposed to be from some source that is not supposed to be lewded like a kids show or something? If so, you guys are being outright retarded.

>>6943508
pyw

>>6943650
This is /crab/ general. There's a couple discord trannies or maybe just one really salty samefag who can't cope

>>6943650
this has been posted several times, people are feed up with it.

wip thingy

>>6943650
I feel like it's not THAT bad but you're overcorrecting, it looks like box art from a dollar store scratch card, cheap and souless

>>6943659
U 1th

Finished this a while ago

>>6943508
The wrestling autist doesn't care. The wrestling autist has commissions to draw, the wrestling autist has other wrestling artists and fans of the the genre to mingle with

>>6943800
that's like the textbook definition of a cartoon.

>>6944101
bessie higgenbottom is cute as fuck, they should have used duncanville or bigmouth

>>6944099
kinda based ngl

Thoughts?

>>6944099
>The wrestling autist doesn't care
Which is 100% reflected in your work.

>>6944182
I think the word you were looking for is kinda dunning kruger.

>>6944099
makes you wonder why they bother posting their works here if they're not seeking to actually improve

social media really has been a detriment to society

>>6944332
Ok then point out something that would make his work look better.

>>6944335
they won't care
so why should i bother?

>>6944336
Yeah that's what I thought.

>>6944338
No, that's my line, shitter.

>>6944339
You can't point anything out. You scream it's le shit. No wonder he doesn't listen.

>>6944340
I can point out you're being a pedantic faggot.
>waaaah waaah y u no wasting ur time offering constructive criticism to someone who clearly doesn't want it so we can keep shitposting and epic trolling and calling everyone a crab?
kill yourself

>>6944341
Holy shit just give me one thing and I'll stop replying. You'd rather write an entire book of pissy insults then actually help anyone.

>>6944344
Perspective.
Anatomy.
Linework.
Wrestilingfag needs to grind his fundies out of /beg/. I don't need to be specific either, if that's what you're were going to go with next.

Now hit me with the "pyw" or "crab" or the usual tranny snark, you absolute faggot.

>>6944347
Ok now what about those three giant categories is so bad? Now pick one and be more specific.

>>6944355
>be specific
and there you go, as if i didn't call it

His work as a whole is on beginner level. He should grind everything.
Last (you)

>>6944359
>his art is le shit
could you be more specific
>his art is le shit in all categories
lol what.

>>6944361
You see, that’s a no drawing crab. He’ll probably insist he’s already posted art here but won’t say which piece is his. He can’t provide better feedback because 1) he never planned to, being a crab and all 2) he doesn’t draw and so wouldn’t have any idea what he’s talking about.
Sadly, something like 80% of the “feedback” on /ic/ comes from “people” like “that””.”

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>>6944359
I'm gonna have my wife read these posts out loud while she's giving me handjob

>>6944439
Challenge her to read a them out loud while giving a blowjob.

>>6944336
No one cares about anything you have to say, doesn't stop you from shitting up the place any other time kek

>>6944224
generic but good

>>6931489

>>6944439
Whatever makes you cope better.

her body only took me like 15 minutes to draw and I've redrawn her face like 10 times. I couldn't find a good way to draw her arms either. think I'mma just take a break from this drawing and come back later and see if that helps

>>6944652
Noice!

>>6939504
yeh going that dark was the main idea i wanted to execute on the piece, i assume it looks weird... will have to revisit. related to that i wanted to make another piece but with light coming from a twilight sky, dark blue and diffused, i think it'd turn out more akin to what you're saying.

>>6937126
Dithering?

blurbro is literally improving why the hate

>>6945431
There is no hate from anyone who actually matters. It's just one guy trying to stir shit

>>6944052
I like this. I think the line weight where the boobs envelop the dick might look better thinner, as opposed to thicker, though

>>6945435
lol. nah. most of you are crabs.

>>6942623
Did the hair and changed some things

I have a question for those who "made it" (artists with lots of followers).
How true is it that, in order to become a porn artist, you must get used to conversing with your followers and even be open to roleplaying with them? I hate it when someone thinks they can tell me all about their sex life and even send me pictures of themselves just because they like my drawings, but I read on one site that you should get used to that if you want to get into this world. Is that why so many artists have personal discords?

>>6945620
I have been asked to roleplay but I politely tell them I just draw. It is good to be open and able to tell what you comfortable to draw and what not. Do remember you are delivering personal fantasy so treat your clients with respect even if you decline something.

>>6945620
I have around 300 followers, personally that sounds gay. Tell them to draw their own pictures frekin lame ass bitches.

>>6944628
blog?

