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Previous Thread: >>6096192

>Guidelines:
1. Don't post nudity or too revealing works.
When in doubt, post a censored copy here and link to the original off-site. This also includes pornography. If you think your image is too suggestive, please use catbox. (e.g. litterbox/catbox, imgur, etc). Note: If you're having issues viewing catbox links, use a VPN.

2. Do not post child photo references of any kind, legal or otherwise.

3. Due to the PPH (posts per hour/thread activity) of this general, please wait until the thread falls to around page 5 or 6 before making a thread. Use archived(moe) or warosu to retrieve the old threads.

4. Keep all outside drama from other generals, boards, or outside communities from /lsg/.

>General Resources
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dQGxsuqPxuu5V9vjgAWrMjnrMXcWfCFYX-d5imdnRgI/edit?usp=drivesdk

>Specific Resources
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1hVzfbqr-0UEck9ux9XBTmxUTGMZ4a-8T3DnBfOxv9iE/edit?usp=drivesdk

>Drapery to clothe your child
https://online-courses.club/anatomy-of-clothing-2019-by-ron-lemen/

>Abandoned(?) FAQ/Q&A
https://docs.google.com/document/d/15rON6jeKul-p89KF5ZYSo4eRLW1kdVaKv8CMt09UgXI/edit?usp=drivesdk

Another thread without art used from the last thread I know, I know. Please understand that most generals to get a flush rotation of who is featured and, quite literally, all of you have been featured by now. We will return to normal rotation next thread. Anyway..Deaimon episode 11 preview: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-8Y8n7s1h_s

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First

>> No.6101572

>>6101555
dang, I shoulda add speed lines to that image at least

>> No.6101580

need more wild and silly work

>> No.6101657
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>> No.6101666

>>6101657
Hey, you are shading you stuff. Nice.

>> No.6101674

>>6101666
its a repost

>> No.6101686

>>6101657
i like it anon but i'd like to see more boney land marks like the collar bones and some finger nails.

They still look cute though good job.

>> No.6101691

>>6101657
looks traced

>> No.6101722
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wip I'm working on of a girl thrusting a sword. I'm struggling with showing off the anatomy and boney landmarks, which I made apparent by making the lines super transparent. I especially had a hard time fitting the head to the body and making it look as natural as possible.

>> No.6101777

>>6101722
Very challenging pose but good job on pushing yourself. Collar bones need to be more horizontal till they almost meet the shoulder muscle. The neck is going to be hard but i'd say make the traps more engaged because that neck line looks rather too relaxed.

>> No.6102470

>>6101572
How about rewarding the few people who actually participates in this thread by using their artwork for the thread image instead.

>> No.6102476

>>6102470
this.
OP is a fag for doing it twice in a row

>> No.6102486

>>6102470
Did you not read the OP?

>> No.6102537

>>6102470
How about you go fuck yourself

>> No.6102545

>>6102470
>>6102476
Desperate because his shitty anime is getting fuck all attention on /a/ so he pushes it here. I've never seen anyone even talk about it here outside of the op. sage.
>>6102537
Make a proper thread or don't do make one at all, retard.

>> No.6102550

>>6102545
There are Deaimon threads on /a/ every week. You don't browse /a/, so don't talk about /a/.

>> No.6102560

>>6102550
Also, if English wasn't your second language, you could read the OP. I have been making these threads for the past 2 years--you all have been rotated multiple times. Not sure why you are angry from a rotation break.

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>> No.6102610

>>6102603
Not to bully you or anything but why can't you still get proportions right after all this time? Your stuff is still messy.

>> No.6102633

>>6102610
Isn't that just a cartoony style?

>> No.6102728

>>6102633
lack of foundation isn't a style even if they're going for a more western approach

>> No.6103110
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Just a thiefling bard I've in mind if I ever play 5e again. Still undecided if its a boy or a girl although I am leaning on the former than the latter.

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>>6102603
are you lost?

>> No.6103473

>>6103389
hi milyoyoyoyo

>> No.6103483
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I'm trying to transform my flockmod shitpost in to something more productive.

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>> No.6103876

>>6103578
Watch out for the perspective, I think her left leg should be higher since it's a bit back.

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OC attempt

>> No.6104049

>>6104034
It's a too generic to be a memorable OC.

>> No.6104053

>>6104034
The drawing itself is fine, but it's hard to critique because it's very simple. I think the nose is a bit mispositioned.
I also agree with the other anon, in case you intend to create a signature OC, she looks too generic

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>>6104034

>> No.6104074

>>6104049
>>6104053
Guess I should clarify that by OC I just mean she's not a copyrighted character, didn't give any consideration to using her for anything, if I do I'll develop the design. You're right the nose isn't quite right, been having some issues depicting subtle angles, appreciate the observation. This is also one of the few pieces I've done that isn't a strict copy so I am testing myself with some more simple concepts at this stage.

>> No.6104076

>>6104074
Fair enough, like I said I think it looks good overall, but it's hard to point out critiques given the simplicity. or rather I can't find anything to point out other than the nose

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Anything?

