/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

November draw prompt.

Is OP CLAMP-inspired? Very nice, even though a bit formless on the clothes/hair.
Think more about the silhouette of each plead/ruff and the overal shape of the hair over the initial strands.

MORE LIKE PEDOPHILE GENERAL
FBIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII
FBI FBI FBI
BLACKLIST BLACKLIST BLACKLIST
KID FUCKERS IN THE VICINITY

>>4974748
I thought I did the hair pretty well, how can I improve it?

>>4974753
The strands around the torso's height are straight and have more gaps, so that contrasts with the more cohesive lower part. It's very minor, and the curves in the lineart are gentle enough that it's still pleasant.

>>4974761
Okay, I see, I'll be more consistent in the future, thanks.

Does anyone have an alternate link to this? Chrome keeps blocking it whenever i try to download it.

>>4974724
OOOOHOHOHO CUNNY CUNNY CUNNY CUNNY CUNNY

>>4974874
I'm having the same issue on firefox

>>4974874
It works on pc

>>4974513
Very cute OP

>>4975012
cute squid

why is loli / shota allowed on /ic/ but furry art isnt? i have nothing against you guys its an issue with moderation
my furry art is more legal than loli and shota so why are they so angry about it

>>4975083
Thats a good point. Personally, none of it should be allowed, but I suspect that the reason is one of historical grievance. Plus yall furfags already dominate so many art centric sites.

>>4975083
What can we say, our resident jannie has a bias but in reality we can't argue because these two genres are banned anyway we're lucky enough to even be able to post right now without the thread being deleted.

>>4975111
/ic/ belong the coomerposters, remember your place furfags and lolipedos.
SIEG COOM

>>4975083
I thought furry was allowed as long as it wasn't pornographic? I thought MLP was the the only thing strictly restricted.

>>4974724
I made some changes on her head / face.
Namely, I lowered her eyes and mouth slightly, her right ear quite a bit, and lowered the curvature of her head a notch.
Also notice I moved her head a bit to the bottom-left, and tilted her neck so that it would follow the spine's direction.
Imo in your drawing, it looks like the neck is weirdly connected to the chin.

>>4975133
>only head
god i fucking hate anime fags

>>4975133
thank you. I really can't seem to grasp faces. I'll have to focus a lot on it. This does look way better.

>>4975174
Sorry for not having the best scan quality

>>4975174
>>4975175
this looks like Unteralterbach
noice, a man of culture

>>4974515
Joyful loli.

I feel like I put too much detail in the hands and feet but I'm not too sure since some styles do that.

Also a big thank you to the guy that suggested I try looking at other artist's composition I think that it's going to improve my drawings a lot, they already look more dynamic

Can somebody please critique?
>>4975203
I tried incorporating all the advice I got

We need a loli mascot all the cool generals have one, can somebody who's good at drawing design one?

>>4975407
The mouth makes this look creepy as fuck

Also the pose is very unatural. It looks more like a drawing, rather than a drawing of something thats supposed to be alive and have weight to it's moving parts.

>>4975438
>all the cool generals have one
Really? The only one I can think of is the thread with the offsite link.

>>4975461
Thank you I'll try making less unnatural drawings and change the mouth
>It looks more like a drawing, rather than a drawing of something thats supposed to be alive and have weight to it's moving parts.
Not sure how to fix this

>>4975203
>>4975407
I think the biggest thing to fix is the neck.
Animu necks are much thinner than normal, and thus most of the time don't connect to the ear, see
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=5653057
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=5653199
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=3663137&tags=kuro_chairo_no_neko
This is how I would do it, notice a pretty big change in the neck's position.
I also changed the mouth for what I consider is the more common way to draw the smile, and moved her eyes a bit towards the centre of the head.
(*) is how I draw heads in this angle, of course you can do it however you like.
As for the pose, I think the bigger issue is her right arm, but all in all I don't think it's terrible, she would probably be uncomfortable, also give her left leg ( her foot looks stiff imo ), but I guess I you wanna tackle that issue, you may wanna do gesture studies.

>>4975631
>Thinner neck
>more anime mouth
>gesture studies
Thank you, I'll take note

>>4975631
>>4975133
Why are you so based?

How do I make my shotas seem more shota-like? I usually draw women so they always turn out looking like tomboys/lesbians/older guys. i can post more examples if needed

>>4975996
By hanging yourself

>>4975996
You don't.

>>4976016
>>4976024
why are you so hostile to him

Boy, /ic/ really gone downhill, when fur and lolishitters have their own general.

>>4975012
How are you still alive anyway...?

>>4975996
Make the head bigger in relation to the body imo.
And arguably the neck shorter as well.

