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Previous thread >>6628142

If you're looking for a place to practice and post all sexual works, from pinups with exaggerated proportions to pornography, then this is the right general for you. Both Eastern and Western styles can coexist here.

>Rules & Guidelines
1) AIl forms of cartooning styles are welcome; submit and receive feedback from others.
2) Please resize your images below 1000x1000 before posting.
3) Share your knowledge, any tips are certainly welcome for all beginners.
4) Do to not be afraid of asking for critique, please be specific on what help you need.
5) Remember all GB3 related content such as lolicon, shotacon, furry pornography, furry and bestiality are banned on ALL boards, including red boards, except /b/ and /trash/.
6) DO NOT reply to bait AI posts. Hide and report, let the janitors and moderators handle the problem.

>Community Resources
>>>/ic/courses
>>>/ic/artbook
characterdesignreferences.com/character-anatomy

>NSFW image resources
pornpics.com
female-anatomy-for-artist.com
realbooru.com
hegrehunter.com

>Timed drawing gallery
line-of-action.com
quickposes.com/en

>> No.6643301

go to church

>> No.6643313

learning anatomy is a waste of time when 3d models exist
>uber? lemme just build a horse cart senpai, im a real artist

>> No.6643314

have sex

>> No.6643326

>>6643301
go back to /co/

>> No.6643355

>>6643301
I'm so fucking glad I wasn't born into this delusional indoctrinated cult.
dodged a fucking bullet.

>> No.6643357

>>6643313
Muscles contract and relax in ways that 3D models don't

>> No.6643695

>>6643313
>desperately lonely and insecure
>have no way to have a semblance of a social interaction in the real world
>posts obvious bait in an amateur porn drawing thread for attention and guaranteed replies
and the saddest part is that there are genuinely many such cases. hope things start looking up for you

>> No.6643776

>>6643357
Well technically they can, but I'm doubtful anyonw here knows how to apply muscle physics to 3d models.

>> No.6643838
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>> No.6643844
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I worked on this sketch some more but I guess people didn't like it.
I like it tho ( -____- )

>> No.6643876

>>6643838
this is great already but try this
duplicate your linework layer (in case you mess up)
alpha lock it
and paint over it with some dark saturated reds, especially for the skin. makes a huge difference when you go for the rendered look cause the stark dark outlines can look a little harsh in comparison
there are some other little issues like the pillow shaded hair that I'd avoid, her thighs look disproportionate in the top right and her chest looking way smaller (needs more weight underneath the tiddies) but now it's finished I would just save that for the next piece you do. good job on this
>>6643844
love the dramatic hatching you added to the background. it's definitely a bit more 'grotesque' for most viewers but I see it as the kinda thing Goya would've sketched on a napkin while horny during his pinturas negras era. the way you shaded their bodies along the contours is really satisfying, great job
>>6643283
I recognise the face and I think I've commented on your work before, your faces are only getting cuter and more appealing, I would love to see what you can do after some stylisation studies from your favourite artists for the body, it looks cute as it is but some areas make it look a bit plain which lets the face and hair down, not sure if some more interesting shadow shapes and/or linework would do it but I'll leave it to you to decide when or if you do some studies

>> No.6643960

>>6643844
the pose is stiff and too symmetrical. that's why it's not interesting to look at.

>> No.6644022

>>6643960
I think you are right anon.It's also not interesting for a coomer audience due to what >>6643876 described

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>>6643283
Working on this

>> No.6644364
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>> No.6644367
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>>6644364
G-gains gob? Is that you? What a qt3.14

>> No.6644368

>>6644367
yes, it's me, thanks, wanted to draw canonical femboy negima

>> No.6644370

>>6644368
>draw canonical femboy negima
Whatever it is, please retain the appeal.

>> No.6644371
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some rendering update

>> No.6644373
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>>6644370
i own physical copies of all of UQ holder so i can do a decent job emulating Akamatsu's style i think

>> No.6644749
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6644749

repostan i guess

>> No.6644949

tips on drawing porn while doing semen retention? i get so horny

>> No.6644950

>>6644949
>doing semen retention
do you do that before or after flat earth studies?

>> No.6645038

>>6643283
>DO NOT reply to bait AI posts
> AI
Less people post here because the thread gets filtered.

Can someone who's not a retard make the thread next time

>> No.6645784

>>6645038
They're trying to keep people out

>> No.6645787

>>6643283

Fuck weebshit

>> No.6645796 [DELETED] 
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>>6645038

Muh AI threads

Cope harder, faggot. Midjourney 5 curbstomps anything you might've had to offer (not much).
Starve, bitch.

>> No.6645798 [DELETED] 

>>6645796
AI is for niggers and you're a nigger

>> No.6645809

>>6645798
Look at the image again. You will never produce that quality.

>> No.6645812

>>6644950
Reddit's down the hall.

>> No.6645815

>>6645784
I think he's saying that posting the word filters anybody that has the word in their filters.
But yes, those subhumans should always be kept out.

>> No.6646029
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6646029

is mario still relevant?

>> No.6646094

>>6645787
Anon, you're on 4chan.

>> No.6646108
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>>6643283
thoughts?

>> No.6646154
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>>6646029
some color

>> No.6646184
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6646184

very new but practicing

>> No.6646202

>>6646184
Pay more attention to the anatomy, looks like you didn't even five a shit a drawing the hands or fingers

>> No.6646213
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>>6646202
yeah idk they scare me, definitely will do some hand practice

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Finished this. Let me know what you think. Curious to know where I can improve most.

>> No.6646387

>>6646313
I think you need way more confidence on drawing hands interacting with soft flesh

>> No.6646398
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>> No.6646401

>>6646387
Fuck, you're right. It all looks very soft and squishy, but where the fingers meet the legs, it looks more like hard rubber. The contact lines I've placed make it worse. I probably should have thinned the lines to almost nonexistence where the forms meet and then used shadows to imply the depression of flesh. I'll practice this. Thanks.

