/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6228084
no :)

>>6228084
i was looking for somewhere to post these so i guess here will do. im learning about light

i am not interested in opinion of a trannime cat poster.

>>6228084
ok let's go

>>6228098
High beg

>>6228112
Mid-High beg

>>6228107
Holy based

yes

>>6228084
Isnt that what the powerlevel thread is for?

>>6228136
>Mid-High beg
How do I upgrade to high beg?

okay

>>6228098
>posting the first 10 minutes of ctrlpaint exercises
extremely low beg

Sure

Gave this a shot as a sketch, an I GMI?

Note that you people have labeled me a permaprebeg so any rating above that only proves you’re a stupid nigger.

>>6228098
pre beg

>>6228112
beg

>>6228146
pre beg but dogshit

>>6228198
high beg

>>6228211
beg

>>6228216
pre beg

>>6228226
mid beg but dogshit

>>6228198
this is ai lol

>>6228226

>>6228084
sure...

>>6228198
Pro

>>6228236
>pre beg but dogshit
that hurt my feelings

Sure

>>6228326
anatomy is mid beg, everything else mid int

>>6228174
This is the powerlevel thread.

>>6228326
for a moment i thought this was a furry piece due to how yellow her skin is in the thumbnail

>>6228226
Why is your art so soulless? Everything is technically correct but its just so bland

>>6228364
They haven't learned taste and appeal

Something I am working on at the moment

Yes, it's furshit

>>6228383
Just replace the furry face with a normal face and it would look good

>>6228385
I don't draw humans.

>>6228383
furrys on the vietnam war, interesting.

inb4 >soulless

>>6228242
Yeah, very typical of Stable Diffusion. Still, surprisingly in proportion. and could fool anyone with 15 minutes of fixes.

>>6228390
You literally drew a human except with a deformed face

>>6228402
airbrush abuser.
soulless indeed.

>>6228412
Cool character, shaded well, weird composition that takes away from all of that. I would suggest making the canvas portrait instead of square.
Int

>>6228414
I'll draw anthros/furries, no humans

>>6228402
Looks like Chinese gacha art, aka generic trannime

>>6228419
It was for a trading card game, so I suppose that’s fitting

>>6228412
Embodiment of constructoid

I cannot into exaggerated expressions

rate but also tag urself, anon

>>6228424
Very nice anon

>>6228385
That would be rather boring

>>6228437
Does the animal face make it interesting?

>>6228326
pro

>>6228364
I think it mostly comes down to you being so desperate to crab me that you’ve resorted to meaningless buzzwords like “soulless” (or that other retard’s ”appeal”) rather than just accept that despite your bullshit I’ve managed to keep at it and get better than you or most people on this board.

>>6228424
mid int

>>6228451
Kek oversaturated renderpermabeg

evangelion themed bday drawing for friend

>>6228451
I didn't say your work is bad, just bland, unappealing and uninteresting. Are you a constructoid?

>>6228112
beg

>>6228146
beg

>>6228211
beg

>>6228216
mid beg

>>6228226
high beg

>>6228326
low int

>>6228383
high beg

>>6228402
low int bordering mid int

>>6228412
low int

>>6228424
high beg

>>6228429
high beg + soul

>>6228464
high beg

>>6228467
low int

>>6228472
>constructoid
Can you go a sentence without memeing?

>>6228478
Is that a yes?

>>6228084

>>6228489
Soul

>>6228451
Good on you for improving anon, but it is still a fact that your subjects are extremely unappealing, or in simpler terms, ugly

>>6228483
Lol. You really are an imbecile. It’s a “I don’t know what you’re talking about because I’m not a part of the delusion where ‘constructoid’ means anything to anyone but you.”

>>6228489
High beg. Work on line control. Some sloppy stippling too

>>6228489
Soulful

>>6228469
>Asuka in Leotard ver. plug suit

>>6228519
Beg

Couldn't sleep so I tried to sketch this? What's my power level

>>6228527
Mid beg

I felt like I had improved while I painted this.

>>6228474
What does 'beg' mean in this context? Low beg?

