/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6223391
What hapoened to this thread? How is it that noone tried to make one for like two months?

>>6223601
Whats even the point of /draw/ anymore?
>almost no critiques
>99% of anon draws stylization art
>/msg/ and /ac/ caters to realism studies in some capacity
Beside taking all of the /int/s from /beg/ and spliting /alt/ theres just no real benifit anymore

>>6223601
people too busy doom posting about AI to actually draw

>>6223601
Deliberate and focused attempt by artfag shills to round up anyone who draws as a hobby from /draw/ or similar, and convince them to draw towards a goal, which in turn requires courses and subscription that they sell and advertise. it's wretched.

>>6223683
>courses
>sell
should have gotten the batman mega dumbass

>>6223601
Mostly because no one bother to waste their time and resource just to take insults without learning anything. Better save that drawing for actual art class.

>>6223683
What the in the actual hell are you talking about?

>>6223683
>>6223772
Lol I agree wtf? The more likely reason is general demoralization of artists. Ic has been an anti art board for months now.

>>6223772
>>6223820
certain shills herd up random anons into the beg threads and shill courses to them, they have discords dedicated to it, and they're all terrible at drawing as the icing on top

>>6223843
Imma need screenshots as proof that sounds interesting. Or tell me which courses are shilled. I dont doubt it though. In /beg/ server some weird dude drawing ms paint cats joined and talked about planned merging of begs and ints in beg thread (half jokingly but it was interesting it was even mentioned nonetheless) and about destroying the mega. Whats striking is how quickly the server bent down for him and how quickly he became an admin. Noone kicked him like LAS server does to anyone that tries to be weird and dominating.

>>6223843
Now, this I do believe, having seen muttering of a discord full of shit artist trying to sway the board and targeted harassment of certain thread/ posters. Really gay shit at the end of the day.

>>6226131
this explains the past few months
ive already commented a few times that it seems like a group of discord retards pushing to make the board a shithole

>>6226131
>>6226158
It explains the board being ruined. But I dont understand shilling courses part.

No moderarion. Jannies are either retarded or a part of the operation. Simple as.

>>6226187
check the beginner/beg thread pseudo "sticky", and see which courses they advertise and greatly encourage. they also discouraged usage of the real board sticky for years until enough complaining made them include it in the occasional OP. this is also why they want to get rid of the megas, not only does it contain free versions of some of those courses, but it also contains ancient old master information, and if beginners figure out that all you need is material from the past or to look at the original board sticky, it makes swindling them that much harder. it's all so tiresome.

>>6226377
So what youre saying is, its not about promoting courses like an advertisement, its about misdirecting and sabotaging learning so noone learns how to draw? Thats what Ive been thinking at the least, so I would agree with you. He nature of threads on ic lately is proof as well.

>>6226396
i'm not sure if the misdirection is the primary goal as much as it is a side effect of not showing the entire hand at once, so as to keep a student/returning viewer for longer. it does also have a lot to do with advertising, everything they link is some chosen resource to bolster their views/clicks/youtube counts etc.
the " im not a scammer, use hogarth and loomis..." part isnt the scam. it's when they go "here is a link of a course or youtube or social media of a guy who just goes through the book and teaches you like he wrote it " .
if people knew how difficult it was to acquire fame from art as well as how much ad revenue was involved through clicks and adsense it would start making a bit more sense to the more skeptical anons. mods/janitors are probably either unaware or don't care because it isn't such a huge deal, i just don't like the dishonesty of it all, part of why the social aspect of art is immensely unappealing to me. it discourages truth and expression at every turn

>>6226423
Well its possible. Im more interested in whether the sticky is malicious and it DOES have a weird, malicious tone of the writer. Even though at first glance seems to reccommend standard resources like bridgman or morpho. I wouldnt give a fuck about advertisements and shilling, but ic jas been straight up demonic and discouraging to artists for months. I have 30 hidden threadd or so.

