/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

looking for a lil feedback friends

If you draw pornography you’ll never improve because coom rots the brain and robs you of sovl. Also the Lord will send you to hell.

yep cum

>>6259281
Don't shit up the generals, nigger.

>>6259281
i'd agree, i'm not drawing my passion projects anymore because i'm staring at asses all the time.

>>6259265
That's a very cool style dude, remembers me of graffiti. You could work a bit more on the legibility and maybe the tone down the glowing outlines.

>>6259265
I think your style is cool as well, and I like the colors on this. The only thing I might like to see changed is the face; it's a little too silly as opposed to cute or alluring

>>6259328
Thanks bro. And i do actually do a lot of graffiti! Glad it carried though

>>6259252
>OP
finally so good fucking coom. great work

>>6259358
Yeah, but it's tainted with "genshin impact" a free to play mobile game that encourages unhealthy and grindy gameplay habits.
The artwork could be put to better use towards more underappreciated things.

>>6259400
>this gooning material is promoting unhealthy behavior
uhhh...

>>6259400
this is /ic/ not /v/ nigger who the hell cares about any of that shit

>>6259566
I cannot masturbate or draw art due to money insecurities. I will rant on /v/ instead.

What should i improve

>>6259741
your taste

>>6259754
What's wrong with it

reposting this for any more feedback before I get back to work on it

>>6259741
your subject matter. Draw something that's sexier.

>>6259829
Do you mean the character, or the pose?
>>6259827
I think its pretty good
The girls belly on the left looks a little distended
If youre gonna crop to the box I think you shouldn't, because having the character on the right's forehead, hair, and other cheek in the pic would improve it, also lower legs for the right girl would be nice

>>6259827
Seems cool. But shouldn't there be visible nipples. And are they wearing swimsuits?

>>6259836
how it is now is how it will be cropped. I might zoom in a bit. that inside box is just a part of the default canvas crop lines

>>6259838
they're measuring each other. I can add a bit of areola tho

>>6259741
the face is not appealing

Working on conveying horniness. Still not happy with that. I can draw someone sexy but its kinda boring imo

doing this comm of someone's ffxiv char and a mindflayer. is it looking too crowded? still gotta fit a speech bubble in too

>>6259827
looks very nice. Maybe you could show some more dimension on the right girl's left arm? it looks a little flat to me.

>>6259932
you have a decent understanding of form when you're drawing figures, but the faces are lacking in structure. Bottom left girl is the worst offender. Apart from structure, your faces need to be more expressive in general. Middle top girl is supposed to be embarrassed, but her expression looks kind of blank.

Lastly, I think your poses are lacking in terms of eroticism. They're all just kind of standing around not doing anything. I'm posting a krekkov drawing that also has a girl just standing around yet it feels very intense and horny. Try to study it yourself and see what you observe.

An anon last thread posted the middle drawing and I love the hips/butt and am trying to grasp the pelvis they’re built on. Still feels like I don’t have it quite right.

If you’re here anon, would you share youre ‘base’? Do you use a skeleton or forms to find the figure?

>>6260084
I think the blue one is closer, here’s the overlay. Seems like the tilt of the birth canal still isn’t right

>>6259252
The anime faces make me cringe

I liked the way this one turned out.

>>6260096
And this is one I did today but it’s pretty rushed. I’m only really satisfied with the head here

>>6260062
this one's really good

lots of butts, strong start to the thread

>>6259827
redrew kuroeda but I still think something is off.

>>6260155
AH! this is fantastic!! blog??

>>6260162
the redaw is better because she adheres to the perspective and has a less cartoony ass (though its less plump which is sad, a necessary sacrifice)
but the arm on the girl on the left is worse now. if her arm is outstretched straight, at this angle it makes it look like her arm is extremely short, and her shoulder is at a weird angle. so what you should do is lower her shoulder slightly and set it further back. her bicep should go further into the back behind her torso, and her forearm should come forward.

I just hit the 5 month mark. Am I making decent progress?

>>6260199
better than what I was making at that point

>>6260198
I'll try that.

>>6260162
-On right girls ass, her vagoo shouldnt be visible. The way you have it drawn implies that her pelvis is rotated 90 degrees likes shes bent over, which doesnt match her upper body.

- On right girl since you moved her left leg forward (at least thats what it looks like), her butt cheek crease should be flattened out/modified to reflect that.

- Left girls arm looks off because of the added line intersections near her elbow. Her arm reads better in your first drawing, even though its a bit scratcy because the lines arent there, and theres some implied detail with the horizontal elbow crease

>>6260246
I changed the hand aswell. showed a bit of the bottom of it so it fits the angle more. tried your changes aswell. hope this helped.

>>6260246
I changed the hand aswell. showed a bit of the bottom of it so it fits the angle more. tried your changes aswell. hope this helped.

just me, or are vaginas really unaesthetic?