>>6228538
completely bereft of fundamentals, actually >>6228112 i will adjust to mid beg

>>6228112
beg soul GMI
>>6228146
prebeg NGMI
>>6228211
beg GMI
>>6228216
midbeg GMI
>>6228226
lol NGMI
>>6228290
high int, already made it
>>6228326
low int GMI
>>6228383
beg NGMI
>>6228402
mid beg NGMI
>>6228412
high beg, GMI
>>6228424
high beg GMI
>>6228429
SOUL GMI, civic pilled
>>6228464
beg NGMI
>>6228467
this one isnt your strongest, but you are mid int. GMI SOUL
>>6228469
beg NGMI
>>6228489
mid int SOUL GMI
>>6228493
prebeg NGMI
>>6228519
prebeg NGMI
>>6228527
beg, funpilled NGMI
>>6228532
high beg/low int SOUL GMI

>>6228405
20 minutes to fix it. How much would furries pay for this?

>>6228552
Nothing, the furry market is already over saturated

>>6228559
I mean if it was a commission...

>>6228560
Nothing, you wouldn't get a commission in the first place

Idk I want to draw more girls, but I don't want people to think im some weirdo, even though I really enjoy drawing female figs

>>6228565
Soul

>>6228242
Really? First time I was legitimately fooled I think.
>>6228552
It's nice, but furries want art of their OCs mainly which AI isnt good at doing.

>>6228552
If was a adoptable or maybe ych style commission and you could do any design in this style? Above 100 if you had any following and maybe 60 or 70 if you were a nobody.

I don't have a new drawing yet so here.

>>6228551
get into a car crash

>>6228663
Looks like generic trannime bro, stop that

>>6228671
You have told me that before. I dedicated it to you trannime schizo
heh

>>6228663
Generic and shit/10

Cuckime crap is a crutch, stop relying on it

>>6228551
>My drawing from earlier this year
>high beg/low int SOUL GMI
>My drawing from couple weeks ago
>high int, already made it

I hate

>>6228084
Sure

>>6228586
Wow he's literally me

>>6228753
mid beg, keep going though you show promise. Really not bad for someone whos only been drawing for what, 2-3 months?

>>6228806
Peak \ic\

>>6228806
Actually this is my second drawing ever

I draw almost exclusively furshit, pic unrelated

>>6228845
post your furshit

>>6228851
Painted portrait or just generic 2d cropped porn?

>non tranime, any level
Mid beg but hey man keep pushing for it aha haa nice try
>tranime hyperbeg
Mid int SOVL

>>6228863
The one you like the most

>>6228888
Pixel is portrait

Below is my favorite 2D nsfw
https://files.catbox.moe/zimbtj.jpg

I like cats I guess

>>6228326
Proper stagnating permaint

>>6228084
what're the next steps here (lrn2metalreflect aside)

>>6228918
Draw them in interesting scenarios

>>6228918
good. what inspired the far right helmet? that is wild

>>6228894
I've seen this portrait before... not sure where.

>>6228929
4mb filesize limit-sama i kneel, needed to crunch this fucker by 30%

>>6228945
thought about what a 360 degree vision helmet would look like (these guys are cruelty squad flesh golems underneath with variable configs) and i thought it'd be cool to make it a sputnik

>>6228947
It was probably me, it's what I show instead of showing my furry porn in these threads.

I am just mad that all my shit is being scrapped by robots to make souless ai photobashing, hardly any point in doing realistic humans anymore.

I will devote my craft to HMOFA only.

>>6228947
Also I referenced it from the official elder scrolls esweyr trailer

>>6228464
rape rape rape rape. smelly whore. smelly ugly whore rape rape.

>>6228464
permabeg ngmi and your cunt smells.
cornball ass nigga fuck you and your bonespurs

Beginner
>>6228146
>>6228211
>>6228216
>>6228493
>>6228519
>>6228527
>>6228565
>>6228586
>>6228663
>>6228909
Mid-beg
>>6228112
>>6228402
>>6228424
>>6228467
High-beg/low-int
>>6228098
>>6228198
>>6228226
>>6228290
>>6228326
>>6228383
>>6228412
>>6228429
>>6228464
>>6228469
>>6228479
>>6228489
>>6228532
>>6228551
>>6228751
>>6228753
>>6228894
>>6228918
>>6228951

>>6228918
>>6228951
Nice execution and subject matter is kino.
Any blog or related thing where I can see more of these guys? You won me over at "cruelty squad flesh golems"

>>6229215
retarded

>>6228565
>>6229215
wtf this is mid/high-int, excellent work

be gentle

>>6229362
pre beg
>>6229307
int
>>6229299
int

>>6229218
Rifle Infantry on twitter
I oughta get some repository going

>>6229486
your composition in this is total BEG
overall line control and capturing subject matter is mod to int. plan your work with thumbnails anon and you'll be pro in no time.