>>6226377
>>6226396
I saw that weird-ass thread drama over the beg sticky all last week, made me filter the general out right. Are they trying to redirect traffic to their weird grooming server or something? Sure would explain their motive since they clearly don't seem to be drawing a goddamn thing.

>>6226446
I know the old beg sticky had a discord (that only lets specific people in) but idk about the new one? Beg thread was hit the day it was called /beg/ and /int/ and it was EXECUTED the day the OP image became "challenge" prompts instead of a drawing from last thread. A part of beg culture was pucking a cool drawing and putting it in OP. Also being told you arent beg anymore. But NOW that the thread is for EVERYBODY thats gone. Essentially the beg thread is deleted but not explicitly like /draw/. I could go on about this desu. Theres simply something happening.

So is /draw/ officially dead?

>>6226463
Idk man, ic is dead.

>>6226834
is it dead?

>>6226885
What are you fuckin stupid

>>6223391
Oh hey, it's my drawing. Nice.

>>6223391
I drew these this afternoon. In the process of Inking them which should be done by tonight. Intended on using them as concept art for 3D stuff, but honestly It looks cool on its own.

>>6223391
feel free to over paint this. haven't painted in a while. idk what is good anymore, hopefully it just feels "cool"

feel free to over paint this. haven't painted in a while. idk what is good anymore, hopefully it just feels "cool"

forgot to post picture.

>>6227953
That's great anon!

>>6227991
I'm confused. is the light source from above or from the right ?

>>6228503
It is supposed to be from the top-right. I agree that it is unclear. There is no way that the specular highlight on the left side makes sense if half the hat is in shadow. Next time I'll decide on a clearer light source beforehand.

>>6228293
Really interesting style, mind sharing your prompt?

>>6228657

Just a random character I designed and sorry for the image quality (shitty phone camera).

Open to hearing anything! Had a lot of fun with the colors

>>6229862
>>6229862
I like her design, did a bit of a paintover if that's ok!
I think if you try to avoid "edge shading" around the left side and try instead to describe the form a bit more it'll really come together! hiving the lips a little more definition will help too.
good luck!!

>>6230039
I like what you did with the shoulders! Thank you! I'm gonna go in and see what I can do :)

Did a sword concept

>>6228101
sweet! How did you learn to draw cars like that?

gesture drawings, can't find the figure drawing thread so I'm posting it here. All critiques welcomed.

>>6228293
reminds me a bit of the banner saga

>>6231014
Sick textures anon

>>6230039
I took some of your advice and I think she looks a lot better! My definition in the outline around the shirt. Darker lip and teeth outlines. More shading in the face although I made it very subtle. And a little darker shading in the shirt. She stands out a ton more now

>>6231491
I think it looks much nicer! Good work buddy.

>>6231491
Why do you sign this shit lmao

>>6232286
Because it's my art? Are you calling it short because it's bad?

>>6232355
Shit*

>>Open thread
>>A war is starting

And OP wondering why people don't want to join these kind of thread.

>>6232286
don't be a rude boy.

>>6230872
I spent a lot more time drawing cars than people, which means my cars are okay but human anatomy sucks.

what think? Feel like i cant keep my quality consistent across a given piece

>>6230969
good eye anon, natural movement

Working on this piece almost finished. Anything off?
>>6232529
I think it looks good but I think the eyes are messed up in their placement. It’s a bit high up. Or maybe it’s because I see the second eyebrow?
>>6232515
Dynamic. Cartoony. Solid piece.
>>6231014
Strong lines. Great shading with your linework.
>>6230793
Is it a rapier?

>>6232606
Second eyebrow is what I was going for yes

go for it
would appreciate any kind of crticicsm
also if anyone knows of a good way to color without some of the colors going out of the lines in the processs thatd be great

>>6232606
were you trying to portray the sun as part of the foreground with the dragon? If so that makes sense but my brain wants the sun to be in the background

>>6223391

>>6234244
It’s the background. And that’s a raptor.