>> No.6646431

>>6646398
Why do all your dicks look like FtM phallo dicks

>> No.6646454
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>> No.6646637
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6646637

which of these gestures look better

>> No.6646660
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>>6646637
A mix of the two is good.

>> No.6646671

>>6646454
Who are they saying this to? The viewer?

If so where is the viewer in this scene? Lying between the legs of grey man's legs? He surely is a freak

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>>6646660
Wait a sec that's the wrong one.

>> No.6646680

>>6646671
Fucking kek but NAH he's just looking behind while saying that and the viewpoint is simply from the back.

>> No.6646693
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>sketch a thigh a bit too wide
>cum
been drawing for 6 years and this still happens

>> No.6646696
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Sassy Imp!

>> No.6646907

>>6646693
dickbrains are NGMI.

>> No.6647383
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6647383

hey /salt/

>> No.6647474

>>6646696
the tongue is in front of the bottom row of teeth
also it looks like you didnt quite understand the perspective and hid her legs behind the giant tent
the rendering on the hips also make them look flat

>> No.6647480

>>6647383
Nice linework femanon but that penis head is backwards

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>>6647383
>I have never seen a penis before

>> No.6647505
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>>6647480
i swear i know how to draw dicks im just retarded

>> No.6647734

>>6647505
>i swear i know how to draw dicks
the issue is that you ain't very good at it.
keep it up. your lines have appeal.

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>>6647474
you're right but coomers don't care
(not him btw)

>> No.6647828
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First time doing something more dynamic in perspective. How do you draw appealing pussy, bros?

>> No.6647880
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>>6647474
I dont know how perspective works lol. I'll get it one day
>the tongue is in front of the bottom row of teeth
Complete oversight, i think you could see the back molars even with the tongue out though
>>6647791
Coomers are deranged

>> No.6647903
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6647903

First time doing NSFW art. Did a commission for a IRL friend. She wanted a pinup of her OC. The pussy looks a little weird on top view. What y’all think about it. Going to using resources provided to improve and get better on drawing nudes

>> No.6647992

>>6647880
what the hell am I doing posting shitty commissions
I'm gonna nuke my twitter and just post fan art all day
good job on the growth dude I remember when you got your first 10k

>> No.6648079

>>6647992
Commisions are only good for money
You wanna build an audience before you do comms so more people will see and spread your art
Draw fan art and fun stuff, when you get big then you can start to do comms

>> No.6648102

>>6648079
Money is what I needed three years ago when I started but I've let my traction completely drop posting crap and so infrequently. Had I played the long game I'd be able to charge more and get more comms, not have to take on every random comm which then means my art is totally inconsistent
I've done this completely ass-backwards I'm thinking of nuking/starting again and doing it right, or at least better lmao

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I guess its big and have enough mass that she can feasibly handle if but barely.

>> No.6648341

>>6646108
hiding the hands is a classical beg move.

>> No.6648370
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First time trying to seriously sit down and draw a figure. Am getting to a point of cleaning up the sketch and starting to darken some lines and I am getting terrified bros as this is coming together. Any direction and crits please, I see my hands really suck (I have always really struggled with hands and feet, these are the best I've ever done) and I do not yet have the confidence to draw the face clearly.

>> No.6648531

>>6647791
its not a matter of if the audience cares i know theyll eat shit and say gordon ramsay made it
its a matter of wanting to do better and improve yourself
if youre not trying to improve then why are you even here on the crit board?

>> No.6648541
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>>6646660
everyone wants to fuck with Chun Li XD

>> No.6648613
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real person comm.
These are all I get nowadays. This is the 4th one I've gotten this month. I'm not complaining,but I find it real odd that clients simply don't get this done by AI.

>6646696
I admire your work ethic, you're putting stuff out

>>6643838
I feel like your stuff has great sex appeal. Real coomer shit. Keep grinding and working on your fundies peachbro

>> No.6648752
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>>6646108
workin on this now

>> No.6648987
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>> No.6649050
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>>6648613
face indicates a slight turn but the head has none
helmet does not follow the form of the head
ponnytail is floating like there is no gravity
coat does not follow the form of the shoulders
boobs look like balloons, that might be intentional but in that case they should be firm and quite high, instead they are hanging down
folds of the coat indicate foreshortening on both arms, but there is none. to show the difference: on the left side i corrected the fold, on the right i left the fold and foreshortened the arm
contour line of the glove on the left side is showing in the wrong direction
persepective of the gun is completely butchered
palm is not resting on the hip on the right side

>> No.6649719

no matter what I do I always get anime head proportions wrong, anyone knows a method to be able to construct them consistently?

>> No.6649740
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lizard tits

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Is the motion still readable despite the rendering? With just lineart it was obviously visible, but now I feel like the values kinda blend together, idk if what I did is enough to convey it

>>6649740
Very cute, nice colors

>> No.6649817

>>6649740
beautiful, gib blog
>>6648613
nice, I disagree with the other anon about the head but the boobs do look a bit odd and baloony, give em a little natural sag

>> No.6649921

Porn artist Don't retweet shit. They just watch me or other artist to see if they're doing better then them.

>> No.6649926
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thoughts the boobs and shading? also y/n to streaky mascara running down her face?

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>>6643283
Can I get some critique/redline on this?
The shape of the breasts mid motion and the two light sources were kicking my ass.

