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previous >>4876682

What is /ALT/?
If you're looking for a place to post your cartooning then you've found the right general. This is /ic/s 1st and only merged hub where both Eastern and Western stylization can coexist peacefully, hence the double title. However, by community demand and long history, this is favorably an Anime general.
>Rules & Guidelines
(1) Any form of cartooning is welcome; so submit and receive feedback from others. (2) Please resize your images before posting. (3) Share your knowledge and (4) Remember to not be afraid of asking for critique. Most importantly I encourage you to keep discussion at a civil level, but you're more than welcome to share your opinions.
>I came for anime. Why does the image OP say cartoons general?
To distinguish from the anime study thread (janitor supported). Please post your studies there and personal work goes here.
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>> No.4891826
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I posted this toward the end of the last thread. it's just supposed to be a small character drawing. let me know what you think and if there's anything I should work on

>> No.4891841

>>4891819
There were so many better artworks posted in last thread. Is OP intentionally trying to turn this into /beg/ 2.0?

>> No.4891861

>>4891841
pyw. I guarantee it's worse than op

>> No.4891875

>>4891826
Can't think of much besides clarifying the forms of the shoe/foot and the vest. This is some very solid cartooning, very dynamic

>> No.4891880

>/beg/ OP pic
this kills the stagnate attention whores

>> No.4891893

>>4891826
it's very western-looking. Idk if that's what you're after.

>> No.4891896

You fags drive out everyone. This is why Kyle and Firez left.

>> No.4891898

>>4891896
Oh look another cancerous fanboy reveals its festering head.

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>> No.4891974
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ah... it's ok anon... just keep drawing

>> No.4891983

>>4891974
who are you talking to?, sick drawing anon, i would like to see something more finished

>> No.4891984

>>4891983
idk, last time I got called a weeb and a turd polisher

>> No.4891986

>>4891974
Based schizo anon

>> No.4892019

>>4891841
Which one?

>> No.4892022
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>>4891896
Imagine staying here once you start getting paid. Imagine dealing you disengoues bafoons after making it.

>> No.4892054

>>4891974
>>4891972
very cool.

>> No.4892082

>>4892022
There are professionals that lurk here and post sometimes, you know... Sometimes to help, mostly to shitpost and tell you guys not to do your fundamentals.

>> No.4892091

>>4891898
Seethe more crab.

>> No.4892197

>>4891841
OP is deliberately doing it to piss people off, because he is a child. Just ignore him.

>> No.4892203

>>4892022
I would do it, why not? Its fun

>> No.4892354

>>4891896
Those are shit tier artist, fanboy.

>> No.4892358

>>4892197
Nah, i’m doing it to give more diversity for /alt/ op. You shouldn’t be all pissy that your work wasn’t picked as op, anon.

>> No.4892365

>>4892358
Diversity... In quality? You're genuinely retarded.

>> No.4892490
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sum sketchies for my comic.

>> No.4892498

>>4892358
The only time I've posted my art to /ic/ was years before /alt/ ever existed.
I'm a neutral 3rd party that can smell your faggotry from a mile away.

>> No.4892599

PYW AND SHUT THE FUCK UP

>> No.4892602

>>4892490
Comfy, what is it going to be about.?

>> No.4892609

>>4892599
Go ahead, then.

>> No.4892614

>>4892609
I did! Twice

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>> No.4893131
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im an animator mostly but i want to start making comics, how hard is that transition?

>> No.4893138

>>4893131
In my experience, almost every animator has great fundamentals, but they rush the panels. Just work on your composition and don't make the drawings sloppy focus on the strengths that you already have, flow, dinamism, weight.

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>>4893138
Awesome, that's great advice actually. Also, do you think that I should get a feel for what is popular or interesting in comics right now (visually and narratively), or should I go off and do my own thing? I worry that if I learn too much about "comic meta" or whatever you call it, the zeitgeist of what's cool right now, I'll be influenced by that too much and make something boring and derivative, but I also don't want to accidentally rehash an idea that's already been explored.

also here is some more illustrative sketches I've done recently

>> No.4893186

>>4892602
Trolls n stuff

>> No.4893229

>>4892354
Pyw subhuman

>> No.4893255

>>4893131
post ur animations I wanna see

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Thoughts so far? Trying to get better at drawing characters interacting

>> No.4893269

>>4893266
Fuck off

>> No.4893270

>>4893269
why so bitter?