>>4975203
>I'm not too sure since some styles do that.
I think it would be better to convey the creases and all through shading, but since you don't color your pics often it might be fine like that. Stuff closer to the viewer can and should be more detailed but keep the further away parts and parts you don't want to draw as much attention to simpler. This helps with composition and moving the eye through the piece.

this general is slow
bump

>>4976845
Yeah, it is. Remember that you can't post nsfw here. Also I think you should add a short line where her right arm begins, unless her arm is supposed to be hidden behind her torso, in which case I think you should make it thinner on the right side

>>4976845
people keep getting banned, i just stopped posting here

>>4976866

the issues of the past are gone now as long as you dont post rule breaking stuff

>>4976865
thanks
but this drawing is old

>>4976935
is that haru? nice

>>4974515
3. Spats
Surprised no one made one yet

>>4974515

>>4974515
spats!!!
I feel like I could've made the feet and hands more interesting but I wasn't sure how to

???what is spats

>>4977296

draw more pics of lolis and shotas being wholesome together
nudity optional

>>4977399
I’ll try today, lsg.

>>4977290
Decided to color it in, I feel like I over did it with the shading layers.
Should I do less in the future?

https://files.catbox.moe/ysflt6.png

No comment

>>4977399
tried - added witch prompt

>>4977648
I love it

all of your art is too shit to be controversial, but keep living out your NEET fantasies of owning the libs.

>>4977648

>>4977648
Very cute!

>>4977740
Who is she?

>>4977749
Ellen degeneres

>>4977749
Zooey Deschanel

>>4977648
the world need more lolis x shotas man bless your soul drawfag

>>4977762
thanks, going to make some deepfakes

>>4977773
post result for us too

>>4977525
It’s good to experiment. I can see you tried harder with the shines.
>>4977922
Looks better than ic standards. You must be from /co/

>>4977922
a nice blend of westernish art style in a japanese manga format bretty good

>>4977922
Hot

>>4978383
The tacos? Or...?

>>4974515
little bitch nobeta

>>4974515

>>4974515

>>4974515
>4. Witch
Couldn't get the hat to look right but we.
Do you anons start with the torso, head, or something else?

>>4978699
I think the reason why the hat doesn't look right is that it's not wrapped around her head, it's just sitting on the top edge. The back edge of the hat is on the very top of her head.

You could bring it down, but it would probably cover her eyes if you keep the current inclination. What you could do instead is make the brim floppy, then just where her hand is it'll pull down.

>>4978705
Yeah, that's it.
I'm done with it tho, so I don't think I'll fix it... If i pick it up again I'll probably make her hold onto something else.

>>4978699
Where did you learn your bean technique thingy?

>>4978405
Vietnam loli

>>4975631
Don't critique art style specific things. You have to know the rules to break the rules.
>>4975203
Left foot is curved too much inwards and the way the ankle is sharply bulging out is weird. It should be more subtly curved. The right thigh either should not be curving inward that much, or you need to lower her leg. Her right upper arm also looks like it's barely connecting to her forearm and her peace sign looks like little sausages without joints. I know that wording sounds rude, but it's the only thing I could come up with. Her left arm also looks too skinny in general.
>>4976845
Arm feels too straight, also feel like she should be a bit more curvy since she looks older
>>4976984
I didn't know how to explain this without redlining it, so picrel. I'm not the best artist ever so I wouldn't use my redline as exact guidelines you should follow, but google hands on hips for a general idea

Engineer shota

>>4979454
I'm >>4975203, thank you, I used a 3d model for the left leg (the one in perspective) so I'm not too sure what went wrong.
Also are the arms that skinny?
They seemed fine to me

>>4979479
3d models aren't always 100% reliable because in the end, you're copying art and art will always have different proportions than a real person unless you're copying a god. The forearm of the peace sign arm is fine, and I'd say that the skinniness of the upper arm isn't really super offending, it's just that it looks like it's just barely connected to the forearm. Her outstretched arm is pretty skinny though. The wrist is typically the thinnest point on the arm and the whole arm's thickness barely changes at any point. For reference, here's an incredibly skinny girl. Her arms are super thin, but you can see it gets noticeably thicker than the wrist the further up you go.

>>4979494
okay I try not to make it so bony in the future, thanks

elf loli https://files.catbox.moe/9oxjpq.jpg

>>4977922
blog?

>>4975505
who's the DAD mascot? Lilra? bateman? I'm in DAD and I can't think of any.

>>4979777
Bateman, Ramune, Aphid, Cath, Pera, etc, are more community celebrities. There is a LAStan on the error login page that was made a long time ago which sort of counts as a mascot. But nobody there really talks about it, so it's obscure to the general.

