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Previous Thread:>>6062007

>Rules:
1. Don't post nudity or too revealing works.
When in doubt, post a censored copy here and link to the original off-site (e.g. litterbox/catbox, imgur, etc). Note: If you're having issues viewing catbox links, use a VPN.

2. **No Porn**.
No, not the retarded "anything with a body in it is porn" standard or "I see her underwear, MODSSS!!!" Use common sense.

3. Do not post sexualized child photo references. In fact, don't post pictures of children at all.

4. Due to the PPH (posts per hour/thread activity) of this general, please wait until the thread falls to around page 5 or 6 before making a thread. Use archived(moe) or warosu to retrieve the old threads.

>General Resources
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dQGxsuqPxuu5V9vjgAWrMjnrMXcWfCFYX-d5imdnRgI/edit?usp=drivesdk

>Specific Resources
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1hVzfbqr-0UEck9ux9XBTmxUTGMZ4a-8T3DnBfOxv9iE/edit?usp=drivesdk

>Drapery to clothe your child
https://online-courses.club/anatomy-of-clothing-2019-by-ron-lemen/

>Abandoned(?) FAQ/Q&A
https://docs.google.com/document/d/15rON6jeKul-p89KF5ZYSo4eRLW1kdVaKv8CMt09UgXI/edit?usp=drivesdk

A new Monday means a new week which means a new Deaimon episode, you bastids!

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>>6073740

>> No.6073806
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>> No.6073865

>>6073806
Absolutely beautiful work.
Love the outfit and the pose.
Perspective of the toes isnt quite right.

>> No.6073891

>/SALT/ is self destructing because of me
lolichads we won the war

>> No.6073968

>>6073806
I had to bump my monitor mode just to make out what's going on.

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>> No.6073980

>>6073806
Is she wearing underwear or not?

>> No.6074273

>>6073806
Can't see shit capn't

>> No.6074279

>>6074273
You're gay, I hope you know this.

>> No.6074298

>>6073972
holy cute

>> No.6074550

Big lolis

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>>6073806

>> No.6074655

>>6073806
blog now

>> No.6074663

>>6073806
Beautiful but you should darken the lines or something

>> No.6074708

How are those OCs coming along? Surely you have a whole cast by now.

>> No.6075018

/lsg/ is dead. Let's draw lolis

>> No.6075145
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>>6073740
What do you guys think?

>> No.6075153

>>6075145
better than anything telolista makes

>> No.6075202

>>6075145
yeah what >>6075153 said

>> No.6075373

eyo sauce on OP's image?

>> No.6075430

>>6075145
>>6060839

>> No.6075434

>>6075430
Nigga it's called loli AND shota general.

>> No.6075527

>>6075434
legacy name. shotafags have been exiled and are no longer welcome here.
>>6075018
You first.

>> No.6075529

>>6073806
>>6075527

>> No.6075531

>>6075529
I'll get to drawing right away. Great work to start the thread with.

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>>6075527
fuck off " posting my work "fag you can't draw for shit and seethe over people better than you

>> No.6075541

>>6075145
very cute and ero
maru is a great shota and can't wait for season 2 of made in abyss this year

>> No.6075543

>>6075540
pls not my wife, thank you.

>> No.6075546

>>6075543
>your wife
i bet you don't produce her in game or grind fans

>> No.6075548

>>6075540
>you can't draw for shit
And you don't draw at all. So I don't really care.
>seethe over people better than you
nope. Everyone's works in these threads are valuable. Even the ones done by people worse than me. What's worthless is people who don't draw.

>> No.6075551

>>6075546

>not aware of my youtube channel
your loss

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posting my work.

>> No.6075629

>>6075434
ok we will change the name of this general to /loli/

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>>6075737

>> No.6075755

>6075629
sounds like their superior precense threaten you considering they are the only ones with good art in the history of this general

>> No.6075757

>6075755
cope, 2k mogs the fuck out of every shotaFAG

>> No.6075761

>6075757
do you only participate in these threads to post your godawful scribbles and to suck 2k's dick
no wonder nobody posts here anymore compared to when the generals started

>> No.6075766

>6075761
i knew you were the guy who seethes over being mogged by 2k.
why dont you just ask him for critique? maybe he can give you some tips

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>>6075757
>2k mogs the fuck out of every shotaFAG
kek look at this newfag invader

>> No.6075778

>>6075776
BTFO
T
F
O

>> No.6075781

>6075776
>mediocre shota image
i thought you were going to post that lee retard or something (2k mogs even them)

>> No.6075782

Shota is gaey

Finna make a Lolita General to get that out of there, and to carry the Western Lolita. Too many people abandoning the West

>> No.6075783

>>6075781
Forget about 2k for a second, what about you? Why aren't you mogging 2k right now?

