/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Lisa

Jessica

this one is especially terrible like jesus fucking christ they're just awful

Dee

Margarita

Dee

Akilah

anyway im feeling lazy so i dont feel like posting the rest rn
feel free to bully me i know its really bad i just felt like sharing

>>6155100
Sad you abandoned the project but you at least worked on something and probably learned a thing or too. Good job anon.
>>6155103
>>6155104
I could coom to these

>>6155100
That’s good. Seeing the flaws in your old art means you’re improving. If you look back at old art and cant find any flaws that means you’re stagnating.

The important thing is that you are aware that they are bad. The posing isn't bad, though. Colors are decent, too. Everything else is bottom-tier Korean webtoon quality.

>>6155205
>Everything else is bottom-tier Korean webtoon quality.
lmao yes
>>6155192
just want you to know that >>6155103
is a tranny. i forget how because she really doesn't look mtf but im sure that was her deal
>>6155192
>>6155203
>>6155205
makes me feel a lot better genuinely

>>6155100
Pure shit, Horrible as a kick in the balls, it is better that he dedicate himself to something else and stop fooling himself

>>6155100
>I found some old art that I did
Show your current art, let's see the improvement

>>6156100
This.
Also was the choice to make their asses smaller and thinner than their upper thighs a conscious decision or you genuinely not knowing better? It gives me a laugh seeing what some artists think is hot in the heat of creation lmao

>>6156100
alright. i did a sketch real quick of the blonde one because I don't really have anything other than shitty practice stuff. I still dont even know how to color to be honest. like rendering and stuff. these older drawings are from two years ago and ive been drawing for three. hopefully there's actually some decent improvement here and there but i kind of rushed the last half of it my bad
also kind of scared of the responses because I know ic anons are fucking brutal but I have to get over it some time right?
>>6155953
>Horrible as a kick in the balls
based
>>6156106
>was the choice to make their asses smaller and thinner than their upper thighs a conscious decision or you genuinely not knowing better?
definitely just me not knowing any better. I think at the time I only barely knew how to draw basic shapes and just kind of winged it because I wanted money. then I got an actual job and my plans all fell apart lmao. only half understanding basic anatomy didnt help either

off topic too but look at the sheer amount of layers on this shit lmaoooo like wtf

>hijab
Brownoid SEA monkey hands typed this thread.

And no, I don't look back at my art and cringe.
First, because they are an extension of myself and I am not ashamed of myself.

But, more importantly, because my ability to see is 10000000x more developed than my ability to draw, so even back when I created it I was aware that it wasn't stellar work.
Sometimes I wish I was ignorant of my own shortcomings just so I'd have more confidence to try and err.

>>6157055
Well, the proportions of this figure approach human, so that's a point in its favor.

>>6157070
>>hijab
>Brownoid SEA monkey hands typed this thread.
I was trying to appeal to everyone :(

>>6157084
>proportions of this figure approach human
That doesn't sound very good

whats with the sphincter lips OP have you even seen a person's face before?

>>6157091
>sphincter lips
lmaooo i dont know how to explain that im sorry
laziness? not knowing how to draw appealing fat lips? i dunno

>>6157055
Well anon, you sure have improved, may I ask you for a sketch on the arab chick as well? she is kind of hot and I want to see how yo would improve her too.
>>6157060
>he get surprised by that amount of layer
kek, weak ass, you wouldnt last a minute on the autism I deal on a basis.
>also
>SAIchad
Based, any particular reason you havent switched to SAI2? Or you just used SAI back then and your files are in SAI only?

>>6157092
you do realize that the mouth is a slit and not a narrow hole right?
jesus christ my man take a break from the internet porn its warping your perception of reality seek help unironically

>>6157094
>Based, any particular reason you havent switched to SAI2?
i just havent. Im pretty used to SAI1 and Im too poor for Photoshop anyway so idk. I also dont remember what the official site for sai is and im terrified of viruses lol.
>>6157094
>Well anon, you sure have improved
I'd like to know how desu because I still feel like somethings off with it. I've always struggled with legs and hands and stuff like that.
I'll try and do a more dynamic pose for the arab lady but I cant promise Ill get it done before the thread gets archived. I appreciate all the feedback

>>6157098
I dont watch porn that often sorry, like i said definitely just my poor understanding of anatomy and stylization stuff

>>6157060
>tfw only ever have 5 layers top
>1 for line art, 1 for colors, 1 for shade, 2 for bg

>>6157117
ikr Ive been trying to be better about using so many layers. ive been painting with my aunt with real oil paints and im slowly getting used to the idea of using less layers

>>6157130
i feel like i should use more layers desu. especially with shading because the way csp blends is unintuitive

>>6157086
>That doesn't sound very good
It's an improvement. The anime head on quasi-realistic proportioned body is a little jarring. We shouldn't be able to see her right tricep from this angle. Not sure the hairline would look that way if her head was looking downward at her phone. If one leg is bent, then her hips should be tilted, foot on the bent leg partially off the ground. The hem of the skirt should tilt in the opposite direction of her hips. I know it seems a lot, but it is still much improved over the other drawings you've posted in this thread.

>>6157195
i figured the hips were off. thank you so much for the feedback, this is extremely helpful

>>6157094
heres a sketch. ill clean it up and fix it later im having a smoke
perspective still fucked idk much about perspective yet

>>6155100
This is that muzzie Twitter CUNT who "fixes" art by making them fat and black

>>6158659
literally who?

>>6157215
nice boobs

>>6158958
ty bro but how can I fix this pose the perspective is off

>>6155118
>>6155116
>>6155111
>cut off legs
I guess it doesn't matter for most visual novels, but for porn games hiding legs feels wrong.
Personally I love legs and would want to see them at all times.
Is there any example of some game doing that?

>>6155105
This one is unironically my favorite.

>>6155105
I love this one, no joke.
Also >>6155104 <3

Dude hehe... get better tastes lmao.

For portraits? 5/10. I've seen worse but I won't say is good or I would play it, but I've seen worse.

For a porn game I want to see more your scene game, thinking that portraits really matter is a kinda a trap in this sort of game, nobody really play those sort of games to look at the fucking portraits, it's boring and no one will give a fuck. A lot of scenes more close to a comic than a VN? People want that, even more if is for sex scenes, if you build good sex scenes the art quality won't matter as much. And I'm also talking about animation or giving the idea of animation, if you understand what I mean.