>> No.4893289

>>4893131
Expanding on what the other guy said, you may have trouble composing an illustration, because your brain is trained to think of an image as a still of an animation rather than a scene of its own. Just keep in mind that a panel or drawing doesn't have to just be a moment in time, and instead should focus on
communicating an idea, even if that means fudging what parts of an action happen at the same time and in the same place.

>> No.4893381

>>4892490
forgot to say that I really like these a lot, so much character in the linework here it makes me wanna see what it's about, even though I hate fantasy stuff usually.

>>4893289
more great advice, I haven't gotten anything this constructive in years, thank you. I just recently found "Making Comics" by Scott McCloud at a thrift store and I remember hearing that it's a great resource for starting out. I also have read "framed Ink" and that had some great ideas about composition, but its been a long time since I read it and should probably go back before making this comic. Any other resources I should look at that would definitely help with this? maybe I should just jump in and learn on the way, I feel like otherwise I'll just be stuck learning theory forever and never actually start.

>>4893255
one sec I will when find something worth posting lol, for now here's the characters I wanna draw about. probably gonna mess with the designs a little more

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>>4893381
fuck I forgot the image lol

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trying out a lot of interacting elements. I know the anatomy is shit, but it was fun trying to get every character to interact with at least two other characters and see how many I could do

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>>4893266
Anything major I should change/fix before moving on?
Also ...c-cute?

>> No.4893664

>>4893382
That red guy is getting too covered,you shouldn't cover a character face. keep in mind the tangents

>> No.4893700

>>4893619
It's alittle cute.

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>>4893704

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>>4893706

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>> No.4893752 [DELETED] 

>>4893706

a few fixes, some of the anatomy still doesn't feel quite right on this one

>> No.4893754

>>4893664
could you redline the tangents, I actually don't see what you mean. It's intentional that she is being covered a little, she's covered and her face is in shadow to make her more mysterious(this isn't supposed to be a character lineup, its just a drawing of them together). Also she's a girl, idk if you can see the fat tit poking out of her jacket a little

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>>4893706 (You)

a few fixes, some of the anatomy still doesn't feel quite right on this one

>> No.4893774

>>4893394
its good! super dynamic stuff

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Looking for feedback; does this face look weird? Like the position of the eyes?

>> No.4893901

>>4893619
Bro, ngl this is kind of gay

You might be a faggot

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wub a lub a dub dub

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>>4893707
the bench, the background, the foolr all blend togetter, the easier thing may be adding some more texture to the background.
>>4893858
cute

>> No.4894073

>>4894068
yeeees that's what i'm talking about, good shit anon

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I’ve had this idea for the longest time but was scared to try and draw it lol

>> No.4894234

>>4894195
Holy fuck i forgot about roller skates. Some major shit is about to go down.

>> No.4894322

>>4894195
Wtf is going on with her pelvis? What do you use for construction? Or are you going straight into inks?

>> No.4894324

>>4893177
As a general rule for any creative shit, especially writing, you need to consume a lot of media just to keep yourself motivated and to steal shit. It's not a problem if you are influenced, it's actually good, as long as your own story develops in logical manner. Also if you are making a story always stick to doing what you like as keeping motivation over long term will be very hard otherwise. Even money sometimes is not enough of an incentive.

>> No.4894327

>>4893859
Beside Indians being generally gross, the eyeball on the right is bigger, almost like his eye socket was bigger, when you close your eyes, the eyelid wraps around the eye, but the roundness doesn't change.
Also the pupils aren't aligned

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>> No.4894573

>>4894195
Blog? I really like this

>> No.4894579

>>4894560
Getting better, fag
The norasuko influences are too much tho, but if you wanna be a complete style copycat be my guest.

>> No.4894605

>>4891826
blog? looks neat

>> No.4894656
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4894656

Pretty fun game

>> No.4894671

>>4894656
What is that about and why is everyone not shutting the hell up about it?(I know I can google, but I prefer you guys' opinions)

>> No.4894770
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>>4893619
grrr line art so slow, go faster! Just the embroidery details on their clothes left!

