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Previous Thread: >>6139275
>Guidelines:
1. Don't post nudity or too revealing works.
When in doubt, post a censored copy here and link to the original off-site. This also includes pornography. If you think your image is too suggestive, please use catbox. (e.g. litterbox/catbox, imgur, etc). Note: If you're having issues viewing catbox links, use a VPN.

2. Do not post child photo references of any kind, legal or otherwise.

3. Due to the PPH (posts per hour/thread activity) of this general, please wait until the thread falls to around page 5 or 6 before making a thread. Use archived(moe) or warosu to retrieve the old threads.

4. Keep all outside drama from other generals, boards, or outside communities from /lsg/.

>General Resources
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dQGxsuqPxuu5V9vjgAWrMjnrMXcWfCFYX-d5imdnRgI/edit?usp=drivesdk

>Specific Resources
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1hVzfbqr-0UEck9ux9XBTmxUTGMZ4a-8T3DnBfOxv9iE/edit?usp=drivesdk

>Drapery to clothe your child
https://online-courses.club/anatomy-of-clothing-2019-by-ron-lemen/

>Abandoned(?) FAQ/Q&A
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Hey, hey! Reminder that Kumichou Musume to Sewagakari ep 1 is out! https://nyaa.si/view/1549900

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character design comm wip thing, dont care about if its not tru-loli just wanna see the thread move

I cant figure out what to do for pupils without feeling overdesign-y, i suck at this stuff

>> No.6151320

>>6151309
is this for a project you have?

>> No.6151327

>>6151320
nah, I just had some attributes to try and bang together into something appealing and was left to my own devices otherwise. (tail and antler), i wouldn't be surprised if I just stumble on porn being commissioned of her later.

though ive considered giving myself a random prompt to design from for practice a few times. ive had people ask me for a random object or thing and they come back with a design centered around it an hour or 2 later, which I'd like to try.

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How do you do fellow artisans, please provide feedback and critique.

>> No.6151949

>>6151931
>bolt-on breasts
nice hag drawing

>> No.6151981

>>6151931
finish the painting already

>> No.6152008

>>6151949
>>>/b/881660387

>> No.6152025

>>6152008
better.

>> No.6152466

Any requests? I'm having a hard time forcing myself to draw again.

>> No.6152467

>>6152466
Why do you even draw if you don't know what to draw? Try the /a/ drawthread.

>> No.6152468

>>6152467
I don't draw. That's the problem.

>> No.6152470
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>>6152466
maido

>> No.6152475

>>6152466
draw the puppeteer loli from that new fighting game dnf duel

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How do you do lolis with big ass heads without it looking deformed or chibi?
I just get normal proportions and make them all smaller except the head but it doesn't work

>> No.6152561

>>6152557
>I just get normal proportions and make them all smaller except the head but it doesn't work
You answered yourself. That's exactly why it doesn't work.

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>mfw there was a 500 replies thread about an autist begging for mods to shut down /lsg/
hahaha
wish I was home at the time so I could post some drawings there

>> No.6152662

>>6152659
got an archive link? also, great drawing as always, love your faces

>> No.6152665

>>6152659
nice one

>> No.6152670

>>6152557
sunapuas art is so good. i want to fuck the potatoes
>>6152659
the only part i agree with of that thread is that we should draw more. maybe we can organize more drawing events or themes?

>> No.6152671

>>6152662
danke schon
>>>6151088
it hit 500 replies in the same day it was made, jesus

>> No.6152676

>>6152671
you can tell it's made by people that don't draw and that only lurks the catalog. /cbsg/ never complains about shotas and in fact uooohs alongside us, the only thing /cbsg/ doesn't like is tranny shitposters posting their faggy fetishes and derailing threads.

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>>6152659
i love your faces, how it feels the form without being too uncanny and maintaining an anime style. You became one of my inspirations anonymous lolichama, hope you eventually make a baraag or pixiv or something.

>> No.6152693

>>6152561
then how do you do it?

>> No.6152694

does xp-pen tablets crash your gpu for anybody else?
I feel like like it does for me.
I use an amd 6700xt it's not old or anything too

>> No.6152700

>>6152693
Just look at the pic you posted. Do the same.

>> No.6152711

>>6152659
i really like this!
but i feel like the far away thigh is thicker than the closer one

>> No.6152712

>>6152670
yeah, they seem to know about all the pointless debates that keep popping up lately in the general. kinda weird
>>6152679
damn, thanks a lot anon. i'm flattered
>hope you eventually make a baraag or pixiv or something
I will. soon™

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>>6152659
>>6152671
That thread was fucking sad, the amount of seethe from tourists and roasties never ceases to amaze. The best way to keep those tards at bay is to keep doing what you love despite their screeching.

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Loli face practice

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I'm trying to do the thing where all the lines aren't joint like somebody suggested but i don't know if i did it right

>> No.6152869

>>6152867
i hate that you have so much potential yet refuse to get out of your comfort zone

>> No.6152910

>>6152676
>/cbsg/ never complains about shotas
retard, check an archive or something

>> No.6152918

>>6152676 >>6152910
>>6106215 Half this thread was infighting about shota. Found it for you so now you won't have to pretend it didn't happen in order to push your narrative

>> No.6152924

>>6152918
it's one retard anti versus a bunch of fujos telling them to go back to twitter, it proves nothing. Even these threads have tourists coming to shit up the thread and call everyone a pedo.

>> No.6152943

>>6152924
>>6152918
>>6152910
Guys, just drop it. There is a reason why that meta thread lead to nowhere and fell off the board not even 24 hours later. At the end of the day there is nothing, 0, zip, nadda tourists and bad actors can do to get rid of threads they don't like.

