/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

redpill me on vorefags

>>6435776
God I want to fuck that gilf

How do I increase accuracy with drawing from eye

>>6435864
use an actual drawing program to make these squars. I just used paint to illustrate the concept

>>6435864
source?

>>6436443
Mypawgwifepics or yoursandmyhotwife on tumblr I can't remember one of those for sure though
You need to turn off the safety filter to view her account though

I don't draw enough hands but fuck it here's my espresso fueled sketch.
>>6436413
you made me wanna draw shiny nipples

>>6436616
fuck forgot to resize to 1k

>>6436413
I love everything about this, anon, especially your line work. The best part for me is the feet though, not even in a footfag way, I just love the way you simplified and constructed them. They remind me of the Sword in the Stone hands, but for feet.
>>6435272
Uh huh. Well, the reason I ask is because it's weird that you don't know how to answer my question about the armpit. It doesn't matter if it's 4 lines or not, you can represent forms with few lines. As for "what I'm trying to achieve" it should be pretty obvious - representing the coracobrachialis, axilary fossa, deltoids, teres major, and latissimus in a pleasing and somewhat accurate way. That's what I'm asking about. You bring up reference - the armpit is in shadow in the reference so it's largely invented, and anyway if it was that obvious in the reference I wouldn't really need to ask, I could just copy what I see. Calling something "low effort" because it's a block in is pretty weird, if I posted a fully rendered piece that had issues at the fundamental stage people would just shit on me that I polished a turd. That's WHY you ask for feedback in the early stages. If you know what you're talking about, show me your work and I'll eat my words but I hope you at least understand why I'm skeptical of this response. Not even trying to be a dick but you came off pretty aggressive for no reason.
>>6435854
Thanks! I should draw more of her sometime.

>>6436620
think her ear might be a bit far forward

>>6436413
I love everything about this, anon, especially your line work. The best part for me is the feet though, not even in a fetish way, I just love the way you simplified and constructed them. They remind me of the Sword in the Stone hands, but for feet.
>>6435272
Uh huh. Well, the reason I ask is because it's weird that you don't know how to answer my question about the armpit. It doesn't matter if it's 4 lines or not, you can represent forms with few lines. As for "what I'm trying to achieve" it should be pretty obvious - representing the coracobrachialis, axillary fossa, deltoids, teres major, and latissimus in a pleasing and somewhat accurate way. That's what I'm asking about. You bring up reference - the armpit is in shadow in the reference so it's largely invented, and anyway if it was that obvious in the reference I wouldn't really need to ask, I could just copy what I see. Calling something "low effort" because it's a block in is pretty weird, if I posted a fully rendered piece that had issues at the fundamental stage people would just shit on me that I polished a turd. That's WHY you ask for feedback in the early stages. If you know what you're talking about, show me your work and I'll eat my words but I hope you at least understand why I'm skeptical of this response. Not even trying to be a dick. And as for the greyscale to color study, I was just looking for anything glaringly wrong with it or some pointers from people more familiar with the workflow.
>>6435854
Thanks! I should draw more of her sometime.

>>6436875
So hecking true and valid...

>>6435797
All the ones that claim not to be snuff fags are lying to themselves

>>6436893
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>>6435797
One of the most impressive pieces of art I've ever seen is that enormous Sansa with a hugely distended belly, anyone know what I'm talking about? That guy must be king of the vore enjoyers, not a world I'm a part of but it was some seriously impressive rendering.

>>6435776

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Merry Christmas!

>>6437390
Nice filename.

>>6437531
merry christmas crani, it's been inspiring watching you get better and growing your niche. cute poppy and deliciously rendered tiddies
>>6436978
cute kobeni. the expression looks a little off but I guess that's on-model for that weurdi, nice legs

>>6437621
weirdo*
merry fuggin crimbmas you salty dogs

>>6437531
Merry Christmas to u too

I want to do a pic where she’s tying her hair up and her tits are floating in water. Does this look ok? I’m not using a ref for this one

Here's hoping somebody will retweet me for Christmas. Gah fuck! I already know the answer.

>>6438309
Hey drop your @

>>6435776
never posted in these threads before, but here i go. Ive spent too long looking at this drawing so im a bit blind to its flaws right now so id like some general feedback/ thoughts.

>>6437621
yeah I kind of thought the mouth/eyes might be a bit too big, I’m pretty happy with how the rest looked so I just let it slide hehe, thank you!

Trying to draw a thick woman tied upside down by her feet. But for the parts that sag (besides the breasts and hair) I can't find a good reference. I don't know what parts would sag or how they'd look. Any pointers?

It’s slow going but posting this here has definitely motivated me to keep drawing.

>>6435776
Is drawing coom better than consoom coom?
Im already a coomer but i don't want to mess up my life completely. Is there any benefit in drawing it instead of watching it?

>>6439701
Former coomer-turned-prodoocer here. Upside is if there isn’t any coom that I am in the mood for I can just draw and coom to it.

Ok I've taken in the feedback from last thread, and improved the lineart. But looking at it, it still feels "off", the reference is in the last thread for anyone that cares. Where should it go from here?

>>6439973
Looks really nice but with extreme perspective like that you probably want to have a hierarchy in your linework or rendering to draw focus, if you squint and look at the thumbnail it's very hard to tell what's going on. I think the forms are on point, just a few tweaks to your composition would really make it pop. Very nice work

>>6435776
That's the first time somebody asked me to do an Art Nouveu NSFW drawing

>>6440004
I'm trying to improve line weight and make sure to up the values in next piece so that it reads better from thumbnail and in general pops more. Thank you for the feedback.

>>6435776
I started to draw again because of salt. What thing should I praktice first? pic related.

