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>> No.6135032

>>6135030
Why not post yours faggot.

>> No.6135042

>>6135030
>lazy sketch vs actually trying

>> No.6135043

>>6135030
are you the same retard who posted "is there anyway to get asian jeans" along with this picture, then deleted it?

>> No.6135047
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>>6135042
sort of but its still a lot of progress
https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/73666527/artworks
>>6135043
yes, I thought it would be better to make a real thread instead of a stupid shitpost one so I deleted it (Y)

>> No.6135067

>>6135047
nah its still very dishonest
at the very least i'd bet this artist actually had a lot of good life drawings but was really unconfident about their anime drawings

>> No.6135074

>>6135067
Yes. They have those. Guaranteed.

>> No.6135105

>>6135030
I dont believe this.

>> No.6135115

Trannime then, trannime now

Not sure why make all that effort to draw something as generic as an trannime cat girl

>> No.6135130

>>6135030
post yours faggot

>> No.6135132

>>6135030
Fuck u I'm not pyw until you pyw

>> No.6135133

>>6135115
4chan is an anime website

>> No.6135138

>>6135074
desu it sorta gives me confidence being able to draw decent life drawings feels good until you try drawing characters and its absolute garbage
knowing with some dedication you can overcome that its good to see but fuck the guts of these people

>> No.6135144

>>6135115
neckbeards like you are not allowed to have opinions

>> No.6135150
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6135150

>>6135138
I'm doing still life and lots of portraits and that has helped a ton.

>> No.6135151
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6135151

>>6135032
>>6135130
>>6135132

>> No.6135155

>>6135144
Says the grown man drawing trannime

>> No.6135166

>>6135151
>Still hiding hands
Zero improvement.

>> No.6135168

>>6135150
Im jelly

>> No.6135173 [DELETED] 

How do I improve?
Common things I get is to add gesture, make the bodies more stable and to improve lineart. So i tried adding more gesture and then think about if they can stand properly, also i tried improving my linework. and overal penmanship by drawing longer lines.

What else can I do?

>> No.6135174

>>6135173
Pyw

>> No.6135175
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6135175

same character over the years

>> No.6135176
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6135176

Made a mistake posting again

How do I improve?
Common things I get when posting is to add gesture, make the bodies more stable and to improve lineart. So with that I tried adding more gesture and then think about if they can stand properly, also i tried improving my linework.
Sometime i push the gesture so much that the body looks broken.
I also sometimes get told to work on anatomy but when I do add anatomy knowledge like showing muscles and bones, people say that it looks uncanny with how much detail I add and it doesn't suit the bodies I draw

What else can I do to improve?

>> No.6135184

>>6135155
I can beat the shit out of you

>> No.6135188

>>6135175
Do not stop drawing backgrounds with structures like the one in the middle since objects help provide more of a sense of solidity, space, and perspective for the figure. It seems like you're on the same detrimental path of a coomer with a bust shot in empty space and focal points being the tits.
>>6135176
After all this time you're still confined to your comfort zone. Haven't you realized you've been drawing the same exact poses/figures with maybe small variations of either head tilt/turn by now? Look at the figures to the left they are all facing the same 3/4 view if that isn't evident of your comfort zone I don't know what else will convince you.

>> No.6135191

>>6135176
Trust your feelings and let them guide you. I'm being serious.
If you feel something is wrong, try looking for it and change it. You are the artist. Don't wait for a redliner or some art savant to draw for you. It is your art, try making it appealing to YOU.

>> No.6135194

>>6135176
Are all trannime posters pedophiles?

>> No.6135195

>>6135176
How do you stagnate so much holy shit?

>> No.6135197
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6135197

>>6135191
>Trust your feelings and let them guide you.
If you're going to be spouting pseudo bullshit you might as well just tell him to read the sticky without sounding like a complete faggot.

>> No.6135201

>>6135197
There isn't an objective right way to do art. Anon is not getting that.

>> No.6135204
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6135204

>>6135030
should have started doing full pieces sooner instead of grinding separate things

>> No.6135210
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>> No.6135228

>>6135204
good advice but you should probably be more ambitious

at least you're not hiding hands though

>> No.6135265

>>6135191
alright thank you

>> No.6135267

>>6135188
alright i guess i'll do different head positions and avoid standing then, thanks

>> No.6135269

>>6135210
whats the story here, they were doing graffiti on march, and now they are summoning demons?

>> No.6135295

>>6135210
very sovl i like it

>> No.6135314
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6135314

i can't believe it's been 2 years since i started drawing, time sure flies...

>> No.6135331

>>6135210
Please quit art forever.

>> No.6135334
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6135334

>>6135030
I'm still enjoying drawing so that's a plus

>> No.6135341

>>6135175

Middle one is the best one

>> No.6135356

>>6135150
I will never understand these fucking faggots that equate drawing manga to drawing realistic portraits as progress jesus fucking christ

>> No.6135360

>>6135269
To me it looks like one dude not giving an ounce of shit and dragging his friend into shenanigans.

