/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Thoughts?

Made this one a little while ago, didn’t fully finished the shading but still happy enough where I left it.

blamp

>>6344158
looks flat. gun and knife look pasted into the image. knife doesnt even look like he's holding it. just on a weird angle from his hand. odd there is no guard on a military knife. bad position for knife under dangling flashbangs/grendades. hard to access with free hand that needs to cross body, life up nades and somehow pull knife upwards without banging the shit out of everything and clanging. should be on other leg and strapped down. belt is off centered. would be uncomfortable and have pouches digging into stomach. hand way too small on gun compared to size of face/head. hand flat out is about 3/4 head size. yours is extremely tiny. forehead is too big/flat. he has receding hair, but it looks like hes some cube head because of it and forehead isnt curving back to reflect normal head. pants and other cloth folds look random/dont reflect reality. 'oh just some random lines to elbow/crotch thats what folds do!' type of marks. he has strapped on gear and armor that dont have any folds reflected or lighting for example. only go to the crotch/elbow joint. chest plate seems to be off perspective. almost like its flattening out to face the viewer despite angled upper body. believe its the right side of the image that angles back to center too much that is breaking the perspective, but didnt care enough to follow perspective lines. lighting feels off on the piece. bright white halo on the outer right side, yet face on the right side is darkest of the piece. the light sourcing seems inconsistent throughout and just liek you know 'one side shadow, one side shiny white, mid tones rest' type of effect. nothing reflects shadow from other objects in the image. belt strap, plates of armor with minimal shadow effects, the gun/arm crossing over and then the legs just get shdaowed out by eeverythign for some reason as if you hita shadow wall that only affects the legs,yet leaves a bright halo on the inner leg. the gun also has curvature for some reason the barrel and grip.

>>6344608

you must be new here

>>6344157

>>6344608
Damn guy, nobody's going to read that wall of text.
Not the op btw.

>>6344608
my sides started to hurt after i realized the fucking huge wall of text someone seems to have unironically written, critizing merc_wip lmao

>>6344608
good crits

>>6344608
Thanks, I'll work on your advice. (doesn't work on it)

>>6344608
Holy newfag.
Kudos for actual crit, tho.

>>6344631
I think i recognize you, anon who peaked in 2019 2020, is that you?

I've felt no motivation to sketch but here you go
The girl is modeled off a Craiyon ai prompt

>>6344802
yeah, you have told me that before, although I don't remember being provided with criteria in which you used to made such assessment in which I was able to understand.

>>6345429
Fantastic simian skull study.

>>6345430
gonna pyw or just crab?

I don't post my work on 4chan because you guys are fucking cringe

thought so

>>6344178
>Fotm bandwagoning
>/beg/ tier drawing
You're NGMI.

>>6344799
kek

>>6344631
You don't know how to draw legs. Go study.

>>6345447
how so? I mean I have some inklings, but I kind of want to know your perspective because it seems to be your primary concern.

>>6344631
Always love your work.

>>6345467
he's crabbing, they could only look bad to a turbo /ic/ autist

>>6345553
While I agree that the comment is unnecessarily toxic, probably because it's from an envious crab, her right lower leg is in fact too short for that kind of perspective.

>>6345578
>her right lower leg
meant to say her left* lower leg

>>6345430
>>6345444
>>6345447
Same fucking nodraw faggot, kill yourself nigger

>>6345527
aw shuck, y-you too.

>>6345553
>>6345578
I don't think he is particularly toxic, just a little bit of ribbing, but I think they fixated on me more than necessary, and I don't recall them properly articulated their criticism in a way that I was able to use.

>>6345582

Also, you mean Tsubaki piece right? Yeah, the proportions and perspective always been my principal weakness, I probably only been able to correct something like that after the fact.

>>6345438
>>6345585
>mad over a shitpost
damn i forgot how fragile the board was. sry ): it looks good

>>6345598
skullanon here that guy wasnt me, i was the one who said to pyw though

>>6345598
ic is just twitterlite nowadays

>>6344157
I don't post my work anymore. I've already received the help that I needed and can draw without reference after a year of dedication and practice. So far the only hurdle I need to do is rendering. I'm only hanging out because I'm in recovery. It's not like a like you or anything. Baka

>>6344631
>boruto
Why anyone is unironically watching or reading that garbage is beyond me. Don't know why you made the other eye slightly smaller and tilted compared the other one. I think you have some potential but there's still a lot of things with your work that make it feel kind of awkward.

