/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

you dumb nigger, we wait until page 9 or 10 to make a new thread
plus fucking with the ai in the post only invites faggots in to bitch and complain

>>6525118
No need to be so hateful

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!

>>6525121
youre such a fucking idiot
enjoy your thread full of people bitching and complaining and riddled with ai posts

>>6525134
I wasn't OP, just think that there are better ways of saying things

>>6525140
what a waste of a thread

>>6525134
keep bitching lad

>>6525143
Much better

>>6525149
much better for what
dumb ass OP decides to remove the one thing that made this thread comfy af niggers gonna nig

>>6525154
I meant that that's a much better way of saying it

>>6525089
Well, now's a good time than any to open up a good discussion about AI being used in collaboration with porn. There are several benefits to this joining of untapped resource, I'm certainly in favor for it. What do you all think?

>>6525177
I started using ai as a visual reference sometimes. It's better than looking at a butter face.

How do you do, fellow artists and artisans first time poster and very excited to partake in your community. Looking forward to receive constructive criticism! Love the work I see here you're all so hecking true and valid :)

>>6525187
Yeah, I'm leaning towards using more AI in those benefits too. What AI are you using?

>>6525118
>>6525129
>>6525134
>>6525143
>>6525154
It's painfully obvious that this is ribosoma.. he did the same shit in the alt thread. He only shows himself when a new thread is created.

>>6525191
That is some really nice art, anon. Did you do this yourself or was AI able to help you along with your process?

>>6525196
the /alt/ thread is fucking cancer, have you been in that shit thread?

>>6525193
It's "Nemu's Waifu Generator" it's a website so it can be slow sometimes. The poses are interesting.

>>6525204
Nice, thanks for the info. Does it create retro anime too, or is it more new anime?

>>6525208
I haven't used it that much. It's unpredictable.

>>6525177
the biggest will be better interpolators for animation.

>>6525331
That raises the framerate for animation up to 60fps, right? There's probably hentai out there already using this technology?

>>6525378
are you drawing people without skin is that like a fetish for you?

After 1 year and half of everyday practice, this is the "best" I could draw. Can I get critique? The hair is horrible, I can see that

>look for info on how to price your art
>just charge minimum wage hourly bro, if it takes you 2 hours to complete then charge that amount
>drawing takes me a shit ton of time to finish even though it's not complicated
that'll be $5000 plus tip for your naked lady, sir.

>>6525364
Not really, actually thats not what you want for animation it really fucks up everything. What I'm talking about is to create a new inbetween frame instead of keep redrawing subtle movements.

>>6525388
Quickest one is to not rely so much on soft brushes to render, you want to use those to create certain materials and balance it with a hard brush for more clarity. Get familiar with how 3D materials work and you'll get an idea of what things to think about when you render certain things and how to achieve the desired result.

Easiest way to learn how to render skin is to study other artists and trying to reach the same outcome.

>>6525416
Will try. Thank you!

>>6525378
if his dick was flopping upwards like her right tit, it would help describe movement better.
Also, I agree, that you are adding definition to certain muscle groups(?) that don't really enhance the drawing, for instance, her pussy mound and the upper pecs. Makes it scarier and less sexy

>>6525388
hey bro, the best advice I could give you is to be very careful with the way you are studying. I spent so many years copying references thinking I was "studying" when I really wasn't learning shit. Non ironically recommend you to go through Loomis figure drawing book. He will explain you how to study anatomy.
also what >>6525416 is right, don't use the soft brushes so much. Try using hard brushes and turn pressure sensitivity off completely. The blend as needed.

>>6525617
Thanks for advice. I actually spent a lot of time doing gestures and constructing figures. Most of the times I can draw prose without reference, except when it's a really hard pose. The >>6525388 was done without reference.

>>6525617
This woman is so elegant.

>>6525411
Do you have any videos showcasing that, I'm curious to what you're talking about.

>>6525617
You can name your files all you want, but all I see in your style now is Abby Shapiro. That's so tragic.

>>6525791
2 years old, there are more recent stuff but workflow remains a little clunky.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VHVrvSe3myc

Advice on drawing sexy feet? Not a foot guy :/

>>6525894
Do studies of feet that aren't ugly. Also do studies of artwork featuring feet prominently.

>>6526016
>Do studies
nta but as in just draw a bunch of feet?

>>6526021
Yeah, but a study is much more than just copying. For example, in studying anatomy you may want to break down the basic big shapes that a foot is made of, you want to understand the structure and ways in which a foot can be positioned, etc.

>>6526161
mind posting a example of what you mean? (last question as I don't wanna derail thread into /beg/ crap)

>>6526186
not him but maybe do go to /beg/ and ask cause this is derailing, what he's talking about is the absolute basic skill of using basic shapes (spheres, cubes, pyramids etc) that you can learn in most basic how to draw books
pic rel isn't too beginner friendly but imagine the complex shapes as their nearest simple shape
google/youtube/pinterest is a big help, or again, any beginner/intermediate anatomy book

finished this cyberpunk comm

>>6526489
I feel like you could have pushed the tonal corrections further. if you wanted it to closely resemble the original style.

