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Previous Thread: >>6173189

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>> No.6181412

>>6181408

I forgot about the prompt template thing the moment I posted so I'll do that next thread.

>> No.6181423
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done, i'm trying do more characters in perspective

>> No.6181524

>>6181423
3/4 view isn't "in perspective", or at least most people wouldn't consider it to be what "in perspective" means.

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>> No.6181616

>>6181524
fuck off retard
>>6181423
she's so cute gj, in my opinion i think the perspective of the feet feels off, try drawing her feet in a less distorted perspective

>> No.6181622

>>6181423
that's still a front facing standing up drawing, the effort you gotta put to draw such a thing on perspective is little to no existent

cute drawing but still, low effort

>> No.6181628

>>6181574
>>6181570
Cute, but I think there are size issues.
The left foot feels too big, especially when compared to her left arm, which looks really really thin.

>> No.6181703

Sorry i posted twice, the site wasn't working when i posted so i tried again.
>>6181570
>>6181574

>> No.6181806
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>> No.6181831

>>6181806
we are reaching fridge levels previously thought of as impossible

>> No.6181833

>>6181806
Extremely good.

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>>6181806

>> No.6181882

>>6181423
>>6181806
This is the level of quality I expect from /lsg/

>> No.6181892

>>6181806
Stop chicken scratching.

>> No.6182371
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>> No.6182385

>>6182371
do you have a pixiv?

>> No.6182388

>>6182371
is that a

>> No.6182403

>>6182371
great work as always

>> No.6182411

>>6182385
>>6182388
>>6182403
Samefag

>> No.6182415

>>6182411
impotent /beg/tard rage

>> No.6182417

>>6182371
Not loli. We don't welcome you.
>>6182415
Fuck off and samefag somewhere else.

>> No.6182419

>>6182411

I actually ironically replied to drip even though I know their blog already TO BE FAIR.

>> No.6182420

>>6182417
>We
Let me guess, the lolisho community?

>> No.6182448

>>6182417
>we
how many schizos does this general have lol

>> No.6182450

>>6182371
is it a boy? cuz of the nips (or are those tiny plasters?)
either way cute

>> No.6182452

>>6182371
which vtuber is this?

>> No.6182460

>>6182371
this cute boy needs to mate with an older voluptuous woman

>> No.6182461

don't be a faggot

>> No.6182468

>>6182461
Funny story I remembered from my shota days. One time at a kindergarten my mom worked at we each took turns playing this game for prizes. So when I won the game I remember wanting some other prize but I got the "worst" prize and it was a gigantic pikachu and blastoise pink pencil. I remember being unhappy about it and the "teacher" told me "Anon, don't be gay".


I think that was my first pokemon related merch I got but I didn't know wh..mabe I did know what pokemon was, who knows. I think I was 5 at the time.

>> No.6182474

>>6182461
odi you're just mad you aren't a cute boy

>> No.6182479

>>6182474
even better--I'm a cute girl

>> No.6182483

>>6182371
Pretty good, but mari isn't a loli

>> No.6182514
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>>6181408
drew a lankier than usual character. I'm primarily a horror artist

>> No.6182520

>>6182371
>>6182514
>>6181574
not loli

>> No.6182522
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6182522

Picked this up again after dropping it for a few days.
I toned down the perspective on the left pic
>>6182514
I think you should play with the composition to try to guide the eye towards her. For example those flying things on the background are distracting, but maybe if you reduced the contrast with the environment and realigned them to "point" towards her face it would look better. I'm not too good with composition tho, so take it with a grain of salt.

>> No.6182524

>>6182522
The left one has quite few problems. The shoulders look stiff/flat. The hair isn't laying in the same perspective as whatever she's sitting on. The perspective on the lower legs isn't pushed enough so it looks like her legs are comically short instead of foreshortened.

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>>6182520
is this loli enough for you?

>> No.6182552

>>6179875
>>6179899
Very cute Kokkoro drawing.
I'm still learning perspective (so pretty much the very beginning), but what were your studying resources to get to this point? Any book, video or course recommendations?

>> No.6182555

>>6182371
Blog?

>> No.6182559

>>6182528
HAG

>> No.6182560

>>6182522
Looks neat. Do you have a pixiv or twitter handle?

>> No.6182574

>>6182371
This outfit seems familiar (at least the hood/coif). Source?