>> No.6104168

>>6104152
You've improved the way you drew backs/butts on the left one. Lower legs and feet still look pretty flat though.

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>> No.6104276

>>6104252
i always want to have sex with your characters, you draw them so well

>> No.6104293

>>6104276
me too bro

>> No.6104515

giant lolis

>> No.6104721

>>6104152
It seems out of place or too much space. Maybe don't be too afraid of pushing them closer together.

>> No.6104725

>>6104252
blog?

>> No.6104903

>>6104152
i would fix the perspective on their legs. the one on the left looks like she's on a flat surface, but the other two seem to be on a plane tilted towards the audience. the left one's arm also looks stiff and too short. hope this helps, good work so far.

>> No.6104950

>>6104725
itsukarine

>> No.6104985
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vitruvian loli

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>>6104985

>> No.6105005
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>Puts "All my OC characters are of legal age" in bio.
>Draws shota anyways.

>> No.6105127

>>6103483
Cute character, would like to see more.

>> No.6105166

>>6105005
"They're all gnomes and halflings"

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>>6101555
i-is the schizo gone already?
>>6103483
gimme that furry cunny

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>>6105188
Trying to assimilate a lineart technique I saw a dude using a few weeks ago.

>> No.6105385

https://litter.catbox.moe/p2kupl.png
What are some androgynous shota artists /lsg/ would recommend?

>> No.6105399

>>6105385
I don't think there are many, it's either a trap boy or a normal boy. Also is that your drawing?

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>>6105385
Jirou is probably what you are looking for. He does some sexy shotas that are androgynous enough but I wound't call them proper traps, really just tomgirls.

>> No.6105435

>>6105399
Yea, its mine.
>>6105423
Thanks anon, I'll check it out.

>> No.6105513 [DELETED] 

>>6105005
Good thing lines on paper have no "age"

>> No.6105584

>>6105385
who is this?

>> No.6105724

>>6105435
It's pretty good then, do you have a gallery?

>> No.6105775

https://litter.catbox.moe/6qd3ns.jpg

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work in progress until I figure out sunny lighting and backgrounds so you anons can tell me where I fucked up
I tried to draw that backwards bending on the arms that girls sometimes do with the one sitting but it's quite hard to make it look right. what do you think
>>6105775
>>6105385
the shotachads are getting stronger...

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>>6105005
>draw loli
>verbally confirm any time someone asks if those are children in the comments

>> No.6105850 [DELETED] 

>>6105845
Then get the fuck out

Pedophilia is not welcome here

>> No.6105855

>>6105845
please stay

Pedophilia is welcomed here

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>>6105845
Why yes. I draw children. How did you know?

>> No.6105986

>>6105903
So why are you posting an adult with an enlarged head?

>> No.6105990

>>6105903
Out of everything in this sketch the necklace is tipping my autism by how stiffly placed it is despite shoulders raised above 90.

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>>6105986
>

>>6105990
Damn. Thanks for pointing out the necklace, I really should fix that. Shitposting aside, I really need further practice with both shota and loli. Miura draws his to have a tad bit of mature tones here and there specially when I was looking at his earlier art of young Griffith and Guts. Usumgalu of Duranki is kind of a hermaphrodite so I am a bit of a lost on how to draw his/her body.

>> No.6106046

>>6105333
I am a fan..of tiny butts.

>> No.6106119

how do you balance out the desire to draw lewds, with the desire to get social media attention and (You)s? All I want to do is draw cunny, but at the same time, it feels like I'm wasting time.

>> No.6106124

>>6106119
By using sites where uoohhhing is okay.
That or be ultimately shameless and post your stuff anyway(in an alias).

>> No.6106134

>>6106119
Your balance is dumb. It should be the desire for drawing cunny on one end and the desire for drawing cunny on the other end.

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>>6106119
With class.

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New Loli Alice in wonderland game
Thoughts?
https://youtu.be/w4rE0WOsU3Y

>> No.6106514

>>6106504
I'd rather just play little witch nobeta

>> No.6106525

>>6106504
> Purple hair
No thanks.
Even in anime they respect her hair color.

>> No.6106533 [DELETED] 

>>6106504
Wasn't the writer of the book a literal pedophile? Idk anything Alice just makes me uncomfortable at this point

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>> No.6106641

Thread was going so well with people drawing and now you bastards are trying to ruin another thread with off topic crap again.

>> No.6106642 [DELETED] 

>>6106639
awwww

>> No.6106648

>>6106639
Disgusting little piece of shit, god I fucking hate kids

Most lolicons are literally repulsed by children, take this shit back to your deep web forums, it's not welcome here per rule 2

>> No.6106650

>>6106648
It's just a cute webm

>> No.6106652

>>6106650
Don't post that shit here groomer faggot, fictional cartoons have nothing to do with children

>> No.6106655

>>6106652
Cope

>> No.6106656

>>6106639
>THIS SHIT IS SYMBOL DRAWING
>IT DOESNT EVEN LOOK LIKE A FUCKING FLOWER
>*points at white cat* YOU ARE A PERMABEG, AND YOU ARE A NIGGER
>BACK TO LOOMIS *points down*

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>>6106648
>>6106652
How are you going to draw fictional characters if they're all derived from non fictional figures?

