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Previous Thread:>>6584682

>Guidelines:
1. [THE MOST IMPORTANT] Don't post too revealing works (especially porn). If you think it's too lewd, post a censored copy here and link to Catbox, Imgur, or any off-site that hosts images for your works. Note: If you're having issues viewing catbox links, use a VPN.

2. Do not post child photo references, legal or otherwise.

3. Due to this general's PPH (posts per hour/thread activity), please wait until the thread falls to around page 5 or 6 before making a thread. Use archived(moe) or warosu to retrieve the old threads.

4. Do not pretend to be retarded. For your sake.

>General Resources
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dQGxsuqPxuu5V9vjgAWrMjnrMXcWfCFYX-d5imdnRgI/edit?usp=drivesdk

>Specific Resources
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1hVzfbqr-0UEck9ux9XBTmxUTGMZ4a-8T3DnBfOxv9iE/edit?usp=drivesdk
>A training course on modesty for young ladies
https://online-courses.club/anatomy-of-clothing-2019-by-ron-lemen/

>(Not so) abandoned FAQ/Q&A
https://docs.google.com/document/d/15rON6jeKul-p89KF5ZYSo4eRLW1kdVaKv8CMt09UgXI/edit?usp=drivesdk

>Drawing the human body and girls
https://e-hentai.org/g/1505296/3050b3b077/

I will get around to updating all the links over this weekend I promis...

>> No.6613642

>>6613558
Take it away /lsg/! happy drawing! glhf! :+)

>> No.6613979
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6613979

HELLO!
I will teach you my technique used to see a youjo in your dreams.

>go to bed
>think of a rori
>lie on your stomach, with your dick touching the bed
>your dick may stick to your balls but thats alll right
>say the follow; "cute and funny life, cute and funny wife, i just want a youjo wife"
>think of your chosen rori
>imagine lewd things with her but do not fap, do not think extreme explicit things
>go to sleep like that
>have a nice lewd dream

Even if you dont think this works.
Just sleeping on your front increases odds of wet dreams scientifically.

>> No.6613983

>>6613979

I had a lewd dream last night but it wasn’t with my rori wife. I will try this tip, arigatai.

>> No.6614023

Does the FBI lurk this thread?

>> No.6614108

Opinions on using lolibait JAVs for references?
https://javtiful.com/video/23113/piyo-157

>> No.6614134

>>6614108
utterly pointless when actual junior gravure exists.

>> No.6614143

>>6614134
Go on...

>> No.6614146

>>6614134
>junior idol
kek, miss me with that shit.
if I wanted SFW references I'd just look up russian yoga videos

>> No.6614148

>>6614134
>gravure (whatever the fuck that means, sound awful)
>idol
No wonder japs are necking themselves. I hate japan with a passion, Id jump off a tower if I were there too.

>> No.6614163

>>6614146
>russian yoga videos
Post some for reference.

>> No.6614169

>>6614134
I'll never marry an underaged asian lolibros....

>> No.6614176

>>6614163
Hoвыe гимнacтичecкиe yпpaжнeния. Чeллeндж: copeвнoвaния мeждy cecтpaми (зaoднo мoжнo пoбaлoвaтьcя).

>> No.6614178

>>6614176
Can anyone translate this? I'm not putting it into google

>> No.6614180

>>6614178
My Russian is a bit rusty but it says something about Ukrainian bio labs and how Putin is the emperor of mankind.

>> No.6614185

>>6614178
It's a title to a video

>> No.6614232

>needing references
nigga come on you really can't draw a sphere + oval + two sticks?? cant control proportions too? really?

>> No.6614238

>>6614232
yeah bro it's so easy now let's see your work

>> No.6614289

>>6614232
Using reference is how you learn to draw. You're still beg because you don't understand this

>> No.6614291

>>6613558
I find it very weird that people find shit like that cute when it's literally a middle aged japanese man trying to act like a little girl. There is no authenticity, it's not a real girl, it's just the delusion of a horny old bug

>> No.6614306

>>6614291
Men have spent 10k years idealizing women in art because real women are utter shit but we need to fool ourselves into loving them to presserve our species

>> No.6614323

>>6614289
it turns you into a copying NPC. but since you're here that means I'm right. you're no different than hyperrealist normalfags
>>6614238
let's see your photocopies lol

>> No.6614340 [DELETED] 

>>6614176
If it's not directly referenced from ukrainian child smuggling snuff vids then it's not loli. At all.

>> No.6614351

guys, please no. just post art.

>> No.6614727

gn lsg
may tomorrow be brighter day

>> No.6614753

>>6614351
i was going to but this thread is gross

>> No.6614758
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6614758

>>6612894
>>6610170
Here's the current version. I started coloring the picture on the left, but fuck it's turning out a lot harder than I thought.

>> No.6614760

>>6614758
Ah yes. Art!

>> No.6614762
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>>6614758
Fuck

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>>6614762
You aren't thinking in 3d. You would be able to see the other side of the ear from that angle.