>>6526489
nice, what prompt did you use?

>>6526489
Yeah, I think I could've pushed the colors more too.

>>6526614
im flattered u think its ai

commission wip of weser from azur lane. it's nice after staring at cyberpunk screenshots for hours lol.

>>6526489
Do you use koikatsu as 3d model program lmao, not that I blame you or anything. The boobs head and hair are a dead giveaway

>>6526621
damn at least be honest that you used a modeling program dude

>>6526636
ainigger spotted

>>6526623
did you use a 3d model program for this too? like the other anon mentioned, it's alright if you used it i guess, but don't come off like you created this from scratch when you used something to trace it

>>6526638
im not the one posting work pretending like i created you axe wound
if he or xhe wanted to use a model program that's fine just be honest about it

>>6526638
nvm it does look traced

(WIP) The Healer from Clash-a-Rama. Any critique?

>>6526639
No, this one is from scratch. The only one I used 3d in recently is the bottom right one in the collage pic I posted once.

>>6526636
I didn't for that one...

>>6526629
No. idek what koikatsu is. Trying to make my lines and shading fit the edgerunners style made it look sorta stiff and modeled. However it's true I used to use 3d almost constantly and I probably picked up the lima bean shape head model shape. I also referenced a 3d headshot model of the character for the hairstyle.

>>6526669
pretty good, I thought it was legit for a second

>>6525617
Which book specifically?

>>6525805
rent free

>>6526779

>Needs to pay rent to hold a thought

>>6526679

>>6526868
KEK

What do you think about this rushed out pic I made for /pw/? I'm not sure how I would refine it without losing that kind of sketchy charm.

>>6526868
bruh
>>6526679
explain? i mean why lie?

>>6526878
prompt? howd you get ai to create a sketchy style like that?

>6526946
The fag above is just baiting people with the same question to start a fight for more AI bullshit, please ignore him.

>>6526950
Better yet,hide these fags

>>6526950
i'm asking a legitimate question, you troon
i'm for drawing with ai and if there's something out there that can create something like this without having to put in so much effort to look good, unlike you, why knock it?

>>6525868
that's a really neat video anon, thanks for sharing it
i always wondered how you could implement ai into your workflow like that and it seems like it definitely has its advantages

>>6526868
>>6526489
if this is art, than so is AI
Jannies should get 3D out of these drawing threads

>>6526976
agreed 3D porn should not be allowed but AI generated porn images, or AI enhanced porn images should be

>>6526623
What's the setting for the "crop mark default border" for this? My options are grey out on Clipstudio sometimes and i'm a big f*ck'n noob at this digital stuff. it would help a-lot if somebody could recommend the standard settings for me for pinups or whatever. and i don't need help from the AI niggers.

>>6526997
I found this on Reddit anon, I hope it helps you like it helped others!

Story>Change Basic Page Settings>Size of output frame

Are you doing this for animation, because that's what I found it under when I looked it up on Google. And you don't need to be so mean with your words, AI looks like a great tool to implement into your work.

Don't knock it until you try it! Hope this helps!

>>6523188
>>6514532
thank you for feedback and kind words anons
new commission wip, I need to work on my gesture/animation skills to really sell that she's being hit and being startled/scared by it, and also by adding some good secondary motion to her tail

Can i get some feed back on this one

>>6526976
>Jannies should get AI out of these drawing boards
ftfy

>>6526868
>>6526870
>>6526929
Idk what to tell u except I’ve never seen the right one. Anime tits look similar, big fucking woop. Do y’all want me to post a fucking speed paint recording or smth??

>>6527263
same anon
This is making me quite sad. I literally did not use 3D or any modeling software for the cyberpunk drawing and I was actually feeling quite pleased bc I managed to make the angle look pretty good without 3D

>>6527263
Does posting the sketch prove anything? Probably not.

>>6527228

>>6526976
at least he drew the clothes nigger kek, ywnbaa

Help me /salt/ how to do this glossy effect?

>>6527335
I imagine is some type of textured brush

>>6527335
Create a new layer,then use a noisy brush and set the layer to add/overlay
If you use CSP,you can find it on the airbrush option

>>6527335
nice prompt

>>6527336
>>6527341
Thanks kings. Noisy brush eh, don't has clip studio but will try it in sai and ps

>>6527457
PS have a preset of 'noisy' brushes or you can just use a hard round brush in a dissolve blending layer
For CSP and SAI just search for glitter brushes

>>6527228
it makes me want to shove my face in there so, good job

Tried out keeping the drawing pretty fast and simplified.
Unfortunately I'm not much of a feet guy and it propably shows.

>>6527814
i've seen worse.

have the nipples show through the clothing

How do you draw mega monster milk truck mammaries?

>>6529052
By drinking mega monster milk. Duh.

>>6527275
>>6527277
Just post new drawing I guess

How is this looking? Anything advice or areas I could improve?

>>6530227
cool story groomer, /lsg/ is that way ---->

>>6530239
Very helpful.