>> No.6106661

>>6106657
Lolis are not "derived" from anything other than the artists imagination

Lolicon never had anything to do with children, it always meant moe-sexy

>> No.6106663

>>6106661
>Lolis are not "derived" from anything other than the artists imagination
and the artist's imagination complimented a figure from what he observed from life.

>> No.6106665

>>6106661
HOLY, COPIUM!

>> No.6106666

Stop spamming off topic

>> No.6106667

>>6106663
Proof? There's literally only 3 or 4 examples of this out of thousands of artists

>> No.6106668

>>6106666
This, anyone posting kids needs to fuck off

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>>6106666
Post your work.
>>6106667
The proof is in the pudding, your loli is not a unicorn from thin air it is a bipedal mammal we recognize as a homo sapien with stylized proportions that are derived from real world figures either directly or indirectly. Observe pic related as you can see we recognize the loli as such with a head, a torso, upper and lower limbs with a condescending gesture as she consumes yet another familiar product that is derived from life known as a soft drink or beverage. It's the same reason why we also recognize stick figures from cavemen art as a person hunting with a bow and arrow or spear due to the familiar forms and shapes we recognize from life as a person.

>> No.6106676

>>6106675
Only a pedo would know how "accurate" lolis are

>> No.6106677

How did a cute webm make people so angry?

>> No.6106682

>>6106677
Children are not "cute", they are disgusting little brats

Take that shit elsewhere, not only is it literally against the rules but lolibros have no interest in children

>> No.6106683

>>6106676
Only a fool would fail to comprehend how inaccurate he is believing in tripe that stylized figures come from thin air and have absolutely nothing to do with observations from life.

>> No.6106685

>>6106683
Lolis are humanoid but they're closer to aliens than anything remotely resembling humans, much less "children"

If you think lolis look anything like kids you don't belong here

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>>6106685
So you rather believe in aliens abducting you to bumfuck nowhere to probe your butthole more so than to just admit that stylized figures are derived from life.

>> No.6106693

>>6106691
Lolis are small anime fictional characters with petite and feminine features but if that makes them "children" then I guess all petite women and twinks/femboys are too

>> No.6106710

>>6106693
Women are overgrown children. Twinks/femboys are larping as overgrown children. Your lolis despite being fictional are being described and illustrated in the same manner as a twinkish femboy is masquerading as a Woman. If the loli is negated from the fact it is derived from life why do you suggest that Twinks and femboys and petite Woman can be child like yet stylized figures cannot?

>> No.6106718

You'd think that after more than a year of this general being a thing people would have already learnt to ignore shitposters bringing in loli/pedo arguments.

>> No.6106719

>>6106718
>loli/pedo

Which shouldn't even be compared because they aren't related to begin with

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>> No.6106722

>>6106718
Get used to it as long as we have delusional insecure retards who cannot differentiate between fiction and non fiction and go apeshit at the mention of stylized figures being drawn from life we're going to have spergs trying to argue to themselves that if they continue to believe it isn't real it's ok for them to consume without feeling guilty. These arguments are more of a coping mechanism to allow them to indulge in crap like >>6106720

>> No.6106723

>>6106720
looks traced

>> No.6106724 [DELETED] 

>>6106722
>muh fiction vs reality
fictional what?

>> No.6106727

>>6106723
Why can't groomers separate fiction from non fiction? Not everyone has a 20gb stash of cp like you, these are fictional stylized cartoons

>> No.6106728

>>6106720
I don't get this, is she supposed to be dead or something?

>> No.6106729
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>>6106724
fictional figures being derived from non fiction just as with everything else, art mimics life and life mimics art unless you post on a backwater mongolian underwater seaweed farm forum.

>> No.6106730

>>6106728
no she's just sleepy after a long day of doing little girl stuff

>> No.6106731

>>6106728
Touching

>> No.6106734

>>6106729
yikes.. did you just imply lolis are based on the idea of little girls? im telling the Lolicon Community!

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>>6106718
This, I don't know why pedos think they're welcome here

>> No.6106739

>>6101657
ruined :(

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>>6106734
How unfortunate

>> No.6106744

>>6106727
Woah, woah, woah, i’m not the one who traced that drawing..you did. If anyone has a stash it’s you.

>> No.6106747

>>6106727
>20gb
getting oddly specific there anon...

