/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6142276

>>6142276
>spunch
EFLs...

Aloof crow

haven't drawn anything but sketches recently

I like drawing Jojo styled stuff

>>6142480
This is cute but that one spike in the center of the ball is godawful. Fix it please.

>>6143070
I disagree, I think it's cute. it's playful and a bit naive

>>6143326
It isn't tho.
>>6143070
Agree wtf is up with that spike? Looks like a sticker on a ball

my work is so good no one could accurate place it's level, so why bother posting

>>6142480
/beg/ carried by the style. some things that shouldn't be flat, are.
>>6142416
low /int/ on the fringes of /int/
>>6142469
high /beg/
>>6143000
low-mid /beg/

>>6143366
/beg/

>>6143366
/int/ beautiful lines

Is this what you would call prebeg?

>>6143369
seethe beglet

>>6142416
low int but good anatomy. I like her wings. Would love to see this with cleaner lines and more shading.
>>6142469
low Int but hard to tell by just looking at line art. I like the facial expression and his shoes.
>>6142480
low/mid int for the furry dude but low beg for that spiky ball thing. It's cute though! I like the coloring.
>>6143000
low/mid beg but if you fixed the flat head and cleaned up lines it'll look way better.
>>6143366
that jacked duck guy chad af so mid int.
>>6143381
Acid trip pre beg
>>6143416
low/mid int characters but solid mid int for perspective.

Was gonna post my art but I'm kind of shy now.

>>6142276

>>6142276
I don't have to post my work because I already surpassed most of /ic/

>>6143559
based fellow
>finally got good now returns to /ic/ just to spit on the people that made fun of him for 3 years
poster

the bullypill is bitter going down but cures your ills. there are bad side effects however

>>6142276
Been practicing hands and pussy behind the scenes. Still unsure how to effectively use references. I'll try to use them for corrections.

>>6143381
Prebeg
>>6143366
Int ?
>>6143000
Lowbeg
I’m sorry if I didn’t rank you it’s because I don’t feel I have the experience to.

>>6143416
is this the green drawing argentinian creep who flirts with trannies?

here we go again

>>6143000
This is what I meant by "more head" in >>6143540

I just made her head longer. pls ignore the dirty lines

>>6143416
>>6143366
low to mid int with a mid beg attitude

>>6143618
Yeah I thought her head was a bit wonky but I left it because I was already done.

>>6143659
his ratings were the most objective and accurate
not his fault the /beg/s chose to be triggered kek

>>6143618
Also, you could've just did a redline, you didn't have to mog the shit out of me too.

>>6143618
Also you could have just did a redline, you didn't have to mog the shit out of me too.
By the way what brush is that?
I've been seeing a lot of people use it recently.

I dont have anything more recent atm

>>6142416
>>6142469
>>6142480
high beg-low int, all cute styles
>>6143000
mid beg, would love to see this finished
>>6143366
mid int, great lines and love that pose
>>6143381
beg with sovl potential
>>6143555
mid beg
>>6143582
>>6143592
high beg - low int
>>6143618
rly impressive how you recreated jojo style so well

I am not good enough to rate, this was way harder than I thought

>>6143603
High int, although I'm biased cause I like BP as a character

>>6143582
You are a literal /pro/.
This looks amazing btw

>>6143366
>>6143416
mid beg

Work in progress.

>>6142416
High beg
>>6142469
low int
>>6143366
mid int
>>6143579
low int
>>6143582
adv
>>6143603
between high beg and low int
>>6143790
mid beg

>>6143725
>>6143804
>/beg/s this impressed by a study of a Zaku II figure
/ic/ is so screwed

>>6143819
I posted my mid beg scribbles like a year ago and got called /int/. I cringe so much looking back on how much it inflated my ego honestly. Do not listen to ratings here, they are all bullshit.

>>6143822
Yeah same. Got called pro for these studies on one more which is completely retarded

>>6143697
I forgot where I got this brush from but it's easy to make. It's just a regular soft round brush with a lil bit of pencil-like texture. I mainly use this to do line art.

>>6143873
Neat.

just finished this one, pretty proud. Stick with it anons we'll make it out someday :)

>>6142276
My artworks from oc draw thread, I didn't draw much on tablet so i still mostly new to drawing digitally

>>6143931
High beg
>>6143989
Mid beg
>>6144159
High beg
>>6143873
Low int
>>6143827
Low to mid beg. Nothing new since the last thread?

First time posting my work here, would appreciate any input. I've been drawing for a few years now, but had some long breaks - trying to get back on the horse.

>>6144255
I attach the reference, I guess the eyes are bigger giving away my own paranoia,(ha ha), maybe I made the wrong measurement, I made the measurements with my pencil on the screen, in the drawing the girl looks older, I want to believe thats because the jaw it is longer, about the shoulders, the paper was too small, although the fault is not be the paper but mine idl nothing about shading.

It would help me a lot if you could tell me what other mistakes, I made that apply to my "skill level", also, what is my current skill level? to know where i stand right now

>>6144256
fuck, the reference.

posting my own

>>6143790
beg, too many clashing styles together
>>6143804
hand suggests beg, but my hands aren't any better desu
>>6143826
int, though the 2nd hand seems small
>>6143827
high beg, colors are kind of unappealing
>>6143848
beg, try to get away from generic anime faces
>>6143873
int, great work
>>6143931
int or maybe better, better than any scene I could do
>>6143989
low beg but lots of potential. work on those faces. could be a matter of weeks to reach high beg if you study right
>>6144159
mixed bag. some more int, some seem low beg (croc girl)
>>6144255
Was going to say mid beg but then you posted the ref and now I'll say low beg. Her face is melting anon

>>6144280
Mid beg

>>6143381
Holy shit Bateman's diary but anime pilled

Speaking of, I fucked up the nail gun so much in that drawing. I'm high beg so I don't think I can crit most people here

>>6143819
Should have said that it was a study. I thought it was made from scratch.

>>6144280
Tripping balls.

>>6144283
>>6144318
I posted my own work so that you could take my criticisms or leave them based on my own experience level. Never said I was pro or even int.

