/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4939571
Pera (Paradox) is a pedo.

>>4939586
I don't know who that is. Why don't you go back to your containment general?

>>4939571
Shitty op image

>>4939629
>I don't know who that is
>Why don't you go back to your containment general?
Then how did you know that?

>>4939646
Because dad retards always bring the drama about pedos out of their general.

>>4939665
Sure pedo (lsgfag).

>>4939586
>>4939670
And what if that guy is?
Has he hurt children?
Do you make profit off going after people for what they're naturally attracted to regardless of them being actual criminals/predators?

I was fucked in the ass for most of my childhood. You think you're defending people like me for going after loli artists? Well let me tell you you're wrong you fucking piece of shit. I would strike your head with a hammer until it completely explodes into pieces if you were in front of me. Let them draw let them draw let them draw whatever the FUCK they want don't ever pretend to be playing justice warrior ever again you fucking PIECE OF WORTHLESS SHIT.

>>4939571
Reposting from tail end of last thread

>>4939862
wings aren't noodley like that.

biggest project ive ever done, taking a break from it rn so good time for crit

>>4939571
Self portrait in watercolour. Sorry if its sideways. Fucking phone.

art from the last week and last draw thread now with color

Fundeees

>>4939914
Is this Bammes? If so, are you reading the text too? Not sure how to approach that book. Proko said he had the German version so it doesn't seem like the text is necessary but idk

>>4939911
Your art is super cool. Kind of mignolaesque. Did you do those cool illustration of ufc 253?

>>4939902

I have no idea what I'm looking at. Where is your focal point? Why is everything saturated out the ass?

>>4939911
your work rocks man
thanks for sharing

>>4939931
i saturate my colors to do lineart and then darken them and shade for a focal point

>>4939920
I understand the text.
And i have to say, that he approach not jsut tellin'about the mechanic but it is also written on a superintellect manners.
Most of the text is teaching you how to behave as a teacher and teach anatomy, to be confident while drawing infront of your student, eg..
But as I said it is really too much text which just complicates the whole act of drawing.
The construction on the other hand are good.

>>4939639
buttblasted.

>>4939902
As one anon said before...
you have no resting point - there is no story involved, it seemslike too much is happening at one time.
The guy down there is running while looking ath the fight, so what's the main-focus? The guy running a marathon or the mechs trying to have sex ?
Also maybe crop the image, there is space in there just for the sake of widen the image.

>>4939838
Don't care, didn't read. Almost all pedos eventually act on their impulses, so I enjoy harassing them.

>>4939952
will keep this in mind for when i return to it

>>4939942
I see, thanks for the insight. Your drawings are amazing btw

coming from beg

>>4939919
I just google the expression I want to draw.
I don't always follow the ref 1:1 though, I try to change the age, angle, race, lighting, or mix a few into one

>>4939910
I thought it's kennedy

>>4939968
>begtards will say this is beg

Rate my art

>>4939838
>i was fucked in the ass for most of my childhood

>>4940032
just post wherever you want dude, these followup posts are embarrassing.

>>4939968
>>4940032
just call shitters who don't post work cringe and disregard them it's great

>>4939920

I'm >>4939914

It is bammes and I don't read the text. The diagrams relay everything you need. They're great

>>4939927
definitely mignola, yeah ufc stuff here's other recents woop
>>4939933
cheersanon

not sure if i will finish this one but feel free to roast me lol

>background color bleeds through lineart
Holy shit NOOO! How can I fix this?

>>4940192
Soulful
>>4940239
She kinda looks like a mannequin(stiff pose and strange face) But I like your choice of brush.

Already posted this in the /alt/ thread but posting it here for critique.

>>4939902
>biggest project ive ever done
>taking a break
>its just a bunch of jumbled lines on flat colors
Stop being a lazy faggot and finish what you started.

>>4939894
He's not drawing a swan retard.

>>4940270
All avian wings follow the same principles you troglodyte.