>> No.6075784

>>6075783
2k is my mentor.

>> No.6075787

>>6075784
I'm not seeing the evidence through the work you post here though.

>> No.6075789

>>6075787
you think that shota image is an example of good work so its probably just your eyes.

>> No.6075791

>>6075789
not that anon you were talking to

>> No.6075792

>>6075791
oh. nevermind then. what should I draw next?

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>>6075798
KEK

>> No.6075801

>>6075798
i laughed. now draw a loli and post it to this thread...

>> No.6075802

>>6075798
hey for some reason his drawing scaled down like that on the paper doesn't look half bad

>> No.6075803

>>6075784
no wonder you suck
when there's a sea of trillions of japanese artist's you pick some chicken scratch attention whore (from 4chan nevertheless)

>> No.6075804

>>6075792
Itsuka Yukihira

>> No.6075806

>>6075803
i cant speak moon

>> No.6075808

>>6075806
just put moon on your twitter bio and use google translate.

>> No.6075825

how bad is it?
posting my work.

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>>6075825
im retarded

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>>6073741
can't really figure out the arm in this one

>> No.6075829

>>6075827
adorable face!

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>>6073741
also hair, post fixes
really wished I could push this one forward but I'm too shit

>> No.6075877

>>6075835
What would be the next step in pushing it forward? painting?

>> No.6075882

>>6075877
try greyscale first so you don't mess up values

>> No.6075889

>>6075877
>>6075882
yeah I'm studying and doing copies of the styles I want to paint like but I still can't apply it to my own drawings
or maybe my last attempt simply left me too frustrated to try again

>> No.6075890

>>6075889
you should try again. you won't be able to figure it out if you don't even try. you will get it soon i believe in you.

>> No.6075900

>>6075890
thanks anon. I'm in dire need of a 'fun with a brush' book but my new year's resolution was that I was gonna learn how to render gud so I better get those master studies going

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test
posting my work.

>> No.6075950

>>6075939
Ironically your figures are looking more like a hag with every new post.

>> No.6075964

>>6075950
You're gonna have to explain how, chief.

>> No.6075978

>no explanation

>> No.6075982

>>6075939
she has a hunched look. The rib cage should lean backward and the hips should lean forward. The line where her ribcage ends is much too low. Her neck is too thick. Cleaner linework would be more appealing and giver her a more youthful look. her stomach looks to be sagging. Arms are too long. Hands are scary looking.

>> No.6075983

>>6075835
What program and brush are you using? Lines look nice and soft.

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>>6075982
how is it now?
>Cleaner linework would be more appealing and giver her a more youthful look
>Hands are scary looking.
my skill level is an issue.

>> No.6076035

>>6076005
One moment. I'll do a quick redraw to show you what I mean.

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>>6076005
Notice how my lines, for the most part, are single solid curves while yours are made of a bunch of small "hairy" lines? Practice single large strokes that utilize your entire arm rather than your wrist.

Notice how mine has a ribcage that is angled backward and pelvis that points forward. Yours seems flat in comparison. Its partial a gesture issue along with an anatomy issue. Yours seems stiff because it doesn't follow the natural flows of the spine and is lacking. I recommend grinding out gestures drawings as practice and reading Michael Hamptons figure drawing book for help on gesture and anatomy.

do a long study on the rhyme of the hand and then draw a 1000 hands. Don't take too long on them. maybe a minute each. Do that until your a pro.

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>> No.6076055

>>6076051
Amazing work, dude.

>> No.6076061

>>6075628
gw trying out different perspectives

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>>6076048
First of all, thank you for taking the time out of your day to explain this to me in detail. I'm including a sketch to check that I understand the general lesson of the torso tilt correctly.
The advice on the hands will come in useful. I wasn't aware of how many I had to draw to get good at them before.
I will have to mkae sure to completely erase lines every time I make a mistake now so that the lines look nicer. Thanks again.