FYI last week I added a guy on discord giving criticisms here as if he was pro and got him to show me his work and it was low-permabeg, so be careful taking anyone's critique without seeing their work first.

>>6144325
props, youre right

>>6144325
who was the discord guy?

>>6144340
Don't want to call him out by name, I think he meant well (and literally thought that he was a drawing God). But his work resembled >>6143000 (no offence to the anon who posted that looking for crits)

>>6144351
looks and sounds like xn (nosebro)

>>6144325
I just gave you a rating lol

>>6144372
It's not him; isn't that the guy who draws the weird mermaid gore stuff?

Can you spot Dalle promt fags?

Made this last year, never finished it, maybe I should

>>6144280
>Was going to say mid beg but then you posted the ref and now I'll say low beg. Her face is melting anon
that's ok, i'm came here not for suck my own dick, i want to learn what's wrong and maybe some advice to improve. so, besides melt face, what do you think i need to improve?

>>6144390
I hate to use the loomis meme, but starting with a loomis construction of the head would help in getting the placement/proportions right. Then, if you're going to use a reference, actually use the reference -- particularly with the collar. Pay attention to perspective. Notice the high angle on your collar vs the perspective on the ref's collar. Those are big details.

>>6144280
>clashing styles
Nta, but how do you get better at this? I don't even see any clashing when I look at that image

>>6144407
thanks anon, that's exactly what i was looking for.

>>6144448
How long it took?

>>6144450
Honestly, I don't remember because I lost interest in this drawing a few weeks ago. I'd estimate maybe 20-30 hours. It's not even close to being finished

Just started Digital and here's a character sheet I'm working on

>>6142416
>>6142469
>>6142480
>>6143000
>>6143366
>>6143381
>>6143416
>>6143555
>>6143579
>>6143572
>>6143582
>>6143592
>>6143603
>>6143618
>>6143697
>>6143704
>>6143709
>>6143790
>>6143826
>>6143827
>>6143848
>>6143873
>>6143989
>>6144159
>>6144247
>>6144255
>>6144280
>>6144386
>>6144448
>>6144457


NGMI, get the rope or look for another hobby

>>6144490
are you trying to frame me or why you didn't reply to me?

>>6144490
I don't get baitfags who quote reaction images as well. At least try to make it belivable.

>>6144490
I've been supporting my wife and I, doon daughter as well, for over 2 years with just art. Suck it, faggot. Also pyw

>>6144516
you are ok if you weren't tagged by that crab

>>6144386
Also finished this

>>6144435
I'm >>6143790 and I'd also like to know what specifically about this picture is clashing. Not trying to start a fight or anything, I'm just genuinely curious.

>>6144584
> That Nessa bulge
Why

>>6144597
She's a bit girl

>>6144590
The flowers are realistic while the clown is cartoony, having both so close to one another looks weird

>>6144381
thats tableguy

>>6144490
I got nine jobs. This one's part time. Gtfu loser

A recent one

>>6143326
it looks retarded wtf???

>>6144490
What do you get out of this? Genuinely curious.

>>6145694
he got you

On a good day I'm low /int/ I think
I'm also rating on appeal. To be a pro you have to not only draw good but draw pretty. I dont care if you're fucking Leonardio DaVinci if you draw CAL arts your /beg/
>>6142416
Low /int/
>>6142469
/Permabeg/
>>6142480
Mid /int/
>>6143000
Mid /beg/
>>6143366
Mid /int/
>>6143381
/GMI/
>>6143416
Low /pro/
>>6143555
Mid /beg/
>>6143582
High /int/
>>6143592
High /beg/
>>6143603
High /int/
>>6143704
Perma /beg/

I'm too bored to do more

>>6145601
>POWER LEVEL
Vergil/10

>>6145719

>On a good day I'm low /int/ I think

If that pic is your art then you thought very wrong.

took about 5 hours. no ref used. first time painting imagined portraits in color in a looong time.

>>6144386
Too old and tok bad to finish it, move on or re do it

>>6145719
>low int
You need to be honest with yourself first anon

>>6143000
Lol, make my day

>>6145759
>5 hours. no ref used
yeah we know, it shows :)

>>6145719
>On a good day I'm low /int/
google dunning kruger

>>6145778
well whats my powerlevel then

>>6144490
Smoll penor

wip, makin a comic

>>6145848
whats a nice distributor of simple comics these days?

>>6145856
Twitter...

>>6145856
no clue.
i was just gonna shitpost it on twitter, maybe show a friend or two, maybe dump it on this board, idk.
i just draw for fun during work breaks, sometimes i feel like i could just quit forever and a.d.d. into my other hobbies or just never wake up

>>6145813
high beg, gotta learn how to draw the features in perspective, especially eyes, that's the area needing most improvement among many.

>>6142416
kinda cool
>>6142469
kinda gay
>>6142480
kinda furry
>>6143000
sucks
>>6143366
kinda gross
>>6143381
a mess
>>6143416
kinda cliche
>>6143582
kinda begish yet the coolest thing so far
>>6143592
kinda beg but surprising commitment, will make it (unless only the left sketch is your work)
>>6143603
kinda cheap/easy way out, don't respect it
>>6143618
kinda hate jojos
>>6143704
kinda neat
>>6143709
kinda cool but very referenced, kinda pointless
>>6143790
pretty nice
>>6143804
cool
>>6143826
more impressive than you think, or maybe it isn't. you thought it good enough to capture and upload, after all.
>>6143827
lol
>>6143848
beginner
>>6143873
midginner
>>6143931
kinda sucks skillwise, but i like it overall
>>6143989
oddly decent forearms for a beginner
>>6144159
unappealing
>>6144247
very cool
>>6144255
sucks but you're not a quitter, respect it
>>6144280
interesting concept and color choices, skill is beginner, keep at it
>>6144386
almost ok
>>6144448
almost good
>>6144457
beginner
>>6144584
unappealing
>>6144827
very sweet
>>6145059
just cliche beginner " aww poor girl " anime shit
>>6145601
could be cool
>>6145719
sucks
>>6145759
super beg, shouldn't touch color yet but do whatever and have fun

>>6145914
You have shit judgement

>>6145917
get lol'd at, kid

>>6145759
uncanny-anon, nice to see that you are still at it.
Don't give up!

