/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Mmm poopy

>>6340231
Poopy

>>6340357
That's not how fabric works. Even wet and sticky one.

>>6340561
anything goes in the world of coom
nta btw

>>6340561
>autism here
>technically this
>technically that
>I’m a retarded virgin technically

>>6340638
the consistent lighting is impressive, also send her to the gym, she got too fat

Quick sketch - Disney girl getting hosed

>>6340683
You posted in the mole thread you moler fucker

>>6340683
>>6340728
IT’S THE MOLEMAN

>>6340357
yeah but it's hot so fuck it

>>6340191
I posted in the last thread and some of you guys seemed to like my stuff. So here's a new thing I started.
Now I just need to figure out how to color and finish this garbage and I'll be in business.

>>6341137
You dont even necessarily need to finish with color
If I saw finalized lines and I'd be happy

>>6341137
nice work, arms don't feel like are conecting properly to the torso, especially from the back

>>6341247
it turned into 6 pages instead of 5

>>6341249
Nice.

Long time no see, salt. Sup.

>>6343477
hot

>>6341137
What's your construction method?

>>6343477
Nice do you have a blog?

>>6343477
how u been bbcakes

re-did the lines for >>6334034, gimme some crits pls

>>6340357
why give up straight lines for the door?

>>6343672
Not him but I'm guessing some kind of fish eye effect maybe the doors bent to show motion idk

A reference I saw here on /ic/ gave me an idea so I had to sketch it out before I lost it, any ideas on how the idea could be improved?

>>6343477
if it's the real you, may i ask? what's the best website to gain followers that actually retweet porn. essentially how did you get your start on twitter? should i just beg for retweets at this point. so far everybody on 4chan is pretty adamant on not retweeting art that doesn't align to their own art. such as art raffles and such. it might break their finger.

That weird guy was right, my head construction was awful and I realized too late, this is a desperate fix.

This shit is so hard for me, it's like I constantly forget how to do faces. ;_;

>>6343672
yeah this guy >>6343747
has it, was for a fisheye effect, all the other pics like this had that so i went with it

thoughts?

>>6343642
@bbcchanart
>>6343663
Heyo. Can't complain too much.
>>6343908
I don't know man. The algorithm game is always an enigma to me. I always just posted as much as possible and hoped my art would catch the attention of people.
Also, afaik twitter is the only social media site that allows hardcore porn. Everything else stops at tasteful nudes I think.
I mainly use Twitter and Hentai Foundry. H-F has a much smaller scope of course, but I think it can bring commissioners much quicker than Twitter. I don't know if it's still as relevant as back in 2015 when I first started though.

>>6343477
hi, out of curiosity, would you say AI has impacted your business in any way yet? i ask beacuse ive been feeling discouraged lately because of ai, idk if it will even worth it anymore

>>6344153
Not in the slightest. Also, talking with my patrons, the vast majority says they dislike AI art because of the moral implications.

>>6344170
Thanks, im happy to hear that. Thats good news

>>6343477
Can I hit you up for a commission (an easy one, I promise)? Or are you still backed up til the cows come home?

>>6344193
The second. Sorry. :\

>>6344114
Cool thanks! I really like your drawing time lapse videos, very helpful

>>6343671
The clothed line connecting her tits to torso seems off. But I'm beg as fuck so idk

Does this read as stubble/pubes? This guy like pubes and i THINK his gob as shaved pubes but im trying to pull it off without it looking weird

>>6344381
A bit too subtle, not sure about stubble but I've been using this for pubes.

>>6344381
MOOOLES but why

>>6344429
a little imperfection

>>6344381
Stubble would have a much more uniform length, density, and direction

>>6343640
I don't really have a set one. I'm trying to develop one that works for me. Right now it's mostly borrowed from several different sourced.

>>6344254
thanks anon, I fixed that part up, flats are done for this, gotta add a few details and comm's done

>>6345048
posted the wrong image

also working on this one and struggling hard on that pose on the bottom. it's the same shortstack from >>6321123 paired up with this 7' dude. got plenty of reference for the pov pic but not the one focused on him so crits would be appreciated

I’m finishing up this, should I thin the lines a bit?

>>6345049
Based LoR chad, keep on doing gods work.

dont usually use pose dolls but i might
use more often

>>6340954

I really hate how you draw faces. I wouldn't have recognized the characters were it not for the text and Ed's hair and automail. I'm not an on model autist but you need a little bit of likeness when drawing fanart.

>>6345142
with riza it's tricky cause her casual hair is different from how we see her like 80% of the time, same with her eyes between how she's normally drawn and when she's surprised

>>6345105
thanks anon but I don't deserve the title I had no idea who Binah was til someone commissioned this. all done now, not sure if the outline is a little cheesy but I kinda like it and idk what to do when there's no background needed

Lotta porn but not much style, like has anyone ever done a neoclassical style of boobs?

How does the L fit into "salt"?
>Sexual
>Art
>styLlization
>Thread
That's retarded. I can just as easily call this /last/ or /aaaa/
In fact. I'll do just that

>>6346459
It's /alt/ for sex, stupid (I don't mean that and was tempted by the alliteration)

>>6346459
it's this way because /alt/ kept getting triggered over titties over there so somebody made these threads and they stuck.