>> No.6615228
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>> No.6615332

>>6615228
Cute, but I think the fold on her shirt make no sense

>> No.6615499

thoughs on this artist
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=list&tags=egami
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=list&tags=egami

>> No.6615504

>>6615499
Reminds me of kantoku with more relism like ishikei does

>> No.6615675
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6615675

i started gravity falls and kinda have a thing for Mabel now, I think i had a thing for on her when i was younger when I saw a few episodes.
Might draw her.

>> No.6615715

>>6615675
make sure to draw her sexy in a cute way

>> No.6615787
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6615787

I don't draw lolis... except when i do. Critique and impressions welcome

>> No.6615854

>>6615787
Born-to-Die fag?

>> No.6616046

>>6615787
Should have made the stomach a little more chubbier. I mean, you already have the pants unbuttoned. A composition like this should sell the point; should the viewer be interested in the candy she's sucking or her (not) flabby stomach bulging out of her pants to convey her pig eating, candy habits? Please think about these things in your next piece.

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6616189

>>6615057
Better?

>> No.6616353

>>6615675
Draw her raping a tied up Dipper please

>> No.6616453

not him but i think he means how the hair is making the scalp and shape look off; try drawing contour lines for the scalp and then the hair, it might help

>> No.6616634

https://litter.catbox.moe/87sgl6.jpg

>> No.6616646

>>6616634
Really like the rendering on the knees and face, not so much on the neck and breasts desu

>> No.6616659

>>6616646
thanks and yeah the chest area overall could improve but that lighting setting was a bit too much for my monkey brain to handle

>> No.6616663

>>6616634
blog
NOW
hide it in a litter-boxed image's metadata if you want, I need more of this

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6616799

>>6613558
did a quickie while suffering from insomnia

>> No.6616802

>>6616634
Blog? This is the best so far.

>> No.6616806

>>6614762
cute! just make the skull bigger as previously suggested
>>6615228
pose is kinda difficult to read but its cute
>>6615787
sexy lady
>>6616634
high skill but looking too realistic there. not for me sorry : /
>>6616799
best in the thread ; ) lol jk, it was a really quick drawing. i forgot her tail!

>> No.6616820

>>6616046
Hmm... yes indeed i overlooked the chubbiness. There's definitely more room for flabs

>> No.6616982

>>6616799

I know it's a quick drawing but you've been drawing for a long time now. You should already know how to wrap the forms around your character because some parts are flat (as your name implies).

>> No.6617037

>>6615499
ai fodder

>> No.6617085

>>6616453
meant to reply to>>6616189

>> No.6617126
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6617126

Thinkign about...

>> No.6617129

>>6617126
Very cute

>> No.6617156

>>6617126
About that beautiful composition
But she's wearing that 1000 yard stare. Maybe lowering her gaze a little would communicate the message better?

>> No.6617251

>>6616982
drawing for a long time now
i wish bro
im trying to remove the rust after a six year break, this is like my 5th sketch this year. I might fix it but most likely will draw something new

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6617275

>>6616453
Sorry I don't quite get what you mean, this is the skull isolated for a better view
>>6616806
>cute! just make the skull bigger as previously suggested
Are you sure? I feel like the size is pretty on point for the rest of the body.
If I make it bigger I will probably have to make the arms longer.

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>>6617156
Borb

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>>6617275
Try
https://sketchfab.com/3d-models/genshin-style-anime-female-base-mesh-for-blender-c2d6727e8c9742feb9a4a3bccac6e0e0>>6617275

Turn on wireframe and rotate the head, try to get that 3d feel, you made the head curved sure but it doesn't seem right, notice where the neck ends and the skull starts.
it helps if you know the skull bones and where things like the trapezius connects to, the spine and you can sorta go from there

Still if you make it stylised, that's something else, then never mind.

>> No.6617292

>>6617285
Ok I'll look into it thanks, tho I haven't figured out how to move her head in the 3d model.
Yeah it's obviously stylized, but if there's something that looks off I'd rather try to fix it

>> No.6617401

>>6616634
What did you use to get good at art?

>> No.6617406

>>6617401
clearly not loomis

>> No.6617435

>>6617406
How come?

>> No.6617574

>>6617401
He drew a lot of faces a while back so get really good at painting portraits then apply what you learned to onnanoko

>> No.6618121
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6618121

>>6616663
>>6616802
https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/93035622
it's pretty empty right now cause I just made it and want to retouch the old turds before posting them
>>6616806
westoid genes, son
>>6617401
I've been focusing most on coloring this past year so mostly copying from stuff like pic related and timelapses
favorite books are mostly stuff with practical knowledge like james gurney's color and light where I can just consult whenever I hit a roadblock. during the days I can't seem to get anything going I'll grind from taco1904, toshi and stonehouse
as he said >>6617574 sudying cute real life faces could help you put together your anime faces

>> No.6618151
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6618151

do you guys normally make the torso widder than heads?
I tried doing it sometimes but itsn't not as cute

>> No.6618191

>>6618151
I'm not drawing toddlers so always.