>>6530244
if anyone's going to know about those proportions, they would
just trying to help

>>6528186
Really good. Only thing that bothers me is the eye placement on the girl facing us, but I'm not sure if it's a proportion thing or if it's just the iris position (which I feel would be a little more cross-eyed due to the other girl being so close to her)

>>6530227
Eyes should be the same height, at the moment her right eye is a bit shorter than her left. The nose should be centered above the mouth. The mouth needs to be rotated slightly counter-clockwise. The ear is a bit too small. Upper left arm is too short. Breasts are attached too high. Navel is too low. Basically learn how to correctly place facial features and study torso anatomy.

>>6530255
Hell yeah, thanks.

>>6527335
bruh is just the defaut noise airbrush from csp

>>6529526
just finished this comm

>>6530610
we supposed to crit your 3d renders?Bro your stuff is done by a computer
also you ever fucked a girl?
don't think that's how that works right there lol

>>6530610
what are your rates?

>>6530655
175 usd +100 for 2nd chara

>>6530658
goddamn I am giving away my shit

>>6530681
you are probably not bro, he's the one overpricing shit. Coomers are just dumb enough to pay pajeets for traced 3D models who mimic japanese artists.
Keep this in mind. Style is everything, and style sells,once you find your voice. So focus on that.

>>6530825
>tell me you're a kid without telling me you're a kid

>>6530637
They only come here to say "comm this and comm that" it's best to just ignore them. Critiques will get ignored anyways
>>6530681

>>6530637
>>6530841
Redline pls.

>>6530853
Are you asking me? I'm not the anon who highlighted that part. But I'd agree and say that part doesn't look attractive. If it was me, I'd ma....... you know what. I already critiqued you before and nothing was changed. I also told you to change your cyberpunk tonal values and nothing was changed. If you'll excuse me. I have to go play some Tony hawks.

>>6530637
>>6530841
Imagine being that butthurt because someone is making some money with this

>>6530610
nice. i don't think you traced or copied 3d models but i think the art style makes it look that way.
>>6530637
how that pic 3D
>>6530871
pyw

>>6530912
I don't understand this board
When is not looking japanese enough,you will get shit or just ignored
When it's looking japanese, people just shout "AI" or "Traced"

Here is a no ref no model no 3D freehand sketch I recorded

>>6530912
Thank you anon :( its quite discouraging when I finally feel that I don’t feel the need to use 3D anymore and everyone says I’m tracing. Although I understand my anatomy habits and shading habits still probably look 3D esque, bc I did practice a lot using them instead of doing real and proper studies.

>>6530912
>pyw
if i post my work, shit heads like vodka and xn will crab on me. and i don't want to derail this thread. i'm not the best artist but fuck it. i'm better...

>>6530918
just do your thing anon, there are no rules in art.

>>6530610
>>6530931
This is how I know you traced and if I were you, I'd own up to it now before you get called out on your bullshit later. Take this as free advice or not. It's your choice.
Using reference material while being conscious about the alterations you make to your drawing are obvious to any person who knows that. But tracers ignorantly follow the lines, completely oblivious to the mistakes they're making. For example, did you bother to lower the navel ring on the blonde? No. Is that goiter on her right wrist there, due to an iodide deficiency? Who knows. Are those blue heels really a product of your creativity or lack of reference because on her left heel, you clearly show a thick heel while on her right, it's pointed. And small. You were also in such a rush to post your trace that the wings, not to mention the pussy on the girl eating out the blonde, are completely out of place.
Just admit you traced and move on. The more you try to defend yourself, the more you dig yourself in the hole. Oh, and the snap collar's also wrong.

The goblin

Also drew this and forgot to post but I also dont want to post the 2 other sex alts.
Sex is boring, pinups are more fun anyways

>>6530610
>>6530658
Based gmi anon, watching these crabs shit and cry while not post anything better or doing redlines is always a hilarious sight to behold. Keep making that money anon.

>>6530956
Thanks for the encouragement
I'm not the anon who drew that btw

>>6531040
It's so fucking hilarious see them seething just because someone is doing well with comms
Stay jelly crabs

>>6530610
>>6530658
Jesus if thats your rates I need to up my prices. Im working on this for 150 usd, still gotta do a full render

>>6531041
anon, plz don't answer for others. just let the comments sink.
>>6531040
not crabbing. i'm >>6530841 i'm just stating the obvious. i have nothing to prove. "pyw' and get ignored anyways. i know better to just save my shit for patreon anyways.
>>6531050
Commissions are rare anyways, it just depends on who's willing to pay you. i remember a person wanted to pay me 80 for a sketch of his wife getting cucked. certain people have money to spend and other do not. i'd feel bad if somebody accused me of overcharging too. so i keep my prices *****

>>6531070
>answer for others
I answered for myself wtf are you talking

This isn't a safe space or a hug box, it's not home to special little snowflakes, if you come in here thinking you're this hot shit, there are plenty here to knock you off that high horse. Either draw your crap right or not at all.
Because apparently, these axe wounds love to advocate for mistakes in anyone's work, rather than help.
>>6531040
>>6531045

And it's funny, we get called crabs for pointing out mistakes. I'd rather be called that than some faggot nigger shilling out empty praise.