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>>6105836
theres tons of mistakes but heres the most beg tier ones, the top of the chair is tilting downguards?, the ribcage in the sitting girl is flat not her chest but the ribcage ,if shes leaning why is her neck so far in the back, and her back is bending in different parts, and her shoulders blades are pushed back like if she were contracting her back muscles or something pushing her arms back instead of being relaxed/neutral, the bend in the right knee and how is the lower lkeg facing the viewwer looks off,, also the in both girls the jaw lenght is massive and theres more anatomy mistakes but these i mentioned need a fix asap

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>> No.6106760

Why is the level on /lsg/ so high compared to other generals? I do have my hypothesis, probably it comes that you draw what you actually like

>> No.6106762

>>6105836
I'd also point that if she's resting her upper body weight on her arms then her shoulders should probably be raised.
Unless her arms are relaxed and she's merely touching her knees, but it doesn't feel that way

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>>6106760
>Why is the level on /lsg/ so high
>so high

>> No.6106766

>>6106760
you mean like 2 or 3 people that are still here and the other 10 autists fighting over obvious bait 24/7 and falling for it 2491828th time every week

>> No.6106768

>>6105385
po-ju comes to my mind for that sort of thing

>> No.6106770

>>6106766
why cant everyone just stfu and draw little kids

>> No.6106772

>>6106766
>that are still here and
can you doomer posters please go already? christ

>> No.6106820

>>6106770
True

>> No.6106846

>>6106753
That's pretty good but I feel like her asscheeks shouldn't be so separated from eachother

>> No.6106854

>>6106504
wait I completely forgot about E3 for the first time in my life. It's only because I misclicked on /v/ I remembered.

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>>6106648

>> No.6106967

>>6106961
KEK

>> No.6106973

>>6106875
I think you need to define the forms more.
She sort of has no neck.
I'm not sure about the proportions, her torso feels rather big, or at least long ,maybe it's just me but I'd take a look into it.
Her left foot is mispositioned, if it's facing upwards then it should follow the angle of her leg, if you wanna draw it leaning towards the side then it should be sideways.

>> No.6106975

>>6106961
real kids are gross and ugly they can't compare to the perfection of loli/shota
also take meds

>> No.6106978

>>6106975
>no you dont get it, i want the form of a prepubescent child but without the flaws!
topkek

>> No.6106980

>>6106975
>>6106978
are you done samefagging this cheesy samey shit

>> No.6106989

>>6106961
Did the model change?

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>>6106961

>> No.6107079

>>6106875
Nice Bocchi artstyle.

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>>6106648
>>6106652
>>6106661
>>6106682
The schizo is loose again

>> No.6107192

who is the schizo? is it that mikufag guy?

>> No.6107206

>>6107192
literally who

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>>6104252
i decided to try finishing it

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>>6107192
Hard to know since he doesn't even draw. All he does is hit f5 all day long to shit the thread with his NPC tier automated replies
The way that faggot types amkes my blood boil holy shit

>> No.6107255

>>6107244
who
it's impossible to know whos talking about who when all everyone does is ambiguously insult
you're all morons

>> No.6107259

>>6107244
only like 20% of this general's posters draw anything on topic anyway

>> No.6107273

>>6107255
This guy >>6106648 >>6106652
Literally pushed two threads in a row to bump limit with his holier than thou atitude to prove he's wholesome and virtuous unlike the rest of the thread, of course, and that lolis are in fact an alien race of humanoids from outer space

>> No.6107282

I think I might just actually prefer discord drama to this moralfaggotry and idiocracy revolving lolis and real life kids. At least discord dramas are funny to watch unfold.

>> No.6107470

give drawing prompts

>> No.6107475

>>6107470
Bows and frills

>> No.6107502
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>>6107475
done

>> No.6107504

>>6107502
Cyuuuuuute~!

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>>6107282
>I think I might just actually prefer discord drama
No refunds. You said you didn't want that so you're not getting that anymore.

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slight fixes

>> No.6107590 [DELETED] 

>>6107586
lol I just saw your post on /v/

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>>6106749
that was very helpful. thanks a lot
tried to go over your points. how's it looking?
>>6106762
yeah, thanks for pointing it out. I seem to struggle with sitting poses. made she bend the torso forward and made the arms straighter to give the pose more weight. is this any better
>>6106760
lolichads need to work double for the same amount of recognition
we live in a society

>> No.6108008

>>6107992
You didn't really fix any of the issues he pointed out.

>> No.6108014

>>6108008
Many such cases!

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exquisite

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I need your expert opinions on this one specifically, is it loli looking enough or just flat woman?

>> No.6108082

>>6108079
Is that the sun baby from Teletubbies?

>> No.6108083

>>6108082
it's the uooooh face

>> No.6108088

>>6108079
>>6108080
Can I draw fan art of this clown?

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>>6108088
if you are aware of the fairly large collection I have of my clownsona then sure!

I only did the pixel art ones, I have a few more that I've done

>> No.6108098

>>6108095
it's even a Psycholonials cringe ass reference. Now I need to draw this shit.

>> No.6108103

>>6108098
a WHAT?

>> No.6108112

>>6108103
Reference.