>> No.6618297
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6618297

Anyone lost their accounts during this banwave? How's other alternatives like Misskey?

>> No.6618401

>>6618297
Ban? Nani sore?

>> No.6618633

https://files.catbox.moe/9hjsum.jpg

>> No.6618651

>>6618633
thoroughly blackpilled, bros...

>> No.6618699

>>6618297
Most misskey instances are run by japanese, so if you join one, please don't be another one of those baka gaijin twitter refugees who forgets to censor porn, then gets mad when they get banned for it. regardless, there's no reason not to have a misskey account, or any fediverse account really, especially if you're a loli artist. it's as close to "mainstream" style social media as we're ever going to get that isn't either outright hostile or excessively artist-focused

>> No.6618704

>>6618297
use baraag

>> No.6618717

>>6618704
you have to apply or have an invite link to make a new baraag account

>> No.6618721

>>6618121
>https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/93035622
>https://litter.catbox.moe/87sgl6.jpg
HA! You are not ready. Your figure is too stiff and bare. Face is boring, indifferent. You claim to be a master of color, yet there's nothing but skin tone. No accent color, no composition. You need 1000 more years before you can post on Pixiv.

>> No.6618722

>>6618721
I forgot to mention those sausage fingers. UGH!

>> No.6618771

>>6618721
>>6618722
lmao nah I know I'm still shit but come on, pixiv ain't what it used to be anymore. there's AI garbage everywhere now
what's the harm with some handmade turds in the mix, right?
I'm fixing that hand btw

>> No.6618776

>>6618771
Most people posting that now are artists with alternate accounts

>> No.6619269
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6619269

Sorry for being too cute~

>> No.6619963

Are there any German loli artists (who are still active)?
I want to become one myself but im too scared because it's technically illegal :c

>> No.6619983

>>6618151
Yes but not by a lot.

>> No.6619984

Peak lolis will always have their hips slighter wider than their head

>> No.6620070

>>6618633
A giant loli?

>> No.6620074

>>6619269
hm

>> No.6620115

>>6619269
Damn brat...!

>> No.6620280

quick dood without funds
https://litter.catbox.moe/3bcbop.png

>> No.6620283

>>6620280
nice trace

>> No.6620294

>>6620283
post original

>> No.6620304

>>6620294
not even denying it

>> No.6620307

>>6620283
tracing a drawing with any purpose other than learning is pure retardation.
>>6620294
https://litter.catbox.moe/bztihw.png

>> No.6620310

>>6620307
Nooooooo how dare that other artist copyright a sex position! It's not fair!

>> No.6620311

>>6620310
the falseflagging begins

>> No.6620312

>>6620311
I'm not them (what's the point, why bother to say this) but his drawing is altered enough to be different. It's not even in the same perspective.

>> No.6620313

>>6620304
I was not the original poster.

>>6620307
This does look like more of a study than a trace.

>https://litter.catbox.moe/rdjjw2.jpg

>> No.6620318

the copening copenus copeni

>> No.6620323
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Does her body differ a lot from an actual child?
Like, tits aside, is it obvious that she's an adult?

I want to use Lara for my studies.

>> No.6620325

>>6620323
>Does her body differ a lot from an actual child
A lot.

>> No.6620328

>>6620325
Fug, my reference library for drawing loli is ruined.
I don't have good eyes, then.

>> No.6620329

>>6620323
This glows

>> No.6620330
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>>6620329
Nah, I was just curious.

>> No.6620363

>>6617277
>>6619269
do you have a pixiv, anon? these are great

>> No.6620451
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I would be profoundly grateful if someone could post this guy's pixiv

>> No.6620453
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>>6620451
His work has been so extraordinarily passionate and touching I beat myself on the head everyday for not saving it all

>> No.6620454
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>>6620453
...Although there's a chance I'm wrong and it's not the one I'm thinking of

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>>6620454

>> No.6620477

>>6620451
His name is 2k and I'm pretty sure he deleted his pixiv a while back

>> No.6620482

>>6620477
It's joever

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>>6618151
depends on the art style

>> No.6620485

>>6620455
He nuked it but he made a .zip with some of his stuff and shared here in the general. I have it but maybe some other anon can reupload it for you because I'm not home now

>> No.6620488

>>6620485
That'd be nice

>> No.6620505

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FPldtb-gSQg

>> No.6620591

>>6620505
Misleading thumbnail...

>> No.6620621

>>6620591
you're right, wow.

>> No.6620705

>>6620363
https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/71024431
Yeah but I don't run a serious blog and you won't find much the same. My style changes whenever I take a extended break.