>>6437531
I know you've been trying to move away from them but I do think all your work that has more visible outlining is better than the purely painted edge stuff.

>>6435776

>>6440146
Hands and faces

>>6440090
This is ridiculously good and I hope you're charging an arm and a leg for commissions

How do you deal with getting the shape for super long hair? Pic related is supposed to be asuna ichinose from blue archive, this is my second time drawing her and as soon as it gets to the hair I completely lose the shape and it goes to shit

>>6440914
damn it sucked that bad huh

Any critique on this piece?

>>6441018
Forgot to say that I mostly asking about the booba

>>6440819
This is good but aesthetically unpleasant

>>6440914
Hair dosent have a shape, it follows gravity and it conforms to the shapes around it. It follows the form of the body

>>6441030
thats rather deep anon, I'm a 3 month BEG and I think I'm 'ok' at drawing body shape, but it all falls apart as soon as it gets to the face and especially the hair, could I ask you to slap some very rough lines on my image to show what you mean? As of now it still eludes me even though its the one thing I'm focusing on

>>6439701
Former coomer here. I started drawing because there wasn't enough of my fetish. I don't masturbate to my art but it makes me hot. I've only become more hateful towards other people's work. Where before I didn't care.

>mfw pondering if I really should buy Loomis+Gurney books (70€) after having paid 60€ for a big titty hooker to drain my nut.

Midna at the beach
What will happen next?

sorry if it seems like I'm chilling my "product" on here. That's not my intention lol
just sharing my stuff

>>6441173
What specifically are you wanting to garner from those two books and I'll tell you if it will be worth it. I have every book on my shelf. They aren't solutions, merely approachable resources when needed. You likely won't read either cover to cover unless you have nothing better to do. I read the gurney one's cover to cover because I had alot of down time working at a feed store like 6 years ago. I got no time to read loomis cover to cover and really no interest in doing so for now.

>>6441179
god imagine blasting her with gallons of cum right in front of the whole beach

Here's a piece I gave up on in August. Sharing cause now it just makes me laugh. I will never go back to it.

>>6441222
>What specifically are you wanting to garner from those two books
nothing in particular! like you said they are great resources to have and I think it's very beneficial to have them and study from them regularly. I've read Gurney's book too, years ago, but much like loomis, I only had the pdf's, which I don't think enable me to study as often. I've been drawing for 10 years and keep coming back to loomis

>>6441244
What is your next immediate art goal? One thing. Specifically.

>>6440300
Yeah, I learned lines generally have more sexual appeal for some reason
Ive started to just add them back in a bit and it helps

>>6441253
>>6440300
Perhaps I should refrain that
Lines do add sexual appeal, but you need like 1000x more skill to sell pure painting better what rendered linedrawings do I find
Im not good enough where my painting skills can weight themselves so heavily it can do the job that a simple line can do yet
Maybe in 1-2 years I'll figure it out. For now I'll cope and do rendered linedrawing style stuff

Anyways im trying animation again, I forgot how tedious this is after you figure everything out

Here's some progress on this piece. Original is like 8k so here's a resize. I feel like working on something else today.

>>6441249
>What is your next immediate art goal?
to be able to do a serialized comic and make 2k€ per month. I'm kind of halfway there.

technique wise,just getting good overall, I don't think I'm terrible at anything atm, just need to improve on all fronts
the shoulder/neck area is hard for me

I took a break, I had too many external pressures, and now I am trying to get back into it after a few weeks. I'm struggling to finish anything, but that was normal even before then. How should I start setting goals? I don't know what I need to be doing anymore.

>>6441342
sounds like your next goal is to work on some studies that will force you to familiarize yourself with the shoulder/neck area. The serialized comic plus 2k goal is not an immediate goal. Work on what you claimed was your weak spot and then find the next immediate goal. Neither of those books are necessary for this.

>>6441344
set a goal for today. Not the end of the month. Decide someting to attempt today and attempt it. Whatever that happens to be. Keep it small and simple if need be, don't overwhelm yourself and then end up with nothing.

Drawing lewds is so fun... I haven't been that passionate about drawing in a pretty long time

Tried to work faster than usual to finish this before it got too far past Christmas, but I rushed too much. I have zero idea what I'm doing with faces still to try and make them appealing, and everything gets worse when I move away from my usual subject (shortstacks).

>>6441694
Find 9 artists who do appealing faces and do studies of them

Where do you guy's get commissions. nobody retweets me so i'm out of luck. /aco/ commissions doesn't exist anymore.

>>6435797
Dom in it's most extreme form.

The NSFW survival guide for those who need it.
>1 be a female
>2 don't draw futa shit.
>3 don't draw fan-art until late game
>4 draw creampies and cumshots.
>5 draw 1 good penis or vagina and heart censor the rest.
>6 don't join shitty discords with immature artists.
>7 reply back to every comment.
>8 don't beg for retweets and don't reply back to other artists.
>9 not a tip but if you yourself wouldn't masturbate to it neither will anybody else.
Get better.

>>6442883
Why no futa just curious, also more tips pls

>>6442012
The /aco/ discord server and whichever other nsfw-friendly servers you can find. Nowadays about a third of my comms are returning customers, the rest find me through posting on commission sheet channels or twitter (through my massive 500 strong following). Some also see me tagged on dA and ask me about comms. >>6442883
Why not draw fan art early?

>>6443093
Cause that's fag shit bro. Why do you want to see a dick on a female so badly?

>>6443093
>>6443100
>why no futa.
From my observations many futa artist have very low patreon supporters. It's only popular with Americans eventhough Japan introduced it. Cunny is more "sharable"
>why no early fanart
Most of these tips are meant for Twitter. If you have fanart post it on a different website. At the start you need at-least 10 pictures to show that you are an established artist. Then gradually move into fanart.

