/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

hey bros im back

Damn, I wasn't fast enough to make a new thread.

the Cooler

reposting this here

>>4983216
cool with me because its not anime anime

>>4983167
Asukafag

>>4983271
this is not /asg/, retard.

posting my second dragon - have slightly improved the colors and lighting but still not happy with it

>>4983300
I'm not sure if this would make it better but add a scaley texture to some parts with a multiply layer varying the opacity?

>>4983302
you mean cheat by photobashing? :)

i really need to practice drawing textures at some point though as i have zero experience with them

>>4983312
no rules, only tools

>>4983271
thanks?

>>4983300
Learn how to observe things accurately

Should've probably posted this in /trad/ but /alt/ is like my dysfunctional home that I can't run away from at this point.

Even after a decently made op pic, though there are better artwork in the last thread, /alt/ is still dead? wow......

>>4983693
it's me. I killed it:)

>>4983737
I hope you get diabetes.

>>4983746
I probably already have

I want to start working on some big illustrations again but I've had no time for it

>>4983167
This is really cute, I think you've been making progress

>>4983755
back to your containment thread pls

What resources helped you guys learn how to draw in a stylized manner?
I know my realistic anatomy (more or less) but if I try to draw something more stylized I just freeze or end up drawing an uncanny monster of half stylized figure half realistic anatomy.

I know all the cartooning books but I'm wondering how you guys went about it.

>>4983755
Is the back of her skull missing on that last panel?

>>4983764
back to your containment board pls

>>4983755
Missed seeing you here. Nice gestures.

>>4983765
I think it helps to study other artists with styles you like and to try to break down their construction and shape language. Trying to learn another artist's style can be a nice sprinboard to figuring out your own stylistic decisions. There are a lot of model sheets for animation available online if you want to get inspiration for how other artists figure out the details of character styles.

>>4983772
Is it? It looks a bit wierd to me too but I decided to just go with it since the skull looked alright in my undersketches. I feel it might be more of a design issue, with the hairstyle making it look wierd.

>>4983788
Thanks man, it's nice to hear that because I wrestled with these poses lot lol

>>4983797
hair is supposed to be a little bit away from the skull construction since hair takes up space; you got away with it looking natural on top because the head is huge

>>4983748
good

This place is dry as fuck. might fuck around and post feet or something to spice things up around here...

>>4983693
Autistic dramafags drove almost everyone out

I keep reiterating this capeshit girl charging at the screen pose. I think it's improving tho. The first time I tried it I had to trace a 3d model and it still looked hideous, but now I'm using all construction. Improvement brehs?

>>4983843
Hm, fair. After looking at it some more it probably looks wierd because the centerline for the brow is too low.

/beg/ post, learning rendering/colourings. also faces. the Dodge/burn tool is a fucking trap

>>4983300
soul

>>4983797
yeah, her skull needs to extend further back so her brain has space to exist. right now she has a small brain

>think paint bucket coloring flats looks like shit
>think manually brushing colors takes ages and also looks like shit sometimes
anyone have a good coloring brush for csp they're willing to share? I've yet to make or find a good one
I just want to have strong, even colors like in pic related (which isn't my work if that wasn't obvious)

>>4984377
Learn to talk properly and then maybe you'll get the help you need.

>>4984386
Y a este que mosco lo pico?

>>4984388
You talk like a retard in English and Spanish, go figure.

>>4984386
I'm sorry your reading comprehension is poor

>>4984406
The fact that you said " brushing colors" or "a good color brush", shows just how well you are versed in the arts. You don't know what you're talking about, and you don't know what you're looking for, therefor no one is going to help you. You completely lost me at " strong, even colors". Did you even bother rereading what you typed out, or did you honestly expect everyone to decipher your shit?

>>4984411
I said a good coloring brush, a brush that's good for coloring. I provided an image for what I meant by strong and even. Seems like you have a stick up your ass, you could have just ignored me instead of writing essays about being a master of prose. I guess some artists use multiple brushes throughout the process of coloring, so asking for a "brush" was inaccurate.

>>4984416
Come back when you finish high school, hopefully by then your vocab will increase, because "coloring brush" is just sad.