>> No.6182580

>>6182560
https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/56952101

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>>6182580
no way, you made this?
I see it in a bunch of places when i google alice

>> No.6182810

>>6182806
Yeah I did, it's really old and crappy, I don't know why anyone would use it

>> No.6182815

>>6182810
doesn't really look different from your current art, like at all.

>> No.6182816
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>>6182552
Not him, but i recommend learning to rotate cubes and cylinders then using them when constructing, also try getting one of these to help out they're cheap, easy to pose and small enough to fit on a desk, i got this for 8 dollars.
You can also use csp models if you'd like, i just prefer this as it's easy to rotate and always ready. Just remember that the proportions won't work for anime girls and you'll have to change stuff around when drawing, still if you learn cubes and cylinders it would be much easier.

>> No.6182819

>>6182810
it's really great though, have some confidence in yourself!

>> No.6182820

>>6182816
>Not him
Stopped reading there. Post your work right now.

>> No.6182829

>>6182819
>>6182806
People like him plateau and never improve because of you.

>> No.6182841

>>6182829
No, the blame is on the artist himself. Praise does not cause stagnation, retard.

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>>6182841
Eloquently put, therein the text lies evidence of a highly experienced and matured draftsman who's toiled decades of self criticism I can tell you are one who not only is a connoisseur of the fine arts you conceive, shape and design works that are practically of philosophy in visual arts yourself! It's a great pleasure being in the presence of a grand composer such as yourself.

>> No.6182858

>>6182854
Maybe you'd stop being a permabeg if you practiced self criticism too, mikufag.

>> No.6182875

>>6182841
being mean and rude also causes stagnation and even quiting!

>> No.6182909

>>6182875
Then they never cared about drawing in the first place.

>> No.6182917

I will prostitute my cute lolis to rich fat aristocrats

>> No.6182920
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what am i doing wrong? why doesn’t she look like a loli

>> No.6182922

>>6182920
she has the proportions of a shortstack

>> No.6182935

>>6182920
If you got rif of the head she'd ahve the body of an voluptuous or chubby women.

>> No.6182955

>>6182920
Looks like the genshin potato model.

>> No.6183023

>>6182858
miku isn’t a beginner

>> No.6183064

>>6182816
I can't believe you'd recommend those wooden dolls when you have literal figmas behind it with greater rotation in the joints. Are you intentionally trying to mislead?

>> No.6183067

>>6182920
Hips too wide.

>> No.6183093

>>6181835
Is that a custom model?
Post all pics you have of this.

>> No.6183104

>>6181835
I went to check their website (haven't since 2012?) and they removed the mascot and replaced it with globohomo art and a stereotypical owl. I'm saddened.

>> No.6183119

https://files.catbox.moe/9gisfz.png

Any input before I move on?

>> No.6183126

>>6183119
those legs are terrible

>> No.6183130

>>6183126
Corrected the thickness already, is the gesture itself shit as well? If so I can't see it, could you help me out?

>> No.6183140

>>6183023
he's perma/highbeg/ and all of his work looks like he traces models

>> No.6183153
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>>6183119

>> No.6183158

>>6183153
Ahh okay, thank you.

>> No.6183211

>>6183140
though he completes his work which automatically places them in /int/

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>>6182920
Pretty much as the other anons said, the hips are too wide (and arguably the thighs too)
You can get a way with giving a loli wide hips like picrel, but imo you pushed it too far

>> No.6183236
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>>6182920
Imo when it comes to drawing lolis, your drawing style for the head pre-determines what kind of body goes with it. That's why shrinking heads to make a loli doesn't work.

If I cover the body, I'd imagine her to have a body that's more realistic than her current chibi-like one. If you want to keep the wide hips, you'll have the tweak the head to match.

>> No.6183237

>>6183211
unfinished sketch with appeal > overpolished turd

>> No.6183239

>>6181806
reminds me of oekaki stuff hosted on early 2000s japanese websites

>> No.6183256

>>6183215
those hipes aren't that wide though, its a normal hip rate with a perspective from down-to-top, if it were any thinner it would look retarded with a broken perspective

>> No.6183282

>>6183215
The perfect body

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6183308

>>6183211
>t.

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>>6182524
Better?
I don't think I can make the legs work, I'm not good enough with perspective

>> No.6183314

>>6183308
Avoiding to complete a piece for fear of turd polishing is your coping mechanism at work due to an even bigger underlying fear of failure which will render you unable to move away from a rut and remain stuck indefinitely. Only on /ic/ will you find suggestions that finishing a drawing is detrimental to improvement.