>> No.6135374

>>6135115
kill yourself westerner

>> No.6135418
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>> No.6135437
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6135437

not mine how do i achieve this progress?
>>6135150
tricky to estimate prog of a front view portrait
hair lost the volume and needs darker values

>> No.6135456
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6135456

I need

>> No.6135470
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6135470

Here is mine

>> No.6135482

>>6135067
I agree with this. It's more likepy going to demotivate than motivate someone else to improve.

Now if it's 10 years, or 15 years, that gives hope.

>> No.6135486

>>6135030
This kind of stuff absolutely destroys confidence, I've been drawing twice as long and not even half as good as him.

>> No.6135501

>>6135341
why?

>> No.6135534
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6135534

Here is mine. Been doing lots of studies...

>> No.6135554
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6135554

2019 vs 2021

>> No.6135555
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>>6135030
2017 vs yesterday

>> No.6135560
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6135560

>>6135175
why would you trade fkey cloth in 2017 for pillowshading?

>> No.6135564

>>6135555
Cute brother
>>6135554
Amazing progress :)
>>6135470
Long road, but worth the work!
>>6135456
Get help

>> No.6135604

>>6135437
But is this really the case? THe one on the left looks much more appealing.

>> No.6135608

>>6135604
not him, but the right pic is technically much better (anatomy, and proportions). Face on the right is undeniably more accurate and appealing. But the artist lost the soul in the lineart especially.

>> No.6135614

>>6135175
September one seems lazy, face lacks the emotion from the january one, shading is also a lot less detailed, and no BG makes the january one better, although i can tell you improved, it's just uninspired although i would be too considering it's the same picture on the same year.

>> No.6135696

>>6135210
i like the storytelling

>> No.6135732

>>6135356
Don't worry I'm going back to drawing anime soon.
> inb4 trannime
you can't win

>>6135437
True it is tricky, but I couldn't find any drawing I could show besides that one. Plus that anime drawing is a copy I tried hard to do, so for me it is a lot of progress.

>> No.6135743

>>6135032
Because I will get made fun of by other anons, no matter how much I improved.

>> No.6136000
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6136000

my progress isn't exactly linear because I would take off time every now and then. I've gotten much more serious/dedicated with improving in the last month

>> No.6136019
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6136019

Note: i was drawing ok even before april but sucked at anime (not that i'm good at it now lol)

>> No.6136050

>>6135151
why are you still not cleaning up your lines

>> No.6136051
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6136051

>>6135030
dont have a blog so i dont save my stuff alot of the time but heres some requests i did in past drawthreads

>> No.6136081

>>6136051
UOHHHHHHH ToT
very nice progress. Any books that you'd recommend for a /beg/ like me?

>> No.6136084

>>6136081
Loomis.

>> No.6136092
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6136092

>>6136084
>Loomis

>> No.6136144

>>6135133
It amazes me how many people forget this

>> No.6136323

>>6136050
I was always too lazy to start drawing with my shoulder, I should probably start doing that today

>> No.6136332

>>6136144
because it's 2022 and to pretend like this isnt a normie website like edgy r.ddit is lying to yourself

>> No.6136494

>>6135210
i can see this being popular

>> No.6136525

>>6135030
How do you pick which art to put on the progress image? Do you just pick your best ones from each month/year, or is there more to it? Also, how do you decide which months/years to show? If I've only been drawing for two years, should I showcase art from every single month? I feel like that would get really cluttered, but only showcasing it by year will be too little since I've only been drawing for two years and there isn't a lot to show if doing it by year.

>> No.6136541

>>6135210
i'm invested

>> No.6136547

>>6136525
Pick a piece you were once proud of in prior to improvement and a current piece that has similar subject matter to showcase how you've improved. Time frame doesn't matter, moreso recognizing how your level of skill has improved since creating something you were once proud of.

>> No.6136575

>>6135210
please dont quit art its cool. just please dont become like everyone else.

>> No.6136578

>>6136525
>How do you pick which art to put on the progress image
you make yourself look as good as possible

>> No.6136608

>>6136575
I wasn't planning on it lol, but thank you, I appreciate it.

>> No.6136800

>>6136000
Cut transparent brushes from your diet before it's too late.
Hard Round Brush, 100% opacity until you learn what you're doing.

>> No.6136816
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6136816

Before: december 2019-early 2021.
This is my journey so far

>> No.6136892

>>6135210
I'm going to have sex with this poster

>> No.6136911

As I'm getting older and better I'm losing my sovl.

>> No.6136912

>>6136816
erotic back

>> No.6137124
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6137124

Unfortunately since Jan work has kicked my ass and I have slowed down to way below where I'd like to be.

>> No.6137135

>>6135067
tbf, their current art isn't that great. there has been significant improvement, of course, but their skill level isn't as high as you may perceive it to be.

>> No.6137321 [DELETED] 

>>6136816
Great progress for 2 years. Should include how you draw an anime face now too.

>> No.6137348

>>6136051
lol you shouldn't trace known pictures as the left one

>> No.6137370

>>6135115
"chan" is from anime language
now seethe

>> No.6137373

>>6135331
Try me nigger

>> No.6137644
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6137644

Destroy me, ic.