>>4984388
si eres el anon que esta buscando el pincel para csp deberias probar un pincel de punta dura y redonda (si, el meme) pic related es una configuracion que otro anon compartio hace tiempo, personalmente no me gusta dibujar en CSP asi que no podria decirte si funciona o no, pero creo que deberias alternar la opacidad del pincel para conseguir un resultado como el de tu imagen, suerte.
PD: los gringos son muy sensitivos con el tema del habla, tal vez sea un complejo de solo saber 1 idioma jaja

>>4984438
>ahaha laugh at the people who only know one language
I know three, And your shit stain language is one of them.
On that note, you don't use the opacity brush which you are show casing to "color" because it doesn't solve the problem of "even" color as the retard in the OP puts it.

>>4984421
>>4984440
S E E T H E

>>4984440
oye, tranquilo viejo

>>4983187
I always get so interested in this drawing's thumbnail everytime it's posted on /ic/ but keep getting so disappointed when I open it

>>4983755
Aren't you the guy who was working on some fantasy alternate history setting comic and posted it here a year or so ago? If so, how's it going?

>>4983755
Hey you’re the one who drew frogs and stuff right? I missed you lol.

>>4983166
Waiting for the chad guyic to post

>>4984503
that's because all of my works are meant to be admired from afar

>>4984440
why is everyone on /ic/ so fucking autistic?

>>4985131
Yeah, that's me. That's very flattering to hear lol

>>4984507
Yeah, I haven't been able to put any actual work into it since I've been working on a seperate comic project for the past couple years. I'm hoping to finish up my current comic in the next year or two, because I'm pretty committed to it, so I can start my fantasy comic.

>>4985000
how do i get as good as you

>>4983797
heads are oblong from the side

>>4985136
who?

>>4985469
Duly noted

>>4985055
blog? looks real comfy

>>4985233
i love him

>>4985055
i really like this

where do i go for crit on studies

>>4985000
Based Orange

Never be surpassed

been pretty unhappy with my work lately.

I always seem to lose interest when it comes to drawing the hair.

>>4985983
Cute. Are these your DND characters

>>4985983
Not bad just needs detail and have color to it.

Well, you do happen to be competent at shading, right anon?

i was doodling and drew tranny george floyd

school assignment

>>4985233
please start posting on ig again we miss u :(

>>4985985
i thought this was lilo and stitch fanart for a second

>>4985000
I'm happy to announce that I may be able to surpass you this year so thanks for being my secret rival

>>4986149
he now posts on DAD

>>4984126
I like how you've been going this long without having any idea what line weight is. Its also hilarious that no one on this board has pointed it out to you yet.

>>4983552
nice

>>4986351
Sorry to have disappointed you.

>>4986009
Something like that yes

>>4986351
It is

>>4986656
Most of us do nowadays, discord is a big draw

rate my twink

>>4983166
how do I render like this?
I know the theory, the lighting, shading etc but all these digital tools are just too much for my dumb tard brain

Business has really taken off in the last couple of days.

>>4985233
I thought I'd never see you around here again. You seemed like you disliked this place.

>>4986701
I think the crabs hate bimbo tranny man because he's actually improved since coming here, and that makes them absolutely boil.

>>4987620
But wouldn't that motivate the crabs to atleast point it his problems in at least a mocking way?

cuchulain design

>>4987779
>>4974513

>>4987793
Woof woof :)

>>4987335
I think you may want to reign in that right eye, it is much wider than the left eye.

>>4986149
I'll do it just for you, anon.

>>4987588
Eh, it seems like these threads have died down a bit. I dislike how bad they can get, but I do have fun in them when they're good.

>>4984126
reduce line weight (thickness) on the hair, it makes the hair under her armpit look like a tumor growing out of her side. Increase line thickness on the hand and thigh coming towards the viewer, decrease line thickness on the foot. The entire image reads at once because there isnt enough variability, and it then reads like a mishapen blob. What is the reference you used for this?

>>4987669
This is great.

>>4987871
Thanks for your input lad. The ref is from croquis. Used it pretty loosely.

Any guidance on how I can make messy drawings like this more appealing? I feel that despite me liking the subject matter, they turn out bland and uninteresting

>>4984126
Bimbo tranny man is bargain bin Frank Cho

Unfinished. This feels pretty soulless, particularly the face / expression. Not sure how else to approach it besides starting over.

>>4987903
I think having more of a sense of flow and movement would help.

