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/beg/ & /int/ - Beginner and Intermediate Thread Anonymous Wed Jul 27 17:03:33 2022 No.6183492 [Reply] [Original]

If you are a /beginner or /int/ermediate in art, please use this thread to post pieces for critique or ask for advice.
Use this thread instead of making new threads or post in the drawthread with fundamental exercises.

RESIZE YOUR IMAGES TO ~1000 PIXELS using one of the following methods:
1. screenshot the image and post that instead
2. change camera capture settings to something smaller
3. send to computer and resize in MSPaint

RECOMMENDED BOOKS FOR BEGINNERS:
- Keys to drawing
- Framed perspective
- Figure - Design and invention
- Pen and Ink

TRY TO BE ACTIVE AND GIVE PEOPLE SOME FEEDBACK.
When giving feedback, avoid vague "advice" - point what's wrong and try to give the anon you're quoting a clear direction to improve their art (study heads < watch THIS VIDEO about head structure, read THIS SECTION of THIS ARTIST'S BOOK, etc).
You, feedback seeking anon, should also try to be clear and concise when asking for critique/help. When posting your artwork, say what you want help with, and what's your goal with the study/artwork.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a3uxMdokX68

REMINDER TO IGNORE POSTS VIOLATING RULE 1
"All images and discussion should pertain to the critique of visual artwork."
(ex art dumps, posts without text, posters that don't ask questions or seek help)

Previous thread: >>6178986

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 27 17:06:44 2022 No.6183498 >>6183492 how did you fuck up this bad? >>6183467 was posted 10 minutes ago.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 27 17:12:19 2022 No.6183505 Chad Gmi Op, bump. WE gonna make it.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 27 17:44:29 2022 No.6183558 >>6183492 just make these threads for /int/s only so there isn't some gay fight over the OP

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 28 00:39:34 2022 No.6184199 File: 280 KB, 900x872, asura2.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>6183492 i drew aaaahhhhh

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 28 00:54:12 2022 No.6184220 File: 623 KB, 1904x1194, file.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Today's practice

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 28 02:49:16 2022 No.6184391 I'm burning through my 8B pencil a lot faster than I thought I would. Actually wearing down pencils is not a thing I'm familiar with.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 28 03:19:43 2022 No.6184431 I just started loomis and I can't believe how fun and easy drawing is, I should've started before.

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god damn I haven't posted in one of these threads in a year. was anybody else here lurking in the beg threads last july-ish? left picture in picrel is my first post here, right is a wip from today

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 28 03:29:44 2022 No.6184450 File: 1.41 MB, 3508x4960, Emma.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] how do I make my art not legitimately vomit-inducing?

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 28 03:30:18 2022 No.6184452 >>6184450 Your hands are backwards.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 28 03:32:15 2022 No.6184456 There's already a thread up, retards: 6183467

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 28 03:32:26 2022 No.6184458 >>6184452 I'm well aware. I feel physically sick looking at anything and everything I draw

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 28 03:33:49 2022 No.6184462 >>6183467 >>6183467 >>6183467 >>6183467 >>6183467 >>6183467 >>6183467 >>6183467 >>6183467 >>6183467 >>6183467 >>6183467 >>6183467 >>6183467 >>6183467 >>6183467 >>6183467 >>6183467

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Anonymous Thu Jul 28 03:36:36 2022 No.6184471
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>>6184199
Proiud of you, son. Keep it up.
>>6184220
Looking good, just a quick note about hips. In a standing pose, if the leg is bent then the corresponding hip should be lowered. In figure 1, the right leg is bent and going behind the figure, so the right hip should drop. In figure 3, the left leg is bent, so the left hip is dropped. Of course the one exception to this is if the figure is standing on one leg.
>>6184391
It's no wonder you're burning through that pencil. 8B has got to be one of the softest leads available.
>>6184431
Gmi

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 28 03:37:29 2022 No.6184472 >>6183467 >>6183467 >>6183467 >>6183467 >>6183467 >>6183467 >>6183467 >>6183467 >>6183467 >>6183467 >>6183467 >>6183467 - >>6183467 >>6183467 >>6183467 >>6183467 >>6183467 >>6183467 >>6183467 >>6183467 >>6183467 >>6183467 >>6183467 >>6183467

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 28 03:38:10 2022 No.6184473 >>6184450 i think it looks cute

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 28 03:39:51 2022 No.6184479 File: 930 KB, 890x1113, 002.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

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>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 28 06:49:16 2022 No.6184701 >>6184471 >Proiud of you, son. Keep it up. Thanks dad ^-^)

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 28 10:45:40 2022 No.6184900 >>6184471 Thanks for the red lines and advice anon, they helped a lot. I've got a lot of work to do on my legs and feet.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 28 11:38:37 2022 No.6184952 File: 1.27 MB, 1920x1080, Illustration2.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] i wanna draw more....

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