>>6343775
no critiques. this is silly and great, pls finish

is there a conceptart.org but for coomers?

didn't spend a lot of time on this one but I might finish it. Wanted some thoughts on it

>>6346609
Thanks, I have already started working on it since no one had any feedback anyways.

buttz

>>6347070
Jowza, also female.

>>6347070
hey whoa now that is great, who are you?

I really liked how this one turned out. Tried some new rendering techniques. Unfortunately didn’t get the traction I wanted on Twitter. Still need to improve anatomy but I feel like him heading in the right direction at least.

Might move into outright NSFW but for now I’ll do soft core stuff and pinups.

do you guys mind posting a little more please I am lonely and this is the only place I get any semblance of social interaction and it's also helpful for my development as an aspiring artist of titties and girl penises, thank you

>>6347340

>>6346358
We have the same commissioner my dear anon

>>6347315
pyw anon let us all admire the budding fruits of your labor together <3

>>6347347 I'm this loser >>6346358
>>6347343
sweet was it a binah comm too? show us show us show us

>>6347341
these looked great in the sketch stage already but this looks phenomenal dude

>>6347315
>>6347378
You've ignored me on Twitter. But I do understand the need for an art friend. But honestly it's best to not interact with artists for prolonged periods of time. Something that I myself am trying to figure out too. It just makes you angry and bitter. I'll help you out tho. 1. Your profile picture is just boring. 2 you need to be fun. It's just the internet so don't be shy about being a nerd for something. 3 your art is nice but it's in between whatever style you are going for "western" "anime" "cartoon" you are just too much business and no fun for me. I also love mocomori jmori Too. But is he the really the best, hmm nah. But his stuff is all brush work but whatever. I don't know.

>>6347378
Nah, I'm drawing Tomomo desu

Really like your artstyle doe! Blog?

>>6347421
I did? I don't have any message requests. I'm with you on the interaction thing, I hardly ever like stuff or comment, don't message anyone, get tagged in artshares but don't post most times. I'm the same irl desu and the social media socialising makes it weird. even if it's not totally anonymous I much prefer posting here. I agree with you on my style and my profile pic, it's a study I did like six years ago and it was the only half finished thing I made that I had at the ready to use as a profile pic, maybe I'll change it to a cute girl to make it relevant
>>6347439
thank you anon I like your crisp linework and cute tiddies nice job! I'm duarte_nsfw on twidder let me know yours

>>6347378
thank you anon were pushin hard on it

no ones a loser as long as were trying our best

>>6347455
Me again. The style thing is complicated. We all struggle with it. I do like your work. But it's there. And it's something that you need to keep in the back of your mind. It's a psychological effect on non artist.

>>6347340
>>6347341
Do you have any socials where i can follow you?

>>6347546
@reloadhb on twizzler

>>6345094
the perspective is too flat, like one point. More dynamic/extreme perspective would make this much hotter, consider diagonals in the composition more. it's not bad tho, i wouldn't worry that much about the line thickness at this stage, its probably going to be better if you get faster at drawing instead, the lines look too overworked like you were thinking too much about each individual line and possibly working slowly. You have some potential so keep at it

Why is it when I’m not drawing coom I think I should be drawing coom but then when I’m drawing coom I think I’m a pathetic piece of shit ups be drawing non coom?

>>6347690
zoomer indecisiveness

vampire girl summoning a snack

>>6347620
Thanks for the critique much appreciated. I know I need to hit fundamentals more because the wall is definitely approaching. Another reason my nose is in the lines so much is because I'm essentially just finger painting on a tablet, although I finally got around to ordering a pen so I can do art properly. I think I'll just post what I have on Twitter then do timed stuff for the next month

>>6344153
I don't think there is as much of a market for random image generators as pajeet shills would let on.

>>6348453
They all have a similar easily detectable style anyway. Deviate from from cheap mid tier rendering/ minimal perspective and you'll be ok

any advice for her left arm? I feel like I fucked up the attempt at foreshortening it

Tried to get into sexual art with this one

>>6348602
If you mean the raised one, I think it looks good. Maybe you could push the shoulder back to the left a little bit (it's supposed to be higher on the raised side), you could clip more with the bosom and make it look more natural. Maybe push the foreshortened elbow joint a little to the left as well.
What bothers me a little is the thigh on the left part of the image. The hips aren't really suggesting outward torsion, so the knee bending inward looks broken/disconnecred. Maybe find a reference that uses this pose more clearly or position the leg differently.

shroomy friends

>>6348790
I stitched together different references so that's probably why it looks broken, I'll see if I can find a pose matching it better

>>6348615
I'm more afraid than aroused

>>6348861
one day you'll take a photo of yourself for reference and ask yourself why tf didn't I do this earlier

>>6348822
Wow you're a good drawer

can I get some critiques

>>6349100
boobs look sliiightly off. the dick could be touched up a bit, maybe the vein placement and shape of balls. this is all nitpicking but its cute for sure and i like her face and the cube shit

>>6345133

How do i make the left arm look like its pointed toward the viewer? When its a sketch it looks 3d but when rendered it looks flat. Ty

>>6349264
You need to clarify your light source and then drop a shadow on it appropriately to define the form.

>>6349264
Better contour strokes.