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>>6183314
forgot to mention >>6183308 is the same tier and quality of your boy Alke from way back when and by your definition he "turd polished" but of course you wouldn't dare compare Alke because he's your go to boy now whenever you need a wank.

>> No.6183326

>>6183320
Ok but then why are you still so /beg/, miku?

>> No.6183327

>>6183320
haven't you been drawing for the same amount of time as him?

>> No.6183328

>>6183308
This one gets posted a lot, does anyone know the artist or origin of this polished t...

>> No.6183334

>>6183328
https://www.deviantart.com/danferrez/art/Midnight-Blossoming-NSFW-760869567

>> No.6183339

>>6183334
I can see this guy becoming the next Alke the similarities are uncanny and you can tell he puts a great deal of effort despite the flaws and disproportionate features but guess what he possesses which most if not all of you are lacking?

>> No.6183343

>>6183339
The power to cope?

>> No.6183353

>>6183119
Is that venera-sama?

>> No.6183354

>>6183343
You'll eat those words someday when this new guy starts being spammed on the first page from bitter and jelly rivals nitpicking his work while he is in animeland working at the same studio next to Kuvshinov.

>> No.6183369

>>6183354
Sorry, miku, but this guy doesn't have what it takes to get good and you don't either. Alke's early work is very different, and he got better way faster than the other guy has been drawing. You can tell he had actual goals he was trying to achieve.

>> No.6183376

>>6183369

>you don't either
And what about you?

>> No.6183379

>>6183376
I'd say I do, but I'm not gonna get cocky because that's bad for improvement.

>> No.6183380

>>6183369
Give this guy another five years nigger just wait and see.

>> No.6183387

>>6183379
>not being cocky

Nothing wrong with chuuni thinking. Become the demonlord or art that you were born to be.

>> No.6183390

>>6183380
He's already been drawing for 6. I think it's safe to say that this is his maximum potential.

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>>6183390
Maybe you should send him an invite to /ic/, if you won't then I will. His last post was last month so it is safe to say he's watching his DA account for any new feedback.

>> No.6183395

>>6183392
/ic/ will only make him worse. Especially if you're gonna be the one giving "advice".

>> No.6183398

>>6183392
do it
we need fresh blood

>> No.6183400

>>6183395
Did you not read his blog post on his homepage? He wants others to interact with him and seeing how he's become somewhat of a meme here I believe he'll relish in the fact that we have discussions about him.

>> No.6183420

>>6183400
It would be pretty funny you invite him to /ic/, give him advice, and he ends up surpassing you.

>> No.6183429

>>6183420
Feeling a little intimidated there faggot? Also what a fucking cancerous site DA has become I can't find how to simply send a message to this guy.

>> No.6183432

>>6183429
Just leave a comment on his latest post. He'll see it.

>> No.6183434

>>6183387
Thinking you're the chosen one is how you end up with permabegs.

>> No.6183469

>>6183429

>Feeling a little intimidated there faggot?

Are you? That’s my line. I want to document the best case of an /ic/ student surpasses the master case. Hurry up and get him over here.

>> No.6183473

>>6183469
I can't force him to come here but if he gets enough messages from you faggots he may believe it is legitimate instead of a literally who that just created an account minutes ago so allow your balls to drop and message him even if it means we may see your blog in the process.

>> No.6183475

>>6183469
>I want to document the best case of an /ic/ student surpasses the master case.
Is this some kind of projection? In any case, you're delusional.

>> No.6183486

>>6183475
we’re talking about surpassing miku here

>> No.6183488

>>6183473
I’m pretty sure deviant art still has dms. i’ll message him in a few minutes

>> No.6183490

>>6183486
He is already better than miku.

>> No.6183503

>>6183490
He’s not but with a little touch on the groin from /ic/ he will be better.

>> No.6183513

yikes…does deviant tranny censor the word 4chan in dms? guess i can’t even mention this place.

>> No.6183519

>>6183513
Are you really too retarded to figure out how to invite him here without explicitly stating it?

>> No.6183522

>>6183513
Why can't you be a little bit more subtle instead of blatantly name dropping the infamous haxor known as 4chin?

>> No.6183524

>>6183519
i left a post instead on an inactive acc

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So this is the true power of FKEY

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>>6183573
i kneel

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>>6183490
this but unironically

>> No.6183614

>>6183598
Mikubeg should get lessons from this guy.

