/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

neat

>>4890673
Every part of this looks gross as if it was drawn by a kid

>>4890673
>this is my first 4chan post ever
Let's have it be your last too.

> Every part of this looks gross as if it was drawn by a kid
A: Huh... ok then...

> Let's have it be your last too.
A: Wow... ok... it will.

>>4890673
cool i like it op. i will dedicate a coom to this

>>4890673
Looks good enough to start raking in coomer followers with. Not the best animation but good enough for the average coomer to jack off to. Just open up a twitter and pixiv account. Your pixiv account should grow faster compared to your twitter at first.

>>4890673
i like it. nice job

>>4890673
A little slow...

>>4890673
DO YOU WANT A MEDAL SON? DILATE KYS EHEHEHE
>>4890699
BASED

>>4890729
Thats not how you greentext please leave this place will only shackle you

>>4890673
didn't know jazza went full coom

>>4890679
FPBP

Post it on twitter, get about 10k likes in a single day, profit

>>4890673
Don’t mind the seethoids, I like it. if it makes you feel any better opie I’m jerking off to this gif right now. Will post update on orgasm

>>4890843
Jazza cumbox

>>4891045
It was alright. Had to speed it up to 1.5x speed tho

>99% of /ic/ is about coom shit
cmon man

>>4890673
I like this OP I enjoy more natural and soulful animations style. Too many people are obsessed with things being classically right.

>>4890729
You didn't even reply to them. Fuck off tripfag.

>>4891342
Kek, you don't even know what a tripfag is

>>4890673
THIS IS A COMPLETE AND UTTER FUCKING MESS, JIMINY CRICKET IN A KRISPY KREME WHERE DO I FUCKING START
FIRST OFF, IT'S FFFFFFUUUUCKINNN' SLOOOOOOW, NIGGA. THE TIMING IS DOGSHIT. THERE ARE NO STRONG KEY POSES, THE MOVEMENT IS AWKWARD AND STIFF, AND TO MAKE IT WORSE THIS HOT SLOPPY DIARRHEA WAS GIVEN AN OBSCENE AMOUNT OF INBETWEENS. TALK ABOUT POLISHING A FUCKING TURD, WE MAKE FUN OF RENDERFAGS A LOT BUT HOOOLY SHIT THAT DIESN'T EVEN COMPARE TO THE AMOUNT OF TIME IT MUST HAVE TAKEN TO PAINSTAKINGLY DRAW AND RENDER EACH AND EVERY FRAME OF THIS TERRIBLE HORSESHIT. I WOULD HAVE INSTALLED A SKYLIGHT TO MY SKULL WITH A SHOTGUN BY THE TIME THIS WAS DONE, OH BOY. READ THE ANIMATORS SURVIVAL KIT OR DRAWN TO LIFE, SOMETHING, ANYTHING, JUST DON'T KEEP DOING SHIT LIKE THIS OVER AND OVER AGAIN.
ALSO POST IN A GENERAL THREAD AND LURK MOAR, YOU FUCKING F A G G O T
WELCOME TO 4CHAN AND /IC/ AND HAVE A FANTASTIC FUCKING DAY

>>4890729
>Wow... ok... it will
Dude that's not how it works. Every thread has to have a percentage of people being assholes otherwise it's not 4chan. Develop a thicker skin, ignore trolls or tell them to shove it.

dude i have to fart so fucking bad i got fart leaking out my butt!

It is fucking epic dude. Don't listen to the haters, there's a lot on this website and they don't really mean what they say.
And the animation,... Wow, very nice for a first time dude, you're talented.
You hear that? YOUR TALENTED
DON'T LET those negative comments bring you down, you're awesome
Keep posting your good stuff

>>4890673
This looks super smooth. I like it.
Maybe the actual speed of the animation doesn't really match the physics that are happening, but other than that great job!

>>4890673

>>4892012
>>4892012
>f******ing epic
Um, excuse me? That's "freaking" epic. No profanity allowed on /ic/, dude, not cool.

>>4890673
super disgusting! you are obviously a virgin!

>>4890673
FASTER!!!!!

So when did this become reddit? Fucking hell man maybe this board is full of women

>>4890673
>Somehow this is what came out of it
Yeah, like you didn't consciously draw, color, and shade each frame. Go back to whatever coomer crevice you crawled out from anon.

Pic related is OP btw.

>>4890761
>Your pixiv account should grow faster compared to your twitter at first.

Is managing a Pixiv account viable if I know nothing about Japanese?

I thought the residents there would not like a baka-gaijin using their site...

>>4893097
just dont draw badly haha :)

>>4890673
considering you used krita thats pretty damn acomplished.

there are better and easier software for that stuff.

>>4892569
Porn is allowed but no profanity??

>>4893192
It's called an "artistic nude" you PURITAN

>>4891768
All-caps: Cruise control for cool!

>>4891768
uh, i might have created a monster.
Nice.

>>4893097
They don't care what race you are or what language you know, as long as you draw shit they like or can fap to. The biggest advantage about pixiv is the tagging system that makes it 100x easier for people to find your art

>>4890673
nice, considering how wonky Krita's environment is.
how long did it take you?
workflow?

>>4891768
based based based based based

I really like this, maybe because I'm partial towards girls like this one.
Hair, tits and dick move at different paces and makes it look clunky.
With practice you can get veryyy good. Keep it up.

>>4891996
you forgot to call him a faggot, faggot.

>>4891768
>JIMINY CRICKET IN A KRISPY KREME
kino start up

>>4893097
Pixiv is gaijin frieldn
the only other place that ins;t gaijin friendly is Nijie.info (which is just Pixiv for coomers) and FC2

>>4890673
It's very good! Not perfect, but you did it!
Learn by your mistakes and keep improving.
That many people being assholes are just jealous of your talent and diligence. Consider it a compliment.

If you can't handle people coming here with the express intention of shitting on every aspect of your art. You shouldn't post here.

So, yea, the issue with this is the timing and spacing. Check out tutorials for that and give it another shot. Good try.

Floppy legs ruin it for me