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Post your comics for critique and the like

feel free to share socials as well

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>>5232463

>> No.5232887

>>5232813
Is that a knight? Or he based on that Australian gunslinger?
looks neat otherwise

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This was fast and loose, so I didn't care about things like speech bubbles or line weight.

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>>5233027

>> No.5233039

>>5233028
based JPfag

>> No.5233045

>>5232463
Did you make a website for your comic yet?

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>>5232887

It's a generic knight, and thanks.

>> No.5233378

>>5233028
>kirstein
jewish tricks at play again

>> No.5233384

>>5232463
where the fuck does his gun go

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>>5232463
Got some characters tho

>> No.5233442

>>5233415
Nice

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>>5232463
Made a cringe one

>> No.5233618

>>5233563
Its nice, I like it, any more to show?

>> No.5233779

>>5233045
no not yet
>>5233384
presumably he drops it, maybe I should've made that clearer though

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>> No.5233798

>>5233415
They all look different and unique! Very cool.

>> No.5233805

>>5233779
where can i read your comics?

>> No.5233894

>>5233805
Nowhere yet, I'll get up a webtoons or something when this first chapter is done

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Does this have at least some soul?
Layout is from right to left jap-fag style.
Also haven't added the text yet.

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>>5234961

>> No.5235035

>>5233894
Post it here when your done setting it up.

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>>5232830

THERE WILL BE PAY

Starting to do final linework before I get too far into this project, playing around with tones and color as well to see how I feel. Thoughts? Tones will be much easier/faster obviously.

I'll be out of town for a week so you won't see me for a while after this.

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>>5235115

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>>5235118

>> No.5235158

>>5235035
Will do
>>5235115
Nice! I'm not sure which I think is best... I'm not sure I'm a very good judge of color, although personally I like either >>5235144 or >>5235118 the most. We await your return, anon!

>> No.5235167

>>5235158

thank you based western anon! can't wait to keep working on this

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Did this one awhile back.
>>5235118
Love the b&w. great style

>> No.5235912

>>5235726
The panel flow is really awkward, but otherwise I absolutely love this. Do you have more?

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>>5235912
Thanks man! I got some random stuff on my instagram.

instagram.com/volk6_

>> No.5235986

>>5235967
Nice!

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>>5235115
>>5235118
>>5235144
blog?

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>>5232463

>> No.5238716

>>5235115
>>5235118
>>5235144
I love that shadow concept, brilliant design.

>> No.5239477

>>5238708
kek

>> No.5239517

>>5235118
I like it toned but I do not like how you did your tones. You should fill local values with tone like you filled your flats in the color versions, instead of only using the tone for your shadows.

>> No.5239566

>>5235144
>>5235118
>>5235115
NOOOOO NOT THE HECKIN GOOD BOI HORSERINOOOOO

>> No.5239665

>>5234961
>>5234964
I have no idea what the fuck is going on in the first page but the TV one has soul.

>> No.5239670

>>5234961
Everything’s slanted down to the left, even the dude’s eyes.