>> No.6183657

>>6183598
he’s actually better than a lot of lsgers here…even you

>> No.6183668

>>6183657
I'm a lurker, not a participant :)

>> No.6183677

>>6183668
even worse

>> No.6183697

>>6183677
any display of skill makes the crabs ITT meltdown so there's no point

>> No.6183708

>>6183697
the only problem, in this instance, is
>skills
are nonexistent here by refusal of display

>> No.6183719

>>6183708
Wait till 2k posts again and you'll see what he meant.

>> No.6183721

>>6183719
I want it from that anon, not y2k.

>> No.6183739

>>6183708
Posting work here is just fuel for drama/vendetta faggots regardless of skill. There's nothing to gain from my posting work.

>> No.6183748

>>6183739
It's fags like you that makes me wish not posting work would result in a bannable offense, what are you even doing here?

>> No.6183751

>>6183748
That's just a symptom of the problem. Ban crabs first.

>> No.6183752

>>6183739
those issues only exist in your head unless you’re 1 particular person who is my -love- interest. Couldn’t care any less about you otherwise.

>> No.6183756

>>6183751
>boohoohoo someone posteds mean things about my art alboo abloo

>> No.6183764

>>6183756
And then you wonder why all the good artists left.

>> No.6183766

>>6183764
>wonder why all the good artists left
not wondering that

>> No.6183767

>>6183766
I hope you at least realize you're the cancer killing /ic/

>> No.6183773

>>6183767
>I hope you at least realize
What's with this 'getting in my head' business you keep doing? I just asked for your art and you keep going off on schizobabble.

>> No.6183776

>>6183767
That's literally the goal of these autistic vendetta retards. They utterly failed in life so they live to bring everyone else down to their level.
God I wish these pathetic parasites were just permanently banned everytime they showed their ugly faces here.
You can't win by engaging with them, they drag you down to their level of autistic retardation and beat you with experience.

>> No.6183781

>>6183776
you're free to hide the thread

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>> No.6183852

>>6183843
Aw, man. This could get a thousand likes on twitter

>> No.6183855

>>6183843
Good work on the body and hair, especially the detail in the belly area. Not a fan of the eyes and I'm pretty sure that the nose is in the wrong place.

>> No.6183872

>>6183843
face looks awkward

>> No.6183880

>>6183843
Cute Sora, I think that the face looks kinda flat

>> No.6183881

>>6183843
nice one anon

>> No.6183895

>>6183843
looks great
post full

>> No.6183913

>>6183843
Post the uncropped one in catbox uohh

>> No.6183928

>>6183855
>>6183872
>>6183880
I see it now, thanks.

>> No.6183951

i want this style so badly so cute
>>6183843

>> No.6184011

>>6183951
Go get it

>> No.6184024

>>6183951
try drawing

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6184028

>>6182920
I disagree with what other anons said on the hips. You can have bigger hips/legs and still make a loli. It's a mix of different factors. >>6183236 makes good points.

>> No.6184053

>>6184028
lmao

>> No.6184055

>>6184053
Are you afraid to present your logic to us?

>> No.6184056

>>6184028
There's a reason ir*n*cs entry level lolis like kanna so much.

>> No.6184060

>>6184056
love entry level lolis*

>> No.6184064

>>6184056
it's out of fashion to hate on kanna
you sound too tryhard these days by doing so

>> No.6184069

>>6184056
No one gives a shit about your false objective metric based on your subjective taste. There are plenty of artists drawing all different kinds of lolis and I picked Kanna as an example because it was easier than searching through my folders.

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>>6184056
A thick figure stimulates the most primal sense of arousal and you combine that with the DFC you get someone like Zankuro's girls that invokes levels of desire it totally consumes you so don't give me that crap.

>> No.6184089

>>6184078
You really are quite dogmatic in your epistemology of attraction.
The fact is that not everyone is attracted to the same things. This goes for everyone who keeps debating this as if we are going to somehow come to a conclusion (we never will in a million years). Stop discussing it.
>>6184055
The ratio of kanna's ribcagewidth:hipwidth is larger than the ratio of that anon's drawing. That's all.

>> No.6184103

Today i was drawing concepts for my horror game
Tomorow i'll draw loli licking popsicle

>> No.6184155
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6184155

I wanna use this one to try and get into more solid shading.
How is it so far?