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>>6650281
Original for reference

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>>6649761
perspective is broken

>> No.6650396

>>6650281
I respect AI more than this, you signed it and everything

>> No.6650531

>>6649926
yes mascara
the boobs arent perfect, id make the nipples fatter and add a little detail. also the boob thats pointing up doesnt need an outline along the bottom and inside, just imply the crease with shading. the shading is very cool it really works well especially on the torso. dont be afraid to add more dark to the boobs, white highlights are your friends

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>>6649050
appreciate the crit bro. some of those things I was aware of but could not be fixed. The gun I do feel bad about and I could have done better

>>6649817
thanks! I did correct the tiddy

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>>6643355
>I'm so fucking glad I wasn't born into this delusional indoctrinated cult.

>> No.6650972
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>>6643876
Thanks for the critique, that drawing was a request for /e/ and like I mentioned to another anon who red lined the work in the previous thread, I was asked to keep the Disgaea character's appearance somewhat similar to the original design, minus the little retro anime look I gave her.
If there's any suggestions on who to check out for bbw studies, I'd really love to see them. I'm always up for doing research. And if anyone wants to red line my work, please feel free. It has mistakes and I need to learn.

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>>6650972
Trying more show, don't tell. haha

>> No.6651085

>>6649817
Thanks. It's javehorny on Twitter

>> No.6651342

>>6650975
I love these, I want to draw this body type! Second on good BBW references.

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>>6650972
I'm referring to adding more line interest (can't think of a better term) as well as making shadow shapes more than just a little under/around the forms, and more like the hentai thicc milfs who have stronger shadow shapes to really sell their forms. I don't have any specific recs desu I just save stuff from twitter/danbooru that I like
making this little gif was actually quite useful for me to practice on and hopefully it's a little useful to you

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big b

>> No.6652071
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>>6652070
oobs

>> No.6652172

>>6652071
oh who cares man
what are you bringing here besides adverts and the same body type with a different popular character's face plastered on top? do you even want crits or?
nah im just being crabby cranihum1 don't take it to heart
your rendering has really improved and the faces specially look better placed and given the right depth. too much negative space around her. do hair shading studies. add some environment colour to the shadows cause grey is not appealing. also some subtle soft colours on 'hot' areas like shoulders, chest, cheeks. I'll copy and paste this for the next time you post the same body same tiny hair strands on muddy shapes and then leave without saying anything with some quirky short description god bless

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okay when do I start collecting my patreon bucks

>> No.6652178

>>6652177
NEVER

>> No.6652219
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>>6651839
I like what you did towards the end, I broke down all the layers and saw where I could have added more harder shadows, where to keep more solid cast shadows closer to her skin, I like that you added more shadow on her neck and softer airbrushed shadows where she needed it. As far as the stomach is concerned, that seems more a style choice (which is not bad), but again, the requester asked me to keep her simple, and on model. He wanted retro anime, and if you go back and see what retro anime looks like, I'm sure you'd agree, it's simple, it doesn't have very many shadows, the nipples are actually drawn like that and there's hardly any line variation, with some artists.

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>>6652219
I took your advice and went back to edit some of my own work to contrast solid cast shadows mixed with airbrushed shadows and it does make a world of difference.
>>6650972
This was the before, and the one I posted looks much better with your suggestions about shadows. So thank you, I forgot how to take my time and add the right shadows where they need to be, but thanks to your help, I was able to remember. Tacking on an additional 45 minutes to my work to gain a better result doesn't hurt at all. The results are so much better, in my opinion.
Thanks again and I'm glad you learned something by helping me out. That's what it's all about in the end, helping each other discover, or re-discover lost tips and tricks that really do help down the road.

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>>6652219
>>6652234

You like thickies

>> No.6652264

>>6652261
god i wanna pinch that tummy

>> No.6652267

>>6652234
>>6652219
great stuff man and good improvements, that was heart-warming to read <3

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ignore leg lines cause they're not gonna really be in the final lined pic

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Commissioned series

>> No.6652539

>>6652264
>punch
Ftfy

>> No.6652543

>>6652532
please improve linkin park i believe in you

>> No.6652544

>>6652543
how would you improve the pic? i'm open to suggestions but the most effective way would be a redline of what you're talking about

>> No.6652573

>>6652532
Arms look a tad too small

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>>6652532

>> No.6652583

>>6652581
thanks! and yeah no worries on her pussy, i left the guidelines there so i could properly track the 'middle' it wouldn't be in the final pic lol
>>6652573
i was thinking they were lifted slightly so i'd forshorten them a bit but you make a good point

>> No.6652594

>>6643283
this OP picture is quite nice
it might not be the best technically looking one, or even sexiest, but it has that appeal that just makes it look nice
very nice pic

>> No.6652622

>>6648613
>I find it real odd that clients simply don't get this done by AI.
People just want their art done by other living, breathing human beings.
In fact, that’s probably the biggest reason why art commissions are still a thing when AI can get things done for free.

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>>6652581
how's this, made her arms a little longer and put her abdomen lines closer to how they'll be in the final since i'm not actually giving her abs

>> No.6652791

>>6652172
>adverts
I dont care about advertising. I have 81k followers. I post here cuz I like to post here, its simple as that. I do listen to crit, so ill try to apply that for next time

>> No.6652795

>>6652649
Time to milk the doggy?, is he full already? he must be dripping all over the place huh...

>> No.6652822
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>>6652791
also my next wip
Someone last thread was asking for my workflow so im gonna make a thing showing that, maybe after work

>> No.6652888

>>6652822
symbol drawn facial features that aren't in perspective, gob on the right couldn't wipe her ass but good job having a more interesting composition than usual

>> No.6652901

>>6652649
the tiddies look like implants cause they're not 'falling' naturally and I'm not a fan of the heavy lines on her lower torso, the way you've done them on the arms and pelvis look really nice and subtle in comparison

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>> No.6653005

>>6652888
How so?