>> No.6076091

>>6076081
>he's fixing his lines now

based, though she looks like an amputee

>> No.6076094

i don't know what artist to study.
I like a bunch like honnryou, kantoku, ke-ta, mignon, blade, muk, Yabuki Kentarou and others.
I can't pick and a bunch just clash with another.

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>>6076081
No problem. Cute. I think you improved it. It will take a while of intentional practice to get it down. You'd be surprised by the curves of the spine and how it affects the ribs, head, and pelvis, adding to the appeal of the character.

>> No.6076121

>>6076065
best thing for the past two threads lmao

>> No.6076125

>>6064602 I only just understand what you meant with this, splooge

>> No.6076138

>>6075983
csp but the brush is some mutant shit I made playing with the options of an already custom brush I got somewhere
it's nothing too special really, just a painting brush with pressure bound thickness and around 70% opacity

>> No.6076163

>>6076121
okay drip

>> No.6076191

>>6076138
Not him but can you link it?

>> No.6076212

>>6076191
I can't right now but will try to export it when I get home

>> No.6076237

>>6073806
looks like you traced an actual a questionable pic

>> No.6076287

>>6075628
Gj anon

>> No.6076289

>>6076237
I'm almost sure it's a repost but with the clothes

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>>6076048
blog? i want to (badly) copy more of your stuff

>> No.6076863

>>6076629
soul

>> No.6076978

>>6076094
Out of all those only kantoku and yabuki kentarou are worth learning from

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>>6076978
I love kantoku’s art

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>>6075776
I still lurk, but over time this thread went from 'loli & shota general' to 'loli & schizo shitposting'.
Mostly just keep to Twitter now.

>> No.6077105

>>6077093
You may find yourself more at home here: >>6060839

>> No.6077168

>>6076780
PettanBerry on Pixiv. I haven't been active for years and don't plan on posting any more art on that account, but if you'd like to see some of my past works, they are there.

I might pop up again with another name though. Who knows. Sadly, I'm not in a good situation to be drawing loli at the moment.

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>> No.6077306

>>6077305
Cute Miyu

>> No.6077309

>>6077305
epic work

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I think I should learn how to start with an underdrawing
posting my work.

>> No.6077351

>>6077346
I think you should learn how to start with flipping the drawing.

>> No.6077356

>>6077351
Oh, I see what you mean. I will have to remember that next time

>> No.6077358

>>6076051
>>6076065
>>6077305
looks great man

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>>6077356
What? You're not going to be a smart ass and retort in a smart alecky and rude manner? Alright who have you been with lately who the fuck is he.

>> No.6077364

>>6077362
Oh, didn't realise who I was replying to.
Ignoring this.

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>> No.6077391

>>6077362
>Alright who have you been with lately who the fuck is he.
Miku, you're starting to induce schizophrenia on yourself.

>> No.6077394

>>6077305
mogs everyone

>> No.6077396

>>6077394
okay drip

>> No.6077403

>>6077305
Blog?

>> No.6077405

>>6077403
https://twitter.com/iamnotdrip

>> No.6077433

>>6077405
Thanks for posting my blog. Admittedly, it isn't much.

>> No.6077441

>>6077433
>Thanks
Suuuure you're thanking me. Sure.

>> No.6077448

draw lolis more and play cybersleuth less.

>> No.6077527

>>6077448
you first drip

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how's this
posting my work.

>> No.6077578

>>6077527
after you Randakora

>> No.6077592

>>6077547
>how's this
it's not Itsuka

>> No.6077614

>>6077578
meds

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>>6077614

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Hello it's me drip the guy who's living rent free in this >>6077527 anon's head for god knows what reason. Kindly know that any post that doesn't come attached with my work is his attempt at falseflagging me. That being said, happy drawing everyone.

>> No.6077644

>>6077632
Drip, are you @drippeey too? Or not related?

>> No.6077654

>>6077632
That's another anon believe it or not. I don't see how it's rent free if someone asks for your blog and you just ignore it but magically show up when someone drops it.