>>6531077
>Implying that I would chop my dick off
KEK

>>6531081
Stay salty, troon. Oh and by the way, either point out the mistakes, like you, or shut the fuck up. No one needs your pats on the ass here, unless you know, you're here to groom.

>>6531084
Giga cope kek

>>6531085
That's what I thought, troon. :)

>>6531077
this is a thread about cartoon porn chill out retard.

>>6531087
You thought nothing because that drawing and I lives rent free in your mind now
Stay mad

>>6531077
backseat niggers like you don't even post work to prove that you know what the fuck you're even talking about why the fuck should anyone ever listen to you? either post your work and redline or seethe endlessly about begin some broke faggot who's NGMI.

>>6531091
>>6531103
He can't draw for shit kek

>>6531108
looks good to me and the people paying him LMAO

>>6531117
I liked the drawing too
I'm wheezing at the guy who thinks that anyone who disagrees with him are a troon

>>6531077
Yeah, I'm thinking based.

>>6531103
I give out critiques, troon. I don't waste my time with redlines from faggots and niggers who won't take my advice. So go suck a dick.

DENUDIDEALIS;
from the Latin "denudere" meaning "naked",
and "idealis" (ideal).

art stripped of its ideal of beauty.
art that explores the vulgar in it's most overlooked aspects.

>>6531138
Projecting this much
You want suck a tranny dick or be one so bad,just admit it
Also pyw tranny chaser

>>6531143
Temper, temper. No need to trap someone in the hopes of getting them banned for not adhering to the rules. I gave out a critique to the tracer up above, it's his of xher's choice if they want to take it. I called you a troon, no need take it beyond that. Critiques, troon, we're here to give good critiques.

>mfw knowing who the schizo that's shitting up the general is
if you niggers knew just how much of an inferior artist to >>6530931 this troon enthusiast was you all would be laughing as much as I am right now.

>>6531160
>Accuses of tracing
>Refuses to elaborate
>Don't post work
I just give up at this point

>>6531165
Are you talking about >>6531160
Start spitting if yes

>>6531166
Much better.

>>6531169
this is your schizo, he will deny it but let's just say that his 'idiosyncrasy' makes it far too easy to ID this retard.

>>6531173
You'd better be careful throwing around shade like that. Heed the rules.

>>6531173
KEK
I remember this shit,he got called out for tracing
>>6531179
Now you want to play nice huh
Pathetic

>>6531173
I like that artist. You better apologize.

>>6531173
This is a red board retarded faggot

>>6531173
I like that anon's work too, nigger. That shit's got muthafukin' SOVL

>>6531198
No,he is lame
>>6531203
Original artist posted here before and it was fine stfu

>>6531179
>>6531186
>>6531198
I just find it funny how these uppity some of these faggots get about other people's art while their own art remains dog shit. you know what they say about stones and glass houses

>>6531211
>stones and glass houses

>>6531173
every goddamn time lmao

>>6531211
It's really not that they get uppity about other people's work, it's that someone points out a mistake, and then fanboys crawl out of the woodwork to defend the shlong they're latched on to and become increasingly butthurt when that person points out the hugbox mentality and circlejerk such as we're seeing now.

>>6531225
Would you kindly fuck off and let the rest of the anons here post their work and receive an actual critique?

>>6525089
nigger what the fuck are "A!" posts
next you're going to tell us not to reply to "B!" or "AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA" posts
fr fr

>>6531225
>actual critique
define actual critique, because I have not seen anybody break down a drawing and provide constructive feedback for nearly a decade.

>>6531234
Neither you,and that's why you suck
Cope and seethe

>>6531239
I've personally broken down drawings before and offered a redraw from an issue with a form, grant it I do it very rarely because of faggots like you with the cult like fanboyism that doesn't allow anybody to give a hint of what's wrong with the drawing from the last artist you sucked off and swallowed.

>>6531246
Then why don't you post your work or redlines here instead of writing walls of text? Damn,even that anon asked for a redline and no one delivered
Not even you.

>>6531247
I did post my work and it got deleted, like usual. Critique is freely given it is not obliged you little faggot.

>>6531207
Yeah, there is no need to censor shit on red boards unless you're a degenerate

>>6531252
t.original artist censored himself

>>6531262
Why r u posting someone's work?

>>6531251
And people can freely call out if you are full of shit when giving critique

>>6531263
It wasn't me, was >>6531173
Thanks for showing who this schizo is

>>6531265
and don't forget to swallow.

>>6531274
Ladies first,faggot

>>6531295
whatever nodraw keep being a drawlet

Are there any forums like the old school php ones around for pinup/nsfw art?

>>6526954
Report them for off topic posting or trolling out of /b/

>>6527275
Don't sweat It. You drew a 3d cartoon on model and it looks like a 3d model. That's a success.