>> No.6653023

>>6653005
because the arms are too short, dumb fuck

>> No.6653051

>>6653023
hey whoa easy
>>6653005
there's a low camera angle but her face looks like it's on a flat perspective. the nose isn't too bad but the eyes and mouth are. it doesn't matter desu no one is going to care or notice. though the arms are very short I'd say that's pretty noticeable

>> No.6653058
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6653058

Is this the correct thread to post my shit?

>> No.6653242

>>6653051
Ah I see. I'll try to fix the arm foreshortenig and size, don't think I'd be too hard to make bigger. I'll still polish up the face too. Perspective is hard

>> No.6653337

>>6646213
Did you start drawing a week ago? Honest question.

>> No.6653400

>>6652994
give me your blog please

>> No.6653607

>>6653400
Thanks!! It's @entertainmint_ on twitter! It's very new but I'm gonna be posting to it at least once every two days. I also archived some of my older stuff on r34 (xxx) under the tag m1nty.

>> No.6653652
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>>6653337
yes, I want draw stupid stuff so I decided to learn to draw with my free time, i've been studying pretty hard

>> No.6653653
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6653653

>>6653051
>>6652888
I think I had a stroke drawing Ono's face originally

>> No.6653655
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6653655

Been wanting to draw a scene where my girl gets her walls stretched out by multiple tentacles

>> No.6653714
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6653714

I tried to colour the sketch from last thread

>> No.6653888
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6653888

>>6652901
added a bit of droop to em

>> No.6653891

>>6643314
no

>> No.6654239

>>6643314
*rapes you*
ugh fuck *cums*

>> No.6654276

>>6643314
They'll never get any.

>> No.6654283

>>6653653
much better, if I'd nitpick anything is them looking a little asymmetrical which you might see if you mirror your canvas. I'd also argue against using black outlines on the face if everything else has the 'freehand' render outline, but that's something your style will naturally develop anyway. I love those pops of colour on her ears, it makes them look warm and the hue shifting is just nice to look at, maybe add a tiny more of that around the cheeks, breasts etc
>>6653888
looking better imo, agan a nitpick but that heavy shadow between them is a little too heavy but whatever
>>6653714
it's meh right now, serviceable but nothing too drastic or brave, you've got your flats and some basic shadows and some bloom effects, but again, it does the job.

>> No.6654318

>>6654283
>it's meh right now, serviceable but nothing too drastic or brave, you've got your flats and some basic shadows and some bloom effects, but again, it does the job.
It's the best post ITT and it's not even close

>> No.6654326

>>6654318
we're talking about the rendering on its own and no one mentioned a best or worst, it's not a competition just a place to post amateur art and get feedback, that adds nothing to the conversation you fuck

>> No.6654331

>>6643844
This is genuinely cool but not sexy, if that makes sense. Doesn't inspire the coom part of the brain despite sex happening. It looks more horrifying in a story-like context. You know like when there's a nude scene in a movie but everything about it is grotesque and visceral. I like it.
Piece is already done, but consider a lower angle shot for a beast this big. Makes the viewer feel small, helpless, and really emphasizes how big and imposing this entity is

>> No.6654545
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>>6654283
my rendering is not good so I tried to colour doing grayscale first since it's easier to choose the values for me
picrel I tried to do it by applying the colours directly, but I found it more difficult
I'm going to watch med's map to see if it helps since it's shilling a lot here

>> No.6654899
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6654899

>>6652594
Compared to the character's official art the arms and neck look a lot better.

>> No.6654984

>>6654545
I enjoy this a lot more than the other one for some reason. It feels more natural, but that could be a personal taste thing since the process you described is pretty much what I normally do

>> No.6655174

Do any of you also make studies of coom artists you like? I'm currently experimenting with simple studies of specific parts of a picture to learn techniques and see if I can translate them into /trad/ methods.

>> No.6655276
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6655276

>>6655174
occasionally but only for certain features like how they draw buttholes or something like that

>> No.6655337
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6655337

>> No.6655374

Picrel is something I'd like to redraw and could use some crits. The face is completely symbol drawn and I feel like it's taking any possible appeal away

>>6655174
I do it sometimes, specially when it comes to figuring out rendering/shading or the process in general when the artist posts WIPs

>> No.6655375
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>>6655374
forgot the pic fuuuck

>> No.6655482
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6655482

>>6643283
First almost full drawing after 1.5 weeks of doing digital. The face feels a bit wrong.
Thoughts?

>> No.6655488

>>6655337
hot
>>6655375
the neck to head connection feels wrong. it's connecting to the chin, not the spine. iykwim
linearts pretty good tho

>> No.6655492

>>6655276
>>6655337
It took you how long, 5-7 years, to stop drawing microcephaly?
5-7 years more and maybe you're going to understand what 'less is more' means.
subtlety and leaving something to the imagination of the viewer is what you lack the most.

>> No.6655597
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6655597

critique is required. Pls in booba measuring system out of 10

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>>6655597

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>>6655597
Fixed.

>> No.6655643
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6655643

Do we still have sizefags in here?

>> No.6655649

>>6655643
We have aspiring artists in here. Nobody should care about your dumb fetishes.

>> No.6655653
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>>6655643
Holy shit, I'm kumming, murder that puny ass man!

>> No.6655657
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6655657

>>6655653
One other rough

>> No.6655659
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6655659

>>6655653

>> No.6655666

>>6655659
Fuck! Fuckin kill James Sunderland. He didn't save his wife.

>> No.6655674

>>6655649
Most of the interesting artist have left. Ortamaw is dead. Hayabusa_fart is dead. That other guy that drew way too much futanari dead. Ronmeru kinda sucked with his shitty characters dead. Cranihum1 is alright but not sexy enough. Snowy went safe for work. Butteryshakes only does commissions and nothing else, That's all that I can list from the top of my head that posted here.

