/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

not your personal blog, retard. kys. dilate. this is why phoneposters should be filtered and banned.

>>6677618
Yeah, an AI thread would be better. Don't you agree, aisister?

the only things that should be fixed i think is the pupil on the right, seems a bit misaligned with the left
and the fist on the right can be moved down, looks a bit awkward from where the arm is pointing
left arm is fine but you can try a more dynamic pose
amazing chun anon!

changes

>>6677914
what is she looking at

>>6677609
>>6677914
I don't even know if I have the skill to be redlining you, but i like to crab so here I am.

I think the position of the arms could be more clear, especially her right arm. Disney animators have this concept of "straight vs curves" and I applied the same thing to the right arm. The bottom side is flatter, while the shoulder and forearm muscles form a wavy curve on top, and I think it makes the shape read better. Overall, I think her arms a teeny bit small too. Otherwise, really great job

>>6678113
bbc

>>6677609
Attention whore

I miss asukafag so badly bros.....

>>6678131
This looks worse from a fighting perspective though, you wouldn't want your elbow so far out.

>>6682200
But it better conveys the action. Isn't that more important?

>>6677914
not gonna lie lad, looks like a trace of an ai pic

>>6682477
Perhaps, I don't have a strong opinion either way just thought it was worth pointing out.