>> No.6620886

>>6620488
Still there anon? Here https://litter.catbox.moe/m778oj.zip

>> No.6621143 [DELETED] 

https://discord.gg/Ug8H6Krr69
drawfag server lolibros allowed

>> No.6621151

>>6621143
Glowing like a shiny diamond

>> No.6621174

>>6620280
Are you the sharty basedlita artist

>> No.6621193

>>6621143
Should I join it bros

>> No.6621197

>>6621193
without any screenshot of the server nah

>> No.6621201

>>6621197
huh true

>> No.6621202

>>6621193
look at the output /a/ drawthreads. that is the kind and quality of art you'll find inside.

>> No.6621375

>>6620886
Yes. It appears this isn't the artist I was thinking of... or, all NSFW stuff is missing?
Anyway thank you very much

>> No.6621384

what the fuck is this shit? now i know where all the loli comes from on /b/
i was always wondering who the fuck draws them, apparently 4channers do.

>> No.6621406

>>6613558
Just a quick question, is there a reason why the mega links in the resource docs do not work?

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>>6614178
Putting it into google just links you back to this thread kek

>> No.6621526

>>6621517
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kSD-hEnCX8g&list=PLDveUenoXZujwdv10Flq8GQb2dN4DcN3n&index=9

>> No.6621532

>>6621406

In one of the documents I likely deleted the mega account associated with it at some point. The other document was put together by someone else. I'm working on fixing everything.

>> No.6621542

>>6621532
Ah good to know, all float around ig until its back. I remember seeing this like a year or two ago then the link broke so went around looking for it again

>> No.6622150

>>6621375
No that's him, 2000. But I think you're right, he didn't zip the lewds

>> No.6622154

>>6621384
>apparently 4channers do.
lmao no work gets posted here

>> No.6622160

>>6622154
apply to be legally blind at your government office

>> No.6622168

>>6622160
i just counted 11 new works out of 131 posts - 5 are dupes (including original) with corrections, and literally 2 artists comprised half of that number. what the fuck is up with this general?

>> No.6622180

>>6622168
>why is the pedophile community small (lol) on this 4chan’s artwork and critique board?

Hear yourself.

>> No.6622184

>>6622168
Obsessed

>> No.6622189

>>6622180
>>6622184
>6 unique artists out of 51 IPs in a general on the artwork/critique board
tell me how this is okay again

>> No.6622198

>>6622189
Don’t worry about it. Focus on your art

>> No.6622202 [DELETED] 

>>6622198
nodraw subhumans shouldn't even have posting rights

>> No.6622203 [DELETED] 

I did say allowing loli and furshit general was a mistake, the few good artists we still had stopped posting their work in this board and redlining in the beg thread, thanks a bunch, degenerates. Get your brain checked for rot and holes

>> No.6622206

same thing every time

>> No.6622208

I was so close to finishing my 5 month long drawing but I just had to add a mirror in the background and now I need to think what my characters look like from behind...

>> No.6622213

>>6622208
Make her a vampire and you won’t have to worry about reflections

>> No.6622215

>>6622203
the good artists from lsg are worth more than whatever westoid trash that left. problem is the factually demonstrable 88% nodraws make this thread unbearable

>> No.6622217

literally 1984

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6622330

>>6621174
yeah, I like to shitpost drawings there, kek.

>> No.6622336

fuck youtube shorts

>> No.6622339

>>6622336
they are good source for por- i mean refs, yeah refs, really safe refs

>> No.6622342

>>6622339
i meant pork refs it got cut off

>> No.6622349

>>6616634
>404
Why?

>> No.6622353

>>6622349
It was AI, even catbox has its limits to pedoshit

>> No.6622358

>>6622342
True but I hate the “this X thing ____” and the creator doesn’t say the source then I have to dig around in the comments section. Too many videos are like this.

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>>6619269

>> No.6622502

>>6622349
litterbox link expired. it was a WIP of this https://litter.catbox.moe/yukvum.jpg
I was coloring the rest of the drawings but I'll have to rework the background on this one to make it so the light is coming from a window instead of a door so hit me up if something else looks wrong
>>6622353
winners don't do AI

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>>6622150
That's fucked up. I need his lewds.

>> No.6622550

>>6622538
A-anon...

>> No.6622552

>>6622538
>we are not pedophiles btw you're just projecting

>> No.6622556

>>6622538
>1. [THE MOST IMPORTANT] Don't post too revealing works (especially porn). If you think it's too lewd, post a censored copy here and link to Catbox, Imgur, or any off-site that hosts images for your works. Note: If you're having issues viewing catbox links, use a VPN.
^^^

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>>6622552
Who are you quoting nigga
>>6622556
I'm fucking going on a vacation

>> No.6622561 [DELETED] 

imbecile

>> No.6622563

I drew loli for a little bit, got bored of it. Not really my thing and im not attracted to kids like most of you are. but good luck with the gains i guess?

>> No.6622564

>>6622558
didn't take long to find something
>>/ic/thread/S6053422#p6055768

>> No.6622565

>>6622563
nice microblog

>> No.6622584

>>6622502
did no one tell you to fix her armpit? this is the problem with nodraw consoomer central

>> No.6622590

>>6617277
cute!

