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IF YOU ARE A /BEG/INNER IN ART, please use this thread to post pieces for critique or ask for advice. We should not have to make new threads or post in the Drawthread with our fundamental exercises.

POST DRAWINGS YOU NEED HELP WITH

RESIZE YOUR IMAGES TO ~1000 PIXELS:

1.-screenshot the image and post that instead

2.-change camera capture settings to something smaller

3.-send to computer and resize in picresize.com

There's a new (and cleaner) sticky in town! You can see it at:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uwaXKU7ev6Tw_or__o8ARpUb6r2rCZYJGqwSFV9AD98/edit#bookmark=id.15jx3pyuimvj

Take your time, you can do it.

Previous Thread>>4974010

>> No.4977195
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4977195

WIP

>> No.4977196

>>4977195
Not beg fuck off

>> No.4977198

>>4977196
Thanks!
If you need help, I'll be happy to help~

>> No.4977201

Learn to take critique or you'll suck forever

>> No.4977202

>>4977195
OOOOOOHHHH NICCCEEE COOOOOOMMM YOU GOT THERE!!!

>> No.4977204

Sorry, but I'm not going to draw today.
>brb (never ever)

>> No.4977205
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4977205

>>4977182
lol ok. just so you know i literally just began drawing today. i got a tablet as an early christmas gift

>> No.4977210

>>4977205
i know.. its horrible

>> No.4977212

>>4975888 #
You only draw asians? Huh.
Good stuff either way, now that you don't trace i will own the jealousy, especially since all those heads are imagination, that is insane and you should post in /draw/ instead

>> No.4977213

>>4977202
Thank you thank you I try

>>4977205
Keep it up dude!

>> No.4977215

>>4977205
try just drawing one or two, clean lines , no wobbly

>> No.4977216

how long do you normally spend on a piece

>> No.4977249

>>4977216
i wanna say about 10 hours each time

>> No.4977252
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4977252

Third comer sketch tonight I’m done. WILL TRUMP WIN?!

>> No.4977255
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4977255

Trying to draw the whole page!
This was without reference. While it may look obvious to y’all, I think it looks way better that the last w/o ref I did. Anons telling me to draw bigger and to draw with refs actually worked. Anons who told me to stop using pens actually helped me understand shadow and volume better. Thanks /beg/. Any more pro tips would be great.

>> No.4977258

>>4977255
LaffyTaffyman

>> No.4977259

>>4977258
Are you saying they look like a stretch Armstrong and I need to work on proportions more? Or is LaffyTaffyman an artist I should look up and emulate?

>> No.4977266

>>4977196
that IS beg..

>> No.4977268
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I lied now I go to bed.

>> No.4977307
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4977307

finished this, no ref, how bad is it?

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WIP

>> No.4977328

>>4977268
>>4977252
I LIKE THIS.
Patreon?

>> No.4977335

THAT'S IT! I'M FUCKING READY.
Give me a reference. NOW.

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>>4977335

>> No.4977339

>>4977319
Don't take this the wrong way anon, I think your art is beautiful, but you need to work on structure more. Your drawing is stretching and flopping around like a Sakimichan pin-up.

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>>4977335

>> No.4977361
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>>4977340
It is done.

>> No.4977364

>>4977266
no retard

>> No.4977370

>>4977339
yeah i don't know what to do about the structure
It'll improve with time

and by structure you mean anatomy? gesture?

>> No.4977375
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4977375

Hello, /ic/! I wanted to ask for a little help in this arm, is the shoulder alright? is the elbow alright? I know the thumb shouldn't be visible from this angle, but I put it there to be able to construct the hand better, I will delete it later.
All help would work, thanks so much.

>> No.4977385

>>4977361
draw another guy riding the kid like a skateboard

>> No.4977409
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4977409

fuck i always draw the arms too thinn or short... any good landmarks to fix that?

>> No.4977412

>>4977385
I’d prefer a surfer

>> No.4977423

>>4977375
https://mega.nz/file/ZTBVCCjJ#EYZWUQXswpfg1op7-IqwBPQBvRkLGkY7pu6g3YHi-yA

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>>4977319

>> No.4977502

>>4977487
I mean its passable as COOM but work on the planes of your animu faces you're looking like takeuchi right now

>> No.4977509
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>>4977182
quick travis sketch continuing on from my shinobu one since I'm really enjoying NMH

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>>4977509

>> No.4977512
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>>4977509
reposting the travis sketch since i improved the hair a little

>> No.4977537

>>4977195
the legs have different sizes

>> No.4977540

>>4977205
good luck anon!

