/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6472812
I find this very charming
>>6472752
finish it!
>>6472618
very nice work!

>>6472824
thanks!

>>6472752
To summarize I think you're working with a poor reference of a woman who's had a lot of plastic surgery.
You won't get a drawing that looks right using her as reference.
The pose is also a little too symmetrical to translate into a good drawing.
You should also avoid those unconfident lines when doing lineart. Practice drawing clean lines in a single stroke.
Hope this helps.

Forgot to mention you should also study line weight.
Lines closer to the light source or further from the viewer should be thinner and vice versa.

>>6472997
>Post on /ic/ once
>Immediately part of a forced pasta

>>6473011
you unironically gave good advice and he never applied any of it.

>>6472997
>tries to be smug with pasta
>doesn't realize he's replying to bait
Grow a brain, please.

>>6473100
>Heeheehoohoo You didn't realize I was only pretending to be retarded

>>6472997
Where can I find more guides like this?

>>6473133
Post some prebeg shit with 0 effort then don't respond to anyone. You will be inundated with high effort advice.

Wish I knew these recourses existed

>>6473181
Ok
https://tinypic.host/i/weF4i

Drew a goblin

Midner
>>6473243
BASED

Never tried anything NSFW before. Any crit helps!

>>6472598
>>6472618
>>6472752
>>6472812
>>6472824
>>6472836
>>6472997
>>6473243
>>6473297
>>6473300
i think you should all quit drawing porn. it doesn't lead to a fulfilling life. and you're not improving.

>>6473341
In my defense my drawing is barely pornographic.

>>6473349
>>6472812
yeah, this one is cute. but come back when you've made a name for yourself.
>>6473348
i am not impressed

>>6473341
O-Oh.. *sniffle*
>>6473377
Thanks but not me bud!!

>>6472824
Thank you!!

>>6472598
>female-anatomy-for-artist.com/
this site seems like it would be useful if over half the pics weren't broken for some reason

I keep havinga problem where I have a hot idea one day, I get really horny thinking about it, am inspired to draw it so that I have coomer material to wank it to, but then when I get done with all of the planning, it's no longer sexy anymore. I lose interest in what made it hot in the first place.

I wanted to make tentacle porn of my OC, but then as soon as I actually sat down and got references for poses, I was gradually turned off. Now I am not motivated, and the idea of tentacle porn has been kinda soured for me now when it used to turn me on. What is happening and how do i prevent this cycle?

>>6474342
Post the completed work that you thought of and I'll be able to answer your question

>>6474343
That's the thing, I didn't actually get started because I got too turned off to find it appealing enough to start it anymore.

>>6474351
i always do thumbnails of the characters pose before i even try looking for references.
get your frantic horny energy down on paper

blackpill me on vorefags

>>6474472
I'm ignorant to 'pill' slang because I only linger on ic. Do you mean convince you to hate it or to convince you to like it?

>>6474475
“Spill the tea on”

>>6474342
You don't need motivation to draw, you need discipline.
>>6474351
Yeah, you are just lazy.

>>6474588

Laziness in what way?

I'm pretty good at getting myself to draw. I'm not excellent, because I have much more going on in my life than just art. I don't always draw coom material, and most of my drawings are non pornographic, inside of a sketchbook. Above all, art is not my main passion in life right now. But that doesn't mean I don't discipline myself to do it.

My problem is more so about... finding complete indifference or even disgust at the smut ideas I had. It's frustrating. I want to be able to jerk off to my art, and then I get bored of it before I even started. Well, I did manage to sketch some ideas of my previous idea, yet i still feel like moving on. It is so boring to me now.This problem happens a lot when it comes to drawing porn.

>>6474810
pyw, this all sounds like prebeg tier talk

>>6474819
Okay, I'll get some pictures to make a small compilation, just for you dear anon. But for what reason?

>>6474810
>I want to be able to jerk off to my art
Why? What's the purpose?

Getting bored of a subject on which you spend a lot of time is just normal.
Getting aroused by one's own art is a sign of low IQ.

>>6474828
I'm sure you're aware of what you're writing is PRE pre-beg tier talk, thats more then enough reason to want to see your work

>>6474819

Most of the time I draw a lot of my ideas on my sketchbook first. No eraser, just getting the ideas out and then starting again when it wasn't what I had in mind.

The previous idea that I no longer feel passionate about is in dark grey. I decided to sketch these out digitally this time. The value study with the monster and compositions thing was something I did to better understand the monster I wanted my OC to be fucked by, then I drew the gestural drawings.

>>6474850
Because I'm not good at visualizing things, but I want smut content of my OCs that I can jerk off to instead of just pornhub vids.

>>6474870
Your stuff looks fine, so literally just draw. If you don't want to draw then don't, if you never want to draw then unironically go and prompt

>>6474907
>You're lazy, just draw
>you sound like a pre-beg
>pyw
*posts work*
>stop drawing and use ai

?????????????????

>>6473340
Being nitpicky here, but the feet here look a little botched. If you want something to idly improve on, maybe start there.

>>6474810
that only happens to me sometimes. sometimes I'll finish the piece and fap to it, hell i've fapped to my lineart before. but yes there are pieces I would make where I get turned off by them.

>>6474996
to add onto this, when I was way newer and I was drawing NSFW as a noob, i would almost never get turned on by my work.