>last tip
Censor your artwork. Websites do not want to promote NSFW. You need to trick the algorithm into boosting your sfw and censored artwork. Many NSFW accounts are instantly deboosted. Another viable option is to draw vtuber leads or fate grand order. The average Joe does not search the tags. But there are bots for specific tags that will boost your vtuber art ect.

>>6443199
Misspelt "lewds"

>>6442883
Hello Smurf thank you once again for your very fappable Fairy Tail drawings

>>6443199
thx mate

>>6442883
Shut the fuck up your Fr*nch

>>6442883
>draw a giant right hand claw with a tiny pen tip left hand.
>don't forget to draw a GIANT left foot disproportionate to the right foot that should have been bigger thanks to proportion
yeah, I'm going to take your advice seriously
kek

>>6438036
Decided to go with a different pose, I’m moving on to rendering but want to ask if anything looks like it needs corrections. As usual ignore the size stuff I know it’s not most peoples thing

>>6442883
Fanart gets like 10x the engagement of OCs. No one cares about your OCs unless you're already big enough.

>>6439854
To summarize I think you're working with a poor reference of a woman who's had a lot of plastic surgery.
You won't get a drawing that looks right using her as reference.
The pose is also a little too symmetrical to translate into a good drawing.
You should also avoid those unconfident lines when doing lineart. Practice drawing clean lines in a single stroke.
Hope this helps.

Forgot to mention you should also study line weight.
Lines closer to the light source or further from the viewer should be thinner and vice versa.

>>6443803
Very based. It's a shame this is wasted on beglets like the one you are trying to help. They are way too inexperienced to understand these concepts.

>>6443911
What do you have to bring people down like that

>>6443759
Pose looks really stiff, honestly. A bit of a hip jutting out there and chest puffing out here and some head tilt will do wonders.

You can do it! I believe in you, anon.

>>6444028
I'll try to play around with making her more dynamic. Thanks for the help anon!

>>6443803
High effort post king

>>6443803
nice waste try hard, but did it ever occur to you that maybe that anon was trying to draw a plastic bimbo? that's why he used that reference specifically, your infograph is just making them look stupid
think next time before you go to all that trouble, dumb ass

>>6444036
kek on that reply pic

>>6443803
Thats an incredibly detailed post, not that anon but thanks for that. 3 Month beg here and I've taken in so much from you anons already.

Pic related I have a question if anyone would be so kind
Since I've started drawing I've been using my own H-game char as my reference, she has closer to 'super model' proportions, and currently I've got 'OK' at drawing her in most poses with only slight angling off etc,
Am I actively harming my learning by using her as my reference?

I tried using regular people as my reference earlier on, but quickly started getting revolted by staring at 3D, regardless how autistic that sounds.

If its really actively hurting my drawing I could look around for a set I'm not repulsed by, then buy that and try, but so far I've done many on her and would prefer to if its not stunting my growth

>>6443759
Just saw this was size content, keep up it up anon. Do you have a twt? I would follow as size and ntr material is my pure interest

today i drew fat fucking ass

>>6444657
2B? 凄い

>>6443803
Kind of a stupid question, but what font is this?

>>6444685
Comic sans

>>6443940
Oh, stop whining like a little bitch. Get thicker skin and try to understand that calling somebody a beginner is just a description, not a derogative. Everyone was a beginner at some point.

This guy in particular is way too inexperienced to be able to apply what that anon pointed out. He needs tons of practice in the first place.

>>6444128
Nta. No matter the subject of bimbo or not, that is OBJECTIVELY a very bad reference. The posing and photography completely flattens the forms, which makes it even harder for a complete beginner to do proper 3d construction and add depth to the drawing.

Hi lads I starting to learning how to render skin, I'm still getting a feel of big strokes, hard soft edges and shapes. This are 2 tries one week apart I'm happy with the results but I don't like how musy/smudgy it looks.

1. Any tips critic, trash me

2. I'm following the steps of bgalaxy https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/9016 (Bishojo Irasuto no Riaru na Hada) theres a layer thats called 3d feel basically a layer on addition mode quoting my translation: "Apply a thin layer of low saturation orange to the areas where you want to create a 3D effect" I understand every word but I don't fully grasp what this does, I saw a on a different translation the word emission, is this trying to recreate light bouncing towards POV?

on image are the layers and colors I used.

>>6444277
>Am I actively harming my learning by using her as my reference?
Sadly, you are, since this and most 3D models have various limitations.

Muscles expand and contract in different ways from pose-to-pose that the doll isn't able to replicate here. Even AAA games have only just started to simulate stuff like this.
Since the model lacks detail you're also not seeing how the different muscles or bones might become more visible in certain poses.
(Even if you wouldn't always draw these details in a heavily stylized work it's still important to be aware of them.)
The lighting in this scene is also very soft, which works for making the model look good, but makes for a poor shading reference as the plane changes in the body aren't as clear.
Also due to rigging limitations the doll won't always contort correctly into certain poses.
By solely referencing this model you're also copying all anatomical mistakes done by the original artist.

As you don't have an accurate reference of the human body, your learning is also inaccurate.
I'd recommend grabbing a cheap professional reference pack from ArtStation, for example. I'm sure you should be able to find a model you like.

>>6444685
Anime Ace

>>6443803
somehow he'll come back to refute every point with "but I just like the..." or "that part seems fine to me" so well done, genuinely, for taking the time, but look through the past thread to see how much of a wastegash that fucker is. he'll learn eventually to grow out of his ways of petting the same sketch for 3 weeks on the trot and expecting everyone to enable it. happy new year!