>>6223391
A character from a comic im making
I was originally going to call him Muhamad idris like a jazz drum player who has that name but since the history develops arround the 7th century I fear to get my head chopped by some muslim who could interpret that name as a mock to the prophet.
why is creating a comic so hard bros???

>>6234542
Fuck I forgot the pic, my bad
What is my current level?

>>6234533
ah yes that is indeed a raptor ima retard. however for the sun to look set back farther i would suggest removing the connection point on the bottom left of the sun. the way the cloud is drawn around the sun it gives the impression that the sun is sitting in the same clouds as the raptor

>>6234602
pic for reference

>>6234602
Lol, you’re good. I have redrawn this thing several times. If it still read as a dragon I’m just giving up on trying to fix it.
I see what you mean. It’s not shown in the near final. But thank you. Need to add more horns/bumps to the raptor. And turn the circle into a rope. And coloring the jets. How does it look? I adjusted the size of the jet in the foreground.

>>6234699
id actually like to see the jet in the foreground a tad bit bigger tbqhwy. and are your going to add text to the leftside of the ribbon?

>>6234800
Yes. But I didn't want people to be able to look up the Unit.
Is there anything else you think looks off?

>>6234807
the background sky leaves a little bit to be desired, perhaps a tiny bit more color. And also i dont know why but the lead background jet kind of bothers me since its angle is offset from the rear two planes. Jets fly in tight formations and i think it would look better if the lead jet angle matched the rear two

>>6234699
my eyes instantly read the ribbon text as "RAPTOR ANUS" kek I might just have a broken mind from years on 4chan but it might be something to consider

>>6234817
It looks less dynamic if I change the angle of the jet. It’s not in a close formation because if it was the jet wouldn’t be in the foreground. I treat it like it’s pulling up out of the clouds to join them.
I saturated the sky more.
>>6234870
I definitely think you’re broken anon lmao. Possibly dyslexic. Possibly a homo. Definitely a faggot.
But thank you. I’ll have the commissioner look it over just to make sure.

>>6234883
Is it too late to change the front jet significantly? I have the nagging feeling that it would look better if it was coming more directly in/out of the plane of image through the clouds rather than at the 45ish degree angle it is presently.

>>6234964
>it would look better if it was coming more directly in/out of the plane of image through the clouds
What?
If you’re asking for it to look like the others then it just looks worse. I can’t quite understand what you mean?

>>6234969
Right now the both the jets and raptor are both almost in profile view (their facing is in plane with the image). I think the composition might benefit from the jets being turned horizontally 15-30 degree towards the viewer, making their facing closer to perpendicular with the raptor (and in/out of the image plane). It would make the composition feel more dynamic and fill some of the dead space that exists between the raptor and the front jet right now. Does that make sense?

Today's Drawings.

>>6234977
I think I understand what you mean something like this?

>>6234993
Yes, that’s exactly it. I should’ve just posted an example to begin with, my bad.

what happened to this thread and who let all the /beg/s in?

>>6235304
people like you are why draw threads haven't been a thing for months. anyone is welcome to post here, faggot

>>6235304
This is a thread for art criticism, not to show off. Your ego is meaningless here.

>>6235304
PYW

>>6235304
pyw faggit

>>6234699
very kewl

>>6235459
>>6235456
no

>>6235304
/beg/ lost all meaning when it was integrated /int/

Im trying to get into more a dynamic look to my drawings if you guys can give some pointers

>>6235888
Shut the fuck up.

>>6236055
Try drawing sitting up rather than laying on your side.

henlo draw thread, missed you an stuff.

Today I completely shut off stabilization, and drew the first things that came to mind with no reference. Drawing from imagination is hard bros. Pls tell me what you think.

>>6237050
really nice line weights

bump

Am I a beg? If so, how do I improve from here?

>>6241403
hopefully this doesn't dissuade you because at least you're actually drawing but yes you are beg, literally just pick any of the fundies and study that and you'll improve over what you just posted

Corona's Mask
Third day of COVID

New to painting, need opinions on this. I think Im getting it though.