>> No.6108125

>>6108112
wtf is psycholonials

>> No.6108132

>>6108125
Visual Novel from the same creator of Homosuck, so it does carry some of the baggage that Homosuck brings with it and is mostly about the creator own experience with being a internet sensiontion, having a shitty fanbase and some underlying themes with how the internet works in the past decade or so, with people having extreme political views on topics they can't really fully grasp because they have a really weak personality and overall to much issues being the catalyst to insane and irrational behavior. I think at least, I didn't read the stuff, I'm cheating using magick.

>> No.6108135

>>6108132
mmm magic

>> No.6108136

>>6108135
*magick
Is a lot more cold reading and intuitive thinking using predispositions related to how information flows and social aspects derivative of pre-established human behavior. The name is "magick" and not "magic" exactly because is allusive of the ideal of breaking the rules of reality and something mystical, but fundamentally is a lot more a metaphysical perspective on reality and our place on it, cheap trick but it works.

>> No.6108139

>>6108136
I mean, I think, again, I'm cheating a whole here. The ideal changes a lot depending on the person because it really perspective base.

>> No.6108147

>>6108139
sounds autistic!

>> No.6108153

>>6108147
Can I draw the fucking clown in skimp clothing or not?

>> No.6108155

>>6108153
YES!!!

go wild!
I appreciate ALL artistic depictions

>> No.6108158

how did this thread end up talking about a hussie creation? surprised that i wasn't the one who started this autism

>> No.6108164

>>6108158
Everyone know Hussie is a pedophile, it was only a question of time.

>> No.6108195

Guys, does alphonse datona has any guides or videos showing his process?

>> No.6108203

>>6108195
No, and stop asking.

>> No.6108210

>>6108203
I'll become like him and make /lsg/ proud

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>>6108195
Cant say about Datena-sama, but from White Datura I have some stuff saved.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k7uWdzbO2ic
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6A-SHsqxsdk

>> No.6108379

>>6108212
did they study under the same mentor or something? their styles look very similar

>> No.6108389

>>6108379
No, and you should definitely not watch those videos because they're two completely different people.

>> No.6108390

>>6108379
Right? I know Datena is well versed on it trough professional experience.

>> No.6108399

>see an old /ic/ loli artist get retweeted on my dashboard
>they made it
grats bro

>> No.6108435

>>6108399
Why are you guys wasting time on twitter?

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>> No.6108542

>>6108509
every time you repost this, it barely look any different.

>> No.6108559

>>6108435

I don't. I think I spend more time Youtube and Nip stream sites than anything else. When an artist I'm watching finishes their work live I just go fav it. Dashboard scrolling is for primitive people--it's just a mutual retweeted said artist.

>> No.6108563 [DELETED] 

>>6108080
>loli looking enough or just flat woman

There's a difference?

>> No.6108565

>>6108563
one's cuter

>> No.6108578 [DELETED] 

>>6108563
ones a petite woman and ones a child

>> No.6108590 [DELETED] 

>>6108563
ones a petite adult and ones a child

>> No.6108591

>>6108542
I can only work on it for around 30 minutes a week, I should finish it in 3-4 months

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>>6108591
>I should finish it in 3-4 months
jesus

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>> No.6108806

>>6108008
>>6108014
how so? is the stool still too slanted?
the back curves do seem wrong now that I see it but I also redrew the sitting girl's left leg and pushed their ears closer to their faces as suggested...

>> No.6108879

Is this sfw or nsfw? I'll play it safe for now.
https://files.catbox.moe/bl442r.jpg

>> No.6108907

>>6108879
I wish that was me in the middle

>> No.6108926

>>6108563
former = loli
latter = NAL

>> No.6108943 [DELETED] 

>>6108926
>NAL
kek

>> No.6109287

>>6108879
I tried again
https://files.catbox.moe/xsgsxo.jpg

>> No.6109378

>>6108435
I go to twitter first thing in the morning for inspiration. It's habitual like brushing my teeth.

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Why are japs abandoning this style, bros?

>> No.6109451

>>6109427
she grew up kek

>> No.6109472

>>6109427
It's been 12 years you nog, he just got bored and psyop'ed by the west

>> No.6109528

>>6109287
Looks alright, anon. Frame the drawing better so it just doesn't look a doodle in the corner or try aiming to something slightly more finished.

The way you draw I think you could make your sketchs like this look much more finished with just a bit more polishing. I will be honest, I don't think the the colors you use for the lines and shadow help because they have so little contrast and makes reading the drawing kinda hard, but the art is nice. I think her heads are too small and it gives more a petite vibe than loli but I'm biased on that front, you probably would want a second opinion on that one.

>> No.6109668

>>6109528
Thanks for the feedback, pal.
Yeah I get what you mean about it being a doodle. I'll try framing is better.
I'll try adding colors later. The way I sketch is with one tool and one color and then softly erasing to make the shadows. It's not the best, but it's what I got.
>Heads and hands too small
Yeah I guess I can see that. Any way to make the hands look more loli'ish. I initially have a problem of making manhands and so this was the best I could do for that.