>> No.6655757
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6655757

Trying to master the ancient art of hard round brush.

>> No.6655859
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6655859

AI gore lewds are an experience

>> No.6655884

>>6655859
looks nothing like Al Gore

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6655889

>>6655884

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>> No.6656143

>>6655276
You should definitely do more studies

>> No.6656148

>>6655884
very funny!

>> No.6656151

speaking of studies, any good recommendations on barely lewd, softcore, more provocative lewd artists? I think my niche is more in the implied stuff, the barely visible nips and suggestive clothing more than straight up sex and completely naked figures just stood there. that stuff is the least sexy thing to me.
I unironically like csr for some of that stuff, and natthelych is good for it too because it looks classic and painterly (but also too overtly sexual) but that's all I can think of
western, eastern, old eastern european cartoons, anything that does that sexiness right

>> No.6656166
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6656166

I know its pretty basic but what can i do to make it pop more
I'm trying to learn clip studio if you guys have any tips or tricks can gave me
That would be super helpful

>> No.6656182

>>6655643
no, but nice arches

>> No.6656243

>>6656166
Personally, I would try adding some more line to define her eyes, increase the saturation on her irises, and brighten her leotard as whole, you'll probably need to add a tad bit more saturation to it as well

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>>6656243
Thx brother
Il keep it in mind for my next drawing
I was trying to emulate the Kinu Nishimura art style (lol)

>> No.6656345

>>6656166
Learn how to do foreshortening. It's not enough to learn to not hide hands, you have to learn to hide arms.

>> No.6656380
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6656380

>>6656166

>> No.6656394

>>6656380
i was trying to do that effect of the light
Can you tell me how to do it?

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6656400

>>6656345
i was doing this
You think i should push te perspective
I'm goin to use the 3d mode of clip
>>6656380
I cant believe how much better it gets with only more contrast

>> No.6656426

>>6655643
>>6655657
>>6655659
kino is in、 make some more anon

>> No.6656460
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6656460

>>6656166
You drew half the face from a 3/4's perspective and the other half from a forward facing perspective. When you draw the ear meeting the jaw that tends to be a 3/4's perspective and typically when you do that the other ear shouldn't be visible.
The ears should also be roughly level with the eyes, try drawing a pair of glasses on your character to connect the eyes to where the ears should be.

The lines on your shoulders are also oddly bumpy, and the anatomy for the shoulders feel like they're dislocated. Your scapula is floating away from the torso. That and the way you drew her right arm makes her look anemic. For buff or flexing characters alternating curves are key.
Not sure if it's intentional but overall her proportions are very lolish.

All that said great shading all around and very nice background.

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>> No.6656519
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>>6656460
>>6656380
>>6656243
>>6656345
Thank you all
I'm going to stop now
i did a few corrections and i think is a improvement

>> No.6656564

>>6656497
Oh god not this fucking retard again

>> No.6656566

>>6656426
Thanks, I'll share when I finish

>> No.6656611
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>>6655492
i think i can do less is more pretty ok, the thing is i don't WANT to

>> No.6656680

>>6656611
I've never seen you do it, so it's impossible to tell. I'm pretty sure you have no idea how.

>> No.6656687
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6656687

>>6656680
you haven't? to be fair i have no idea what your personal definition is but i'm pretty sure i've done a few teasing pinups

>> No.6656694

>>6656687
Is this supposed to be an example of less is more? This is exactly what I was talking about. It's definitely not as jarring as the previous image you posted, but it still has all the opposite landmarks to the concept I mentioned.

>> No.6656701
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6656701

>>6656694
'subtlety and leaving something to the imagination' is the only info given here, he's in a suggestive pose and you can't see anything

>> No.6656725

>>6656701
I was talking about stylization. What jumps to the eye the most is the big amount of form hatching and the stiff robotic way of constructing anatomy. It somehow reflects the over the top themes you draw, but it doesn't complement them. It's really hard to explain.

>> No.6656788

>>6656725
>>6656680

A good way to tell if someone is a mewfsg and have been posting on this board less than a year is when they try to critique gains goblin

>> No.6656790

>>6656788
*Newfag

>> No.6656797

>>6656564
PYW faggot

>> No.6656870

>>6655492
>It took you how long, 5-7 years, to stop drawing microcephaly?
>5-7 years more and maybe you're going to understand what 'less is more' means.
>>6656788
>A good way to tell if someone is a mewfsg and have been posting on this board less than a year is when they try to critique gains goblin

Are you uironically retarded?

>> No.6656993

>>6656611
>>6656687
I think you got good stuff going and you clearly enjoy what you are doing. I don't what the other anon's problem is but it's clearly personal vendetta and he's just trying to get rise from you.

>> No.6656998

>>6656993
Why do you feel the need to be some kind of fucking lawyer for others?
Give him your own feedback and let other people do the same. Wtf is wrong with you snowflakes that can't stomach negative but constructive critique?

>> No.6657043

>>6656870
No, but you might be.... Not only that you're definitely new hahah
Anyone that's been here longer than 1 yr knows it's a colossal waste of time

>> No.6657146

>>6656998
>Why do you feel the need to be some kind of fucking lawyer for others?
funnily enough the opposite applies to you; why did you feel the need to be some kind of devil's advocate? you weren't adding much besides subjective opinion. the thing about his line definition has been brought up plenty of times, it's not adding much to keep repeating the same crit over and over for the sake of an argument

>> No.6657191

>>6656998
Nta, but personal vendetta/community drama is literally against the rules and there's a reason for that. If you want to critique be specific about how to improve each piece. If he doesn't listen then just leave him be

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>> No.6657995
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6657995

>>6646202
Been grinding anatomy

>> No.6658025

>>6656701
Blog?