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help, i can't shade their faces

>> No.6152990

>>6152659
Please teach me to draw

>> No.6153018 [DELETED] 

>>6152943
Most of us on the board hate your kind. It's not tourists or bad actors.

>> No.6153019

>>6153018
>Enters a thread that he hates

>> No.6153024

>>6153018
begone woman

>> No.6153029

>>6153018
>roastie screeches as she enters a space that does not comply with her demands
Why don't you go ahead and preach this to >>6150615 as well then, aren't they pedos as well?
Oh, that's right, you're biased against only this board while you overlook the same content from other boards, it's the constant double standards from roasties like you.

>> No.6153066 [DELETED] 

>>6153019
>>6153024
>>6153029
seething pedophiles lmao
you're gonna get vigilante killed by a rando who stumbles upon your sick drawings, its only a matter of time

>> No.6153076

>>6152981
are these 2 supposed to be anyone in particular?

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>>6152818
That's nice, it reminds me of Sora.

>> No.6153094

>>6153079
Errotic child forehead

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oc stuff

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>>6153125

>> No.6153129

>>6153125
Pretty good

>> No.6153178

Any crit? >>6152867

>> No.6153191

>>6152867
Cute colouring, cute face, lack of details on the feet tho I guess you don't plan to finish this?
Her hat seems too solid imo, don't know what kind of hat it is but it seems unnaffected by gravity.
The flow on her twintails also doesn't make much sense, is she moving her head or is she still?

>> No.6153202

>>6153191
She has stockings, it's white compared to her skin tone

>> No.6153505

dead general

>> No.6153508

>>6153505
Py gay beef

Wrong thread?

>> No.6153636

>>6153127
holy fuck this is the first lsg poster besides my own that GETS it he GETS that middle schoolers are by FAR the most attractive. holy fuck.

>> No.6153719

>>6153505
big sus

>> No.6153800 [DELETED] 

>>6153719
not really sus, its normal for this general to be dead because all the good artists left

>> No.6153806 [DELETED] 

>>6153800
If you open your crusty eyes wide enough you can see all generals have been up for days with few posts except /beg/ and meta threads.

>> No.6153817 [DELETED] 

>>6153806
actually good artists post in those eventually though but this one just ends up with halfassed /beg/ scribbles on a white background

>> No.6153837 [DELETED] 

>>6153817
Go hang out with those actually good artists then. Why do you keep coming back here?

>> No.6153845 [DELETED] 

>>6153837
I enjoy laughing at stupid /beg/s

>> No.6153866 [DELETED] 

>>6153845
You know what i’m about to say next. It’s not post your work but the phrase “but you’re a beginner as well”.

>> No.6153868 [DELETED] 

>>6153866
No, you.

>> No.6153878 [DELETED] 

>>6153868

You smell like a /beg/ so I don’t need proof of work.

>> No.6153957

https://litter.catbox.moe/77auag.png
Trying to figure out some scenario with Benis and Tsubaki, maybe some futa implications.

>> No.6153960

>>6153957
I think her back is too arched, it would be uncomfortable

>> No.6153982

a fren was wondering, do leaf artists ever get v& for drawing this?

>> No.6154018

>>6153125
Is that the first layer or the final layer? I always have to do a lot of lines to make the face and everything

>> No.6154224

>>6153094
>child

Get the fuck out nonce

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Please help i cant do loli heads, i tried the loomis method too

>> No.6154549 [DELETED] 

dear god the quality of this general went downhill since when I was here years ago

>> No.6154552 [DELETED] 

>>6154549

Could you please leave again? You're a sore to my eyes.

>> No.6154555 [DELETED] 

>>6154552
what happened to wyst and all the other decent artists?

>> No.6154570 [DELETED] 

>>6154555
I already mentioned it dozens of times. When the threads started the initial idea was meant to be a safe for work loli thread only. Since most people here are perverts (that's fine) there is catbox to put the perv drawings in. At the time when this was rolling out people like Wyst, Vodkuh, Pera, etc were posting. Wyst threw a fit and left because he refused to put his art in catbox. The other few that I know "left" for completely different reasons.

Why won't they come back? He and those who lurked here have been convinced not to from a user in his discord, calling /ic/ "dead", etc. The things put in place are there to save you from the mods, not to destroy this place or whatever nonsense some troll keeps mentioning.

>> No.6154573 [DELETED] 

>>6154570
death of the general happened when wyst left

>> No.6154575 [DELETED] 

>>6154573

Wyst has his own community. I have /lsg/. You're free to go join him on discord or whatever.

>> No.6154578

>>6154301
Just keep practicing the loomis head. The only major difference from that and the loli head is the divisions, so if you can't properly draw the loomis head you'll fail at the loli one.

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>>6154301
Kek. You're no different when it comes to making heads. You're on the same as me so yeah, you're on the right path.
Just take in mind the different styles out there which ranges from the semi-realistic, normal shrunken anime heads, cutesy moe lolis, toddlers up to potatoes.

>> No.6154648

>>6154018
first layer, if the pose/head are in perspectives that are ez for me then I dont really need to construct it. I use to construct heads like crazy so dont feel like its a bad thing. Even now when i dont feel super confident Ill start with construction lines

>> No.6154683

>>6154301
copy the heads of your favourite artists instead of using westoid loomis

>> No.6154786

dead general

>> No.6154870 [DELETED] 

>>6154786
We’re running in circles. You say the thread is dead and then when asked why you keep coming back due to your dissatisfaction you claim “to laugh at begs”. There is a beg thread down the street 3 blocks to the right with 100 unique posters. That’s 100 times you can laugh at people instead of 6 people. You also have other loli communities and discords. Go there and stay.