Giving ratings without posting your work should be SHAMED

>>6229591
pro

>>6229563
I see your drawing and raise you a amputee vampire girl without eyebrows

>>6230054
Forgot the dang drawing

>>6228506
>your subjects are extremely unappealing, or in simpler terms, ugly
You idiots will say that (or “no appeal”) no matter what I draw anyway.

>>6229573
yeah this one's from last year- a little lazy too I gotta admit
How would you improve the composition?

>>6230329
Then draw something appealing for once or learn how to stop caring. You always sound so assblasted lmao

>>6230329
Stop drawing ugly goblins you tard

>>6230329
>>6230387
>>6230400
maybe anon looks like a goblin irl so to him it is appealing, drawing from life so to speak

>>6230329
wah wah boo boo nigga kill yourself.

>>6228084

>>6230687
ewwwwwww

>>6230687
h- hot

sexy
>>6230687
based
>>6228402
>>6228226
>>6228290
>>6228412
>>6228326
high beg
>>6228424
>>6228112
>>6228383
respectable beg
>>6230724
>>6230378
>>6228211
disrespectable beg
>>6228146
>>6230370

just wanna know why this is instantly clockable as /beg/ animeshit, thank you

>>6232357
Prompt?

>>6232359
what was meant by this

>>6232368
He wants to know the seed you used to generate that POS

>>6232357
nonart doesnt get a rating

>>6232410
>>6232416
i drew this ...

>>6232425
What prompts did you use though.

>>6232425
That looks so much better. You blurred all the edges uniformly. That's why it looks worse. Also that pinky is broken.

>>6232425
Lost a ton of personality from sketch to render, which is unfortunately.

>>6232359
>we're entering the arc where any pic is at risk of being accused of being AI

>>6232749
I fucking hate living in the 21st century

>>6232761
guess we just have to start saving timelapses of everything

Only a sketch but pls

>>6232768
soul tier

>>6228451
Take a break from drawing. Unironically go outside it helps any problem massively. Stop jerking off so much, if nothing, then to regain some sex drive. Get off power level threads. Then take a look at art that you like and honestly assess if you are even close to that level. Youre here begging for attention and praise and pats on the head just because you can draw a cylinder in a 3/4 angle (sooo 3d wow, you mog kindergarten children) and make a scuffed chicken scratched mannequin out of that shit. Gtfo dumbass, drawing is much more than construction. Been there though, its called Dunning Kruger and you got it BAD. Youre not as good as you think you are, slow down, deload, lift ligher weight.

>>6232768
Cute KOT. The rendering is pretty muddy, you should un-muddy it. Very cute though, and brimming with SOUL. I have saved this image onto my computer.

latest drawing I did

>>6232953
Mid beg
Study anatomy, practice drawing solid shapes, improve Your linework and rendering

>>6228226
I don't know what it is about this kind of style or work but it always screams that the artist has severe "mental problems" to me.

>>6228464
I like it, it's cute. Though...I guess like some of it comes off a bit tropey...a bit?

>>6232966
thanks for the feedback

>>6228751
I really like this. I am not sure about 'power levels' but I just like it.

>>6230063
These are cool, but you should finish the feet and not give up on them.

>>6232870
Yeah I only used an airbrush for the sketch, hopefully I'll make the strokes and hardness more varied when I move to oil and a canvas. I'm too lazy with digital and need to fix it

>>6232396
permaprebeg NGMI

>>6228845
>>6228894
AI

:3

>>6233305
Why is the light made of cum cheese? But cute animals. Gotta work on your shapes and the next time you draw light try to look at some references. Also put more weight into what you draw, it's all very floaty and wobbly

>>6233460
>light made of cum cheese
That's the warm afterglow of morning sex, anon.