>>4979308
A video I think... I don't remember, if I come across it I'll post it.
>>4979454
Yeah I knew the arms where fucked up but couldn't figure out why, and yes, Maybe I shiuld use references when something like that happens.
>Don't critique art style specific things. You have to know the rules to break the rules.
For what part of the crit do you mean this? the neck?

>>4979308
Found it, but can't find the source.
I obviously don't do it exactly like this, but here's where I got the idea from.

>>4980011
oh, I recognize that. Thanks.

>>4980015
I just realized the source is in the image itself... don't laugh

>>4975012
dude... i don't understand how you've been here THIS long and are still THIS bad

>>4980202
You have me confused with someone else I haven't posted in a long time.

>>4980237
So you’re not miku this whole time? Why does your style look like theirs?

>>4979923
Yes I mean the neck

>>4974515
sleeping

>>4974515
smug loli, any critiques?
I feel like giving her less defined features like traps, clavicle and deltoid would help but I'm not sure.

>>4980674
colored

>>4980674
I think the head feels disconnected from her body. Mostly due to positioning.
I tried placing it a bit behind and straightening her neck (2n top row), and then tried pushing her head forward a bit, since I think that's what you wanted to do (3rd).
It's up to you how you wanna handle it, since you get to decide her gesture, but I think if you want to push her head even further forward, maybe you could arch her back a bit so that the head doesn't look off, something like this
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=5560204&tags=donguri_suzume
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=4268218
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=5560369&tags=donguri_suzume
Also notice the angle at which the neck connects with the head (plus the fact that it gets thinner at the top). I don't think that's quite right, if anything I usually make it get slightly wider as you go to the top, but that's just me making animu necks, think the angle should be more like this
https://i.pinimg.com/originals/8a/cf/f8/8acff8bc9161522dda7eacc753e887c7.jpg
https://th.bing.com/th/id/OIP.Gfa6bNlu_Ij5c63vpj7i3QHaJ4?pid=Api&rs=1
https://cdnb.artstation.com/p/assets/images/images/000/990/009/large/angel-ganev-allure-angelganev.jpg?1443928323
https://thefashiontag.com/wp-content/uploads/2015/01/2015-jewelry-trend-chokers-3.jpg
https://th.bing.com/th/id/OIP.PcWUR2I_l2_qZgfVWPOehgHaED?pid=Api&rs=1

>>4980952
>>4980952
>if you want to push her head even further forward, maybe you could arch her back a bit so that the head doesn't look off, something like this
Found another example that might be even closer to what you drew
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=4850376&tags=donguri_suzume

>>4980952
Thank you, I'll take notes and try to be more careful in the future

>>4977922
Blog?

>people actually helping each other
I think I was in the wrong thread the whole time

>>4981001
/lsg/ is the best general on /ic/
tell your friends the message

>>4981001
lolibros have always been based. it was the tumblr brigade that ruined everything

When I drew butts before I drew them like the loli at the top. Somebody told me I was doing wrong. Is it? Can I draw loli butts like the one at the top, or is it wrong?

what's the pixiv sketch site about? A place to post random sketches and unfinished works? Most artists I follow either don't use it or last posted 2 - 3 years ago.

>>4981442
Well, I think it looks fine, given her pose.
Depending on the body type you are trying to draw, maybe you'd want to make her legs slimmer, but otherwise I'm not sure.

>>4980202
>and are still THIS bad
looks fine to me

my lineart sucks, hand doesn't go where I want it to be
just gonna have to buy an apple ipad pro 12.9 to fix this

>>4981725
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zSZlIZ7fXII
>obliterated by Japanese man using nothing but an intuos 2 from 2001

>>4981779
bruh the art STILL looks like it's from 2001 hahahaha

>>4981830
no wei!

>>4981779
asian genes automatically upgrade electronic class items whenever they drop.

>>4981830
that's because it was recorded in 2004-2005 ish

>>4974515
smug

>>4982293
smug wayo cat

>>4974513
#5 sketch

>>4982579
Me on the left

Drew miyu!!
I feel like I got the foreshortening and butt wrong.

>>4982579
OH SHIT IM G-GONNA

Who is your favorite loli/waifu?

>>4982997
the pink head loli from kuroinu

>>4982579
me on the right

>>4982951
>>4983080
hah gay

>>4983082
I-I don't mind at all! Really!

Pathetic aspiring artist here
Why can't I get my eyes in the right position?

>>4983101
That head looks like a Steven Universe template.