>>6349264
Thicken the lines at the elbow, and use more prominent 'T' lines to show the intersection between elbow, upper and lower arm. And as always, have nice ref

Birthday gift for a friend

>>6349636
those are the most bountiful beautiful boobas you have eber brendered in your libe

>>6349165
thanks, I’ll keep those things in mind for the future.

bump

>>6349165
This isn't helpful critique lmfao. You're essentially telling them lol draw this better

>>6349100
The right breast seems to be overlapping the other rather than the both of them being level. For the penis veins, they're way too short to read as that and look more like cuts or scars. This tutorial in picrel has a good general rule of thumb for convincing vein placement

>>6350347
nice tutorial, the vein thing is useful

>>6343775
Flying shemale witch with priapism.

What a great halloween!

>>6348822
only 3 more pages to go
must....dr...aw.....

>>6340258
You colors look a bit washed up, I recommend you get a good monitor(IPS) bro

>>6347070
love it, let me follow you on twitter bro
>>6349264
good stuff
>>6348822
>>6350640
great paneling man
is this a commission or do you monetize it somewhere?

>>6350921
Mumussy or mussy?
Idk those feel better imo.

>/salt/ now comes with its own user-created advertisements
time of death right about now

lick

>>6350981
What does that even mean what are you referring to?

>>6351163
all answers can be found on my p@treon teehee ;D

>>6351201
did anyone even shill their patreon here? why are you so upset over nothing?

drawing this chick on her back has been insanely hard and her face still looks a little off. any comments on the panelling, the background, anything really? it looks very amateurish right now

>>6350981
Literally anyone's work they post is an implicit advertisement unless they post nowhere else on the internet, get over yourself.

>>6341137
i have returned
sometimes I do better with no reference for some reason

>>6351253
It looks confusing. I dont know if the guy is a giant since he looks big in the right panel but small compared to the left one. I would have scaled/move upwards the right panel so the guy's shoulders wont be at the same height of her shoulders. Also the fact that both panels share the same background just reinforces this illusion.

>>6350921
thank you paneling is something i always try to improve cause i feel i struggle with it
this is just something i really wanted to do for a personal project

>>6347340
her upper arms are a bitt too irregular.
girth and length are quite different

otherwise good

>>6351539
yeah i see how wonky they are now thank you ill try to fix em up

>>6351201
Great loser mentality right there buddy.

>>6351163
The beglet is just upset because his work isn't good enough to be marketable.

>>6351463
shitting hell I see what you mean. he's like 7ft tall and she's a gnome. I'll try resizing and redrawing it so he looks consistent. i need to read some more hentai to know how it's done

>>6344059
Where is his foreskin?

>>6351457
good shit

gotta detour and do a painting today

Happy Halloween!

>>6353194
painted

workin on shite to digitize because i can't free hand anything good on digital :'' (

>>6354081

sorry

>>6354083

>>6340191
Im trying to get better at line weight. If anyone has any crits Id appreciate them.

>>6354083
COOM and SOVL

>>6354154
lineweight can be studied like anything so grab some references and get practicing. there are rules of thumb like heavier lines for things closer to the 'camera', which would work really well here, showing weight, so emphasising the ass on the bottom, showing interaction between forms like with the hands, etc. nice expression on her, his head looks too 'far' into her body, if you flip the canvas you'll see what I mean
>>6354083
super cute, not sure about how short her torso is or how low her shoulders look, or how the nipples are defying gravity like that.
>>6353973
you've been challenging yourself with these more interesting perspectives and angles, and that's a tough couple of interacting poses, good job dude. not sure what to comment on besides personal taste stuff; it feels like it should be cropped/zoomed in more because the negative space seems to detract attention to the good bits, and that stark dark tunnel seems distracting.
>>6353962
idek what to say about this it's really well done, I love how you shade and you have a good mix of straights and curves in your forms. it's so nice to look at. well done on 20k!
>>6353798 >>6353194
really nice dynamic angle and forms, nice shapes in the rendering, I really can't argue with anything here as it's beyond my scope, though I'd nitpick her left arm looking shorter than her right, and her eyes not quite looking like they're focused on the book (though that might be intentional). amazing work as usual, it's inspiring!
>>6353206
nice job on the composition here, it looks intimate in that sexy/scary kinda way. all the detail and focus seems to be on the hands as the rest of the character is shaded quite simply, there's not much form definition around the face though the eyes look nice and expressive. also not sure if it's my monitor but it looks too dark overall and a lil hard to read, play around with brightness/contrast adjustments before finishing, it's extra juice you can squeeze out of already good piece.

Redrawing this one with more movement, thanks to the anon who suggested I change this up. I appreciate it.
>>6344756
She looks really cute, I love the color of her hair and the color of her eyes. This is really nice.
>>6343671
>>6345049
>>6345053
>>6351253
Seeing as how you're almost finished, I would just finish this up. Keep these points in mind for the next drawing. Put her hands laid flat on her tits and draw the nipples closer to each other to convey a more squished boob job. The problem with drawing him seven feet tall is that you're not going to find, right away at least unless you really dig deep, a reference picture you're looking for that helps portray that. You're going to have to use a lot of imagination and that's okay, find a reference picture similar to what you want to draw and exaggerate it. Because we don't know what kind of emotion you want your blue haired character to show, we can't tell you is that's right or wrong. Is she giving off that, is this all you got look to her face, or is she surprised that her tits even fit around it? Only you know what you want her to feel. Construction wise it's fine, just give her feeling. Hope this helps.
>>6345094
If you want to, maybe around her waist and moving upwards across her body if you'd like. Be careful around the armpit area, is looks like her arms are barely hanging on to her shoulders by a little bit of flesh. I would probably get rid of the feet, only because the heels don't look right. She looks better sitting down, but that's just my opinion. I hope you finish this up.
>>6345133
>>6349167
These are really cute. I like them.
>>6346688
It looks good, I'd probably draw the fingers up and over her breasts, like the other anon I mentioned before, to help convey the squish.
>>6347221
Good attitude, anon. Trying something new won't automatically garner the kind of attention you want right away, but it gives you the practice you need. Keep going.
>>6347871
I like this one too. She's like, what the fuck?