>>6233536
ugh I can smell it

Made this a few months ago.

feels like every time I finish something its actually more unappealing than the last

>>6232396
souless

Looking for review

>>6234345
It took me a while to figure out but size of the middle is off proportion from the legs. The belly button is where the top of her panties would be.

>>6234634
I think I see what you're talking about, some construction might've been lost as I lassoed some foreshortening that wasn't planned initially

>>6234583
mid-early beg - face flat/lacking rendering and overall polish is low (lines aren't connecting, scribbly unsure lines on her hair and folds of her neck), you don't know how to draw hands, proportions are unappealing (irises are small, shoulders not broad enough, forehead too small). appeal is subjective so take this comment how you want

study artists who do a similar thing to you (pic related) and emulate it in your own art to the best of your ability

best of luck anon-kun i believe in you

>>6233271
Fuck you lmao.

I have the .cllp of both as proof of workflow

Older not complete version.
>>6232396
If you actually did this then definitely int. No way to know if pro because the piece isn’t that complex.

>>6234915
High beg

>>6234915
>Hiding hand/feet of a raptor
NGMI

>>6234958
I thought it looked worse with hands for the final. It’s also symbolic not a living animal in the clouds.
>>6234883
Should I add arms?

>>6233134
Why do you hate Rei?

>>6234963
ok in that comb hands would create clutter imo the tail is bit too dark idk but i assume clouds do not cast a shadow that dark

>>6235012
Clouds cast pretty dark shadows. Glad to know removing the claws made it better.

Be honest.

>>6235799
int

>>6228112
deep within beg
looks traced, scratchy
no confidence

>>6228146
beg

>>6228198
ai

>>6228211
beg

>>6228216
beg

>>6228226
beg

>>6228326
low int
your anatomy is fucked and your color theory needs polishing

>>6228383
beg

>>6228402
int

>>6228467
beg

>>6228469
low int your anatomy is really wonky in some areas, go draw skeletons

>>6228479
beg

>>6228493
beg

>>6228519
beg

>>6228527
beg

>>6228532
mid beg

>>6235878
>looks traced,
It's not traced. The pose is referenced, though.

>>6232749
The era of wildly accusing anyone who posts art in 512x512 or a multiple of that of being a machine!

>>6234967
Asuka is my waifu

any thoughts on this drawing of mine?

>>6237433
Looks white nigger

>>6228084

My turn

>>6228084
Here's some recent art

>>6238062
i want to fuck that dog

>>6238045
Low beg
>>6237514
Mid beg
>>6238062
Int

>>6238062
Looks great

Reposting cuz I haven't drawn anything new in a while

>>6228242
>>6228198
Which ai made this? PAWNXX

>>6238110
>brutalism
Nice

>>6228326
I'm a big fan of your work!!

fresh from the oven, mistakes and all

>>6228084

>>6228084

hello flash

i think i'm high beg or low int

>>6241024
King of begs. So close to /int/ yet so far

>>6240985
It's like a Rorschach test whether you see Jerma or Moot

>>6241024
Depends how long you spent to draw each picture imo. If it took 5 hours, mid beg. 1 hour then high beg. 30 minutes including the face then int.

>>6241029
what makes it not /int/?
honest question, anything can be improved but that doesn't' mean all drawings without flaws are /int/ as /pro/ exists

>>6241069
It's way too inconsistent and flawed to be /int/. It also lacks the appeal most /int/s have. He needs to work on his proportions, anatomy and line quality and he'll become /int/.

>>6241075
weak anatomy, weak perspective, proportions are off, line quality is poor, faces are flat and lack dimensionality, lack of balance and flow that would give the drawings a sense of life and motion.

So beg, but not insanely far from int.

Post your work and get rated from low beg to pro.

>>6241050

>>6233305
Impossible to improve, pure perfection, now explore the world!

Thoughts?