>>6242101
Yeah I think you're well on your way. Values are nice, could really use more edge variety. Lots of soft vs hard edge youtube videos to watch

>>6241403
Do the first 3 books in the og sticky. Fun with a pencil, right side of the brain, keys to drawing. You can bounce around from each book but really do them and you'll rocket

I did this painting, feels really amateurish but I cant figure out why

>>6242420
Thanks. Ill check out some videos. Could you tell me which edges you would change?

>>6242470
I'd go sharper for the edges of her skin and certain parts of the hair. Especially with the hair you can convey where the strands are denser with sharper edges. You've already done that but it doesnt feel very intentional, I think you can tighten it up and vary it more creating more interesting shapes. For the skin things like her shoulders and neck have blended edges similar to the falling parts of the hair, it makes no sense since skin isnt translucent like falling hair is. If you dont mind the look using a lasso tool to preserve edges is good, if you want it painterly you can go on with a textured but still hard brush, just make sure its distinctly different than the hair.

In general its good to keep in mind your edges should be relative to the rest of your painting, if you like soft edges then soft things should be even more soft

>>6223391
im working on some fan art from a manga. is this the right place to post something like that?

>>6223391

I just drew this. What to work on?

>>6242855
Make the 3d models look less stiff.
Fix the stiff hands, play with line thickness, etc

>>6242485
Ah okay, didnt think too much about shoulders and hair. Thanks.

>>6242855
My penis.

>>6242590
Anything to bump the draw thread that isn't coom would be welcome, fren

Not a big gun guy, so some of the technical details might be off.

>>6245785
Don't have time to fix things like the foreshortened hand or the overall terrible muddy edges but I think if you changed these things your painting would vastly improve:
hips are assymetrical, hand too small, and in general the guns dont make sense functionally nor look graphically appealing.
Your biggest problem is the torso and her face. Right now she has a very square jaw and the structure of the chest is not only wrtong but feels weirdly masculine. For how thicc you made her on the bottom this seems a bit weird you went this direction.

any ways i can fix up the pose?

>>6247941
It depends on what the character is supposed to be doing. Is she dancing? Keeping her balance? Or waving her hand while walking?

>>6223391
I know it’s chicken scratch but I hope it’s ok anyways.

Someone critique my anatomy pls. First time really drawing with no ref. Nsfw, over in /salt/:
>>6250715
>>6250494

>>6247941
Maybe make arms a little shorter/smaller. Look kinda like auxillary legs rn

>>6242428
Pillow shading and inconsistent light direction. Also her shoulder girdle has no form, you gotta give her collarbones/traps.

tried out one of those new fangled ipads today, spent 20 minutes messing around with it :)

Been working forever trying to make the skin look good

>>6252679
this looks like AI shit

>>6251914
nice, feels like i could really be there

>>6252699
beep boop beep.
Why do you think it looks like AI tho?

Life drawings from today

>>6252828
2 of 2

>>6252830
Your style is fucking great nice work

Drew this just there

>>6251616
I'm pillow shading Anon, thank you I'm working on portrait lighting studies

>>6253094
I'm that anon, this is 100% better. Drawing from life/sculpting (digital or not) will help a lot for building intuition about this if you dont have a ref

>>6252838
Thanks m8

this is my pet robert

>>6253947
what a sweet lil' guy!
*pets him* *pets him* *pe

Trying to change from being a tradfag, but I can only use a mouse to draw.

I bought a chinese tablet someone shilled here, but for the life of my I cant transition to use it. Feels unnatural to draw with a pen, and look up at a screen at the same time.
For some reason a mouse feels better

>>6253969
you'll get used to it

>>6253969
It's definitely a long game. I started with an intuos. Early on I relied a lot on stabilization and smoothing. Even when I started using a screen tablet I still abused stabilization. Now I'm finally comfortable and switch it all the way off. Took about two years to get there.

>>6230969

Yo're still focusing on form over gesture which is why they're coming out a little on the stiff side. Don't focus as much on the shapes/forms for quick sketches as you do the action itself.