>> No.6154884

>>6154870
>You also have other loli communities and discords
link?

>> No.6154894

>>6154884
tips dot fbi dot gov

>> No.6154904

>>6154894
Good meme, fellow redditor. Le fbi open up amirite?

>> No.6154911

>>6154884
r/antilolitary

>> No.6155295

are lolis simulation or simulacra?

>> No.6155320

>>6155295
You're asking a bunch of low IQ channers a college philosophy level question.
Nobody here is going to be able to come up with a non retarded answer to a question like that.

>> No.6155331

>>6155295
yes

>> No.6155333

>>6155331
good answer

>> No.6155567

>>6155295
simulacra

>> No.6155569

>>6155320
>philosophy level question.
you have never read a book in your life you low iq pedophile, much less than what he is referencing you fucking mouth breathing obese retard

>> No.6155577 [DELETED] 

>>6151156
This thread is just a sad excuse for pedophiles to post their shitty "art" to jerk off to. Kys

>> No.6155579

>>6153127
Damn brats………

>> No.6155586
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sorry for floating head but been trying to better my imitation of luicent's style without reference, this is my latest attempt

>> No.6155632

>>6155295
Neither since lolisho has virtually no relation to "children"

It's always been about the juxtaposition of smol/moe with sexual features, nothing to do with age

Old fag lolicon have always recognized that heavily stylized and unrealistic fictional cartoons have nothing to do with "children"

>> No.6155644

>>6155569
It's a philosophy question worthy of a college level answer. Your inability to answer (or hold your temper) doesn't change that fact.

>> No.6155649

>>6155632
>Simulacra are copies that depict things that either had no reality to begin with, or that no longer have an original.
Your answer is simulacra

>> No.6155654

>>6155649
Exactly, any pedo using our identity under the guise of "le drawn children" needs to be castrated

>> No.6155656

>>6155654
I'm not agreeing with you by the way.

>> No.6155660

>>6155656
Then get the fuck out of our thread groomer

>> No.6155662

>>6155660
The fact is that the way lolis are depicted and interacted with in the was majority of media that contains them is more akin to simulation.

>> No.6155664

i'm trying to do the copy artist thing, there's this one artist i like but they don't color, what do i do?
should i add my own colors?

>> No.6155666

>>6155662
it's not, lolis have become no longer mere representations of reality

>> No.6155675

>>6155662
Lolis look and act nothing like "children", not to mention humans don't have elf ears, horns, tails etc

You're just a groomer trying to appropriate our identity and let me just tell you, we're getting wise to it

>> No.6155680

>>6155664
you can copy the lineart and stylization of the artist you like and then find another artist who's colouring you like and try applying that to it, may or may not work depending on the styles but worth trying out

>> No.6155682

anons, time spent arguing should be spent drawing

>> No.6155684

>>6155675
>elf ears, horns, tails etc
how many drawings in this thread have any of those features? Are they in the majority of instances?

>> No.6155685

>>6155682
Can't draw until we get rid of the pedo problem first

>> No.6155731

lol guess i wont post on here if everything is just getting deleted, bye

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>>6155731
Take the Trap pill and learn how to draw aesthetic pleasing Pecs with us. Come home, white man.
>>6152256

>> No.6155750

>>6155685
>if everything is just getting deleted

God, I wish.

>> No.6155752

>>6155731
You're complaining that the drama is getting deleted?
Good riddance.

>> No.6155755

>>6155731
damn you're right half the drawings are gone wtf
not cool jannies, not cool at all

>> No.6155786

>>6155755
The agreement to keep /lsg/ and /fag/ alive in the first place was the promise to keep everything SFW. Break that agreement, you fucking deserve whatever consequences come your way.

>> No.6155886

pppppppppppp
https://litter.catbox.moe/7csdlv.jpg

>> No.6155950

>>6155886
nice

>> No.6155955

>>6155886
god

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>> No.6155966

crit?>>6155956
i feel like the perspective is kinda messed up for the toro and closer hand but idk

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>>6155956
>>6155966
colored, i wanted to try this coloring style where it's all more blue but doesn't look odd, her skin is blue too

>> No.6156110

>>6156074
Is she/he doing a gender reveal? you could add some confetti popping out or something.

>> No.6156289

>>6156074
>>6155956
Pretty cute colouring.
I like it overall, I don't like her hands tho.
The lower end of the dress also seems weird, I think it's missing some hard edges.

>> No.6156294

>>6156110
>t. tranny

>> No.6156304

>>6155735
>Come home, white man.
none of us are white lmfao

>> No.6156305

>>6156289
thanks, i felt the hand was off, i guess i could add some hardedge to the dress

>> No.6156317

>>6156304
You black too? Nice.

>> No.6156353

https://files.catbox.moe/x6ig0i.png
Trying something new. I will try to clean up

>> No.6156361

>>6156353
This feels very nostalgic to me. Reminds me of the old fish screensavers of the 90s.

>> No.6156362

>>6156353
That's pretty good.
I have a big problem tho with contrast, I feel like my eye is always trying to go to the very light centre-top part of the picture.
I don't know how one could improve this. You could try giving the girl more contrast but I'm not sure if it would fit since it's underwater.
Still really good

>> No.6156368

>>6156353
finally some good art in this shit thread

>> No.6156371 [DELETED] 

Y'all about to get /trash/ed

>> No.6156373 [DELETED] 

>>6156371
what do you mean

>> No.6156374 [DELETED] 

>y’all

>> No.6156377 [DELETED] 

>>6156373
Bringing in pedoshit?