>>6525118
>>6525129
>>6526638
>>6530637
>>6530832
>>6530907
>>6531087
>>6531103
>>6531165
>>6531166
>>6531171
>>6531173
>>6531207
>>6531211
>>6531220
>>6531221
>>6531233
>>6531274
All you gay little faggots better shut up.
I just come here to see art. Don't care about "pyw" or "gmi"s. You can all sniff my farts. You are nothing to me...

>>6531173
based schizo identifier.

>>6531173
>>6531186
>>6531207
who is this faggot anyway?

>>6531324
kek. At least I hope u can make it out of ur nodraw crab phase using this internet interaction as rage fuel

>>6531345
Doesn’t matter. Just take note of the art style and peculiar attitude so if u see them in the future don’t take them seriously

Taking a survey. For those of you that consume filmed ("real") porn, how much paywalled porn exists that you wish you could access, or actively pay for, versus ideas for Rule 34 that you want to make? Regardless of how much you actually produce.

>>6531405
I consume more vanilla shit,so it's not too much

Sigh... I know I know, I fucked up the proportions. My question is, how noticeable is it?

Probably been asked 100 times but what’s the best way to draw women breast, waist, and leg areas

>>6527228
excellent.

>>6531405
>how much paywalled porn exists that you wish you could access/actively pay for
none, since i dont find any differences with amateur stuff

>ideas for Rule 34 that you want to make
trying new stuff ig? like new poses/body types

>>6531880
It looks like her arms are growing out of her chest and her spine is dead straight dude, where is the curve?

felt like drawing a trashy gilf.
her grandsons love her smell

>>6532104
average woman in 2060, you're ahead of our time

>>6532446
Thank god for Ai powered robo waifus.

>>6532104
It gives me some futuristic vibes

>>6531405
I can find most paywalled shit for free anyways, except one thing: the Patreon of a photographer that took nudes of a bitch I knew in highschool. For that shit I actually paid. It was worth it. As for the r34 thing, needless to say I can't make it off of that bitch, or better said, I would cringe to death by doing it. I had fun with the new AI thingy's tho.

>>6532104
fucking gross, cyberpunk 2077 inspired filth

Newlywed

draw Lolis

>>6525089
I see Ochako, I post
Simple as

is this accurate?

>>6532840
it seems alright to me. but i generally don't draw like that. i draw the female pelvis as a tilted box. and i draw the hip bones and pussy separate from the box shape. but you do you, i've studied the artist LMSketch sometimes.

>>6532866
thanks, I'll go study his construction method

Nep vs Noire wrestling comm

>>6533155
Iris Heart when

I love drawing

>>6533193
She was voted in to my first Monthly Supporters' Monthly Pic

>>6533396
Based. Pururun taking scrubs down as always

>>6526489
Out of curiosity how much did you charge for this?

>>6533427
175

>>6531322
Thanks anon, I appreciate ur words

What re good artbooks for learning color and how to color

>>6533754
>Color and Light-James Gurney
>Kind Light and Color-Rinotuna
>Artists' Master Series: Color and Light
For more,take a look at the /artbook/ general thread

>>6533464
saw the progress on the /aco/ discord, huge improvements. but her left nipple is off the shits even considering the big (prolly fake) stripper tiddies, and there's a weird angular jank going on in the underboob. shame it's there in the focal point but it looks great

>>6533464
The platform underneath, casting four shadows out at once, but somehow reluctantly omitting the dancer's shadow in any direction, is a clear indicator that you have no fucking idea where your light source is originating from, or where it's landing. That's clearly evident throughout that traced body; you just vomited whatever shadows you wanted leaving in its wake this fake, plastic look smeared on a purple background.
Hell, even the light source in the background makes no sense. What the fuck were you thinking? And this is how I know your obsession with drawing that kike leaves any other expressions you try to emulate, look even more blank and hideous. Nice to see that ruptured silicone bag underneath her left tit starting to cancer nicely, though. Oh, that the wind tunnel pedals are a nice touch.
Thank you for being a great example for beginners here so they too, can say to themselves, I don't want to draw like this asshole. No amount of speckled highlights will save your tragic art "style". Sucks to be you.

>>6532104
Did you really draw a word bubble leading us to believe that her pussy talks? Are you fucking stupid?

>>6533945
>>6533954
Holy seethe
>>6533866
Now that's a critique

>>6533945
Jesus fucking christ the amount of seethe, chill out nigger. But anyway, as a former stripper who's been to many clubs I can say with 100% certainty that the floor is glowing and those "shadows" are actually just support beams.

>>6533966
>REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
That's all I read,don't give him any attention
He doesn't draw

>>6533954
Made me do a nose exhale

>>6533963
>>6533966
>>6533970
>>6533972
>You will never be a real artist

You will not derail this thread again.
Ignore him bros,post your works

>>6533945
based based based

>>6533954
>Did you really draw a word bubble leading us to believe that her pussy talks?
it worked in prison school

>>6534375
Hide him,he's a troll

>>6534375
Yeah, using dumb Japanese comics are going to change my mind on how traditional comic book lettering should be used. If you use this crap as reference material on how your comics should look like, you deserve to be called out.