>>6443803
This is great Will help me lots, composition is king

>>6444280
Thanks! I do but I’m gonna warn you there isn’t a lot of content and everything up to this image is basically dogshit. I really only use twitter to visually track my progress. Also most of it’s the green alien girl. But feel free to check it out, I’m hoping most of my pictures moving forward will continue to improve @coloranon00

>>6444732
You dumb nigger, it's a plastic bimbo, maybe that anon likes bimbos
you just found it easier to make that anon look stupid with all your crap "help' rather than say, hey, you wanna draw a bimbo, draw a bimbo
simple as

draw whatever the fuck you want and don't let any of these stupid fucks in this thread derail you from what you like to do

>>6445144
>hey, you wanna draw a bimbo, draw a bimbo
>simple as
s-so heckin based and upboated!!!

>>6445262
I can’t tell if this place has become more hostile in the past year.

>>6435776
Bro's..how do I stop being a coomer who's helplessly addicted to his own erotica/doujins?

I have plans for other non-erotic stories that I'd like to develop, however, I always end up falling back into the comfort of creating sexy stories and slow-cooking sexual tension between characters who predictably end up consumating their taboo fantasies in a frenzy of very graphic and intense sex scenes.

I know it may sound like I get high smelling my own farts but I dont consider my art anything special. It simply does it for me and I'm able to draw exactly what gets me off. Do any of you experience something similar? Its like getting cucked out of my willpower by my own weaknesses.

>>6445155
So then why the fuck would you share in here asking for input?
This kind of toxic positivity keeps people from improving and is an insidious and deceptive form of crabbing.

>>6444769
Thanks anon, this is very detailed. Anons in /beg/ said it was OK but I like your reasoning more. I can 'improve' the lighting as the lighting is quite indepth (game is VAM), but the muscles and such you described all makes sense, which is a bit sad

>By solely referencing this model you're also copying all anatomical mistakes done by the original artist.
hits hard

The notes on the image you put of not symbol drawing is great too, I wasn't even aware I was doing it until literally yesterday when I started to read the /beg/ guide. I've only been on /ic/ for a very short amount of time after wanting to see if the art communities were any good on here

thanks anon I'll look for a reference I find attractive even if its painful

>>6445144
I can tell your IQ isn't very high. Please stop posting if you can't provide any insightful help to anyone.

>>6440373
Nah, this one got me only $80. I used to earn $800 a month in February but then I won the lottery with war starting in my country + /aco/ commission thread closing in March, so now I barely find enough money to cover rent and food

>>6444765
Any critics, tips? I will be moving to abdomen or legs today

>>6446459
ah you're ukranian. A lot of artists there it seems, hope things look less grim in the future

>>6446459
Onlyfans is always an option

>>6441527
this is so good

>>6441179
Who could have seen this happen?

>>6445386
You’ve just become more of a little bitch.

>>6444924
Why are you still here?

>>6446816
Not him. But if I'm a male; Will women pay me to flash my big penis for them? And can I post my art there as a bonus? Sorry for asking. I'm new to this.

>>6447336
no but g*ys will

are there any serious courses that explain the fucked up anatomy of anime faces, i feel like i need to unlearn villpu here, also tips on my beg shading would be wellcome too

>>6447462
The best way to learn anime faces is to find ones you like and copy them, they're visual shorthand and they don't necessarily follow the rules of construction and perspective.

>>6443803
>>6444732
I was the guy who drew that so thanks for the tip, it's helpful to know that there is such a thing as a bad reference. I'll save your infographic and try to pick better references next time

Wanted to practice foreshortening, does this look ok?

>>6447770
What do you think? what would you change or are no happy about?

>>6447770
Use a perspective grid next time. Even if you have to draw it out loosely. It will help.

>>6447781
Maybe the shoulders could be narrower? But as far as foreshortening goes I think it seems ok, or at least ok enough I just wanted a fresh set of eyes to see if anything pops out. Or rather doesn’t. My eyes aren’t super discerning yet
>>6447797
Yes I’m going to, I thought I could get away with just using the ref. Does anything look weird or is it just over all not well executed?

>>6447814
mirror, rotate, etc the image to get a fresh look on your work.

Theres something I don't like about the chin/mouth i feel it doesnt fit

>>6447841
Thanks for the tip, I also agree I think just showing the crown of her head would make it seem more aligned with the downward position of her back

An acrylic painting i did of pornstar Simone Richards. She actually bought the original and I'm working on a new piece for her now. Pretty happy with this one.

>>6447957
Moving up in the world congrats. How much did you make off the first one?

Reminder that you need to have a lot of irl sex if you want to be a succesful nsfw artist

Sorry if I keep posting tiny updates, but it’s the only way I can keep myself working on this piece before I move on to the next one.

>>6448852
give her nail polish, NOW!

>>6447511
Based attitude. Grats.

Found this cartoon from an old Disney animator, thought you pervs would appreciate it.

>>6448900
What color?

>>6449104
Thick was popular even back then

>>6449121
black please

>>6449148
Thats... not thick. That's just a shapely slim woman. A person can have a nice ass without it being big.
Thick =/= hourglass figure

>>6449189
Here you go, anon. Black nail polish.