>> No.6109756

>>6109427
sovl sovless

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made the floor/background a little cleaner

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>> No.6110782

>>6110702
VERY based anon!
thanks a lot, not as skimp as I expected!
unless you're a different anon

nice lighting!!

>> No.6110813

crit?
>>6107502
>>6107531
>>6107586

i had trouble with the second one but i wanted to try foreshortening.
Also tries adding more gesture so it wouldn't be still like people say they are

>> No.6110921

How do I know if I'm banned from Twitter?
Like if I draw a kid pussy am I banned? What if I make it artistic nudity and not blatantly sexual?
I mean nobody really minds that there's naked kids on renaissance paintings.

>> No.6111062

>>6110921
you mean like soft banned? there was an anon in a previous thread who said he got soft banned and twitter wouldn't list his page even if you searched for the @ directly
the big names I follow there will only post very safe stuff like panty shots or bikini, meaning posting bare cunny there probably means trouble, erotica or not

>> No.6111111

>>6110921
I wouldn’t post extreme funny until you reach 1k followers. So even if you get softbanned or search banned at least you’ll still get seen by word of mouth.

>> No.6111146

>>6111111
>111111
bazinga

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>> No.6111324

>>6111111
>*Hey, where did that 111111 felt?*
>*Not this thread*
>*Ha-ha, close, 111112*
>*See loli thread where I never go*
>...
>*111111 is advising on how to increase naked kids drawings' visibility*
Heavens have giving up on us.

>> No.6111345

>>6111304
The way you apply pressure in random areas is kinda...hm.

>> No.6111350

>>6111324
Can you at least learn how to use greentext before posting?

>> No.6111370

>>6111304
belly

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>>6107531
Okay, I tried, full body foreshortening is always such a fucking pain in the ass and depending on the pose it gets worse. I'm not the best at this but I think I can give you some leads.

First, Foreshortening is just applied perspective, if you can't or just didn't got your shit together about perspective enough, just don't, they are basically the same thing but applied in different types of drawing. I normally separate in my head two types of bases for apply foreshortening. One if occlusion, basically one thing hiding the other or changing how you perceive it's shape base on angles, as for example if you look at drawing of bobbies from above or from bellow is easy to notice how the "curve that define the shape of the breast changes depending on the angle and second is distortion, that basically changes the proportion of the applied body part depending on the angle and can be really counter intuitive, since things from far away not only get smaller they also get shorter depending exactly what angle you are looking and things from close not only get bigger but also get shorter not trough distortion alone but also occlusion. Time to time you can see some people, include me getting confused with this sort of thing making certain body parts too long or too short, especially the body trunk, I always see people fucking up the body trunk. Another thing to take in consideration is to imply form the best way you can, like how her stocking don't curve exactly as they should from this angle, you could make the curve a lot more produced and imply a lot more in an lower angle.

I highlighted some of the things I think you should distort or occlude, green is distort and orange is occlude. But is like I said, is mostly 100% applied perspective, if you can't do the boxes you can't really think how things should look in perspective and can apply proper foreshortening. I know my example is not the best but yeah, I hope it helps just a little bit.

>> No.6111622

>>6111620
thank you

>> No.6111625

>>6111622
There is a bit more to this but 2000 character limit. Just study perspective, anon, Seriously, I shill this shit far too much but it helps in all sort of things when everything clicks together.

>> No.6111628

>>6107242
Fantastic work holy shit

>> No.6111629

>>6111625
i did the basics on of it from norling and tried to make parts bigger but yeah i fucked, i'll still try to improve it

>> No.6111632

>>6111629
I noticed, I want to bring it up but 2000. You are making part bigger but forgetting they also get shorter or longer (in some cases) in the process and is the whole body combined with the idea that some things will get in front of others. Like for example the head and how it should be hiding several parts of the trapezius to the shoulders but are still visible in your version.

>> No.6111634

>>6110702
armpit uoooohhh clown loli clown loli clown loli

>> No.6111655

>>6111632
I tried to do that like making the legs smaller and hands bigger than normal but I just suck, thanks anyways.

>> No.6111668

What are some good Loli artists to study and follow?
Whenever I ask this I always get doujinshi artists. I mean they're great and all but they don't all render and have to skip stuff out to make a finished product with tons of illustrations.
What are some Loli artists that really spent time on a piece that turns out amazing to even people that don't like Loli can appreciate.

>> No.6111686

>>6111668
fizrot

>> No.6111704

>>6107586
brush setting please. and thanks

>> No.6111721

>>6111704
It's just the default coloured pencil on csp.

>> No.6111767

>>6110921
>kid pussy

Fuck off pedo

>> No.6111780

>>6111767
wrong thread?

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>>6111668
>even people that don't like Loli can appreciate
if you mean non lewds, then
>oyari ashito
>murata range
>white datura
>alke
>luimi
are all top notch and all have some pieces that can be shown to your family

>> No.6111816

>>6111350
I'm trying to start a trend

>> No.6111821

>>6111788
>oyari ashito
When I started out I couldn't understand this guys proportions.