>> No.4894779

>>4894770
I will never understand women's love for this kind of period. At least the French Revolution itself is fun to read about.

>> No.4894785

>>4894779
i dont understand women in general

>> No.4894786

>>4894779
Because women are retards

>> No.4894795

>>4894779
Men wearing fancy costumes, make-up, and less social stigma about male-on-male contact combined with much more social stigma about homosexuality, which makes the homosexuality that much more exciting when they read it into every single interaction between male characters, which they will do because they are women.

>> No.4894813

>>4894795
>and less social stigma about male-on-male contact combined with much more social stigma about homosexuality
Go to Africa for that, men hold hands with other men for real, but if they find out you're a true faggot they give you the burning tire treatment

>> No.4894836

>>4894779
>>4894795
It's almost creepy the way you read in to things way too much, it's really not that deep lol. I just like historical fashion in general and I picked 1750s for this one because I like the clothes and wigs:( Also I was listening to some violin concertos from that time period and that kinda inspired me

>> No.4894850

>>4894836
post armpits

>> No.4894859

>>4891826
the pose doesn't make any sense. why are they brandishing their bow like that while looking downward?

>> No.4894906
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>>4894560

I redid many things
what do you think bros?

>> No.4894919

>>4894327

Thanks, thought it looked off but wasn't 100% sure what it was.

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>>4894770
Finally finished! Thoughts?

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thoughts?
i really struggled w the clothes here

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>>4893707
>>4894068

still pretty cluttered but I think this is an improvement. not sure if the clouds help or hurt

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>>4895192

>> No.4895245

>>4895006
Do you have webbed fingers or something?

>> No.4895251

>>4895245
What's that supposed to mean?

>> No.4895261
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working on some chars for a graphic novel

>> No.4895265

>>4895261
Nice! What's the story?

>> No.4895317

>>4894906
Ok, now that you're at it, improve your colours

>> No.4895319

>>4895192
I like the could, but I'm not sure, your call anon

>> No.4895320

>>4895261
I want to fuck the edgy girl

>> No.4895424

>>4895265
It's called Roadkill, it's gonna be a series of vignettes about friends that drift apart after college, that only intertwine with their memories. Each story is loosely based on how people struggle to be human and connect with each other in a technological society idk lol

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>>4893394
Reminds me of some mickeys i drew in 2018

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>>4894234
Im very excited for you
>>4894322
Wtf I put in so much consideration into the construction, genuinely thought this one would've been decent. My bad ;_;
>>4894573
Thank you anon! i'm beholdnika on instagram and twitter :D

>> No.4895643
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wip, how can i better the shading?

>> No.4895650

>>4895251
Every character you draw has webbed fingers, so I wonder if that's just because that's what you're used to seeing.
Webbed fingers, doughy faces and bodies, and huge noses.

>> No.4895666

>>4895650
weird, never really thought about that. Guess I'm just bad at drawing hands.

Yeah dude my muse is the pillsbury doughboy.

>> No.4895678

>>4895650
sorry for samefaging but how about a redline? If it's not too much to ask for.

>> No.4895779

>>4895006
I'm begging you just start drawing anime faces I really want to like your stuff

>> No.4895799

>>4895643
First you need to be good at perspective, after that read scott robertson's how to draw and then scott robertson's how to render. GL

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am I gmi?

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>> No.4895972

>>4895876

Probably, if you keep at it

>>4895882

Dat ass

>> No.4896014

>>4895006
really gay
blog?

>> No.4896025

>>4895261
blog?

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headless horseman :)

>> No.4896054

>>4896047
these colors are gross

>> No.4896088
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I tried to draw some lips on this character, they always seem out of place usually. I assume because the style is so simplified, drawing full lips make it look to busy

>>4895876
yes, absolutely

>> No.4896095

>>4895799
thanks for the pointers on what to study. can you point what's wrong with this one? that would help out a ton

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hi

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>>4891819
Fighter practice.

>> No.4896602

>>4894195
The body looks really awkward near the stomach and pelvis. Like you can see what she's bending for balance but it just looks like she's so squished and has Disney Princess proportions and ended up getting completely smashed in the process.