>>6260062
>>6260107
Something about krekkov's stuff I just don't like it. It's well drawn but it's not that cute. Sure the bodies look nice but they also look like glossy garbage bag textures. The hair is white. And the faces are intentionally monstrous? Overall 4/10

>>6260833
if you are gay yes

>>6260875
I have never seen one rendered well in 2d or 3d

>>6260155
this character is fuck ugly

>>6260833
I hate this meme so much, who started this?
If you’re a healthy straight male then vaginas looks good both sexually and in a non-sexual aesthetic way.

>>6260972
>I hate this meme so much, who started this?
gays and people who don't get enough ass I noticed. obviously, some vagina look far better than others but pretending that everything that isn't tiny clit and barely their labia is barf tier is just juvenal.

>>6260084
Anon I won't lie, I bullshitted that ass and was fueled only by the power of "Hey, this looks kinda nice. Also Kobeni deserves to have a dumper."
0 clue of it's correct or not

This is the earliest sketch i had then refined with another layer ontop.

>>6259941
you won't fit a speech bubble there without ruining the drawing.
expand canvas to the right. move the hand further away or draw more of the hand guy.

I feel like you drew the vagina opening too high. maybe double check the pose with reference and add a clit hood that fits your art style.
just google image search "full nelson vaginal".


pretty weird commision, but good drawing anon.

>>6260972
I disagree, vag looks pretty unappealing. That spreading pussy stuff they do in porn is such a turn off kek.

>>6260084

Thoughts? I think I fucked up on the leg restraints, they don’t look very tight at all.

>>6261440
is she supposed to be hanging from a rope or sitting down?

>>6261449
sitting down

>>6261452
I really like the line and brush work but, uh, those legs seem pretty fucked up to me. Pic is my opinion but im not an expert or anything.

I think in a pose like that the knees are usually pointing up, and should be coming towards the viewer

>>6261515
Thanks man, your redline looks really nice! I think I'll try redrawing the legs with your suggestion.

>>6259281
not my problem that the world feeds on lust and greed

A witch and her hat

>>6261174
Huh. Well it looks good. I hope I manage to draw nice butts soon

>>6261395
Lol I actually have this book. That's a male pelvis though

>>6261174
based. kobeni does deserve a dumper.

>>6261669
>model swoop tiddies
Hnnnngg!

>>6261669
Holy you’re a god mate

pretty happy with this commission. Probably one of the only clients whos OC I actually love

GILF doodle

Any comments or observations appreciated. This is probably my most ambitious piece so far. As it actually has a background that isn't a solid color.

>>6261930
perspective is off
adding more three dimensionality to your robot would also help your picture because you now have a 2d character in a 3d environment and they aren't coherent with each other
also add the cast shadow of the robot
since it's huge it should cast its shadow at least the whole area below it

your perspective is too extreme and warped where it shouldn't be i.e. in the foreground
object taller than the pov shouldn't have that extreme perspective as well

you probably added the bg after your drew the robot, right?

also, why the fuck would a robot even have the function to masturbate?

>>6261833
looks good, how much did you charge him?

>>6261712
What's model "swoop tiddies"? you know for research.

>>6261970
It's fanart of a pornhub animated series about mutants that grow as tall as buildings and the only way to cure them, well you get the idea.

Anyway yeah I don't know what I was thinking with the shadow. Seems pretty obvious now that you mention. As you guessed, I wasn't planning on adding a background at first until I got positive reception on the sketch.

>>6262021
check your light source though, you have tow suns

i did this in the meantime to give you an idea
shadow can help convey shape and scale

even environment cast shadows and think about the position of your characters in that environment and how they might be affected by and affect the environment.

>>6262028
That is very comprehensive, Thank you. If there's anything I need help on it's consistent shading.

>>6261833
Looks great. Nice to see more comic content.

>>6262011
I charge $160 for per page of full rendered comic content. I've been burnt out by larger comic projects so those cost a lot now. I'm considering providing this client with a permanent discount, they commission consistently and their OC is beautiful.

>>6262196
I have a whole monochrome comic in the works right now. It's what I want to push toward.

>>6262013
Picrel was the best I can find, but something like this.

>>6262223
i don't want to be a negative Nancy. but i'd say that a color illustration should be double that. getting that price is a different story i know that.
and i'm a little salty because i've only been commissioned for 10$ or just get ignored. if they really like the art they should be paying for the artist survivability. they should put money down to ensure more artwork in my opinion

>>6262257
ok, thanks, i'd thought that would just be perky. but it's growing on me now.

>>6262269
They're the perfect amount of perkiness without being too round or too small

>>6259265
nice, prompt?