>>6145914
Props for the best response in the thread. Took the time to respond to basically everyone, didn't troll, was fairly accurate with only a couple misses

>>6145914
>more impressive than you think, or maybe it isn't. you thought it good enough to capture and upload, after all.
It's from maybe 6 months ago, I just gave it as an example to go along the other anon's statement about anons here having bad judgement lol. Imo it's alright, just studies with chalk, nothing special

>>6144584
This makes me hate Hilda so much

>>6145914
>>6145927
And to add, you gave one of the few good responses in this thread

>>6145914
>>6145924
>>6145932
samefag

>>6145933
cope-a-rooni

>>6145932
>>6145924
rad thanks

>>6143555
beg tier, has sovl but looks pretty flat and muddy, try familiarising yourself with basic 3d forms and think about direction of light and cast shadows when shading a piece
>>6143579
Hard to tell since most of the drawing is hidden, but probably high beg to low int. Face and hair feels pretty lopsided and poorly constructed, but top of breasts look very squishy and soft. Probably try studying lighting a little more, highlights feel like they've been placed without much thought
>>6143582
Looks really good, past the point where i can identify meaningful issues. Very nitpicky but maybe avoid using chromic aberration and noise for sketches, doesn't mean too much but it can kind of distract from the core work, can be slightly harder to identify issues. Logo and 72 look slightly too light for the shadow that they're in. High int, low adv
>>6143592
Also hard to critique, looks really good. High int. left shoulder looks like it needs to be a little broader.
>>6143603
Cute and clean, mid int
>>6143704
Mid beg
pretty cute and clean, but seems to be pretty comfort zone. Looks like shading wasn't thought through too much, simple forms means that it should be easier to work in 3d, but it feels pretty flat regardless. Shading on skin might as well not be there
>>6143709
Very high quality observational drawings, high int. (Could be higher, hard to tell when everything is a copy of a photo) Probably try to rely less on direct copying and use references more lightly, you've got a very strong foundation to work off.
>>6143790
beg, cute colours but pretty symbol drawn and poor 3d form, contour lines on the character make it look super flat. Since it's so simple, shouldn't be too hard to draw it considering 3d form.
>>6143804
mid to high beg, decent observation but looks very reliant on reference, and the shading is too light and loosely placed to look deliberate. Try to get a better understanding of 3d form then go back to this type of study, while trying to beak it down.

>>6144435
Sorry, just checking in now.
IMO (for what it's worth) the level of detail of the character and the level of detail in some of the flowers don't match. The character is obviously super stylized but some of the flowers are closer to attempts at semi-realism. The contrast in line art just makes the difference seem more extreme. I'm just saying that, in my opinion, it looks like it could be two different pics merged together.

>>6145933
Ok

>>6145949
High beg or low int. Very appealing, anon
>>6145848
Mid int

>>6145986
You used different devices.

>>6145996
Schizo

>>6145914
>kinda cheap/easy way out
Dafuq this is the first time I hear something like thata, elaborate?
>don't respect it
Damn :(

>>6145759
eric PLEASE WHATS YOUR SOCIAL MEDIA i have to keep up with you your deviantart is dead

>>6145949
>mid to high beg, decent observation but looks very reliant on reference, and the shading is too light and loosely placed to look deliberate. Try to get a better understanding of 3d form then go back to this type of study, while trying to beak it down.

Thanks for the feedback. It's hard to be deliberate on the shading because the reference was in a cloudy weather, so shadows aren't clear at all. But yeah I'm too reliant on the reference.

The highest level anybody who posts on /ic/ can achieve is /int/. Being higher that /int/ involves leaving this board behind.

R8

Don't say low /beg/

>>6145759
Why would you do it from imagination?

>>6146179
for what your going for, its good, maybe try and smooth out the details
>>6146086
Thats cool as fuck

>Don't say low /beg/

>>6146187
You must not know about my guy Eric.
>>/ic/thread/S3454629#p3454951

>>6142276
one of my recent drawings

>>6145741
>>6145771
>>6145780
Seethe

>>6146251
lmao can't tell if this is bait

>>6146086
Why the ugly planes or whatever? Makes her look older and filthy

>>6146267
He is just showing off.

>>6146081
chili anime stuff requires very little skill

>>6146081
>>6146742
Chibi *

recent painting

>>6146189
I'm sorry Jon, but I consider myself barely above /beg/, and I think our skill levels may be close, so yeah...

>>6148135
*barely above low /beg/

I realized how to render like 2 days ago

In progress. Copy of Lehmann's Calypso -- pardon the gray flesh tones: going for a Venetian technique, glazing the skin tones on top.

>>6142276
>>6142316
These resonate with me
>>6143381
This kills the middle brain
>>6143819
>>6143826
Studies of Good artists done well tend to be Good and please the middle brain
>>6146199
Nice shit brah

>>6148238
lol these drawings look like the creature I masturbated to raping an animu girl last night

Pic is mine so you can gauge my ratings

>>6145848
int, appealing, don't love the lip piercing
>>6145914
not my taste but looks well done
>>6145949
great work, int, but not a fan of the ms-paint style line art. i know its a style with a name (can't recall) but not my thing
>>6145991
great work. int.
>>6146086
appealing, high int depending on ref used
>>6146179
well done. don't know what it is but I like it. int.
>>6146198
beg, sorry m8
>>6146199
int, great work, kinda weird
>>6147142
amazing skill, pro, not so sure about the subject though
>>6148135
high beg, low int, but go be a pedo elsewhere
>>6148156
finish your work and maybe int
>>6148163
bro, you're pro. #goals
>>6148238
what am I looking at?
>>6149435
beg but I think you're trolling.

>>6148163
oh, and i would legit buy a painting from you. link me your socials.