>>4940316
The client wanted metal wings attached to an armored flightless bird man. The birdman, the suit of armor, and the guitar were the given starting ref.

Whats up /ic/
the drawing on the left was one i post here about 3 weeks ago and on the right is one after i grinded fundamentals for hours every day since then.
was wondering which areas still need improvement.
in what ways am i still lacking?
thanks a lot!

>>4940328
To add on to what I was saying

>>4940316
>>4940270
>>4939894
While I get what you are saying about the wings is helpful and accurate, the client already agreed to enjoy the way it was setup so I've been spending most of the time translating 2d pixels to something that could be more based in reality. I'm more concerned on figuring out the best depiction of talon hands playing a guitar while angled upwards and then adding the requested rainbow wing effects for the client. I had us go through some reference together for a few different wing types but he let me choose in the end and I kinda liked the aesthetic from SMT accented wings.

Turd polisher anon checking in.

Horsey

>>4940192
Loved how you capture the likeness' of the fighter. Been meaning to draw izzy myself. Are you trained?
This is mine, can I get some constructive criticism?>>4939910

>>4940244
photoshop or CSP?

Looks like you are using the selection+paint bucket to fill in your lineart. Whats happening is your lines have soft edges. Meaning at each edges of your line there are transparent pixels. The selection+paint bucket tool sees that these are occupied pixels so they are not selected. However they are not full opacity pixels so the background bleeds through.

In photoshop there is a setting to expand the selection by [x] number of pixels. CSP has an area scaling in the paint bucket settings. Or you can manually color underneath your lineart with a full opaque brush, whatever you find easiest.

>>4940489
I use procreate but yeah, it was selection + bucket
I had to paint underneath, lines are super thin so fuck
soft edges brushes are bothersome :|

>>4940161
ah, cool to know, thank you.

Good drawings

>>4939911
Very nice work. Saved. Update on this.

>>4940192
based as fuck

>>4940091
4.5/10, not awful but not good yet

>>4939862
I know wings aren't noodley but I think it works. It does make him small looking though. Also I'm glad you didn't work on the left leg, because if he's posing it the way I think he is, it's too short.

>>4939902
Leave it wide angle. I don't know how good your rendering is but may make a good wallpaper.


>>4940239
The way you coloured the legs make them look robotic, not stocking like. Her big skirt is going to shade them.


>>4940369
A flush more green would make them look more real and less like plastic

doing color tests before i work on the drawing itself more.

>>4939571
Make anything op image these days huh

>>4941494
pyw

>>4941491
also working on a collab with my gf. she did the linework/drawing. I'm working on the color/lighting etc.

Tried experimenting with gradient maps for the coloring. Thoughts?

>>4941957
Your rendering/tones are a bit all over the place. I'd set some time aside to do long figure poses, or painted studies, something like that.

>>4941957
I love your drawings queen.

>>4939571
Update from last thread. I think it's basically finished.

>>4942010
Are you the same kneelposter I see everywhere? I see you on every board I browse.

>>4940352
I dunno anon I think they are both on the same level, not bad but just keep grinding. In 3 weeks dont expect to see a difference, you will start to see that in maybe 6 months to 1.5yr depending on how often you study

What do you think of this style? Trying to combine and simplify shapes as much as possible, and remove as much line work as I can. Also can you spot my anatomy mistake?

bludbawne

>>4941491
>>4941942
Your stuff is very cute.
Still working on this.

Should finish this one today for an album art comission... but its just so cluttered. I tried opening up the bottom of the horse ghosts cloak to open up the composition more but I might just close that down. Not sure my halftones are helping either. I'd appreciate any advice!

Drew a Vampirella. Used Angelina Jolie as a ref.

>>4939571
my attempt

>>4942376
Your style gives me fucking aids

>>4942467
poast werk

Got a light box. Want to do the moving /draw/

>>4942065
is he right tho are you a biofem...tis very cool to see!