Penwork is fucking good though, but maybe work in some body construction.

>> No.4896630

>>4896602
Don't bother, she doesn't listen to any advice. She only comes here to shill her art.

>> No.4896676

>>4896088
I think that the jaw sits a bit low making the character a bit masculine. However maybe you are going for the androgynous look, in which case you succeeding.

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tried sketching a jet, original design

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sketching planes, original design. normally i make a 3 view before fancy angles

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brain is gonna bleed before i think of new stuff to draw

>> No.4896973

>>4896838
I really like em, just fix your edges

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trying to come up with a consistant style. I want to begin making animations so I'm learning to simplify the body into simple shapes

>> No.4897206

>>4891841
Yes, he’s admitted this before in a previous thread.

>> No.4897359

>>4895513
very cool :D

>> No.4897417

>>4896178
looks like dogshit

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>>4895195

>> No.4897524

>>4897518
I like it a lot anon, nice realism / mystical vibes, good details as well, love the snail

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moaur claunz

>> No.4898528

>>4897028
Cute, also reminds me of Skullgirls' art

>> No.4898533

>>4897860
Face looks like Gary Coleman.

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>last reply 9 hours ago

>> No.4899466

>>4897524

Thanks! going to make a few changes now that I've slept on it and given it another looksie but I'm still pretty happy with how most of these are turning out. Just over halfway through the deck.

>> No.4899812

>>4899291
>2004 was 16 years ago.

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Aside from the obviously asymmetrical eyes (I drew the right one without looking at the left one and only noticed the problem two seconds ago), what could I have improved here?
This was a commission, the client paid me $30 and gave me a Death Note image and his + a friend's selfie as reference, and said "make it anime as hell."

>> No.4899925

>>4899291
Most of the degenerates(furries, loli, etc.) now have their own generals so all that's left is little lol.

>> No.4899969

>>4891826
i think the pose would've worked better if the weapon was some kind of melee weapon.
the elbows could use some work too

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>>4891875
>>4894605
>>4894859
>>4899969
thanks, I tried doing another drawing with some more foreshortening. I gave a little more thought to the practicality of the pose as well
>>4891893
I've been doing some studies of anime recently to help my work feel more lively, but I'm not necessarily trying to make it look a certain way stylistically. what are some things that make it look western?

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>>4900245
that dagger in his right hand looks like it's made out of rubber since it's bending
it doesn't feel like his left arm is connected to his sleeve, i think you should try and hide a bit more of the sleeve
the folds on the right side of his body should be dragged by the raised shoulder rather than folding horizontally. pic related
big thonkin moment here but i'm not sure if your character is a girl or not. he looks like he has tits
>what are some things that make it look western?
the face in the first pic looked more western, i think it's because of the black irises, the nose and the large mouth. the hair in the second drawing looks more stereotypical anime: seems like a generic haircut you'd give to your protagonist. i'm sure other anons will be more helpful than me in that regard

the pose is a lot more interesting here and your drawings have been fantastic so far, even with all that being said. keep it up anon, i love you <3

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The work on my comic continues.

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>>4900398

>> No.4900419

>>>4891672

did this neverr get finished =/

>> No.4900432

>>4896676
well, he is a man.

but i don't know what you mean by this:
> jaw sits a bit low

>> No.4900438

>>4892827
That's so adorable.

>> No.4901030

>>4900398
Not bad.

>> No.4901074
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4901074

drew my wife

>> No.4901240
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4901240

How're the proportions?

>> No.4901354
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4901354

>>4897518

>> No.4901397
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4901397

Which color palette? I kind of like C, but I’ve been wrong every time, so I’m guessing anything but C

>> No.4901433

>>4901397
i like d most anon, a is also great

>> No.4901439

>>4901397
I like A best but C and D are nice too. great art btw.

>> No.4901479

>>4901354
very cool delta

>> No.4901537

>>4894671
Among us is basically like town of Salem but in space with astronauts. You have a max of 10 people and anywhere between 1-3 people are imposters (you can choose how many people and how many imposters if you host lobby), you have to find out. It’s really fun, I thought it would be FoTM garbage but even I liked it. I think you should try it if you can, 5 bucks on steam and free on mobile.