>>6144584
>>6145059
>>6145601
>>6145719
>>6145759
>>6145848
>>6145914
>>6145949
>>6145991
>>6146086
>>6146179
>>6146189
>>6146198
>>6146199
>>6147142
>>6148135
>>6148156
>>6148163
>>6148238
>>6149435
>>6149486


Prebeg ngmi

>>6144490
Why don't you post your work then?

>>6149766
None of these are prebeg
pyw

>>6149797
Seethe moar permaprebeg, grind more, grow a thick skin and fuck off.
You came here, now grit your teeth.

>>6149489
Thanks fren! Don't have any yet. Nice sketch. Haven't really tried much digital.

>>6149800
>>6149802

>>6142276

>>6150099
Sex

>>6142276
Here's my stuff

>>6150111
Male, I like portraits and I am trying to lean to draw so that I might one day use oil paints.

>>6150396
Really good but you need to work on your values. Deeper, darker.

>>6150652
Really good. No critique, really. Not really my style but amazing

Hi i made this

>>6150652
Isn't that KJG's from Ophalos?

>>6148163
You need to post in the /trad/ thread, m8

>>6150915
high /int/ if not /pro/ mate. This looks fantastic, Keep up the good work!

>>6150652
You are still working on this? It’s been like a year..

Slowly trying to get this fucking battle scene done

>>6150652
5 point perspective--damn son.

>>6150652
Extremely kino /Pro/
>>6150915
Not into furry stuff but you have alot of talent high /Int/
>>6150776
High /Pro/
>>6151679
Very cool worldbuilding! Looks like something straight out of heavy metal magazine (if you zoomers know what that is) High /Int/
>>6148163
I see you have taken the academic classicism pill /Pro/
>>6148156
Practice makes perfect anon! Skull looks very good! Its good to step out of your comfort zone and try new things.
>>6147142
/Pro/
>>6146198
Don't stop trying! High /Beg/.
>>6146199
Hight /int/
>>6146086
/Pro/
>>6145991
/Int/
>>6143000
Mid /Beg

>>6142276

Hello

>>6151826
Hey anon, i can see you're still struggling with shading and proportion and all that jazz but that doesnt matter. All i see is that you're studying the masters, and that you're on the right path. Good luck! :)

>>6150652
Holy shit this is gorgeous, do you have an instagram?

>>6151857
Thank you for your encouraging words anon! I need to step out of my comfort zone from drawing cute girls (both anime and from photos) and start copying more from the masters.

>>6149802
How about being more constructive?

>>6151826
>>6152374
I agree with the other anon, you're in the right path good luck and never stop learning :)
You can also pop in basic instructional books like keys to drawing or hampton for anatomy or how to draw by scot robertson alongside studying the masters.

>>6143582
>>6145848
>>6146199
>>6147142
>>6148163
>>6149486
>>6149930
>>6150652
>>6150915
>>6151679
has potential

>>6152421
Really nice drawing anon. It portrays this board pretty well kek

I will keep grinding and studying the masters. Scott Robinsons books look kind of intimidating but I should at least check them out

>>6152473
I also did a shinzo painting today for tribute

still in process of cleaning up the lines but gonna try a background on this shit fr fr no cap

>>6152473
fun/10

>>6152551
good planes of the face


RIP

>>6142416
low /int/. I understand the messy lines were a stylistic choice but I'd love to see something finished.
>>6142469
Hard to tell if because unfinished, but I'll just say generally /int/
>>6142480
that spike ball tho lol. love the color, mid /int/ for image comp and color alone
>>6143000
mid /beg/. Look into Keisuke Itagaki's work if you're looking for something similar to what you're going for. nice trips btw
>>6143366
>>6143416
mid-high /int/ even without color, nice work.
>>6143381
/SOVL/
>>6143555
high /beg/
>>6143579
high /beg/. show more of the drawing, this isn't a blue board
>>6143582
I use the same filter to hide mistakes lol. high /int/
>>6143592
mid /int/
>>6143603
hard to r8, all together nothing stands out to me as amateurish. all in all pretty well done clip art. with nothing else to base it off of, generally /int/
>>6143704
mid /int/
>>6143709
very high /int/, if not /pro/. nice stuff anon
>>6143790
these super stylized cartoon ones are hard to r8, but that doesn't mean they're bad. the only issue I have is that Nights has a heavier outline than the flowers. That may have been a stylistic choice in an attempt to make them pop, but I think making the line weight the same throughout would do it a favor.
>>6143804
high /beg/
>>6143826
low /int/. post more than studies brah
>>6143827
mid /beg/, but I do give you props for actually finishing the piece
>>6143848
low /int/, but god do I find most animu whit boring as fuck to look at
>>6143931
very very high /beg/. you focused on other things like rendering and color theory before anything else, this is the highest /beg/ piece I have ever seen. that's not bad, just a unique way to approach it, so kudos to you. A painter instead of a drawer, I guess.
>>6143989
low /beg/ but keep working man, I can see you're putting in effort at least.

1/2

>>6152756
>Look into Keisuke Itagaki's work
I was going for Hirohiko Araki but I like the Baki manga too.