>>6241024
low-mid /beg/

recent one that I almost feel proud of

>>6241404
good rendering, lose the linework or have it in the same layer and paint over it.
The anatomy is believable at a glance but it can be worked on. Nothing grinding a book and flipping the image a couple of times won't fix

I like the expression

I'm not gonna give you a rating because that's for faggots

>>6241404
no thoughts, fix your light sources

How 4chan will rate my mouse sketches

>>6241434
SOUL

>>6240963
Low int

>>6241313
:3

>>6241434
I feel a bit of FKey in here, dats niiiiice - wp

>>6241758
Thanks you yeah fkey is my main influence and inspiration
>>6241457
Thankd

>>6228098
Anybody can do studies like these, can't tell
>>6228112
Beg, but well done. Forms feel wonky, not firm or confident
>>6228211
Stylish beg, values, edges and planes weak
>>6228216
Beg but your on your way, clothed areas are flat
>>6228226
If not Int close to it, you'd be pro if you could light those characters in a way where they were all in the same room, but I understand that may be a comic related decision. Drawing could be more confident as well.
>>6228290
Int or pro, depends if you can bring it to a finish
>>6228383
Beg, maybe close to int. I get the feeling you worked a lot on this because the line weight/confidence is bad and shaky. Matter of time before you get to int though
>>6228402
Easy Int. You can bring it all together to a finish. Matter of time before you go pro
>>6228412
Beg. With peices like these Begs can do them with enough time and effort. If you struggle a lot you are defibately Beg. Gesture could be improved. Forms arent connecting well to each other. Good edges.
>>6228424
Beg but really close to Int. The finish just isnt coming together. Little bit wrong with everything, value, textures, lighting, form, drawing. Almost there!
>>6228464
Hard to tell with this aesthetic
>>6228479
Int. Stronger lighting would make you pro
>>6228489
Int. Drawing comes together well. To be pro in this aesthetic I think you just have to have a career lol
>>6228493
Hard to tell from a study since beg and int can make the same studies at this point
>>6228527
Beg. generally unconfident, each leg has a different kind of pants on em. Forms are there but confused
>>6228551
Beg but close to Int. Your style is lovely it makes it hard to tell, but overall the finish isnt coming together. Different lighting sources and through your forms feel good they dont always connect to each other good.
>>6228565
Probably Beg. You didnt draw the feet, confident long lines in the body but the face is shaky.

>>6228586
Beg. Anatomy un-clear, feet arent connecting to ground, could remove shading and most wouldnt even notice
>>6228663
Beg, matter of time before you go Int. Lines arent confident, lighting and shape design could be stronger.
>>6228751
Beg but almost pro. I dont know why I think that, honestly if your image could read just a little bit clearer I think you'd jump to pro on effort alone. Just a little bit better perspective and boom
>>6228753
Int, if you could bring that to a finished illustration youd be pro. Lions a little weak in the face though
>>6228845
Beg or Int, im assuming its referenced or highly so. Begs and Ints can make the same studies
>>6228918
Int maybe even pro. Its brought to a complete finish. Within the style and subject you cant really improve. Next step would be what ever you want, painting, illustrations, even more advanced grandeur designs ect
>>6228951
I think the figures could be more seperated from the bg but I think its pro. Complete finish, very cohesive, lovely work
>>6229215
Beg. The burger is shaded by gimmick. Everything aside from teddy is flat, teddy aint doing so hot either though. Need to study lighting primitives
>>6229307
Int. Great shape design, lovely gestures forms feel good. Matter of time before you go pro
>>6229362
Beg, good work ethic. Values are weak, undefined, int or pro could figure that out even if the reference was weak. Anatomy also weak and confused
>>6230370
Beg. Bandages lack any form, seems like you do well with reference but lack the skill to transform and alter it
>>6230378
Hard could be beg could be int. Finish is weak forms are a bit confused. Kind of get the feeling it was worked on a while
>>6230687
If its a study could be beg or int. Studies dont show skill very well because beg and int can do similar work. Its a matter of do they understand it enough to apply it to work

I drew fulgrim from Warhammer in the style of Patrick Nagel.
Roast me.

>>6242011
>Little bit wrong with everything
I've felt that way for a long-ass time

>>6242138
Do you publish these somewhere? These charming 4:3 doodles are nice to the eyes.

All right then

>>6242168
based trad chad who still hasn't learned to rotate images

>>6242169
Iphone can be fucky

>>6242125
Its not too bad a problem to have. If its been like this a while you probably need to brush up on all your fundies. Taking up a beginners book from the sticky will help. Studying and breaking down other artists might help you out too. Even when you're doing your og work referencing other art more might be enough to help you

>>6241726
neat. think I can make it to mid /int/ if I push that drawing forward or is it too fundamentally flawed?