>> No.4901545

>>4895876
>>4897860
make nose smaller

>> No.4901553

>>4901397
B brings the most focus to peach because of the color contrast while all of the others makes it hard to focus on her. D is a close second though.

>> No.4901939

>>4901397
D or B... A isn't bad either tho

>> No.4901944
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4901944

>>4897518

>> No.4902009

>>4896477
>>4896840
Really good

>> No.4902084
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4902084

>>4900282
thanks, I tried doing another drawing. I don't have much time today so it's more basic than the others. I see what you mean about the sleeve, although I was looking at the ref you posted I think I messed it up again. the character was supposed to be a girl, though the gender doesn't really matter all too much. what are some things that make them look like a man? I thought the chubby face and softer facial features looked somewhat feminine, though tomboyish.
I think this'll be the last illustration I do before going back to studying a bit, thanks again for your input

>> No.4902087

>>4902084
Where did you find Fooly Cooly screenshots? or did you just keep pausing the eps?

>> No.4902105

>>4902084
ah see, she looks a lot more feminine here
i can't really find any flaws on this one, gj anon
>what are some things that make them look like a man?
mainly the haircut and face. these aren't an issue in the third drawing
i couldn't really tell she had feminine hips in the first two drawings
good luck on your studying anon

>> No.4902137

Where is tumblr queen

>> No.4902178
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4902178

>>4901433
>>4901439
>>4901553
>>4901939
Went for D...


>>4901397
But way too far above my skill level. Too many things went wrong on the coloring. I think the FG was ok, but the BG didnt have enough structure for me to add the details. It’s too loose, and the tethers are sloppy

>> No.4902182

>>4902087
>>4902105
thanks, yeah I would scrub through or watch episodes and pause when I saw an interesting drawing. there were some high quality episodes on Youtube, but they must have been taken down recently because I can't find them anymore. there are still full episodes, but the picture isn't always clear. I found episodes 1, 3 and 5 the best for references, with episode 3 being especially good

>> No.4902582
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4902582

I see most people left this thread... a shame.

>> No.4902621
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4902621

spooktober

>> No.4902623

>>4902582
love it! you are so very good at rendering...

>> No.4902636

>>4896178
I think it looks nice anon, can't give any feedback since i'm super beginner.

>> No.4902666

>>4902582
I miss your tribal loli things

>> No.4902687
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4902687

>>4902666
There is a time for everything....

>> No.4902701

>>4902582
how did you do the leaves?

>> No.4903071

>>4902621
Madotsuki-bro, glad to see you back. I really like this one, none really captures the paranoid feeling of higurashi

>> No.4903471
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4903471

>> No.4903481

>>4902178
Still nicely done and very interesting to look at. Better to aim for the stars and land in the trees right.

>> No.4903487
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4903487

don this value-std.. and tried to add colour on top, some input? i feel like it looks dull :L >>4902582
biutyful

>> No.4903520
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4903520

BJDs are good reference material

>> No.4903613
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4903613

for fucks sake OP, why did you have to pick my shitty doodle for the OP

well, here's another one, idk if it's any better but at least it's more complex
I promise I'll get better eventually

>> No.4903651

>>4903487
There's a thread about B&W to color you fuckin dummy

>> No.4903877
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4903877

>> No.4903879

>>4903877
Fuck yeah good tastes bro

>> No.4903905

>>4902636
thanks anon

>> No.4903909

>>4903877
man this is cool, >>4903879 agreed.

>> No.4904401
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4904401

I am in the process of become the most based vtuber.
Getting all the pieces split apart so I can shove em into live2d

>> No.4904462
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4904462

>>4902687
this style is nice

>> No.4904498
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>> No.4904686
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>> No.4904726

>>4904401
not looking forward to it

>> No.4904785

>>4904726
then don't reply dumbfuck

>> No.4904788

>>4901240
nose too small, make it wider a little bit

>> No.4904798

>>4901240
ear is too far down, top should hang at around the brow line. Mouth also misaligned, if you look closely you've slanted it to the left too much. I suggest looking at the planes of an asaro head to get a better understanding, you can find the 3d models up on sketchfab. Happy drawing anon

>> No.4904906

>>4904686
That's not how you hold a bow, did you even use a reference?