>> No.6622640

>>6622584
aw shit you're right, I kind of noticed something wrong in there in the ref I used but forgot to fix it

>> No.6623262
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6623262

hi

>> No.6623267

>>6623262
where is their cunny?

>> No.6623499

>>6622330
erotic, onions forged basedlita...

>> No.6623655
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6623655

what are good loli doujin publishers to send my works? I can manage understanding japanese

>> No.6623666

>>6622330
this is very nice

>> No.6623952

>>6622330
I like the USB variant.
Popsicle work, bröther.

>> No.6623957

>>6623655
You will never be published in Japan. Feel free to prove me wrong.

>> No.6624150
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6624150

Character design for a novel

I'd usually ask on beg but the thread seems slow recently so
other than hands, what's the most glaring thing I should work on? General crit also appreciated.

>> No.6624165

>>6624150
facial features are scrunched up and belly button is off center. Also have a little bit more separation from the back of the hair to the side and the bone clavicle makes no sense, please adjust it

>> No.6624187

>>6624150
plase flip your canvas

>> No.6624197

>>6624150
>character design
>doesn't design the clothes
extremely generic and boring. learn to draw clothes.

>> No.6624215

>>6624150
shrink the eyes to the point the distance between them is of at least one eye width. that space can be larger (1.3 eye width for example( but never smaller than that
the collarbones should meet at the base of the neck

>> No.6624310

Brutal as always, thanks everyone

Here's the adjusted version. >>6624297

Couldn't really change the eyes without erasing the entire face, it's only like 2 cm across.
If I could I'd shift the neck to the right as well.

>>6624165
Thanks. I think I need to better understand hair, seems like my additions only made it less readable.
>>6624187
I can see that it looks off, but I can't tell why
>>6624197
I feel like the most important features of a character are the face and hair. When you think about any well designed (not gacha) character they could be wearing a potato sack and would still look good imo.
>>6624215
Thanks, I keep violating this one.

>> No.6624329
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6624329

I can't fix her

>> No.6624337
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6624337

Very early stage, still figuring out proportions, perspective and gesture, not sure what to do with her left arm.

>> No.6624351
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6624351

>>6623499
>>6623666
>>6623952
Thanks, bros

>> No.6624386

>>6623957
https://ec.toranoana.jp/tora_r/ec/item/040031052489/

>> No.6624399

>>6624337
make it so the left arm is supporting her instead then draw the right one moving the bangs to behind the ear. it's one of my favorite gestures

>> No.6624406

>>6624337
Use reference for the ass. It looks so bad it's not erotic anymore. And that's like the most common ass shot ever so you shouldn't have problem finding reference. The upper arm is dis proportionally large and the legs look big instead of foreshortened. I'd suggest dropping the close perspective and going for something more telescopic since it's easier.

>> No.6624407

>>6624406
You mean like as seen from above?

>> No.6624412

>>6624407
No, just making it flatter, as if you took a photo from farther away and zoomed in.

>> No.6624423
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6624423

Why does this look bad.

>> No.6624458
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6624458

>>6624423
Upper body looks fine in proportion but the pose is too stiff. Add some contraposto
Legs and feet need help

>> No.6624476
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6624476

>>6624423
you need contrapposto

>> No.6624487
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6624487

>>6624423
>>6624458
>>6624476
best I can do with the lasso tool

>> No.6624488

>>6624399
>moving the bangs to behind the ear
Can tell me what the tag for it on gelbooru is? I can't find it

>> No.6624501

>>6624488
something like https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=4820335
the tag is 'adjusting hair'

>> No.6624502

>>6624501
Yeah I found it, having massive troubles figuring out how to do it from this angle, I need her elbow to twist like 90 degrees

>> No.6624507
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6624507

>>6624150
tried to redline but ended up redrawing it
i don't usually draw them this young yooooooooooooo
>>6624337
very cute i like your art !
>>6624351
based
>>6624423
cuz its stiff, looks like a doll

>> No.6624509

>>6624329
Cutipie!

>> No.6624530
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6624530

>>6624399
Yeah, I don't think I'm pulling this off, at least not today

>> No.6624566
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6624566

>>6624530
something something off balance

>> No.6624567

>>6624566
I see, I see.
I will play around with your red line, tho I want to put more emphasis on her butt. And maybe make her legs a bit longer.
Thanks.

>> No.6624573

>>6624567
lol were you waiting for me to post? good luck and don't forget to use ref, not that I did though.

>> No.6624574

>>6624573
Not sure what you mean. I have 4chanX and get a notification when someone (You)s me, that's why I responded quickly.
Thanks again

>> No.6624576

>>6624574
Oh ok. I forget extensions exist.

>> No.6624585 [DELETED] 

>>6624566
where did you learn anatomy?

>> No.6624602 [DELETED] 

>>6624585
He referenced real CP.

>> No.6624675
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6624675

>>6624458
>>6624507
OK I tried doing the contraposto and the leg stuff,is this less stiff?