>>6534987
Pyw or provide a redline

A commission that I have just finished.
By the way, what do you guys think of the colors I used in the comic? I'm running a dual-boot setup with Windows 10 and Mint. I recently realized that each operating system has a different monitor calibration, so I really don't know how good this image looks. Is it low in saturation, or the opposite? Is it too dark or too bright? I don't have a monitor calibrator so I will have to recalibrate each OS by eye.

>>6535258
It looks okay

>>6534995
If this artist knew how to draw, let alone attempt to add letter type to their work, I don't have to go out of MY way to provide a red line like I'm holding their hand. We're here to point out mistakes with critiques, it's up to the artist to fix their problems. This isn't kindergarten.
>>6535258
>First panel, top left
Long ass raptor neck and goiter on the guy, ear too far back for turning his head like that, cheekbone looks like a scar. Crab hand, TINY forearm. Chick looks like Cantinflas, look him up, even with her lazy dead right eyeball.
>Second panel, top right
Same problem with guy. Now has a thick neck for some reason, ear congealing into back of skull. Eyes too close together. Disorienting panel concept, reposition. Tiny head on lesbian with black hair.
>Wedding shot
Are trees growing down into the core of the earth? Can't tell if cherry blossoms or pink clouds. Guy's nose impaling her left eye. Learn to draw kissing better.
>Wedding night
For FUCK's sake, learn how to draw sex correctly. Go grab a hooker and fuck her in her pee hole, see if she likes that, exactly how you portrayed it. Tit suspended in limbo with no gravity weight to it, why? Is she kissing his face, or the goiter in his neck?
>After sex
Did she just MAGICALLY become pregnant in the next panel? Learn story pacing. And fix her claw hand. Guy still looks dumb, but at least you're consistent with that.
>Next three panels
Okay, so now we INSTANTLY should know, that they love rock? Kid looks retarded, is that his first Fisher Price Guitar? Who are the High Speed Addicts and why should the reader care who they are now at THIS point of the storyboard? And at the concert, why are there HELICOPTERS spotlighting that stage?! Is that a faggot colored raid? And the last panel is how readers SHOULD feel after all this; tired of being fucked in the ass for having sat through all this. Calibrating your monitors is THE LEAST of your problems. Oh, and by the way, nice feet and hand flippers.

>>6535354
tl;dr? Here's your participation trophy. And learn to draw.

>>6535354
You don't draw.

>>6535366
I can draw better with my words and my critiques more than you can, nigger.

>>6535277
Thanks, I still have to recalibrate my monitor, which is always a headache.
>>6535277
I'm not going to lie, I'm not happy with the comic, so I'm not surprised by your harsh criticism. In fact, I have nothing to say about the first three panels. I'm not particularly happy with none of them, but I wanted to finish this commission fast. Also, I admit that I suck at drawing people kissing. I need to work on that.
>Wedding night
Well, fuck, I didn't realize the guy was fucking the girl's pee hole. I must be more careful the next time I attempt a complex pose.
>After sex
I didn't want the comic to be that long, but I guess you're right that it gives the feeling that the girl magically got a pregnant belly from one panel to the next.
>Next three panels
This comics is a sequel to another commission about these character and their love for rock. That previous comic shows who both bands are.
Anyway, thank you anon. I'll take some time to work on those anatomy problems you mentioned.

>>6535372
Still proves my point

>>6535389
Glad I could help. Harsh criticism often wakes one up from the lull of morons giving ass pats around here instead of providing honest critiques that come across like I'm hurting your fee fee's, but I'm really not. Now that you know what needs to be changed, you'll be more conscious about the choices you'll make in your work, making for a better commission in the long run. Kudos for taking that critique like an artist ready to learn.
>>6535407
>this is you >>6533995
>You will never be a real artist
>YWNBAW

>>6535469
This is you
Rent free schizo

>>6535389
>>6535389
Glad that you handled the critique well,but don't listen to this idiot next time
He derailed this thread earlier and he doesn't draw
>>6531173 is his work,traced shit

>>6535354
You tried so hard to shit on him and yet 95% of your criticism is wrong. That’s sad.

>>6535475
>>6535477
>>6535480
And here come the troons to derail the thread. Funny how you groomers always pop up with absolutely nothing to contribute, no critiques whatsoever. Just like your lives, empty husks, barely able to draw their profile pictures. Cope and seethe, troons, cope, and seethe. :)

>>6535487
You are the only one trying to derail this shit again,prepare your buns fren

>>6535475
>>6535477
>>6535480
>you will never be a real artist
:)

>>6535491
Critiques troon, we're here to give critiques.

>>6535499

>>6535477
I rarely get criticism, so I jumped at the chance. Obviating his attempt to throw shit at me, much of what he said made some sense. The only thing I disagreed with him on was his criticism of the background of the concert panel. Anyway, the guy is obviously looking for attention.
By the way, how much do you think it would be reasonable to charge for my comic? I've been reevaluating my prices, but I don't know how much I can raise them.