>>4941957
just a thing to note, the reason you see a lot of red faced drunks in anime is cause chinks don't have a specific gene for liver/alcohol metabolizing properly, so they get a slight allergic reaction from it. An old founding father or British poof socialite would most likely not have the red face effect, and furthermore the powder would hide it anyway.

That said, amazing drawing my queen if anything I'll be the one in the kitchen

Hi, so i think the rendering on this looks weird and the piece looks kind of confusing. I think zooming out a little and choosing a better angle and shapes would've helped with the confusion, but i dont know what to do about the rendering. Should i just exercise by painting the materials i want to represent (which would be mostly metal in this case) or what? Also, do you see anything else that could be better?

A sketch I did just now to test the colors and directions for my collection

>>4942428
ngmi

>>4939862
I finished the skelly bar; I was thinking of a title for the nameplate for awhile, I endedup thinking of a silly painting then the title after. I wish I could of kept it a bit more consistent but I wanted to have fun with it too.

>>4939902
Finish it faggot, beats grinding loomis heads all day in the long run.

>>4943540
your inconsistent values make all your paintings look "dirty"

>>4943547
Good it looks ether that way.
>>4943540
Looks great.

>>4943540
Looks great man, love the painterly style.

>>4943966
>>4943773
>>4943547
Ty lads, mighty fine third eye hound

I fucking hate leggs, is there any advice on how to fuckin draw them
How Ironicallythat it's my favorite body part and i have no clue how to draw them

>>4942376
>>4942467
Reworked the lighting, got the line work out, fixed the jaw. I hope this is less AIDS. Thanks lad

Didnt get any replies in the /trad/ thread so I'm posting it here, critique appreciated

made something this weekend

>>4944329
If you want replies the best way is to insult someone else's work, or claim your work is better than it actually is.

You'll get alot of shitposts calling you dunning kruger but it almost always baits someone to give a detailed critique as to why your work isn't as good as you think it is.

Anyways I like the energy of the piece. The character is very vague though, is it a knight, a demon guy?? He doesn't contrast with the background at all. You chose you put a grey block the same color and value as your character and he just gets lost in it.

Working on this.

>>4944329
Finish it nigger.

Trying to do some character studies. Took about 4 hours to draw. I'll slap some color on it tomorrow.

>>4944146
It is not so complicated to understand the most basic way to simplify the legs, they are just two cylinders (simple: straight; complicated: curved). Then what will help you most is to study anatomy, doing stylized things as in your case would help you know well in what order to put the lines. I leave you a quick drawing I made so that you can understand a little better what I mean (I just started with digital drawing, sorry for not being so precise). Understanding well how to visualize things in three dimensions, knowing which part is in front of which and with a simple shadow you can describe relatively well any part of the body.

>>4944704
i probably wont ever watch the show
but ed might be worth it

>>4944146 >>4944977
By the way, your drawing would look something like this in a simplified way

>>4944986
I just realized that the gluteus are bad, this would be something a little more accurate

>>4944761
More progress on this.

>>4945419
Yo this is shit is lit af, color it.

>>4944979
Do it man It's so good

>>4944146
It's funny.. if you focus in on it that's obviously a male ass

>>4943205
Fucking neat

Can i get critical ass-sistance with this drawing i'm working on? I'm making it for a coomer who really likes a videogame. Any suggestion on where i should put her shoulder? I want to try to keep her little lip bite but i sort of like the shoulder hunch too.

Also any good clothing refs for pants hanging off a foot?

>>4939894
>>4939862
hows this lookin

>>4945763
massive improvement

>>4939571

Hi, not sure if I can technically include this collage. I used to draw a huge amount as a preteen, was pretty good for my age, but took up writing instead as a general creative medium through which to build reputation in from teenage years and into young adulthood...

Really not good at visual art. Many publications and a debut book with creative and academic writing however, so I think I am creatively inclined enough to start drawing to actually get good. Even though it's a bit late to just take up a new passion. Maybe not. I don't know. Not saying all this to brag; just kind of curious how creative capacities / inclinations / "talent" / studious training actually translates between medium.