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>>4977512
>>4977509
sorry, will not shit up thread anymore

>> No.4977544

>>4977307
it have that beg vibe, but I am too beg myself to know why.

>> No.4977552

>>4977409
for the arm length you have the wrist goes to the bottom of pelvis and the upper and lower arm have about the same length. for the thickness it depends on fat and muscle levels

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>>4977487
I hear that you should always draw the hidden anatomy to avoid things like this

>> No.4977573

>>4977307
Another victim of loomis

>> No.4977576

change your systems anon!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=o7w5r5PfBKo

>> No.4977584

>>4977573
That’s not a loomis head.

>> No.4977587

>>4977576
well watching this 20 minutes is just as hard, why don't you tell us in 10 words what it is talking about

>> No.4977591

>>4977587
grug do hard thing make think tank go happy so grug do hard thing gooder

>> No.4977614

>>4977584
>>4977573
>>4977544
checked and shit whats wrong with it

>> No.4977615
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4977615

praised be the sun

>> No.4977620

>>4977487
The face is too pointy.

>> No.4977627
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4977627

I'd wish for someone to redline this. Also, any tips or criticisms. It's supposed to be a meme drawing, but it doesn't feel right. Also, if anyone can make the monster's face seem more like it's being actually grabbed on, I can't explain it right but I think you'll understand. The face is inspired from the bald guy from Brazzers, the monster is a ghast from Call of Cthulhu and the overall pose is a picture from my country's president. Any help would be extremely useful to me, thanks <3

>> No.4977663

>>4977258
WHAT DOES THIS MEAN. GOD DAMN IT.

>> No.4977700

>>4977558
not that anon, but what am I supposed to be seeing? I dont get it.

>> No.4977706

>>4977700
It took me a while to understand it also, apparently it's the leg not being connected to the foot. It still doesn't make sense to me.

>> No.4977731

>>4977700
>>4977706
try drawing the hidden leg, the shape don't make sense. either it is a really thick ankle or it has a really weird bend.

>> No.4977788

>>4977205
Give up you don't have what it takes.

>> No.4977858
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>>4977307
I recommend painting with bigger brush and zoomed out.
separate light and shadow In two vales and add more values to each group after that. try not to go full black or full white either
don't half ass the neck and shoulders. I assume you have practiced painting heads from reference before but pay as much attention to the neck- shoulders too.
Maybe don't start 100% from imagination, say you can have a ref of the lighting/head angle/ hair etc but te rest is from imagination.

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4977891

pain

>> No.4977920

>>4977627
how long have you been drawing

>> No.4977927

>>4977259
>>4977663
HER BODY IS TOO STRETCHED OUT LIKE LAFFY TAFFY
IT'S BEEN 10 HOURS AND YOU'RE STILL NOT ABLE TO SEE THIS BY YOURSELF

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Please help, I've messed around with the proportions so much I can't tell how big everything should be in relation to each other. Is the girl a giant?? Should the car be bigger or smaller?? I just can't tell anymore... PLEASE RELEASE ME

>> No.4977964
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4977964

>eyes
>lips

Anyone got any ideas how to fix?

>> No.4978005

>>4977964
I think the tip of the nose has the most obvious flaw. Maybe you can revisit that to begin with.

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>> No.4978018

>>4977960
you are not respecting your own horizon line. it should be around the girls neck/eye level and you placed it way higher.

>> No.4978021

>>4977964
Love the colors. Eyes and lips seem fine. Two things I noticed are the shading on the tip of the nose seems to want a small tweak to look natural and the hair above the ear, while technically correctly flowing, I think look kind of fluffy/fuzzy compared to the rest of the hair, a bit weird imo

>> No.4978023
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4978023

So i just got two lewd requests on my pixiv.
How should i go with this if im a /beg/? When people ask you for it do you generally do it like raw + defined sketch unless they start asking for colors, shades and the whole enchilada?
How do /beg/'s sell themselves?

>> No.4978056

>>4978023
The sad thing about what you're trying to do is that you're doing it for money. Art is meant to be given, NOT sold. If you're trying to make money off of it, you most likely are doing it for the wrong reasons. Give your art away for free. It's a lot easier to make and there's more freedom in doing so. People are more likely to like your work that way and give you money. If you're succesful, great. If not, at least you weren't in it for the money.

>> No.4978059

>>4977920
As long as I remember. I still don't think I'm taking it seriously as I should/could. These last few months I barely drew anything compared to the beginning of the year. I'm 21 as of september.