>>4983101
Oh, it's simple, see that concave dent under her eye. That's meant to be the eye socket. See where I'm going? Her eyes there.
You may need to move up the eye socket and eyes though, for younger girls eyes go half way up the face. For men and older women it's a bit higher.

>>4983101
i think this is correctly

>>4983107
hm you're right...
>>4983108
wow
that's great anon thanks

>>4983105
Yeah I may have gone too toony on this
hopefully I can still save it from looking like an autistic mess

>>4982293
Looks good, but I think her left leg is too squished by the knee.
Maybe you should lift it up a notch
https://i.pinimg.com/736x/03/34/94/033494aec2ba6dac18d35e5bd4f0e650.jpg
https://i.pinimg.com/736x/33/f2/06/33f20698c53e7448454db703934f2ee8.jpg

>>4982974
I don't usually draw butts so take it with a grain of salt.
I think the problem is simply in the form. It looks a bit like her right cheek is popping off of her body, and maybe her left cheek is too rounded.
i think, if it was my drawing, I would give her buttocks a wider towards the bottom shape and try to make them look more "connected" to the legs, I think making them pop off too much makes it seem like it's separated from the rest of the body.
I also made an attempt with a more prominent butt (*), as I think that may be closer to what you wanted to do, but idk.
I can't pull off foreshortening so I can't help you there

>>4983214
Cute butts!

>>4983214
thank you so much, i found my problem i kept drawing the butt cheek directly to the two lines directly above the butt, i forgot what they were called. romboid of versalis or something italian.
instead of making them their own cheeks
Thank you.

>>4982997
this cat

>>4983473
hmmm...

>>4983473
Funny, shes my favorite, too. Well her and konomi. I realized a lot of the lolimo's I like either start with the letter 'K' or wear ribbons in their hair. All coincidence.

>>4982997
SHE
I'm working on a new drawing

>>4982579
here is line art + colors

>>4983667
Bold
I think the right girl's face (from eyebrows to mouth) might be too big.

>>4982997
>>4974515
>7. Anon's favourite loli
It's actually Louise but I've already drawn her enough for the time being.
Also I'm trying to jump into backgrounds and full pictures in general so any crit would be great

>>4983783
good job anon, looks really nice

>>4983740
Also I think the hairline is a bit too high. I get you wanted the "kissable forehead" thing going on but it's not quite there.

chen

...

>>4984486
soulful

>>4984486

>>4984486
Saved

any ways I could make this better? for context it's Jyushimatsu Matsuno wearing Jotaro's coat with not much underneath.

how do you guys come up with cool/cute outfits and not shit like this?

>>4984979
You see shit like this every day and championed by whore mothers everywhere, what exactly is the problem here?

>>4974515
maid, I really wish I knew how to do perspective better.

>>4984993
This is my contour lines beneath the clothes, i really feel like I got perspective right but I don't know.

>>4984997
>i really feel like I got perspective right but I don't know.

>>4984997
I can't critique perspective since I'm not good at it...
But the left leg looks too short imo, and the hand looks too small compared to the left hand head, even if it's further away from the viewer

>>4983473
fuck is there a name for that kind of outfit?
i remember there was a similar one from an old flash game of a loli playing russian roulette

>>4984713
Packing

I been listening to horror stories of pedos. Better dont act on evil,loli drawers

Is it true you guys trace from the real thing? That's illegal and will make you pedophiles.

Just a quick question, what age does this character come off as?

>>4985368
The face tells me like 12 or 11.
Can't comment on the body other than being really thin.

>>4985387
So do you feel like the head and body don't match though?

>>4985394
Yeah.
If you going younger I'd say make the body smaller length-wise.

>>4985445
I had no real set intention, I've just been experimenting with different proportions and trying to gauge their effect on age and appeal.
One more question if you don't mind, are a bit chubbier characters more appealing in your opinion?

>>4985474
Yes. Chubbiness proportional to size to be more exact.

Finished

>>4985499
cute

>>4985499
Based Momokanon

>>4985207
thank you

>>4985153
Is it that bad?
I really am trying

thoughts?

>>4985619
cute
closer to chibi proportions than the average loli though
which is fine if that's what you're going for

>>4985368
>>4985619
are we finally allowed to draw them naked?

>>4985638
No, use cat box or whatever it’s called.

>>4985638
No, that goes against both the general and the board's rules.
NSFW loli / shota is only allowed on /b/.

>>4985635
>cute
Thanks anon. Yes I was looking for semi-chibi proportions, though I feel like her upper-body is too square-ish?
Here's it btw https://files.catbox.moe/0jq2ur.PNG

>>4984997
She is cute. I think the bottom of her body is a bit short. Maybe you could try to foreshortening even more. A wise tip is to zoom out from time to time to discover some of these flaws more easily.