>> No.6184166

>>6182816
This post is extremely funny

>> No.6184173

>>6184155
looks pretty good! i think your stuff is pretty solid but needs ''polishing'', those hands need more work

>> No.6184177

>>6184155
i beg of u anon, show me wat your basic body shapes look like

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6184187

>>6184177
Sorry I deleted all the other layers.
I don't focus on shapes at first, I start with something like picrel and focus on the gesture. I also always start with the torso, using something like a bean or a flour sack I guess. Don't remember where I got this method, I think it was somewhere on youtube.
Sometimes after this I use some more construction, more often than not I just start drawing the bodyparts from this and then go fixing stuff as I go by.

>> No.6184191

>>6184187
saved! thank you so much!

>> No.6184204

>>6184187
>Don't remember where I got this method
It's a pillow method some "industry" guys teach although they don't follow it to the T completely. It's just a guide. I like your interpretation, though, and never thought of it the way you do.

>> No.6184208

>>6184187
I really don't like how you always make the ankle just as thick as the knee. It makes the leg look fat.

>> No.6184210

>>6184208
Yeah I have little to no practice on the feet and lower leg area

>> No.6184216
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6184216

>>6182552
By perspective I assume you mean drawing bodies in perspective?

Besides using photo references, what really helps for me is to draw contour lines (kinda like what >>6182816 mentioned). Having these indicators helps me to perceive the depth and draw forms more "3-dimensionally".

Generally I try to draw the forms without blocks/cylinders as much as I can to preserve the gesture, but if the pose is really difficult like the one on the right, breaking it down into primitive shapes helps tremendously.

>> No.6184247
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6184247

>>6184208
there's nothing inherently wrong with that. There are artstyles that pull this off really well.

>> No.6184251

>>6184247
https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/79535659 their pixiv

>> No.6184254
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6184254

>>6184247
>>6184251
This doesn't look half bad, but it's not the same situation since this drawfag obviously does it at will. I don't intend to make the ankles so thick, I just haven't paid enough attention to it

>> No.6184260
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6184260

>>6184247
i love big chonky extremities, it's like chibi but all the way around, you know what i mean?
this guy does it really well for example (https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/21560394))

>> No.6184719

>>6183064
I dont like figmas, these are scale figures i can't rotate them.

>> No.6184798

dead general

>> No.6184807

>>6184798
I’ll post something tomorrow, look forward to it

>> No.6184822

>>6183353
Going for kate's hairstyle but unsure about how much clothing right now..

>> No.6184824

>>6184798
not as dead as cbsg
I say this as someone who uses both

>> No.6184928

>>6184798
posting my work today

>> No.6184929

>>6184928
actually tomorrow

>> No.6184936

>>6184824
/cbsg/ atleast is mostly original work to justify being slow, lsg is mostly just image dumps and reaction images with the occasional work from anon.

>> No.6184940

>>6184936
I don't know what else you want; traditionally this thread has always been slow due to the pool of people on the board who draw such subject. Despite that, this thread has been up for less than 2 days and has more activity than other core generals on the board albeit less work.

It's doing just about as much as every thread on the board at the moment.

>> No.6184948

>>6184940
Playing kick the mikufag for most of the thread and being active is not the same thing. As far as content goes lsg is one of the least used threads on this board.

>> No.6184950

>>6184948
For having followed since the start it's doing pretty well. No need to write novels about it. Just draw.

>> No.6184956
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6184956

>>6184948

I made a helpful tutorial for you, seabro.

>> No.6185045

>>6184956
he's right though, these threads are just 5+ drawings at max and the rest of the thread is an echochamber crying about either odi/2k/mikufag

>> No.6185052
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6185052

Bland as fuck but I'm kind of stuck and ill leave it like this I suppose.

Back to studying it is.

>> No.6185073

>>6185052
>Back to studying it is.
basedo

>> No.6185078

>>6185052
you gave her six toes unless i need more coffee

>> No.6185081

>>6185078
>>6185052
KEK

>> No.6185082

>>6185052
>Back to studying it is.
Make sure you study legs first.
Starting with the number of toes on each foot.

>> No.6185086 [DELETED] 
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6185086

Where to get references other than pediatry textbooks and TikTok.
>t. Not a glownigger

>> No.6185091

>>6185086
>I-I'm not a glownigger I swear look guys I can post glownigger memes just like you
commit suicide, stupid glowie. my eyes are blinded by this post.