>> No.4978065
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>>4978056
shut up crab

>> No.4978074

>>4978023
Ask him and just tell him your a new artist so theyre areas youll struggle with (like say rendering for example) Worse case he'll pay you less but the end of the day its a commission and commissions are fun

>> No.4978077
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4978077

Someone here posted that CGMA Absolute /BEG/ course for free. Man I'm shocked they were charging $500+ for just video courses with critiques.
Anyways I'm gonna try and work through it and see if this sticks. The first week of homework was basically some drawabox shit and then create an image collage which I attached.

>> No.4978083

>>4978056
I'm not telling them to pay off. I'm way too /beg/ to put a price on my shit. I was just wondering how do you sell them when people ask to.
Hell, i even replied to them that i'd do it for fun. Both of the requests are up my alley and probably saw my works hence not much is expected. (Except im going full tism on these)
>>4978074
>but the end of the day its a commission and commissions are fun
That's the best thing for me as i can never get any ideas out except when someone gives me one to draw.

>> No.4978086

I'm taking part in a /tg/ secret santa, and I wanna draw a warhammer 40k theme christmas card/poster. The idea being various characters of the various races in the universive (Human, Ork, Space Elf, Alien, etc) standing around a christmas tree each doing a little thing (Character X giving a present to character Y, character Z opening a present, Character A about to smash character Z over the head with his new present, etc). The problem is im afraid im over ambitious. Ive only really drawn single character in poses, and have never drawn something that sounds that dynamic. I know in a proper piece the perspective of various characters is important, and the only type of perspective I have worked on has been on single characters (Looking up at the character, down at them, on the side, that basis jist). Anyone have tips or good books that I can study to get a better idea of what I should do and aim for the perspective? My goal isnt to have a masterpiece, but something that is presentable, even if it has a few flaws.

>> No.4978088

>>4977891
Are you actually learning how the mannequin works or are you just copying that specific image? There's a big difference.

>> No.4978090
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4978090

I drew this last night. I have no training, no talent, no tools. I used a mouse and paint.

>> No.4978096

>>4978088
I feel like a retard for asking this, but how do I get into the mindset for that? I understand each section of the body is suppose to be a 3D object, and those 3D objects twist and turn based off of perspective and the limitations of the human body. But I feel like as I draw references I don't really understand why a body part or object turns that way and why it looks like that, only that it does.

>> No.4978101

>>4978090
0/10 would not ground pound
draw along with ina on some paper with a pen during her gesture sessions

>> No.4978113

>>4978090
well, at least you know a basic form of how shadows work

>> No.4978115

>>4978083
Ugh, okay fine. But you're still being begged to go commission me a painting of my choosing.

>> No.4978119

>>4977558
Yeah i need to work on feet more, i realised that after i colored, but i had to move on. Next one tho

>>4977502
Yeah you right, my faces need more work

>>4977620
Yeah the chin needs more, i symbol draw that alot

>> No.4978121

>>4977964
Jesus christ calm down on the saturation

>> No.4978123

>>4978101
the only pen I own is a fountain pen that's older than I am, and the only paper I have is a pad of grocery lists that's about two inches wide.
>>4978113
I just copied the shadows from a reference

>> No.4978125

>>4978023
Btw a lot of people send copy pasted request messages on pixiv asking for free art. Its usually a short message or a lengthier one using your artist name. They go around asking dozens of artists daily

>> No.4978138
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Pose good enough?

>> No.4978144

>>4978138
ASUKAFAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGG

>> No.4978147

>>4977927
>>4977927
I WAS SLEEPING AND I DIDN'T LOOK AT THE PICTURE AGAIN. I GUESS THE LESSON TO LEARN HERE IS LIKE WHEN YOU WRITE, GIVE YOURSELF TIME BETWEEN REVIEW AND WHEN YOU PERFORM IN ORDER TO DISTANCE YOURSELF FROM THE PIECE. NOW I SEE WHAT YOU MEAN. SHE IS VERY LONG IN PLACES SHE SHOULDN'T BE. THAN YOU ANON. WHY ARE WE YELLING.

>> No.4978148

>>4978125
lmao
At least the dude that requested doesn't seem like that. Can tell english is not his mother language

>> No.4978149
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>>4978148
Do not give the poorfag anything. Fulfilling his request is enabling him to continue to pester artists for work with 0 money

>> No.4978154

>>4978149
i actually baited him with a cropped (and watermarked) pic of the sketch.
>"Yeah...i dont know when im gonna finish it, bro. I still gotta draw the shading, render some stuff or just leave the thing as a sketch"

>> No.4978158

>>4978154
Enjoy him messaging you 5 times a week

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WIP. Soz for file size I'm at work and resize isn't working.