>t. diagnosed schizo /lit/izen.

>>4945794

Ah! HERE -- SORRY I FORGOT TO ATTACH.

>>4945795
... Everything used whatsoever in the collage is OC though.

thoughs ?

>>4940779
awesome

>>4942808
nice garfelf

>>4944874
Came out nicely. I have that ref saved too and planning on drawing it soon.

>>4945454
Tongue should come up straight and then bend/curve down. Her tongue come out like an erect dick which looks unnatural.

>>4945763
The perspective on the guitar is way to extreme, compared to the eagle man.
Notice how smaller the head of the guitar's bridge is compared to it's base, even though the guitar is at most a couple feet in length, and then notice how both wings are more or less the same size, even though they're like 20 feet apart.
Basically, the width of the bridges should not decrease that much due to perspective.

>>4945795
Cringe.

>>4946354
Thanks man. Im still trying to figure out how to go about rendering without painting unnecessary detail that i could just imply. I'll avoid zooming in before coloring next time.

>>4945454
More progress.
>>4946357
Ehh too late for that. But thank you.

>>4944757
you are right, it does not pop out from the background, will have to redo the square in a different colour. thank you anon. It is supposed to be a robed figure / demon / shaman kind of thing
>>4944329
You are right, it needs some further work. Was scared of messing up the background because I liked it a lot. Thank you as well my g

>>4946706
this post was meant for >>4944757 and >>4944784. Excuse me doublepost and thank you guys

Not sure where to post this, but what are more traditional ways of learning to draw?

I mostly lack self motivation but do pretty well when told what to do.

I was gonna take a art class here at my college, but I might gradate next semester, and I don't want to pay 900+ dollars to take the class while adding additional stress to my semester.

Anyone know many possible alternatives ?

>>4947096
There's no secret sauce. I tried doing a art class once and i regret it dearly. The teacher was retarded and went on about decolonizing art and that everything is beautiful and all techniques are dated and should be discarded. Try finding someone willing to mentor you instead, assuming you are good enough for that. Otherwise just grind. All resources you will ever need is here, free on the internet.

>>4947116
That's the thing anon, I do better in class room learning than working on things by myself. I did sorta research the teacher, and he seems to be a good teacher.

>>4947346
Well it might be good then. But I'm assuming that you're a burger so don't put yourself in dept for the rest of your life to have a fat retard with purple hair tell you to smear menstrual discharge on a canvas. Always remember that getting good will be demanding, it's not like learning a new subject where you can absorb information during a class and be done with it. Mileage is key to success. Good luck friend. We're all gonna make it.

>>4939911
very, very cool anon

>>4946348
thank you

1. What is the easiest " perspective even a retard can learn " book

2. Not that it would salvage this abortion, but how do you use a ruler tool in CSP for ipad

>>4947547
Retards never learn perspective anon

>>4947588
damn, foiled at every turn

>>4940369
based good shit

>>4939911
make a comic book

I did a small portrait painting of a ferret. I wanted to keep it rough yet still feel finished. let me know what you think.
>>4947487
super solid studies. the head tilt on the guy at the bottom left is really charming, too.
>>4944329
pretty cool, though the figure gets a little muddled. the grey background obscures a bit too, maybe try going crazy with the chiaroscuro like in a Frazetta painting
>>4946713
I like the look of it, but it feels like the background and the character were drawn by two different people. I'd simplify the background or give the guy the same rough treatment the background has

>>4947487
csp? What pencil are you using?

>>4947899
I adding a shadow on the critter's eyeballs will add much more warmth and depth to it's eyes.

>>4947899
real cute.
>>4947952
rough pencil.

>>4947899
Your art is really cool and oddly doesn't give off that furry vibe you see in most stuff, have you ever considered making a kids animal book?