>>4988067
Noted, will try to experiment more with fluid elements in future attempts
Thanks for the feedback anon

Goblin

>>4988076
Orc. He’s supposed to be mildly handsome. I failed.

>>4988072
Even something as simple as texturing the dark areas would help. If you look at Kojima's art, she adds a lot of detail to the background that moves in a certain direction.

For example, in this image everything from the candles in the foreground, the buildings in the background and even the texture of the paint moves vertically.

Really trying to get good at soft shading.

>>4988211

>>4988215
Thank you, I did play with the levels afterward but felt it looked too dark. I'll try to make it more like yours.

>>4988091
Was looking at exactly this image for inspo actually, I really want to do something as aesthetically pleasing as this one day
Again, thanks for the help

>>4987855
Thank you, i have this recurring issue with eyes lately

>>4987903
Early sketch, trying to apply the helpful advice I got about flow, I hope this will end up looking better
Pic mimics the pose of another Kojima work, but I think her art is subconsciously wired in my brain at this point

>>4988501
That's a good improvement. It has a nice clean flow that wraps around him. The only thing I would change is the direction of his left sword to fit with the rest of it.

>>4988551
Thank you
Worked on it a bit more before I saw your reply, swapped the sword n staff for magic but I think it follows the same flow as your guide, which is good
Sorry for the many WIPs, will wrap this up and call it a day, I appreciate the help

>>4987779
soulless

>>4987903
blog?

>>4988698
Nothing worth your time

>>4987793

>>4988815
Amazing colors

>>4988815
blog. now.

>>4983755
lovely gesture

>>4987779
I don't like how you do the faces, legs, feet, ass, groin, arms and legs. Actually let me just say I don't like how you draw your characters at all.

>>4989320
I know this is bait, but how so? Can you elaborate?

>>4989616
Not trying to crab, its just I think the limbs are too angular or too tubular. The hands and feet stick out like a sore thumb with the tubular limbs. The expressions are completely lacking. The gap on that ass is way too wide. You do it all the time and it's sort of at the point where you will more than likely not change anything.

>>4989635
I see what you mean. I'm a lazy person who foregoes details and muscular forms for the pose, so I'll focus on applying my anatomical knowledge next time. These drawings were literal gestures i decided to color in, so next time I'll be more diligent into putting work into those anatomical forms. Thanks for your input.

>>4988815
your blog, hand it over

>>4989886
@lunydoobles on twitter

this arm is killing me and my arm is killing me
time to go to bed

random generic cartoon girl

>>4990302
giving me eizouken vibes

I have a new mission to see how many bones i can remove from their bodies until my figures are just bags of skin. I think i was able to remove all their bones from their torsos and arms - the heads are still too structured

Also trying to boost line weights, but it’s going kind of crappy so far. The ink looks really sketchy, i think i may be using the wrong tools or I’m just not very good at beefing them up.

>>4990302
I like it

>>4986012
i tried

>>4983166
project

>>4990427
forgot the animated version

>>4990347
If you are using fineliners the only way to get better line weight is to go bigger. Like A3 or maybe even A2. Otherwise switching to brush or dip pen should get much better results but it could be a pain in the ass to get accustomed to them after fineliners.

Trying to figure out value structures, how's my composition and all that

>>4990428
A little trick you can probably do is shift the red channel when the img distorts.

I've been filling tonnes of sketchbook pages lately with random sketches of OCs etc. It's fun but I'm rapidly hitting a point of complacency and want to improve my fundies. Particularly gesture, facial expressions, body language, and anatomy. Does anyone have a good course or book recommendation for me to work from? This is a sketchbook page from a couple months ago, about the same as what I'm drawing now.

I swear I’m going to finish coloring this today. I wonder which will be better, markers or digi?

>>4990486
I’m rotating between 01, PN and 005, but I have not figured out a good algorithm for the order of the lines. I do 01 first for a rough ink, then erase the undersketch, then reshape the figures and dark spots with the PN, and back through with the 005 for details. The PN is making it look chunky. I should use it more sparingly, but then i don’t have enough dark spaces for the linework to be balanced. Maybe i should just block in some blacks?

Progress on a skull study, about 2.5 hours in. I usually work with lines so this more painterly approach is new to me.

>>4991514
Reference pic. Really struggling with the teeth.