>> No.6624680

>>6624675
Absolutely wrong. You're supposed to rotate the ribcage and the hip in opposite directions, not move the shoulder joint and whatever you did to the legs. Read a book.

>> No.6624682 [DELETED] 

>>6624602
3DPD doesnt look that good

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6624686

>>6624680
Didnt know that thanks, Ill take your words into account

>> No.6624703
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6624703

>>6624680
Is this more like the ribcage and hip thing you were describing? not really fleshed out because i didnt wanna waste time drawing over something that looked fucked

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6624704

>>6624703
Kinda, but the ribcage looks straight there, and the legs aren't adjusted for the rotation of the hip. Use more ref.

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6624710

>>6624704
I adjusted it a little, any better? + where can i find good references for like this stuff? Do i just look up skeleton pictures and like marble statues?

>> No.6624739
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6624739

what do you call this style?
inb4 potato
i meant the art style

>> No.6624740

>>6624739
anime

>> No.6624741

>>6623267
but anon...hes a boy.
...
https://files.catbox.moe/o7dy6g.jpg
have a doodle.

>> No.6624742

>>6624739
Anime.
No seriously what the fuck do you expect. I think you'd rather categorize them by artists since its just impossible to say really. The closest thing i can think of is Granblue fantasy sprite-ish

>> No.6624750
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6624750

legs still fucked up but will fix later ig. is this improvement from >>6624675 atleast as om <stiff

>> No.6624898

>>6624750
how tf did you learn to stop chicken scratching in 5 hours?

>> No.6624911

>>6624898
sus, isn't it?

>> No.6624915

>>6624566
you made it worse with unnecessary changes

>> No.6624917

>>6624750
yeah that looks much better

>> No.6624923
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6624923

>>6624750

>> No.6624928
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6624928

>>6624923
Moved the supporting leg a bit

>> No.6624933

>>6624928
You don't want to literally take contropasta literally. The original problem with your drawing was it looked like a statue. A very minor positioning of the limbs is all that was needed. Don't go off the train tracks.

>> No.6624934

>>6624933
excuse my weird typing for I didn't have my tea yet

>> No.6624938

>>6624917
pyw crab

>> No.6624943

>>6624933
Not that anon but it looked fundamentally wrong, the upper torso in that pose would have naturally inclined itself toward the center of gravity

>> No.6624963

>>6624938

I'm getting deja vu vibes from this anons post. Reminds me of odliewhatever.

>> No.6625040
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6625040

>> No.6625059
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6625059

Which is better? Cant seem to land a good combination of deep blues/whites

>> No.6625066

>>6625059
I think the one on the right has too high contrast between her boots and her knee-socks, which makes the eye move down there rather than to her face

>> No.6625082

>>6625059
both are shit, left is better, still shit

>> No.6625088
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6625088

I kind of like how the face turned out but not the rest

>> No.6625089

>>6625059
Don't use color lineart unless you know what you're doing

>> No.6625090

>>6625066
Thanks thats a good point
>>6625082
Knowing /ic/ youre probably just a sad talentless hater with nothing of value to say, but ill bite. what exactly do you not like

>> No.6625092

>>6625088
Insanely good, saved. Where can I follow you?

>> No.6625094

>>6625092
?

>> No.6625099

>>6625089
This is a common technique. I had darken the soft coloured lineart to stay in tune with the style of the project which unfortunately is not as nice on light characters like this, but overall thats just objectively bad feedback because again its an established technique

Kind of tires me about /ic/ that half the time the feedback is just crap, like most of you just post out of spite. Occasionally ill post very well received artworks and i still get garbage "feedback" or ill post a low effort sketch and its praised like a masterpiece. Dishonest. anyway im just interested in which palette works better

>> No.6625101

>>6625099
Lurk more, if you see people calling your art shit it's either because it's really good or beg art posted outside of /beg/

>> No.6625105

>>6625099
Why are you getting angry? Your art objectively needs a lot of work. This is honest feedback, not crab behavior.

>> No.6625109

>>6625101
>calling your art shit it's either because it's really good

No

>> No.6625111

>>6625109
Missed the concept art days of /ic/?

>> No.6625115

>>6625111

I miss 2014 - 2015 /ic/. It was peak.

>> No.6625117

>>6625105
PYW so we can see if your opinion has any value

>> No.6625118

>>6625117

Are you back, Oldie? How have you been?

>> No.6625120

I'm here just to consume crude drawings, the worse the better

>> No.6625141

>>6625059
Symbol drawing 101

>> No.6625147 [DELETED] 

https://discord.gg/4BRf25pZJf
drawfag lolicord

>> No.6625149 [DELETED] 

>>6625147
Glowing like a sun

>> No.6625152 [DELETED] 

What's the worse that could happen if I join that random discord server?