>>6348615
This has that European, Eros Comix vibe from back in the late 80's and early 90's. That's really fucking cool, nice work.
>>6351732
I couldn't comment on my last reply here >>6354543 but I like your work! It's really nice to see drawings like these from time to time, keep drawing and keep practicing!
>>6354083
Cute Usagi, anon. And great representation of being able to use reference material for both the pose and the character, with your drawing, in one photo. Beginners lurking here should do the same, and not be afraid of using either. Very nice work.

>>6350981
>God forbid poor artists advertise their works to make any money that enables them to do what they love for a living.
crab

>>6354673
there's already plenty of sites for that, to use the last place you can get unfiltered, anonymous feedback as another hole to drop fully finished, watermarked work is just a waste. and I can think that, and you can think otherwise, who gives a fuck, really, don't reply to me anymore I was just crabbing, you're right.

what do you guys do when you're waiting on commission requests and you have nothing to post? do you default to making some fanart, fotm etc? I was thinking of doing that, and posting some polls so people can up my engagement a little, or to have open requests for oc/fanart pieces

>>6340191
trying to repurpose my studies into elves idk

>>6354083

sgoin; ty for all the nice comments i appreciate it : )
>>6354129
>>6354156
>>6354362
>>6354558

>>6354789
that shading on her lower cheek looks a lil awkward, but in general nicely done, specially that stomach area. don't forget some cast shadows between ear and hair, face and right shoulder, etc those are little gems that help sell the depth of the picture. if you use this for some background practice too it could be a really nice finished piece, can't think of anything for context besides her maybe washing herself in a lake or something

>>6354860
cute! linework seems a bit rushed though, watch out for having really thick lines 'inside' the sillhouette they detract from the focal points.

>>6354543
I'm liking all the big and lil shapes for her hair and pompoms, and there's a bit more gesture here too, good job anon. thanks for the feedback too, I did finish those two and got another comm for that same gnome character for a cute lil pinup.

>>6350921
I agree with the other anon, mumussy sounds better

>>6353973
you really need to learn how to feather your lines properly, right now it just looks like your characters have really wrinkly skin or they're covered in shrink-wrap or something

>>6348615
needs work but I love the style

TEACH ME HOW TO COLOR TUMMY NOW

>>6354914
That's my exact feeling but I didn't have words
You dont have to draw every slight surface variation in the skin. You know your underlying anatomy but you don't have to draw all of it. You can omit detail for appeal in a lot of places, especially in the forearms if the person doesn't have super low body fat. I think broadening the chest/forearms would better demonstrate that this is a muscular person than the muscle detail imo. Play with your silhouettes more

Interesting background though. I agree with anon that you could get away with zooming in a bit more if this isn't the establishing shot of a comic. If it is, it works and I can understand the NTR plot happening

>>6354543
Finished with a little letter type thrown in.
>>6354860
THICC Usagi for the fucking win.
>>6354870
Thanks for the kind words anon, I'm glad to hear that you're moving on to the next piece. Nice THICC slice of gnome-y cheesecake. Keep learning and keep drawing. :)

>>6354362
thanks! and i wanted the distance to kinda show the reason why they might not have noticed Emil as they were caught up together, but you make a good point, might see if i can make the tunnel darken as it goes deeper but lighten the entrance
>>6354914
fair, i might try to see what lines i can remove to make it look more supple and less defined
>>6355060
it's not the start of a comic, tho i've had ideas for that before, but i'm glad the pic scans like i want it to

>>6354938
https://youtu.be/LgpF_pRB42w

>>6354860
>>6355067
You both need to study anatomy more. You basically draw blobs without a care in the world for proportions, muscles attachments, skeleton landmarks, etc.
Do you draw fat girls on purpose because of that?

>>6344409
how would you do this with just a pencil?

i'm the sailor moon anon

>>6355164

Not really, but kinda.
I've studied vilppu, loomis but i dont know how to make it mesh well with boner inducing proportions

>>6355912
nta but its astounding how you put down so much effort only to fail so badly kek

oozing out pshhhhhh

>>6356145
fucking hellfire goodjob on the linework, the tattoos and pubes especially. i'm using this as inspo cause mine looks so plain in comparison
>>6355912
cute again but it does look rushed, it would be good to see your work when you really take your time anon
>>6355398
this looks professional man I don't even know what to say. the motion/impact lines look like so much work but they paid off

>>6356145
You messed up the most important part. Use references instead of guessing. Also the cum looks too solid and more like slime.

>>6355912
so this is how you're supposed to draw... I just paint everything and it takes me days to do a single figure.

I'm trying to paint the torso in an atractive way, based on a reference I found here weeks ago.
ngl, i don't kow what the hell i'm doing now. I'm walking in circles.

>>6355912
Bro go copy Mogudan or other artist that you like

Sample of mogudan

>>6355912
anon, why are you putting so much effort on your structure if you're just gonna end up covering it all up with fat? you do know most of "dood le thick" artists just eyeball this stuff, right?