>>4947994
what's your settings? opacity, pressure, density, etc.

expressions digital

>>4947899
Beautiful man. My subjects seem to be mostly dark and gritty but your stuff always seem to lighten my mood. I really admire your brushwork. How does your technique look like if i might ask? All my stuff are rendered with an opacity brush from a mid tone so it's quite easy to figure out if it's mine. It's probably not very optimal.

portraits

I haven’t done the full background yet. I’m planning to make this bigger, and make it look like he’s in hell or something.

>>4948340
Outstanding,man !

Reminds me of 'em old paintings from the renaissance. Keep it up!

>>4947487
do you do any art that isn't studies and looks like a textbook? show me some soul anon, let me see some art you do for fun

>>4948427
you should color these

>>4939955
>I enjoy harassing them.
Why won't you go to the right place then? A whole thread of them for you: >>>/v/529218196 . It's like this draw thread, except "artists" are retarded.

This user claims to be both autistic and underage: >>>/v/529222408 . Still not banned.

doodle

imagination sketch from yesterday
I doubt I'll fix it

4948428

Am I feeling the form? Is this sexy?

Got hair rendering, skin smoothing and line removal to go but any feedback is welcome!

>>4947994
Why does he have spikes for hair? Is he trying to be a hedgehog?

>>4948482
I believe that may be Naruto. Naruto does have spikes in his hair. Actually a lot of anime characters do.

>>4947899
One mistake: ferrets don't look retarded.

>>4948496
Nice colors

>>4946098
As though.

>>4946555
That's not art, that's junk a.k.a. kitsch.

>>4948487
Thankfully this isn’t an animé board.

>>4948435
Here's a doodle anon

>>4948521
beautiful thanks anon :) now i won't ask again what brush are you using and what settings

>>4948527
Rough pencil in csp, disabled pen pressure on size. I don't know if opacity pressure is on by default by I have it on.

>>4948535
took me about two months to get my answer but finally thanks

doodles

>>4948535
damn i love this brush thank you, sorry to be annoying but do you also use it to shade?

>>4948591
Yeah.

>>4948695
based thanks, now stop drawing anime shit you fucking weeb

Everything I draw feels stiff

>>4948807
Do those 2 minute gestures.

>>4948815
woah

>>4948821
nice bro

>>4948911
is this the schoolism digital painting/landscape workout thing? I was thinking of buying it, would you recommend it?

>>4948944
yes it's that course
too early for me to say since I'm only 7 days in, but I recommend it. easy enough to follow and low daily commitment (~1hr). it's a painting demo everyday, goes over some theory but only as it is applied, some photoshop techniques and pointers on painting. if you paint along, it may take >1hr to digest what he's saying

also it's all in photoshop, but if you use csp like me, csp can open his psd files and you can find functions similar to the ones he uses. may take a bit longer because of that. have not tried other programs

for reference, pic related is what I was painting along with. none of what he's painted so far is exceptional *imo but there is greater focus on speed, method and ideology. it's not as thorough as his 'design with color and light' but at least i can paint along with this one and not fall asleep to his ramblings.

>buying it,
anyway its on cgpeers and in the ic torrent, you can get it and try it out for yourself

>>4949047
i think the character lighting looks out of place in the environment

could use a smaller value range and play up the rimlight so the silhouette reads better wdyt?

>>4949253
that's a bit too extreme, i prefer the original. in yours nothing stands out at all, maybe 50% between the both would work

Practicing face construction and shading. I think her eyebrows might be too high.

Any tips on drawing hair?

>>4949264
Wtf, why do photos always upload sideways?

>>4940091
>posting someone else's art as yours
the file name gave you away retard

Working my way out of a slump, starting stuff is so hard

>>4949267
I think it's something to do with the phone's rotation settings/sensor. Try editing/cropping the picture, even just a little bit, and save a copy. That's worked for me so far

>>4949253
I think you need to lower the light level in the background for that to work. The silhouette disappears completely in the thumbnail.

>>4949348
I like it anon but good lord downsize your image. Also, do more dune shit.