>>6345607
Post your work, im sure it looks great anon! I'd love to see it. :D

>>6345617
I did not watch it, but I am drawing porn of it. my understanding of naruto's continuity only go as far as Scarlet Spring, but I makes up stuff as I go along afterward that point.

I didn't spent as much time on the Tsubaki piece as I was suppose to, its kind of a quality control problem generally, at the time I just want to get the concept of a "burger eating samurai" across, I don't know what to tell ya.

>>6344157
need help

>>6345668
what's wrong with it?

>>6345668
try making your figure the brightest thing

>>6345634
Boruto noooo!

>>6345668
Not sure what to recommend it looks gorgeous

>>6345941
I was thinking 'dark silhouette against light background' maybe witgt0sv4
h some rimlight

>>6345606
Being a nodraw was always looked down upon, revisionist

>>6344157

>>6345983
>nodraw
thanks for proving my point, twittard

>>6345991
Not really a fan of these designs, Elijah especially. They don’t seem like they have much thought put into them.

I did this a couple weeks ago
Around 3 meters tall, 4.5 long

>>6345618
I don't have to. All 10 of you have already seen my work. Some of you like it and some of you are indifferent. I have defeated 4chan /ic/ for now I am beloved'ed.

aight

>>6346002
>They don’t seem like they have much thought put into them
Can you explain it more in-depth? I tried to redesign some of my characters according to my world-building lore. while thinking about their roles in the "main story", while also referencing some of my favorite manga and videogame artists for stylistic gains (mainly Kazushi Hagiwara and CLAMP alongside a little bit of N64 era Zelda) as an exercise. Elijah is supposed to be a Pankration-specialized monk class-wise (I think of my characters as RPG classes with their own quirks whn it comes to abilites/fighting styles since it's part of the setting) who didn't spend much time in proper society for a couple of years before the story starts, even tho I don't have a proper idea yet for how to show it just by visuals alone (Also he pretty much was born from my urge to draw a muscular femboy/ambush design initially, so it's definitely not everyone's cup of tea).

>>6346034
that's cool

A schizo scribbling, I did recently

>>6346059
I love white haired characters with edgy designs, nice im cooming

>>6346052
qt

>>6345991
Actual soul

>>6345634
kek

>>6345527
idk why but the horns turn me on the most

>>6344631
Niceeee

>>6346002
you could try and add some more harsh black shadows to your designs, the style somewhat reminds me of Satoshi Matsuura and Yoji Shinkawa

>>6344157
Also made this yesterday

>>6346034
damn that's rad
what did you use? doesn't look like spray paint

>>6346039
Stop being a toxic person instead of larping.

>>6346073
>>6346144
Thank you!
It's just brushwork with floor paint. Bought white, black, red, blue, yellow and mixed it as I was doing it

>>6346154
Why am I toxic? And what is this larping that you speak of?

>>6345996
https://twitter.com/search?q=nodraw&src=typed_query
https://archived.moe/ic/search/text/nodraw/order/asc/
nigger

>>6344157
Not very good or original.
>>6344158
I hope to someday find time to copy Merc_wip for the meme of it.
>>6345991
Neat, IMO. Especially if it's a passion project thing.
>>6346034
Also neat.
>>6346059
I like the implied movement/progression.

I just did a doodle last week. Haven't gotten back to the grind yet

>>6344157
Haven't studied anatomy because don't know how to so this is mine

>>6346428
>Haven't studied anatomy
well that's pretty clear since girls don't have dicks

>>6346129
love it

>>6346432
How about you join us in the 21st century, CHUD?

>>6346272
chuckled

>>6346183
>word used less than 10 times in /ic/ before 2022
>most of the mentions started in the donut steel troon and fujoshit threads which started this year
thanks for proving my point again, twittard

This is oil on board but then edited on iPad to get an idea of direction I’m going. Posting so I can download to phone thanks

>>6346432
but that's not a girl

>>6344608
Thanks for the crits. I'm working on it.