>> No.6185094

>>6185082
>>6185078
>>6185081
Shit..

>> No.6185103
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6185103

>> No.6185117

>>6185086
is that toy real?

>> No.6185166

>>6185052
It looks very very good imo.
I like your shading style for the upper body.
I do agree that the legs are your weak spot, at least from that picture.
Have you considered deleting the lines that define the knees? That way you would show their form only with shading, kinda like how you did for the ribcage and such.
Still this looks very nice, good work.

>> No.6185167

>>6185052
Sakimichan moment

>> No.6185170

>>6183598
Extremely SOULFUL
I wish I had an ounce of this ability.

>> No.6185173

>>6185170
>ounce

you’re asking for too much

>> No.6185212

>>6185166
Well thank you, and should have done that. I rushed a bit I guess since I got frustrated at the end.

>> No.6185432 [DELETED] 
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6185432

studying heads, can't get the proportions right for this type of head

>> No.6185435
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6185435

slight mistake

studying heads, can't get the proportions right for this type of head

>> No.6185447

>>6185435
A good start. You have hundreds more to go before you nail it.

>> No.6185496
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6185496

>>6185435
Looks fine but I don't know about this... are you sure that's how the artist draws the union between chin and ear? I usually see it less square-like.
Are you trying from memory to compare?

>> No.6185512
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6185512

Kinda

>> No.6185520

>>6185512
Meant to reply to>>6185496

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6185550

Anybody know the artist?

>> No.6185557

>>6185550
Yes, but I'm still gonna tell you to fuck off to >>>/r/

>> No.6185583
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6185583

>>6185550
Wrong thread, all of this characters are 18, not loli.
Also >>>/r/

>> No.6185661

>>6185550
You posted this as bait, you sly dog. Fuck you.

>> No.6185665

>>6185550
Joe

>> No.6185669

>>6185665
momma?

>> No.6185691
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6185691

>> No.6185700

>>6185691
My man, that face is not good.
From the get go I could tell you to stop using such hard features to portray youth, and to mind the distance between the eyes.
But I'm more interested in knowing which artists are you trying to learn from, because from this piece I get the impression you're going in raw and that's not a good approach.

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6185702

>>6185691
Is this supposed to be a caricature? Reminds me of these old looney tunes characters that were extremely uncanny in a humorous way.

>> No.6185709

>>6185691
which artist are you studying?
ugly lolis are interesting

>> No.6185712

>>6185691
Seconding the other anons posts, the face looks very grotesque and uncanny, which I personally like, but I don't think that's what you were going for here.

>> No.6185762

>>6185691
You should ditch the anime eyes and use more realistic proportions if you're going for that kind of face.

>> No.6185782

>>6185550
He's good at drawing but the choices of camera angle are total crap and unreadable.
Westoids really don't understand how to make a comic lmfao

>> No.6185788
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6185788

I've been told that my girls look like lolies so i tried to draw an actual loli
Still can't make my shit clear and accurate i know i should just push harder and spend more time cleaning and rendering but it's so fucking boring

>> No.6185790
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6185790

Opinions on this design?
What palette do you think would look best?

>> No.6185795

>>6185788
Muddy colors, simplify rendering to a very limited color palate and use the hard round brush instead of the air brush tools. Draw more hands and invoke less details on forms such as the clavicle and the sternocleidomastoid, less is more.

>> No.6185798

>>6185790
generic 2 viewer vtuber design
pink and cyan

>> No.6185799

>>6185795
I- dude it's been mostly drawn with hard brush without opacity
I agree about the neck, hands and colors constantly fighting with tem

>> No.6185802

>>6185799
>it's been mostly drawn with hard brush without opacity
I don't see it. and stop pillow shading.

>> No.6185807

>>6185802
What's pillow shading? Never heard of it.

>> No.6185814

>>6185790
Kinds generic, give her really unique colours and you may be able to salvage it

>> No.6185816

>>6185103
UOH CUTE! Aweful pose and folds tho

>> No.6185819

>>6185807
Lack of understanding of light, form and its planes by trying to describe form through rendering shadow starting from inside the contour lines and branching the light outwards without a consistent light source. In other words, faking form from not understanding it.

>> No.6185828

>>6185691
Blog anon? I find this both hilarious and impressive

>> No.6185829

>>6185790
The drawing itself is pretty cute.
As for the design, I think it's cute enough to stick, I understand the other anons saying it looks generic but I like the simplicity of the design.