>>4985638
Thanks a lot anon, you got my pictures deleted even though they didn't show anything, just barbie doll nothingness.

>>4985810
Thank you, how do I improve my perspective?
I'm really trying but almost all my perspective drawings are pretty terrible.
Are there any good videos, or books to learn to draw humans in perspective?

I don’t know if I lose interest in a piece or just detect something is broken and am too lazy to figure out what and then fix it.

>>4985635
>>4985732

>>4985843
You should probably do what he did. Draw some cylinders in perspective and get a feel for how the cross section ellipse changes from nearly circular to a flat line as the cylinder rotates away from you, then build forms out of them.

>>4985924

>>4985588
you can really try to eat soup with a fork and people with spoons will do better than you that's a fact, you problem is the way you study you are rushing everything before properly learning something

>>4985924
You can't post the first row on this board fella, censor it, or upload it somewhere else and link it.

>>4985940
Not even chibi nudity is allowed? wow, okay
https://files.catbox.moe/3cputg.png

>>4985929
ok thanks, i was just kinda wondering if there were good guides on doing perspective rather than closer things are bigger and vide versa.
Like things that train you to be an expert at it

>>4985950
That's right. Not even chibi nudity is allowed. They're quite anal about it. They also don't allow photos or realistic paintings of minors or people who appear to be minors. That applies regardless of the actual content, no matter how innocent.

>>4985924
>>4985950
I thought I recognised your first sketch
that's Ambrossa, right?
I'm a big fan!

>>4986022
you're a big fan but not big enough to know the character's name? kekaroonie

>>4986027
Oh... did I get it wrong?
I'm sorry

>>4986029
Bruh. You just got buttslammed! In da azz!

>Bruh. You just got buttslammed! In da azz!

>>4985998
Well there's always perspective grids and vanishing points. Grids might be overly tedious and mechanical for drawing individual limbs, I typically only use them for the "bounding box" of the character.
You don't have to put in vanishing points all the time either, just keep in mind which direction the lines converge in if they're going away from you and keep the eccentricity of the ellipses in mind.
here's an mspaint braindump i just did

>>4985843
Well, Framed Perspective may give you a solid concept about perspective. After that you just need to practique with cubes and cylinders(and why not lolis too?).

>>4986041
>>4986044
thank you
I already do perspective with cylinders and boxes, I'll keep trying though

https://imgur.com/a/6dACWxz

>>4986197
is that the new GI fox loli?

>>4986570
yeah, i feel like i fucked up the face

Draw and post babies

Am I doing composition correctly?
I used the golden ration and planned the bodies limbs and hair around that. Am I allowed to rotate and scale it down like this?
Should I use the 1/3 rule too?

>>4986780
>he fell for the golden ratio meme

>>4986780
learn anatomy holy shitunless you are satisfied with that

>>4986973
I did learn anatomy, I just keep making mistakes it would help if you told me where I went wrong.

>>4986973
>>4986989

I draw as much muscle and bone as i can before refining, this is what it looked like before i got rid of it.
I draw the sketch the anatomy knowledge I know

>>4986994
thats garbage, your anatomy is day 1 beg tier

>>4987001
Oh fuck you. Just because it’s not master class doesn’t mean it’s day 1 beg, either.

>>4986994
Anon, it would help if you sit down and do a serious run through with hampton.

Why though? Its not only you either, I have seen this "mistake" several times in this very thread. The point of loli/shota is how simple and soft they look. If I wanted to see muscles I would go to /bara/.
Imagine how good this >>4986780 would look if only you deleted all the unnecesary muscle lines and the tits lines and then add the very minimum. I will photoshop it to show you in a few hours after I go to the gym.

>>4987179
To >>4986994
And the quote was
>I draw as much muscle and bone as i can before refining

>>4986994
>I draw as much muscle and bone as i can before refining
You know... I think you should try something different here.
It seems, to me at least, that you put too much focus on anatomy and leave the other fundamentals (porportions, gesture) as a side thing.
Idk if that's such a good idea.
The thing is, if you make anatomy be the base of the drawing, it will most likely end up looking stiff, soulless, or both.
To make matters worse, anatomy takes a millennia to become good at, I spend like 5 or 6 years stuck with little to no progress because, whenever I did studies, it was for anatomy.
I mean, things like legs studies, or torso studies, and blah blah blah.
And while there's nothing wrong with improving your anatomy whenever you feel you have a problem, it's never gonna have as much impact as improving the bigger picture itself.
Take it as a different perspective, maybe what worked for me won't work for you, or viceversa.
But I think, especially considering how much time you spend drawing, that you should try out, at least for a few sketches a day, focusing on gesture and proportions.
Take a look at other artists like Hampton to see how they approach drawing.