>> No.4978174

>>4978138
Looks stiff and weird desu

>> No.4978179

>>4978171
Wtf are those doom eternala shoulders

>> No.4978182

Has anybody here tried ctrl+paint? Mainly the unplugged part of the course where the basics of drawing is taught. Is it any good? Would you recommend it?

>> No.4978194

>>4978182
if you never touched a computer its good

>> No.4978196

>>4978194
The question was not about the whole course but only about the part where he teaches to draw on paper, with pencil & eraser, no computers involved.

>> No.4978199

>>4978179
She does a lot of OHP

>> No.4978202

>>4978196
i didnt know they had those, but for beg everything is good if you put in the practice and is learning something new

>> No.4978220

>>4978018
Oh shit I never thought about that. I was just going for the feeling I felt when I went to an island, it certainly felt like the horizon was over there... dam

>> No.4978241

>>4977627
bump

>> No.4978245
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>> No.4978246

>>4977205
Drawabox.com is your friend

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>>4978245

>> No.4978253

>>4978245
Why would you draw a body so correctly only to put those eyes on it.

>> No.4978256
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4978256

How is this type of shading achieved?

>> No.4978257

>>4978256
a pencil.

>> No.4978271

>>4978154
>messing with a crazy autist on the internet
dude nothing good will come from this.

>> No.4978288

>>4978245
beg as fuck, but it does convey the idea tho

the biggest problem is the face, are you trying to emulate a specific style? because it is easy draw something good if you do.

keep drawing anon!

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4978305

>>4977964
Not much about the eyes and lips the nose and the ear could use more attention if you ask me.

>> No.4978318

>>4978253
blind leading the blind

>> No.4978345

>>4978245
It feels like you didn't even try to feel the actual form. Watch some figure drawing lessons on youtube. Proko, Watts Atelier, whatever else, these are great channels for that.

>> No.4978359

>>4977615
Lemon D

>> No.4978366

Is perspective and gesture the two key things to know when trying to make dynamic poses?

>> No.4978372

>>4978366
anatomy too

>> No.4978381

>>4977788
sug ma dick. i am used to painting not this digital stuph

>> No.4978403
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4978403

Recent studies

>> No.4978413

>>4978253
That body is not correct

>> No.4978416

>>4977423
What is this file, bro?

>> No.4978418

>>4978416
trojan pony

>> No.4978420

>>4977964
The ear is a little bit blurry, the colors, while tasty, are a tad bit too saturated, particularly the hair, tone down the saturation by a bit or put a contrast color as a background and it'll be perfect.

>> No.4978422

>>4978288
Nah, I just drew a generic anime face without much thought. But what's wrong with it?

>> No.4978423
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4978423

100% imagination sketches for a character

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4978433

>>4978018

>> No.4978437

>>4978433
obviously fake, water is not black and white

>> No.4978438
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4978438

How does Akihiko Yoshida does that shade exactly? (the various lines) Is it always a black color or depending on the base is darkened from that color?

>> No.4978444

>>4978438
Get a color wheel

>> No.4978457

>>4978444
I wish i knew what you're talking about.

>> No.4978461
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4978461

Started to learn acrylics

>> No.4978464

>>4978461
you paint people with jaundice?

>> No.4978465

>>4978464
I wasn’t going for realistic colors

>> No.4978471

>>4978465
i like it, looks like my altmer character back in morrowind

>> No.4978474

>>4978246
>Drawabox.com
thanks

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4978485

one day i will clean up a sketch into a finished piece, but that day aint today

>> No.4978499

Is there a good resource for brickfaced women? I need to draw a butterface girl but if you look up women 99% of the time they'll basically be models ore at least average.

>> No.4978505

>>4978499
https://www.peopleofwalmart.com/

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4978526

I've recently been trying to find a method of drawing that doesn't require me to use references so constantly. Also I'm still trying to find a style idk how I'm doing though. I think I'm refining a process though considering this took me a few minutes and before it would've probably taken me closer to an hour or two. I want to create a style that's different while having elements of what I like and part of it for me is countering a lot of the cuteness/waifus I see in a lot of drawings nowadays. That stuff is cool but I want to do something else. I'm not used to a drawing tablet so I need to navigate that too as you can see

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>>4978526
Here's this as well

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4978537

>>4978526
Here's this as well

>> No.4978543

Is writing how many drawings you did in each piece pretentious? 1, 2 3 etc

>> No.4978545

>>4978543
i don't understand
printmakers have numbers in their prints because they're a number out of a series of the same print, ie #2 of 30 total prints

>> No.4978552

>>4978422
the eyes are too high and too far apart, they look flat and don't conform to the planes of the face because the face don't have planes. the nose became too long because the eyes are so high. the forehead is minuscule. the hair lacks volume.