>> No.4904912
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4904912

>>4904906
yes
but in retrospect it was a bad reference

>> No.4904921

>>4904912
Oh fuck, you saw the curve of the humerus and thought she was bending her arm and pointing her elbow in lmao
You literally don't even know what you're LOOKING at.

>> No.4904956

>>4904912
Yikes, if you're gonna use references that bad, use videos, you'll understand the movement, not whatever your eyes think are looking, good luck

>> No.4905144

>>4904921
fuck off, you don't have to trace your reference material
that drawing looks awkward, but the amateur pose is the only thing that's good about it

>> No.4905192

>>4904912
Anon her arms are supposedly extended, no one ever lived a life trying to draw their bow with bent arm, that would take a lot of force to pull off. Like what >>4904921 pointed out, it's the medial epicondyle of the humerus protruding forming a curve.

>> No.4905198

>>4905192
I meant hold not draw.

>> No.4905280
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4905280

>>4904912
I think what's happening is some combination of the natural carrying angle + possible slight bend at elbow + the upper arm naturally being wider at the joint with the forearm. Truth is, it's really hard to tell from such a low res ref. Here's a different angle. What's clear is there's some foreshortening going on. The viewer is looking down the "barrel" of the upper arm, and the forearm appears to be deviated in another direction. But with extreme foreshortening like this, there's a literal loss of information as points coincide and block out other points. You often just can't tell what exactly is happening and need to modify the pose with extra reference.

>> No.4905293

>>4905144
No one is talking about tracing the reference, you retard. Asukafag COMPLETELY MISINTERPRETED THE STRUCTURES HE WAS LOOKING AT.

>> No.4905298

>>4905280
You're putting in way too much effort for Asukafag, he never takes critiques.

>> No.4905311
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4905311

I was just going through the motions

>> No.4905312

>>4905298
It benefits me too, I'm already studying the arm and shoulder recently
But anyway, he's improved a lot. And using ref is a good idea. Just needs to really laser focus on studying anatomy and intuitive perspective imo and his skills could seriously blast off.

>> No.4905314
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4905314

>>4905298

this is not true and in fact I broke after drawing that drawing, it was a commission actually and I felt bad
I will not draw anything else until you guys approve my skills
maybe this is cringe attention whoring but attention is my only motivation :( and i guess it's better than nothing

>>4905312
that's yes

>> No.4905325

>>4905314
those torsos look pretty good asukafag, are them from memory?

>> No.4905331
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4905331

>>4891819
A little reminder...

>> No.4905341

>>4905325
well yes this is based on hampton book construction

basically what happened with me is that I took many shortcuts, cheated an d half-assed things. I relied too hevily on 3d models, photo references and without good understanding of anatomy and construction, I couldnt even use those references acurately
and then I did sort of decent lineart and the most basic shading with I think pleasant colors and I got some small success (some commissions and likes on twitter). That was the last 3 months. i dont wanna do this anymore like that
ok end blog sorry

>> No.4905346

>>4905331
One guy LARPs that he’s a pro and suddenly it’s a conspiracy

>> No.4905354

>>4905341
don't feel bad, at least you have some pride as an artist and that's what will take you very far, i highly recommend you finishing your anatomy studies, besides hampton book i think anatomy for sculptors is a great resource, keep the good work

>> No.4905356

>>4905341
nothing wrong with any of those things, just steps along the way

>> No.4905624
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4905624

>>4903071
Thank you frend, I really like that part of higurashi too
The composition bothered me a lot so I changed it... it just delt weird to have that huge white circle on top for no reason

>> No.4905730

>>4905624
i like the other one, this one is harder to understand

>> No.4905734

>>4905730
really? damn... well guess I should've just left it as it was... it was bother ig me a lot. thank u

>> No.4905852
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4905852

>>4900245
>>4902084
I love your style, do you have a blog?

>> No.4905889
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4905889

Gumbo

>> No.4905965
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4905965

I know her body/leg proportions are fucked up but can’t figure how to fix pls halp

>> No.4906010

>>4905965
also i accidentally made her look like a child but I wanted her to be older looking but with a cute face ?