>> No.6156379 [DELETED] 

>>6156377
oh don't scare me like that

>> No.6156402 [DELETED] 

why is this thread even up? niggerjanny has a vendetta against all the decent artists and deletes all the good art randomly

>> No.6156406 [DELETED] 

>>6156402
it's up because you touch yourself at night

>> No.6156408 [DELETED] 

>>6156406
hi janny, all the decent artists hate your guts

>> No.6156410

>>6155886
where you learn to draw so good

>> No.6156428 [DELETED] 

>>6156402
Mikutard is not a good artist though

>> No.6156430 [DELETED] 

>>6156428
Is it really Mikufaggot? Not surprising seeing that her thread is not doing so well so now they walk back in here to shit up the place.

>> No.6156462 [DELETED] 

>>6156430
look in the archive and you can see its not just mikufag that the janny has a vendetta against

>> No.6156474 [DELETED] 

>>6156462
It could be any mod passing through here on their hot pocket break, nobody really knows. Take your Stelazine and stop throwing slop all over the threads floor.

>> No.6156480 [DELETED] 

>>6156474
We know it's you deleting the posts. Literally so obvious when you defend yourself on here.
No wonder new janny applications are open when you can't even hide the fact that you're a janny when you post.

>> No.6156483

>>6156353
do you got a blog?

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Check the archives, look at the image which was deleted and come to your own conclusion about our resident janny and whether or not they have a personal vendetta against others.

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>>6156494

>> No.6156504 [DELETED] 

>>6156494
>>6156496
https://www.4chan.org/janitorapp
>Janitors CANNOT...Ban users.

>> No.6156509 [DELETED] 

>>6156504
Didn't say ban, the images were deleted and the mods may ban based on the jannies report.

>> No.6156511 [DELETED] 

>>6156509


so use catbox

>> No.6156513

>>6156511
You're missing the point but the fact you have to use a foreign site to post images says a lot.

>> No.6156516

>>6156513
….man you’re retarded
that’s how /ic/ can have the furry and loli thread in the first place. If you refuse to use those third parties then that’s on you.

>> No.6156518

>>6156516
The fact that is the only way these threads may exist says a lot too.

>> No.6156522 [DELETED] 

>>6156518
you’re a failure to the asian race

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>>6156361
Thank you, and i see what you mean, I took inspiration from some very very old drawings of girls (hags) scuba diving.
>>6156362
It'd be a challenge to solve at this stage, but the composition could do with a bit of fixing I agree. Maybe with the loli more surrounded by the entrance to the cave so it captures the attention. I'll try to fix
>>6156483
No, sorryy

>> No.6156573

>>6156570
>I'll try to fix
I hope you finish it regardless. Even with that composition thing I still think it looks great.

>> No.6156756

>>6156353
Oxygen

>> No.6156814

>>6155886
very nice feet

>> No.6156815

>>6155886
I like it quite a lot, I don't like the guy's left knee tho

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>> No.6157280

>>6157259
Cute!

>> No.6157307

>>6157259
cute but not your work

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doing higher res, I think i messed up the leg rotation but other than that how's the rest?
the finger coloring is a bit off too

>> No.6157793

>>6157358
The fingers does look a tad weird in all honesty. Also I am aware of lolis with wide hips, but she does look more like a goblino than a pre-pubescent shithead kid/brat.

>> No.6157800

>>6157358
Her ass is backwards

>> No.6158379

>>6157793
>pre-pubescent

Lines on paper cannot experience "puberty" so this is an inaccurate statement

>> No.6158384

>>6156304
>>6156317
A black pedophile... Why is that weird

>> No.6158402

>>6158384
Whites are supposed to be the race of degenerates

>> No.6158443

>>6158384

I stopped having assumptions of expectation of humans the more I went through job meetings. The world is an assortment of cookies and it's quick to assume the mental image you have of the person is the correct version when 9 out of 10 times it's something completely different.

>> No.6158445
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6158445

Tyrone stop fooling around with little girls you were made for the cute yt boi your buck will remain unbroken I promise.

>> No.6158487

dead general

>> No.6158547

>>6158487
I wish you were dead instead.

>> No.6158554

>>6158547
Just kidding btw.

>> No.6158617
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>> No.6158619

>>6158617
alien face on the right.

>> No.6158621

>>6158619
It's supposed to be Clamp style but anyway post your work.

>> No.6158761
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6158761

Halfway through the shadows but how is it so far?

>> No.6158828

>>6158761
The bellybutton is too close to the ribcage. Idk if you were going for that, but she looks way too bony for my taste

>> No.6158831

>>6158828
Ok I'll lower it
And yeah I guess I was, I like them skinny, what part specifically bothers you?

>> No.6158888
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>>6158831
rather than lowering the belly button I'd do it like this.

>> No.6158890

>>6158888
Oh alright, I'll see to do something like that

>> No.6158975 [DELETED] 

>>6158761
needs more ambient occlusion and for it to be darker, your values are pretty washed

>> No.6158977 [DELETED] 

>>6158975
>needs more ambient occlusion and for it to be darker, your values are pretty washed
you literally just said the same thing three fucking times you retard

>> No.6158980 [DELETED] 

>>6158977
redline it crab

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>>6158975
Ok I'll see what to do.
I usually go for a very saturated red for shading skin, but with the blue / green clothes it may be better to go for a darker and less saturated tone?

>> No.6158988 [DELETED] 
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study

>> No.6159000 [DELETED] 

>>6158980
? im not the one criting, im just pointing out your crit is redundant retard.

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>>6158761
I made some changes.
I kinda don't wanna get too far away from where I started since I want her belly to look more on the softer side, so I don't want muscles and bones to be too defined.