>> No.6111832

>>6111821
His proportions are pretty fucked up.

>> No.6111836

>>6111821
I still don't know how he pulls it off but I love how his girls look

>> No.6111992

>>>/co/131296757

>> No.6112199

>>6111620
blog?

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>> No.6112789

>>6112784
delicious thighs

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thoughts?

>> No.6112803

>>6112796
Crapanese filled post written by a dumb gaijin that doesn't even know about 村八分.
Japanese did "cancel culture" first to the point of urging the person who did something shameful to commit suicide.

>> No.6112816

>>6112789
extremely important

>> No.6112835

>>6112796
Patronizing, presumably machine-translated and bad formatting (words going off the image).

Also demi isn't alternative, it's just completely vanilla normies who desperately wish they were alternative but can't stomach actually being degenerates so they made up a pseudo-degen term for being normal. It just means "I only want to have sex with someone if I'm in love with them." Wow, how unique, next you'll tell me about your physical deformity that causes you to have two arms and two legs.

>> No.6113043

>>6112796
cringe

>> No.6113047

>>6112784
We as a community, nay, as humans, as equals, as people who fight for a brighter future to all should bring Elins back as they were popular back when the game launched. Not only for us, but for all human society.

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Oppai?

>> No.6113175

>>6112784
What is the best feature of an Elin to you? Her thighs? Or maybe the ears?

>> No.6113240

>>6112796
so basically an anticancelcancel culture

>> No.6113248

My dudes, can you recommend me some specific japanese book on rendering anime style that helped you a lot?
I have been trying multiple but either they didn't give enough information as in what color/brushes they used, or the artists available were not all that appealing to me.

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>>6110782
No, it's me, I just thought you would want something more...CUTE AND FUNNY. Ha! Just thought of that, top of my head.

Anyway, another guy colored it also and it looks nooice, I just wanted to share with since you know, is your OC and all that.

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>>6113253
>That clipping on the farthest eye
>Remove the clown "nose" and the clipping will no longer be present
Anime physics, how does it work?

>> No.6113273

>>6113253
Based, got a Twitter?

>> No.6113275

>>6113273
His twitter is; https://twitter.com/Peeper201..

>> No.6113454

>>6113047
right now my efforts feel like a final swansong for the game, i hope its loud and reaching

>>6113175
it would be illegal to say anything other than thighs, but perhaps her honey

>> No.6113553

>>6113454
>but perhaps her honey
I get you.

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Which one do you like most?

>> No.6113586

>>6113585
They are all the same anon

>> No.6113587

>>6113585
The bear one, but make it sexy without showing any skin.

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Do you know what pixiv this is from?
I remember seeing it before or the 3d model there.

>> No.6113612 [DELETED] 

>>6101555
Fucking pédophile trash die
Can someone report this to the feds cuz clearly the mods doesn't give a damn

>> No.6113615

>>6113602
KYS pedo, go to the 3d board

>> No.6113634 [DELETED] 

You pieces of shit can't even argue that
>muh lines are not children so jerking off to it is okay

Because what matters is the idea those cursed lines represent
You pedo trash lot

>> No.6113649

>>6113602
Sarah makes impossible to know, I can think in literal 50 guys this could be.

>> No.6113660

>>6113173
good shit

>> No.6113665

Can you guys help?

How do Japanese people draw without doing hairy lines and longest flowing strokes?
Even beginners do it easily, I've seen them do live drawings and none do hairy lines.
How do I learn this skill?
My sketches are way too messy and I can do single strokes with some curves and not a bunch of really short ones but it's way too sloppy even then.

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>>6113665
It's called confidence and it is something that you're not going to find around turbo virgins.

>> No.6113672

>>6113665
Another Asian cocklover.

>> No.6113678

So apparently 3d models don't translate well when drawing anime.
How should I learn then?

>> No.6113683 [DELETED] 

>>6113678
Don't trace 3D models. You can use them as reference, but don't trace.

We will know, and we will be scoffing at you behind our monitors.

>> No.6113686

>>6113683
How do I reference them and make them look good?
Anime faces don't work well in 3d like the facial features.

>> No.6113722

>>6113683
https://twitter.com/naltal3/status/1531276177209405442

>> No.6113725

lol

>> No.6113751

>>6113725

>> No.6113759

>>6113722
Soulless, not a single comment on gelbooru. Will never be Range Murata

>> No.6113951

>>6113585
the birthday suit one

>> No.6114027

>>6106657
They can just be small girls. You can draw women with huge heads but that doesn't mean girls have huge heads irl.

>> No.6114032

>>6114027
and small women do exist anyway

>> No.6114289

>>6111788
where's her belly area. it looks like she's sawed in half, i can't unsee it.

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.
https://litter.catbox.moe/gznzdr.jpg

>> No.6114332

>>6114328
You need to better foreshorten that right arm, and her navel shouldn't be dead center because of the slight turn to the left. Best tell you these things now before a plethora of dick sucking replies drowns my post.