S
And again

>>6346268
Cool.

>>6346588
dios mio...

>>6344608
merc_wip is truly the gift that keeps on giving

>>6346524
is it used on twitter? no? kys nigger

boxdog

>>6346598
that doesn’t change the fact that the ones who say nodraw tend to come from the roastie and tranny generals which are basically twitter on /ic/. that’s why it’s a twittard term, do you get it now dumb fuck?

>>6346627
I get that you're a fucking retard and have decided something is "twitter" despite it not being used on twitter.
I get that you don't draw.
I get that you're a dumb gorilla nigger.

>>6346650
you don’t get anything roastie. I could’ve called it a tumblrina word instead of twitter and my point wouldn’t change, that those who use it are usually easily triggered femoids and troons with donut steel art

>>6346627
seems like those roasties and trannies have more dignity than you for actually drawing, ngmi coping bitter faggot

>>6346696
>makes donut steel art
>dignity
topkek

>>6345527
Sexy, the dark blue lineart is delicious great job, you do comms?

>>6346627
>>6346673
Post your work. If you’re such an oldfag you’d know that mouthing off without backing it up is a bitch move.

6346713
why even bother?
https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/102097803

>>6346713
can't be AI, hands look like hands.

>>6346716
any character somebody draws is an "" oc donut steel "" character of somebody else

>>6346588
merc_finished

>>6346722
Yea that's because torino aqua made it, very good artist i always loved the way they do backrounds

>>6346727

>>6346719
sure, but not for fussy shitheads.

>>6346720
you could ask the same to the triggered autist >>6345585 where this all started

>>6346745
>doesn't post his work

>>6346760
yeah I won’t, the same way that (you) haven’t posted yours

Always funny seeing how much 'nodraw' burns these non work posting faggot up inside. Yes nigger you're not here to draw. Yes nigger you're a massive attention whoring faggot.

>>6346179
Oh no, it's retarded.

>>6346272
Best layman explanation for quantum mechanics I've ever seen.

>>6346713
>>6346727
>>6346729
Why do you keep posting other people's work in "Post YOUR Work General"?

>>6346719
I'm closed for commissions, sry.

Trying to build a online following but it feels like such a uphill battle since im not drawing mainstream art.

>>6346769
skullanon here, mildly entertained by this exchange. I've posted my work ITT, now it's your turn

>>6346780
>Always funny seeing how much 'nodraw' burns these non work posting faggot up inside
femcels are truly delusional. at worst reading nodraw just signals that I’m likely talking to an ill-bred femoid
>>6346791
fine. an eye study for your skull study

>>6346797
I like it. Don't know why you have to be so hostile for no reason though. I just use /ic/ to post art and find resources, no use arguing with people

>>6346789
Hot.

>>6346797
>talks endless shit
>posts limp dick study
Ah you're one those retards. Makes sense why seethe whenever people mock you by insisting you don't fucking draw. Anything to avoid showing your real skill kek.

>>6346952
>i-i-it doesn’t count
>in my mind you still don’t draw
kek you are so predictable roastie. no matter my skill level is, you were always gonna find something to crab on because you’re mad that I’m right. go ahead though, keep crying ‘pyw nigger faggot nodraw’ at every little slightly critical comment and thinking your lame made-up insult has any effect or control on how I do my art

>>6344158
Ai made this?

>>6346952
The study is fine. the guy yelling 'pyw' also only posted a study.

>>6346780
they hated him because he told the true

>>6346789
can you post one with colour please?

>>6346996
classic low skilled dunning kruger

>>6345340
I still love your stuff magi

>>6345340
I just call you that because of that progress/regression pic you posted on that thread and all the anons telling you you peaked on 2019, i actually like your art, i mean, i can recognize it at a glance without looking at the water mark

>>6346115
>>6346228
Thank you my bros
Here's some things I drew today, wanted to continue studying figure drawing but I drew for fun again instead. Also still have to get used to draw bigger, but at least it's a start.

>>6347008

>>6346790
kino

>>6346428
why are you gay?

