/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6381573
Don't ever do this to Dorothy ever again.

>>6381573
I like it the way it is unironically, blog?

>>6381573
>not a single mention of the ugly ass face
anon...

>>6381573
Prompt? Caps or no caps?

ehhh I think there's something a bit off about the perspective? Like the top half of the body, camera is looking down slightly. But bottom half is almost level. Right now it looks like she is contorting her body in a rather uncomfortable manner.

Also this is probably a personal preference but I would tone down the sex doll lips a bit

>>6381576
Dont tempt me.
>>6381590
No, not really.
>>6381769
Noted on the hips. I think i drew them rather flat, billboarding them to a 1 dimensional plane.

Anyways, here are a couple more drawings to punch at if you feel like it.

>>6381802

>>6381769
Here's my attempted correction. It is mostly a matter of personal choice though so please take with a grain of salt. I mainly brought the legs to the same perspective as the upper body, thinned the lips, and shaved about 30 lbs off the ass

>>6381805
Dorothy is a borderline flat chested android this is blasphemy.

>>6381805
Well hot diggity damn, that does look good.
I personally want to town down the smile, but leave it in her eyes.

>>6381805
Ugh, I forgot a subtle but important change - moved her left arm several inches to the left so that her chest area is more prominent.

>>6381814
Agreed, thank you anon.

>>6381815
Happy to help! All those hours watching Naoki Satou correction videos finally paid off :D

>>6381816
Heres the finished piece. There are some things i failed to transfer over from your corrections, but its certainly better than what it was.
Thanks again, merry christmas.

Excuse me for thinking out loud while trying to make sense of why she's sitting in that pose...

Presented info:
>christmas clothing and sitting on gift
>face and chest facing you
>lower body bends closer to you than torso, yet faces downwards intentionally
>legs ready to run from you
>Hiding hands and tense pose

So... what's the situation? Did you just encounter her as is while she's waiting for the receiver of her gifts? If not, she seems ready to run away or at least impartial to your presence.

Assuming that wasn't the intention, can you predict whether she'd want to be closer to you, or invite you to come closer? Is she being shy, bold or completely neutral? What pose would she take to convey those messages? I could be wrong, but I think she'd be carrying herself in different ways in those cases.

>>6381573
never ever draw nigger lips

>>6382606
Never seen walmart family photos?

>>6382610
Honestly, no. That might explain a lot.

>>6382609
im a sucker for instagram thots and blow job lips.
Really tho, you should be happy i got rid of the first draft that i didnt post, it was far more tasteless. The drawing posted here is far more tame than my first draft and this whole venture was me toning down the porn i draw.

>>6382609

Isn't there any good reference for good niggerlibs that look appealing?

>>6381573
>too anime for western circles
>too western for anime circles
...your art is just ugly dude

>>6382612
Seriously tho. The original drawing i did was more of a pin up with her rear end showing, but it was so out of character and tasteless, i got rid of it.
I kept the gift box, her sitting on it is her giving herself. Which is the inspiration i got from the christmas episode. She is giving herself, but not as a whore. Her hands between her legs protects her chasity, but she is exposing her chest.
Exposing her chest is sexual, but its sexual in a different context. Her bare chest, and breast is life. Breasts and heart. She is giving her body to roger smith, but giving her body in a form of love.
Anyway, blah blah blah. Im happy with how it turned out.

>>6382704
Thanks for the explanation! It's fun to see in what ways you've put thought to this. Hopefully your future works will also keep giving you satisfaction als this one did. Keep at it and best wishes!

Also here's a little take home question: is being sexually provocative towards the one you love something only 'a whore' would do, and does 'sexual' always equal 'tasteless'?

>>6382627
Gloss is really good at drawing/painting appealing lips for the most part

>>6382968
how do i facefuck a drawing
asking for a friend

>>6382598
I really like the colours and highlights on her torso in particular. Very nice.

If you're going to insist on drawing big nigger lips on anime esque faces you better take the Bruce Timm pill.