>> No.6077674

>>6077619
Nakadashi lovey dovey handholding sex with illya Chan and kissing deeply after climax

>> No.6077695

>>6077674
I would pass out with just handholding

>> No.6077716

>>6077632
Hi drip nice to see your work in this thread, that bitter anon pretends to be the artists who draw to make people hate them, they did it to me already.
I like the way you drew the belly, makes me want to grab it

>> No.6077727

>>6077716
How is anyone pretending to be him? He posted his own work.

>> No.6077734

>>6077727

>Kindly know that any post that doesn't come attached with my work is his attempt at falseflagging me.

>> No.6077735

>>6077734
That is not the definition of pretending to be someone, ESLkun.

>> No.6077738

>>6077735
cope, you got exposed and you're doing damage control right now. just quit being a pest and draw

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Cunny!
Creampies!
Cute teddy panties!

>> No.6077745

>>6077738
Are we reading the same thread? Let me go back for you
>>6076051
>>6076065
he posts
>>6076121
anon posts a 'tall order' post and anon
>>6076163
gets it' right that it indeed is the artist, drip
>>6077305
he posts again
>>6077394
anon makes yet another 'tall order' post
>>6077396
anon says, in a typical passing commentary way, that it indeed is the artist even if it isn't that specific anon it still is the artist anyway
>>6077403
anon asks for blog
>>6077405
anon provides blog
>>6077632
the same OG artist comes in and, for whatever reason, states that they're being false flagged. Nothing of the sort happened as I laid it out for you in sequential order.


And then there is (you) coming in here saying that someone is "pretending" to be him. We all know that means by posting his work without their will...except that didn't happen.

>> No.6077752

>>6077716
dumb ESL moment

>> No.6077764

>>6077752

Birds of a feather I guess.

>> No.6077771

>>6077745
You are putting too much into replying to a shitposter. Go draw.

>> No.6077775

>>6077774
it was worse when vodkuh etc were around

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>> No.6078084

>>6078083
i no speak third worlderino

>> No.6078085

>>6078084
a pictures worth a thousand palabras

>> No.6078088

>>6078083
Me on the center right

>> No.6078152

>>6078083
who is friend (a)

>> No.6078163

>>6078152
Nobody really. It's to evoke implied jealously.

>> No.6078200

>>6078163
I'm not sure I get it.

>> No.6078287

>>6078200
It's okay. I'd never leave Retardista for someone else.

>> No.6078299

how did fizrot get so good? he doesn't use any technique ive seen before

>> No.6078306

>>6078299
3d cheating

>> No.6078309

>>6078306
does everyone good use CG cheating? I thought that was just a meme

>> No.6078311

>>6078309
It's not really cheating, you still have to know what you're doing to pull off using it without it looking like ass. I know one person who uses it in everything they make and they're popular.

>> No.6078316

>>6078311
I think i will give CG a try. If it looks worse than my usual work then I wont bother further. Thanks

>> No.6078337

>>6078299
Where is the rest of her pelvis kek

>> No.6078340

>>6078337
redline it.

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>>6073741
>26. Looking out window

>> No.6078645

>>6078352
The perspective is a bit off but at least you drew a complete background.

>> No.6078688

>>6075145
Do Regu next

>> No.6078709
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Hello wizard chefs!

>> No.6078716

>>6078709
Did you make this? It actually looks like a screenshot.

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show yourself

>> No.6078722

>>6078717
Amazing job by the artist. He conserved the original design

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>>6078716
I'm looking 4 mint leaves.

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my first drawing post here, been mostly copying for practice but tried an original drawing for once. didn't do clothes because I've not really gotten that far yet and it'd ruin the whole thing

>> No.6078787

>>6078785
Is there a particular style you want to get into? Maybe some artist that you like.
I think the anathomy is kinda wonky on the back, her ass is very thick considering her narrow waist, but I don't know if it's a stylistic choice or not, which is why I'm asking if there's a style in particular you wanna chase, or some pictures of how you'd want to draw

>> No.6078788

>>6078787
my main inspiration is luicent, some others being kantoku and fkey. yeah I struggled a fair with depicting a subtle twist of her waist, made her butt look too much like a profile view so it looks a bit exaggerated

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>>6078788
ass is tough to draw but I think you did a a good job with it, now the mid section of the torso looks weird. this is how I'd do it

>> No.6078825

>>6078822
ty I appreciate it, that's pretty helpful

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>>6078825
you're welcome
just remember that the abdomen is basically a single muscle with only two tension points: at the pelvis and at the ribcage (where it's attached to). which means that every point in between those gets pushed out by the viscera and never pushed in, unless under stress

>> No.6078846

>>6078833
ah ok that's interesting, I'll be keeping that in mind

>> No.6078956

>>6076629
Either you do great faces and expressions, or you got lucky this once. Got a portfolio somewhere?