>>6474996
>>6475001

Well I'm glad to know I'm not alone, i just wish there was something to do about it. I guess the best thing I can do is to just keep drawing. That and having a muse of some sort, because when i feel obligated to finish something for a friend or my significant other I finish it even if I don't like it that much

>>6474864
how's it fetus tier?

>>6474870
ngmi. the reason you can't get off to it is because you draw troglodyte fags.

>>6475018
>Well I'm glad to know I'm not alone, i just wish there was something to do about it.
Try a lobotomy maybe?
What of "Being turned on by your own art is a sing of low IQ" you don't understand?

going with something fairly simple since I'm animating it.
It will be a headache

>>6475273
interesting how are you going to animate it, guessing by the render cutout/mesh?

>>6475278
not sure what the question is exactly, but yes every part that is to be in motion is on a separate layer and you use a mesh for said layer/object

>>6472598
Does this look aligned proportioned “perspectived” correctly?

>>6475273
The teeth look really terrible.

>>6475273
her boobs aren't that big

>>6475303
thanks, I'll try to correct them!
>>6475306
don't care
go read the manga

>>6475254
pyw

>>6475254
don't try to reason with roasties
she thinks its gay to have straight sex because she thinks shes a man

>>6475299
yeah this is what I meant ( or at least tried to). where I see many people failing animating by mesh is:
1. only using linear interpolation, so lack of weight
2. using the same images/parts in for the whole
cycle, this limit the expressiveness and force of action.

If you are interested try doing this for the tits and pussy lips have 3 distinct images (idle, pushing max position and pulling min position) use the idle for the most part of the animation and in the finishing the movement of pull/push change the image (and possibly also the mesh and vertexes)

t. old opentoonz dev and helped a few people with this kind of animation

Actually this is why I'm learning to draw

>>6475318
yes I know, I've thought about doing it for the pussy lips. But as you know, it is a lot of work, so that's why people don't do it a lot

>attempt something nsfw with this character
>ends up being cutesy sfw
>attempt something nsfw with this character again
>ends up being cutesy sfw
>attempt something nsfw with this character yet again
>picrel
I give up.

>>6475273
Please save yourself the effort and don't polish this turd by animating it. The face looks absolutely retarded and the breasts look like bolt-ons. Also what the fuck is going on with the vagina? I'm guessing you did not use any reference because the placement and anatomy is just wrong.

>>6475405
pyw

>>6475412
would you take a redline instead?

>>6475394
Moles are gross

>>6475444
Not him but I want to see your take on it, yes

>>6475405
yeah I've considered not proceeding, so I agree with you...I don't think it looks good to be honest.
this >>6475412wasn't me btw lol

>>6475464
this anon is a fucking liar please do not pay attention to them.

>>6475522
Thought that was you, sorry man. Still made this for shits and giggles though.
>>6475412
>>6475468
Quick but here you go

>>6475553
This is in painting AI/digital work...

>>6475556
>>6475273

Correction "img2img inpainting"

>>6475556
>>6475558
cope

>>6474850
>>6474864
>>6475254
>>6475306
>>6475310
>>6475315
>>6475405
>>6475412
>>6475464

>>6475558
Holy shit, you just gave me an idea to get visual feedback on styles I'm interested in

>>6475556
You are retarded.

>>6475553
both faces look horrible

>>6475599
pyw

>>6475394
Were you the guy asking for NSFW composition ideas in the stupid question thread? If so I think this is a pretty nice result given your limitations

>>6475464
No, you just have poor tastes.
>>6475551
Dont worry kek. I wonder, though, why are moles and freckles so disputed around here? I can see some people just not being into them, I just dont see how they are appaling to some others, at least when it comes to art.
I guess this cutie is the pinnacle of ugliness because she has both freckles and mole...
>>6475624
>Were you the guy asking for NSFW composition ideas in the stupid question thread?
Keeek, that was indeed me, this board sure is small.
>If so I think this is a pretty nice result given your limitations
Thanks! While I was kind of beating myself for covering her tits when that wasnt the initial point, I also believe this was a bit of progress, at least her tits are somewhat visible...
I think I will embrace the fact that this is as hard as I can go with her and work with it, rather than forcefully double down.

>>6475299
What software do you use to animate something like this?

>>6475563
I will not be silenced.
All moles will be terminated.
>>6475394

Objective Complete

>>6475693
>>6475691
Based

>>6475691
>>6475693
Me sides with your autism keeek. Nice clean edit btw.
>He got rid of the freckles too
Now she is a generic blonde moeblob nooooooo

>>6475394
How is this sfw, if I shown this to my boss he'd give a promotion

>>6475751
>How is this sfw
Assuming you meant "nsfw"... Good question, anon, that's the whole point of my struggle with this gal. I've been trying to do something kinky with her under specific circumstances (respect her canon "childish innocence" persona and making something meaningful instead of just girl sitting in the void being lewd). Main problem is that Im constantly reducing the kink to zero without noticing, only realizing it when it's too late to do changes.
>if I shown this to my boss he'd give a promotion
And Im going to take that as a compliment, thank you very much

How the fuck you gonna explain drawing porn?

>>6476079
When my drawings are at a level where I'm getting somewhat of an income I will happily stare someone straight in their eyes when I tell them I draw big boob anime girls for anons to wack it to. And i WILL stare them in the eyes until they look away

>>6475691
>>6475693
This enforces my belief that all namefags have some sort of autism.

>>6475923
not him but I think we're misusing sfw... there's full blown nudity even if there isn't a futa cock or a dude giving her a creampie. I think you meant "softcore" vs "hardcore".