It’s a work in progress but I’m pretty stoked about it so far

>>6152756
2/2
>>6144159
generally /int/ but the worst is obviously the lizard bitch. is that an older piece or something? also the hands are all over the place, in one they are too small, and another they are bigger than his face, but generally it still works
>>6144247
mid-high /int/ but a portrait shot isn't a lot to work off of. I can't really give any crits because I don't know what you referenced it from. I like it, if that helps.
>>6144255
mid /beg/, you're getting there man. Also did you draw that on the back of your homework? Do yourself a favor and get a proper sketchpad.
>>6144280
mid /beg/
>>6144386
low /int/, also don't bother finishing it, it's been too long. Just move on to another piece
>>6144448
high /int/ scraping /pro/. Love this. I feel like it took forever lol
>>6144457
mid /beg/, is this a jojo OC or something?
>>6145059
also a very high /beg/ piece. work on your anatomy, it'd do wonders
>>6145601
low-mid /int/. why do people post unfished pieces? lol
>>6145719
bbbb/beg/
>>6145759
mid /beg/
>>6145848
low-mid /int/
>>6145914
high /beg/
>>6145949
low /int/
>>6145991
high /beg/. bite the bullet and learn some anatomy, quit hiding the hands like a middle schooler lol
>>6146086
high /int/
>>6146179
low /int/
>>6146189
ok, high /beg/
>>6146199
high /int/, would love to see your other stuff
>>6147142
high /int/, love the mask
>>6148135
high /beg/ keep working on anatomy. also those faces are holding you back
>>6148156
can't r8, it's unfinished anon. could look /int/ or could be /beg/
>>6148163
based trad. high /int/ if not pro. you're making the old masters proud
>>6149435
im not rating this
>>6149486
low /int/, what is that face?
>>6150099
hard to r8, mid-high /beg/ maybe?
>>6150110
/beg/ but keep working
>>6150148
/beg/, the background is better than the centerpiece
>>6150396
hard to r8, maybe low /int/?
>>6150652
holy fucking /pro/, my god dude
>>6150915
mid /int/
>>6151679
low /int/ since it's unfinished, but it's cool

guess I gotta do one more

>>6152757
int with potential to go far

>>6152606
beg

>>6152421
very low int, stop polishing bad art and force yourself to study the things that make you frustrated

hands, feet, spine, weight, balance your characters
learn the planes of the face.

>>6150915
beg for a human, into for a furry
stop following your dick around and learn how to draw proportions properly

>>6150396
beg, still lives are the easiest/fastest way to see improvement so keep doing them
all your cross hatching should be in the same direction across the whole image
dont scribble in your mid tones, take your time and be deliberate and confident

>>6150148
beg

>>6150110
beg

>>6150099
beg

>>6149486
beg

>>6148163
you are doing gods work
please keep art alive

>>6148156
beg

>>6146086
high int, amazing work. push your darks more as they blend in with your mid tones currently which makes her look dirty
work on keeping that hatching unified even in the darker areas like the hair

try getting a sketchbook with darker paper so you can pull highlights out


>>6145991
high beg, stop cutting corners and put in the work. the areas that feel like a chore for you are super visible and cheapen the whole image. DO THE WORK ANON

>>6145719
beg

>>6145601
beg

>>6145059
beg

>>6144827
beg

>>6144584
mid beg

>>6152776
3/2 lol
>>6151826
mid /beg/. looks like you tried to render a character from hotline miami lmao
>>6151837
nothing to rate, sorry
>>6151887
low-mid /beg/ but you're going out of your comfort zone which I applaud. keep going anon
>>6152421
low /int/ but I like the flow of it
>>6152473
another one hard to r8, low-mid /int/ based ont he composition. caricatures are hard to analyze bros
>>6152551
mid /int/. if the layers are still separated in your file you should try and render the background more. RIP Shinzo Abe
>>6152577
mid /int/, cute Paimon
>>6152606
mid /beg/ but you're getting there. the girl from the waist down actually looks better than the rest of it, so you're showing that you are at least having breakthroughs
>>6152757
can't r8 because unfinished, keep going dude.
>>6152762
this is p cool but nothing to really rate skill wise. maybe an anon more familiar with trad painting can give a crit

and I'm done. there was some good stuff in the thread, I'm surprised. Here's my stuff before someone has a meltdown.

what worries me though are the /beg/lets giving advice to other /beg/lets. some of you guys need to focus on your own art before giving out the wrong pointer to someone who is try to improve.

>>6143989
>>6152756
>low /beg/ but keep working man, I can see you're putting in effort at least.
Thank for the rate. What do you think I should study and how do I improve this particular drawing?

>>6152789
>you guys need to focus on your own art before giving out the wrong pointer to someone
Anons, should we tell him? or nah?

>>6152777
>int with potential to go far
you have mental retardation, also if you can't post your work your judgement is worth shit anyway

>>6152804
woah someones mad they they got mogged by my doodle.

>>6152797
hands and feet 100%. faces as well but what pulled me out of it the post was the hands and boots. The left hand (our left not her left) is doing something artists call "foreshortening". Basically when a long object, be it a leg, arm, whatever is much closer to the camera, it will look insanely flat if you don't do it perfectly. It's a hard technique that takes a long time to master. Some artists avoid drawing foreshortened objects at all due to it's difficulty to pull of, which is why I applauded you for giving it a try.

As far as general improvement, when I was at the stage you are at now, breaking everything down into shapes helped immensely. Do practices of arms and legs, hands and feet and break them down into very basic shapes, then work as if you are drawing lego pieces, and harshly construct the object. I think Michael Hamptons book on figure drawing covers this concept pretty well. All in all, just keep drawing and pushing your comfort zone. If you find yourself stalling, move onto something you know you haven't mastered yet. Good at legs? focus on feet, good on feet? focus on getting the toes right.

>>6152799
if you noticed, I only gave advice to people who needed it, and didn't if I felt like they were above me in skill level. rating isn't the same thing as giving bad advice. You also will notice that I gave a lot of /int/ rates. That's because unless it stands out to me as amazing, as a couple in this thread did, I can't really identify difference in skill with people at a similar skill level as me. Which one was yours again?

>>6152804
why do you feel the need to comment on critique some one else got?
who are you?

>>6152832
I'm going to go out on a limb and say they're an anon with eyes and taste and an opinion like everyone else and he's right, that's a beg sketch, not "int with potential to go far."

>>6152808
I know about Hampton and I applied the construction. I would really appreciate a redline from you, I think it would be a big jump in my understanding. My beginner eyes cant see quite clearly how hands and feet are supposed to look on this piece.
Why ask for redline? Back when I was even worse than now, an anon redlined my figure drawing and it really lit some bulbs in my head.
>>6152789
Is this ur work?

lioning

>>6152846
why are you mad that someone else is going to make it?

>>6152846
you seem a bit peeved. perhaps you could be so kind to post your work so I can see the work of someone with "taste" and "eyes"

>>6152857
why do you think I'm mad?

>>6152861
I said everyone has taste and eyes and an opinion. If you want to believe the delusion that you are not a beg, it's your loss.