>> No.6185880

>>6185819
paint over it, crab

>> No.6185972

>>6185880
retard alert

>> No.6185975

>>6185972
>uuhh shading bad
Nice critique, retard. Paintover or fuck off.

>> No.6185981
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6185981

>>6185975
You're not worth investing time demonstrating what was described to you, I was being generous in those replies taking the time to point exactly what your flaws are. Do you believe you're going to get someone to do a paint over with that little attitude of yours?

>> No.6186032
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6186032

>>6184807
As promised. Nobody does backgrounds here but /bg/ is also dead, so what do you think about the indoor composition?
Yes, I know the tatami size is wrong, because I freehanded everything without a sketch (heh).

>> No.6186043

>>6186032
The perspective from those bottles is wrong but it's about time somebody does a background.

>> No.6186045

>>6186032
That's really nice, tho I think her right foot seems broken

>> No.6186058

>>6186043
Backgrounds are difficult to hatch with regards to composition and elements, but easy to execute. I'm quite new to it myself, but drawing multiple characters proportionally to each other in a scene is hard.
Drawing full figures in a variety of poses and perspectives isn't enough. Move on from it asap if you can.

>> No.6186062

>Loli & Shota General
>No Shota
...

>> No.6186065

>>6186062
the shotasisters have all moved to /cbsg/

>> No.6186066

>>6186065
>sisters
/ss/ is disgusting

>> No.6186072

>>6186066
don't worry, the shotasisters most of them are into /sm/

>> No.6186078
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6186078

>>6186066
>/ss/ is disgusting
Don't you fucking dare start.

>> No.6186085

>>6186078
/ll/, /l/, /sm/, /ss/ all good (depending on the way its drawn of course, alot of exaggerated stuff tend to be ugly)

>> No.6186088

>>6186078
All shotas need a sweet caring father figure in their life

>> No.6186142
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6186142

>>6186088
shotas and lolis do nneed a caring father father figure, a veeeeery caring figure, hehe eeh

>> No.6186143

Fuck off, this has nothing to do with drawing.

>> No.6186182
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6186182

kagami attempt

>> No.6186184

>>6186182
cool, what drawing did you copy?

>> No.6186187

>>6186182
The figure is out of perspective starting from the clavicle and down.

>> No.6186192
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6186192

>>6186032
>asking for composition advice on /ic/ - floating heads and bodies
roflamo

>> No.6186195

>>6186192
hehe

>> No.6186197
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6186197

>>6186184
didn't directly copy anything but took a fair bit from these references
>>6186187
yeah definitely the aspect I struggled the most with, still trying to wrap my head around how anything's supposed to look below the neck

>> No.6186200

>>6186197
You shouldn't have ref'd luicent. His anatomy is bad and you inherited the mistake..

>> No.6186209

>>6186200
he's my favourite artist and my main inspiration for drawing but mostly wanting to learn from his expression work and someday his painting, any artists you'd recommend for loli & petite anatomy?

>> No.6186218

>>6186209
>Anatomy
Reality. Yes, even for loli. Referencing your favorite artists is good and all but you can't replace learning from the ground truth.

>> No.6186223

>>6186218
yeah suppose I'll need to do that, ty

>> No.6186354

>>6186142
Based and agreed.

>> No.6186522
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6186522

~
https://litter.catbox.moe/vzhvki.jpg
pretty good brush

>> No.6186529

>>6186192
boomer

>> No.6186530
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>> No.6186544

>>6186522
ToT

>> No.6186694

>>6186522
when are you going to make a comic

>> No.6186696

>>6186694
when he makes his OCs…which is never

>> No.6186698
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>> No.6186700

>>6186698
Jasmine from pokémon?

>> No.6186783
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6186783

>>6186698
slight fixes
>>6186700
yep and the gs twins too

>> No.6186830

>>6186696
You don't really need to make overdesigned "Original character donut steal"s to make a comic.

>> No.6186838

>>6186830
Well, then what are they waiting for? Chop chop, you're only getting older.

>> No.6186859
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6186859

>>6186783
Something still feels off with the girl with a profile head. I don't think it's one single element, i.e. the jaw, but a mix of various things.
If you hide the brows and the mouth, you get eyes which look peaceful for example. It should change based on the facial expression she makes.

>> No.6186896

>>6186859
Try to see through the hair and look at how the neck connects to the back of her head.