>>4987147
>>4987186
I tried hampton before, but I didn't really quite benefit from it. I tried figure drawing design and invention.
Should I have tried something else?
Though I'll try figure drawing like you guys suggested. I'll aim for 2-3 hours a day of figure drawing hopefully that's enough.
I can do proportions fine, when it's a standing pose with no perspective, it's when I have to move the body is when I mess up. Hopefully I can fix this problem.
Thank you.

>>4987179
Thanks I'll look at more loli artists and emulate avoid muscles and bones where they do so. I didn't realise this was this big of a problem.

yikes why are people so angry and condescending? Even I didn't receive this much hate when I posted my garbage drawing

>>4986994
Let me guess, what you think anatomy is that it is copying off anime sketches from your favorite porn artist and screenshots off your favorite series. You also disregard everything else with the exception that it contains anime or the material has moon runes which you do not understand anyway but it must be legit because it is from animeland. Did I get that right?

not using lgs photo references = ngmi

>>4987225
>Should I have tried something else?
Well it doesn't have to be Hamptom per say.
Just to be clear, when I first tried his book I dropped it as it "didn't solve my stuck problem".
I guess I was looking for something with immediate results... but it was more of a matter of mindset, and paying more attention to the picture as a whole, rather than the body parts.
I also think it's not just about drawing. I'd say it's good to take a deep breath and carefully look at pictures you like, trying to figure out things the artist is doing that you like. Again, all while focusing on the bigger picture, this is where fundamentals like proportions, gesture and perspective take precedence over anatomy.

>>4987238
What no.
I go through anatomy for sculptors and also go through manga material's anatomy, her guides are really useful.
I copy it down a few times and try to memorise it from different angles until I slowly develop a 3d memory of the body part.
Anatomy for sculptors is a bit tricky so I kinda dropped it after a while but plan to get back into it soon.
That said certain things don't apply when doing anime like certain bumps on the foot don't appear in anime so I have to disregard them.
That said the hardest part is probably memorizing the names. I give them nicknames if I can't remember the body part well like I just shorten tensor fasciae latae to latae.
This will probably back fire though.

>>4987247
Ok, so what exactly should I be focusing on improving when doing figure drawings?
Getting used to natural poses?
Gesture?
Something else?
I've done quite a few figure drawings before but I was just copying with construction and didnt really know what to do specifically.

>>4987288
I think it would be beneficial for you if you made a few drawings a day focusing on both gesture and proportions.
Notice they should only have enough anatomy details to be understandable, because you are trying to improve on the overall body, and thus you should focus on that. You might get tempted to keep adding detail on them, to make them look better and better, but that's not the goal. The goal is to efficiently acquire mileage, so no details.
For the record, I'm this anon
>>4975133
>>4975631
>>4976984
>>4978699
>>4980011
>>4980952
>>4983214
>>4983783
It's up to you whether you want to take my word on advice or not, but I legit think you will find good results if you focus on those two fundamentals for a few weeks at least. Like I said, I spent 5 or 6 years stuck with pretty much no progress, until I decided to accept the fact that I was clearly doing something wrong as no matter how slow I am, no one can be that bad for that long. That's when I decided to start paying more attention to the whole picture, and less to the details.
Idk, I hope it helps, maybe I can find some of my old drawings later on to show you what I mean with stuck, but even if I'm still pretty beg, I have a lot more fun drawing now.

>>4987307
pyw cuck

>>4987313
he literally just did, right in that post

>>4987307
ok thank you, I'll work on them.

>>4986022
Thanks dude. Her name is Camila tho, Ambrossa would've made more sense desu tho

>>4987410
I feel dumb now

I posted this in alt andd got ignored

>>4987656
Hi Cruise. I like the overall mood but girl in the furthest bg looks a bit wonky.

>>4987656
I honestly can't tell where your light source is supposed to be. Pink dress is pillowshaded.

>>4987656
Are you on Discord?

What do Kuroboshi's brush textures translate to exactly?

>>4987968
Yes!

>>4987967
>>4987900
Okay noted! Thank you <3

>>4988054
I always wonder but is there a good place to find sai settings other than google? It always felt like who has the best drug formula and that you need the recipe settings

>>4987968
what discord

>>4988317
There literally isn't that many options, why do you care so much? Most of the time it's literally just changing density.

>>4984993
I tried to improve it, i'm not 100% about the perspective, i might try to improve it later

>>4974515
dog?

>>4974515
read that as dog x catloli at first

>>4974513
how come there was no loli general years ago?
Have janitors soften up or are there more lolifags.