>>6152862
well, for starters you're bitching about something that has no effect on you or your life, anonymously, when nobody asked you; on a board that coined the term "crabs" in the context of artists being cunts to other artists.

sooo, context clues i suppose

>>6152861
https://mobile.twitter.com/teasunnh

>>6152864
post your work. lets see it lil guy. show us that you're not delusional.
>>6152868
yes and now follow me.

>>6152865
I never bitched.
>when nobody asked you
do you know what thread this is?
>anonymously
the nerve
>about something that has no effect on you or your life
that can be said about everything on here. I tried to help a beg not delusionally think they aren't a beg. This is actually helping a fellow artist.

>sooo, context clues i suppose
You should spend less time on social media.

>>6152870
Always the same with you. And always makin these threads.

so much dramafagging over what looks like a coffee stain. god i hate you all

>>6152875
all I did was post a picture. I mean I can see why 80 iq perma begs would be envious. they see my art, think it looks easy but then get stuck when they can't do it. and then they in their tiny autistic brain go "grrr i hate dat guy" and then derail entire threads when all I do is make a single post. Like me personally I can't imagine being bad at drawing. it must suck. but hey, its not for everyone.

>>6152874
the point is to critique art
not complain about what other people say about the art.
you know int doesnt mean professional right?


anon isnt beg, even from their twitter you can see that.
anon shows intuition, confidence and what people here call soul.
they have a grasp of perspective, color theory and how to place features on a face.
should they do still lives? yes
master studies? yes
will they probably benefit from taking some nude drawing classes in charcoal? absolutely
but anon has a direction and they look like they have an upward trajectory

you should probably look up outsider art

>>6142276

>>6152832
>who are you?
....
>visits an anonymous image board
>everyone is literally anonymous
>asks people who they are

Go to your father, tell him to postpone the divorce and ask him to give you 3 light taps in the forehead so that your brain might function again properly.
If my work is beg let's see yours fag.

PSHHHH... I guess I'm Just TOO good for this Board. Ironic Cuz im like EVIL PERMA-PRE-BEG INCARNATE.

>>6142276
Just finished this with a nude and see-through version in on my pixiv/twitter
I really need to work on hands plus I had no idea how to do the waves so just did those white lines
Roast me
https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/99606406
https://twitter.com/thesvinny/status/1545704071289520128

>>6152907
>he doesnt know what a rhetorical question is

>>6152932
Still haven't posted your work

>>6152849
I gave it a go, but it's late and I only had time for the arm. I don't really ever redline so I apologize if this isn't clear. I tried to show what I mean by "drawing lego pieces".

If you build it chunk by chunk, the perspective becomes easier to manage. And yeah, that's my piece, although it's pretty old now. I haven't had the time to finish anything, I'm tied up with uni right now. Anyway if you have any questions and I see them before I fall asleep I'll answer them. Hope this helps in some way.

Feel free to critique.

>>6152949
No idea, you talk to me like I dont even know what construction and 3d form are yet your redline isnt that radically different in terms of positioning (but Ill take a look later, always possible Im not trained to see something). So Im curious about the rest of the body now.

Some of my sketches from last month

Would honestly appreciate some guidance though I feel like I'm just spinning my wheels - some days I feel like I've improved and other days I feel like I've lost all progress

>>6152777
>very low int, stop polishing bad art and force yourself to study the things that make you frustrated
>hands, feet, spine, weight, balance your characters
>learn the planes of the face.
thanks for the free critique anon bro, will do that, need to work on my perspective and foreshortening as well
>>6152789
>low /int/ but I like the flow of it
thanks

rated low beg you pieces of shit I have been drawing since I remember and you spout like morons "low beg" Low beg I am going to stick in your ass motherfucking faggot

>>6153276
I take it back - you're pre-/beg/ at best

>>6143603
Sexo

>>6150773
>>6152756
Thanks for the feedback on my Beetle!

>>6152777
Thanks for the feedback anon!

>>6152955
Head/face look a little small

>>6152932
It’s a retarded question. This is an anonymous image board for art critique and this thread is specifically for ranking others’ abilities based on their posted work. People will judge your work anonymously. If you want “nice comment only :)” then you don’t want honest critique (which is used to improve) and just want a worthless, vapid hugbox instead.

>>6152883
I didn’t complain. They complained about my opinion. There is no honor in lying to people and telling them their art and artistic abilities are far higher than they are. It’s pretty telling how some of react to minor criticism or a mere ranking of ability (the point of the thread).

>>6153006
It's very hard to tell, bud. They're all verrrrry similar. I see you trying to break out of your box so kudos, but push it even further. I like the ones in upper left the most.

>>6152789

Thanks for the feedback, fren-- lower body on the girl is the part I pretty much struggled with the most there so I'm glad to hear it turned out the most successful. Hoping to get better at drawing bodies at different angles as time goes on.

Any tips for how to get into coloring and not have it look like total dogshit (and I say this to generally anyone who reads this)? Picrel is my attempt at watercolor experimentation.

>>6146189
Can I get some critique please? What's wrong with it? What am I lacking? What should I work on?

>>6152955
That is a long ass neck
I feel like the composition would be stronger with a shadow from the window frame falling on the stairs. Speaking of stairs, I know you're trying to evoke a winding staircase, but those are some seriously stubby steps.

>>6152805
It's cool but I can't help but feel that you're using rendering and design to cover up a lack of drawing skill. I can't tell from one picture obviously but this piece would be great if the form was a bit more defined. There's a lot of very flat looking areas.

/beg/ for drawing /high-beg/ for rendering.

>>6151679
No rating, this has a lot of sovl. Very cool

>>6144255
>>6144259
In your drawing, she looks like a 35 year old braphog. I like it.

>>6154066
Looked over it, what do you think you need to work on? learn to self critique, obviously you dont think your work is perfect, where can there be improvement?