Proko has a good video on this.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=74HR59yFZ7Y

>>6254343

Did the first piece I'm happy with in a while today, and that's only because I didn't experiment with anything I'm not good at

>>6256269
Make the signature bigger and more legible so people know where to find you.

I feel competent with painting shapes and values simultaneously, but I find it impossible once I also start evaluating color at the same time. I'm competent with color if I have a sketch ready (shapes already defined) or am working on a small thumbnail, but I want to learn to do shapes, values & color all at once without preparation. Any advice

Finished a new thing, it has some issues and probably too much SFX but I like it

>>6256852
Damn this looks good.

>>6256726
Holy SHIT imagine cupping this guys balls this hard. When are you gonna paint him all sweaty after a fight you faggot.

This one was from yesterday, it's a mother of another character I've made as a human (or well, one with horns..), if any of yous think I could improve on any bits of her I'll save them for later, I'll try to find a photo of how she usually looks. I usually draw more cutesy/ugly-cute(?) Things, idk something that looks like it could belong in the binding of Isaac I guess you can put it, I'm not too sure how to explain my style lol

>>6256852
really cool!

I found one of her of how she usually looks but this one was way back when I first drew her (9/13/21),I don't draw her that much since she isn't in my main character cast, this one also includes her husband and their child

pencil tool and a dream

>>6256968
If you wanted me to do you next all you had to do was ask, Ian

>>6257732
Lmao come on man, what else do you paint srs

>>6234295
Really good.
Head is a bit small, unless that is intentional. I prefer small heads myself as well, they're more beautiful.

>>6257849
lol I just painted those cause I wanted to learn human faces. Usually I do studies of random environment screenshots or attempt portraits from imagination. I just want to get good enough to make complex compositions with ease without crutches

>>6256726
Lmao, draw Sam Hyde, wearing Hasan's face like a leatherface mask next.

Recommendations on learning/getting better at digital painting?
Pic related, posted before, is my level. I haven't studied painting in any way, just other ways of digital drawing and rendering, and have very little idea about actual painting.
So, I guess the question is: recommend some digital painting series/tutorials to someone who has a some idea about digital drawing and the tools, but that much about actual digital painting and it's processes and workflows?

>>6257931
jesus christ

That feeling when you can draw good but you put in no time into it so you make crap

Why is it like this anons? I have the power but not the will...

(Art not mine)

AOS lizardmen but they're bearded dragons in Akira Toriyama's style sort of

>>6256726
lmao god that fight is going to be brutal

>>6223391
Test

>>6258103
Had a hard time conveying the identity of a skinned face and also that of the face underneath, but I hope the context is enough. Should have tried color, that might have made it clearer

>>6260390
Gave me a good laugh, nice work.

>>6242855
>just trace bro

>>6223391
>>6223391
holy shit this is the best web mannekin system i've seen
https://justsketch.me/

>>6259681
I can't find your social media using that handle. Awesome stuff!

>>6223391
Its not perfect but it was good practice, it took me way longer that it should but i had fun.

>>6229707
I like the confident lines and the effort on the details.

Though I can't help but imagine you're scratching your head as to why the drawing still looks uninteresting despite the amount of details you added to the objects. The answer is, the perspective is wrong, the proportions of the objects don't make sense, a lot of these details seem added from imagination and don't make sense, the overall composition is boring and there's too much empty space.

Try drawing stuff around your room to get a better grasp of them 3d shapes.

>>6230969
Like the other anon said, you're focusing too much on the outline of the body instead of the gesture. Keep up the good work tho

>>6231014
I don't know what I'm looking at but it's kinda cool

>>6232515
They look kinda wonky, you're clearly cheating on the perspective, but I like this style.

>>6233824
Seems like you tried defining the light direction on her face and hand, but gave up for the rest of the body. Like, why is her chest a light color and her boobs dark, but then her shoulder is dark and her underboob light?