>> No.4978553

>>4978438
sepia pen, probably watercolor

>> No.4978555

I drawed good said mommy

>> No.4978556

>>4978366
also composition, if you are the one coming up with the poses.

>> No.4978569

>>4977591
that was more than 10 words

>> No.4978574
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4978574

>>4978505
someone needs a redline

>> No.4978576

>>4978574
Kek

>> No.4978579

>>4977858
dang yours looks way better than mine. fun you bring all that stuff up because i had a ref of tons of lighting situations for portraits but i didnt bother looking at it

>> No.4978633
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4978633

How do I think in 3D

>> No.4978634

>>4978633
Should I just make my characters out of literal boxes until and fill those in until my brain finally comprehends a bean is a 3d shape?

>> No.4978649

>>4978634
Drawing in 3d is more about simplifying complex forms into simple primitives. So yeh boxes good, but also cylinders, spheres, etc. Prokos course on anatomy is literally just that

>> No.4978654

>>4977255
Is her leg broken bruh why does the foot bend up like that

>> No.4978681
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4978681

my faces are all ugly but i don't know why

>> No.4978745

>>4978485
Beggar's cope, the dirty lines are there because you're too beg to choose the good lines

>> No.4978751

>>4978681
Ear is too far back and something about the jawline seems off.

>> No.4978757

>>4978681
Huge brow ridge + time brows, makes it look unappealing.
Also study the planes of the head.

>> No.4978760
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4978760

is this an effective way to study?

I've been focusing on practicing cylinders and line exercises on paper, as well as gesture drawing and perspective studies.

how do I know im ready to move on to the mannequin type study?

>> No.4978762
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4978762

>>4977328
None. Sorry.

>> No.4978763
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4978763

>>4978760
I always forget

>> No.4978779
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4978779

kinda half-assed the wrinkles, but overall what do you guys think /beg/?

>> No.4978781

>>4978779
yes keep going

>> No.4978785
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4978785

I feel like once you know how bad you truly are and you start learning the fundies, drawing in an anime style (especially heads) is incredibly fucking hard unless you're doing minimalistic cute shit like pic related

>> No.4978796

>>4978681
https://youtu.be/bjbgeGhn_Lg

>> No.4978801

>>4978796
i don't understand

>> No.4978812
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4978812

>>4978796
Stop trying to critique using memes fucker, this doesn't help anyone

>> No.4978817
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4978817

Here is my latest piece, watercolors, alcohol, and oil pastels, only a bit of tinkering in digital.

>> No.4978823
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4978823

>>4977182
I'm trying to simp to the furries and its not working tell me what's wrong with it anons

>> No.4978827

>>4978823
not a furry but bad snout
snouts are like rectangular prisms on the face

>> No.4978828

>>4978823
more boobs. more skin, sell your soul and yiff it up

>> No.4978838

>>4978828
sound advice

>> No.4978868
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4978868

>>4977182
i call it the consoomer of worlds

>> No.4978873

>>4978681

https://i.imgur.com/uevGT1a.png

sorry im a beg, idk if this helps but, more eyelashes, shadow on the cheekbone on the left should be more round, ear a bit too big smaller seems more delicate, neck i think too thick for a girl, moved the eyes slightly closer together, jaw a bit too big for the proportions also could be a bit more femenine, and i guess you could wear a hat like that but it makes it seem like her head its bigger

>> No.4978960
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4978960

>feel horny before bed
>start drawing instead
It’s all in the discipline

>> No.4978963
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4978963

Made something

>> No.4978978
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4978978

Trying to be a coomer artist. Any feedback?

>> No.4978994

>>4978978
ROUND

>> No.4979002

>>4978978
Please learn how the face works, there is a huge disconnect between the body which you used a ref for and the face which is a flat misaligned mess.

>> No.4979014

>>4978978
Is it some sphere fetish?

>> No.4979016

>>4979014
mmm yes SPHERE

>> No.4979021
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4979021

>>4977211
You only draw asians? Huh.
nah just wanted to practice. what race should be next?

>> No.4979024

>>4979021
native american indian

>> No.4979027
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4979027

I’m gonna go sleep, any feedback would be appreciated!
I feel like her shoulders are too broad or maybe her noggin is too small, I don’t know! Capture sure was a pain in the ding dong

>> No.4979028

>>4979027
nose maketh me uncomfort

>> No.4979034

REFERENCE. NOW.
GIVE ME THE REFERENCE.