>>6262266
I don't really have the reach to charge larger prices for my stuff. I could absolutely justify double digit prices for my work with my quality and experience at this point. but my goal is to cast a wider net to make sure I'm able to secure commissions and pay my rent. single illustrations are $80 which I think is a fine starting price. prices are bloated by extra character charges and backgrounds anyway.

If I still had 28k followers on twitter maybe I wouldnt need to worry but social media decided it wanted to keep me down

>>6262289
did you lose followers? or switched accounts?

>>6262329
sounds like he got banned

>>6262329
temp banned over false nintendo copyright strike
second time banned without warning over my banner. after that I was consistently banned on sight if I used the same username or even made similar posts. my first comeback account got to 28k, higher than my previous. in a second it was gone cause I posted art with the same caption as before.

>>6262332
>temp banned over false nintendo copyright strike
They're still doing this shit? One of my drawings got taken down in like 2016 for the same thing. I just reuploaded it without the nintendo tags and description and it was fine after that.

>>6259252
Visualize the scent

>>6262339
That sounds kinda stupid. Considering the fact that Japanese artist are drawing all types of shit with pokemon and selling it too at conventions yearly. I suspect that you might have a follower that successfully reported you out of spite. Or your coverbanner had nudity. Or maybe the tags too. I use Japanese tags and have changed my location to Japan too. What websites do you post on? Is it deviantart art or pixiv? I'm a literally nobody that's not popular at all: but I've been uploading contentious content like rape and young girls onto my patreon. Maybe it's because my art style doesn't strike a threat but it's all there for the very few people that see it. My followers are generally really nice and supportive so I just draw whatever I like. I'd consider myself a variety artist since I'm not very consistent.

>>6262276
Fag

i finished all 5 pages this week

WIP
>>6259252
love the line work+ rendering looks great

>>6262928
This is amazing. THe hand on the right might need a second pass through, but It won't matter too much as that amazing open ass and squishy thighs are very distracting.

Another thing is that the band of what I assume are stockings look like they're squeezing a 2D object and might need some more curvature to them. beyond that the proportions and everything look great. The left hand particularly looks very natural.

>>6259252
What's the prompt?

>>6262829
Yeah. I said a false strike anon. It was back in late 2020 when a bunch of people were recieving false strikes from moral fag american fans that were posing as nintendo lawyers. It was happening on patreon too and It wasnt just me.

>>6262888
Probably your best work so far. Not with drawing skill but with overall composition. Frames paneling. Monochrome. And whatever the the hell else is used for manga.

>>6262977
thank you (´;ω;`) we doin our best

I am currently doing this
Am I doing good?

>>6262993
Hmmmm

>>6263007
why did you just chicken scratch the fuck outta that?

>>6260088
This is the flavor of the era, either straight up aping Jap style or iterating on it

>>6263023
Overwatch has had far reaching and deep rooted influence on western erotic art.

>>6261669
very nice. the drips on the hat are interesting

>>6262853
Fellas... is it gay to like tits?

>>6261930
Another one of my pieces. I made this with intent to turn it into a mousepad.

Sorry for those that don't like futa. Just like...cover your eyes or something.

Anybody got hair pointers? I feel like I’m over thinking it something simple.

>>6263055
I think her hair is stylistically sound in accordance to the rest of the piece. I don't see how it could be drastically improved. She looks great anon.

>>6263060
Thanks I wasn’t sure if it meshed or stood out too much

>>6263015
I uhm, yeah idk.

microsoft paint smut

>You like boobs?? What are you, fucking gay?
>I'd love to sit on that massive girlcock!
The duality of /salt/

My most recent drawing.

>>6261262
thanks anon! I fixed the vagina you were right. it is a slightly weird comm, not the weirdest. The composition is still cramped but I'm choosing to keep the ratio. also I think the cramped feel kinda helps her 'trapped' feel if that makes sense

>>6263391
She's cute.
I'd do fanart of her

>>6263492
Why does Ankha have Rosie's face?

>>6263674
yep, definetly a good job. composition looks good too.

just finished this one from last thread

still working on getting past cell shading and rendering faces

>>6263758
Cool art and I love the expressions, but I think starfire face looks a bit weird and deformed. her left eye and face plain is too small and "behind", I did a quick edit of how I would do it.
But your Raven is incredible hot, really want to see it finished.

>>6263758
Cyborg's dick is extremely creative. Hate when people make it look like a strapon or just a normal dick.

The rest are rendered really well, but I agree with >>6263789 Starfire looks a little funny.

>>6263801
I think it's her face being squished up? I think it looks fine

also here are some speed sketches I did of a nameless pregnant cammer and one non pregnant one

wip for a comm, i'm happish with the line work but Is it arousing? I don't know.

>>6260192
ah, thanks. Makes me happy to hear it

>>6260937
Oh, never mind then

>>6264215
>but Is it arousing? I don't know.
Not reall, fix the face and do something with the hands.
It looks like you've put more work in the dude than the chick.