>>6435776
>>6436620
>>6440090
>>6447462
MILKERS
https://youtu.be/QyEgdtK3i4E

Went to rendering. I can’t seem to get the floppy hair right

>>6449985
Oops

>>6449806
god you're gross, stop putting dialogue in your shit

>>6449987
I think the hair will need to be rendered to create depth Bright on top dark elsewhere to make to pop

>>6449987
because is just a flat color, cel shade it; do the same to the feet it doesnt give a hint if she is flat on her feet or tippy toes.
Also use her shadow to put perspective on the pose not just plaster a color there.

would slap

>>6450036
You want me to add a psychical shadow underneath her? Yeah that makes sense, I’m sorry but I’m not sure what the first part of what you said means though

>>6450036
The shadow helped a lot thanks

>>6450055
>You want me to add a psychical shadow underneath her?
yes

the hair feels flat because its only one color try to shade it the same way for the whole body. use shading to convey form, another place that me be good to do that is around the ankles. remember shading = information

I need good scat pics but not too gross, just hot pics

>>6450222
Just draw a girl with a fat ass pooping idk it's not rocket science

>>6450222
Photo references or other drawings? You could just use pics of girls using dildos anally and use your imagination
This is also why I don't draw scat, incidentally. I don't want to have to spend time looking at reference pictures of dooky

>>6450222
Look up whipped cream enema. Sometimes the girls eat each others white shit.

>>6449389
Hot, i dont know what shes supposed to be licking but looking forward to when you finish it

>>6444769
Are you still around anon?

I've picked up a 3d reference set and have started doing gesture drawing with a real model, and I can definitely see the benefit in being able to see muscles.

However I feel I'm not getting enough "value" out of my practice, as with your example you drew very nice 3d shapes, whereas with mine I've drawn the outline but my the lines I place afterwards to indicate form are kind of aimless and I'm not really sure what to do.

I've watched some video guides and some of them purely just end with the outline, but I'm sure what you've showed would generate me much more growth over time

>>6450413
Not that anon but it looks like your symbol drawing and disguising it as box construction
Draw the body broken up into components first, then add the bumps and what not for the muscles.

>>6450433
thanks anon I will try that

>>6450433
something like this?

I've lost accuracy on the placement but I can improve that over time

>>6450506
start with a gesture your figures are coming too stiff.

>>6450407
Thanks, anon! It’s a part of an illustrated story I’m writing on Literotica. This one has an uppity protagonist end up in her version of hell experiencing a slow descent into madness.

>>6450524
I feel like a mouthbreathing 70 iq retard.

Is this what I'm after? It still looks so far off what the original anon recommended and I'm not sure how to indicate the 3d better

Pic related is mark brunets gesture drawing
from https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iELN7ZwrW6o&ab_channel=MarcBrunet

Would this not fall under symbol drawing from whats been told here?

>>6450693
Take it with a grain of salt but this is the general idea I think, gesture, landmarks and simple construction, constructive anatomy
I know this isn't particularly sexy looking but it's just to demonstrate the concept.

>>6450693
You're not esdeath, are you?

>>6450728
I dont know who that is, I'm a begfag that started ~3 months ago

>>6450708
what do you mean? in the picture he's drawn the shapes visible on the figure

>>6450730
Theres no cylinders, pelvis rhombus etc, and when he drew it to start with he didnt even include the circle inside of the chest either, whats the difference from that and this? >>6450413

>>6450733
that's construction vs shape drawing i think
one difference is that he's much better at measuring proportions, curves, and angles but idk how anon drew >>6450413

>>6450743
I drew that one as well, it was just from staring at the figure, I didn't use any construction lines or the like similar to how mark built his (although obviously its not as accurate as his). But the response I got was it was symbol drawing

>>6450748
try carefully watching that portion of the video and see which lines he draws first.
the big vertical curve sets the posture of the body, and another one sets the angle of the legs.
did you lay out your drawing with these big shapes first?
>>6450506
>>6450693
i'm by no means an expert but i think you could try focusing on two things first:
- drawing the major curves of the pose (e.g. gesture), most often this will be things like the spine curve, the angle of the hips and shoulders, the flow of the limbs
- drawing simple 3d forms like boxes and cylinders, being aware of which side is facing you and which side is facing away from you, then break the figure down into simple boxes and cylinders and try to give yourself a sense of which blocks are coming towards you or heading away, etc

>>6450756
thanks anon, ill do the major curves i didnt realise how he was following the first lines he set out. After watching it again once more I still don't see where he used any form of regular shapes however, almost everything he made was complex forms immediately to fit the pose

>>6450763
pick up a copy of Michael Hampton's book (I'm assuming you're 3 month beg poster)

>>6450766
yes its still me, I will look for it thanks, drawing these gestures many times and not understanding it is overwhelmingly frustrating me

>>6450763
there are some artists that draw with shape only but i think it's more likely that he's already internalized those 3d forms in a way that he can just output the outline accurately with minimal guidance
doing it explicitly will probably help you with your sense of space.

>>6450771
is it possible to force myself to learn to do it like him? or is it a result of just doing so many gestures

>>6450776
Not the anon you’re replying to, but, that comes with experience. The boxes and cylinders are just a stepping stone to help your brain visualize 3D shapes in 2D space before translating it into a drawing that conveys a 3D shape to your viewers.

>>6450779
thanks anon, I will obtain that experience then and continue until I get good. I was beyond confused why the shapes were the 'end' game when every good artist either omits or removes them as soon as the pose is actually used

>>6450784
You can do it, anon! Go get them gains!

>>6450800
thank you anon I will! The best size ntr material you've seen will be coming soon

>>6449908
You should really pracice posing arms and hands. These retarded zombie like poses relly ruin your pretty nice forms and lineart.

Finished
it's cover art for a story my friends working one which is why some of the background looks edited out

>>6450956
nail polish, NOW

>>6450956
Nice anon pure sexo would slap really hard. Shadows are your friends. Things to keep in mind in the future
what happens to a shadow if the object casting it is father away?
what happens to a legging/pantyhose if stretched?

but good work anon

>>6450970
natural french

WIP of Sakuya. What do you think of it ?