>>6476093
this but with soft lolis instead

>>6476079
No one has to know. I haven't told anyone in 4 years. I just tell 'em I draw.

This anon>>6476093 is right. If I was making 3000+$ a month I would tell people

referenced my own body; i feel like michelangelo slappin boobs on a man

>in b4 "you're not a woman"

yeah uhh as much as i like the idea of being able to dress in next to nothing (admit it slutty is comfortable) everything else about being a girl sucks.

>>6476766
>eferenced my own body;
you will never be a woman.

>>6476766
Why did you make this post
Why did you feel compelled to post this
You suck at drawing AND youre a faggot
Dont ever post this crap again

>>6476780
WTF how?

>>6476780
>>6476781

thats all you got ? seriously try harder

nu/ic/ is tame shit

>>6476766
No wonder you can't draw a nice female form.
You don't just have bad taste, you also sabotage yourself with useless refs.

>>6476766
fucking KEK.

>>6476766
This is literally the average /salt/ poster. Never forget that

>>6476766
Dude I can see your penis through the pantyhose
Fucking gross

>>6476766
Bro why put in so much effort in refs to draw them so unfinished?

>>6476766
based

Been posting some of these characters in the "Simple Artstyles" thread over at /aco/, but apparently isn't very appealing, what could I be doing wrong? Is it the style? Anatomy? General appearance? Or is it just life and one should suck it up?

>>6475300
no.

>>6477060
you just need to keep practicing your sense of design and anatomy anon, it's all experience. For this pic I can certainly say the character designs don't help at all, the stub hands and legs aren't very attractive from an outside perspective.

That and trad smut that isn't AAA quality always tends to look a bit amateurish and offputting.

>>6477060
Ugly redline, but bear with me...
I think you're on a good direction, but like anon said here >>6477308, you have to polish your art style and design. What I can add is that you try to do more curvy proportions, replace the tube limbs with more defined curves, specially for the women. Also, draw the hands, even without fingers, but dont leave it so basic. Lastly, and a very important detail, is that you rework your faces and head shape, the eyes look great, but the mouths really do some damage, specially on the woman, as for the head shape, try to not make it a full circle.

Sorry if this is too disorganized to be of any help, but I really like what you did here despite the elements to improve, they are appealing and hot as hell if done correctly, so keep pushing, anon!
Also, you got more of these?

>>6477060
Is that spirit science porn?
Wait are you the guy who drew Thomas the tank anthro porn a while back

>>6477260
Ok what’s wrong with it?

>>6476766
This might be the worst post I've ever seen on this site, and I've been here a very long time. You may as well have just posted gore or something else as that would have not been anywhere near as offensive.

Also your drawings literally looks like a faggot in a dress

>>6477669
Pretty good, but I hate the faces. They're both staring into the void with almost the exact same smirk, plus the girl has no lips. Their very stylized compared to the rather detailed bodies as well.
The hair is also pretty crap. These 90's ass spiky haircuts done mediocrely.

Your anatomy is nice, though I wonder if you're not overdoing it. The muscle definition is so pronounced that it almost looks like they have no skin. I remember going way too ham on muscle definition for a while after I learned muscle anatomy, is the same happening to you?

>>6477793
the hair is going off how they're drawn in the manga, but for the muscles those are just there in the sketch to provide guides for where to put the lighter lines i use when i'm putting down the finishing lines, not every part of that will be there in the final pic

>>6477800
Fair enough. I dunno what manga this is, but the hair in that picture has far thinner, flowier strands.

>>6477804
oh no, that second picture is my own OC, the 2 in the first pic are from my hero academia

>>6476766
When they say "use yourself as reference," I don't think anybody meant this. Just use a 3D model my man.

>>6472752
this is becoming the new merc_wip

>>6477308
>>6477324
Thank you all very much for the input! The main reason for the straight lines was to make them closer to the stickman/pictogram design, but given the option, I do prefer drawing them with more curves and actual hands instead of stubs. For the character's mouths, I was trying to make them more expressive with more lines and not draw them like every other manga/anime mouth, but I guess simpler is better. As for the coloring, I admit I'm very inexperienced with trad techniques, that's mostly because I don't have a lot of time to scan my drawings and color them when I'm at home from work, maybe I should draw them smaller to avoid the obvious pencil markings? (Or maybe do the obvious and read/watch a tutorial on it...).
I do have more of these that I posted in the thread:
>>6992477
>>6992903
>>6994061
>>6993986
Again, thank you all for the input, I will work on incorporating them into future drawings.

>>6477331
I don't know what "spirit science" is and yes, it was me who was experimenting with that subject.

>>6477857
Forgot how to link posts from other threads...

>>6477857
not the guy you're responding to but spirit science is the name of a youtube channel run by a new age kook who uses animated characters in a similar style to that to explain how water has memory, the moon is hollow, and jewish people came from space when atlantis was created

>>6477872
Never heard of this subject until today, but I can see how my works can be confused with his.

Haven’t drawn in a few days but it feels good to be drawing again. Crits would be greatly appreciated since the last thread really helped a lot. :)

>>6477886
Use outlines or don't use outlines, pick one. You're symbol drawing for the face. The mouth is at a different angle from the rest of her facial features, because you copied a cool mouth you saw/stored in your brain. The pose is awkward, I'm curious if you used a poor reference.
Your shading is a big issue, but that's a long story. Could you make a quick drawing of a simple ball on a flat surface with one light source?