>> No.6186898
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6186898

>>6186859
alright thanks, i moved the jaw down and back in to the neck more

>> No.6186908

>>6186530
Very cute

>> No.6186949
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6186949

colored this in

>> No.6187066

>>6186949
you’re quick

>> No.6187126

>Drapery to clothe your child

The fuck is this garbage?

>> No.6187141

>>6187126
A course to Ron Lemens clothing course.

NEXT question.

>> No.6187146

>>6187141
Why are we calling heavily stylized and unrealistic fictional cartoons "children"? Lines on paper aren't human

Change it to loli

>> No.6187158

>>6187146
It’s been like that for over a year, but sure, i’ll change it to quell your autism.

>> No.6187161

>>6187158
yay

>> No.6187163

>narrator: It did not quell his autism

he will be back tomorrow with a new thing to cry about

ironics should be gassed

>> No.6187167

>>6187163
>ironics

Only MAPs use this shit

Stop gaslighting lolicons

>> No.6187168

see what I mean?
We do not submit to terrorists.

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6187169

>>6187168
Kill yourself groomer

>> No.6187174

>>6186949
I like the coloring. The palette is pretty nice, good work

>> No.6187181

>>6187174
thanks, the pallete took me a while i was fiddling for a while on color scheme generators until i got what i needed

>> No.6187184

>>6187181
>color scheme generators
Is it good? I never thought of it

>> No.6187194

>>6187184
i don't know, people just told me i don't put effort into it so i ended up doing this now, along with positive and negative spacing, construciton, multiple layers, pushing gesture more etc.

You can probably get away with just choosing colors that make up a square or triangle on the color picker, over making up your own color gamuts

>> No.6187254

>>6182816
>>6184216
I'm >>6182552, I meant which resources helped you in general, the perspective statement was merely to highlight were I am, but thanks for the info nonetheless.

>> No.6187260

>>6185052
>>6185103
>>6185788
>>6185790
Blogs?

>> No.6187262

>>6187254
>which resources helped you
If you could ask any artist any question, this would always be a waste of a question. They'll just tell you the same books/courses everyone recommends here.

>> No.6187273

>>6187126
There's nothing wrong with drapery, retarded zoom zoom. God forbid someone challenge themselves instead of drawing another naked floating child for your amusement. Fucking twatter-tier board, I swear.

>> No.6187307

>>6186530
dat subliminal messaging kek

>> No.6187369
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6187369

Can somebody explain what's going on at the bottom left here.

>> No.6187371

>>6187369
I think... he's drawing the sitting pose in perspective, hence why he's using the box, but I don't know for sure.

>> No.6187380

>>6186522
Source?

>> No.6187383

>>6186698
>>6186783
>>6186898
>>6186949
They look neat. Twitter/pixiv handle pls

>> No.6187386

>>6187369
Whose sketchbook is that?

>> No.6187390

>>6186698
Would love to see Roxanne in your style.

>> No.6187396

>>6187386
Found it here page 35
https://exhentai.org/g/1979464/b74cec85e8/

>> No.6187398
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6187398

>blog
>pajeet SIR tier empty praise
>obvious mistakes unaddressed

>> No.6187407

>>6187398
You should commit suicide for making this post.
Either redline it, give critique, post your own work or shut the fuck up
nobody needs your cringe leddit memes in here.

>> No.6187412

>>6187407
based

>> No.6187420

>>6187407
I won't post work ever again. There's nothing to be gained from you retards, hence my observations.

>> No.6187436

>>6187420
Nanachi chan nooo

>> No.6187465

>>6187436
he'll be back tomorrow as usual

>> No.6187469

>>6187398
Why are you so miserable?

>> No.6187525

Why did the last general get deleted?

>> No.6187529

sneed

>> No.6187542
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6187542

na…nahnahchee

>> No.6187614

>>6187542
lole

>> No.6187628

>>6186898
Glad it helped, looks better.

>> No.6187664

>>6187398
Who are you referring to?

>> No.6187669

>>6187169
>having been a lolicon for 10 years
do people really say things like this?

>> No.6187738

>>6187525
It hasn't been deleted. It just reached its bump limit and was archived. Like this one right now.

>> No.6187778

new thread >>6187777

>> No.6187819

Better new thread: >>6187817

>> No.6187886

>>6187819
Don't bother. The one making the threads is a janitor.

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6188949

>>6181408
Ayo which one of you made the drawing in the OP and do you have a blog? That shit's mad cute yo.