>> No.6137657

>>6137644
>frontview/1vp hell
really sweetie, its been 5 years draw something in perspective already

>> No.6137664

>>6137644
How many hours do you draw at day anon?
The last pic don’t looks terrible but it’s been 5 years since you started maybe in other 5 you draw in a decent way.

>> No.6137665

>>6137644
2019 and 2022 could have been only 1 day apart and nobody would be able to tell.... yikes.

>> No.6137677

>>6135210
good shit anon

>> No.6137687
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6137687

im not sure

>> No.6137693
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6137693

Alright since my previous post was ignored anyway i'll post this
>>6137644
It's probably trolling but i can't see how you can stagnate like this even if you rarely draw
Because i'm the person that can literally drop drawing for a few months and then comeback only to draw couple hours a day

>> No.6137749

>>6137693
good progress has been made here, some would say that moving from your darker artstyle to anime is a mistake but I do find your recent anime girls appealing

>> No.6137789

>>6137749
Thank you
I still draw all that dark thing but for now i wanted to study anime girls a bit
While when i tried to draw cute girl i always failed miserably i went back to drawing ugly monsters or knight because again it was easier then drawing cute appealing anime girls

>> No.6137840
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6137840

Am I gonna make it?

>> No.6137853

>>6137840
only a few more year of boxes and you will be ready for your first crude anime trace... you can do it anon

>> No.6137981

>>6135437
she got lung cancer in 2017?

>> No.6137999
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6137999

Nov. 18th 2021 vs a few days ago

>> No.6138001
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6138001

>>6137999
Inb4 no hands. Also nice trips

>> No.6138004

>>6135534
Based, but is that supposed to be a rosary? More rosary studies

>> No.6138020
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6138020

i feel like i havent really grown that much or started going out of my comfort zone at all, i think pushing myself is my goal for the rest of this year

>> No.6138025

>>6137999
this shit is fucking sick, your hatching is really good

>> No.6138087

>>6138025
Thanks, anon. Hatching is really fun, definitely recommend it to anyone that's too comfortable with just a pencil

>> No.6138090

>>6135176
Draw trad, your art looks like the kind of shit faggots who's never put graphite down on paper would draw. You have no real sense of flow, you do not understand how to feel organic shapes and strokes. Digital is the mind killer.
And if you do actually draw trad then do more of it. A metric ton more.

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6138179

I don't have much work yet
>>6138020
Yeah 2020 to 2021 was looking good, then it seems like you locked yourself into something there in 2022

>> No.6138181

>>6138179
blessed thread I can collect pics here and have a laugh with my friends

>> No.6138196
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>>6138179

>> No.6138213

>>6137687
i'm not sure either

>> No.6138215

>>6135560
the form and the shading doesn't seem right to me

>> No.6138245

I haven't drawn at all this month lol

>> No.6138264
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>>6138179

RCDart is that you?

>> No.6138295

>>6138245
same

>> No.6138372

>>6138179
I like left a lot more

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6138376

>>6138245
I've drawn a little bit but only small sketches. I've mainly been working on a little game project of mine. Definitely need to start prioritizing my time and grind fundies more.

>> No.6138383
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Found an old one 2017 vs 2022

>> No.6138385
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6138385

I paint here and there, only really started to be serious about it in the last couple of years and doing tutorials and classes.

I wish I could draw animu but I keep going back to painting instead of lineart

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6138397

>>6135030
Tfw no progress

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>>6138385
I mean you can just paint anime like this
<<< mf do

>> No.6138408

>>6137840
the perfect cube is just a few years away

>> No.6138411

>>6138383
cool stuff

>> No.6138417
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6138417

coom in 2019 vs coom in 2022

>> No.6138427

>>6138417
I will save this and look at it every time I want to kill my boner so I can be more productive

>> No.6138430

>>6135150
Holy based
>>6135151
Keep at it bub
>>6135175
I like the face of January's but the rendering was improved
>>6135314
>>6135334
Much less awkward
>>6135418
Face is constructed much better except the ears are too high and the hair in the back looks flat
>>6135456
Rendering on the body is good, really good, but face and skirt are flat. The head looks weird on the neck, you should pay more attention to where it's supposed to be

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>>6138427
I haven't made enough progress sadly

>> No.6138436

>>6138417
pretty good anon. How much have you draw?

>> No.6138442

>>6138436
How long? About three years or so. Left is one of the first few digital drawings and right probably around the 300th.

>> No.6138444

>>6135030
>ITT: Hugbox general

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>>6136332
Let normalfag tourists dictate your posting habits all you like; mods still publicly ban people for denying that this is an anime website. This is a 2d imageboard on a 2d website. Simple as.

>> No.6138447

>>6136000
Pay more attention to values fren, looking muddy
>>6136019
Very cute. Try shadows
>>6137124
Are these from different years, or only a month apart? The figure part looks good, you should practice clothes and folds
>>6137644
These girls are short
>>6137687
Looks fine, but you should do something different to challenge yourself. Like color
>>6138179
June posing is better, but April looks more appealing.
>>6138385
Nice dog
>>6138397
Well you didn't draw anything that applied your skills so
>>6138417
Not very sexy.