>>6477669
Something about your works anon are ugly, technically and proportions etc are all fine, but the art is jarring

>>6477800
did you also draw this one? This one doesn't have that issue so I'm not sure what it is

>>6477892
Thanks for the time, anon. Well the posture is awkward because the character is lifting something heavy which I didn’t include here.

When you say outline, you mean it can’t be mixed?

Thank you for the tips, I’ll try and correct them.

>>6477892
Also I’ll give the ball drawing a shot. I’m not at home at the moment.

>>6477937
>When you say outline, you mean it can’t be mixed?
Can, yes. Should? Probably not.

>Also I’ll give the ball drawing a shot. I’m not at home at the moment.
Good, don't look up a tutorial for it, I wanna see how you fare on your own first.

>>6477937
>>6477940
If you’re dead set on painting and having an outline, I’d suggest painting in the edges. Basically you want to paint over the lines such that you’re blending them in with the figure but you still maintain the nice crispness of the edge.

Probably too old to start drawing but meh. This is my first attempt at shading

>>6478118
To you as well, try painting an accurately shaded ball on a flat surface with a single light source.

>>6477793
Sadly, he never really takes the advice given on here. He's been on here for 3 years and only pretends to take advice and then reverts back to the same art style he had 3 years ago.

I know because I tried to help him and he took my advice and then quickly ditched it. I think he just likes the occasional insults.

How many (You)s would this be worth?

>>6472752
Shit
>>6472812
Shit
>>6472824
Shit
>>6473243
Shit
>>6475273
Shit
>>6477060
Liquid feces
>>6477669
>This faggot again
Learn to draw an appealing face, Jesus Christ these are hideous
>>6477886
Liquid feces
>>6478567
Shit

>>6472013
not sure if the soft shading is working for my style, really dunno what to go for. painterly or cell shaded, something in between, ideally but need to find artists with that kinda look so give me some recs if you've got 'em
but I gotta move on so just gonna finish it and post it. I'll add some freckles and moles (sorry anon) paint the nails (you're welcome anon) and I think it'll need a background. any crits could help

>>6477800
>>6477669
Oh I've seen your art before outside 4chan. Nice to see you here and I'm glad you are working on improving.

On the subject of the hair - you can think of it like ribbons that start from specific points and flow outwards from there. I noticed in your other drawing near the start of the thread you seem to draw it as an outline - try using the ribbon method, or doing it "chunks".

For the bodies, you may need to examine the shoulder area a bit more. The delts feel rather small for how ripped they are and that's probably what's throwing people off.

Specifically for the one I replied to - the male character's arm that's closer to the camera looks smaller than the one that's farther. There's also some issue with the lines of his torso where everything is straight horizontal in line, which reduces dynamicism and can draw attention to the areas you may not want.

The facial expressions look mostly fine to me, that seems like a stylistic deliberate choice. And I do think the girl's boobs are hanging mostly properly.

Keep it up, semi-hyper dicks and muscular characters is a good niche.

>>6478767
PYW

>>6477932
i did also draw that second one, i got no answer as to what you find wrong with the first tho
>>6478855
usually the part where it's drawn as an outline is towards the end of the sketch refining process, which is when i usually post stuff here, tho there's usually still interior details, it's just that midnights' hair is all black so i didn't put any in there, also thanks for pointing out dekus' arm, i didn't notice how thin i'd made the front arm compared to the back, should be an easy fix now that i see it

>>6479132
You do a lot of things right but for some reason that I cant point I don't like your style at all it lays somewhere in between the uncanny valley.
>inb4 pyw
you line art is better than mine.

>>6479135
eh, personal taste is ephemeral and almost unquantifiable, not gonna hold it against someone if they can appreciate the work but can't vibe with the style, I got the same problem with JoJos' bizarre adventure, kept bouncing off the manga but finally got in with the anime

>>6478767
>Shit
Alright, I thought worse

>>6479132
Why do you draw knees like this? Have you ever seen a skeleton? Do you know what a knee kap is and how does a knee joint work?

>>6479289
>getting (You)s for specific areas
damn this guy is spoiled :(

>>6478822
just do a quick cell shading test, i reckon it would suit that style. Cell shading is so underrated in cartoony art styles. it gets the communicates form with the least amount of brush strokes, no need to get finnicky with the details and realistic lighting in a cartoon style is kind of overkill.
pluss saving you time to start more drawings, which is the point of the cartoony style anyway. imo save your rendering practice when you the goal is to study rendering and not focusing on character design/appeal

>>6478822
she's pretty cute

just do a quick cell shading test, i reckon it would suit that style. Cell shading is so underrated in cartoony art styles. it communicates form with the least amount of brush strokes, no need to get finnicky with the details and semi-realistic lighting in a cartoon style is kind of overkill.
plus saving you time to start more drawings, which is the point of the cartoony style anyway. imo save your rendering practice when the goal is to study rendering and not focusing on character design/appeal

>>6473243
I love it. Would like to see you improve the rendering and surfaces a bit but that's personal taste I suppose. Details like freckles maybe, skin texture, rim lights, colors bouncing off and subtly reflected onto skin and materials.
Aside from that the angle is a bit stiff. Maybe experiment with dynamic angles and keep studying anatomy. The abdominal area, collarbones, hands, elbows need some work.
Other than that I love the weight of the boobs and the style in general. Keep going anon. Thumbs up.

>>6478767
Someone's seething hard... Post your art so we can make you feel good.