>>6356204
holy fuck man, that's great advice, thank you so much! will update

>>6356442

Goddamn I love mogudan, though I think Takeda Hiromitsu is up there too

>>6356475

It's not really effort, and I don't do it for thicc girls, I was just trying to illustrate to >>6355164
that I somewhat know anatomy

desu pic related i do the following more, i use the kabbalah tree of life to kinda get the proportions how i want

>>6357574
brilliant meme but useless for anything that isn't a T/A pose?

>>6355398
wan more page

>>6356169
it has been a lot of work detailing everything
i wanted to try to see how much i can get done with just line and not relying on screen tone later
though i might still put some on itll be very sparingly

>>6357607
>useless for anything that isn't a T/A pose?

you're not wrong there, i basically use it to come up with random poses because i literally see poses within the tree.

its a glorified 2d manikin but it works for me idk

>>6356415
she looks slightly cross-eyed, the rendering is great, nice hard and soft edges, though if the lighting is supposed to be coming from above the boobas need some cast shadows under them, I may be misreading it though
>>6357574 >>6357716
this is strangely interesting, whatever works for you. you draw cute faces.
>>6357653
your panelling and composition is really nice here too, I don't do nearly enough sequential/story-oriented stuff, were there any doujins/artists that influenced this kinda work?
>>6356169
some brogress

>>6357730
vadass/oltlo has always been someone i look up to for their doujin paneling
but i guess i dont really follow any one in particular when it comes to doing it myself

>>6357574
This pseudo science crap explains a lot about why your art looks like crap.

>>6357716
This makes no sense whatsoever. You are either a lazy troll or a very crazy person.

>>6358157
mohg NO THAT’S A CHILd MOHG NO!

>>6355912
>>6357574
That's really cute anon, I like the curves. :)
>>6357730
She's coming out really cute anon, are you planning on coloring her, too?
>>6355164
Yeah, I could definitely use more practice. Thanks for the challenge. :)

>>6359212

>>6359212
>Yeah, I could definitely use more practice. Thanks for the challenge. :)
You didn't answer the question. Is fat a crutch for you?

>>6359481
Well, let's go back and see if I answered your previous questions with the drawing I put up in this post here >>6359212
>You both need to study anatomy more.
You are absolutely correct. I feel any artist should really take the time to study anatomy in order to draw figures correctly first, and then learn to exaggerate them.
>You basically draw blobs without a care in the world for proportions, muscles attachments, skeleton landmarks, etc.
I gave two examples, side by side, on how learning things like proportions on the face—first learned—can GREATLY benefit learning how to draw in an anime style of the artist's choice. It is VITAL for any beginner to know, and learn this. I also feel, that if you were to break down, or red line the bodies I presented (with several mistakes of course if you really find them which I know exist, my artwork's not perfect) much of the muscle attachments and skeletal landmarks can be easily identified. If they're not present, I'll definitely take note of that and do my best to improve on that with my next drawing, and not dwell on this particular drawing, any more than I should.
>Do you draw fat girls on purpose because of that?
I draw my OC fat because I choose to, not because of my, without a care in the world for basic fundamentals. Do I always put them down in practice, not as much as I should. I should do that more.
>>6359481
>You didn't answer the question. Is fat a crutch for you?
No, it's not. Can I draw fat better on my Curvy Brunette, oh fuck yeah, absolutely. Like Bob Ross once said, all you have to do, is practice. But if these answers don't satisfy you, don't be shy, throw out another challenge! These are fun and are a great way to learn! Hell, I'll even draw it in your style, or Loomis. haha! Either way, thanks for the critique, I really appreciate it. :)

>>6359629
I'm not sure why you had to go on a preambule just to answer a simple question.
I was just curious if you use fat as a mean to mask the lack of anatomical knowledge, like some artists hide hands or feet.
>>6359629
>No, it's not.
That's all I needed. Thx.

>>6359828
I hope you can see how asking the way you did only made me want to answer you with detailed information, which you deserve, rather than me just answering, "No, it's not." like a condescending prick know it all. No hard feelings, let's draw some smut. :)

Shantae!

>want to draw my ocs and whatnot fucking instead of just writing about it
>get too horny to finish, too shy to post it or don’t know what I’m doing
what do?

>>6360131
if you get too horny to finish, that's a great sign first of all, and second, finish it another time?
if you're too shy to post it, idk what to say there, if you feel it wouldn't suit your online account then don't, that's only you can answer, but if you want to post it here you're anonymous and that's the best part about 4chin in general
and if you don't know what you're doing, study whatever you think you need. look through boorus, hentai foundry, look for art you want to emulate and study.
but posting your work is almost always the best thing to do because, even if we're super harsh, you'll probably get a good idea of what you need to improve, posting your work and your "ideal" is even better, or at least tell us what it is specifically you want to improve

>>6359912
The abdomen is lit incorrectly it makes it look too flat and oddly shaped
Since it's such a focal point it should be tightened up

>>6340191

Scribble I’m working on trying to get used to a pen

>>6360131
>what do?
You grow up.

I finished this yesterday

>>6360193
i didn’t really think about solely posting here or looking at boorus. i’ll go study and hopefully come back with something
>>6360881
okay

>>6357738
hot

bump

Working on this but I might not have time to finish it soon

Old stuff I made like 3 or 4 months ago.