>> No.6138448

>>6138446
>on a 2d website
Well they haven't made 3d sites yet

>> No.6138449

>>6138448
Uhhh yes they have? ngmi

>> No.6138452

>>6138448
Reddit/Twitter/TikTok are 3D sites

>> No.6138459

>>6138383
i really like this, you got a blog?

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>>6135030

>> No.6138491

>>6138459
https://twitter.com/Ocana_rcrd/status/1542017046166347781

>> No.6138508

>>6138417
I like

>> No.6138550
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6138550

had a huge gap where i barely drew to focus on school. i regret it

>> No.6138570

>>6138550
>where i barely drew to focus on school. i regret it
how did you managed?
currently in college and i dont think i can keep up the daily drawing

>> No.6138575

>>6138570
nta but I'm in cs uni but fine
Drawing for couple of hours daily
But im in russia so our unis are kinda crappy when most of time you do not that much

>> No.6138578

>>6138575
>most of time you do not that much
i'm jealous
and yeah i'm also on cs, doesnt help that my skills in coding arent that very good so im grinding both drawing and programming

>> No.6138580

>>6138570
i just drew once every month or once every two months (this was back during high school). im also in college now, and i still cant draw as much as i want to. im sacrificing my grades to draw anime women lmao

>> No.6138582

>>6137135
The rendering is pretty so-so but the "better" artists you're thinking of aren't really as better as you think they are.

Key takeaway: Art takes barely any skill but most people just never put in the mental cycles to figure it out.

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>>6138580
hey at least you're already this good
i had a huge free time back when i've dropped out of engineering, and spent my time fapping and just mindlessly browsing this site instead of drawing or learning something new and ive regret every single moment of it now i'm back on college and i'm here still learning fundies

>> No.6138585

>>6135188
>seems like you're on the same detrimental path of a coomer with a bust shot in empty space and focal points being the tits.
didn't ask for subject advice. how about critiquing the technique and giving me advice there and not the content, because the content is whatever i want it to be, regardless of your "taste". your behavior isn't going to get me to pick new art subjects

>> No.6138590

>>6138179
I like your art and there's a def improvement. I noticed that this place doesn't like muscle fetish arts no matter how good it is.

>> No.6138625
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6138625

idk how there are so many people here who have never improved.

>> No.6138631

>>6138583
You don't appreciate the amount of time you have until you end up back in school or waging, I made the mistake of playing WoW for 15 years every spare hour I had then finally starting learning to draw after I found a job kek.

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6138634

Year 2020.

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6138636

>>6138634
Year 2021

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6138640

>>6138636
Last month.

>> No.6138644

>>6138640
two years and you never developed taste. whats your iq?

>> No.6138646

>>6138640
pretty nice
do you draw every day, anon?
whats your usual sched?

>> No.6138661

>>6138590
Thank you, glad you like it! Yeah I learned to stop posting in /beg/ quite awhile ago. This thread has shown me that listening to almost anyone on this board will only set me back, at least in terms of direct critiques

>> No.6138664

>>6138550
how do i git gud like you?

>> No.6138715

>>6138646
2 hours every day at fixed time. 4 pomodoro intervals to be precise. Tracked 1441 hours of practice for all the time.

>> No.6138733

>>6138179
yikes

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>>6138715
>2 hours every day
ah shit
but i'll try
also if its alright with you can i ask what's your curriculum or the art books/videos you've used?

>> No.6138805
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6138805

first started digital drawing in late 2013 and the latest drawing done last month

>> No.6138904

>>6138741
I tried to stick to this but failed.
https://www.brendanmeachen.com/soloartist

>> No.6138911

>>6138805
From a turd to a polished turd with bad perspective

>> No.6138919

>>6138911
its pretty good, crabnigger

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6138945

>>6138904
thanks, anon
but hey at the very least, you can easily draw without a problem now and it does look good, while I for the life of me can't correctly draw a fucking head without actually tracing the damn thing

>> No.6138976

>>6138919
Perspective is indeed bad. NTA btw.

>> No.6138984
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6138984

December, March, Present

>> No.6138994

>>6138984
Your profiles got worse

>> No.6139003

>>6138994
Crab all you want the tranime’s already got me

>> No.6139006

>>6138984
i like your old stuff more....sorry

>> No.6139016

>>6138984
>pre surgery >1st jaw shave >2nd jaw shave (botched)

>> No.6139018

>>6139006
It’s okay anon, I forgive you. I’ll always love you

>> No.6139028
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6139028

>>6139016
I don’t really like the way he looks with a stronger jaw. I’d rather him have more of an incel jawline than a goblin look. Although I think it could probably project it down more. Picrel, I had tried for a happy medium, but I still don’t like how much it projects forwards. Too balanced for what I want.

>> No.6139050

>>6138715
>pomodoro
Nice, that's exactly what I want to do. What times do you use and how did you divide studying/drawing?

