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was on here a couple months ago doing a request thread, opened my eyes and went on a path of art discovery (aka did studies and more tutorials and new techniques)

just want some critique/advice on this drawing. thank you.

>> No.6401591

>>6398336
It looks pretty cool, though I don't know if you were going for arms or legs that had hands for feet.

>> No.6401647

>>6401591
legs that have hands for feet

>> No.6402098

>>6398336
The main issue I see with it is with composition. While the color scheme is balanced well and appealing the overall image is flat and dull. You'll want to study how other artists compose a piece and also work on gesture practice to make more dynamic poses.

>> No.6402176

>>6402098
>gesture practice
Not relevant.

>> No.6402984

>>6398336
It looks too shiny and soft. Put more detail into the flowers.

>> No.6403014

>>6398336
Arms/Legs too thick, flowers too dark (look up chamomiles), horizon line serves no purpose might as well remove it, face of the monster is looking nowhere, no feelings/soul

>> No.6403172

>>6402098
honestly thats a running theme in my work, im trying to work on more interesting compositions. do you have any artist reccomendations to study for composition?