>>6363041
>>6362992
>>6362548
>>6361446
sick

gonna go through and fix up some pages then add some tone

>>6363214
Those are some good friends.

My proportions experiment in 3d. Ignore the bad elbow deformation, this one is just a decimated sculpt

>>6363588
this ain't /3/ and you already got lots of feedback in /agdg/ fren. this general is for drawn porn
the limbs look far too long and I'm not sure why you're posting for more crits here cause you just told people it was on purpose

>>6363214
I know I should be grossed out by this but she just looks like she is having such a fun time, good for her

>>6363588
Breasts don't press together in the middle, when there is no support on the sides (bra or arms). There should be a clearly defined space between them when they are resting.
Start using references and especially your brain.

>>6363214
Redraw that anus

>>6359212
thanks anon still trucking along, re-lined it, gotta make her more muscley, gotta actually study rendering cause I wanna challenge myself instead of always cell-shading
I think I said you draw cute faces before but those are the best ones imo, they really suit the rest of the detail and are really expressive

I don’t like the tits. What’s would look better for this pose? More sag closer together? Forgive the size faggotry

Dorf

A drawthread request

>>6357944

No u

commission

comm i just finished

hi anons, vanillafag here. my life's goal is to draw good pinups. here is my last piece. i think i fucked up basic proportions before autistically shading. i also think i need to spend more time learning construction. comments/critiques? help a horny anon improve.

>>6367544
Wow how long did that take you also blog please?

felt like trying something different for a change, how i do?

>>6367713
Try copying another artists style for an image or two

>>6367544
a few things, the dick is too high, the balls need more form and the dick head needs more size variety looks flat, her fat distribution is kinda weird too. oh and the hand/arm with the precum sling has a weird shape to it

>draw something I think is hot
>just keep looking at it/making small changes all day
I thought no-nut was supposed to make you more productive not less

>>6367875
If you think with your dick instead of using your brain, then no amount of abstination can help you.

>>6367867
how do you do backgrounds?

I like exploring the construction of the anatomy on the first attempt but I felt I stiffened the gesture so I gave it another shot. I'm missing a lot of the shapes I liked in the first attempt but I think I got the gesture better. Maybe this isn't /salt/y enough for /salt/ but the original thread died so maybe you can jack off to this if NNN is being particularly brutal to you.

>>6367840
I'll take that to mean it lacks appeal then , coom isn't my forte in the slightest so i will consider that next time i draw it. Thanks.

>>6368206
Oh no it’s fine, I completely misread your post. I thought you were asking how to change your style. My bad

>>6367543
Blog?

>>6368387
if you look really closely there is a perfectly legible name on the top left

I missed drawing. Full time work sucks but cenno won't pay for rent. I just want to neet.

>>6368362
it's still good advice to give as I've been trying to improve my style for the past couple of days. Thanks anyways.

Drew some Bowser. I wanted to draw more multi-character stuff.

this is tame but it feels dumb putting horny art in the regular /alt/ anyway

is there any point in doing those mass replies anymore? I know it's nice to get Yous but 90% of the time either the work is already done and the artist won't even see it or they don't even bother replying. and I don't want to just give everyone a pat on the ass again without some crits, but the crits are entirely subjective so, who cares? and if there's no point giving crits and most artists treat this this like some other booru and make sure they're little signature is very subtly in the piece somewhere, what's the point of the general? just post in the socials and get it over and done with, and you'll probably get more followers from there. there's no study, no discussion of what makes something sexy, no wips bar from a few anons whose work goes unnoticed, no studies of other artists, just finished piece -> blog? or finished piece -> nothing. read up or through the last thread and tell me I'm wrong. there are crits, and some discussion,. but they're so few we might as well migrate to the beg/int thread and abandon this.
go read through alt, which is on page 8, and see it's the same over there. a wip, no replies, a finished piece, a couple of "blogs?"

tldr I expect too much from this place but lament how good it could be to equally shit on and raise each other's work given we're anonymous and the other sites we post our work are hugboxes and danger zones where you wouldn't even think to say anything besides "wow cute!" to no artistic development whatsoever.

call me all the names you want and also please let me know if there are forums where actual discussion goes on rather than being another image dump.

>>6347439
these feel like they all use similar references. I wonder what the originator is for this I see this exact pose all the time

>>6369781
if you're the guy from the last thread, none of your "critiques" were useful at all.

>>6369887
no I'm not the subjective angsty crit anon I'm the crit sandwiched in compliments with some useful tips who gets no love on his own wips and has given up all hope in this general anon

>>6369889
usually if you ask again someone will say something, also helps if you ask specific questions rather so people can help you more directly

>>6369781
in my case I really got no room to comment on anyone's work. I know the theory but putting it all together is so far kind of beyond me. I drew this during the /v/ musical for one of them (sadly it wasn't picked), and it made me realize how all the knowledge I got rattling around is worth fuck all in practice, so I am mostly grinding out the basics and atm thinking what I want my style to look like. Ideal would be Buru but he's been at it for a decade and I got no idea about the method he uses...