>> No.6658034

>>6658025
https://twitter.com/lobsterkiahlart

>> No.6658181
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6658181

Almost ready to paint

>> No.6658225
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6658225

You will never make good porn art if you have never had sex. Face the reality, you need to unironically have sex in order to make it as a coom artist. Your porn will never be convincing otherwise.

>> No.6658235

>>6658225
nice try, roastie

>> No.6658238

>you will never make good porn
>posts literal flavor of the week anime girl bland as fuck trash with the meme sex face
I r8 1/10
I'd rather jack off to my own shit drawings of some thick anime girl floating in the void than that

>> No.6658278
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6658278

Working on some hulked up versions of Xmen girls

>> No.6658286
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6658286

Another one

>> No.6658376

>>6658225
might be true, I've never seen vagina

>> No.6658384

>>6657968
Personal preference ig but taper your fingers a bit more

>> No.6658392

>>6658238
>Implying Afrobull is bad

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>> No.6658496

>>6658225
Actually it might be the reverse, as after starting to have sex regularly I gradually stopped being attracted to drawn porn and "anime sexuality" in general

>> No.6658510

>>6658496
skill issue

>> No.6658522

It was also a poorly written critique. You can't say something like "less is more" and expect the other guy to know what exactly you're talking about. You even had to elaborate because the other anon misinterpreted. Critiques that take a long time to get to the point (or spawns an argument because you were more interested in just shitting on the guy) are the worst kinds.
4/10 critique

>> No.6658547
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6658547

>client thinks something looks wrong with the drawing
>randomly resize it a bit and show it to him
>he still thinks it looks weird
>undo to the original state and show it to him again
>PERFECT

>> No.6658567

>>6658547
Kek, saving this for later
>>6658278
>>6658286
Hulked up as in they cardio once a week? They look good though, just not hulked up at all

>> No.6658659

>>6658567
Client requested they look more fit than bulky. He used the she_hulk skin from Fortnite as example

>> No.6658672

>>6658392
>Implying anyone but braindead twitter coomers, teenagers and pornfags who want to circlejerk and network know who that is
>implying bland generic anime coom copied from other bland generic anime coom is good because the anime heads have been swapped and you jerk off to it
>implying that if you looked you wouldn't find his "references" or work extremely similar to his
>implying you have good taste
>implying your opinions should be taken seriously after showing the extent of your artistic appreciation
>implying you draw
>Implying twitter followers and patreon numbers are an indicator of skill
>implying what normies, weebs and teenagers consider good is actually good
>Implying anyone should aim for that type of work for their artistic career
>implying that guy doesn't share these exact same opinions and only produces this trash because retards like you pay him to do so
>implying he doesn't fucking despise his followers and fans

>> No.6658725

>>6658659
Ahhh, okay. Didn't realize they were comms! Good stuff. I can try to help you with those muscle insertions if you'd like. I draw hyperish musclegirls occasionally

>> No.6658736

>>6658672
>>Implying twitter followers and patreon numbers are an indicator of skill
They are indicators of success, which is part of what most artists aspiring to be commercial illustrators strive for.

>> No.6658745

>>6656566
>>6655643
>>6655657
Fooly, that you?

>> No.6658773

>>6658745
You flatter me, maybe one day. He's just one of the artists I reference for feet

>> No.6658825

>>6658736
They're indicators of how appealing and consumer friendly a product is to the general braindead consumer, not success.
No one who isn't an easily impressionable teenagers would have no reason to remind themselves of this literal who's existence.
>most artists aspiring to be commercial illustrators strive for.
By creating bland generic porn of the flavor of the day so that teenagers subscribe to your social media and hopefully unpack their parent's paypal accounts and pay to download the newest image or some generic unoriginal bland sexual act probably copied from another artist but changed the head to the new anime girl flavor of the minute anime and to join the discord server so they can get groomed by men in dresses.

I can't tell you names but there are way more commercial artists who are way more successful, well seen, don't have a fanbase of porn addicts and teenagers and don't even break 5k followers on twitter if they even have social media at all.
Fuck, there are Anons on this board who don't even break 1k and unequivocally and objectively btfo this normie pandering kitsch slop.

>> No.6658910

>>6658825
You seem like you're super bitter that no one cares when you post your hyper-realistic charcoal portrait of Wednesday Addams.

>> No.6658956

>>6658910
All you're showing is that you're unironically seething.

>> No.6658983 [DELETED] 

>>6658392
>>6658672
Afrobull is dogshit.

Be honest best coom artist is Asanagi and Takeda Hiromitsu.

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6658996

>>6658225
>>6658392
Afrobull is dogshit.

>> No.6659004

>>6658956
I'm not the one unironically losing my mind over the success of an artist just because it isn't me. You're pathetic, and you're the very definition of the crab in the bucket. But you keep doing you, crab.

>> No.6659009

Hey, what's currently the best platform to gain some following for my nsfw account?(preferably engaging following, since numbers alone are depressing)
I do have two accounts, one for everything, and another for nsfw, namely giantesses.(but does it even count for here? unsure where to ask).

I'm on DA currently. I'm seeing people better than me who seem to have those 2-3 times more faves than me only because they do this for a lot longer and have gotten 10-50 times my following, it really seems to be dying.(lots of artists, almost no fans)

Still a newbie but I feel like the best I'm gonna get here is like 50 faves per image in a year or so. Absolute bests are getting maybe hundreds of those per image.(thinking in context of the above mentioned nsfw account)

Is twitter a must? Also I saw that nsfw fanarts for some weird reason are another 10 times more popular, that is around 2k+ faves. It's something I would hate to do.

If it's a wrong place to ask please tell me where it should be, I'm relatively new here.