>>6450970
Yeah a missed opportunity
>>6451145
Thanks for the critique and recommendations. A lot of the shadows were guessed as I went a long so I'll probably have a more coherent plan on how to apply them for future images. Glad to hear my art's improving!

something about her eyes/expression makes her look dead inside

>>6451396
Fuck around with the highlights.

Let's say I'm a programmer that wants to work on an hentai dating sim focused mostly around breast expansion (and a few other fetishes artist willing).
Would I be able to find someone interested in helping here? I don't care about making any money out of this.

>>6451426
Do you have prior projects we can see?

>>6451434
This would be the first one of this kind.
But I have a really old mock up of a thing I was working on in the past that is somewhat related.

>>6450784
Hi anon, used one of the figures you posted as part of my figure drawing today. Then I broke it into more explicit box forms. When drawing the figure on the left, I’m thinking about the forms and also about the shapes on the figure in a hybrid sort of way.

I’ll also throw my hat into the giving you advice ring, feel free to take or leave it:
I question labelling >>6450413 this one here as ‘symbol drawing’. from what I can see you’ve attempted to reproduce the shapes as you see them on the figure, which is great! I think the other anon just correctly saw that your 3-dimensional understanding of the forms in the figure was lacking. So definitely take the advice given to you about breaking the figure into forms, practice your boxes etc. But, as far as I can see, doing studies faithfully reproducing the shapes you see on the figure will do you no harm.
Rather, symbol drawing is the subconscious refusal to draw the figure as you actually see it. And that’s something that’ll haunt you well outside of being a beg. Constantly catching myself symbol drawing, as well as in this study I did here.

>>6450946
You’re probably right. Maybe a bit of a crutch. I should probably get my ladies engaging with stuff to solve the issue. But I don’t think I’ll be able to stop wholesale. I think it’s pretty cute. Had an ex-gf who used to walk around with her arms like that and I still dream about her at least once a week.

>>6451466
>>6451426

Newgrounds has a section where you can put up personals asking to collab with artists for projects. You should check it out.

>>6451396
Turn the head away from the camera and the eyes towards it. Easy way to bring some life to a character.

How's Twitter nowadays for posting porn? Pixiv's going full liberal shit hole like tumblr. Any anons willing to help a fren out?

>>6452082
With some info, I mean. Forgot to mention that.

>>6452082
Twitter is fine if you have a few fans, but large artists will no retweet smaller artist. so endless suffering

>>6451426
send me your username. i need help programming something for my game

>>6452287
That's cool, I just want a few fans to enjoy my work and an alternative to pixiv, thanks for the info, fren. Have an Apu.

>>6451576
thanks this and the gesture you drew for my reference is really helpful.
I lack all knowledge of body muscles right but I will improve that over time, I will continue trying to draw as close as possible to the references by eye

>>6451396
Her expression is the least of your problems. The pose is stiff and boring in the first place.

>>6451396
It's really not, what are you talking about? Pyw

slowly but steadily

>>6451396
she looks fine just add some highlights into the eyes, she has dead eyes because theyre pure hard color

>>6452524
Keep going, anon. You’re doing good. Also, remember to have fun while you’re at it otherwise you’ll burn out.

>>6452508
meant for >>6452506

>>6450970
I'm glad more people are realizing that nail polish on women is hot

>>6451190
I like the painterly style. The roughness actually has some soul to it. Though it still needs to be worked on more, I think keeping some of the roughness would be nice.

>>6436978
stop shading with black/super desaturated colors and stop highlighting with white

>>6441209
only good artwork so far

>>6452545
Thanks anon, just going to keep chipping away as I improve. Its a little painful picking up yet another skill that has such a vast pit of despair incompetence (my first being japanese), but theres no other way to create what I can imagine so I will continue

>>6451413
>>6451810
>>6452506
>>6452524
thanks anons, I'm happy with the pose and gesture though the allure and context is a little bland I'll admit, it's what I need to work on most cause my work doesn't end up looking sexy at all

>>6452650
also I forgot, add nailpolish please thanks

>>6452655
I can't deny such a polite request, you got it

time to draw bunny girls lads

>>6452694
can I ask that you put a lot of these studies into one big page rather than lots of singular posts? it might be easier for us to help you out. also not to be rude but this might be best suited for the beg/int thread as these are general figure studies you're doing

>>6452713
Ok anon I'll make a bunch first into one, I am a beg but I like this thread more (compared to beg/int) as it lines with my end goal. And I'm sure even when I'm much better then I am now I'll still be posting here

>>6452694
Keep in mind your hips and ribcage, also sometimes its easier to draw what is not there rather than the subject (negative space, keep it in mind) for example the thigh gap

focused on lineart this time

>>6452878
the entire hip/legs/crotch/lower torso is FUCKED anon holy shit

>>6452886
more anatomy studies it is

>>6452878
vary the line weight in some places too

thicc 2B i'm working on

>>6452669
Nice proportions. You have great appeal. Just improve the messy lines and you'll be golden.

>>6452596
thanks bro
>>6452669
I really hate how coomer artists all flock to the same trend as soon as it shows up. But I do understand that that we all need to grow our audiences...but still
the contrarian in me prevents me from jumping on the bandwagon

>>6453375
I really like this one

>>6453260

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yetGML1gWow

>Cuz what's a ho with no pimp? And what's a pimp with no hoes?
>Don't be a lame, you know the game and how it goes

3rd try, still on the quest of sexy skin, been doing some changes in the tools and how I use them, I think I'm getting better results, thoughts? Next is... ass

>>6453559
are the instructions from a specific tutorial?