>> No.4979041

>>4979034
The FUCK are you talking about

>> No.4979042

>>4979041
GIVE
ME
THE
REFERENCE

>> No.4979043

>>4979027
nice lineart, very hot
add dripping salvia to her tongue and it's perfect

>> No.4979048

>>4979042
Shut the fuck up you're making me nervous I just took my benzos

>> No.4979086

>>4979014
Its a god damn chair

>> No.4979110

>>4979021
African Americans circa 1970s

>> No.4979236
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4979236

Any problems with anatomy before I go any further? I think the arm/hand looks weird, not sure why though

>> No.4979241
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4979241

>>4979236
>take my strong hand!

>> No.4979252

>>4979236
weird foreshortening i guess?

>> No.4979253

>>4979236
Yeah, hands and legs look disproportionate, also where does her right hip start from?

>> No.4979267

"Start where you are. Use what you have. Do what you can."

>> No.4979278
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4979278

inb4 gross furry porn idgaf just tell me if beg or not

>> No.4979298
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4979298

Still learning acrylics

>> No.4979366
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4979366

I just wanted to draw cute anime boys getting fucked by hot dudes but my drawing skills isnt there yet. pls /ic/ im desperate. pls tell me what can I do. pic related is what I have done so far but I feel its off

>> No.4979374

>>4979278
>tell me if beg or not
Face appeal is definitely still beg
Other than that, move on.

>> No.4979406
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4979406

I don't why people keep telling me to do figure drawings, it's a good warm up but I don't get why I should still this to improve. The only things I guess I could do it to make them more proportional and use less strokes.
I don't know how this is meant to make me improve

>> No.4979410
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4979410

>>4978552
Thanks anon, I tried again with you advice in mind and here's it.

>> No.4979423

>>4979241
kek

>> No.4979441

What are some crutches one should get rid of as early as possible?

>> No.4979443

>>4979441
all of them

>> No.4979444

>>4979441
third party critiques of basic fuckups.

>> No.4979445

>>4979443
can I get a comprehensive list?
all I know is to not hide hands and not limit myself to the 3/4 perspective

>> No.4979461
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4979461

What am I doing wrong with these poses, they feel off.
Middle and left used a reference, right was imagination, but Im gonna keep looking for a fitting reference and try to redraw that again
Im very /beg/ also, started 2-3 weeks ago. Finished fun with a pencil, Been following the Proko drawing course and occasionally the loomis figure book.

>> No.4979464

>>4979461
Why the hell is it when I post a request asking for help I start seeing my mistakes, the same shit happen on /tg/ for mini painting
Rights hips are too tall, right? The 2 left are the same level but right is way too high

>> No.4979466

>>4979445
use reference, keep in mind eye level at all times, figure drawing everyday, sketch, sketch, sketch, learn fundies first to avoid losing time with bad habits

>> No.4979473

>>4979445
draw feet, too many artists (like me!) neglect learning to draw feet and it really stands out in a full body piece

>> No.4979489
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4979489

What feels off?

>> No.4979510

>>4979489
if you knew fundies you would know

>> No.4979513

>>4979278
begging to be put in a gas chamber maybe. but not /beg/

>> No.4979516

>>4979489
ballz instead of pussy

>> No.4979538

>>4979366
Read this "How to Draw Men Muscle" >>4955988
and this https://exhentai.org/g/1439988/6607c46407/

I am gonna stole your OC and post it on /y/ OC thread.

>> No.4979544

>>4979538
*steal

>> No.4979565
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4979565

Somehow managed to find a nice groove where I can sketch in a relaxed manner and get way more satisfying end results. This feels good bros.
Need to work more on actually refining and finishing pieces but as long as I don't feel like breaking my pen in two while drawing I count it as a success.

>> No.4979583

>>4978023
I'm at a weird point where I'm not /beg/ enough that I can see mistakes in basically any piece of art unless the artist is a god, but that means I see enough mistakes in my own art to really hesitate to call myself non /beg/. If people like your art, they will pay for it. People will pay me like 50 bucks to do something that takes me an hour and a half. You just need to find your audience, and if you've been noticed enough to get a rando asking you for a request then you're on your way there. >>4978056 is a fucking idiot and probably thinks that McDonalds employees should be happy they're even getting minimum wage because they should be happy to help people.

>> No.4979588

>>4979461
>>4979489
It's all in the gesture baby!
Good gesture is better than good anatomy! Practice that gesture and you'll get it!

>> No.4979601

I tried proko/Loomis method for drawing the front view of the head, used a measuring tool but still ended up with a weird very masculine looking head with a super wide neck. Why?