>>6945620
As someone who's recieved comments like that, I usually just ignore it. I do respond to compliments and thank people in the replies. Yeah it happens, but not that much from what I've seen. Compliments and jokes are far more common.

>>6945714
https://twitter.com/tachiamko2

drawing 4th one now

>>6945778
looks good anon! really like the top right

>>6945835
Thank you brother, appreciate it.

>>6945778
Who are your breast influences? Your drawings are nice

>>6945931
idk, i am drawing for 7 years, i should know better. That's just how i draw them, the only person i studied consciously is perestroika and that was 4 years ago, i usually don't draw giant balloon like boobs, that was the request of commissioner, i prefer when they have of gravity to them.

Help me figure how to fucking paint cum please

>>6945523
Most people are trying to help you. Do you not want any critique?

>>6945931
thank you for compliment, i mostly just receive crabbing

>>6945964
l-arginine, onions lecithin and zinc

>>6945973
I wasn’t that anon. Just commenting on my general experience with you fuckwits.

I keep doing stuff that's probably too suggestive for instagram but felt like sharing somewhere

>>6932308
Best ITT

>>6946118
Most people are cool though, at least the actual artists. The no draws are crabs, but it's mostly one loser and maybe a few of his butt buddies

>>6946136
>my favorite ITT*

>>6946141
Yeah that's probably more fair to say

>>6945964
I just follow Doxy's guide and make tweaks from there. I also made some custom brushes with
common drip shapes to speed up the process.

>>6946181
Got any figure drawing tips/resources you use?

>>6946137
nah. You're a piece of shit, too.

>>6946260
Is there a link to doxy's full guide on the internet somewhere without me searching individually?

>>6946270
You mean the other cum tutorial (pic related), or his other tutorials (bottom left corner of previous pic)?

>>6945964
Currently I'm using this on the picture, but it depends on how lazy you are.
The best way is practicing the flow and ejaculation especially since that makes the biggest difference, on how good it looks.

The laziest way is using airbrush with increased hardness, then soft erase some parts and add highlight. Probably this is the least effort way, unless you download a brush, which makes cum-motives, but those are very hit or miss.

Another method I'm testing is drawing with a soft pure black brush the shapes, then drawing on it with a pure white. After this I use the finger smudge tool, to make it look more flow-y. You can combine this with a slight pink-grey airbrush, smugde that too, to make it pop more. Erase some parts, and add a highlights.

I'm aiming to draw a more milk-y type what Uno Makoto does, but unfortunately I haven't been able replicate the cum strings, and come up with a method for it.

>>6946290
Forgot the pic

>>6946263
worked through the vilppu anatomy course a few years ago.

>>6946267
So cool and edgy, you on winter break already? You're definitely a 4chinner

>>6945778
Nice

>>6946181
FUCK THIS IS HOT

I'm working on this panel for my webcomic. The pose and back twist has been giving me trouble. What do you think?

>>6946697
It's good. I think technically the breast in the background should be moved a little but I'm so tired I can't bother a redline and honestly I don't think anyone will care.

>>6946697
>>6946715

The neck/torso is kind wacky for the angle, here's how I would change it based on the angle

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>>6946260
What's linear dodge in clip studio?

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>>6946181
Only decent art itt.
All the rest is beginners and or no appeal bots that can't draw porn.

>>6946136
i think the breast should look more like this

>>6946461
lol. just keep telling yourself that.

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>>6932520
These are great

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>>6932474
These range from ok to mediocre

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>>6945532
These look range from really bad to garbage

>post work
No. I dont need to show George Lucas the movies I made to know that the prequels fucking suck. Blow me

>>6946984
>George Lucas the movies I made to know that the prequels fucking suck
For an opinion? no. for a direct critique? yes.

probably not the right thread, but anyone else think the ass looks wonky or am i just being retarded?

>>6946995
I think it may be a bit too big? But I don't really care, I like ass.
Maybe you should intensify that expression a bit btw, it looks a bit too neutral leaning.

>>6946992
do you think actual paid movie critics flash their own personal films to validate themselves when they say jarjar was a retarded idea and should never have been put in the movie. Uncomfortable truth time!

People know when they see something bad

>>6946998
It is kinda spilling out weirdly on her left side, but i don't care because i like big juicy ass

>>6946995
Yes you made her waist and lower back way too narrow, the size is fine

>>6946984
Lol, dumbass.

>>6946942
Yeah that looks better, they probably turned out like that because I drew her upright at first
Gots to study more

>>6947024
That was a misclick. thanks for pointing it out though and let me be clear, it is bad

>>6947036
How about you get off your lazy ass and actually critique the ones you don't like? Faggot.