>>6264215
overall i like the perspective and you have put a lot of work in the dude and that sleeve, looks pretty cool. i've also seen your previous rat lady illustrations and am a fan! :)
but to start off, her tail looks kind of limp for someone who is currently orgasming. what if it's wrapped around the dudes torso and more tense instead? maybe pulling him closer into her? the arms also feel kind of strange hanging down limply like this.
the perspective on the face seems a bit strange to me. what is the dude doing with his left hand? the hand pose kind of suggests he is attempting to push her head down?

finished a Jill Valentine comm today

>>6262940
Thanks a lot man! Yeah, the right hand seems a bit stiff compared to the left one, and the stockings do seem a bit flat...
>>6264338
now that is really nice! Some anatomical mistakes though (the right leg seems a bit off, but the angle is difficult so it's fine, and the stomach seems a bit stiff), but seems really good otherwise

>>6264394
Agree with you on the legs. Although, the stiff stomach is on purpose. She’s a very athletic character

>>6264338
>t
if I paid money for that I'd be very happy.

>>6264338
wanna post twitter or whatever social you use to upload? I like your style

>>6264338
I couldn't help myself and tweaked some stuff that bother me.
First at all if you going for wide shoulders you need to be sure they are angled correctly,
on your drawing her left arrm looks a bit dislocated.
Belt is angled in wrong direction, even if its possible to appear like that its not good for flow.
Remember about volume of head and hair and proper placments of face features.
I mean yours all alright but not perfect. Also some anatomy can be improved.
Oh and thumb on ground hand is a bit too long, i didn't change it.

>>6264473
Hey thanks for pointing things out I didn’t even notice! I’ll be sure to keep it in mind next time. Great point about the shoulders. Agreed with you on the belt flow too. Thanks man!

>>6264473
the only arguable improvement to his drawing is the hip bone/belt area edit, other stuff is your preference.

>>6263789
Thanks for the crit, I think I may have borked the angle of the face a bit when sketching it out. Im used to drawing more photorealistic stuff so Im still working on stylizing things without messing up forms and construction.

>>6263801
Thanks, I was beginning to think I was spending too much time drawing a dick but Im glad the effort was appreciated lol. I was thinking of doing a cum version where his led screen said "booyah"

>>6259252
How long do you guys spend on a drawing?
Usually for me.
SFW = 4 hours.
NSFW = 12 hours or 2 days
Animation = Took 2 weeks.
I'm I doing alright? I think I'm retarded.

>>6265125
nah ur fine ive seen niggas who literally spend like four weeks on a drawing and sending pictures of it like "look what i added"
>literally just the same drawing but with a darkened line somewhere

it doesnt really matter how long you take as long as you are making some kind of progress

>>6265125
You spend longer on NSFW stuff? I'm guessing you get "distracted" while you work lol. Nah, but there's no need to worry. Your work time is about normal.
My stuff takes 30mins - 6hrs depending on the style and content.
Animation, whenever I dabble in it, takes me a week. And that's just one "scene".

>>6265154
Sometimes for nsfw I add extra stuff. But sometimes I get distracted so your right.

>>6265154
What are you drawing that only takes 30 minutes? That seems impossible

>>6260271
I dont understand the perspective of your hand. Use contour lines to show it to yourself.
Draw the ropes curved around the volumes to make the forms appear 3D.
Use the ropes to show the squishiness of the skin e.g. on the breasts.
Brest should be stretched more horizontally.
Base of the breast should be visible from this perspective.
Overlapping on the elbow of the girl in the front is wrong.
Use ropes to show perspective -> make them bigger towards the camera.

>>6265169
Small sketches, not too serious

>>6265125
It depends. If it's a commission of content that I despise it'll take weeks. The commission I'm working on now involves fetishes that don't appeal to me and characters that I don't have any attachment to. so it'll likely take a long time.

If its a piece I genuinely want to see finished it'll take only a few days.

How do I go about rendering/shading this? Should I do a separate layer for every color or an all-encompasing one? And what colors would even work for shading something like this?

cropped to follow the rules

>>6260246
>Vagoo
I've seen girls like that. They are weird to fuck.

>>6265415
I would use a lighter colour for the skin. When I have black-skinned characters I usually use a dark-purple or blue. Black for the shading.

If it's absolutely black like latex or something just focus on the highlights. Use real latex as a reference.

Beg noob here. I'm not sure if I'm disturbed or encouraged that the quality on this thread is better than most the board I've seen so far.
How many of you are actually making money? I'm not interested in a career change myself, but a back up plan is always good. I'm going to learn this shit for fun anyway.

>>6265449
If you're not already drawing consistently I wouldn't even think about it. I'm a pretty low tier artist who makes average $45 per commission and it's not a livable wage. Just keep your day job and do it as a hobby for some extra gas money or audience building.