>>6453566
I'm following the steps of bgalaxy's https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/9016 (Bishojo Irasuto no Riaru na Hada)

I'm translating it, nice information but there are some gaps like tool technic, how to come up with your color, no information whatsever about edges which is odd considering that the but is painting oriented, if I didn't know about this honestly I would have quit the book.

>>6453466
You like tits and face but everything else needs work. Hands, for example, need your attention.

>>6453668

>>6453671

>>6453671

cute style anon

>>6453668
>>6453671
>>6453673
You are not going to tell me this isn’t supposed to be pinkiepie

Tried adding a body to my drawing. Not sure if I’m doing it right?

>>6454022
I'm a beg but I like it, what is she going to hold in the final version?

>>6454043
Why thank you very much, anon. She will be holding and licking a monster’s cock in the final version.

>>6454044
I'll be looking forward to it

Old meme I know

>>6453582
Fucking kek. nice.

>>6451396
the eyes needed some shading under the lids and round the corners so they didn't look so flat, I think that did it. this is probably my best work yet, the shading looks subtle and soft, the face is the best I've done, there's some nice gesture/counterbalance, just gotta work on making it sexier

>>6454175
i like it a lot anon, slightly increasing the highlights in her eyes gave her life, and that you added nailpolish

Starting off the year with a Vex animation

>>6454263
nice squishes, are you offering these as commissions now?

more focus on cleaner lineart

>>6454263
banger, what did you animate with?

>>6454263
I would add 1 more frame to help with the nipple interpolation or I wouldn't even disappear the whole nip.

Who draws the most succulent, mouth watering genitals? Not censored, looking for references mates

>>6454324
Me :)

Hi anyone got any good critique for my drawing? I'm new to watercolour pencils which is why the colour is a bit blotchy lol.

>>6454175
I'm honest honey, it's crap, the line art sucks, and the colors are a mess, the dick looks fake, crap, do something else

>>6453415
thanks anon, probably the hardest pose I've ever drawn

>>6454438
I appreciate the honesty but it's hard to take crits that aren't very specific, the lineart is a little bland and could do with more variation in weight. I fully accept the dick-crit though I am not good at drawing those at all, I think it needs some veins or contour lines to give it volume
>do something else
no >:(

>>6454457
I liked the screentone shade better I think, still a banger of course. The only thing I dont like is the left knee for me it looks like some tendon will snap ohh the pain

>>6454467
>he responds only to critism
next time ill just call you shit anon

>>6454502
shit sorry, thank you nailpolishanon!

>>6453683
Thanks anon. Hope your 2023 is a great year.
>>6453694
Okay.

>>6454272
Audio Animate + Photoshop

>>6454272
Adobe animate + Photoshop

>>6454492
i love your art so much. blog?

>>6454674
thank you

WIP, started it today.

>>6454492
Looks great!
>>6454457
Very sexy. Dope linework

>>6454438
Penis could perhaps be improved by giving it some curvature or either making the penis completly flaccid or a stronger erection.
The penis looks as if its "dead" , its erect but at the same time it doesn't stand up like an erect penis would , it stands more like a flaccid one.

>>6449104
>Notice the well developed gluteous maxiums
>points towards her tricep

>>6451190
Looks promising, keep at it.

>>6451190
Thigh is waaaay too long and looks like inflamed

think I hate rendering now

>>6454823
cheers furry-kun

>>6454438
kill yourself faggot bitch

I did a few samples at once…I never really do nsfw much.

>>6455185
Torso is too wide, could narrow it a bit since it’s making your subject look a bit disproportionate. Also his fibula is looking too round when it should be a wedge shape.
I do like how you drew the butthole, but it looks like his left foot is pointing straight down while his lower leg is rotated at a big of an angle.
Keep going, anon, you can do it!

Kinda love and hate rendering but I’ve blocked off the light and dark shadows. I’m pretty satisfied with this work and hope it won’t go sideways because of some fuckup I didn’t address early on.

>>6455224
face and armpit/chest shade doesn't match everything else, also add a little hint of red in some places

>>6455231
Will do!

>>6449806
i forgot your twitter, what was it again?

>>6454120
>>6453582

finished it

>>6455442
https://twitter.com/lobsterkiahlart

>>6441209
I know that this is supposed to be a sexual fantasy, but who the hell would wear something like that to that kind of job? Even the costumes in live action porn are more believable. Maybe if she was a stripper, at the beach, or a prostitute??? There's has to be a way to give her sexier outfit that shows off her ass without being like that blatantly obvious? Even tight cut off jeans would be more believable.

Then she's got her hands behind her back in her character introduction panel. Like, she's brave enough to wake up in the morning, decide to wear this sheer ass skirt with NO leggings or a lighter skirt underneath with a crop top, but she gets to her dad's workplace and puts on this whole very demure young woman act? Her outfit and her body language are competing with each other.

What's even worse is she's wearing those plain ass ugly panties with it. If she's going that far to wear that sheer skirt why didn't she take care to wear cuter panties? That's so embarrassing. If you are going to wear that kind of skirt with just her underwear underneath then those panties should be phenomenal or wearing some kind of thong rather than looking like she's got a wedgie up her ass.

Also, if she's the bosses daughter why is he even letting her move boxes when he could have her working in the office doing admin work????? She doesn't even look like the type to be interested in doing shit like that based on how she's dressed.

I guess like...maybe work on your character designs a bit or at least be more mindful of them?? Even if it's porn you still telling a story. It really takes me out of it. Otherwise it's drawn nicely, except his face on the first panel seems kind of stiff?

>>6441288
He looks like his muscle are made of flesh rather than fibers? Was that your intention?

>>6451396
Needs highlights in them.