>> No.6159002 [DELETED] 

>>6158977
and all of them add more information to help them achieve it better, ill gouge your fucking eyes out you moldy milk jug

>>6158987
I think whatever you have in mind is fine if I understand right, color can be subjective so just experiment with what works good, but typically a mild hue shift with more saturation in darker values is the idea.

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>>6159003
Hold on, I think the ctrl C / V feature on 4chanX is washing up my colors.
Pic related is how it currently looks.

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>> No.6159097 [DELETED] 

>>6158988
Nice study, also may you hand the image above?
By the way, what is this girl's actual body type? is she a loli, full ass woman? make up your mind kek.

>> No.6159162 [DELETED] 

>>6159038
extremely erotic art, who did you sell your soul to for this power

>> No.6159164 [DELETED] 

>>6158988
Out of curiosity, what are you studying specifically?
Gesture? style?

>> No.6159183 [DELETED] 

>another artwork deleted
anhero, stupid vendetta janny.
I really cant wait for you to be replaced.

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>>6159008
anon. don't be afraid on drawing skelly. pic for reference

>> No.6159267 [DELETED] 
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6159267

Everything will be ok anons.

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>>6159097
Hey man, not every person likes MiB alien body types you low iq knuckle dragger. pic attached is from Hideo Azuma, but you dont know who that is because the full extent of your simplistic surface level creative pool is entirely and totally build on shows like Pedo-chan Doki Doki Senpai Pantsu on Head Retaado no Kokoro Waifu Hentai Assufakku Sraisu Ofu Raifu Monogatari.
>>6159164
style-ish, just wanted to draw some classic bishojo stuff. I could copy 1:1 if thats what you're implying, but there'd be no point, because I can already do that.

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6159275

finished

>> No.6159287 [DELETED] 

>>6159275
good work, love your style
janny won't like it tho

>> No.6159292 [DELETED] 

>>6159275
>>6159287
also, head is off center to her right

>> No.6159303 [DELETED] 

>>6159292
noted. thank you btw.

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Looks like you guys are going to have to start using catbox more. Like really using it. The mods don't look like they're letting it slide anymore based from the recent deletions.

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It's ok?

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>>6159564
Fixed.

>> No.6159687 [DELETED] 

>>6159183
seethe pedo

>> No.6159690 [DELETED] 

>>6159687
retard

>> No.6159811 [DELETED] 

>>6159653
Why did you keep most of the mistakes?

>> No.6159834 [DELETED] 

>>6159811
Because I'm a beginner

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>>6159206
I do like that kind of loli body, but not for this character

>> No.6159884 [DELETED] 

>>6159834
um, beginners shouldn't redline, sweetie.

>> No.6159886 [DELETED] 

>>6159865
Damn she's hot

>> No.6159893 [DELETED] 

>>6159884
Isn't this a good way to practice?

>> No.6159906 [DELETED] 

>>6159865
right arm too big

>> No.6159908 [DELETED] 

>>6159906
Yeah I know, I think the artist you have drawn the shoulder higher

>> No.6159929 [DELETED] 
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6159929

Just got done with the line-art of an /a/ request. Its fun drawing Rosine again after some years has passed.
https://i.imgur.com/Gs256mD.png

>> No.6159951 [DELETED] 

>>6159884
at least they helped, unlike you.

>> No.6159981 [DELETED] 

>>6151949
>he thinks 10 year olds dont develop tits
uh, shotabro?

>> No.6159986 [DELETED] 

>>6152910
it was literally like one retard who was probably sour from not being able to post traps

>> No.6160031 [DELETED] 

Holy fuck, how did twitter of all places become more lenient to loli posting than fucking 4chan.
Fuck this gay site

>> No.6160035 [DELETED] 

>>6160031
reddit closet pedos and their crusade

>> No.6160039 [DELETED] 

>>6160031
probably because 4chan has/attracts more babied schizo autists in their early 20s hence everyone here talks like a /v/ visiting teenager with anger problems, most people who like this stuff in some sort of way (and not because they want to seem as edgy rebels) don't want to post here

>> No.6160042 [DELETED] 

>>6160039
holy fuck just don’t post here then. away with you. why do you keep coming back? just gooooo already, damn nigga.

>> No.6160052 [DELETED] 

>>6160042
He stays behind to yell at others not to be here and won’t leave until every soul is gone.

>> No.6160054 [DELETED] 

>>6160042
i already have lel

>> No.6160063 [DELETED] 

>>6160054
You’re still here and never left and never will leave. There is another farm just waiting for you. Go.

>> No.6160064 [DELETED] 

>>6160035
>>6160031
Actually I know that one. A few "ONGs" (trust me, they have governmental funding), mostly National Center on Sexual Exploitation, formerly MIM (Morality in media), among a few others that I won't name because I'm still not sure if they are truly connected, have been doing this for the past 5 years. They spam e-mails of CEO trying to change the rules of the site and a few bite, they did that back in 2019 and have been roughly doing the same, they are kinda the ones who fucked over tumblr and almost did the same with steam back in 2017? 2016? Can't remember. Anyway, they are also operating on /pol/ for a while, I know this because I kinda follow the blogs of a few people there looking for info and they are the sort of retards that are legit pay to shill that place with their new ideas anti-porn. And I know they are payed because they are funded by a few rich families that are also connected with banks and credit cards, if you can't pay something with paypal because visa doesn't like they normally use this sort of tool to try to ban the product using some psycho fundamentalist christian or nutjob liberal, depending exactly what is to complain a lot and use as a excuse, market control, you guys know that.

So yeah, they are kinda doing this for a while, believe it or not, they are kinda open about even, you can look on their site and the personal blogs on some of their associates, if you are not a retard you can connect the dots.