>> No.6659030

>>6659009
Gaining a large following is mostly luck. The more skilled you are the higher your chances, but it's not a huge factor until you're almost a legitimate master at the craft.
The best thing you can do to grow is to stick to the same themes. On a place like Deviantart you will get the most followers by repeatedly posting similar content as quickly as possible. Quality is not a huge factor. Also shoot me links, I posted the giantess stuff in this thread. I'll support however I can

>> No.6659046

>>6659030
I don't think I want to connect my profiles with 4chan even though I would really want to show it to everyone here.

I'm quite slow(avg once a week or two) but consistent and with each image I can still see improvements. I could force myself to do those quickly but I am unable to draw appealing images when I don't feel it. Also my everyday life takes most of the time I have.

Do you think it's worth it to go for Twitter or anything alike or should I just stick to my current profiles?
I'm willing to take my chances on DA but if there is some other platform that goes easier on me then why shouldn't I try it out too?

>> No.6659065

>>6659004
Bruh, just kill yourself already. Holy fuck how fucking pathetic.

>> No.6659067
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>>6659009
I won't sugar coat things anon. There's way too many artists. Just give up on the numbers and just draw for yourself.
You draw the Linda Robert's picture right? Put yourself in the shoe's of a "non artist". You have to give them a reason to engage with you.

>> No.6659072

>>6658996
sure but he started out here and that makes me happy

>> No.6659088

>>6659067
>Just give up on the numbers and just draw for yourself.
I draw for myself but I also want to have some people engage with me about it.
It might also turn into some bonus money out of something I would be doing anyway. It's not the focus but I know how everyone else is making money off of those even if through donations alone.
There is already one guy I really enjoy talking with that fans over all of my works. I would love more people to react with my drawings.

I don't know celebrities so no, I do not draw her pictures.

>> No.6659093

>>6659072
Sorry anon, I wasn't following the conversation. I only recognized the name because it's ranked #1 on kemono. I don't like the artwork.

>> No.6659096

>>6658725
I would love to improve that. Could you give me some hints please?

>> No.6659101

>>6659065
Nothing more pathetic than the stupid manifestos you wrote about sameface and coomer something-slop

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>>6659088
Anon, I won't sugar coat it. I do make money with my artwork metaphorically. But that denies the fact that I got paid 100 for a 30min loan signing as a Notary public. I also invested all of my money from my previous job as a car parts washer. Artwork is for weebs.

>> No.6659125

6659101
>talk and criticize art
>on the board for talking and criticizing art
>retarded paypig coomer starts seething into oblivion like a tranny without kids to groom because one Anon doesn't circlejerk about his favorite shitty e-celeb he worships like the underage faggpt he is
>words bad
Anon, take your life. Your existence is worth living through.

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1

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2 wip

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>>6659046
Just find me and contact me on pixiv or DA then
>>6659096
Not sure how much these will help, but you can take it or leave it ofc. They already look good though

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>>6659096

>> No.6659150

>>6659125
You're still seething.

>> No.6659279

>>6659131
this is nice. work on fundies especially the boobs. do studies

>> No.6659288
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Comm pic of client's girls wrestling

>>6659009
I have drawn for 2 years and the most engagement I get from DA, Pixiv second, Twitter 3rd. If you want audience to engage, of course you need to offer art that interest them and make yourself available, like using correct tags and so on that make audience into your stuff find you. Also you can encourage commenting and interaction by asking thoughts on what people like to see.

>> No.6659493

>>6659288
Anyone that gives feedback to people, should post their art like this anon did. It's the perfect way to know if you can take their advice seriously or not.

>> No.6659618
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I'm trying to learn to draw appealing MILFy faces. How does this look?

>> No.6659651
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What do you guys think of this rendering? I think one of the legs is bothering me. Not happy with how the pose turned out.

>> No.6659683

>>6659651
fappable

>> No.6659723

>>6659146
Awesome! Thanks annon!
I will fix those before painting.

>> No.6660091

>>6659651
I like it

>> No.6660107
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6660107

Hopefully I will start painting this today. Drew the remote with two button rows like a retard

>>6659618
I think it looks really good, maybe shift her mouth up a bit? I'm still trying to learn how to draw more appealing faces myself
>>6659651
This probably came out better than you think. I think that little bounce highlight on her calf to the viewer's right isn't following the form very well. You also might want to shift it a bit to the viewer's left
>>6659723
My pleasure, I hope it helps

>> No.6660114

>>6660107
>maybe shift her mouth up a bit?
It's funny you say that, I was looking at lots of MILF hentai for purely research purposes and one thing I noticed a lot was a disproportionately long philtrum. I suppose it's to contrast with the moe "muzzle" that younger characters have where the mouth and nose are closer and the chin relatively long.

>> No.6660117

>>6660114
Ahh, that's good to know. I think the distance seems extra long to me just because of the guidelines. All the relative white space in that area might be drawing my eye there

>> No.6660134

>>6660107
You absolutely need to practice perspective. The stuff you draw is way too ambitious for your skills.

>> No.6660166

What do you guya think is the most profitable niche right now? I want to make short nsfw comics and I'm up to anything

>> No.6660251

>>6660166
BBC/BNWO/cuck shit
It's a hugely popular fetish that's growing by the day and its adherents like to spend money on it

>> No.6660256

>>6659651
drawing is appealing and solid except the crease at the knee is too long
colors are good but the values are too close for those bands of highlighting on the calves

>> No.6660283

>>6660134
Duh, I could've told you that

>> No.6660395

>>6644371
Loooooooooooove the facial expression

>> No.6660463

>>6660251
Could you point to some artist that do that? I actually don't see that much of that posted here

>> No.6660541

Anybody has a guide to draw nice penises? Not huge, jaw breaking ones, just above-average, kinda thick ones. All the tutorials I found were for monster sized ones.