>>4989818
They are allowed now by approval.

>>4989818
biden happened, now loli is accepted in society

>>4989881
I almost spilled my water

My first attempt at perspective drawing, it's Roll from Megaman:
https://files.catbox.moe/4n8z7g.PNG

Is it a good idea to use loli-like jav idols as ref?

>>4990113
>You will never be a cute flat chested petite tomboy

>>4989922
Colored

>>4990178
You have some balls for posting this I commend you for that.

>>4990190
Thanks pimp

>>4990178
I will salute to your sacrifice to bring us nsfw cunny on this thread.

>>4990178
OHH MY GODDD

>>4990198
I can't stop looking.

>>4990195
>>4990198
I was hoping for some criticism tho desu

>>4990229
Stick to the board and general's rules

>>4990229
It is a challenging perspective, but you drew the entire figure completely flat the torso is not a flat square study the planes of the ribcage and pelvis.

>>4990195
this is a good album
I especially like the loctek track and all the bpm changes it has, they somehow work

>>4990313
Based Lolistylegabber fag,
best album for me is still LSG 1, LSG 2 might be a contender tho.

How do I add a taste to my image for people with tongue interfacing?

>>4974515
Warmup

>>4990745
Stiff as my cock.
And no, that's not a compliment.

>>4990752
Pyw

>>4990745
Kawaii
Your art reminds me a little bit of saite

>>4990771

>>4990195
who was the artist of the cover?
i remember he drew a lot of robot lolis but i forgot his name

>>4990778
idk, I also wish I knew who it was because I really want to check his other work. :((
yandex didn't really yield any results.

>>4990242
Thanks dude will work on it

>>4990792
>new ip
hmmm

>>4990798
Not in my home atm

>>4991043
Based mobile fag

Does this look somewhat okay before I move on? Ignore the hands.
Also, where do you guys get such cool ideas for clothes?

>>4981442
The title of this anime is legacy genius and the creator needed an award for coming up with it.

>>4991891
And for those who don’t get it
Angel's 3Piece = 3 is shi in Japanese which combined sounds like CP and the no particle is a possessive so

Tenshi no 3P = Angel’s CP

>>4991238
Not really /int/ but.
I'd add some ever so slightly fat pads to her upper legs and sides of her hips and waist to make her softer and cuddly also I'd gently curve her ribcage on the left side since that's how real ribcages look, your's kinda looks like a straight line, it wouldn't be straight like that unless you're going for a specific style in which case go ahead.
Also remember that humans have scapulas and have armpits, your arm should be connected to the ribcage more. It looks like you stuck it on instead of being connected, I get that it's reaching behind but maybe draw the connections of the deltoid, pecs, lats region a bit or maybe give some hints of it being there to look better.
Also make sure to remember that the skull curves into an eliptical more it doesn't just slightly bend, your head now looks kinda flat with a slight bend, look up real skulls, anime skulls are base on that.

>>4992294
*into an oval more
my bad

I'm not sure if I should just switch to pure moe blob anime

Ponsuke studies

life is cringe

What are you favouriye loli artists?
They don't only have to do loli.

>>4992408
As109 and Diathorn probably, I also like ponsuke but his drawings are kinda derpy, As109 draws subject matter that's wayyy too dark in my mind.

>>4992408
https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/18934609 is my favorite H artist

>>4984486
Amazing

>>4974515
cat loli

>>4992408
minori kensirou

>>4992408
Takamichi
Ooyari Ashito
Range Murata

>>4974513
ok just wanted to say that these threads are the absolute best thing to happen to /ic/ in a long time

FUCK THE NORMIES GET OFF 4CHAN
FUCK THE NORMIES GET OFF 4CHAN
FUCK THE NORMIES GET OFF 4CHAN
FUCK THE NORMIES GET OFF 4CHAN
FUCK THE NORMIES GET OFF 4CHAN

>>4992811
Biden election tourist will own /ic/

>>4992408
Alke. I wanna be like him but for shotas.

make sure your loli does the cun-cun dance

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jjgbAN_SaHg

BIDEN APPROVED THREAD

>>4992408
mochi

Critique it please

>>4993157
BASED

>>4993157
why is the body a paper-thin rectangle. The buildings in the background are more cylindrical.

>>4992294
Thank you fren, I appreciate it.

idk where else to ask but who are some good artists who mainly draw shota? I can only find ones who draw loli stuff. also what Shota Characters are popular to draw?

>>4993157
careful bro you're gonna get rangebanned if you keep dong it

>>4992756
will you finish that comic?

>>4993403
Not sure why people like him can’t restrain themselves. You’re free to post Loli as long as you’re not retarded.