Is curious, interesting to watch but they are not that good about it, mostly out of touch wiggers being manipulated by people with money, no point doing something either, I kinda want they to fuck over twitter so people leave that website like happened to tumblr and when they do they will lose any sort of influence they have, not a real problem to really mind, temporary nuisance with a goal.

>> No.6160067 [DELETED] 

No wonder nobody wants to post here

>> No.6160068 [DELETED] 

>>6160064
The hole goes deeper than that. Much deeper.

>> No.6160071 [DELETED] 

>>6160068
That I don't know, I'm not interested in much else, if they kill twitter with they stupid shit is all I care.

>> No.6160105 [DELETED] 

>>6160071
they already have infiltrated twitter, just not high enough to sway company policy

>> No.6160118 [DELETED] 

>>6160105
I'm not talking about that. You are just confused.

>> No.6160136 [DELETED] 

no, you fucking midwit. I'm not talking about le juice.
I mean the dipshit janny who keeps deleting art that would be perfectly fine on twitter

>> No.6160146 [DELETED] 
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>>6159273
>not every person likes MiB alien body types you low iq knuckle dragger.
Keeek, I know, Im just curious because you're always changing her body type, which one is the "canon"? (implying there's any).
>pic attached is from Hideo Azuma, but you dont know who that is because the full extent of your simplistic surface level creat...
I dont know about that artist because Im not a weeb kek, but thank heavens I know now, his art style and overall vibe is fucking kino, specially this cutie (idk, I may be too biased whenever a cute blondie is in sight). You have good tastes, anon.
>also
There is something about your needless hostility and silly wording that I find difficult to take by heart, I know you are a nice fella behind that, so I dont mind.
>inb4
at least let me believe.

>> No.6160166

>>6159038
I don't get why did this get deleted, it's not even loli
Beautiful drawing anyhow

>> No.6160168

>>6160166
stop crying about the janitor, faggot. Use cat box.

>> No.6160180

>>6160168
Not the anon you're talking with but I still cannot view catbox content for some reason, hence why I use imgur instead

>> No.6160182

>>6160180
>Note: If you're having issues viewing catbox links, use a VPN.
But yeah, imgur works. Plus you can check how many views you get.

>> No.6160382

small world
and small lolis

>> No.6160384

>>6160064
i agree to this, your wording is kinda schizoey but its literally just fundamental activists who are completely overboard shitting up the party for every normal person who simply doesnt care. i hate their guts.

>> No.6160418
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this probably isn't very loli related but I want to know what a hair bow like this would look like when it's taken off and lying on a surface
does it remain in a bow shape or does it become a long ribbon?

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How is this pedo thread allowed on here??? This place is just a sad excuse for pedophiles to post their "art" about toddlers and fantasize about diddling them.

>> No.6160444

>>6160418
Yes most traditional bows would just become a long ribbon. Some modern bows are just hair clips or attached to a headband though.

>> No.6160464

>>6159893
Not at all. Focus on your own mistakes instead

>> No.6160587

>>6160146
sorry for the hostility, any vague message that calls into question something in a particular way is usually seen as hostile itself, my bad :)
>canon bodytype
the large breasted one and the loli version are the same character, just at different points in time.
hideo azuma is really based, you can find some of his stuff on nhentai in large high rez scans, which is kino.

>> No.6160851

dead general

>> No.6161053

>>6160851
Kind of hard not to be when it clearly isnt welcomed.

>> No.6161073

>>6161053
why can't the admins just give us a hidden board already.
"muh advertisers" isn't a good enough excuse.
tired of dealing with this stupid janny and the other retards

>> No.6161100

>>6161073
Imagine beging for a glow board. Ffs, you lolitroons literally have /b/yet choose stay on a board that intentionally shits in your thread dialy. Is it the edgy exhibitionism that keeps you here or did 4chan mods all agree to do everything in their power to protect honeypot threads?

>> No.6161111

>>6161100
You're a retarded newfag and I'm not going to explain why.

>> No.6161224

God in heaven, why won't this retard leave already. Does he not have friends?

>> No.6161272

>>6161111
quads of truth

>> No.6161303

You nodraws keep coping and seething whenever you're reminded that you have no safespace here.

>> No.6161323

>>6161303

At least I'm not reminded everyday I'm a fat pig like you.

>> No.6161345

>>6161323
damn you burned him to cinder

>> No.6161392
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Warm up as I still work on a few commissions. I need a better work schedule so I can doodle while still work on this sort of thing.

>> No.6161489

>>6161323
holy fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuck

>> No.6161491

>>6161392
can you make an areola slip sometime
thanks.

>> No.6161497

>>6161392
It's interesting, tho I think the girl gets kinda lost with how complex and detailed the background is

>> No.6161507

>>6161323
lol good one

>> No.6161585

>>6161392
careful, this is too lewd for the janny

>> No.6161586

>>6161392
>Naked foot
MODS

>> No.6161589
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6161589

thoughts so far?
i tried planning it with a line of action and doing a silhouette.

Does she look too tall?
i feel like if i bend her more it'll look broken

>> No.6161598
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>>6161589
I think you went too far with the feet angle, I see you are trying to make them point inwards, also the legs are bending too much imo.
As for the line of action as you mention, I think basically it's fine.
I'm looking at the green line on the left and I think it's balanced, not a huge fan of the way the dress goes along with it, I feel like with her movement it should have a more dynamic shape.
All things considered this is a pretty hard drawing so it's nice to see you pushing yourself.
And yeah I think she looks kinda tall, see picrel, tho these proportions may make sense on a more realistic style.