First time on this thread,heya and Happy (Late) New Year everyone!
I don't have much experience with anatomy, especially since i try to keep my style simple (+cartoonish? idk how to explain)
I also don't draw NSFW very often,but i hope to learn something or other by posting here and getting some criticism, judge me as much as you can because ye,i know im not the best in this,hahah…
These are some examples,i’ll try to do a more recent one to compare soon lol.

>>6455648
what are your goals with this?

>>6454823
Also woah,good luck rendering it! Looks great already.

>>6455159
Haha same! These are great samples tho! Keep it up!

>>6455651
Oh,you mean something specific as goal or…?
In general,i just wanna see what i can improve,my style is not as consistent as i wish it was,and my anatomy knowledge sucks a lot imo lfmao,so i wanna see what i can improve to my style mostly,keeping it simple but still “somewhat-attractive” if that makes sense…sorry for the poor explanation.

thoughts i think it turned out really nice

critique please

>>6455706
this is not ai trickery right, I really like it

3month beg that kept posting the gestures from before,
anything glaringly obvious i should fix here before I continue? my first H drawing that doesn't involve size

>>6446845
Thank you!! I don't think I'll post here frequently as it's just a weird vent thing for me, but I'm happy you enjoy it.

>>6455706
Kinda reminds me of Kunaboto. Was he your inspiration?

>>6455749
naw but i used some ai references. >>6455920
kinda just that general coomer body style ya kno

>>6455762
A lot, anon. Practice anatomy now, and then line weight. To make things easier try copying artists and drawings you like and try to get them as close to 1:1 as possible while wracking your brain to see where you are going wrong.

>>6455925
Anything in particular I should add to my anatomy practice? Do you mean individual parts of the body?

I will do the copying artists, so thank you for the advice

>>6455762
there;s a site called kemono where u can rip psds of artist work and study them. thats what i do. i'm the goth tits guy

>>6455931
From what I can see, the hands need the most immediate work, and then the skeletal structure and then muscle shapes.
It’s difficult but trust me, drawing nice hands is super satisfying.

>>6455924
I like it! Keep up the good work.

>>6455943
thanks anon I'll do so

Progress! Painting hands is such a bitch, especially clawed furry hands

i need to learn feet better

>>6455076
>>6454457
>>6453375
done.
How much should such an image cost? really would appreciate your input

>>6456428
depends on your demand man, I figured you were already pretty set on your prices, I've seen you post your comms here and on the salt discord, have people been commenting on your prices? i need to raise mine but I'm worried I'd have to go back if I didn't get as many requests anymore

>>6455732
nothing to critique, get better at everything until one aspect of your art is good enough for me to give you useful information on.

>>6456455
thank you reading!
My demand for pinups isn't great. I have more people hitting me up for more expensive pieces, which is weird, but from a business/market stand point it does make sense because clients who purchase in bulk and are loyal tend to spend more.

> I figured you were already pretty set on your prices
well I kind of am, but I want to push my rendering and people seem to like it.
I've upped them before and comms slowed down so I went back to my usual fee, which is now at 75€ per pinup. Thing is, in order for my rendering to be decent is requires more hours.I feel like a fair price would be around 120€, which,even if it takes me 7 hours, it's still a decent hourly wage.
I'm thinking on setting the baseline pinup: flat colors and highlights at 70€ [picrel] and charge extra for rendering.

>have people been commenting on your prices?
Never had that. I think people simply won't hit you up.

>i need to raise mine but I'm worried I'd have to go back if I didn't get as many requests anymore
I say do it. You can always go back, and there's no shame in doing it. It's a hustle and I think people respect it. You definitely don't want to overprice it, because that will tarnish your image a bit I think, like it might make you look arrogant. I've seen commissioners roasting a few commission sheets on the /aco/ discord with mad emojis because certain artists were asking for 150$ for /beg/ tier art.

>>6454715
@badfumi, thank you!

>>6456532
I hope you find your sweet spot for a good price that means you don't have to finish loads of comms to make a decent amount and that still get enough steady commissions. I'm gonna try to raise prices by $10 and play it by ear. also stealing that "flats & highlights" thing cause that's a good option to have if people don't want to shell out for the fully rendered thing.
I love how you keep the hatchy pencil marks in your final work it keeps a lot of character (aka SOVL)

I think salt is getting a bit sleepy.

>>6455732
Ignore the other bitch, he's stupid. I prescribe you copying yoshinari's sketchbook until your hands fall off.

>>6456428
I'd ask for no less than 120 USD for that.

>>6456428
I like it, 100$ hard floor.
If you did anything fetish related of that quality you could already charge much much more

gotta sleep almost done, can u guess who i used as reference

>>6456716
I hope so!
>I'm gonna try to raise prices by $10 and play it by ear
that's the move right there. Slowly but surely.
>I love how you keep the hatchy pencil marks in your final work it keeps a lot of character (aka SOVL)
really appreciate that! thanks. That's my goal. I think now it's the time to do that more than ever, thanks to AI. I think if your art is sketchy and messy it's probably way harder to feed it to AI(Sakimichan literally looks like AI art) . I might be wrong tho, but I've always liked rough styles, mainly Impressionism

>>6457329
>>6457235
thanks fellas

>>6455706
Stop shading with blacks. When it comes to skintones you want to shade with reds.

>>6456351
you need to learn EVERYTHING better. Drawing feet is the least of your concerns at your current level.

new bread --------->
>>6457548
>>6457548
>>6457548
>>6457548

>>6456428
real sexo dude, I love the pose great job. I just buy urban sketches IRL but I can tell you that in a 3rd world shithole this would go between 90-100$ so if you are from a wealthy country bump those prices for sure, cheers