My observations: biggest issue im seeing is inconsistency. there are images that look like you have tackled an aspect of the anatomy then in others its wrong again, you are struggling with face in three dimensions. eyes are not following the plane of the face. necks are too wide and clavicals are too low: it comes from seeing a photo reference and copying it 1 for 1 instead of converting the forms for anime proportions

>>6142276
here :)

>>6142276
im not an artist i just wanted to draw

>>6154066
Yeah, I usually draw very short necks and maybe I was trying to overcompensate here.
I actually thought about doing cast shadows on stairs, but I couldn't make it look good at all and gave up on that.

>>6151679
makes my zerg heart happy, very cool

R8

>>6154430
Hobo art style.

rape

>>6154464
Anon you're int in my eyes! :) but why do you like forced nonconsensual sex?

>>6154464
i will spread my asshole wide open for you if you teach me how to paint

>>6154464
>>6154487
I can teach you both if you abandon sodomy and fornication

>>6154490
>fornication
never fornicated i am a good gamer

>>6154352
Funny you should mention that, i'm listening to this
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-mzfnUIdzq4
While shading this

>>6152757
/beg/ dogshit, no sovl only delusion

>>6152870
/beg/

>>6152757
>>6152861
This looks laughably bad lmao, like a smudge stain on the paper. you're a delusional /beg/ if you think this is good
>le less detail the better
kek
>>6152870
Ohh you're that guy, I hope to one day have the confidence you do in your mediocre bad art lmaooo

>>6154677
>>6154633
>>6154623
poster count didn't go up. 0 work posted. so obsessed, so obsessed.

>>6152868
holy shit this guy is an actual faggot

>>6154464
I dig the sketches at the bottom left. No rating just keep making cool stuff

>>6154689
Yep yep, samefags a lot, writes weird shit, crabs... Best to ignore him, idk why I posted his twatter, I wont do that again. He needs to be thoroughly ignored so he dies.

>>6145949
beg but nice
>>6145991
ok
>>6146086
nice, i suck at eyes
>>6146179
kinda gross somehow
>>6146189
beginner
>>6146198
beginner
>>6146199
kinda neat
>>6147142
kinda cool
>>6148135
mentally ill
>>6148156
beginner
>>6148163
great, but i am biased in favor of trad
>>6148238
low effort drawing, low effort repl
>>6149435
a little gross but lold
>>6149486
kinda dont like the face or style
>>6150099
kinda neato
>>6150110
beginner
>>6150148
pretty beg but actually interesting, cool
>>6150396
sorta ok
>>6150652
if this is actually yours and not some asian dude's, this is actually pretty good despite anime
>>6150915
not furry but kinda neat
>>6151679
hard to read mess
>>6151826
lol
>>6151837
cheap, simple, you could just get a rubber stamp
>>6151887
lol
>>6152421
kinda neat, a bit beg
>>6152473
i like a lot of your stuff hellboy anon
>>6152551
eh
>>6152577
very nice

>>6152606
beg , bit cliche, almost sweet but she's crude
>>6152757
i hate ' i see jesus in toast ' lazy shit
>>6152762
an aimless ' clean mess ' , but it could have been cool
>>6152789
beg and also filters suck
>>6152805
kinda beg
>>6152850
kinda sucks, animals easy to draw for the most part if you don't get lazy
>>6152861
' let your brain fill in the rest' is lazy trash
>>6152870
kinda cool
>>6152889
eh
>>6152917
you are what you strive to be
>>6152930
beg
>>6152955
kinda sucks but you're practicing cool things
>>6153006
very unappealing/stephen universe shit, made worse when sexualized
>>6153884
fun
>>6154183
gay
>>6154305
sorta neat
>>6154325
same
>>6154430
beginner
>>6154464
professional, but faces kind of unappealing to me personally, which doesn't matter
>>6154725
deviantart but not the worst at all

WIP for a friend

>>6154677
idk about the graphite drawing, but I've seen that anon post before and I like some of his stuff.

>>6154756
Beginner.

>>6142276

>>6155249
/beg/ only because it isn't a finished drawing. Push for the same level of effort that you put into the eyes and nose into the rest of the elements. Maybe also lose the glow and try to meet that background value into the shape of the head, hair etc so that it looks less like lines and more like physical forms. Also important last step, once finished quickly move onto your next piece, don't get hung up and overwork a single drawing. Godspeed, you'll do good stuff.

>>6145697
>he got (you)
ftfy

>>6154877
Decided to fix somethings

>>6154756
>gay
It's working
If the birds on the left aren't traced then mid/high beg

>>6150652
Pro

Hello, another power level thread. Everyone except that oil painting is either /beg/ or degenerate. I encourage everyone to pull your lives together and do something useful I assume you're all 18+ and this is not for you anymore. You don't have what it takes so just stop. Look at yourselves you sorry asses, this is not for everyone. And even any of you made it AI is gonna take over. This is a wake up call. Wake the fuck up! Especially the manga and anime faggots jesus christ you're not children anymore! Some of you are even in your 30s, fucking disgisting!

>>6155931
too generous, thanks. nothing traced, i google ref pics on phone a little bit to get the gist of where shit goes and the shadows are total guesswork, drawn during work breaks. owl i got to draw at home tho, it turned out the best imo. if i didn't have to work i would probably go to art school

>>6154756
>>6154752
turn your stabilizer off your lines look like shit and you're stunting your own growth as an artist by not learning how to draw lines

also it makes the things you traced/referenced stand out awkwardly because its the only time you can draw a half decent line.

car in first image/eagles face/ect

>>6156085
You don't even draw LMAO

>>6156105
>stabilizer
i don't use stabilizers, i just draw in fast, confident motions, lines look better

>>6156114
your lines do not look confident

>>6156085
>Some of you are even in your 30s, fucking disgisting!
my favorite cope/bait. some of these geezers were in their 60s+ when they animated and designed a rabbit throwing a pie at a fat hunter or a fox shooting a bear in the butt with an arrow

Seeing a lot of awful draftsmanship and lack of line permanence across the board in this thread. Hopefully my work can elevate and salvage it.

>>6143709
bloggo?

>>6144597
puffy lips

I have been trying to come up with a good color palette for this guy's outfit but so far I don't like anything.

hair, skin and eyes, are the only things I want to keep the same.