>>4949348
>>4949264
>4032x2269
>2905x3649
Stop posting from your phones please. Read the OP post:
>Please make sure your posted image is clear, downsized to around 1000 pixels wide, rotated to the correct orientation, and that any unused space is cropped.

If you care about critique, put some effort into your presentation

>>4949356
Thanks, though less than a megabyte is more than small enough for 4chan, I already put it through an image compressor once since the original photo was almost 2 MB.
Unless you mean I should have cropped it better, which I would disagree with. If I cropped out the rings on the right it would have been to tall an image for my tastes

>>4949366
Read >>4949373

>>4948496
Woof looking good.
>>4948454
Saved.
>>4946555
Finished this. It was too big to upload here.
https://www.deviantart.com/onlyfansart/art/Villainous-Dementia-animated-858649913
I’m working on something new.
>>4948506
Pyw.

>>4949373
>>4949380
Yeah but downsize the image resolution so that it's at least under 1500 pixels wide, man

>>4943540
>>4945763
Went back to Octopus letter today

>>4949421
too many /beg/s on these threads lately, and I say that being a /beg/ myself

I just finished pic related.

Feel free to roast me bros, I feel like there's something off with the eyes. I tried to retain the OG creators artstyle while injecting my own so that might be it, or my own autism.

>>4949578
I think you shrunk the left eye instead of cutting it off with the nose, I do the same thing. left side of the lip feels little taller than the right.

dumb color practice

>>4949553
Yeah, i was just looking for feedback

/beg/ wasn't give any and i dont know where to go.

>>4949542
I was feeling some more octopus energy; I bounced the idea off a friend over a blacksmith octopus utilizing hydrothermal vents and some pistol shrimp to help him shape the metal.

>>4949585
Kiiind of, I can't really remember but I do remember individually isolating the left eye and editing it at one point senpai.

And yeah I just realized I kind of goofed on the lips SHIT

>>4949889
Honestly I'm better at octopi and can admit human faces are a weak point for me, so I hope I'm not baiting you with bad advice ;W ;

>>4949915
No worries brother, thank you for the advice regardless Based Hito

(nice octopus btw ayy>>4949879)

>>4949928
Gonna make me teary breh

Paint tool frog dude.

>>4949253
Not to necessarily disagree with other anons' take but I still like your paintover. It has a nice feel.

>>4949421
Did you trace the lines anon? They're too well done for someone who doesn't understand how a sphere works. Understand what you're rendering. Split it up into clear shapes with straight lines. Google asaro head. Find 3 values, 2 at the mid range (one could be the same value as your background one a bit lighter but not too light). The other value is your shadow value, this will be way darker then your midvalues but never black. Use a scale of 3 values to begin with. Find faces with dramatic light setting, stop painting female faces, just go jerk of instead. Female faces are many steps above anything you should be currently working on. Also, good luck anon. Mileage is the key.

>>4950130
pyw

>>4950133
>>4949264

>>4949578
ear is tilted wrong way

>>4950133
Why are you pissed of anon? It was sincere. You need to take one step at the time or it's going to be demoralizing. Working on fundamentals is easier when the subject you are drawing is more forgiving of mistakes then a female face. I do really wish you luck.
>>4948340
>>4947364
>>4944874
and more to come

>>4950133
One last thing, maybe one day you'll be able to get to my level (my work : >>4949348
>>4949264 )

>>4950154
Stop pretending to be me fag.
>>4948340
>>4947364
>>4944874 Those are my character studies.

>>4950057
Sometimes it feels like you're just copying mike mignola. I like you're work, but it sometimes doesnt read well because of that

>>4950403
>feels like you're just copying
Ahhhh another symptom of envy and projection.