>> No.6079002

>>6078717
The character is popular among koreans who never visit 4chan ever. Artists who visit 4chan do not go into the aimless drawing board. They usually go to a topic board's drawthread.

>> No.6079035

>>6078645
>The perspective is a bit off
>a bit
it is COMPLETELY off

>> No.6079041

>>6079035
it's not that bad. Can you redline it?

>> No.6079053
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6079053

I wanted to have a go at drawing loli's since it interested me but it's clear I have no idea how to draw loli's LMAO. It was a good attempt nonetheless, so here you guys, enjoy my go at a """loli""".

>> No.6079056

>>6079053
trying is what matters

>> No.6079057

>>6079053
I really like the one on the right but her head turning in the helmet looks awkward. I know it's supposed to be rigid because it's a spacesuit or something, but it still looks weird. Others look too old to be loli to me. Still cute, though. Persevere!

>> No.6079059

>>6079053
The one on the right is very cute

>> No.6079093
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6079093

i want to color but i'll mess it up

>> No.6079096

>>6079093
looks precious, best in the thread

>> No.6079098

>>6079096
>best in the thread
lol

>> No.6079104

>>6079098
The only thing ANYWHERE close ITT is >>6075835. /lsg/ doesn't have great artists, at least ones that actually post, but those two drawings are genuinely cute.

>> No.6079107

>>6079098
What's wrong with it?

>> No.6079114

>>6079107
not him (I'm >>6079096 >>6079104) but the pose is pretty stiff, her left arm looks short instead of foreshortened (clothing folds can function as cross-contours to help sell the foreshortening), and it doesn't look like she and the box exist in the same space- her hand looks like it's sort of floating next to the box rather than holding it. That's because there's neither a sense of tension in/line of force through her arms not wrapping around the corner with her fingers. Granted it reminds me of CLAMP ultracute lolis and those issues are very CLAMPlike too.

>> No.6079116

>>6079104
>at least ones that actually post
Who doesn't post that is great?

>> No.6079117

>>6079116
Dunno, they don't post. I only say that because I know people hide their powerlevels in drawthreads all over the board and most drawfags at least occasionally come to /ic/.

>> No.6079119

>>6075827
Holy thats cute! Blog?

>> No.6079132
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6079132

>>6079114
>>6079114
thanks, i kinda struggled with the clothes, and with it being puffy i wasn't too sure how to freshorten properly, hopefully this is better

>> No.6079134

>>6076212
>>6076138
Can you please link your brush, here's some I bought

https://files.catbox.moe/k6f72k.abr

>> No.6079259

>>6078717
He got the idea from mossa who is (not) korean

>> No.6079279

>> No.6079282

>>6079134
those are noise and texture brushes you can make yourself lol

>> No.6079291
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6079291

>> No.6079297

>>6079291
has big DONT WATCH AN ANIME CALLED BOKU energy

>> No.6079299

>keeping the antis stunlocked in a bait thread seems to have significantly reduced the crabbing and falsflagging in here a ton
lolichads we just can't stop winning

>> No.6079303

>>6079279
Do all girls have pussy lips?
It's pretty gross, i thought those that you could see outside, just didn't have them

>> No.6079368

>>6075835
Thank you for your sexy girls

>> No.6079397

>>6079119
no blog as of now. I'm trying to get some finished pieces done before making a blog but I'm too lost still when it comes to rendering
>>6079134
sorry, I forgot about it the other day. again, nothing too special about it, I just use it at 70-80% opacity for the linework
https://litter.catbox.moe/e2ecun.zip
>>6079368
thanks man, I'll try to get another one going later today

>> No.6079399

>>6079397
THANK YOU SO MUCH

>> No.6079471
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6079471

>> No.6079479

>>6079471
left leg is broken

>> No.6079483

>>6079479
her left

>> No.6079495

>>6079291
He kept going and counting the panty shots 5 times

>> No.6079497

>>6079471
Is the color choice ok?