For like a year before you start doing paid stuff I recommend doing all free work. And adjusting your plan depending on how in-demand you are.

>>6265177
ill tackle it again tonight anon. thanks!

>>6265454
>Keep your day job
Oh, for sure, but like what if some shit happens and I can't in a few years? I'm also not getting any younger and I trust social security as much as I trust the government, media, and doctors...
A few extra bucks here and there when I retire might make a huge difference. Hell, by then there might be a premium on physical art or something.
Anyway, I'm just drawing nearly every day for fun/therapy/boredom relief. I have a very boring job with significant down time. I spent nearly 90 minutes today fucking with trying to draw a nude woman. It's still not right, but the time flew by.

>>6265438
I wish I had a more developed procedure for it since this character has a prominent black/white contrast. Usually when one does skin it's easy to block in one range fo values, but here I don't know whether to shade parts individually or clipped on top of everything.

>>6265125
yeah thats probably about the same for me, but if its a bigger piece thats getting some more momentum, it could take longer and i would spread the hours out across multiple days. I try and make myself do some amount of art every day as part of my daily personal health checklist stuff.
i try to keep a balance between sfw and nsfw but it just depends on what im in the mood for.

Hey, /ic/. I would like some guidance on the hands and maybe the breasts before continuing, preferably redline. Thank you.

>>6265415
Futa faggot

uh woomy

>>6265449
I posted the Jill valentine commission up there. I charge ~150$ per. About 5-6 hours of work. If I felt like it I could make a living on it, I have people constantly on my wait list, I just have to actually do them lol.

>>6265449
My artwork is not posted in here but you probably saw me in the last thread maybe. I've only been paid 5$ to 10$ dollars before and a few cents on patreon. I'm just not that popular and my followers just don't like weeaboo shit I guess. Realistically speaking I'd need 800$ dollars to survive since I'm American. I used to work multiple jobs that would pay well, but I quit because homie wasn't getting any respect. I'm living with inheritance money so I just need to learn to invest it more. I like being here to provide critique and also look at the nice art from time to time.

>>6264338
This might sound stupid but did you draw the stars logo yourself? How do you do small details like that? Usually I encounter pixel artifacts with small details.

>>6265747
I realized last night her arms were a bit long. I wanted to exaggerate it but I did it too much. I think the sleeves are to blame, so later I'll redraw her arms. For now, here's this quick edit until I can fix it.

>>6266172
Groper's hands are a complete mess and they look arthritic
The vibe and gesture is there but the actual execution is fucked. Use a reference, I can't redline right at this moment but gj with your lines overall as well

>>6266565
Yeah, I'm pretty awful at man hands in general. I was hoping to try to be able to get by despite it being fucked but a part of me isn't sure to. I'll try to see if I can improve it.

>>6266592
Yeah, like the other anon said. The lineart is good but the anatomical foundation falls apart on the right hand. Specifically, the joints of the thumb are misplaced and it connects too high to the actual palm, so there's no visible break between the thumb and index finger flesh.
Old masters loved man hands. A helpful reference would be either life or any studies from those like Michelangelo or Rubens.

>>6266747
Oh. That's not a thumb. That's an index finger. The thumb is behind the breast. Unless what you say still applies

>>6266747
Oh sorry, I mightve misread. I'll try to fix the other one

>>6266890
Also, this is my current progress in case anyone wants to try redlining.

quick little sketch

>>6259252
wip

>>6266895
Anon, I'm too retarded to redline I'm sorry. But the mans hand looks like a tree root and it should not. Also just double check the left shoulders alignment. Look good overall. But you should practice your steps. Sketch first. Then cleaner sketch. Then line.

should i get money for this shit

>>6259252
what is this art style called?

>>6267047
Thank you. And yeah, about the anatomy mistakes, at the time it was an old drawing with hardly anything added to it and a year later I come back to it, and now she has a body. I didn't think to sketch much (if at all) at the time and it certainly shows, haha ;;. I'll try to improve some things and come back!

>>6267314
Oh, and in the mean time, I made this little sketch quickly.

>>6266945
I like! Blog?

>>6266887
>>6266890
I might have "misread" the gesture myself lol. The distance between the top finger (under the bow) and the next one is kinda long so I thought it was an opposable digit. I might have confused bulging breast tissue for a fourth finger so it looked more like a thumb with overly long joints.
Don't have time to redline now unfortunately, but I think the outer hand plane sorta makes me expect the thumb knuckle is gonna be partially visible. Maybe the discrepancy is there

My underwear model OC

>>6267589
Different anon here. I wasn't going to say anything, but yeah, the hands are really hard to read. I couldn't to any better myself, but they really need a rework.