>>4950161
dunning kruger

Daily practice

>>4950142
That's not your work, bucko.
t. the guy who actually drew that

>>4950614
not bad anon

>>4950403
yeah mignola is a huge influence, as much as i'd like to be a copycat of him it's really hard to do. here's an example where i actually copied him

>>4950570
Not everything is an attack dweeb

portraits

>>4950657
Looks nice. Very faithful rendition. Are you trained or self taught? What I mean is, i like your stuff, but sometimes it feels like you have learned mignolas graphical language and use it to Express ideas. I feel like I used to do this (not that I'm particularly good btw). But please dont take offence to this, just conversating

This is my first digital drawing. How do you all like it?

pulse check doodle between studies

and the studies

sketches

>>4950130
thx for the feedback, anon!

(original anon here)

did upside down igor out of curiosity, was much more challenging than I expected.

>>4939571
Trying something new, but still working on it.

my daily face, am i good enough to post here yet?

>>4951192
>>/beg/

>>4951421
but why though? whats wrong with it?

>>4950812
Very nice.

>>4951451
If you can't see what's wrong, >>>/beg/
I'm not the anon you quoted

>>4951488
well yeah i know i cant see whats wrong thats why im asking for help so he could tell me

>>4950829
Your forms aren't definite enough yet for rendering. Work over your drawing in multiple layers, adding secondary and tertiary forms. Don't think of details as just loose shapes you put on the big forms, they're each forms in it of themselves. Treat each form with the respect and attention it deserves.

>>4950780
thanks anon self taught i just study artists i like, mignola is a huge one, i like tom fluharty i like bill sienkiewicz i like jason latour, many more, i like to think i capture some of their influence when i draw stuff. definitely using more blacks these days than i used to.
2020 v 2015, amazing how little i've progressed lols

r u sure they're executing at a

>>4951546
not him but also a huge fan, hope you keep posting your stuff

>>4951639
I didn't comment the first time you posted wips of this but I thought this concept was actually super funny when you explained that it's about CSGO flashes hahahaha
That completely neutral expression is so accurate too

How i doing?

i can't do anatomy
so i filled the the entire canvas

>>4951782
Based 1340

Quick doodle

Trying to paint properly after realizing that I've been relying on simplified anime-styled technique for way too long. How am I doing with this so far? I think her face looks a bit artificial, could this be due to the round brush? (Only used textured brush for bg).

>>4951782
Thumbnail looks good, need to double check the eye's proportion imo.(maybe its the triangle beside her eye)

>>4951510
I do these sketches on one layer with minimal corrections on purpose. Just quickly pump out gestures in perspective from imagination.
I didn't intend to render these, just added some psuedo core shadows for stylization.
Thanks for taking the time to critique regardless.

>>4947899
What brush did you use?

Okay, my line work is trash, I’m referencing an image for the body - to see improvement, should I be aiming for exact replication and high polish, or more quick and loose studies?

>>4951639
Damn, what’s the mental process you use on this? Pale constructive linework, or just jumping into values and shapes? So sculptural and beautifully textured. I really dig this anon, well done

>>4951809
That ain't me

>>4952004
Yeah, should learn how to do proper facial anatomy

>>4952118
love this shit, and the thumbnail looks great

>>4951773
Haha thanks man!
>>4952136
Thanks for the compliment. Process is somewhere in between the two you mentioned. Carefully mapping out structure and shapes in the under drawing and then working dark to light, trying to focus on values.
Recently been using scraps of paper to maintain hard edges, building up paint in layers, etc etc

This is my first digital drawing. It’s gonna be the cover of mine and my friends book we are making. How is it?

Forgot to color the knife, here

>>4952538
>>4952543
post these in /beg/.

>>4950161
Why the fuck would you take credit for something like that? What's the point?

>>4945615
No responses so i assume i'm doing something right, other than fucking up the ATV.

>>4952595
I don't respond to or critique coom art. I'm pretty sure a few other anons do the same.

>>4952608
Fool! Coom art is the foundation of /ic/. If there was no coom there would be no /ic/.

>>4952581
Wtf who does this? Why do people gotta go full sociopathic in a draw thread of all places. It has to be mental illness at that point.