>> No.6161605

>>6161598
alright thank you, i was trying to emulate mel kishida, he made his girls a bit taller and i guess it works for this body type.
Thanks I'll fix it up

>> No.6161682
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Think I'm gonna call it a day with this, I got tired of it.
I tried to incorporate some of the more defined shapes in here >>6158888 but I wanna keep her looking softer.

>> No.6161686

>>6161682
Did anybody tell you how small that navel is compared to the rest of the figure?

>> No.6161688

>>6161686
Not that I recall but I was pointed out that it looked like it was too close to the ribcage

>> No.6161689

>>6161686
Also the navel is too high.

>> No.6161696

I'm struggling a lot with fashion and clothing inspiration.
People told me to look at fashion magazines, but they only have lame stuff, never cute things.
What are some resources I could use? Preferrably actual books.

>> No.6161714

>>6161696
What exactly are you struggling with? Learning to draw clothes / drapery? Or simply coming out with cute clothing ideas?
If it's the first then there is a resource in the OP, I can't say how good or bad it is because I've only seen the first video so far.
If it's the second, honestly I'd just jump to the boorus and search. Maybe save a few for later.

>> No.6161790

>>6161392
Charming

>> No.6161810

>>6161696
Try pintrest and adjust the feed

>> No.6161878

>>6161714
I'm struggling with designing things.
I mean sure, I also could go and nab as many references as I can, but surely there must be some science or techniques behind fashion choices and what makes things appealing, right?

>> No.6161923

>>6161878
I just use color gamuts, and study clothes on pinterest, to find something that works, you can even mix and matxh similar stuff and it just works.

>> No.6161975

alive general

>> No.6162138

nevermind

>> No.6162152

>>6162138
I can breathe some live into you..just pucker up.

>> No.6162236

>>6162152
*smooches you gently*

>> No.6162262

>>6162236

I didn't think you'd kiss me and now my mind is blank in confusion

>> No.6162320

Requests?

>> No.6162352

>>6162320
summer theme character of your choice
i suggest eating watermelon popsicle while sweating on a hot day but up to you

>> No.6162476

>>6162320
Maybe someone can make another prompt

>> No.6162563

https://files.catbox.moe/o9dzph.png
I miss having time to draw. we need a new pandemic
want to try that new flavor of the month program naoki sensei came up with on his book
>>6152711
tinkered with it a little but that leg foreshortening is fucking my shit up
>>6159929
beautiful hands

>> No.6162599

>>6162563
broken hip on right image

>> No.6162810
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asdasd

>> No.6162813

>>6162810
I like how you drew her knees

>> No.6162845

>>6162810
gross

>> No.6162878
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>>6162563
im calling FBI

>> No.6162955

>>6162810
what a dummy

>> No.6162957

>>6162810
Looks like shit

>> No.6162964

>>6162563
>beautiful hands
Thank you. Thank you really.
I still need to practice and learn to draw proper feet still.

>> No.6163107

>>6162957
>>6162845
>>6162955

that’s a first…

>> No.6163126

>>6162563
>want to try that new flavor of the month program naoki sensei came up with on his book
What's that?
Also that looks great, keep it up

>> No.6163162

I’m now noticing how much I need my magic keyboard and I don’t have it anymore. Fug.

>> No.6163180

>>6162810
Great work on the legs.

>>6163107
Ignore it. It's just a jealous begtard

>> No.6163220

>>6163107
But she really looks like a dummy in that outfit, makes me want to point and laugh at her and then tackle her over and lick her legs clean to wipe that smug look off of her face

>> No.6163234

>>6163180
But i normally am the one who calls 2k shit. So that’s why i’m surprised.

>> No.6163350

>>6162810
>ignore loli
>mire drapery

>> No.6163370

>>6162810
The legs look really off but the knees are great

>> No.6163450

>>6162810
i'm more impressed by the fact that she has an actual nose and nostrils

>> No.6163454

>>6162810
also hands (or rather the hand) are expressive and figure-rich too

>> No.6163468

>>6163370
>The legs look really off
They're fine except for the tapering

>> No.6163709
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6163709

>>6158617
How can I draw like you? Any reference artist?

>> No.6163715

>>6163709
step 1: don’t

>> No.6163726

>>6163709
Study CLAMP's style.

>>6163715
Fuck off, faggot crab.

>> No.6163728

>>6163726
back off??

>> No.6163746

>>6163709
find a better inspiration

>> No.6163747

>>6163746
mad

>> No.6163750

>>6163747
and bald

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>>6163726
I see quite a difference between these drawings and yours... your drawings come from studying Cardcaptor Sakura and Chobits?

>> No.6163763

>>6163752
>why do they look different
thats because he's too retarded to make a good clone of CLAMP styles,

>> No.6163769

Shut up

>> No.6163783

his art looks nothing like clamp. This thread confirmed nobody consumes shit.

>> No.6163786

is that why you're deleting everyone's work? because we didn't watch enough anime in your braindead opinion?

>> No.6163790

>>6163786
stfu glowie

>> No.6163819

>>6163709
Look for better inspirations on social media.

>> No.6163830

>>6163819
It wasn't a question for you, cunt.

>> No.6163833

This is the most useless thread in /ic/, I hope the jannies can just remove this general thread every time it pops up.

>> No.6163842

>>6163833
hide threads you don’t like and don’t come back

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>>6158828
>my taste
>in children
Anon has taste in children ;)

>> No.6163877

>>6163848
Yes. Not my fault some are too sexy.

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>>6155886
Can anyone please repost this? I missed it

>>6163709
Watch Tenchi Muyu

>> No.6164167

>>6164165
muyo

>> No.6164226

>>6155886
>Dead File

I was too late...

>> No.6164385
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>> No.6164395
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does anyone here want to exclusively draw lolis but not touching the r18 space? for example this guy (picrel) never drawn any lewd aside from (picrel) which is probably the lewdest art they ever drawn.