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>>/6946984
Gotta love the opinions of nodraws, you guys dont know how difficult it is to come up with such thoughtless remarks. And refusing to post their work to back up their nonsense claims? How intelligent of them!

Reminder to not give attention to these pretentious fags.

>>6947038
No it would be pointless, you all would just make excuses for why the critique is invalid and seethe about how art subjective. I am not wasting anymore time on this

>>6947001
paid critics aren't making critiques movies specifically for the improvement of the person they critiquing directly, which is why I said direct critique as in you critiquing in the prequals directly to george lucas him-self.

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>>6946738
Thanks anons. I probably should redraw the whole thing until I figure out how to get the neck and pose right. I also can give her a better expression than that in version 2

>>6947045
>W-Well you guys wouldn't appreciate it anyway so I'm not gonna!
Cope till you rope, lazyass.

>>6947045
If you're too lazy to actually give a critique beyond "IT BAD BECUZ IT BAD REEEEEEE" then don't come here in the first place. Why should we listen to you anyway? You're too much of a coward to even post your own work on top of all your faggotry.

>>6947087
This.

>go into a these full of beglets
>say their refrigerator art is bad
>even compare it to pieces that are actually good
>watch the seethe unfold
Lol

Any artbros wana join a server?
https://discord.com/invite/g25fMvCv

>>6947111
>discord

>>6947102
Cope.

>>6947111
What’s on it

>>6945778
Looks like boring ai renders, but i am happy with result, [planning to add more "life" with rendering clothing and shit, still scared about thinking how to combine it anime shovel-faces.

>>6947111
> Discord
Pass. Different servers kept banning be for bullshit that happened outside said servers.

>>6944224
I love ragatha and you drew her so cute in this

>>6945778
Sameboob syndrome

>>6947134
>neuron activation

>>6947134
Damn this looks really good. Teach me your secrets plz.

>>6947087
This.

>>6947098
That too.

>>6947102
Imagine thinking you have any leg to stand on when you're too scared to post your own work.

>>6947111
post your work

>>6947170
Fine. Point out which one was yours I'll explain why it's shit then I'll post my work.

>>6947161
<3
>>6947164
Thank you, man. I can post process but i have "unique" process that i am not sure you can copy with anything besides Procreate. I take my sketch, throw color under it, each color is separate layer, i select only sketch and hide it. Then i take each color layer and push tone down while adding a little bit of saturation, i do it with every color and eyeball how much tonedown/saturation i need. After i have sketch with all pencil colored as the color i need, i merge all the colors, so now i have lines and "ao" and then i just fiddle hard round around, then i add highlight through overlay and local shadow.

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>>6946181
I really like your stuff. Reminds me of Joel Jurion a lot. Same effortless vibes.

>>6945778
This is great. I don't think I ever saw you post in these threads. Are you new here, or did I just miss you? Keep it coming please.

Pic attached is what I'm drawing RN. I think I'm overdoing the lineart and making my poses stiff. I should probably keep it more sketchy.

>>6947133
It's an art server friend, any art styles are welcomed and any skill levels. And whatever you might be in to as long as it doesn't violate discord ToS.
>>6947136
Happened in the last server too, so we sacked those mods.
>>6947173
Sure, but I keep getting banned when I do that.

>>6947230
i am posting here once a year. Thank you, i really like your lineart.

>>6947180
why don't you just pyw? it seriously can't be that hard

>>6947210
Thanks a lot, I'll try it out as I have been thinking about learning a different method to shade.
I have been trying out Marc Brunet's greyscale method so far, but when it comes to more erotic art somehow it just doesn't fit. Maybe I'm shit at it, I dunno.

>>6947298
https://mega.nz/folder/0VVwlR6I#CgQ4J-IXjAWKzHmwzyq15w

i recorded, sorry it's two videos, my 2018 generic ipad couln't handle canvas this size lmao

think I fixed her arms, shoulders and head portions. Might need to make the arm pulling up her shirt a little bigger though

>>6947294
Yeah that's what I thought and regardless of what I post it won't magically make yours good

>>6947339
>He deflects yet again
Just post your work anon.

>>6947144
Thanks!! Ragatha really is the best.
>>6947180
That wasn't me but I'll bite. Critique this one then pyw. >>6944224

>>6947230
You made the beginner mistake. Penis in anus, you can do better next time.

>>6947316
its fine dude, thanks for the help.

>>6946984
kys nigger my shit is peak

>>6947411
Haha.

>>6947230
Done.

>>6947247
Ty, you should definitely post more often. Inspire other anons and stuff.