Studying light and shadow and values will greatly improve your painting skills.
For coloring without colors going out the lines, lasso tool and layer masks are your friends, use it a ton.

>>6234542
Current level is beginner but don't sweat about it. I'm assuming you're young? Also, pretty much every muslim is named Muhammad so I wouldn't worry about having your head chopped off, unless you're actually drawing the prophet and you get famous enough to be noticed.

>>6234986
Weird style but I like where it's going. Shapes are a bit unappealing now but I can see these looking really cool as you improve.

>>6244453
A bit rough but I like it. Keep up the good work.

>>6251506
Kinda cool, hatching is pretty random though. Wish you’d use it more intentionally to indicate shadow and form.

>>6252828
>>6252830
Cool studies.

>>6253094
Nice

>>6254343
This looks awesome, my brazilian brother.

>>6256269
Lots of questionable choices here, hope you’re practicing them fundamentals in between these personal paintings. The good news is the more you paint, the more you’ll churn out drawings you’re happy with.

>>6256726
I feel your pain about colors, I don’t quite get what you’re asking for, but I wanted to say I really like these sketches.

>>6256852
You went way waaaay overboard with the seagulls lol. The light effect on the top left too. Other than that you nailed the mood, overall it looks cool.

>>6256994
She looks cute but there’s way too much shit on her head. You need to simplify her design a bit. Her outfit is pretty lame too, needs more thought put into her dress.

>>6265694
Values too dark, and I have no idea what’s going on with the planes on his face, the lighting is everywhere. Did you get some sort of black, super reflective statue as reference?

>>6263648
@lizard_hand on instagram (it's new), and thank you!

>>6265878
>Did you get some sort of black, super reflective statue as reference
ding ding ding!
look kinda wonky isn't?
I wonder if my line art is too thick, and shouldn't had used a canvas texture to represent metal lol.

Trying to paint on a single layer

>>6266456
Line art and texture aren't the problem, I mean ideally you'd paint over the line art and it wouldn't be visible at all. What's more important is this is not a good reference for a study, unless you're trying to study how to render metallic materials.

In any case, rendering metallic stuff is pretty advanced, you need to have a good understanding of how the planes of the face work and how light interacts with those before jumping to that next step of reflective surfaces.

>>6266546
Kill me

>>6263688
hot

>>6223391
Hello /draw/ today i come asking about how to improve lines and how to improve my shading.I'll post more images.
This is my fanart
cont.

>>6267300
when it comes to lineart how can i get these nice lines.(seen in the bottom pictures)

>>6267302
the other thing is about shading.
How can i make things shine and when is it appropriate for a specific material (say hair) to shine
And how do i get it to look shiny.

I want to improve my ability to invent anatomy, especially if I can't find direct references and need to change things.
What should I go through? Hogarth? Some Bridgeman's book?

>>6267300
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AlmR-WKdi3c

Practice controlling your lines, intentionally making it thicker and thinner.

A thicker line in your drawing should indicate more mass, closeness to the camera, or even shadow.

In your reference you can see a lot of that, how the line is thicker at her boobs and thighs, and how the lines start thinner at the edges but gets thicker in the middle of the round shapes. Do a lot of copies of the line art you like and try to understand their process.

All that said, it's not the cleanliness of the line art that makes this guy's drawing look sick, it's his understanding of form and how to design appealing shapes.

https://youtu.be/V3WmrWUEIJo

https://youtu.be/-dqGkHWC5IU

"Shading" is a lot more complex of a topic, you have to practice painting basic 3d shapes, you need to understand how light and shadow work and how shadow "edges" indicate the forms of your subject. And finally, how to better plan the values of light in your painting.

https://youtu.be/TfAZt3O0sLY?t=371

I threw a lot of jargon in there but hopefully the videos will help all this make sense

>>6267506
Thanks a lot
>It's his understanding of form and how to design appealing shapes.
You happen a to have any good reference material on that?

>>6267535

There's a lot that goes into "designing shapes", so I don't have an easy source that would cover everything, sorry.
I can point you to a few videos that give a bit of insight on that though.