>>4991398
I'm not deciphering your gibberish. Your digital work is significantly worse than your trad tho.

>>4991514
>play with color settings for fun
>now the original doesn't look nearly as cool

All I did was add a hard mix layer. I feel like it's kinda cheating though in a way..

>>4983552
Aaghhg I want to leave

have an ice fairy

>>4991398
shame you draw such tasteless degenerate stuff anon becuase you have an interesting style and pretty accomplished skill

>>4991398
Where do you post?

>>4992012

Done!

Going back through over the next couple days and touching stuff up and then I'll be prepping for print!

how do i color this shit makes no fucking sense, how do colors work together how do people fucking get an amazing palette going from imagination how do they use values properly AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

>>4992070
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Qj1FK8n7WgY
This is a decent introduction, but you mostly have to just experiment over and over until you get a feeling for it

>>4992154
>>4992070
this one too
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4LhcNbFMkTw

>>4991398
One down, three to go - color party tomorrow. I made a circle using a circle tool (aka: cereal bowls)

>>4991530
Ah why do you think my digital is worse?

>>4991804
You sound like my wife, you two must be friends

>>4991812
I post in /alt/ and blog is here https://twitter.com/tableguyart

>>4992376

>>4992378

>>4992380

>>4991398
Yeah, you fully took the fetish pill. At least you might actually start making good bucks now.

>>4992154
>>4992155
i understand both of these fine, i understand values role as inherent values in different colors, i understand greys work as binders, i understand analogous and complementary etc.

when it comes to actually placing the dumb fucking colors down on an black and white picture from imagination its like everything i learned goes out of the window.

>>4992384
Finish something, anon. Im guessing you dont finish much.

>>4988815
she looks retarded, no offense.

>>4983300
soul

>>4992770

>>4992772
https://twitter.com/tmnecroDEV

>>4992605
Try drawing from reference more. Pick a photo with colors you like and try to recreate it without using the color picker. Try to recreate it using a limited color pallet or try to change the tone of the image by shifting the color pallet from warm to cold or vise-versa.

Just keep failing until you succeed.

need tips on composition

>>4992805
Your brush work need to be refined and where to make edges either soft or hard, but looks comfy

Still appreciate that last donation

Still appreciate last donation

>>4992168
we're much more than that ;)

a bit of a coom piece

Critique pls
In particular what should I practice/study to significantly improve

>>4993091
you lack all fundies, go study from real life

>>4993100
He's not perfect but pretty clearly doesn't lack fundies

>>4985234
draw a lot and never be happy with it

>>4985879
I'll try

>>4986654
Good luck, friend

>>4993091
This honestly looks sakimi tier, the more I look at it the more errors I see.

>>4993204
if he didn't lack he wouldn't fail at drapery, perspective, line control and overlaps, background, shadow control

her right foot should ended up bigger because it's closer to the camera, he messed the ankle on that too, her left arm has thicker lines for no reason, drapery is self explanatory, whatever she is sitting on isn't following her butt perspective making her float, bounce lights are too bright, there are light source coming from left, behind and bottom, no background is better than shitty background with values all over the place

Finally finished this crap
>>4992015
Your stuff is always great, also very impressed with the work ethic

>>4990453
post the links

>>4992168
Warm up

>>4992458
I dont see what is fetish-like about the drawings. I find them amusing and tastefully lewd.

>>4992889
too much tmi

>>4993825
wow love that line weight

>>4985495
me

>>4993825
looks good except that foot

pain

>>4993100
>>4993209
>>4993220

Thank you for the feedback anons

crab board

>>4993208
>never be happy with it
I've followed you for a long time, and I think we have a lot of the same mindsets on things.

If it means anything, I've always loved your use of colors and wish I had even an inkling of your understanding on it.

did a quick animation/paint study

One of my favourite recent pieces.

>>4993372
@AZAV858 on twitter.

>>4994410
uh, same picture

>>4994461
Coom

>>4993630
I found this face hilariously bad. I redrew it in procreate... liquify is way too over powered

No rules just tools right?

>>4994535
Idk, im not a filthy furfag but i like left one better.
Maybe adjust the tounge.

>>4994461
The coom is fine and all but I really like the background too. Where do you post?
>>4991398
Your style looks really good in digital, I like your backgrounds too. Do you draw over a scan or do the whole thing digitally?