>> No.4979603

>>4978978
People are shitting on you, but you genuinely have potential here. My advice to you is to draw from life, but to also study how people who draw in the style you're going for are drawing the type of thing you're trying to do, otherwise you end up with something like >>4978245. I recommend looking at websites like imagefap because a lot of nude model websites have very static and uninteresting poses, where imagefap has a lot of nude cosplay stuff where the models are in the type of poses you wanna do as a weeb coomer artist, which I'm assuming you want to be since that's Tsunade.

>> No.4979614
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4979614

>>4977182

>> No.4979622

>>4979601
use reference, make adjustments until it looks like the reference.

>> No.4979647

>>4979622
Shouldn't I figure out why I can't follow the guide properly?

>> No.4979673

>>4979588
Thanks dude

>> No.4979690

>>4979647
it's because you're a /beg/ and you can't use your eyes or your hands properly.
combining construction methods with a concrete reference helps.

>> No.4979693

>>4979647
>>4979601
Try tracing the head a few times to get a feel for the form, then try copying

>> No.4979709

>>4979601
probably proportions

>> No.4979738

>>4979410
that is a lot better.

I would add a little more of mass to the hair cause that dent is make it look like she got headphone hair. also I think that the way her eyes are drawn suggest that they have different shapes in the front view.

>> No.4979745

>>4979410
Never fill in hair like this again or I’ll suck your dick
Look up references of art you like and imitate it

>> No.4979755

>>4979461
you drew the body too straight. the ribcage and the pelvis have a natural inclination even when standing straight

>> No.4979762
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4979762

rabbut?

>> No.4979764

>>4979614
he is about to fall

>> No.4979766

>>4979762
nice butt

>> No.4979776
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4979776

What’s the point of decaf coffee

>> No.4979785

>>4979776
taste?

>> No.4979791

>>4979776
For people who hate caffeine, but still like the bitter taste.

>> No.4979797

>>4979785
In my experience it tastes very bad, I’d rather drink hot cream and water

>> No.4979799

>>4979797
crazy how different people have different tastes right, i love latte macchiatos and dont drink them for some caffeine, they just taste good

>> No.4979807

>>4979799
I guess. People who like diet soda do exist too
Soda is kinda bad overall anyway

>> No.4979842
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4979842

>> No.4979852

>>4979776
>is coffee good for you posting outside of /v/
Im in hell

>> No.4979891

>>4979852
We’re here together forever

>> No.4979900

>>4979755
Thanks

>> No.4979903
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4979903

>>4979042
>>4979034
Heres your reference.

>> No.4979925

>>4979776
is that a shadow on her eyes?

it is too dark and big and dont conform to the shape of the eyelids nor the eyes and if the light was in a position to cast a shadow like that the eyebrows would be the one casting a shadow

>> No.4979928
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4979928

Tell me what is wrong

>> No.4979929

>>4979928
not using hard round brush

>> No.4979936

>>4978823
The snout looks like Lois nose

>> No.4979942
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4979942

>>4979925
Forgive my incompetence anon
I think I want to draw something that focuses on heavy breasts leaving a wide space in the center of the chest
>>4979928
Too much airbrush

>> No.4979951

>>4978245
her right leg is too skinny

>> No.4979956
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4979956

>>4978751
>>4978757
>>4978873
thank you all for the feedback.

took the asaropill, made her look more feminine, fixed ear, fixed brows, hope i fixed jawline

>> No.4979958
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4979958

>>4979903
no homo

>> No.4979960

Can someone please help me understand the Asaro - Bucci cheekbones, I don't know how to do them?

>> No.4979964
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4979964

>>4979958
BASED

>> No.4979967

I do not feel like coloring any more
I want to sketch endlessly

>> No.4979972
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4979972

Daily Athena. Just watched a ton of mega Mikey videos.

>> No.4980003
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4980003

>> No.4980005

>>4979764
?

>> No.4980076

>>4980005
he is out of balance

>> No.4980093
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4980093

>>4978785
That's why I never drew.
You don't have what it takes.
Give up.

>> No.4980097

>>4979776
i like ur style and i wish i had it. how long have you been drawing friend

>> No.4980102

>>4978574
WORT WORT

>> No.4980112
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4980112

Booba

>> No.4980117
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4980117

>>4980112
Booba

>> No.4980118
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4980118

>>4980097
Jan 2019

>> No.4980121

COOMERS OUT
YOU HAVE TO RESPECT THE HUMAN FORM NOT FETISHIZE IT
WHY WOULD YOU LEARN TO DRAW JUST TO MAKE PORN
DEGENERATES

>> No.4980124

>>4980121
IM GONNA START DRAWING DICKS JUST TO PISS YOU OFF NOW. FUCK YOU ANON.