>>6243663
Not him but the proportions are hilariously flawed. At that angle you expect body parts to be occluded, not shrunk smaller lol.

>>6243679
I see. I went for an angle similar to what you see in a bus mirror, so not all that vertical. that's why I thought there shouldn't be much juxtaposition
pic related is an older one where I went for a more extreme angle and obstructed a lot more of the body, for example

all /beg/

>>6243880
good
means there is room for improvement

>>6243880
We are all beginners and only end when we die. Keep drawing, my friends. Keep improving. You are building you life's work.

>>6243718
Shit/10 KYS

>>6243718
This one is way better. I would occlude more of the arm since it has the same issue.

>>6228551
socials?

>>6237384
It's comforting to look at, like you could just stroll around the shops and be at ease in the setting. Very nice.

>didn't get rated again
It's all so tiring.

>>6244474
You caught the thread too late lolol

>>6244474
If you got ignored you're gigabeg

>>6229307
Mogs /ic/

>>6244474
you got off lucky, I'll rate you a beg in the next thread.

>>6244474
So did I anon. I wish i wasnt a gigabeg like >>6244518 says, but it seems all too clear that it is a reality

>>6237384
did you make it in ms paint?

>>6245064
>>6244474
Which one are you? I'll rate it.

>>6237384
it looks like the art style that all the nordic school textbooks have

>>6228084

rate

>>6237384
comfy GMI

hit me with it

>>6245481
Low int
>>6245256
Low int
>>6243718
Could be mid int depending on color and background

I draw in a very inconsistent art style but use about 3 separate ones,I don't know if my art is shit or not. Let me know and let me know which photo is the best if possible

>>6228093
t. permaprebeg

>>6246321
For fucks sakes, sorry

>>6246330
Yeah personally I don't like it, I wouldn't say shit but it doesn't pop out to me. It might be a taste thing, its not up my ally. Best is top

>>6246330
woow really bad, really impressive

>>6241434
im gonna have to ask for a blog anon

>>6246577
soul

>all this generic tranime

ik the back is somewhat fucked

>>6245256
The linework on the finnished one kinda ruins it.
But overall its a solid int.

>>6246683
pyw

>>6246691
Any tips to make lines less soulless
> not that anon just in exact same position

>>6246702
watch this:
https://youtu.be/ZzgrOMCd380?t=71

judge me

>>6228112
I drew ur stuff, better at colouring now. Gratz

Today stuff

>>6246862
>>6246840
mid-high beg

Tried to include people from earlier on in the thread who haven't been rated.

>>6242117
perma-beg, looks like something I would draw at age 11.

>>6246330
Perma-beg. Get your fundamentals in check before trying to do more elaborate stuff, get your priorities in check.

>>6246685
Perma-beg, see the perma-beg critique above. Same applies to you.

>>6240978
AI

>>6240994
>>6246577
beg

>>6245965
>>6246072
>>6246573
>>6246580
>>6246840
>>6246862
mid-beg

>>6245256
>>6241411
>>6245481
high-beg

>>6233885
>>6235851
>>6241420
>>6231047
int

>>6245967
>>6247536
mid-int

>>6246498
yeah sure
https://twitter.com/Kirin_curry

>>6228084

>>6247682
Pedophile trannime shit

>>6247682
Mid int. High int if you can do more than just doodles.

>>6247684
you mean based doremi poster?

>>6228084
Rate my shit

>>6247569
>get your fundamentals in check
Thank you anon! Can you elaborate a bit? Ive not be drawing that long and ive only just started digital. What would you recommend studying?

>>6247762
Instead of focusing on trying to do pretty coloring, learn anatomy. Your anatomy is way off. Learn to draw hands. For example, in your Sayaka drawing, instead of drawing the hand properly, you just think you can escape it by doing a blob with blurred shading.
Whatever you need to practice, just search "____ book"
For example, how to draw dynamic hands by Burne Hogarth is something I found when googling how to draw hands.
For anatomy, a good classic is Figure Drawing for what its Worth by Andrew Loomis. Study it, use the proportions as guidelines until you have a good grasp on anatomy.
z-lib.org provides a lot of books, including art books like the Andrew Loomis one I mentioned. There are a lot of digital drawing art books on there too, though the titles are in Japanese.