>> No.6625157 [DELETED] 

>>6625152
discord drama
thats about it

>> No.6625190

>>6625088
Give that foot some form

>> No.6625197

>>6625094
I'm not being ironic at all, I really mean it

>> No.6625242
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6625242

>>6625059
cute

>> No.6625245

>>6625040
:)

>> No.6625247

>>6625242
you made it worse

>> No.6625248

>>6625247
sowwy

>> No.6625251

>>6625242
is /beg/ invading /lsg/ today? go back to your containment only post here if ur a pro faggots

>> No.6625252

>>6624739
moe/bishoujo
illiterates will simply call it "anime" though

>> No.6625254

>>6625251
begs can post here, but don’t redline if you are just going to kill the life of the original

>> No.6625255

>>6625088
Orenji I'm gonna find you and use your bones for my stew

>> No.6625296 [DELETED] 

lolidrawfag server
https://discord.gg/4BRf25pZJf

>> No.6625356
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6625356

>>6625251
cant post loli outsite
finished paining

>> No.6625368

>>6624898
>>6624911

I found out about how you can set up the buttons on Intuos to do short cuts, so i set one to ctrl-z and just spammed it as I was drawing. Also started using the transform tool to get stuff roughly in place instead of erasing shit and redrawing the whole line. I do less chicken scratch on paper. Just had to get used to tablet.

>> No.6625372

>>6625255
does artists like orenji etc actually post here? Or do people like repost the stuff here? B/c i looked at the date/time and this was posted like 20 minutes after orenji ps2xyjosted on twitter

>> No.6625375
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6625375

>>6624530
Her torso is a bit ambiguous, but it doesn't match her pelvis and buttocks' perspectives even if we're being generous. Since there are already a few suggestions about the shape of her buttocks, you can just redraw that to better match the torso.

>> No.6625380

>>6625372
Orenji is an /ic/ resident. He isn't some dude that doesn't know this place. He was grown from the tree here.

>> No.6625381

>>6625375
much better redline

>> No.6625387

>>6625380
Oh didn’t know that lore coo
l>>6625381
whats a redline?

>> No.6625392

https://files.catbox.moe/wnr28z.png
rate plz first time doing lewdish things

>> No.6625396

>>6625387
a correction drawing/critique

>> No.6625401
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6625401

>>6624530
>>6625375
But alas, there's no such thing as free lunch. The price for that redline is that I get to steal your loli and redraw her.
Sorry, it was so interesting I just had to. And it wasn't easy either, so good on you for trying difficult things.

>> No.6625403

>>6625401
OOOO this is really good

>> No.6625409

>>6625401
I'm jelly. How did you become so good?

>> No.6625416

>>6625401
That's really good

>> No.6625420

>>6625409
know how to make lifelike drawings

>> No.6625445

>>6625420
you're on a list now

>> No.6625449

>>6625403
>>6625416
Thanks.
>>6625409
You'll want to study skeletons for placement, proportions, weight/balance, and ranges of movement for each joint. Then, the pièce de résistance is really shape design. Think of most primary body parts -- except hands and feet -- as singular, complex shapes instead of of an assemblage of muscles/simpler shapes (ala construction). This gives you total control over style/appeal and the continuous stroke action of drawing shapes makes stuff look more confident. Draw these shapes from various angles and burn them into memory.

>> No.6625450

>>6625445
uhh?

>> No.6625476

>>6625252
i guess something like that, it feels korean.

Theres a lot of emphasis on unsaturated colors with great detail to ornaments and clothering over the actual figure.

>> No.6625497

>>6624739
nothing about it really stands out besides the sketchy light pencil lines. don't conflate subject matter and fashion for art style
>>6625252
that's quite literally what most anime is, by genetics and definition. even so it doesn't feel saccharine enough to be deliberately bishoujo, something like >>6619269 would fit better

>> No.6625506

>>6625375
Is this viridi from kid icarus?

>> No.6625520

>>6625506
ew no

>> No.6625533

>>6625392
https://files.catbox.moe/t2p9of.png more i did

>> No.6625553

>>6624386
more places like this jpanon?

>> No.6625624

>>6625533
soul

>> No.6625654

>>6625392
>>6625533
now draw him dicking faputa

>> No.6625692

>>6625533
The lower half is should have the stomach in front of his left leg.

>> No.6625703

>>6625401
>I get to steal your loli
poggers
>>6625040
thick shake : o

>> No.6625708
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6625708

>>6621526
We are not exempt from the consequences of our actions. We will receive judgement.

>> No.6625711

>>6625708
Wait a second.......

>> No.6625720
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6625720

>>6625708
This is what happens when you use a sound URL instead of a file... fuuuck

>> No.6625855
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6625855

i wish my anatomy wasn't so bad, i feel like i'm improving in everything but that

>> No.6625857

>>6625855
It's pretty cute tho

>> No.6625867

>>6625855
mak a rerenancefe chataert anea ore usae noee

>> No.6625882
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6625882

>>6625857
thanks i'm trying, i've been pushing my way through the box challenge in hopes of that helping.

>>6625867
w-what?

>> No.6625915

>>6625197
not that fag, but I think he is https://orenjipiiru.neocities.org/

>> No.6626043

>>6625855
your style is too anime moe to need good anatomy.