>>6347178
love your colours, very vibrant, do you use greyscale to colour?

I like how this one turned out. Got a lot of good practice with the round brush. Still need to work on my anatomy and my animu faces but feel like I’m going in a direction I’m more satisfied with. Might move into NSFW formally but I’ll stick with pinups for now.

>>6347228
Mostly not, but sometimes I do.
Here's an example: https://twitter.com/BBCChanArt/status/1430966463108632580

>>6344157
I have this meme.

>>6344608
for the love of christ please lurk for two years before posting

>>6347178
I'm the opposite. Not a fan to be honest. I think you use too much color burn and it reminds me of when I play silent hill.

>implying lots of things

>>6347509
what is that cat doing

>>6347726
The cat is doing whatever it pleases.

>>6346607
Blog? I've seen your work around a lot but still don't have it

Not sure how to continue with the top panel's background.
>>6347509
Good as usual, based tradbro. I'm going to steal some of your rendering style.

>>6348139
is that a maru nib? looks like you've got some fine lines out of it. Looks like Miyazaki's Nausica.

>>6348139
>I'm going to steal some of your rendering style.
You can't steal it because I have no clue what I'm doing kek
I'm a mix between Jim Woodring, Edward Gorey, and Moebius. Plus I'm usually winging it and then cursing myself for it. Maybe next year I'll have some actual consistency.
To my eyes your style and rendering looks way more consistent than mine.

>>6347879
>black sclera
>orange eyes
gimme MORE
also twitter or insta @ or something I guess shits neat

>>6344608
welcome to the board anon

>>6348153
Kek, that makes two of us. I actually don't know what I'm doing either with rendering and values. What I mean is I'm getting tired of my marks and I like yours more, they are much more interesting and decipherable, even if experimental.
>>6348141
Nope, G-pen. I don't know how to use the maru pen much.
>Looks like Miyazaki's Nausica.
An anon has told me that before. Nausicaa is fantastic but Miyazaki's art style has never been an inspiration for me. I can see it though, I started to see similarities in character design and faces after the anon mentioned it.

>>6348167
it has a lot of appeal anyway. Is it easier to use the G-pen with the deleter handle? I use one from standgraph that is possibly too long.

Something done just for my own fun.

>>6348168
Thanks man. I'm not sure. I don't know have much experience with other handles and I'm not one to ask. My hands still shake a lot.

>>6348158
@enemy_doodles

I don't have anything else uploaded right now sorry

>>6344157
i have not finished a drawing in 2,000 years

It's a little on the older side, since I haven't had much time to draw digitally as of recently.

Latest

I have nowhere else to post this.

did this a while ago

>>6346486
That troon literally used images of real children to draw cup porn

>>6346627
Cringe

>>6350293
sprock???

Some girls pose for me.

>>6349554
You draw fat furries, yes. I know that.

>>6350866

>>6350429
Nope. Who's that?

>>6345982
gt0sv4

>>6351035
I enjoy this quite a bit.

Did this one today. Happy halloween frens

Shitpost is my passion

>>6351093
gostoso

I can't draw the upper body for the life of me.

>>6351176
don't tire yourself out with these big brain crits anon save some for the reddit politics

>>6344157

>>6346588
Nice. GMI.

>>6344157
very nice Azula OP

was feeling overwhelmed today, so I put on some deathdream in my headphones and drew this

>>6346583
>>6346589
Is it a planet or something abstract?

>>6351082
thats cool.
>>6347178
B, do you have any motivation to draw if its not coom? I ask cause I have that problem...

>>6354168
>B, do you have any motivation to draw if its not coom? I ask cause I have that problem...
I draw for a living. The bills on my table are my motivation, not the subject matters people request.
In general porn is just easier/faster to me. I am much more comfortable drawing characters than backgrounds and in porn that's the focus of the artwork.
This said, I think my best artworks are those that include complex backgrounds. The problem is that I spend much more time on them than what I'm comfortable with.

>>6354189
hmm, I ask only because people dgaf about anything I draw if it isnt porn and it really demotivates me. And before someone says it, yes, I understand "drawing for yourself" but its just a hurdle for me.

shit thread

>>6353353
Not sure what it is but I like it. It's my kind of eerie.