>>6369781
a lot of people dont offer crit in general for whatever reason
id imagine a lot of people dont because they feel they cant offer anything worthwhile or dont care to type something out

theres only so much telling someone "work on anatomy," will do since its something that takes a while to get fruitful results

from all the places ive tried to get feedback in general it kind of ends up like here anyways
when i think back to the times people say crits were better here was because there was one or a small handful of people putting in a lot of effort to show mistakes on each piece by redrawing and offering in depth solutions to the issues on each piece like teal

people either dont want to spend the time to write up/draw a proper critique for the specific piece or feel they cant because of their skill level
it is unfortunately expecting a lot and unless others put in some work too theres only so much one person would be able to do

>>6365931
I have no idea what I'm doing, I don't even wanna post this but I need the harsh crits. I liked how this was looking yesterday and thought I could finish it today but I feel like restarting, for the third time now. That wip had more soul than this, and this looks overworked and muddy, and honestly I'm not sure what to do. do I revert back to the flats and linework and just go back to cell shading? do I keep on stubbornly through trying to render this like I see others do, over the linework and everything? it doesn't look like I'm ready to render yet, I don't have a consistent workflow and my layers are a mess :( but I've spent about 6-7 hours on this already, only for it look worse than the initial sketch which had more energy and appeal. this is suffering man

>>6370538
Best advice I ever heard was to do 100 drawings instead of 1 really detailed drawing. I say look up a bunch photos of a similar pose to this and try doing them in a quick sketch, compare and contrast what works and what doesn’t. You’ll improve quickly if you fail faster. Don’t get discouraged either, I think every artist knows the feeling of spending way too long trying to make something look good

>>6369781
I would also like to know where actual discussion takes place. I posted a piece I was really proud of looking to improve but no one wants to crit :(

>>6370617
same here. If there's a conceptart equivalent for coomers I'd love to know about it.

>>6370617
which one

>>6370650
>>6367684

>>6368890
anon do you have a dick because this is not how dicks work

>>6367684
while there are some proportional issues id say most of the issues are with anatomy and perspective

starting with the face the eyes are too high up on the head they can be brought down
the right eye also extends too far towards the side of the face for this angle
youd see some more of the side of the eye socket/skin as opposed to the eye overlapping that area

the nose angle is too harsh the bridge is denting in too far you should use a similar angle to how the brow connects down to the cheek on the side of the face near the eye

the sternocleidomastoid is going up into her chin instead of wrapping around the cylinder of the neck behind the ear

the clavicle on the right seems to either connect into the shape of the shoulder or you didnt put a shoulder in because of the ribcage extending up there
either way you want to wrap that clavicle back in perspective around the form of the ribcage
while you wouldnt see much shoulder at all you should still see some especially because her deltoids seem to be big

breasts also spread wider apart when they arent supported by a bra the one on the left side could aim at the viewer or at least you should have the nipple head on pointing towards the left instead of the right

the elbow is too blocky and looks long because of the line on the bottom of the arm (which is a muscle indication) plus the elbow might just be a bit too long regardless

the hands are pretty big which can be fine if you want them to be but its worth noting that theyre generally smaller

the crotch sis too high up unless she has a big bush that goes up her abdomen
think about how it could wrap down and between her legs

the last thing that is more of a personal thing is to color your lines inside the silhouette
when i see black lines indicating the obliques and stomach it reads as a harsh crevice when in actuality it wouldnt be
so coloring your lines there closer to the skin tone would help it sink in and not look so deep

>>6370956
Now that’s what I’m talking about! Thank you for the very substantive reply. I am going to study all these points to improve. I greatly appreciate all the effort and time it took to analyze the piece and post this. Perspective is my least fav fundie and I am always sleeping on it. I think I need to draw more boxes and cylinders as a part of my initial construction to get a handle on it. Lately I’m winging it with shapes instead of forms and it’s showing. I really appreciate you letting me know where the body landmarks are off too, it gets hard to tell after looking at it for so long. Thanks again anon

>>6370538
>>6370612
wish I had that advice when I first started this out, there was so much time wasted on fixing stuff like gesture and anatomy that should've been right from the start. sorry for spamming this piece over and over but I'm quite happy with this now

I'm doing something from imagination to try to push myself, definitely bit off more than I could chew by also doing it in perspective, but I feel like I'm learning a lot. Trying to add some 50's-ish banana titties to her. As rough as it is, I'm actually pretty proud of it because it's better than I thought I would be able to do.

>>6370879
Lol, noted. I saw problems and I tried to fix it up before I posted. Apparently not well!

>>6371150
big improvement on the colors, nice stuff

>>6340258
I like it, I like it a lot,
I am inferior
>>6340357
the fabric looks fine

>>6371550
You're trying to cover up a lot of gaps in your knowledge of anatomy with the cropping. Force yourself to confront that.

>>6367984
mind sharing that ref homie?

>>6367984
Also, not an expert, but Id recommend lines inside the outermost contours to be thinner.

We need more hot Shovel Knight art.

>>6371552
I didn't crop anything, I just started drawing like that for the sake of stylisation without any struct or pose layout, that is all, but sure I appreciate the 'advice' anyway

finished this one up
abs are so hard to render

>>6371640
lol okay dude

>>6369927
I'll try to be direct in asking for crits, I guess it does discourage people if you're too vague. and equally I'm happy to continue giving crits if someone mentions something they specifically need help on

we wippin

>>6371645
you want to avoid closing off the breast in a shape with lines like the left one
it reads as a big circular blob floating in front of the chest instead of part of the chest
the right one looks real nice and has a nice connection into the body


>>6371640
>I just started drawing like that for the sake of stylisation without any struct or pose layout
can you elaborate on that more? i dont think i quite understand what you mean by that
regardless though how that other anon suggested you cropped it i think their line of thought was that you drew more to it then cropped it
which is a good practice to draw through even things that arent gonna end up on the page so you understand them properly and how they connect to the rest of the body

will I draw pussies more accurately if I have sex?