>>6535529
Well,how much did you charged for this?
What I can say beforehand is making comics is a tiring task and it takes more time and effort than a drawing comm

>>6535531
>>6535531
I have to agree with you that drawing a comic consumes more time and effort than I like to invest in a single piece. The worst thing is that the vast majority of people are interested in that kind of commissions.
I feel like I'll regret saying this but... I charged $50 for the comic. I know I'm not a professional artist, but I also know that a comic like that should worth more. I guess I'm just stupid. I started out charging $45 per drawing, regardless of the complexity of the scene, and somehow ended up doing six- to nine-panel comics for the same price.

>>6535548
What I know about this type of comms is most of the times,artists charge the comic per page
The price per se isn't bad,but it can be a little higher(60 onwards I guess)
Pratice will increase the value
Also,check the /mmg/ to better info and more
>>6524203

>>6535548
Well,I hope that helps you
I'm no expert on this comm type
And it's worth noting that some the price can vary depending on detail(Only pencil,ink,flat color) but this is a topic of it's own

>>6536259
YAHOO!! bing bing bing

>>6536313
some funky lookin boobs you got there.

Top leading NSFW artists from 4chan that are still active? I think Ortamaw died along with the others.

>>6537535
Doesn't BBCchan still post here

you fuckers got some recommendations of simple cartoon characters i can draw??

>>6537840
Cuphead characters

>>6537840
You got a tight little man pussy on ya, don'chya?

>>6537659
nobody wants to fuck a dude this ugly anon

>>6525089
Can I get some feedback before I start with lineart?

>>6538255
Is this your cleaned up sketch?

>>6538264
Yes. I still need to fix the face and add details to the hair tho

>>6538271
Draw the rest of the feet and hands and fix the rest before inking

can I post now

>>6525378
every fucking time i see this its getting worse
not in the sense of quality of the drawing, but more in what it depicts
congratz man

>>6538277
This one is very nice,but try to draw a full body next time anon

>>6538277
Blog? Would like to see more. To improve it Would probably introduce more gaps and adjust the hair to flow more along an "S" rhythm, but still looks good as it is.

>>6538308
I got a twitter with a lot of sketch work on it.
https://twitter.com/jwakkawa

Any tips on how to make a following?

>>6538352
Frequency is the main key

>>6538352
Draw what you like, niche you like, tag your stuff properly, use popular characters you like too, use multiple art sites, encourage commenting and interaction

>>6538381
how do you tag things on twitter? I don't see anyone using hashtags ever

>>6538352
Don't be lazy if you want use trends bdrawing character before the trends happen if possible.

>>6538352
post consistently both in terms of time and theme
I've been really dragging my heels, I post inconsistently, fetish art here, then light pinups, then sfw, it's all over the place. I don't reply to artshare tags, I don't join in on trends, and very rarely post popular characters, mostly it's all commission work.
after two years I'm just over 500 followers. it's relatively tiny but somehow I still get commission requests, nowhere near enough to make this a viable living but I'm surprised I get any at all, even when I go months without posting a comm sheet. i'd be lying if I said I'm happy with this, but I'm too undecisive to really try to change my ways.
anyway, shortly before/after I joined, there have been accounts with 10 or 100 times that because they do, basically, the exact opposite of what I described there, and/or have a very unique thing about their art style. like that fucking guy posting some comfy landscape sketches done in MS paint. or they're actually pretty mediocre, but keep posting fanart, and got retweeted by a big account who took a fancy to them and felt like making them their charity case. it's a moonshot, I wouldn't chase it.
from /ic/ anons there's 1340Smile who went balls deep into drawing chronoblade or whatever the fuck anime girls and blew up, cranihum who posts here sometimes went balls deep into goblins/shortstacks and blew up, reloadedhb has solid fundies and makes full on comics of popular characters, hayabusart makes huge tidded shortstack ladies... and that's about all the examples I can 'survivor-ship-bias' pick out of an arbitrary group of people on a basket-weaving forum, because truth be told there are also a lot of people ticking all the "how to suck the algo-cock" checkboxes and still can't catch a popularity wave to build up their following.
i don't know why I wrote this it's overall pretty useless. you could look it up on twitter, people have written guides about it, and made videos about it.

>>6525089
what do you all think?

>>6538665
Cute, is this a sketch or finished drawing?The lines are hairy af

>>6538669
I don't do lines for now

>>6538681
So it's finished?

>>6538698
yeah

>>6538701
>comm.png
and it's a commissioned work? how much did they pay?

>>6538701
You really need to improve your line quality and put more effort into details

>>6538704
12 pounds sterling

Doodle

I wanna make a efforted drawing but idk which position would be interesting to see,eh

>>6538713
sound

>>6535258
I think the colors look bright and fun, but I would avoid the airbrush.

>>6538338
crazy, I remember you from the facebook days lol

i need to work on my vagines, this one looks so boring

>>6538338
Can't get over how much she looks like Bride of Chucky...