>>4952621
susioupath

>>4952550
?

>>4952608
I was wondering if I was the only one who did this.

>>4951782
looking at this genuinely made my day better.
Man, I fucking love art

i've got a really good feeling about how this one is coming along. i feel like i'm gonna make it

>>4939571
I fucking hate whoever made this painting into a gookette

>>4952595
erotic soul

>>4951782
erotic soul

>>4942794
KLINK BOI

I'M so jelly of yall
I don't know what to draw, or what am I going to want to draw once I'm gud:tm:, I'm kinda going with landscapes when I have free time
but somehow my hate for normies make it hard to make a commitment to studying humans
Any advices on this? How did you figure out what do you want your art to be about?

>>4952114
I see, sorry. I guess that crit was more for myself than for you. Even so, its good practice to try to be as precise as possible, there are some errors in overlapping in the primary forms that shouldn't show up in sketches (example, the dude's left arm)

>>4953027
i'm more fine artist than illustrator or w/e so maybe my advice isn't as applicable but best advice I heard was "paint what you know, paint what you love".

>>4952707
awww thanks dude!

>>4937582
Redid this from scratch. Still wip.

>>4953184
I'd try and keep my pencil sharper. Will give you more control over values and smoother textures. I'd check the neck again btw

>>4952118
You are a legit soulposter. Do you have a blog?

>>4953233
I'll try keeping my pencils sharp, thanks.
>I'd check the neck again btw
You mean proportionally? I checked vs the reference and I don't see a huge difference. I did get the shoulders wrong though.

Background for a personal animation. Yes I know, I'm another Mielgo wannabe

Working on something new.

>>4953254
thanks broanon, ig is pineapplemikel

>>4953368
Legitimately sexy

>>4952983
Perspective is all over the place but great colors and composition.

jut out of curiousity, for those of you who regularly post in the draw thread, can you draw directly? (with no construction lines) How long did it take for that to happen and how capable are you when you try to do that?

>>4953834
Sometimes when I've drawn it a couple of times before I don't need construction, but if I do a pose or a subject for the first time I do construction because I rarely use reference.

>>4953834
only way I can draw. if it's reference i eyeball approximate proportion. I am too retarded for construction. I like caricature a lot, so imagination stuff's off more than anything else, but I like it

>>4953834
>>4953879
By the way I don't post my work in this board regularly, didn't read the question properly lol.

>>4953883
wow, that's really good

>>4953879
>>4953885
damn, i always need construction, even if I've drawn it before

>>4953889
nah but thank you, I'll try to get there some day

>>4947899
I did another painting. I tried to be a little more ambitious but I don't think it turned out, any advice is much appreciated. mostly I think the drawing is bungled quite a bit, and the brushwork is fairly crude
>>4948340
thanks, I'm just experimenting a lot with my process so I don't really have a nailed down technique yet. I think we go about it very similarly though, blocking in large opaque shapes and then adding in smaller details with a transparent brush afterward.
>>4947956
thanks, totally forgot about that

just some practice

>>4953902
where can i find more of your art?

>>4951639
screen painting

>>4952983
progression, fixed some perspective, still feeling good

>>4954569
blog? i recognize your style anon

>>4954865
Much better. Perspective is still off for the giant in the distance.

>>4954895
oh yeah fuck that guy. also, thanks for the feedback

>>4951782
i'm a bit late on this but i can't seem to locate her crotch
i think you should study the hip area for a page or two

>>4949879
progress

>>4942428
Pretty good anon

>>4954962
I like it a lot, I have no crit on your technical skill, but maybe the composition could be more interesting/lively? Especially if its supposed to be like a pub or a restaurant with customers and stuff.

At the beginning stages of into hatching/rendering figure drawings, pretty shit still but a big improvement for me. .

Did a study of some Korean girl

New:
>>4955531
>>4955531

Some ink practice ..part of the inktober actually .could use some opinions/critique

>>4948821
i love this