>>6479344
thank you anon I do think I at least made the face kinda cute. still playing around with it but I think this rendering suits my simple linework a bit better

>>6479756
>s-someone seething!
Stay mad, sorry I hit a nerve anon.

>>6479070
>>6479756
>PYW
No~ <3

>>6480225
Nah don't worry, I haven't shared my work on here, I just wanted to be kind to yours but it's a shame to see that you've got better things to do with your life than post your beautiful drawings here.

>>6476766
Best post on ic, made me laugh and respect your autistic dedication.

I only got as far as doing flats on this one. Didn't finish it since the rendering process I was planning for or the lack thereof held me back at the time, also felt too ambitious.

>>6480772
blog please she is very cute

>>6478767
you ok man

>>6480772
cute
>>6480158
cute yor, you should make her nails shine like you did for the skin

>>6480772
Nice lineart and style.
From an anatomical point of view, you rotated her mid section too little compared to where her breasts are poiting.
You also broke her wrist. It's way too bent.

>>6476766
based, is like as old renaissance masters lol

>>6480812
Thanks, I haven't posted this one on my account nor I post much. But hopefully I'll try putting out more work this year.

Here's where I put out the stuff I'm most confident on showing to the public
https://twitter.com/Jopes88

>>6480823
Thank you
>>6481033
Thanks for the feedback. I noticed the hand as well while working on it which also played the part on me giving up on it completely.

>>6479571
I appreciate the feedback, thank you!

>>6479035

>>6480229
Then stop wasting your time posting. No one is going to take anything you say seriously if you are an even bigger beglet than the people you are mocking.

How good is my coomer fetish porn that is the first hentai image I made

A couple of studies from today

maybe someone can fap to it

>>6482322
keep body proportions in check.
there are a few rules that can help you stay consistent.
- distance from top of head to hips = distance from hips to heels
- tip of fingers of extended arms besides body reach about half thigh, elbows rest at navel height
- extended hand is almost as long as forearm
- vertically lifted arm - elbow reaches top of the head
- etc...

>>6482387
2003?

>>6482388
thanks for the crit!
I was going for stylistically long legs. But I suppose if your first reaction to the pose was ‘those legs are too long’ then I didn’t pull it off convincingly.

>>6482397
it's a joke, i gave her 2000s look (old ass phone, thong, tribal tatoo)

>>6482407
I see. I think you just overdid it a bit. To me it looks more like the upper body is just smaller than the lower part. Like you shrunk it down, or vice versa.
Hero proportions can be appealing and all, just try to be more subtle I guess.

>>6482425
Thanks for the advice. I’ll keep it in mind.
I’m thinking maybe I’d need to push the shapes in the torso more if I wanna sell the legs as they are now.

>>6479035
banned/10

>>6472598
She looks like some gangly gollum creature? How do I Do I do a better job of having her tits hang over the counter, also how would her head connect on this? I can’t really find too many references in this pose

Wow auto correct really fucked up my little sentence

is drawing shit like this still relevant?

Can someone tell me if my porn is fappable? And if not, how to make it fappable?
It's difficult for me to tell because I'm used to drawing joke shitpost porn, I don't have a dick to tell me if I'm doing something right, and visuals don't do much for me compared to the psychological/situational aspect.

I'm not too concerned with the anatomy or the technical side, since I know from experience that isn't everything.

>>6482926
this is my favorite thing in the thread

>>6483084
It’s really creepy. I think less dialogue is better

>>6483114
Is the cropped version any better? I personally like squicky shit but maybe I'm just not good at porn dialogue lol

>>6483084
yaoi hand cock looks terrible, the dude generally looks distractingly unpleasant to me.
the girl is cute tho, fingers a bit pointy but that's just a style thing

>>6483119
No it looks okish the line art is a little too refined and it’s not rendered great considering the sharp lines, soft rendering seems like an odd choice for the style. I just think you should let your picture speak without dialogue

Inside her mouth

>>6483084
It's a little too cartoony for my tastes, but if it isn't a commission then it only matters if you find it hot.

>>6483124
>hands
They're (technically) Samurai Jack characters, the hands are sort of like that, but maybe that's a cope IDK

>>6483151
AHH ok that makes sense

>>6483084
I love it.
That dick blends in and is hard to read though, maybe change the color of the girl's underwear.

abandoned drawing

>>6472752
Why does this keep getting posted?

>>6480917
Pretty good for AI

Any problems on anatomy here?

>>6483473
Why aren't you acknowledging this post >>6479289 ?

>>6483473
Why aren't you acknowledging this post >>6479289 ?

Also, pecs aren't this long. Line-weight wise this is one of your best artworks so far, but you should really rethink some of your stylistic/autistic """choices""" when it comes to anatomy.

>>6482388
blog pls

>>6476896
Always has been.

>>6483631
Kind of hot ngl

>>6483631
>tfw no skullfuck gf

>>6483631
Why there are sudenly so many gurofags on the board?

>>6483771
bro that drawing is barely "guro"

>>6483617
i legit didn't see that, i draw knees like that cause knees have that wierd thing where they look like a baby face and i've seen several artists use that as a simplification, as for Skips' pecs, would you show me how you'd change it? cause yeah they look a bit long now that i'm not fully zoomed in and lining the pic

>>6483119
i like the dialog ngl but I'm also into stuff like that

>>6480158

ten points to gryffindor

no but really this is gewd

>>6483771
logical conclusion of exposure to increasingly fucked up hentai

>>6484990
>>6483771
Porn is like a drug, once you become addicted you need more and more degenerate shit to bring about the dopamine.