>>6371856
just look in the mirror lol

Dwarf priest!

>>6371930
are you drawing through when you draw the clothing items like the gold bands on her arm, legs and waist?
they look flat since they dont curve around the form of the body properly

>>6371571
https://archived.moe/ic/thread/6352937/#6352939

>>6371871
brutal

>>6371645
thats cool. if i'd give any criticism, its your construction lines of the muscles left behind (top shoulder, leg on right) when you already have it rendered. good piece though

Guy's; i feel so humiliated because every big nsfw artist from this thread and 4chan follows me but they don't retweet or even interact with my artwork that i post. I have to assume that they like me to some extent because it's been almost 2 or more years now and they still haven't left me. And there's even some random nsfw people following my safe for work profile too so that's totally different compared to my other profile. i actively use my twitter to comment on much larger profiles in my spare time who are genuinely nice to me but i'm still stuck at 200 followers because like i said. nobody shares my stuff. Are they waiting for a masterpiece from me? because they're not gonna get it since i save the good stuff for my patreon only. i don't even follow or interact with these people. this is so confusing;
My skill level is around average. i just draw poorly drawn anime with some funny ideas. So people with lower skill level retweet me and anybody higher just floats around me forever watching from the shadows. can't they get some new friends?
>stop liking my retweets!
i want to draw stuff for cool people. not for people that can already draw for themselves. like wtf. go somewhere else.

>>6372520
Not sure if this is bait, but have you tried drawing fanart of their OCs?

>>6372520
there's a feature to remove followers if it bothers you this much. Go to their twitter then hit the 3 dot menu then hit remove follower.

>>6372520
do you draw nsfw at all?
a nsfw accounts audience wouldnt really even like or retweet something that isnt nsfw anyways

also big artists from /ic/ either dont retweet anything in general or only their close friends

>>6372529
i've specifically avoided doing that because people have said that my characters are their favorites so i've just drawn my own stuff. and it also seems petty for somebody like me to do that since i'm a millennial. i'll think about it

>>6372520
you said you were quitting that account yesterday?

Recent thing.

Can someone critique the anatomy? I thought it looked ok lining but after coloring it just looks fucked. I’ve been looking at it too long idk

Also the tits still irritate me

sketchy wip, couldn’t quite find what i had in mind on the booru but whatever. looking to get some crit before i polish it but i can clean it up now if it’s too messy

Is there such a thing as "too /d/ for /salt/?"

>>6372746
No? This is a thread for anyone drawing smut

>>6372649
Do you think about adorning yourself over and above your 'tunics of skins' ?

>>6372802
...what?

>>6372864
just what comes to mind when seeing the same image in these threads

I'm really struggling with leg anatomy, can anyone give me some pointers?

>>6371454
this is going better than I thought it would, this took about 15 minutes. I haven't "really" studied perspective yet so I'd love some pointers.

>>6371454
this is going better than I thought it would, this took about 15 minutes. I haven't "really" studied perspective yet so I'd love some pointers.

>>6340191
what do you guys think?

>>6373062
Draw her doing it in the shower

>>6360887
I think I’ve seen your art on this board for over 3 years and it hasn’t once developed, or changed, it’s pretty impressive

>>6373087
My favorite is when someone says "Hey, you should do this helpful thing" and he goes "Okay, I will do that thing" and then he just doesn't

>>6373087
>>6373095
Gainsgoblin has definitely improved. Stop crabbing.

>>6371677
Style looks familiar. Socials?

>>6372690
It looks mostly fine. Id say you need to practice more on legs and feet (make them more anatomically accurate, learn construction)but most people do. Personally I would've drawn the breasts a bit lower as well as more full and round.
You should be able to keep going and show more form by shading.

>>6373240
@reloadhb on twizzler

experimented with line color

>>6373554
the dick kind of looks like it's going
>BOIIIIIIII

>>6373554
If awooga was a penis

>>6373280
Thanks I made a few corrections I'm leaving the legs alone though just because I've spent too much time on this and need to move on. Much appreciated!

>>6340191
>my image being used as the OP
That freakin made my day, thank you. What do you guys think of this one?

>>6374098
(Ah, I forgot the context. The cow girl didn't know the little guy was still at her house so she undressed because it was too hot)

i painted a butt

Practice because I don't normally draw humans
I struggle a lot with color and shading, any thoughts or advice?

Here's another one.

I feel like something is wrong with her shoulders/torso/neck. Perhaps her tits are way up high.

>>6374205
take the time to match the jpeg image(background) with your drawing.
>I struggle a lot with color and shading
>any thoughts or advice?
Study helps, specially from 3D models. Also, use reference.

>>6371677
>you want to avoid closing off the breast in a shape with lines like the left one
thanks, yeah I kind of agree, but I wanted to try that here because of the suit. Applied your crit on another comm I'm working on tho. it's much smarter to define the boob with shading anyways

>>6372494
thanks bro :)

>>6374205
Looks pretty good to me anon, though personally I feel like from that angle I should be seeing some slight pink of her pussy showing. Having a little bit of labia showing has the potential to be much hotter than a simple coin slot.

new bread >>6375011