>> No.4906014
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4906014

>> No.4906021

>>4906010
>also i accidentally made her look like a child
ponytails like that, huge eyes, small face - idk how that could have been an accident

as far as body goes, I'd suggest either picking up a book (you can find a hampton figure drawing pdf with google) or drawing from real life/photos for a while until you know how these things work

that being said, this isn't bad for a doodle and has that natural japanese style that everybody in here probably wants to have

>> No.4906023

>>4906014
not a fan of mermaids with tails that bend like legs ngl

>> No.4906029

>>4906014
blog?

>> No.4906031
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4906031

a lil thing while i work on the eva, I hope the inactivity on the board was because you were drawing, rigth, anon?

>> No.4906033

>>4906029
stop replying to yourself

>> No.4906037
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4906037

>>4906014
the face looks like shes taking a nice poopoo, look for ariel references.
>>4905889
really cool
>>4905965
the torso is turning, but the legs aren't
>>4905734
I mean, it's up to you, but i like the head space more, luv u

>> No.4906068
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4906068

>>4906014
Is that the therapist's commission

>> No.4906119

>>4905331
Because drawing is fun, and I want everyone to have fub

>> No.4906125
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4906125

>>4906014
I see your death has been wildly exaggerated

>> No.4906128

>>4905965
blog? This is cute

>> No.4906140

>>4906021
:0 thanks king

>> No.4906142
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4906142

It’s Raymond’s motherfucking birthday today. I went to his party dressed as an imp.

>> No.4906149

>>4906128
https://www.twitter.com/mnj_art
thank you for taking interest

>> No.4906173

>>4906125
saber? with a dick, historically accurate, cool

>> No.4906269
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4906269

This one was inspired by Boris Vallejo and Frank Frazetta. What think?

>> No.4906361
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4906361

>> No.4906408

>>4906269
Are you vectorizing your art?

>> No.4906430

>>4891972
>>4891974
sick sketches

>> No.4906500

>>4906361
blog?

>> No.4906503

>>4906269
Looks like you're painting with AI, looks gross

>> No.4906573
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4906573

gamers

>> No.4906741
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4906741

>> No.4906750

>>4906573
cute
>>4906741
not cute

>> No.4906802
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4906802

>>4906408
Not vectorizing, but this anon >>4906503
nailed it. I used AI to lay the initial values down, which looked ridiculous at first, then I went back and tried to correct the things that were way off, and applied gradient maps. I'd never done it before so I wanted to know if the result was worth it. Pic related is what the AI produced, lol.

>> No.4906805

>>4906802
sadly, while still very wonky anatomically, this looks more interesting than the paint over

>> No.4906810

>>4906805
It's interesting, but it doesn't make any sense. I don't think it could pass as a finished product

>> No.4906861

>>4906810
just lay a bunch of filters/textures/images on it in photoshop until it looks good

>> No.4906874

>>4896602
>The body looks really awkward near the stomach and pelvis
Ahh... Yes indeed- mr. crabs- its called perspective.

>> No.4906889

>>4906874
Hahaha.

>> No.4906894

>>4906802
Okay, well it makes things very ugly, I would highly discourage it.

>> No.4906914

>>4905311
Thats cool

>> No.4906933

>>4906874
yeah, but it looks like the entire torso is shifted to the right

>> No.4907184

>>4906874
Her pelvis wouldn’t be tilted down with her back arched that much

>> No.4907466
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4907466

can't stop watching Gotcha!

>> No.4907474

>>4906802
It's better to use CSPs wacky auto color feature for some extra pop by setting the resulting layer to overlay/something like that

>> No.4907478

>>4892082
And they are just as pathetic as any other retard.
Status doesn't grant immunity from the truth.

>> No.4907565
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4907565

>>4901944

>> No.4907566
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4907566

>>4907565

>> No.4907632
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4907632

hmmmmmm

>> No.4907642

>>4907632
>>4895006
Can you just be my gf already?

>> No.4907672

>>4906037
luv u too... and that drawing is amazing... blog?

>> No.4907678

>>4907466
thought he had a huge hanging dick from the thumbnail

>> No.4907682

>>4907466
its lovely by the way, blog please

>> No.4907690

>>4907682
reminder to never reply to >blog? posters

>> No.4907692

>>4907678
>>4907682
lmfao oh geez I can't unsee that now.
@zachsnyderart on the tweeter

>> No.4907699

>>4907690
Why not? A lot of you guys are faggots on here but become chill when they have to drop anonymity.