>> No.6139076

>>6139003
>crab
The absolute state of /ic/

>> No.6139114

>>6138984
comfort zone stagnation

>> No.6139131

>>6137687
that;s great progress
>>6137840
you've already made it, anon

>> No.6139132

>>6138911
>>6138976
nta but where is the problem with the perspective?

>> No.6139133
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6139133

>> No.6139146

>>6139133
Her face is fucked but otherwise nice

>> No.6139201

>>6138431
It's more of an aesthetic issue than skill issue I think. I have the same problem, I can make some decent stuff but it's always a visual nightmare.

>> No.6139216

>>6139132
Not any of those anons but looks like the perspective in >>6138805 is kinda flat, isometric even, lines are not converging anywhere, they are just parallel to eachother.
That said, the perspective is not "wrong" per se, you could get that effect with a camera, but it still looks flat and unnatural.

>> No.6139267
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6139267

I keep struggling with how to properly study material lately. I want to pull from more anatomical books so I can deviate more from reference images and I think I really need perspective so I dont just draw floating poses but I have a poor attention span so I don't finish a lot of things either.

>> No.6139371

>>6137981
yes, and then died like two years after

>> No.6139375

>>6135194
only about 80%, the rest of them are (mostly) decent people

>> No.6139381
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6139381

When the year gonna end i hope i would be able to attach some stuff what is not furry porn.

>> No.6139384

>>6139381
>starts serving in the army
>becomes a faggot

>> No.6139410

>>6139384
That's a commissions, yeah, people payed for that. But i understand the sentiment, after a year of following orders and leaving this shit behind you really stop caring what people think of you, and you are surely not following anyone's advice how to live your life, so probably lot's of people come out after that.

>> No.6139500

>>6139410
just joking though they look great, are you living off commissions?

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6139528

>>6139500
Thank you, yeah i living off commissions, but i have the worst work ethic, so i draw just so i can go on living and continue shitposting, i still use 2018 9,7 iPad i bought after army and i can't afford better one lmao. I mostly draw furry and i really tired of it, so i am gonna switch back to humans and gonna learn even less.

>> No.6139538

>>6135210
Now draw them fucking

>> No.6139545

>>6139267
>Fat Arcueid
Based

>> No.6139546

>>6138911
pyw

>> No.6139548

>>6138179
what the fuck lol

>> No.6139723

>>6139528
nta
but i got a question, during your army days how many hours do you draw per day or week? im trying to make my own sched to draw especially if i become busy with work

>> No.6139755
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6139755

I still don't believe how far I've gotten in 10 months

>> No.6139767
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6139767

I'm happy with it.

>> No.6139828

>>6139723
On average i was filling 2 a4 pages of random stuff a day, both sides, that's all. Just bunch of shit from imagination, mostly the same faces, sometimes from real life like guns and shit. Look up Sinix sketchbook series, that's basically what i did. I was doing it before and after army, but in the army without PC that's all i could do. I stopped after buying iPad, it's basically the same for me after getting used to it, i don't draw on paper now because it's too easy and fun and i hate getting back to screen after it, but without comparison to paper i love iPad.

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6140109

>>6135030
Here's a watercolor Progress from 2018 to last week sketch to tonight. I did base the last two on a IRL reference.

>> No.6140143

>>6139767
Good progress, keep it up

>> No.6140146

>>6139767
Good shit

>> No.6140226

>>6135456
Little too on the nose with the shuriken/kunai

>> No.6140227

>>6138805
cool lights, cool characters, cool story
I like it

>> No.6140232

>>6139381
sgporean?

>> No.6140269

>>6140109
>4 years
Oh man
Pfffffffft

>> No.6140287

>>6139767
Damn thats good. What did you study and read?

>> No.6140296
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6140296

>>6138179
First time coloring vs. fifth full render

>> No.6140299

>>6139828
damn, 2 pages a day?
fuck
an hour wouldnt really cut it, anyway thanks anon

>> No.6140316
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6140316

Used to just sketch for ideation, but finding 2d faster than 3d in many cases.

>> No.6140320

>>6136816
im rooting for you anon

>> No.6140339

>>6140316
Do you often draw religious themes? If so do you post your stuff anywhere?

>> No.6140385
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6140385

>>6140287
Youtube tutorials by marc brunet, somenormalartist, mikey and a few others, the usual stuff, i mostly focus on anime since that's what i want to draw and don't bother too much with realism, i can't draw a nose for example.
I also use A LOT of random tutorials i find on the internet such as pic related as well, i have like a thousand of them saved and slowly delete everything i personally consider i don't need anymore. In terms of reading, nothing, i know i should but so far i just read the first 50 pages of perspective made easy and that's it.

>> No.6140394

>>6140339
Not really often, but it does come up in my work sometimes as Japanese games and older anime have ruined my brain. Most of my current portfolio is 3d stuff so it probably wouldn’t interest you anyways haha.