>>6484833
Please how the fuck do I draw this section?

>>6485000
active porn user since 2004 and still like the same porn from back then (but newer porn is shit though), I never understood this fallacy. then again I have used many drugs and never got hooked to any of them I guess I'm addictionproof.

>>6485985
He’s only been watching porn for 19 years

>>6486014
yes anon that's how time works

>>6486063
How are say you’re not addicted while watching porn for 20 years almost

>>6486120
define addiction, you use that word loosely.

>>6486131
Repeated behavior out of compulsion or habit that cannot be stopped without making major life adjustments or external intervention

>>6486166
yeap addiction free then

>>6486187
>19 years
>I can stop whenever man

>>6486190
ok you sure know me pretty well, throw me some cash for therapy e0a4cf40145e4030b7504bb423a50a35

>>6486192
Get a job

done, software engineer, whats next?

>>6484859
looks like she’s melting

>>6486195
Quit porn

>>6486212
no, interference with my life, work or family, should I quit music and art? I spend way more time on those than porn.

>>6485000
>>6484990
I completely agree with you guys, based on my own experiences and how quitting helped get myself back on track with my goals and shit, but this isn't the place.

>>6482832
>>6485954
I think I’ve fixed a lot of the mistakes does this look ok?

>>6486246
I like this a lot anon, theres not enough size material out. Do continue with yours

>been drawing for 10+ years
>major artblock hits for some fucking reason
>my sketches are literally beg tier
>can't get proportions right
>eyes are misaligned everytime

I'm even too embarrassed to post what I've been working on. I think something is wrong with my head. Truly.
I used to just wing it and a nice pose with good flow would come out, finishing a pinup in 3 hours. This comic page I was working on took me 3 days to finish because I kept having to fix the anatomy. FUUUUUCK
what do? am I tired? I don't feel burned out at all. I just can't draw

>>6486875
Did you draw that pepe?
If so your line work looks not great to be honest. Did you practice fundamentals at all? You should not be drawing lots of little lines to form a solid line ten years in. No offense. Why not post what you've been working on? How will you improve otherwise

>>6486875
Nevermind just noticed the website and got the joke. It's crazy how bad someone can be while charging money for lessons

>>6486917
>>6486915
yeah not mine lol.
I was reading on it, and I has to do with being depressed, which I was last week, but I feel fine now.

For now I've been filling up page with scribbly heads, see what happens. The one on the right marked with *was from imagination, I like how that one came out.

> Why not post what you've been working on? How will you improve otherwise
because this is not me,as in, I usually don't suck this much. I don't need to post it so other anon's tell it's dogshit when i know full well it's terrible.It's a waste of time for all

>>6486990
You've got great work and your recent drawings here have shown a lot of improvement, and you're already good to begin with. I think if you're doing a lot of commission work and 0 personal stuff, drawing is now almost purely associated with work and doing something for someone else. Also if you don't do studies of other artists it can feel very samey to always draw the same kind of faces, bodies, without variation or the novelty of studying how someone else does it. so if you're sitting down to draw and that's the mindset you're in it's hard to put down your best work

do some studies of other artists, even 20 minutes a pop, focus on their linework, proportions, rendering, composition, whatever you like about it and post here

do you have a 'why' to your nsfw work? do you want to eventually live off it, or is it just a hobby?

>>6472598
xth for hung femboy trad smut

>>6487262
What the fuck did i just see?

>>6476766
Hahaha
The absolute level of troon

>>6482144
Kurimina de merda

>>6487288
my /d/eviancy :3

>>6476766
Is this what goes on inside these threads?

>>6487319
yes let's focus on one unique post and act like the entire thread is like that instead of giving the other progress/wips/actual work/discussion (You)s yes very good, here is your reply sir many upboats to you

>>6476766
>tfw too masculine to even resemble a woman
you will never know this feel troon, just 42%yourself

>>6486422
Thanks glad to hear nothing major stands out. It was a redrawing attempt of real bad pic a drew early last year.

>>6472598
trying to learn how to stylize faces by studying some artists I think are good

>>6476766
did you use a reference for the booba?

>>6487587
did you study the hair as well or just the faces

>>6487596
yeah, but hair is hard

>>6487609
you're doing a good job with your studies anon

>>6480823
>>6484867
thank you anons, just gonna call it done at this point and move on it doesn't look too shabby

sorry if this is better off on /beg/ or somewhere. I usually start with a rough layer and then try to redraw on new layers with cleaner lines and build on it, but I feel like I lose whatever appeal was there, even besides line variation. Today I tried just constantly refining the same rough sketch layer and I enjoyed the process and outcome more.
Would I be better off embracing this and learning from artists with a similar process, or should I be trying to condition myself to work with thinner lines and build line confidence? It sort of feels like a crutch.

>>6472598
suggestion how to improve pose?

>>6486875
Dude, go through Scott robertsons book. It’s absolute torture but just do it. Combo it with moderndayjames YouTube series “how to be a gi” and just understand perspective. Do it for a month.

>>6487871
lack of volume, breast and abdomen feel super flat, use shading to create depth.

>>6487714
lots of character I like, not a huge fan of the shoulders but theres story here nice.

>>6473300
Learn anime

>>6487757
>woman
boring
draw more young nude men pls

Here's a question for you all, who would you name your top three lewd artists, and optionally, why? Is there any specific work or single image that makes you say that?