>> No.6164469

>>6164395
I am a coomer and weak at heart thats why I almost always end up drawing cute lewd shota and loli.

>> No.6164478

>>6164395
what’s with the g@ydolmaster posting? fuck off, boomer. play a real rhythm game.

>> No.6164480

>>6164478
>play a real rhythm game
aka "be a real pedo" ;)

>> No.6164633

>>6155886
Would you be so kind to post it again, anon?

>>6164469
>shota
Kill yourself, fag

>> No.6164635

>>6164385
these eyebrows look a lot better, shota-kun. good job
I'd make the ears a bit larger tho

>> No.6165067

>>6164478
idolmaster is based

>> No.6165070

>>6165067
based on boomerty

>> No.6165079
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>>6164395
I started that way, but been getting more and more into lewd stuff.
Kani biimu has some of the best balance between cute and sexy imo, see picrel.

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>> No.6165231
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How do i make her look at him properly?

>> No.6165360
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>>6164478
l*veliveniggerkun.....

>> No.6165362

>>6164633
>on a pedo/lolishota thread pretending to have morals/moralfagging about shota
kek you love to see it

>> No.6165368

>>6164395
lol i didn't expect to see yukkie's work here

>> No.6165375

>>6164633
~
https://files.catbox.moe/8b4lrh.png

>> No.6165534

>>6165375
it wasn't even 2k's work lmfao
self report

>> No.6165576

>>6165534
yes it was

>> No.6165593

>>6165375
If only 2k posted somewhere else than this /beg/ infested place...

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>>6165231
bit too messy right now but if you're trying to make her look up to the guy, consider flattening the bottom part of the iris (since a circle in perspective becomes an oval) to follow the change of planes
drawing a crosshair before the iris can help

>> No.6165674

>>6165596
Thanks

>> No.6165808
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Trying out foreshortening once again, don't know what I'll do with the second drawing's right hand yet.

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>> No.6166058

>>6165593
Yes if only. Then you’d finally filter this thread forever, ri—ah who am I kidding.

>> No.6166483
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Who drew this?
She's so precious draw more
Also how do get such clean lines?
I have no control even if i do longer lines

>> No.6166633

>>6166483
it looks shit

>> No.6166636

>>6166633
your face wasn't posted

>> No.6166642

>>6166633
Well I do agree it's a bit rough, but doing those kind of lines with no sketch is something I certainly couldn't do. I'll give him merit for that and wish he would teach me how to do it.

>> No.6166646

>>6166483
It was some anon's OC attempt, I don't recall him posting her again

>> No.6166692

>>6166642
The lines aren't done in one motion and are erased when there is a mistake.
You can see this if you look closely.
It's very likely just copied from an anime screenshot too

>> No.6166834

>>6165873
Is this yours? Very nice but what's with the ant size?

>> No.6166890

>>6166834
Thanks. I have a bad habit of sketching small.

>> No.6167145

>>6164226
>>6164633
https://litter.catbox.moe/xtgw04.jpg

>> No.6167184

>>6167145
This is why I browse this thread.

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6167200

random draw

>> No.6167201

>>6167200
The neck being almost as thick as her head feels uncanny imo.
I mean, I think the body looks much more realistic (proportion-wise) than the face.
It's mostly just the neck tho, and it may be just me.
Overall good work.

>> No.6167205

>>6167201
oh
you're right lmao

>> No.6167315

>>6167200
looks like a flat adult, nice

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need to get in the habit of posting my art more, keep forgetting

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>>6167346
WIP ofc but dunno if I'll get back to it today
>>6166483
that would be me and thank you that means a lot, I still struggle somewhat with my lineart but I've just kinda developed a flow and copying long hair has helped a lot with that, getting a sense for how lines should curve so that drawing them kinda becomes second nature it's pivotal to draw with your arm when you do so of course. these also aren't in many cases my initial lines and I'll just mostly erase them and then do the single strokes over

I know the perspective is kinda messed up and it has other issues but here's a loli van gogh from fgo I did the other day, most of the rest I've done recently consist of luicent copies

>> No.6167357

>>6167352
>>6166692
true for some lines but generally I'll erase the whole line and start again, I did lean on references but its one of my few non copies recently, I remember the hair being referenced from pics of perrine from strike witches and the face & body from my imagination

>> No.6167428

Trying to do stuff outside my comfort zone. Struggling a bit.
Would appreciate advice. Catbox because NSFW.
https://files.catbox.moe/s1cxq3.jpg

>> No.6167430

>>6167428
Not bad, not fully convinced by the hair, did you use references for the part when it's being grabbed?
Also her upper back seems bumpy and strange, don't know how to put it in words.

>> No.6167433

>>6167428
good lines but that's about it

>> No.6167435

>>6167428
Return to studying back and shoulder anatomy and perspective

>> No.6167448

>>6167428
Another good artist joins the thread, nice. Watch the shoulder blades. They're improperly placed.

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>> No.6167539

>>6167538
The muscles are too toned and defined, this looks like a very fit adult.

>> No.6167544

>>6167538
That pinch at the waist doesn't seem correct. You would need to bend forward for a pinch like that to exist, yet the rest of the pose seems to imply their spine is upright.
The armpit area is actually quite large, I find it interesting that you decided to leave a gap instead of connecting it to the breast, probably why it's mispositioned too.

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>>6167544
very good points, thanks

is this better?

>>6167539
to be honest I'm currently studying muscle anatomy atm and it is very hard to tone them down

>> No.6167630

>>6167554
>is this better?
no but its forbidden to explain why

>> No.6167914

new thread >>6167913