>> No.6140403

>>6139755
gj

>> No.6140517

>>6135534
Blog now

>> No.6140551

>>6140517
kiwskii on twitter

>> No.6140598
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6140598

>>6140299
It's not like finished drawings, just a bunch of retarded doodles. Picrelated is the most detailed shit i did and i was very proud so i photographed it, 99.9% i just threw away, the date is in the filename. Mostly there was like 5 minutes a doodle, an hour is enough if you put your mind to it and focus instead of randomly doodling away while listening to music or watching YouTube (this is what i did most of the times). Start with bunch of scribbles so you are not affraid to messup the page, start with already messy ones, i used to start drawing on a already finished doodle because i was to lazy to flip the page.
>>6140232
No, Russian.

>> No.6140599

>>6140598
did you offed any ukrainians?

>> No.6140600

>>6135456
Forehead too small

>> No.6140601

>>6140599
The only ones i get access to is Asians, it was on the other side of the globe near China and North Korean border.

>> No.6140606
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6140606

2 comms i did in the same kinda format. i dont know how to draw women

>> No.6140637

>>6135151
Do you even have pen pressure enabled? Zero line weight variation, shaky lines, gross. Try harder this has to be bait. I've seen ppl who are brand new improve way quicker just by actually learning the software they're using.

>> No.6140642

>>6138430
The ears are not too high lol

>> No.6140643

>>6135176
Your stuff looks more cute as time goes by, tho I agree that gesture (and maybe perspective, so that you don't draw everything at neutral pov) would be the best to keep working at.
>I also sometimes get told to work on anatomy but when I do add anatomy knowledge like showing muscles and bones, people say that it looks uncanny with how much detail I add and it doesn't suit the bodies I draw
Yeah that's kinda rough because your style by design is meant to be very simple so you don't want the muscles and such to show, just keep the form in consideration when doing the lineart and most likely when shading.
As for the pose I think you and I have the same problem where I push gesture as I can but struggle to make the pose feel natural. It could be due to lack of life drawing and studying gesture from pictures.

>> No.6140644

>>6135418
Looking so much better, good job

>> No.6140647

>>6137124
Your line weight has improved significantly! You should try to work on facial structure especially the eyes though.

>> No.6140735

>>6140643
thanks, will do

>> No.6140796

>>6135151
Keep going over proportioning; top of the head is way too large. Try applying line weight sometime. Might help you bridge your linework and colouring.

>>6135175
Technique seems to be getting better overall. I would say look into really hammering out your facial structures. Even in the latest one the nose and eyes read somewhat flat. Ear's probably riding too high as the jaw has to meet the base of it.

>>6135176
I would say look into line weight and try referencing actual poses. Some thicker contour lines on these girls would go an incredibly long way in terms of readability. Going through some of Shueisha's Hyper Angle books, and I mean actually drawing each pose, would give you a good feel for what a pose engaged in action (or rest) feels like. Right now your poses have (mostly) sound construction but lack the cohesion of an action behind them.

Even the walking pose has a posed doll-like quality to it rather than a caught moment between strides where you would see the tip of the back foot bending as it's about to leave the ground, for example.

>>6135204
The groundwork's mostly there. Just feels like you're lacking a focus on these pieces. Something more ambitious, like a narrative or a scene.

>>6135314
Would like to see more and more involved pieces over time rather than singular girl at standard angle, but better overall for sure.

>>6135334
I like the shot in May, but could definitely work more on your forms, especially arms and hands. Some good line weight could really help drive the sense of depth in as well.

>>6135456
Definitely need to work on your proportioning.

>>6135534
Pretty cool, would be interesting to see how much further you can develop this style.

>>6138383
Very very cool, would like to see current painting level paired with the detail/scale from before.

>> No.6140815

>>6140320
Thanks anon. Means a lot to me

>> No.6140817

>>6140606
I like a lot of what you have going on; pretty robust work overall. March's lines have a slightly more gestural quality to them which lens itself better to the style imo.

>> No.6140997

>>6138984
if it was in reverse it would actually be impressive. You took interesting characters and made them 2010s tranime villains.

>> No.6141118
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6141118

>>6140997
>2010s tranime villains
This was always the goal.

>> No.6141379

>>6138264
come on it's not that bad, there's volume in there rcdart is just bad (especially at abstraction)

wonder where she's at or if her "style developed"

>> No.6141386

>>6138715
wish i had the attention span to do this
pomodoro doesn't work because i keep forgetting to do it

>> No.6141393
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6141393

my character in january vs the other day

>> No.6141470

>>6141393
Her face looks very mask like.

>> No.6141557

>>6141393
the waist is smaller than his head, and his shoulders extend too far out from the body

>> No.6141795

>>6141470
Yeah I struggle a lot with expressions, I have yet to find a resource that helps with them & how to stylize.

>>6141557
Kek, well the reference I used was male. I should keep these proportions in mind.

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>>6135030
It fluctuates imo, summers are a dry spell cause of wagie hell
Most recent thing was stylized for someone's oc

>> No.6142302

>>6138001
oh I love this

>> No.6142472
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6142472

2018? - 2022

>> No.6142640

>>6140269
i had dropped watercolors and had to reteach myself after 10 years. hence my progress isnt as impressive

>> No.6142647

Lateral moves: the thread

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6142984

Painted this cutie about 4 and a half years ago.