>>6473243

Got a blog or something cause I'd love to see more of your works.

>>6488014
Please, never post on the internet again until you cure your autism.
Thanks.

Friends oc genderbended. I'm very unhappy with the rendering, can someone share sources on how to render better?

>>6487006
thanks bro.
yeah I might be overdoing stuff, I'm doing comms and a doujinshi.
>do some studies of other artists
that's really great advice, thanks a lot!
>do you have a 'why' to your nsfw work? do you want to eventually live off it, or is it just a hobby?
No not really. I'm not into porn at all, but I do need the money. I'm fine with erotic stuff, like pinup of girls with big tits. I now live of of it since it started paying the same(sometimes better) than a wage cuck 9/5 in my country. My goal would be to improve skill wise so that I could transition to SFW comics(independent oc).

Kinda sexualized?
I want to go through some old stuff and remake it for NSFW.
It’s challenging but fun.
Learning a lot but any crit is appreciated.

>>6488603
This was original

>>6487918
thank you anon I've been trying to make my work a bit more interesting rather than just "nude woman standing there", do you think the shoulders are a bit too defined?

>>6488813
I just find them too rigid/straight for the gesture you are going for. As for definition I'm a sucker for well defined traps so for me they are under developed.

>>6488222
yes your shapes arent adding depth/volume go study an artist that does celshading well it will help you

>>6488603
whats the story, what are you going after? it reminds me of lewd monsters from silent hill 2 but way too cartoony (face and hands).

>>6488886
Character from MTG
Just lewd version

>>6488886
But also taking the previous drawing and making a Lewd version but just better in general I guess.
>>6488608
Previous time I tried to draw her

>>6488907
>>6488891
yeap thats a tough wank for me if I were talented I would probably emphasis the hips and play around with the drapery or accessories that helmet thing looks like good substitution for love handles... from my search tappy toe claws did the best interpretation with lewd potential

>>6488883
shit, that's one of those where I didn't see it til it was pointed out, she looks all tense ;_; noted for next time

>>6488951
you are doing great anon, I value more the story than those little details. I think you will benefit from vilppu (asymmetry), stanchfield (T overlaping) or bridgman (wedge, stretch and twist)

>>6487589

no i just drew em in

>>6487450
dyel

>>6487319
yes

>>6487334
bitter

>>6489558
Don't listen to them anon I do the same

>had some work to do in the city mall
>look around stores while I had some time
>see a women underwear store
>had some beautiful lingeries at exhibit
>urge to draw them awakens as the sucker for lingerie that I am
>hesistant to pull out my phone and take a pic for reference
>I may be taken for a pervert for looking at lingerie
>I may be taken for a fag for looking at lingerie
>end up taking a few pictures from afar the store in a very poorly dissimulated fashion
Ever gone through something like this, /salt/?
One out of three.

>>6489120
Holy shit this is beautiful! You used a reference? Amazing job!

>>6490425
cute style

>6476766
Thank fucking god i don't deal with any of you discord trannies outside of this board

>>6491026
Stop wasting bandwith with useless posts. Do you have autism or something?

gremlin

>>6487450
Hahaha funny how it was 41% before

>>6491560
hot

wip wip wip wip. something's off about the eyes. and hands
>>6491560
you're getting better and better, specially with your rendering
>>6490425
very cute style, I don't draw lingerie enough. there's plenty of lingerie reference online though, don't get yourself into mischief
>>6489558
using yourself as reference is great, I'd just wear underwear though for clearer view of the anatomy. finish these and post em, and watch that chicken-scratch
>>6489536
inspiring construction as ever, maybe it's the foreshortening but the arms and shoulder look a bit small for that big chest
>>6489120
pretty!

First time actually drawing coom, Not sure how to render it though.
I have been considering creating an NSFW twitter mostly for fun, how should I go about it?

>>6482483
Using the redline as ref try making the head a little bigger and the torso a little shorter. Not smaller, just shorter.

>>6477932
It's the disgusting faces.

>>6491697
Love your piece and mass replies.
For the eyes I would make them a little bit bigger and maybe they look off to you because of the glasses that look a par from the eye as an iris.
With the hands I cant help since I also tend to struggle with them.
>>6492060
Looks good but I think the feet are a little bit off

What am I doing wrong?

>>6492110
yeah I suck at drawing feet, but thanks!

>>6492128
I think the blue skirt and the black girl are pretty good, I get a feel you overrender, maybe try painting with a solid brush first then move on to a soft one to shade? Dont focus too much on the tiny little folds and details, try to get the proportions of you ref right.

>>6492134
Thx for feedback.

>>6492152
You're welcome, dont skip on sketching before rendering and you should be good to go, keep going and you'll be surprised how much better you've gotten. Gospeed anon

>>6487714
she looks very cute and hot. Still bothers me how the strap of her dress is hanging on for dear life lol

>>6492128
>What am I doing wrong?
complicating. biggest issue is that some of the shadows look grayish, this dirty. Some of those shadows are higher in saturation( also warmer). The color of the shadow is a combination of the color of the light source+ color of the object. read James Gurney
Try to render it with only two colors.

>>6491560
cool concept. But you haven't really improved over the last months

>>6489536
good construction. The heel of he boot looks off.You can fix that.

>>6492338
>draws niggers
>draws kikes
>draws sandniggers
>draws guro capeshit
sorry if i don't take your "critiques" seriously after looking you up

>>6492338
After a certain point the gains get much slower , I've made small noticeable improvements but it's not as big of a leap compared to last year
It is what it is, I'm enjoying it now until I wanna push it, then I'll do studies

>>6476766
so... fvcking... zased...