Any recommendations?

fixed it 4 u

>>6154756
Thanks, but what rating does Deviantart fall under?

>>6156209
>>6154756
Same please

What does
>very unappealing/Stephen universe shit made worse when serialised

Fall under? If it helps it was done for a /co/ drawthread

>>6156209
>>6156219
who cares what i think, im just some retard bumbling my way through doodles.

>deviantart
just looks like typical stuff i see on main page, ponyshit/furshit with an anime facade etc, but not too terrible.

>stephen universe
looks really tumblry. if you want specifics, i just tend to find it a bit humorously absurd when an artstyle that was workshopped to offend as little as possible is adapted for sexual scenarios. this mostly applies to faces, some of your poses are ok, but face is everything to me sometimes

you guys will probably get your own shows some day

>>6156136
>line permanence
>only draws floating heads
fuck off

>>6154752
>>6154756
High-Beg, Stuck in the 80s, bland comic
Do you want halftones or not? there is hesitation in your halftones and even with pure black and white, values are not placed correctly. I bet you can't do a full render to save your life.

Wants to stylize but not good enough, zero shape language, settled for a boring realism attempt.

If this gets published it's worth a dollar per volume. pfft

>>6154752
>>6154756
I gotta agree with the other anon, this shit is painfully boring. You were doing the age old joke of "what if animal act like US?" and had the freedom to make it look however wacky or crazy you want, and yet you settle for realism. Lol that puts me to sleep.

Don't quit your day job lmao

>>6156342
>>6156282
ok chris chan juniors, you've had your schizo spergouts, post your ' learn to draw anime ' scribbles now, pyw

>>6154756
how old are you? fucking lol theres no way an adult made this, but i can tell from how unfunny this is, you're over 30. fuck thats so sad lol

there's gonna be some angry clopping out there tonight isn't there bros..

>if this gets published
>if quack cocaine gets published
ctfu

>>6152776

>>6152777

Reminder to never take someone's ratings seriously when they don't post their own work.

>>6156396
false, all constructive criticism should ne taken
dont listen to anons who wont post their work and are being cunts, however.

>>6156442
someone saying 'beg' over and over and over isn't a constructive criticism or even helpful, especially when half the stuff he calls beg is better than half the stuff he calls int on a fundamental level.

>>6142480
>>6143603
>>6143704
Neither of you are close to "int". Draw something else, contemplate why you are gay and see if you can fix that, eat some healthy food (raw meat and fat) and may God help you, you are in every power level thread with no changes.

>>6156489
>someone saying 'beg' over and over and over isn't a constructive criticism

yeah
exactly
so who cares?

You're all begs. Theres no int work in this thread so far

>>6149800
No no, he was right

thoughts?

>>6156358
>>6156396
I have already posted my work above, my handle is "anonymous" Bitch. Find it Bitch.

>>6156724
You're gæ

>>6156739
I can't see me loving nobody but you! For all my liiiiife. Very trippy, I like it

>>6156540
Very nice figure. reference? Sensitive line is always a delight to see.

>>6155954
I'm not a furry but this is cute, nice job

I'd critique more but I gotta get back to my lame computer job.

>>6156768
Everyone can tell it was a beg as fuck one after your gay little hissy fit you shitter

>>6156547
Wtf you calling me out for I didn't even post in the last power lvl thread

>>6150915
blog?

>>6156858
You know what's gay? It's your shitty stock-photo tier lineart drawing, boring comics and beg execution.
"No sTobiloizers boyos joost confidant loyns". Of course we see that assface nothing confident in it, your forms are flat as fuck go giver yourself a rimjob.

>>6156114
Do you want a cartoon or realism? Choose! This looks like something I'd grab from google for a powerpoint presentation. Maybe design the male and female in bathrooms, your skill fits there. Are you an Indian in Fiverr doing commissions for 5 bucks?

>maybe design the male and female in bathrooms
we are reaching nuclear levels of esl asspain here lmfao

>>6156970
>>6156956
don't post your works in useless power level meme-threads if you're too autistic to take someone's unimportant rating of your work.
i draw as a tertiary hobby so I couldnt get as affected by some aspergoid's screeching about line weight or whatever even if I wanted to.
as someone who spends his life on such things might. put some of that wasted effort toward improving, or don't, because another favorite hobby of mine is interacting with hilarious dunning krueger art schizos.

pyw lmao

>>6157053
Cool Bluto
Also, funny that 1 of the anons lashing out as you did it because he thought you were >>6154756.
Outstanding reading comprehension, /ic/itizens

>>6157061
I am the creator of the highly controversial comic " the quackheads" yes, drew it on a lunchbreak

>>6157073
A wait that is you? Fair. What made you feel like experiment with textures?

>>6157104
messing around and painting with trad paints kind of opened me to trying things other than just hard round brush on digital

>>6157109
Ah, understandable. I remember seeing your trad stuff, charming use of colors

>>6157053
>>6157061
>>6157073
>>6157104
>>6157109
>>6157115
>and they lived happily ever after

>>6157053
Absolute state of a mediocre faggot. Not good enough, might as well be a tertiary hobby ;)

>>6157039
I speak 5 languages with 2 dialects. I just happened to learn your schoolshooter language for convenience.

>>6157115
thanks,reminds me of pic

>>6156956
lmao thanks for proving that your ratings mean less than nothing without even having to post your work.

>>6156282
>80s
bit further back imo

if you don't pyw before thread dies you're the biggest pussy of all.
have an imagination head i shat out in less than 40 minutes, an eternity in hobbyist time

>>6156140
Maybe when I get good in a couple years

>>6157146
Gigabased gmi.

>>6157976
I have posted my work and you have rated it, what more do you want Stock-photo anon?

>>6156136
this isn't your art, stay crabby.

>>6156359
i know who this is and can confirm they are over 26 but below 39

>>6156396
are you retarded? I posted my work here dumbass >>6152789

>>6158804
>shitty beg anime, drowned in grain filters and chromatic aberration filters
lmfao, every time without fail.

>>6158871
>Anime
Holy kek

>>6158968
you tried