Newer work here:
https://twitter.com/holidaypine
https://www.instagram.com/holidaypineig/

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if anyone can see anything immediately uncanny or weird in the way i do faces please tell me because i have no fuckin idea

>> No.6143112

>>6143085
Do you feel like it's uncanny? It might be the nose being a bit small for a dude? Or perhaps the scar not meshing too well with the somewhat soft look he has. This said, VERY solid improvement, and as is, it's not uncanny, at least not to me.

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6143145

>>6135030
I feel like I'm improving
so much so that next time I'll post in a progress thread Im going to snip out the 2020 part, so that the image isn't so huge

>> No.6143172

>>6143145
now that's some true fucking progress. You may close this thread and never come back, you don't deserve to hear the opinions of the coomer troglodytes who posted here. Keep it up

>> No.6143173

>>6143112
thanks man. the scar is supposed to contrast his face, since this is a younger version of an older character- so i'm actually glad you noticed that
i'm glad that it looks good!

>> No.6143175

>>6143085
>if anyone can see anything immediately uncanny or weird in the way
It's the chin. It's too wide and the mandible is too low, move it upper

>> No.6143178

>>6143145
how do i learn how to hatch like you?

>> No.6143194

>>6143175
i knew something was off- thanks

>> No.6143202

They fact that most people here still can't recognize that they draw like shit gives me hope regarding what to avoid for actually improving in a short time in comparison to some people here who are still /beg/ after 5 years.

>> No.6143444
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6143444

Bottom row: end of November 2021, top row: end of may 2022
Feel like I’ve made progress on most fronts. hoping to improve upon the may drawings by the end of the year. I’ve started drawing a lot more from life since may, think it’s helping me with form

>> No.6143479

>>6139767
This might be the worst one in thread

>> No.6143487

>>6143202
Makes me insecure lol. I hope you're not talking about me

>> No.6143490

>>6143145
Oh you’re the one who made the armadillo at /3/ and the nice sketches, fellow cross disciplinary chad. Scene setup could use work in armadillo scene but your focus on details for characters/creatures is wild. Great stuff anon! Feels like we may cross paths one day.

>> No.6143492

is it good or bad if you don't get replies

>> No.6143494

>>6143492
Which one are you, I'll tell you

>> No.6143616

>>6143492
If you're the social media shilling one, maybe next time be more subtle about it and just use a watermark on the newer pics, or outright don't and only post your username if someone asks for it. This isn't a self publicizing thread bro, and because of that I still won't even let you know what I think about you

>> No.6143619

>>6143616
not me, it was more a general question about number of replies and less none

>> No.6143637

>>6143619
Come on bro don't be a pussy, who are you lmao.
>>6143444
If you're this, the thing is, it's literally the same study but with a different brush, you did a decent copy both times so it really doesn't make me see proper improvement. Don't you have proper examples about shit you've drawn instead of pose studies?
If you're one of the others that didn't get a reply, eh, this thread lost steam, so you need to be VERY good to get (you)s, or bad to get a few. Otherwise your improvement wasn't mind blowing in either direction, or the characters you've drawn just don't catch the eye.

>> No.6143645

>>6143616
it's easier to see what my drawings look like now compared to when i started by scrolling down one of my socials and it gives a better picture of my overall improvement than a 2 pic comparison. It's essentially like posting a long compilation pic but i don't have one of those on hand. I'm just browsing on my phone.

>> No.6143678

>>6143145
did you have the reference for how you learned to draw dragon heads or did you draw them from imagination? I'm trying to learn how to draw dragons

>> No.6143680

>>6143619
Please tell me so I can say mean things about your work. If you don't, I'll start doing it to every piece here. Their blood with be on your hands anon! Imagine all the people, anon!

>> No.6143720

>>6143492
Good and bad get replies, middle of the road doesn't, so usually neutral. When the thread gets older everything gets less replies in general.

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6143724

>>6138417

>> No.6143779

I was thinking of posting mine, but I gave up some time ago, so it's kind of pointless.

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6143863

>>6143172
Thank you, I'll still watch the thread, /ic/ is not as bad as you all make it seem it is
>>6143178
you do it a lot until you get good at it, I'm a bit self conscious about my hatching but I believe I made a good enough job on the shell of the crab in the original pic, look how the hatching tries to follow the curved form "in perspective".
alternatively if you want the hunga bunga way to hatching just draw out the shape of the shadow and fill it with vertical lines like I did in the cast shadow under the helmet of the chin man, that's how I believe I started.
also use a brush with an high minimum diameter so that the hatching is all neat and consistent
>>6143490
>Great stuff anon! Feels like we may cross paths one day.
Thank you, I hope we do
>>6143678
>did you have the reference for how you learned to draw dragon heads or did you draw them from imagination?
I'm not skilled enough to draw from imagination yet, I copied references, you may notice some of those dragons are quite different from the refs, it's not voluntary it's completely a skill issue

>> No.6143867

>>6143779
Why post stuff like this. You want a motivational speech? Just draw dude, if it's for the lack of progress, not drawing sets you back even further, you could have become a good artist by a few years and instead you'll have no skill. if you're burned out take a break and let it come back naturally, perhaps force it just a bit to get in the rhythm, if not, maybe you've never really liked the process of drawing, just the idea of the finished product. If you feel like you don't got time to draw, then rearrange your life; when I had a job that made it so I could only draw in the weekends, and at times I didn't have the strength to do even that, I left it.