>>6492516
Critique? He's just networking.
Don't you want to like and subscribe to him because he praised you?

>>6492516
>>6493041
jesus christ this thread is so fucking shit. I don't know why but in /salt/ especially there's an over commitment to the "anti hugboxing" mentality that just results in the most unpleasant and least productive crabs on the board, and that's saying something.

>>6493041
>praised you
a literal who yeah no thanks
>>6493057
your feelings don't matter snowflake

>>6493097
pyw

>>6493057
Sorry mate, but i still won't like and subscribe to you.
Don't try to call it anti-hugboxing, because shallow "critique" sugarcoated with hollow praise with own work posted only gives off the intention of wanting attention.

If one wants the attention, likes and subscribers, at least they should put some real effort into giving anons some real critique instead of some praise and some vague advice.

Take my post as an example; i could very well just call you a retard and keep patting myself on the back, but i am taking my time to actually point out the problem and explain so that you and anyone else might benefit or learn from it.

>>6493101
im not jiragora, people like you just shit up the thread for no reason.

>>6493102
niggers like jiragora shit up the thread with their garbage praise and advice
don't kid yourself

>>6493106
posting work and critique is infinitely more valuable than your bitching and shitty attitude

>>6493102
>people like you
We're playing this game?
People like you should gtfo my board since you only want attention for yourselves and don't give a shit about art while only bringing down the overall quality of the board.

This will be my last reply in this matter.

>>6493109
yeah, posting sandniggers from a literal nobody is where i want my advice to come from
>ywnbaw by the way

>>6492338
I like the work on the left thigh very squishy

>>6493110
>your board
you don't even draw
>>6493113
gb2 /pol/ retard

>>6493116
>you don't even draw
Don't make me post my work in a general, monkey.

>>6493118
pyw

>>6493116
>troon detected
gb2 being a guy...oh wait, you can't
kek

>>6493118
You never will
>>6493120
gb2 drawing.. oh wait, you don't kek

>>6493133
i can always learn to draw
you can't grow back your dick tho
sad

>>6493147
>i can always learn to draw
yeah
you won't though

>>6493133
here you go
i drew you a dick so you don't feel bad

>>6493159
needs loomis

>>6493160

>>6492341
simple and effective, some lines like around the ribcage or under the abs being a little scratchy/wobbly look out of place, and I'm not sure the airbrushing is suited for this linework, try studying pro artists who do the hard-edged cell-shading. and study how they draw and render nipples, little beads can look "realistic" but not "idealistic" so making them look plump and soft is the usual way to make them sexy. careful with the hair highlights and strands looking a bit overcrowded and hard to read

>>6492338
very impressive! you're showing off the rendering chops there. i'd venture into studying the anatomy for the lower body in general, from other artists specifically who have interesting shapes and contrast of the round v tight contours of the stomach, hips, etc. also besides your starfire and southern girl works which have appealing expressions there's a lot of placid or barely smiling faces which have their place in some contexts, but for others some 'slutty eyes', smirks and head tilts can add a lot of nuance
I can't help but wonder if the background would be so dark if her and the wall are so brightly lit but that's minor.

>>6492128
these are great studies, you've got great hue variance in places, a lot of forms look great, I think they need some confident hard vs soft edges in areas, better brush economy to avoid the muddy look and loosening up a bit and working on shape appeal (for shadows, highlights, etc) rather than making them exactly like the reference. maybe where you're going "wrong" is only doing studies from photos rather than from other artists work as well, and that would help with everything I've mentioned. you've trained your observational skills quite well and it shows, now show us you can be less "realistic" but way more appealing (unless you're only going for realism)

>>6492110
cute, simple, now challenge yourself with gradually more interesting poses and do lots of hand studies, they really get more intuitive with practice

Would like some advice about her back and hips pls. Thx

>>6493210
ask for hand and face

>>6476766
New Op image?

>>6493210
dimples should be at a sharper angle

>>6493213
>>6493232
I did some changes. Thanks for the help

Reject modernity

There aren't that many apple body types that cross between regular hooman and shortstack. But I'm giving it a go

Character's that I'm working on, any feed back is super welcome!

I would ask you to pyw in order for me to never reply to your posts ever again since you are so unhappy about my crits, but two anons already did that and you didn't do shit cus your not man enough.What a coward lol

>>6492516
>>6493106
>>6493097
>>6493101
>>6493097


>>6493177
thanks anon! I'm not very happy with this one but I had to get it done because it was a commission. it is what it is. Your crits are spot on and It's something I'm aware of. Definitely tackling those two things in the future! Stomachs are very hard imo

How do I draw a bowl of cum with just fine liners? I want to show that is a tick liquid without using a pencil.

>>6494560
my feedback is to treat them nicely

>>6494783
Less is more. Do a negative space effect but with white being dominant rather than black

>>6494866
Thanks for the tip, senpai.

>>6494560
I'm afraid

>>6472598
well, looks like I'm drawing coom again. I tried copying this character fromn a baal buddy drawing. crits/redline needed. Thanks fellow coomers

>>6494252

>>6494560
That's my fetish. God. Blog??

>>6494836
Why would I do something awful like that?

>>6495372
._. be afraid

>>6495543
ofc uwu https://twitter.com/SilicaSnax

new bread

>>6495624
>>6495624
>>6495624