>>6947540
pretty good. here are some things that i would do different:

her upper leg is not foreshortened
his leg should be visible under her leg
giving his lower arm more room otherwise it would collide with her lower arm behind the back
his face is inside her skull, pulling it back might be good
index fingers look like they are floating, changing the position helps
using her belt for showing the contour of the belly

>>6946715
>>6946737
>>6946738
Thanks for the help. I redraw it and tried again. I won't add the skelebra til I get the body right

>>6946181
HOT and also looks exactly like my boyfriend. Same body type, dick length, haircut and glasses wtf

>>6947679
proof or gtfo

>>6946984
>ok to mediocre
It's so over

>>6947731
He's just crabbing. Don't be discouraged anon

>>6932956
A car? How did that happen?
Did you hurt your hand?

>>6947745
Nice

>>6947621
Please kill yourself. Because if you think that's how a face should look from this angle there is no saving you. Where the fuck is her jaw? Even most retarded anime and cartoon simplifications don't look like this. When you go to hell for this picture they'll rip off your jaw and make you to draw what's left of your face forever.

>>6947981
Take your meds

>>6948008
You will always be a faggot monkey fighting cat to me harry potter.

>>6947981
anon, you don't think you're being too much of an autistic retard for something like that? Although, you're not wrong and i can imagine the vibe that anon wanted to portray, you should offer an actual fix.

>>6947954
ive seen constant improvement, keep going bro

>>6947230
ty!

>>6947671
I disagree with everything except for the heads clipping. Good catch. Thanks.

Fuck jannies always deleting my posts!
https://files.catbox.moe/z96460.jpg
https://files.catbox.moe/hs81r3.jpg

>>6948905
Nice.

>>6948905
nice, take comfort knowing you draw better than janny ever will

I cant get this off mind or sleep. If you can, then plz help her.

>>6947676
I'm going to try inking this tomorrow. Is there anything that stands out as wrong that I should fix before inking?
>>6946738
>>6946737
>>6946715

>>6947540
>>6947621
how are you render fags rendering? do you brush multiples times and then fiddle with the blur and blend. this process takes me hours. Is that normal?

>>6949204
There's something off about the back below the waistline.

>>6949297
Pretty much, spent ~10 hours on this maybe a little more>>6947621

>>6947981
kek ye i've been told it looks wierd but somehow it doesn't stand out as much to me and i was more concerned about other part of drawing

>>6931489
I recently finished a drawing of a Youtuber's mascot that I occasionally watch. Problem is that the drawing I made is a lewd of her mascot. The mascot itself is an adult human girl.

Should I post the drawing here, even though I didn't ask for her permission to do so?

>>6949387
DEWIT! Sides, if she's half decent someone will eventually lewd the mascot. Might as well get it first.

>>6949392
Alright, here it is. The male is also an adult, just didn't want to draw the rest of their torso.

I was trying to get the breasts to wrap around the penis, but I'm not sure if I drew the curves correctly.

I also don't know if drawing things like the blood vessels in the penis would help keep the characters from looking too flat.

No value was applied, but any advice on making shades and tints of the colors used would be appreciated.

This was a test. This sketch is old.

>>6949193
A when not aroused, b when aroused. So B for when shes hard because otherwise the A part would be concealed by fur if im not mistaken. Idk i haven't looked at a horse penis but my parents were dog breeders so ..yeah

>>6946992
NTA and I hate how shit and crabby his post is, but yes, he can tell other people that. He doesn't have to be better at art to criticise.

>>6947111
Fuck yourself with discord

>>6948905
Furry porn is not allowed on this board. Follow the rules and stop crying like a little bitch.
Good stuff btw.

>>6931489
Fuck, I forgot that thread exist.
Anyway >>6949791

>>6949297
Pic attached shows the layer structure of my drawing >>6947540
The numbers show the order in which I've drawn each layer, the text explains the layer blending mode.
Also, I forgot to include a background layer inside the colors folder at the bottom under the skin layer.

>>6949297
Pic attached shows the layer structure of my drawing >>6947540
The numbers show the order in which I've drawn each layer, the text explains the layer blending mode.
Also, I forgot to include a background layer inside the colors folder at the bottom under the skin layer.

For the Shading layer I first do cell shaded hard shadows everywhere, then I blend the form shadows. The cast shadows retain the hard edges.

>>6949297
Pic attached shows the layer structure of my drawing >>6947540
The numbers show the order in which I've drawn each layer, the text explains the layer blending mode.
Also, I forgot to include a background layer inside the colors folder at the bottom under the skin layer.