>>6266696
>>6266700
>>6266709
good

>>6267589
Actually, heh, I thought a part of the breast inbetween the fingers would be a bit hard to make it readable, even for me, but a part of me was going, "ah whatever, maybe it's not too bad. I'll fix it later". So that's my fault for making a careless mistake. Which I tend to do quite often.I haven't worked on it yet but I'll try to sketch over it and fix it. Sorry anon

Wanted feedback on this WIP. I’m never sure about this one area of the body I pointed the red arrow to. I know I’m exaggerating the proportions, but still I’m not sure if it ‘makes sense.’
Any critiques/feedback is appreciated.

>>6268353
Arrow party is fine. The vag is a tad high and the folds in the fat there read too much like a dick. Lower the vag and make the area more triangle and less dong bulge.

Need to get better at faces and anatomy.

I know the tones save so much time but man, I just want to color everything.

>>6268569
And following perspective. You have the perspective set up with the wood paneling but you just BLEW IT with the woman.

>>6268605
Yeah
(I did throw the floor in afterwards, which might throw it even further out of whack)

>>6267273
western anime style, faux anime style

>>6268594
she needs to calm her tit

>>6268853
Holy fuck who is this fishmommy

>>6269762
Nami from League of Legends.

>draw left boob
>right boob looks different
This shit is like drawing eyes but I managed to figure out eyes. Any tips for consistent tiddy?

>>6270402
it gets better over time, it's another form of learning to draw difficult 3d shapes at least believably mirrored. some curves are hard to imagine in mirrored 3d space. drawing some curves to help measure and place landmarks really helps. post the work if you need specific help

>>6270402
it really is just practice, another thing you can do is just draw asymmetrical poses so you dont have to worry about making them symmetrical. And take note of how the tiddy changes shape at different angles. For example the tiddy from the front is pretty much just round, while at a 3/4 it tends to change more to a teardrop shape. Or just practice drawing tiddies from reference from various poses

>>6262223
anon where can I see those sketches? I'm dabbing in comic and I just can't get enough of seeing page drafts and sketches

>>6270875
my patreon lol :^)

>>6270898
Based

>>6260937
im a big nose lover chad myself so I think she's pretty and hot and I'd cum on her til my cock dries up for good like the fig tree cursed by jesus

>>6260972
have you watched predator? thea rnold chuazeneguer film? vaginas look like the predator

>>6259281
It's the best way to learn anatomy though.

how can I improve this design of this demon gal I'm working on?

Any criticism or advice?

>>6271463
>advice?
Yeah, give up

>>6271465
Post your work frend

>>6271463
My advice would be to keep working on your fundamentals and spend more time building up your drawings with shapes. Start big and simple and then use those shapes as guides for more details. This is coming from a beginner

>>6271465
>>6271463
Basically this, but don't actually give up. Everything in this piece sucks basically. Work towards being good a year from now instead of trying to make completed pieces.

>>6271472
I'm
>>6260199

>>6271426
For that we need to know how she is and what your goal is with her. What is her personality? How is she like? What will she be doing in your art? And so one and on.

You cannot design a character without knowing what she will be doing. So we need to know all those things.

>>6271500
>>6271474
I'll try to work more on fundamentals and not giving up, was working with my galaxy s22 Ultra on michiru but more used to working keyboard+mouse in ps and autodesk sketchbook. Ex here

we wippin

>>6271414
This is coomer cope. I know because I used to say this. The best ways to learn anatomy are actually:

-copy and memorize muscles from medical reference
-sculptural ecorche
-in-person drawing from a nude model

>>6271426
The way you drew and rendered that cock is extremely satisfying to look at.

>>6271463
made an attempt.

>>6271555
Based, and thanks for liking for shitty sketch :')

>>6271555 #
Based, and thanks for liking my shitty sketch :')

>>6271555
Nice m8

>>6272099
np :-) i like a lot of your stuff

>>6272118
thanks babe i hope the color turns out nice on it

>>6268080
thanks

>>6271518
Wait that makes a lot of sense actually, I'll be more critical of it from that lens

She's from a coom-heavy setting but in her lore demons are born from mass graves that were never given death rites/blessed/purified/prayed over. She was born from a raided village that ended up being burned to the ground, so a lot of her personality is hedonistic and violent. Cares only about her own survival and satisfaction above all else. Rapey when it suits her

>>6271571
Thank you! I've been working on doing more rendering/coloring. Felt good to do

>>6265125
Sfw and nsfw is the same for me but making an alt takes an extra hour, animation, in pure hours, is like 30

Tried inking but got frustrated and gave up. I got further than usual before giving up though.

>>6259281
Goddamn christfags all deserve the rope

>>6272781
Why should I get the rope for trying to save you, pervert?

>>6266156
Lol I just sized down a png. SAI does a pretty good job of auto correcting the resolution. I also always draw on A4 paper size 350 dpi.