>>6538280
hey if it's just the content and not the art then i'm getting better lol

>>6538352
>>6538381
>>6538449
>>6538457
>>6538632
just hack into a popular person's account and steal their followers.

>that feeling when all of these guys follow me. and i'm still stuck at 100 followers.

Ignore all the shit advice like being consistent. it means shit if nobodies looking at it anyways.

finally finished this, still dont know how to shade water

>>6539185
This is awesome anon, loved the colors

>>6539216
Thanks anon! I'm pretty happy with how it turned out overall, but the ocean still looks kinda weird

>>6539227
Yeah it's kinda weird,but you're in the right direction
Used references or nah?

>>6539185
Water is a bitch, and while maybe you didn't do it perfectly (I can't judge), you did manage to make the foreground water separate from the background. There is depth to the pic and that goes a long way.

>>6539235
Thanks, I think it looks ok if u don't pay attention to it for too long lol. As for refs, I just google imaged "anime beach" and had the tab open on my second monitor

>>6539237
That actually means a lot lol thank you,

>>6539239
As the other anon said,water is indeed a bitch. The more you draw it, more it gets easier

>>6538449
#wrestling, #catfight, #ryona are my most common ones. Whenever I use more specific ones like #cuntbusting, #wedgie, #character'sname or #nameofthegame/anime accounts specified to the niche or fandom pick me up.

>>6539430
give that WOMAN some fucking tits you stupid FAGGOT
>b-but testament is not a wo-
some fucking TITS

>>6539431
sorry to make you soft, but i did make him a faggot <:')

>>6539430
>>6539431
>>6539432
why are ALL guilty gear fans obsessed with gender

>>6539432
>him
based
I like both the old design and the new one tho
Fuck,I just love Guilty Gear in general

>>6539430
>>6539431
>>6539432
>>6539435
>>6539436
where the boob thoe

>>6539435
I particularly not obsessed,but it's weird that nothing of that truly mattered until Strive for some reason

>>6539436
me too, it makes me feel so nostalgic~
I also love both of his designs. but im a sucker for femboys so im just giving testament the estrogen beam for my cum jar :9
but ill pretend on social media that i made him nonbinary.. <_<

>>6539442
i think its odd too. for instance, justice is a woman, but nobody bats an eye at that even though she has a giant blue fucking dick on all the time but go off i guess

>>6539446
It was a weird armor design choice...But still works well with her

>>6531173
That would be one of my shitposting works, not whoever you're appointing it to.

You trannies really miss me that much, eh?

>>6526868
>getting this schizo over a low boob shot
kys subhuman nigger, eat shit and die, you can literally force koi characters into any pose and claim it's traced.

>>6539435
Them gender fluid mfs

>>6539185
can't trace the water too anon?
lol

>>6539549
you cant throw off your scent if you fucking tried kek

I need to find a way to inject more personality in the face

>>6539925
You're smearing shit all over yourself and telling others they stink.
Typical child grooming discord tranny.

Not that you're literate and mentally stable enough to understand any of this.

I am trying to draw coom of a cookie girl but i am really struggling to define form on the head, especially the hair. The ref is bottom of the pic and its flat clip art stylized so I am struggling to replicate in the way i draw
Current head feels very flat, boring, and maybe mis-proporatate?
Anyone have suggestions? Any good ref for straight long like im trying to do with the backlight thing im goin for?

>>6540446
former cookie run fan here :) ( or maybe i still am? )
in the canon universe, their heads are literally flat. in comparison, yours is very round, like a ball.

https://youtu.be/iojm62dJoAY
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=esd4x45AY0s


However, i think that would look very odd for this piece if you went with the canon head shape. It depends on what you want to do. Why not just make her look more human-- and if you really don't want to, you could either choose to start a new piece with a new pose to show off that she is still a cookie, or find some other way to portray that.

this one is tough, because you imply you want her to look like the canon art style, but then the actual art style of the game makes the 3D versions of these characters have a literally completely flat head.

>>6540458
I really wish I didnt try to do a pose like this with a flat headed character lol. Should have just done a face forward working pose
but I think I will either clean it more and call it done, or restart. Ill see my morale tomorrow
>Why not just make her look more human
i tried this and having her look less like a cookie and more like a orange Hawaiian girl didnt really work

>>6540154
First of all I'd fix the lower face. Her body is slimmer and more elongated than a real person's yet the face is oddly short, and it looks like her chin is missing.

As for personality, I take it you meant expressions. Eyes (especially eyelids), brows and mouth all need to be considered; I suck at putting thoughts into words so hopefully my examples can give you some ideas.

Oh and I forgot to fix her necklines; currently they make her head look displaced, like it's protruding in an unnatural way. Either move the neck a bit to the left (from your view) or move the head a bit to the right.

>>6525089
An artist I follow posted this 2d blowjob animation and it made me realize I hadn't seen Flash porn in a long while. I remember whacking it to Zone tentacle flashes years ago, and then Minus8's stuff, except neither of them make things anymore. Is Flash animation a dying art? I really like the aesthetic.

don't make me tap the sign