>> No.6079501

>>6079471
>>6079479
We got too cocky lolichads...

>> No.6079513

>>6079479
You do know kids have very flexible legs, right?

>> No.6079516

>>6079513
cope

>> No.6079518

>>6079479
I can do that pose extremely easily. Have you tried not being overweight?

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6079522

>>6079518

>> No.6079528

>>6079471
looks traced

>> No.6079549

>>6079528
it only looks traced to people who don't draw... like you

>> No.6079552

>>6079549
like me?

>> No.6079714

>>6079495
Probably don't need to tell people here that just like with gays, the people who bitch the loudest are people in the closet who mistakenly think it'll make them look less, rather than more, suspicious. I mean, these headcases show themselves even when they see child characters in a completely nonsexual context. They can't even look at a child without seeing a sex object because they're so repressed.

>> No.6079783

>>6079471
Cute

>> No.6079880
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6079880

GREEGINS nigga

>> No.6079906

>>6079880
beautiful work anon
your facial expressions are the fucking best

>> No.6079913

>>6079471
give blog

>> No.6079922

>>6079880
redo it but she's pissing herself

>> No.6079923

>>6079906
>best
lol

>> No.6079931

>>6079923
better than anything you’ve ever posted

>> No.6079936

>>6079931
lmao

>> No.6079938

>>6079936
is it funny because you don't draw?

>> No.6079940

>>6079906
thx
>>6079922
good idea

>> No.6079942

>>6079880
Now I know why her face bothered me!
Since her mouth is crocked to the side, her nose should slightly follow in line. The nose looks cemented to the face at the moment.

>> No.6079947
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6079947

>>6079471
Jannies, do your job and purge this shit off the board.

>> No.6079960

>>6079947
why would they? she's clothed

>> No.6080007

Hey, that's a pretty good drawing.

>> No.6080013

>>6080007
No it's a pretty shit drawing.

>> No.6080020

>>6080007
The cat with a gun? Yeah, I actually thought it was a photo at first but then I realised cats don't have human hands and aren't allowed to have guns.

>> No.6080027

>>6080013
Don't be so hard on yourself, I think it's good but you'll do better next time (-:

>> No.6080361

>>6079880
face still looks too old.

>> No.6080436
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6080436

>>6080361
>>6079880
adding to my comment here:
The biggest problem is the shape of the jaw you've drawn here. lg faces don't look like shovels, especially turned like that, you shoud be showing the cheek on one side, and the jaw shape on the other side changes to follow. Roundness = cuteness.
The chin is too far too the right.
I think the reason you drew it that way is because of the mouth expression. You have to remember that it would be the skin on the face that moves, not the bones.

If you look at the shitty redline I provided, you can see that just fixing the jawline would make the face look much better.

I hope you fix this problem because you had it the last time you posted and people gave you advice then which you seem to have completely ignored.

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6080447

>>6073741
badasss

>> No.6080450

>>6080447
a msgk-like expression would look great on her, still pretty good

>> No.6080545
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6080545

Fixed this. I drew the mouth as a placeholder, but I liked it so I kept it.

>> No.6080578

>>6079880
She unironically looks like she has Down syndrome.

>> No.6080588

>>6077093
your art is amazing, very cute stuff

>> No.6080720

>>6079880
Stop putting nostrils onto little kids, its disgusting. Fucking westoid.

>> No.6080723

>>6079880
This is appalling lmao

>> No.6080726

>>6080723
SBTAYCED

>> No.6080734

>>6080726
still better than anything you could ever draw ?

>> No.6080777

>>6080720
Retard

>> No.6080792

>>6080777
be nice

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6080805

>>6080792
only when they acknowledge that japs draw the nostrils all the time.
modern anime brainrot weebs are cancer

>> No.6080816

>>6080805
that drawing is beautiful
the other drawing is ugly, w*sterners don't have the ability to make realism appealing either, simple as.

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6080821

elinelinelinelinelinelinelinelin

>> No.6080822

>>6080821
It's only because of you I recently found out Tera is finally going to pull the plug on their servers.

>> No.6080823

>>6080822
join me on menmas, its fun

>> No.6080825

>>6080821
put it behind a catbox or some shit retard.