My first commission, kind of afraid to deviate too hard so I just used the pose and colors the commissioner requested.

Red line?
I have difficulties connecting the neck and the head, it always comes out awkward

>>4994535
i like left

>>4994535
I keep hearing about liquify being a crutch but I never use it. I dont use many tools besides lasso select and perspective-deform tweaking in SAI

I dont mess with colors or values. I pretty much sketch only. Do I need to learn to use liquify
Someone please for the love of god respond

>>4994735
Biggest crutches are history, layers and lasso imo, not that it matters.
And no, of course you don't need to learn to liquify, although it's pretty useful to make adjustments, one could make a point that it'd be better for you if you learnt to fix things by your own means, as that would enable you to do it in any media.
It ends up being another tool, use it or not.

>>4994741
My point was not to ask some gay , whiny question about what is and isnt a crutch. Or whatever. I'm all in favor of tools over rules. But I'm digital art noob and have no idea how to use software for anything but the most basic shit. I didnt even know you could use perspective transformation until like a week ago and it blew my mind.

I was hoping to learn what other tools are extremely useful for the sketching process. I was asking about liquify because Ive heard people post about it but I dont even know what it is or does.

>>4994548
Usually on /int/.

>>4994770
thoughts on /his/

>>4994754
>I was hoping to learn what other tools are extremely useful for the sketching process
There isn’t really any beside the transform, warp, and perspective tools on hand, the only really extremely useful tool is just using layers where you make a very loose sketch and then refine it layer by layer.

>>4994770
There's no /int/ thread.

work in progress

what do you think bros

>>4994980
pretty sure he meant >>>/int/

>>4994984
i think i want to see your blog

>>4994984
Asukafag

>>4994984
torso isnt right

>>4994957
Never been there.
>>4994980
This >>4994986

>>4994984
>that right eye being so close to the ear
wew

>>4995095
i'll be honest with you: i read /lit/ instead of /int/ and i feel pretty retarded about it

i changed face, too ridiculous

>>4994997
https://twitter.com/dairenke_art
im sorry you will be dissapointed i am very inconsistent

>>4995226
i love you asukafag

>>4995245
thank you
but i must redo the whole thing now

>>4995253
don't give up

>>4994984
Norasuke stained your faces but it's good that you're finally working with more complex shapes

>>4995338
damn, nice improv, I just think that the shadow's value on her face is too low

>>4995338
You choose some good inspirations asuka tranny.

>>4995338
Torso is fucked and you could have fixed some of the shading in her hair and plugsuit

>>4995379
i understand
i will redraw it completely with different lineart and simpler shading because i hate it

>>4995411
Nah, you can easily fix it, and you can adjust the shading

>>4995366
shut the fuck up

>>4995446
Just a bit of banter, didn't know people here were fragile. I thought I could post some of my W.I.P.'s.

>>4995411
>>4995379
I'm like in no way of being perfect or good when it comes to rendering and stuff, but you gotta render using forms and 3D shapes.

Her torso looked weird and out of shape because of how it was formed, so I did a bit of a quick fix, slight moved her awkward breast and changed how the shading looked. I also did a bit of a fix on the hair because you can render it in chunks but you can always explore that in your own way. Using the yellow for the hard highlights is really nice though.

I really like your colours by the way, they're really vibrant and cool-looking, just keep practicing your anatomy and explore rendering of forms - can use references for this

Keep it up!

Why will I never get better at painting

>>4994703
blog?

>>4995635
it looks alright. Keep going.

>>4995635
use flow instead of opacity for blending

Why do you never help me but everyone always helps asukafag :(

>>4995708
thanky
>>4995719
I could try that, how would it make a difference?

ok bros i redid most of it
i fixed the torso like that anon showed me i think its good now
and i changed the style to cleaner

>>4995744
less streaky blending

>>4995748
her face is so wide

>>4994535
I tried to color the chicken fetus with just the markers and white pen, but the whiteout texture is unnerving... I probably should push the values more. BG is possibly too dark?

>>4994538
>>4994705
Man i really thought that left was shit

>>4994548
That one was a trad sketch and ink, then i scanned it and colored it digital. I’m about to color it trad now, been procrastinating all week.