>> No.6660549
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>>6660541
this sits in my guides folder for when the time comes

>> No.6660561

>>6660549
Thanks so much, dude <3

>> No.6660645

>>6660549
Reminds me of TB Choi's stuff

>> No.6660818
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6660818

got a totk zelda comm, finished it but im so tired. it'll be good for my follower count tho lol

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6660840

>>6643283
Sup, newfag lurking boards

>> No.6660864

>>6660840
Sup Hog, welcome to /ic/
cool pic, have a Based badge for posting your work

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>>6659618
>>6660107
>>6660114
>>6660117
Here's a mockup on an older sketch

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>>6660864
Thanks, got lots of drawings and take reqs. But right now I'm digitalizing some

>> No.6660907

pornography bores me now

>> No.6661016
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>>6660881
Digging the body and pose, very nice. You can probably add some butt fangs.
I'm not liking this face nearly as much but I'm not confident that I can give you useful suggestions beyond her brow ridge and eyebrows being too high up on her face

>> No.6661027

sexo

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sexito

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>>6652261
Yeah I do. An anon referred to my character as a slampig a few threads ago and I don't mind that one bit. That's one hell of a compliment.
>>6652267
Thanks anon, we gotta feed the soul for the journey ahead.
>>6652594
Thanks anon, much appreciated.
>>6654899
Thank you too, anon.

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>>6661043
My girl loves to fuck.
Goofy loves to fuck, too. I had to learn how to draw him better so he didn't come out looking like nightmare fuel; an anon mentioned that a few months back and he was right. Learning how to draw better dicks, too.

>> No.6661057

>>6661030
>>6660818
>>6659651
>>6653714
>>6650281
>>6649740
I would fuck these drawings

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>>6660818
blog? it looks great, i'd gladly spread it to my followers

>> No.6661206

>>6661016
Butt fangs?

>> No.6661217

>>6661078
>>6661206
Ohh I just looked it up
Yeah sorry I neglected the area between her legs because when I rendered it it was just AO shadow anyway but forgot to redraw it for the sketch. Just a dumbass

>> No.6661235

>>6658547
probably just didn't want to appear obnoxious

>> No.6661516

>>6657995
Ok I am seeing a massive improvement compared to your other work.

Still, the one with hands on her hips has a really bad left hand

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dewdle

>> No.6661564
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6661564

How do you make the crotch/ass/thigh area work when you're trying to make them look meaty? I always have trouble with that area and figuring out how it should all sit.

>> No.6661763

>>6661564
For meaty legs I usually look up muscular leg references and then kind of in my head place the fat over the muscular shapes and it gives me a pretty meaty defined look

>> No.6661842

I started doing niche comms for this guy who ended up having quite a big DA following and now six months later it's all I do and I don't get enough time to post other stuff, and I don't want to post the comms I do on twitter (cause I dont wanna advertise to more potential comms) . my acc is dying and I am so bored of drawing the same shit. I just wanted to vent lol, fuck me

>> No.6662198

>>6661842
How much have you earned in total?

>> No.6662343

>>6661842
Pyw before anything else anon, we want to see the art

>> No.6662380

>>6662198
Idk, I've done maybe 12 cause I'm slow and charge $50 per piece
>>6662343
It's very average and boring, beg tier really, but I'm not gonna post it and out myself as a total crybaby

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>>6662380
No one is more sensitive than I am. It'll be okay, anon

>> No.6662472

>>6661842
What niche? I'm interested

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>> No.6662703

>>6662503
>>6662570
Are you that same anon that drew those caricatures of kanye et al? Your shit is cracked man what's your blog?

>> No.6662724

>>6662452
the rendering on the sole is 10/10 imo, but the titties and head portion needs more work

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>>6662452
>>6661016

>> No.6662754

>Draw pedo stuff
>Slap a Goblin face on it
>Call it "shortstack"
>Everyone claps
Hmm...

>> No.6662769

>>6662754
Many such cases.

>> No.6662880

>>6662754
I feel like it’s more of a midget fetish

>> No.6662899

>>6662724
you should refrain from giving critique if you are a beg, which you clearly are if you think the rendering on those soles is 10/10. fucking kek.

>> No.6662979

>>6662754
>draw a child
>replace all of the childlike features with near-hyper meaty curves until the only similarity is height
>still call it a child
Where the fuck are you seeing children with tits the size of their hide and hips wider than they are tall?

>> No.6662990

>>6662979
It's called sexualization. A lot of pedo draw loli with big honkers and wide hip.

>> No.6662994

>>6662990
What makes them still recogniseable as children if they don't have child bodies? Also which posts in this thread are you even talking about?

>> No.6663136

>>6662899
show me ur version of 10/10 sole rendering then

>> No.6663144

>>6662994
>short
>have child-like face
They just children with big boobs and asses. I just want you to stay true to yourself. You are a pedo. Accept it.

>> No.6663154

>>6663136
From the top of my head, and since ic knows him very well, anything from Kyle.
https://twitter.com/kairunoburogu

>> No.6663155

>>6663136
Don't give him (You)s. Just ignore posts that are trying too hard.

>> No.6663162

>>6663155
your beg is showing

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>>6662703
neat ty yes

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>>6662754
>>6662990
awww, youre a retard

>> No.6663548

>>6663154
nice bait

>> No.6663610

>>6659131
Cute and fappable

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6663628

man i need to learn anatomy

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>>6663144
go back to r3dd¡t

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>>6663831
supposed to be a sack with a ghost face painted on with like a medieval steel collar but not sure how to make the fabric look "tight"

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>>6660895

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>> No.6664810

new bread >>6664808
>>6664808
>>6664808
>>6664808
>>6664808

>> No.6665090

>>6664584
fucking hot

>> No.6665131

>>6665090
I think you're fucking hot