>> No.6143975

>>6143145
i don't know why but that cell is absolutely fantastic

>> No.6144333

>>6138452
last i checked i dont need a vr headset to navigate them

>> No.6144439
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6144439

I try to vary the poses a bit each year

>> No.6144474

>>6143145
>no duck in 2022
sad!

>> No.6144507
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6144507

This thread came at a good time. I've just hit 1 year of learning how to draw. Started on the 1st of July 2021.So here's my big progress collage.

Have a look, tell me what you think, and rate.

>> No.6144511

>>6144439
2020 was the best and then you just went downhill. Also, how do you improve so little over 6 years?

>> No.6144706

>>6144511
it's a hobby. I'm just glad there's improvement at all.
(and 2021 is easily the best one)

>> No.6144713

>>6136323
you don't have to draw from your shoulder to clean up lines, you do use layers do you? Just erase bits.

>> No.6144742

>>6144706
Nah, after 2020 your forms just go down in quality, and it generally looks lazier. Couldn't even be bothered to properly draw the hands

>> No.6144791

>>6144742
>>6144706
>>6144511
>>6144439
I agree, 2020 was your best one. Likely because it's also the only one you drew in a convincing 3/4 view. You did a good job with the tail overlapping the forms to signify depth. You had the right idea back in 2018 as well, but in 2021 you opted for a more flat perspective with an unconvincing wrap with her tail. 2022 just looks like a mound of mush with no structure. It's good that you're pushing your comfort zone with these poses, but you're not applying construction/perspective appropriately.

>> No.6144799

>>6144507
Not bad, it's slow but steady progress, it's good that you're willing to do more complicated angles but i would suggest you focus first on your lines/drawing skills before learning how to paint, it sounds ugly but don't try to turd polish although you're getting better at it. Keep it up.

>> No.6145527
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6145527

i am failing the husbando

>> No.6145594

>>6145527
what the fuck lol

>> No.6145629

>>6143145
hey
you're the anon who helped me rec some 3d learning books, nice to see you're improving throughout the year

>> No.6145632

>>6145527
Stay away from children you dirty fujo.

>> No.6145639

>>6145527
SHOTACHAD
I KNEEL
nice progress

>> No.6145646

>>6145527
Why did it suddenly start getting lewd in 2022

>> No.6145689

>>6145527
from good to wtf

>> No.6145810

>>6145527
You're disgusting

>> No.6145846
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6145846

Similar themes. Honestly, I really like some of my stuff from 2018 to some place in 2019. Incredible soulful. But I also had a really low production rate because I actually bothered in trying to take more than two hours to finish my shit. Maybe because I'm cherry picking, I also have a lot of trash.

>> No.6145853

>>6145846
no progress, you're still mentally 15

>> No.6145855

>>6145853
I'm mentally 12, get your shit right at least.

>> No.6145859

>>6145846
>pedophilia
>soulful

>> No.6145861

>>6145859
Just go back to tumblr. There is no pedophilia there, your own happy space where you don't need to look at things you dislike.

>> No.6145863

>>6145861
>There is no pedophilia there
kek

>> No.6145867

>>6145863
I can bet money you are from UK. No one can be this retarded if not full blown anglo.

>> No.6145874

>>6145867
i'm not even him, i just think it's funny that tumblr doesn't have pedo shit
what do you care about him so much anyway?

>> No.6145875

>>6145874
I'm bored. He seems retarded enough to entertain me for a few hours. And you didn't said I was wrong.

>> No.6145878

>>6145875
>I'm bored.
You can always just draw ;)

>> No.6145888

>>6145878
I'm giving a few minutes pause between sessions.

>> No.6145890

>>6145888
gj, mate, me too

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>> No.6145911

>>6145867
you will never be Japanese

>> No.6145925

>>6145861
You have brain rot

>> No.6145941

>>6138461
saved

>> No.6145945
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6145945

someone make another thread after this one I like looking at other's progress

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6145957

five years, i haven't been seriously studying or anything but pretty depressing none the less

>> No.6145981

>>6145957
WTF bro you regressed hard
How did you come from left to right? Did someone hit you in the head?

>> No.6145989

>>6145981
Right to left, sorry for confusion. That said, pretty depressing that it could be interpreted that way.

>> No.6146010

>>6145989
Chill bro I'm just joking. It's obvious that you have made progress.
I'm pretty sure you can do better though.

>> No.6146013

>>6145527
so this is the power of being a lolishotachad..

>> No.6146022

>>6135176
Reminds me of Lefty-kun

>> No.6146435

>>6144791
thanks for the notes.
I'll try to implement your points going forward

>> No.6147360

>>6145906
Sex Nagatoro

>> No.6147891

>>6145957
if that's my progress for five years without actively drawing, i wouldnt be mad at myself

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>>6135030
Lets goooo