>>4994735
Liquify is good for tweaking. I don’t rely on it. Usually i just redraw something if it doesn’t look right. It’s one of those things where I see something obviously wrong and I really want to fix it - liquify allows me to fix it

>>4995816
Bro, is this the path you want to continue following? This stuff is far from normal. This can't be excused "as a joke" any more. If you're happy with this, go on, but I'm just saying this as someone that liked your Princess Peach action drawings in the past.

>>4995959
define "normal"

>>4995816
same old boring shit

>>4995816
>>4996036
He caved to furry shit, damN.

>>4996036
I'm just saying dude. I don't hate tablenigga, I enjoyed his nostalgic style, but this is too weird for most people. I hope he finds lots of people to commission his new stuff.

>>4995959
>>4996059
I like his stuff because he very clearly has his own tastes and style he wants to persue. It's wierd, gross, and creepy, and it's sexual but not erotic. It kinda reminds me of gross-out aesthetics than used to be common in cartoons like Ren and Stimpy, combined with anime. It's not really to my own tastes, but I like how all his art could not be made by anyone other than himself.
Keep on being yourself tableguy, ilu

>>4996095
Your intentions don't matter when introduced into what the internet became. His followers are now mostly creepy degenerates.

>>4994461
Post your blog.

>>4996041
>>4996059
Gotta second this anon>>4996095
His work is pretty unique. Whether it's animal people or robot, it's his thing.
And if you think "that" is furry, boy you ain't seen shit yet.
Trust me, there are things you can't unsee no matter how hard you try.
>>4996125
But you could say that about anyone really.

>>4996257
Why does every disagreement is seen as an attack in here?

>>4996289
i'm not responsible for your insecurity issues

>>4996300
If this is all you got out of this, I feel bad for you.

>>4995338
You still suck at rendering wtf asukafag

>>4996326
If you think people disagreeing with each others is an attack, you might be the one with issues.

>>4995816
Jesus christ this is too much

>>4994461
coomfy. I like

>>4995816
I actually gagged.

>>4995816
pretty cool

>>4996330
>>4995748
what about this bro i changed it

>>4991398
Jesus fuck - finally done coloring it. Who wore it better digital or trad?

>>4996523
>>4996379
>>4996041
>>4995959
Just curious, what did you find to be in bad taste - was it the fetal chicken or the chicken tiddies?

I’ll be honest, i really tried hard to incorporate a reference into the fetal chicken. I actually thought it looked kind of cool... i felt like it was a creative mix of a study and my normal drawing style / content.

>>4996633
I was going to do another one because I learned a lot in the coloring process, but i don’t want to cause a hullabaloo...

>>4996257
>>4996095
> cartoons like Ren and Stimpy
Ah yea, I think you nailed it. I really like Cow & Chicken and Earthworm Jim too. It’s nice to know that there are a couple people who don’t think I’m a complete degenerate - I’m a pretty normal guy.

>>4996125
> His followers are now mostly creepy degenerates
How can you tell who is a degenerate?

>>4996040
hi boredanon, I’ve missed your bored commentary. When you don’t reply, i feel like I’ve truly created something so boring it wasn’t worth your time to reply.

>>4996871
I find it hilarious that so many people have called your work boring so much you assume its just one guy

>>4995816
surprised someone would actually draw balut.

>>4996871
Looks great in trad!
What I think you are missing in digital is texture and the cheap bg effects dont help. Just do it the same way you would do it in trad and overlay some texture, try some texture brushes or add a noise filter.

>>4983300
soul

>>4996889
It's not texture specifically, it's a lack of familiarity with the tool. He just needs to spend more time with digital, and digital painting in particular.
If he wants to learn digital, he'll need to learn more about color too. With marker, there's a certain degree of cohesiveness of color that comes from the behavior of the material, but in digital you have to be more exact with your color choices (especially if you're doing flat color).

new sketch bros
chun li eating burger

>>4996871
Your problem is that you fail to see your art from an outside perspective. You fail to see how bad it is and how unappealing it is. The technical part is okay, the way you draw anorexic limbs and in sexual situations is not appealing.

im really trying here bros

>>4997072
Asukafag?
I kneel

>>4997079
i love u

>>4995816
BASED TABLECHAD

My mothman type creature

>>4997591
I'm stealing this

>>4997547
cute!