>> No.4907737

>>4907690
just because no one likes you? but's ok anon, what's your blog ill give you a follow

>> No.4907747

>>4907672
IG: @baylego
I don't really use my twitter pantsu-bro

>> No.4907952

>>4907632
do you really find pudgy dudes hot?

>> No.4907985
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4907985

Rough sketch

>> No.4907992

>>4907952
No, I find them pathetic, that's why i would like to fuck em

>> No.4907995

>>4907952
Cute I guess but not very hot. Just because I draw a lot of something doesn't mean I'm sexually attracted to it

>> No.4908036
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4908036

Character concept for a hopefully more complex piece. She's supposed to be a zombie.

>> No.4908082

>>4907992
You're a bit of a psycho, queen.

>> No.4908085

>>4908036
You got a blog, king?

>> No.4908096

>>4908082
>falling for larping bait
Fake fan

>> No.4908108

>>4908085
Yeah https://twitter.com/inkpleb

>> No.4908135
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4908135

>>4907632
Enough for today. I keep getting distracted by everything grrr

I know It's not perfect but is it at least not awful?

>> No.4908151
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4908151

Refining the sketch.

>> No.4908157

>>4908135
It’s awful that you’re not my gf

>> No.4908165

>>4908151
Fuck off!

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4908198

>> No.4908204

>>4908198
Kek, should have thought twice before posting your face here.

>> No.4908207

>>4906500
Obviously not them, but if you like the style check rumiko takahashi and izumi matsumoto

>> No.4908208

>>4908198
All were me btw :)
Post feet

>> No.4908217

>>4908208
nah bro, im the armpitfag here

>> No.4908223

You're beating a dead horse at this point, something mildly interesting happened on this dry fucking board months ago and you fags won't shut up about it.
No one thinks you're funny it's just really fucking annoying when every alt thread gets derailed with this shit.
You probably don't even draw, fuck off to /r9k/ or something this board is already shitty enough as it is

>> No.4908236

>>4908223
cute schizo

>> No.4908347
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4908347

>>4907474
Anon, you just did me a huge favor. That function is a million times better, and feels less like cheating. Many thanks.

>> No.4908360

>>4908347
Just raised that earlobe a little. kek

>> No.4908369

>>4908204
when was this

>> No.4908402

>>4908223
Tell more anon? Not in the loop on recent events.

>> No.4908457
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4908457

>>4908223
let's us have our fun anon. i just wanted to see her pits, nothing much

>> No.4908462

>>4908457
This. She's cute, I wanna see her everything.

>> No.4908467

>>4908151
>He's starting to post his WIPs again and again
make it stop, kys for real now

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4908518

>>4903487
>>4903487
how's this? the "base color" being orange, i made the highlights orange-yellow and the shadows red-purple. i added some greys at the mouth to make the colors pop out more

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4908542

>>4903487
i added some hue variations to it. the base color is orange, the shadow is purple, the hightlights are yellow. i also added some grey at the chin and highly saturated red at the edges

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4908567

>>4908542
forgot to add color to the reflected light

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4908651

>>4907747
oh I see, well I actually do have an ig now so i'll follow you there!

>>4907692
thanks!

>>4907690
it wasnt sarcastic to be ache


redoing an old drawing, it is nice to see progress i think...

>> No.4908654

>>4907692
wow u are an absolute god...

>> No.4908683

>>4908567
So you're the new "let's post every time I make a single new stroke" guy?

>> No.4908770
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4908770

almost done..

>> No.4909304

whats the key to making better looking cartoons

>> No.4909338

>>4909304
never using digital

>> No.4909415

>>4908770
I like the little details

>> No.4909428

>>4909338
You're hilarious anon, I'm sure you're super popular irl

>> No.4909487

>>4909428
geez, why is everyone on /ic/ so insecure

>> No.4909711

go my children, new thread >>4909708

>> No.4910888

>>4908651
I like this.
Blog?

>> No.4911128

>>4910888
thank you!
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>>4911128
You're doing good work anon. Keep it up.