>>6353198
Looks like he'd be walking around the sauna in Spirited Away

Finished her today

I'm happy with the progress I've made in rendering.

Unfortunate, my drawing is still hot garbage, in fact it's getting worse.
I've been on a diet for three weeks and I can barely do my job and exercise, so drawing is a huge mental strain.
I got more scrap paper from the office and tomorrow I'm going to try to do some gesture shit, maybe. I'll probably be sitting at a customer waiting for a couple hours so I'll have time. Just sucks doing it on a phone.
Like my brain doesn't fucking work, I'm constantly tired and hungry and I can't draw for shit, but I got to at least try, ya know?
The weight is coming off, so there's that.

trying a new painting method. I have a tendency to overblend, but I think I learned a lot

currently working on this rn

>>6346789
I swear I’m not trying to crab. You art is nice. But you seem to be one of those artists that can’t draw beautiful faces. Your anatomy and shading is nice but the characters look so fucking ugly.
How does that happen?

>>6344158
nice crab hand

>>6344157

i made this
https://youtu.be/bjNy564qqJs

Someone liked my post today :)

>>6354153
>>6354899
Looking good.

>>6363751
What made this stand out to me is I immediately started thinking of stories in my head for all the characters. Solid design anon

I need toughts , critiqe n shit. Dont know anybody who still draws around me IRL to give me pointers anymore

>>6363751
The only critiqe i can think of is the middle goyim having eyes too close and is s bit (a little bit too stiff for my taste) , the upper left one doesnt quite fit in the picture for some reason , the lines are occasionally scratchy but it is probably not fully refined so All in qll very good. You're breety good

>>6361274
I think it's just a matter of personal taste. I like the faces I draw and so do my fans and clients.
Maybe post a drawing of a face you like, so I can see what your standards are.

>>6361274
I think it's just a matter of personal taste. I like the faces I draw and so do my fans and clients. For example pic attached is a face I'm really fond of.
Maybe post a drawing of a face you like, so I can see what your standards are.

>>6346428
Look at a skelington. Ribcage has true ribs and "free ribs, trueribs cover the lungs and connect to the sternum freeribs almost reach the pelvis and arent attached to anything. Upperarm(humorous bone :DDD ) attaches to shoulderblades and clavicles (clavicles exist for humans only ) add pec, abdomen , tits, delts (3 of em, front middle and back delts) , connect abs to the feminine penis/ p0055y , 2 sets of folds around the groin. The abbs and the obliqe muscle folds, . Abbs end on the PERINEUM (SPACE BETWEEN BOIPUCCY and regular pooccy / or a benis) and obliqes have an opening for leg muscle attachements on the pelvis to "flow thorwards the knee joint. Limb proportions and bANATOMY?
Your arms spread sideways(a T pose) should be the same lenght as your character is tall from left hand fingers to right hand fingers. The legs? I do them by measuring from top of the head to the groin( gives me lenght of the legs). There is more but i do not feel like writing

>>6364385
Forgot to post this. Pic elated

>>6346789
>>6364360
NTA, but I think it's just the angle of the faces on the previous piece. It's both challenging and not quite flattering. My main critique would be, and I'm no expert, is that the lady's head, torso, and legs, all feel disjointed. like they're just popping out from behind each other in weird ways. Maybe I'm the retard though, so anyone else seeing it?

>>6364401
God dammit , why did you pint it out to mee. Now I can not possibly COOM to this

>>6364401
The other anon was talking in general about all of the faces I draw. I personally still don't think the faces in that first artwork look unattractive.
I agree about the anatomy of the bodies being pertially wonky though.

>>6364360

The left upper arm looks a bit too short but then again , who knows with such Bazonkadonkas of Remarkable scale and magnitude

>>6364417
I think it's foreshortened well enough, but maybe I'm wrong. I really don't see it as a mistake. The only thing I notice now in retrospect is her ear being positioned a tad too high.

>>6364414
Ah well, I don't see anything wrong with the other faces. But still, looking from at upwards angle at someone's face while they're pressing their chin against their chests isn't really a good look. That said, some might say that such strained faces adds to the rawness of the scene.
>>6364417
Could've at least made it an actual cum tribute you cheapskate.