>> No.6080826
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6080826

>>6080822
play BDO and play a shai instead
>>6080821
sexy elin thighs

>> No.6080829

>>6080816
it only has a few problems. I don't think that artist is much interested in drawing lolis though

>> No.6080837

>>6080826
Idk I tried Black Desert for a few minutes and wasn't as interested as Tera.
>>6080823
Is this some standalone thing? I didn't know this existed.

>> No.6080843

>>6080837
its a private server, so essentially yes. everythings tweaked to be a lot more accessible and fairly f2p

>> No.6080844

>gaming
yikes lolibros

>> No.6080847

>>6080844
gaming expands your visual library and design sense more than anime.

>> No.6080857

>>6080847
>watching anime
how much time it costs to just open booru and checking the first page for many different art coming from many different artists compared to playing vidyas? inb4 you tell me you only play vidyas for 5 minutes to check the visuals then jump to another vidya

>> No.6080864

>>6080857
>muh saved time
Artists with the best designs dont exclusively monkeycopy 2D designs. They get inspiration from books, videos games (go back to /v/ btw), real life and anime/cartoons.

Put some effort into your work, fag westoid

>> No.6080866

>>6080864
Oh, I am putting effort into my work. But are you?

>> No.6080867

>>6080857

If you don't play gaymes or watch anime then what are you even doing? It's not just looking at whatever flavor is trending and never actually engaging with the stuff you see for likes and follows.

>> No.6080869

>>6080866
You're not, or you would have attached it with your post.

>> No.6080871

>>6080867
Creating art
>>6080869
>>6079471

>> No.6080872

>>6080871
Well this just shows exactly what I mean. The technical skills are decent but there's not much more thats interesting beyond that.
Good art isn't just technical skills.
Put some effort into the rest of your art.

>> No.6080876

>>6080871

For whom? You're in an industry to please people for profit. If you want to please yourself just get into fine art.

>> No.6080878

>>6080876
I live off commissions anon

>> No.6080879

>>6080878
this?>>6079471

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6080881

>>6080879
I don't do loli commissions, those are for fun

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6080882

>>6080816
Westerners have the ability, but the culture of worshipping ugliness and meta/irony stunts them from developing it
It's amazing that even mainland china can foster good bishoujo/loli artists but not the contemporary west

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6080886

>>6080882
alke is pretty good

>> No.6080887

>>6080881
can i see that blue one on the top left

>> No.6080888

>>6080886
that guy is more disney-like rather than semi-realism

>> No.6080889

>>6080887
Yes

>> No.6080892

>>6080886
The people in the west who become good are generally detached from mainstream culture from I've observed. Basically you need to be an outcast (or a part of a small clique) and immerse yourself in a foreign (east asian) culture to get the aesthetic right

>> No.6080903

>>6080889
thanks

>> No.6080930

>>6080881
If you played more games your art would have more soul, right now it's all just soulless art

>> No.6080944

>>6077093
Cute! Will give lots of head pats.

>> No.6081024

>>6080930
Games enhance visual stimulation, solidifies good memories, and, in return, reciprocates soul into the artwork.

>> No.6081235

>>6080882
I like the pendant thing on her dress; it looks a lot like 卍 symbol.

>> No.6081263

>>6080881
Who TF are you and why are you posting this screenshot from an old thread as yours!?

>> No.6081360

>>6080882
Apart from the gay cat ears I love this. Who's the artist? Reverse search brought up nothing.

>>6080892
It's funny because a century ago it was the other way around. Traditional Japanese art had a lot of stylistic beauty, but human figures looked terrible until they started aping western artists.

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6081383

posting my work.

>> No.6081386

>>6081383
You're getting a lot better anon!

>> No.6081387

>>6081386
No, he's really not. You are saying that because you're a degenerate coombrained monkey.

>> No.6081392

>>6081386
Thanks, still a long way to go.

>> No.6081398

>>6081383
better than never missed whoever it is

>> No.6081470

>>6081383
Have you ever thought about blocking things in and refining instead of doing line work?
You mentioned before that going for defined lines wasn't your thing, maybe color and painting could server you better in developing.

>> No.6081676

>>6081383
You need to start putting extra thought on the way you draw necks.

>> No.6081685

>>6081383
Little girls don’t wear underwear for adults.