>> No.6114360

>>6114332
Cry more.

>> No.6114363

>>6111767
holy shit this delusion cunt is still skulking about? loli is pedo, faggot. make peace with that or die coping

>> No.6114411

>>6114328
I didn't know this thread had artists this good

>> No.6114462

>>6114411
Now that you know you'll stick around, right? Or will you vanish but reappear next thread to say the same thing?

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>> No.6114509

Boop

>> No.6114510

>>6113678
I couple months ago I believed in the 3D model meme to bypass the frustration of learning the human figure but it's cope and the antidote was to literally just draw more. And I mean really draw a lot.

>> No.6114512

>>6114510
blehhh I need my cofeve
>>6113665
this >>6113668

>> No.6114529

>>6113678
https://twitter.com/_smiyao/status/1537700336554901504

>> No.6114532

>>6114529
He still drew the name beforehand, even if it's a stick figure. The 3D serves as proof of insurance.

>> No.6114566

>>6114468
uohhhhhhhhhhhh

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>>6114566

>> No.6114672

>>6114510
What do you mean draw a lot?
How do you suddenly just aquire knowledge if you draw the same wrong thing over and over?
How do you know how to do it right.

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>>6114672
>What do you mean draw a lot?
just draw
>How do you suddenly just aquire knowledge if you draw the same wrong thing over and over?
copy someone better than you
>How do you know how to do it right.
trace

Draw, copy, trace. These 3 elements will grow you.

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How do I paint like my grandgrandchad?

>> No.6114737

>>6114468
Pleasing forms

>> No.6114740

>>6114468
Pose is so fucking overdone in pedo art world

>> No.6114742

>>6111620
Based redline anon

>> No.6114794

>>6114683
So if I can't find the head position I want I'm just fucked?

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>> No.6114818

>>6114740
who cares nigga its hot

>> No.6114828

>>6114818
>loli
>hot
You're gross

>> No.6114829

>>6114794
Use a bust 3D model if you have to. Otherwise, practice more!

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>>6114797

>> No.6114919

>>6114740
>Overdone in the art world
ftfy
Remember the jacko-whateverthefuck pose challenge? People are still pumping that pose out.

>> No.6114966

Today I ate a youngussy, no fbi reporterino pls

>> No.6115002

>>6101555
kys

>> No.6115034

>>6101555
kys (kiss young shotas)

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>>6101555

>> No.6115049

>>6115037
Abusing overlay, gross

>> No.6115053

>>6115049
I like to use them, but that's because I'm coming from when DA had a lot of these

>> No.6115063

>>6115002
she's keeping that smile, yo

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>> No.6115122

>>6115119
best in the thread

>> No.6115124

>>6115122
Thank you but I'm far from Vilppu-san

>> No.6115132

>>6115124
He was being sarcastic pedo begtard and you'll never be like Vilppu

>> No.6115134

>>6115132
No I wasn't. Don't speak for me.

>> No.6115137

>>6115134
Then you're clearly blind or samefagging

>> No.6115159

>>6115137
Not really blind I just can see his passion pour into the sketch. I do admit that he is a beginner butt (and it's a small one) because he is at said stage I can feel the enthusiasm he has for Vilppu. In a short amount of time, he'll surpass pywanon and then you and then 2k.

>> No.6115176

>>6115159
He will just stagnate like everyone who finds /ic/

>> No.6115189

>>6115176
hopefully not

>> No.6115191
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6115191

>>6115132
Rendering is the soul killer

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>> No.6115398

>>6115191
Is this meant to a be a joke how the left is paid for it while the right isn't?

>> No.6115472

>>6115382
you just know.

>> No.6115512

>>6115382
A dog fucker

>> No.6115767

June Loli Art Prompt?

>> No.6115801

>>6115382
dog penis

>> No.6115937
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6115937

>sees legit talented /lsg/ content material
>sees lolicons who actually wants to improve
>scrolls down a bit more.

>sees seething degens sjw twitter soldiers crying for hours
>sees seething degens lolicons defending for hours ( the type that doesnt draw but still criticize)
>sees coping begs trying their best to roast work posters out of insecurity for hours

sometimes it gives me a chuckle when i visits here
never change /lsg/. never change.

>> No.6115965

btw does anyone save/keep track of 2k's works that he specifically posted here? pls give mega or archive if u have do thanks

>> No.6116128

>>6115937
?
I see none of that in this thread.

>> No.6116199

>>6115937
nah the posts are from the same people. I did post a drawing here and then bash myself like a sjw twittard

>> No.6116204

>>6116199
Probably why I didn't respond to a single shitpost this thread--it felt inorganic from the jump.

>> No.6116215

>>6113602
I know but I'm not going to tell you

>> No.6116218

new thread >>6116217

>> No.6118152

>>6114613
Very funny now go back to twitter

>> No.6118169

>>6118152
glad you laughed