>> No.6626154

>>6625624
Is it a good or bad sign

>> No.6626591
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6626591

>>6613558
Trying out krita because it doesn't leave any traces unlike Photoshop..

>> No.6626647

>>6626591
>it doesn't leave any traces unlike Photoshop
?

>> No.6626708
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>>6626647
I use a veracrypt container and after unmounting the drive, the thumbnails are still showing in pic related as well as in File> open recent in PS, defeating the purpose of using an encrypted drive.
You can set it to remeber 0 in preferences but if you change it back to any number it still shows them.
with Krita once the drive is unmounted the thumbnail dissapears from the "recent douments" list and appears once again when the drive is mounted.

>> No.6626729

>>6626591
What’s a trace? I use krita because free, whats the no trace thing about

>> No.6626770

>>6626729
>What’s a trace?
A sign/evidence of something

>> No.6626779

>>6626708
Have you tried going to Preferences> History?
I was able to disable show recent files a long while ago, so I don't remember how I did that, but it's possible

>> No.6626782

>>6626708
Also try in Preferences> General to uncheck Auto update open file... and auto show home screen

>> No.6626795

>>6626779
>>6626782
Like I mentioned, it only stops showing them to u but it still logs them.
You can see the last opened files if u change the number from 0 to anything else.
Same with home screen.
You can't really disable it.

>> No.6626808

>>6624923
>>6624928

oohh, is the idea of your edits to my thing like that the supporting leg goes over the CoM?
>>6624963
>>6624938
?? what odlie what pyw crab? This the first thread on IC board that i post in.

>> No.6627187

>>6625449
When you say shape design do you mean flat shapes or 3d shapes. Ive seen a lot of people using the word shape to describe 3d forms(cube shape, cylinder shape etc.). And also how do you design a shape of a body part? For example the forearm, it is bulging near the elbow and tapering near the wrist, for lolis this tapering is gonna be less noticeable, so how would you "design" that body part if you are limited to that?

>> No.6627246

>>6627187
"Shape design" in this context just means directly drawing the contours of a body part in 3D. Of course, there are certain things like hands + feet, subtle bumps, and musculature for which this would be difficult to pull off, so your best bets would be arms, legs, torsos and heads which are already close to primitive forms like cylinders and rectangles to begin with. That... Was probably incredibly obvious for anyone foregoing construction already. But rather more importantly, being able to work directly with contours like so affords you more freedom in stylization, which is where your own preferences come in. If you don't like how something is *supposed* to look, or looks from a certain angle -- like chins from below -- then you can change that. My personal fixation is on legs, specifically calves, by the way.

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6627288

>>6624928
>>6624943
>>6624933
Adjusted Legs slightly as directed, is this improvement? face is placegholder for now

>> No.6627646
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6627646

is upper body ok

>> No.6627669

>>6627646
Better

>> No.6627687

>>6627669
Compared to which iteration

>> No.6628306

The midpoint is broken.

>> No.6628309

hes so cool he doesnt quote

>> No.6628728

where to find customers for loli/shota content?

>> No.6628878

>>6627246
That kind of drawing works the best when you master midpoints to quickly find the correct proportions.

>> No.6628966

>>6627646
>i draw girls
damn, blast from the past. I remember this dudes stuff from my middle school days. I wonder how he’s been.

>> No.6629233

current wip https://litter.catbox.moe/oaelgg.jpg
are you anons familiar with this lighting setting? I'm referencing some of alke's work but I don't know how to do the ambient occlusion when it's all so saturated. I'm especially struggling with shading the arms and neck
torso is still pretty incomplete cause I don't know how much detail I can get away with since she's 90% in shadow

>> No.6629262

>>6629233
Use reference. It makes no sense for the bedsheet to be so blue when the body is that saturated and orange. Is it because it's a wip? If not you should really make the light hit the bedsheet too since it makes her look weird. Also, you really should stop your habit of turning lineart into shaded areas. Both buttcheeks should be hit by the light, and probably half of the back and shoulder blade too. Another problem is that the rimlight is too uniform and doesn't show the form well.
>I'm referencing some of alke's work but I don't know how to do the ambient occlusion when it's all so saturated
Idk what you mean, but saturation and value are relative. If you want to make something look even more saturated consider desaturating everything else instead.

>> No.6629266

>>6629262
I mean real life reference, not just alke. You'll get the back right that way.

>> No.6629461

>>6629262
yeah the background is still pretty half assed but I'm trying to get used to different lighting scenarios, especially these where most of the figure in shadow. I forced it to be a backlight only scenario (what I tried to show with the rimlight) but since lowering the window too much made even less sense, I might need to be more creative with the background
about the ambient occlusion, it's just that I usually color it as a dark, saturated warm color since I'm more used to settings where there's more light than dark so the contrast works well but having it more saturated than the body in this drawing made it look weird like it's a second light source instead of the absence of light itself. is this where it loops around and the shadow starts getting close to black, caravaggio style?

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