For the Shading layer I first do cell shaded hard shadows everywhere, then I blend the form shadows. The cast shadows retain the hard edges.

For the blush layer I just use a soft brush plus lasso tool if I need to isolate some areas. I use more magenta hues for the parts that have a lot of blood and muscle tissue right under the skin, and more orange-reddish hues for the fatty parts (boobs, butt, thighs, hips, tummy, etc).

Details layer includes eyes, mouth and lips, areolas, genitals (all areas that need a bit more of attention in terms of rendering).

A lot of times I collapse the blush and skin layer and add more yellowish colors to the areas that have a lot of fat under the skin (boobs).

The higlihts layer is on top of the folder, so that I can cover the line-art/sketch layer too.

Dodge layer is to add some nice glowy effects to the whole thing.

I feel like my hands are still looking a little weird.

>>6931489

>>6949479
Okay thanks, so the knot should be "inside" the sheath so when the erection happens B happens.
I'm really bad at drawing dog dick futa, since the head is weirdly shaped, but somehow horsedicks ones never caused so much problem. I think its even easier to draw than a normal human one, as I cannot decide on the head's look especially.

>>6948021
>>6949354
>anon, you don't think you're being too much of an autistic retard for something like that?
No. There is like a third of the face missing. As in whole jaw is just removed.

Even if the mouth is open the jaw and a part of the chin still should be visible.

>>6950209
isn't it obvious that it was intentional unless you are some kind of permabeg autist
I wasn't going for realistic look and exaggerated it to get close to those hentai faces

>>6948060
Yes. He can graduate from permabeg to permabegtard.

think the values or the brush work got fucked along the process, need to look into this, brb studying

>>6947621
dope dope
>>6946995
awesome line weight

>>6945778
goes hard

>>6946697
>>6946738
i have a few ideas on this pose.
this one would keep the butt post more prominent

>>6946738
>>6946697
or this one, this one is rougher, but moving the pelvis so it looks less awkward would help too.

>>6950240
You don't even draw.

I want to learn to draw lewd are there any good tutorials for learning to just certain parts
pic is my first attempt plz be nice

>>6950292
>>6950296
>>6949347
here's what I got. It's still not perfect but thank you for the help, it looks much better than originally.

>>6949441
I got a little carried away with the paint over. The colors you used here are a bit warmer (closer to red) than the original which makes the near purple color for the nipple much more brazen, so I made them it even warmer than the hair shadow. To compensate I used a desaturated purple highlight for everything. Alternatively you can make them the same color as her cheeks. As for shadows you already have a decent shadow color (warm and more saturated) so was only about tossing shadow in her hair crevices.
Also adjusted the boobs (they lay on the chest muscles, even in simple styles, and didn't seem squishy enough), removed the lines under her yes (made Lavender look more old and less cute), made the cum extra chunky with ice-cream as reference (seemed too subtle against the white skin), adjusted her hair (I like poof), and got rid of the dashed grey lines (personal preference).

>>6950950
looks good anon, finish the face and draw the toes proper and your picture would be hot

>>6951085
Cool, thanks for the advice!

>>6951350
Thank you! Ill try my best

Drew my boyfriend's morning wood as a warm-up today

How the fuck does pewdiepie mog 90% of you in just 30 days

>>6950237
You failed.

>>6951617
Faggot

>>6951620
nice bait, my dear permabeg

>>6951642
I love cock

I think that drawing dense cum is the hardest thing I've drawn ever

Skyblue

>>6951061
looks good! the stomach chub is cute.

>>6951730
What stomach chub lol? she barely even has a womb bump

>>6951639
You're such a poser it's embarrassing.

>>6951678
Agreed, but it's also fun to plaster people in baby batter.

new bread >>6951958
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>>6947230
>that guy pose
Fucking hilarious. You're like the Corey Feldman of /ic/, lol

>>6951971
It's nice to be an outlet for frustrated people. I hope it helps you.

>>6951976
you dropped your crown, king lmao

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TEX_WXa6Af8

>>6951991
Poser

i'm too lazy to ever clean things up

>>6948060
Thank you!

>>6951991
Keep venting as much as it helps, but aslo keep drawing. It helps more.

>>6952012
No one's talking to you, nigger jew. I'm talking to Corey.
>>6952945
Thanks for being the quintessential example of how years of yes men have left you drawing ridiculous torsos and dicks penetrating urethras rather than vaginal openings. God damn, you're what now kid, 41? I'm glad I'm around to see you Feldman your work up, Corey.
>aslo
Don't type too fast, we don't need you to Corey your replies either, kid. :)

>>6953988
PYW.
I know...