>> No.6081689

>>6081685
-Albert Einstein

>> No.6081719

do you make a new csp file for each drawing?

>> No.6081726

>>6081719
I make a new csp file for every stroke.

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>> No.6081927

>>6080447
That's a big head.

>> No.6081950

>>6080882
sauce is kaede_idoit on twitter

>> No.6082000

>>6081950
Thanks anon!

>> No.6082055

>>6081383
>he's improving, slowly
>he's using color and it's not a complete abortion

b a s e d

>> No.6082057

>>6082055
He could already paint and draw, did you not see his twitter? His older work is already well above beginner level.

>> No.6082067

https://files.catbox.moe/61cm5i.jpg

>> No.6082073

Can you guys tell me what to do to improve please?
>>6081767
>>6080447
>>6079132
I just keep drawing.

>> No.6082089

>>6082073
There are a lot of things you can improve. What do you want to improve on specifically?

>> No.6082099

>>6082073
I already told you to cut down on your hair details like last year on /adv/.

>> No.6082115

>>6082099
I did cut it down, I used to do way more, that said yeah I do sometimes do a lot sometimes. But mainly because I like hair.
>>6082089
I just want to get better but don't know what I'm doing wrong other that some things I overlooked.

>> No.6082284
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6082284

trying to get some dynamic lighting going to match the head tilt before continuing. it probably doesn't make much logical sense but as long as it's cool, right
decided to go with some kind of rembrandt triangle while shading both eyes to make her look more daring. keep going or scrap it?
>>6082073
maybe work on your lineart. in my opinion, lineart and anatomy go hand in hand because having a good grasp on anatomy allows you to do a single continuous stroke for something like a forearm while knowing when to pull the pen to draw the elbow, thus avoiding that the lines overlap while keeping them uniform and with clear intention. also, remember use the soft eraser to lighten the unwanted darker lines (on the bangs on and underside of the thighs in >>6081767 for example)

>> No.6082310
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6082310

>>6082073
something like this, I mean. see how he breaks the lines at specific points where muscle groups or bones end? that's what I mean
I see you already applied that idea on the lower legs on that drawing, so just try to do the same on the rest of the figure

>> No.6082314

>>6082284
>>6082310
Thanks I'll try that.
I love your Loli btw

>> No.6082331

>>6082284
This colouring is looking pretty epic so far. I did say you would get it eventually.

>> No.6082338

>>6082284
Incredibly sexy, I would fap to her.
Did you do your line art again or did you just color it?

>> No.6082345

>>6082284
This mogs the rest of /ic/, keep up the good work

>> No.6082355

>>6082284
I want to comit a crime

>> No.6082368

thank you all anons
>>6082338
the facial features I meshed with a 'render layer' and painting on top of the lines and the body linework I recolored to a desaturated yellow or brown
for the hair I just hid the linework away after using it as a sketch because it made the hair too overloaded and not as soft as it should be. still haven't found a way to match hair linework and rendering

>> No.6082376

>>6082368
I merged with the rendering layer and painted on top of it** I mean
what the fug

>> No.6082381

>>6082284
Now teach us.

>> No.6082980

>>6082284
Very very pretty. She doesn't have a philtrum tho and with the detailed shading on the rest of the face it looks a little weird like chimp lip, dunno if you just didn't get to it yet.

>> No.6083476

>>6083243
post more of the ugly old bastard

>> No.6083243
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6083243

practicing

>> No.6083277

>>6083243
really like the expression work, your stuff gives me almost ichigo mashimaro vibes

>> No.6083293

>>6083277
Thanks! Admittedly, I have very little knowledge of loli content and Ichigo Mashimaro happens to be one of my favorite anime.

>> No.6083295

>>6082980
no, you're right, I overlooked it. the upper lip is supposed to cast a shadow while the lower gets hit by the light source
thanks for pointing it out, i'll fix it along with some other wonky stuff I noticed

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6083535

>>6083476
This old chap? whatever floats your boat

>> No.6083601

>>6079397
i tried your brush, but maybe it's my tablet but it's way too sensitive, i wish i knew how to fix this, thanks anyway

>> No.6083652

>>6083535
>>6083243
yeah, gonna need more fat old bald jijisan

>> No.6083702

>>6083700
new thread