An overview on shapes
https://youtu.be/TfAZt3O0sLY?t=111

The overall shape of a figure drawing
https://youtu.be/AzDGO0LssEM?t=296
Study the overall shape of the figure. When figure drawing, practice looking at the negative space of the picture (meaning all the white space in this photo)
A good drawing starts from a very readable, interesting silhouette.

Gesture drawings
https://youtu.be/74HR59yFZ7Y
Gesture drawings are not about the contours of the body per se, but they help a lot when thinking of the simplest way of communicating a pose. The more solid is the read of a pose, the easier it will be to build on it.

Communicating 3D form
https://youtu.be/3uEtdDvK6Xo
Thinking of arms as cylinders, the torso as a square and so on first goes a long way to help creating drawings that look more "real".

And finally, good shapes
https://youtu.be/-ZknWKTpc90
This video goes into what are good abstract shapes, and how they form a good drawing, it applies better to painting, but it's very insightful I think.

There are a ton of other sources that help you figure out how to make your designs more appealing, but I don't have them off the top of my head.
Analyzing and trying to "copy" art you like is a good way to understand what makes them work.
Concept artists are also pretty good at teaching how to design good shapes. Here are some random videos I like that I thought of.

https://youtu.be/6T_-DiAzYBc
https://youtu.be/J8g3JKobvnk
https://youtu.be/pH0mK1Vvz_E

I don't know if any of this helps at all but it's what I could come up with in a short period of time lol

>>6267506
>>6268516
thanks a lot i think i'll start tackling each one of these one by one and by the end i might have something presentable.

thoughts welcome. distorted on purpose, wasn't going for realism, wanted to dab on a little bit of a russian/asian delicacy

Some work of mine I've been remastering digitally

I might be done with this. It just hit me that she looks like a soldier even though it wasn't my intention. Might work on those shoes a bit more or something, idk. Crit welcome and needed.

>>6270779
i like it

Toruses are hard to draw :/

>>6273756
>>6272110
>>6270832
>>6268636
>>6267300
What part of "downsized to around 100 pixels wide" you don't understand you retards?

>>6275873
*1000 pixels wide

>>6275873
cry about it nerdo

>>6275873
>>6275874
typo = argument invalid

>>6276004
Cry more about not getting any crits, gluesniffer :^)

>>6276612
you just know

>>6276097
:'^(

bump

>>6275873
why is this important

>>6281693
Moron.

bump

Is photobashing accepted? Do you do it also or is this just my dirty little secret?

>>6286580
beyond shit

>>6286622
Harsh anon, it'll get better I promise

bump

>>6281693
It makes viewing your art much easier and it downloads faster.

>>6286627
>>6286580
If you can't make it look good quickly what's the point anon? It looks like shiet, period

>>6252679
Wow, this is really bad, I haven't seen your stuff in months I'm surprised how much you still suck... I'm disappointed in you dude

>>6289899
I like it, whats wrong with it? :)

Sketching and moving forward perhaps with this one.

>>6289878
amazing and soul.

>>6290645
continuing with rendering, playing with brush styles and shapes and figuring shit out for funzeez.

>>6291063
Thanks!

>>6260390
Perhaps darkening the holes of the eyes or lightening the values in the area around the hole of the mask, really show the depth between the real face and leather face. I gave it a go, also try to see the mask and a piece of fabric if that helps.

i think i followed the construction lines a bit too much lmao

anyways im doing basic exercises from the morpho book

Doodled a cleaver last night.

what im currently working on

>>6293917
What is it

>>6293918
it's a mess of random stuff i've drawn & memes, just make them for fun desu

the color on this is awful & i gotta fix it

>>6289878
comfy.
those metallic dovetails in the wall are sexy.

>>6291146
Yeah, that's infinitely clearer. good advice, thanks anon

Hmm, this one didn't turn out so well.
The proportions are kind of unappealing, and the sense of material on the bolster is off.