>> No.4980127
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4980127

>>4980121
WHY ARE YOU USING ALL CAPS ALSO THATS NOT TRUE, I STARTED LEARNING THE BEAR BODY SO THAT I FEEL COMFORTABLE APPLYING CLOTHING ONCE I LEARN THE BODY BETTER SO IM NOT HANDICAPPED BY NOT KNOWING THE NUDE FORM
I LOVE DRAWING WHAT I DRAW AND WILL CONTINUE DOING SO NO MATTER HOW MUCH PEOPLE COMPLAIN

>> No.4980130
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4980130

>>4980093

>> No.4980131
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4980131

>>4980121
PLEASE CRIT

>> No.4980132

>>4980127
BEAR BODY != LEARNING FORM
YOU CAN DRAW NUDES FROM A TECHNICAL AND ARTISTIC PERSPECTIVE AAAGGGHHH
>>4980131
LOOMIS

>> No.4980137

>>4980132
Hey I’m on week two of the figure drawing class
Just wait and see when so I draw healthy forms

>> No.4980139

>>4980132
IVE GONE THROUGH MOST OF HIS BOOKS BUT I HAVENT FOUND THE CHAPTER ABOUT DRAWING BIG THROBBING DICKS

>> No.4980143
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4980143

>>4980131
Use reference

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4980151

>>4980130
Just do, accepting the inevitable is the true path to salvation.
I decided that I didn't have what it takes and neither do you.

>> No.4980156

>>4980143
thats gay tho

>> No.4980158

>>4980143
Nice cock bro

>> No.4980161

>>4980156
Doesn’t matter. If you’re afraid of looking at real cock then you’ll never get better at drawing them

>> No.4980166

>>4980143
wtf? doesn't it cause gangrene?

>> No.4980168

>>4980076
Oh's hes standing on someone but I was too lazy to detail them so its just a figure

>> No.4980169

>>4980166
if the penis is hard then there is blood flowing

>> No.4980173

>>4980151
My joy outweighs my reason, You cant stop me

>> No.4980175

>>4980169
it means that it is full of blood, but it doesn't mean that the blood is flowing

>> No.4980179

>>4980166
Since when do gays care about health

>> No.4980186
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4980186

>>4980117
Booba

>> No.4980210
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4980210

>>4980173
You chooseth this fate of your own free will.

>> No.4980212
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4980212

>>4980186
Booba

>> No.4980213

>>4980118
inspo, thanks bro

>> No.4980253
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4980253

WIP!

>> No.4980262
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4980262

A3

>> No.4980291
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4980291

Been studying the bucci course but the cheeks and the jaw are quite hard, any help?

>> No.4980296
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4980296

I did a bit more of the proko anatomy course and practiced a bit of gesture drawing and tried redrawing the post on the right, Im much happier with it.
Is it normal this took me about 2 hours to do though? I guess I struggled a lot but seems like a lot of time for a sketch of 3 characters

>> No.4980298
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4980298

>>4980291

>> No.4980303
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4980303

Remember to collect inspiration
>>4980296
Yep it’s normal to take a while when you’re new to drawing stuff. You definitely get faster the more you practice. I remember an anon saying a simple colored pose piece took him around 10 hours or so, that’s how it goes

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4980314

>>4978247
goddamn its so much harder than thought
I shouldve sketched the basic shapes out

>> No.4980315
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>>4980212
Booba

>> No.4980377

>>4980253
I like it. the face is very cute

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This is more a /beg/ question, but what materials would you need to use to reproduce pic related in such vivid colours as the original on paper ?
i was thinking of doing a fineline for the sketch and black shading while using gel pens for the colour, would this be the right way to go about it ?
its the first big project i want to do, recreating the cover art in my own book but with even more vivid colours.

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can someone explain this to me. he keeps changing from box to oval when he makes the body. does he use both, do you guys use both?

morpho book

>> No.4980442

new
>>4980441
>>4980441
>>4980441

>> No.4980450

>>4980210
And I'm damn glad

>> No.4980695

>>4979603
Thanks for the feedback. Actually i have a 30 gb reference archive i got from /t/ some time ago. My main problem i think are the faces. They always feel like 2d compared to the rest of my drawings.

>> No.4980954

>>4979278
her poor peepee hole

>> No.4981513

>>4979690
Okay but I'm literally following the measurements. I tried it again and just get the same issue.