>>4992753
cute but head too big imo.

>>4993472
Honest question, how do I do 4-5 heads lolis without making the head big?
I really don't know how.

>>4993535
not sure man, I'm /beg/ as fuck. usually I end up having to resize the head halfway through cause it's too big/small. References always help of course. Looking at what other people go with kinda helps get an idea of what kind of proportions you should be working with. Usually I try to avoid making the head significantly broader than the torso, and the forehead not longer than half the head. Any larger and things start getting fucky I think.

https://imgur.com/a/ShtYI3V
thoughts?

>>4993921
>https://imgur.com/a/ShtYI3V
Hot

>>4993921
>>4993939
very

>>4993535
Maybe you're drawing the body too adult looking.

What in the actual fuck happened to this place?

>>4993994
Same...
I know nothing lasts forever, tho this general was really brief.
I legit enjoyed the threads while they lasted.
Here's the monthly prompt as a psd in case someone wants to keep it going.
https://workupload.com/file/8brARt6FRrq

>>4994022
Theres still a couple of us, maybe more will join

My comment got deleted... I don't think I broke any rule?
Can I still post the link to the psd? It'd be kind of annoying to make one from this pic >>4974515
as a png file.

>>4994037
https://workupload.com/file/8brARt6FRrq

>>4994022
It is to be expected. Both fag and lsg are slower and less adopted generals, but that’s fine. Only reason why this thread was fast in the beginning was the controversy between both generals and some spillover from shitposters from las.

>>4994037
Yeah, jannies will delete any file suspicious without verifying it just because they can and don't give a fuck about checking anything 2 clicks away

>>4994039
Thanks
>>4994055
>>4994029
At this point I'm not sure why my previous comment got deleted and I don't want to risk a ban, so I'll clear this out and leave.
My problem is not with the thread's activity, but with it shifting towards a porn thread, even tho the original idea was to make it perfectly safe for work.
Not gonna act entitled on it, if that's what anons want so be it, I enjoyed it while it was sfw.

>>4994086
I dont really care since this wasnt a blue board to begin with. I just want the general to be alive and well

>>4994086

It was and still is a sfw general with a loophole of posting offsite for nsfw. Don’t let the idiots who post nsfw anyway sour your opinion.

Although I wish I could do more to encourage better activities here. But im not happy with my current abilities so I barely post my own stuff.

>>4992408

>>4992811
A thread with actual artists giving each other actual advice and posting their work, and constructively taking criticism and being nice to each other.

My guess is it’s what naturally happens when people enjoy the art they’re into.

https://files.catbox.moe/tprcyi.jpg
Thoughts, did I overdo the bottom half?

>>4992411
Diathorn traces 3d models lmao.

>>4994416
I think you made the back of her thighs too fat.

>>4992756
Gib blog

Thank to your advice, guys, I won an illustration contest last week
Thanks!

>>4994605
Congrats anon!

>>4994777
Are you watching the remake? How is it?

>>4994605
congrats anon! do you have a blog?

>>4994605
good job
I found you on twitter compatriota

>>4994777
based rikadrawer

>>4995276
Heeeyyy

>>4995176
Yes!
https://www.instagram.com/manncho_/
https://twitter.com/_Manncho_

>>4994777
Nice cock.

>>4974515
Thoughts?

Hello thread. This is PastebinBro. I had to be away for about a month, but I'm back now. Sorry for the delay.

Are there any resources that were posted that you feel should be added to the pastebins?

>>4995883
Not really
I think I saved some macro links on my other pc, I’ll check later.

>>4996385
Much appreciated. I'll keep an eye out for your post later.

I'm not used to drawing legs in perspective or really anything in perspective

>>4996394
Practice foreshortening and drawing cylinders at different angles. You'll get there friend, just keep going. She's still very cute. What is her hair accessory? A scrunchie?

>>4996403
Yeah It's a scrunchie, I'm more used to drawing faces and not full bodies and w/e.

>>4996409
That's fine. I think a lot of people start off drawing faces and get really good at that so their bodies lag behind a bit... Totally common. It just means you'll have pretty as fuck faces in the future. And it's a cute scrunchie, though I think there should be a little more hair to show the scrunchie is in use. Like a side ponytail.

loli
https://files.catbox.moe/y0e7h3.png
https://files.catbox.moe/3rrs3v.png
shota
https://files.catbox.moe/zruw29.avi
https://files.catbox.moe/4cw9mo.png
https://files.catbox.moe/1fpb8n.png

new thread?

>>4996394
Did a quick edit on the legs, still confused as to how the perspective would work.

new thread >>4996946