Still trying. Wish I could draw a proper sex scene, but I'm bad at anything remotely complicated.

just finished this commission. i like how i drew her cooch.

>>6273223
I second that. Her labia has that satisfying soft and plump look to it

>>6273223
$500? $600? C'mon don't say you charge less than $300

>>6273222
Want my honest opinion?
Such implied/non-penetrative scenes are way hotter than any graphic porn out there.
I'm not saying this from personal taste, but in the context of adult imagery, it is more times than not better to leave more space for the viewer to play around with the image through their own imagination than outright showing them what they should jerk off to.

You know, sex is cool, but a romanticized and visually more appealing version of sexuality is cooler.

>>6273248
lol i fucking wish dude. im in the process of raising my prices but its 125$ as of now.

>>6273240
yeah i always see pussy drawn too rigidly/dry looking so i rly tried to make it look smooth and squishy.

I started inking my comic today. this parts always really quick. I have a new printer in the mail that allows for larger 11x17 printing. if I can do it in a cheap enough way I want to try to making physical copies of this comic.

>>6270875
some more

>>6259252
Got more time to finish this. Done, proud of the result.

Any critiques welcome.

>>6273223
Dude what is your blog you're one the only people in salt who draws good looking porn.

>>6273523
https://twitter.com/butteryshake

>>6273523
https://twitter.com/butteryshake
here u go

is there a way to make CSP more welcoming to a PSfag? Like a theme or something

>>6273569
U can download presets on the csp assets download website that make it look like photoshop

>>6273571
that's what I was looking for, thanks

>>6273575
Good luck friend. Basic shortcuts and functions are pretty similar across most art programs, so it shouldn’t be too difficult.
Although personally SAI is the absolute best for drawing ease and the absolute best feeling digital brushfeel.
Though I also recognize it’s probably just down to personal preference.

>>6273523
Just say you like his stuff, no need to be an asshole with your opinion

>>6273523
There have been pretty good stuff in this thread alone, what are you being rude for?

>>6273223
The inside looks great but the way it protrudes seems a bit weird, like it's an onahole sticking out of a sex-doll. Nice picture otherwise.

>>6273661
lmao. i used to post here with my stuff, but all you niggas draw futa shit. shakes is an outlier. so just give them the win.

>>6273722
Nah, most anons who post here do decent work and the regulars share good quality stuff. Foh with that nonsense

>>6273534
thanks man
>>6273661
>>6273665
>>6273722
>>6273870
it's not the skill that's the problem in these threads it's the appeal factor. most of art posted here doesn't strike me as sexy or particularly pleasing to look at. not trying to put you guys down just giving my opinion.

>>6273888
What you find sexy is extremely personal and selective. You may not find something sexy, but plenty of others will if the skill is there. No one here draws things that I find particularly sexy but it's still my favorite general

>>6273888
pyw

This ones still rough but its an idea Im working on. Curious if anyone recognizes what this is based on

>>6274571
What prompt are you using to get this sketchy construction style?

>>6274577
Ill take that as a compliment

>>6274587
Stop talking to /g/ trolls

>>6274588
>Someone gave a nice compliment
>It must be a troll
Nobody is creating demoralizing posts, you self destruct yourselves.

>>6271727
Nice! Like the position here better than mine, my skill is still a wip as always. Still working on my basic shapes and getting used to using a stylus rn

>>6274577
AI posting needs to be a bannable offense on this board already.

probably done but im sure ill make some adjustments to it

>>6273223
Looks great. Pussies are pretty hard to draw. Way harder than dongs.

t8hdt8

had planned on removing the lineart, but I decided to keep it in.

>>6276509
Try putting it on overlay.

a lot of fucking plants

>>6276875
I don't see any plants fucking in here

>>6273534
Oh, it's this bitch

Wasn't here for a long time. I see that nigger painter and fags are not around anymore?

>>6275069
personal preference but I feel these types of pages work better monochrome. Awesome stuff anyway you're really good

>>6259252
Posting on, I'm rusty on my drawing skills and I'm new to digital art. Need feedback.

>>6276944
Same, long time since I've been here.
Finished picrel just recently.

>>6277763
Nice, I've been wondering what you're up to. Loved your Naruto fanarts from a year ot two ago.

https://discord.gg/PjeBpWGPpr

we wippin

>>6276509
Looks good. I am taking notes on how you painted the skin.

Just finished inking this one. Gunna try to color it and not fuck it up too bad.

>>6276509
Looks good. I am taking notes on how you painted the skin.

Just finished inking this one. Gunna try to color it and not fuck it up too bad

>>6274571
from that one tiktok ad right?

post progress

>>6278939
nice but the back view is missing her gluteus medius and tfl

>>6277763
Looking beautiful and also disgusting as usual.