>>4997593
fuck off happybottomboi

:D

>>4997547
coming for you, mothman

>>4992805
Torso/sweater needs to be longer

new sketch bros
street fighter cammy eating chips
and now it's time to sleep

>>4997095
Make sure to render out with forms, other wise it'll keep looking flatish

Looking nice though!

finished ref for a character, any critique would be wonderful

>>4997095
looks great now without the usual grey bg. Be mindful of your character's perspective relative to the table she's leaning on next time.
Dont give up asuka kun

>>4998142
charming

Do you guys ever refrain from commenting on an authors piece because you've commented on one recently and don't want to feel like a weirdo for stalking their account?

>>4998142
Better

Hey guys! <3

>>4998456
Stop abusing the burntool, and her limbs are out of proportion.

>>4998461
But I didn't use the burn tool and no they aren't.

>>4998456
very nice coom shading on the body, but her right leg and especially her face looks funky. eyes and mouth seem way out of position

>>4998497
no they aren't.

>>4998456
This reminds of that post from /ic/ about a dude posting some naked chick laying next to a pond holding a sword while listening to music.
any d/ic/ks mind posting it again?

>>4998456
>draw and shade a distinct centerline on the face
>place mouth nowhere near it
why

>>4998501
Why are crabs like this?

>>4998499
>>4998468
If you're going to be a defensive faggot that doesn't listen to critique, then fuck off to whatever hugbox you came from.
Yes, the arm is disproportionately long, yes the facial features are misplaced, and yes your shading is a dead ringer for abuse of the dodge and burn tools.

Your drawing is sloppy, your colors are vomit inducing, and your attitude is obnoxious.

>>4998519

>>4998523
You aren't being crabbed, you insecure little bitch.
Two people gave you perfectly valid, civil criticism which you refused point blank.
If this is how you respond to fair critique, then I have no desire to treat you civilly.
Fuck off, faggot.

>>4998519
>>4998533
based and d/ic/kpilled

>>4998538

>>4998556
>he's a wojak nigger too
Are you trying to be as hateable as possible?

>>4998566
Stop taking the bait, retard.

>>4998570
You give him too much credit.

>>4998456
this you?
https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/85682419

>>4998596
Yes!

>>4998599
Do you trace? Because fuck me my tracey senses are tingling

>>4998612
No. I also only used 2 colors for the skin. 1 base and 1 dark. I dont have dodge or burn tools. The highlights are on a glow dodge layer so maybe that's what salt anon was talking about, but as far as I know csp doesn't have those tools.

>>4998630
>salt anon
Three separate people have pointed out the flaws in your drawing, faggot.

>>4998630
glow is the burn tool in csp

>>4998632
Whatever you say shio san!

>>4998639
Dumb weeb.

>>4998637
Isnt burn a tool that makes things darker, I used ps 10 years ago to draw something and I'm pretty sure it makes things darker where as glow makes things lighter.

What do yall think bros

>>4998654
Pretty nice, good job anon!

>>4998654
Looking pretty good, really the only thing that seems off to me is the light source, specifically on the left hand and also the legs. Everywhere else it looks like the light is coming from above, but in only those spots it seems like the light is coming from the right/bottom right.

>>4998579
no its pretty obvious bait , even if he is genuinely retarded

>>4998654
Good enough to start drawing porn

How do you draw an appealing face that doesn't look like puke

>>4994317
Thanks, man. Colors are something I specifically tried to improve on recently so I appreciate the compliment.

Keep trying your best.

>>4998501
Same character, actually.

>>4988211
>>4988215
Tried matching the color as best I could, also adjusted her eye based on someone else's redline. Not working on it anymore, but I'll keep those things in mind next time.

>>4998654
nice

>>4998878
>>4998878
>>4998878
new thread?

>>4998654
Looks sloppy

>>4998903
agreed my rendering and lineart tend to be. do you recommend any way to mitigate this I like to think I'm patient, but this is very recurring

>>4998929
Post your blog so I can look over it and condense my criticism into a small but succinct area to focus on.

>>4987779
Kind of better than your previous work, tsflipp, but you are still lacking soul.

>>4984440
crabs gonnga crab

Hey guys, clueless here. Any lighting tips?

>>5001640
Dear Clueless,
Learn how to draw before worrying about lighting. Trying to apply lighting to a flat symbol-drawing like this is pointless.