>>6247775
this is very helpful!! thank you so much anon i really appreciate it

>>6247790
You're welcome :)
Another tip I have is try to build one art style. The pictures you uploaded look like they could have been drawn by three different people.
In order, I would work on fundamentals (anatomy, etc.), learning how to color (color theory, etc.) and then slowly building your art style.

>>6246330
Good effort I'm the anon who made >6246685
First off, the other anon is right in saying you do need to learn a bit of anatomy. But overall for the bottom right picture the neck looks very flat and long. Also for the specific neck muscles that you had there, notice how the ribbon or whatever that's there is not curved according to the neck and the muslces, so all that's needed is a curve for the neck and a little bump to indicate that there's a muscle there + the neck and rest of the body in that frame doesn't have rearward shading. As for the main image above, practice drawing arms from that angle more as the muscle anatomy doesn't make sense there. Hope this helps.

I’m the ebst

rate

>>6248015
high beg

>>6248015
I really like, mid or high int. Blog?

>>6248015
mid int

>>6247569
Looks accurate, appreciate it

I'll never GMI

rate

>>6249109
what happens here?
other than that i'd say int

My latest work, a fan art of mine depicting Ailyth and Hel from Valkyrie Profile

>>6249109
hig beg low int

Sir yes sir

>>6250597
learn your fundies, cent

>>6250667
Wait fuck how do you know who I am who are you.
Which fundies am I lacking in in particular?

>>6250718
literally all of them

>>6250718
learn anatomy. this nigga is built out of sausages and his head is all kinds of fucked up. no specific advice will help here, you just need to understand how a human body goes together. accordingly, understand how to draw clothing- how it folds and sags by gravity, how tight belts and straps deform looser getups. on the right thigh, for instance, the belt just sort of floats on top of a smooth rectangle with some random fold-lines slapped around with no rhyme or reason

learn how objects occupy space in 3D. the way it's drawn, the G3oid curves like chris-chan's dick such that the scope is oriented one way and the bipod another- it's something that would make sense on a much longer object. if you'd surrounded the area it occupies with a rectangular prism (for instance) it'd be easier to establish what space it occupies

your lines are not disneedplined. they're scratchy as shit and run over one another and their thicknesses appear to be entirely random. when working in monochrome like this, clearly-demarked lines and a hierarchy of thickness is important to establish what shit's in front of what and to direct the eye across the piece.

>>6241416
how is that low /beg/
Do people start off drawing like that?

>>6250896
>Do people start off drawing like that?
yes

>>6250896
I've never drawn like that if I'm being honest

>>6250896
Post the work of true /beg/ level in your opinion.

>>6251675
I'm talking about low /beg/ not /beg/ I know he's considered /beg/ here.

will I ever make it?
I'm currently going through Drawing on the right side of the brain and I'm learning how to see edges and shit but i'm really struggling with proportions.
what should I work on more?

Rate my shitty doodles [1/2]

>>6251843
Rate my shitty doodles [2/2]

>>6251846
What language is that? It looks beautiful

>>6251854
It's a conlang by a friend of mine, the temporary name is "Dzervo"
It's not very functional as a language yet, but I agree it's beautiful!
Based on traditional Mongolian scripture as picrel

>>6251879
any tips on making a conlang? I remember seeing a post regarding conlags on /ic/ but I forgot to save the link. I really love your ink strokes

>>6251905
Thanks!

I can't say much, I'm still learning myself
- You should start off with the idea and rough structure (like anything else)
- then go on with vovels and consonants

I suggest taking a look at http://www.zompist.com/kit.html
If you want to add a writing system it should be the last thing you do.
But off course, if you do it for astetics then mabye start with it instead

But most importantly:
Check the subreddit and youtube, for people who can explain it better

>subreddit
https://www.reddit.com/r/conlangs/wiki/resources/

>>6251905
Check out biblaridion on youtube. He has a pretty how to make a conlang series. Don't follow it exactly but it gives you a good overview of all the basic ideas. He also has a really cool speculative evolution art project hes working on and is goin to remake the how to make a conlang series when hes done with that

>>6252261
Fuck I forgot to turn off my name. I promise Im not a namefag I was making fun of one on /gif/

>>6252261
>>6251973
thanks bros.