I coloured up the lineart I posted last thread. I've been unhappy with the way I colour for a while, so I've been trying to simplify and clean up the way I do things.

>>6268853
fosh

>>6279649
oh hai beep!

>>6273222
sick style, blog?

>>6279649
How did donut buttholes start being a thing? In real life isn't this like the beginning stage of a prolapse?

>>6279649
Wow, that rendering came out great. I need to practice painting blood under the skin, along with literally everything else

>>6279283
you are correct anon. Update is right above you
took me many a youtube video to get a good screenshot

>>6279283
you are correct anon. Update is right above you
took me many a youtube video to get a good screenshot

>>6279546
Thank you for pointing that out I don't know all my muscles groups yet

>>6279995
I have no idea, it probably doesn't make much sense, I just like it because it makes everything look nice and puffy.

>>6279734
Hey True!

i tried to draw

How do I get over feeling unnecessary?
I've been losing motivation to draw. I haven't been able to figure out how to improve and I can't focus on studying. Even besides my own technical ability, I don't feel like I can offer anything as an artist anymore.
I wanted to start drawing to draw stuff of the fetishes nobody's ever drawn before, I didn't care about money, just making people feel good. But now, everyone's drawing all of those fetishes already, and my art accounts aren't even looked at anyway.

I don't want technical help right now, I just want to feel like it's worth it to even try and keep going.

>>6281972
Anon, I'm gonna be real with you for just this once; alright.. I've been in your position for maybe about 2 years now. I've even had people rooting for me even before I started. Sure I've improved. But I've gained nothing. I'm still the same person as I was before. A fuckin loser. And it's exactly the same for everyone else too. Would my 200 followers rescue my ass from a burning building? probably not. So you need to walk the middle ground with everything you do. Don't become a part if the system of making others happy and pleasing them. You need to make yourself happy.

>>6279649
chill out with the donut butthole, it looks infected

>>6281972
You don't even to think too hard about it.
Just draw stuff that makes you horny, trust me just doing that is satisfying as fuck.

This is my first digital piece and I’m not sure how to feel. Could be more refined ik but..

>>6259941
>>6272155
>>6261669
blog?

>>6260084
blog? but also can anyone ID the artist who drew the middle pic and link their blog pls c:

>>6282579
my blog is discord tbqh

>>6282579
Why do you blog spam? You never ask for my blog anon. I thought we were friends.

sketch

I drew poopy

>>6282825
Very nice

>>6282579
>>6261669

@javehorny

>>6281511
>persephanii
lol

>>6282927
I'm always impressed by how fast people identify these reference images.

painted her up

>>6283337
You lost the stomach/navel/hip contours from your sketch layer!

Any tips? Ik I have to work on hands lol

>>6283359
learn to prompt, classical drawing is an obsolete skill

>>6283346
yeah things got smoothed out in a lot of areas
gonna have to keep more to the sketch next time


i need to make a 4-5 page doujin this month what should the fetish be /ic/

I made this and I hate it but I don't know why, maybe is something wrong with the pose?
Also the hair isn't finished

>>6283238
>i recognize that bulge

>>6283511
I am a simple creature but I like cum fetish. And sometimes NTR.

>>6283519
Head too big. Pose too stiff. It lacks softness. Needs more depth. Need to be more dynamic. The hair looks too wet, almost as if it was stuck to her skin. I'm sorry, anon. I can feel you tried hard but it needs a lot of polishing.

I'm glad the censor obscures the fucked up anatomy
>all of it is shit
Atleast I can draw something else now.

I swear, the "naked breast to breast" pose is harder to draw well than anything else. You have to plan out exactly how tall each girl is going to be, how straight they'll be standing, and draw the clavicle, ribs, abs, and abdominal fat exactly right the first time, or it's going to be impossible to correct them without screwing up the tits. No wonder it's so rare. I have no clue how people do it without drawing the breasts first and going from there.


>>6283359
I think you went overboard with the shading. Chel's eye sockets are drawn too masculine; the shadow on her face is too deep. It looks like the shadow is coming from a prominent, masculine brow instead of her hair, and it completely obscures the feminine eye sockets.

>>6284795
I'm going to use this as a pose reference and you cant stop me

>>6267029
Oh hey I saw you on pixiv, keep up the good work

>>6282777
pls link your blog anon

>>6267029
>>6285006
Who is this?

>>6282927
op here. damn man, that was impressive.

>>6284984
I had no ref for this, use at your own peril

also post result

Having trouble with lineart. All my refs for profile drawings of the neck and clavicle in a "proud" posture, and wide hips, rely on either an angle or shading to show the dimensions. So at the lineart stage I have no idea if the collarbone or hips are going to look good or even anatomically plausible.

Anyone have lineart profile refs for thick ladies?

new bread
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