>>6351705
Eyes seem like they havent turned fully with the head but could just be thicc lines playing tricks on me
>>6354738
I love it, cant find much wrong with it
>>6351708
Arms seem bit too short but that could be just me?
>>6363750
AT FIRST GLANCE all is good- it is a very good. NITPICK TIME: At A closer inspection Lower legs (shins) seem disbalanced- draw a line from them and look at where their line directions cross and compare it to your torso. Neck seems a bit too long / or the shoulders are too low , try angeling/ lowering the gorget/neckguard to expose the face(mask) pic related for repherence
>>6358574
Ayy erry nice, - looks very good- I cant find anything tecnically wrong with it- grimy and grungy- sets the mood

Btw mind critiqeing dis >>6364331 i really need some feedback

iam trying to soul

>>6365152

>>6365155

>>6345982
I'm stuck, I dont know how to paint this stupid background, dont know how much detail to put there, what details, whats happening with light, water ripples, rocks, fuck, need references

>>6344157

Just got this done, didn't feel like shading today

>>6364360
Prompts?

>>6344157
Lolz

>>6344157

did this one some months ago when SG event came out

>>6366080
CSP, Wacom, 4 hours, no breaks.

>>6366158
This is great anon.

I really liked this one so I'm posted it outside of /beg/. It's my original characters drawn with the Captain robes from Bleach.

>>6344157

no idea what im doing

>>6344157

>>6344157
Have been trying to draw characters in the style of Buronson/Tetsuo Hara's Fist of the North star. Im trying to 'understand' the old master's linework and integrate it into my own. Any tips/critics/advice?

a character I did with random stuff I added in the background

>>6347178
>BBC Chan
I distinctly remember shitting on you for some bumfuck benign reason like a year, maybe 2 years ago on a thread you were in. Just wanna say I'm sorry

>>6346428
Well you need to before going straight to porn.

>>6347879
Love this one.

>>6350850
Me on the left.

>>6366158
AI

>>6367581
The anatomy needs work but the shading on their muscles is great. These motherfuckers look ready to beat the shit out of each other.

Nice of the princess to invite us to space gay Luigi!

>>6368919
comfy and cute
do you have any socials? big fan of this kind of artstyle would love to use some of your works as references

>>6368183
Thanks anon, I appreciate the feedback. These are all from imagination, but I do use reference from time to time. Is it the shoulder/neck/chest part that seems off?

caw

>>6366158
Please make an AI thread and put this in it.

>>6363896
thank you!
>>6364350
that was the pencilled version and my pencils are a mess. Here's the finished inks. Thank you!

I wanted to play around with character designs, so I did this picrew-like doll thing.

Been studying a lot lately

>>6349579
thats really good and cool

>>6358295
amazing work

I'm going to sketch DBZ couples for fun for awhile

>>6373915
Oye, te quedo muy chulo!

I've been really enamoured with the art from Weimar Germany recently, so I'm trying to imitate the style. Not my best work by any means, but I'm having a lot of fun making these.

>>6373915
Muy buen trabajo anon.

>>6373943
Is so weird to spot an spanish comment here, but is DBZ and Mexicans are obsessed with DBZ

Not mine, thoughts in my mom sculpture?

>>6375171
>thoughts in my mom sculpture?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qY-v9PGZyss

>Verification not required.

>>6348139
tradchad
Love this.

>>6373943
>>6375142
I don't understand, but I'll give you this just please don't turn me into a fan made Gohan transformation.

>>6364360
Lovely pinup, anon!

>>6344562

Nevermind.

Thoughts on how I could make him more sentai/Tokusatsu looking?

>>6346115
My favorite one itt. blog??

>>6375789
maybe draw him in dynamic pose instead looking like he's dead on the inside?

>>6370390
current WIP

Just did this ENA fanart i wanted to draw in a background similar to LSD dream simulator but i got lazy and wanted to move on

>>6375789
Patterning might be too busy. Most tokusatsu are like a couple sections with primary colors, or some simple stripes or shapes.

>>6377109
Lots of shit going on in that. Good stuff, anon