/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4860779
wtf, op

>>4860779
I've seen the face of God, and it was weeping.

>>4860779
BOOsy

>>4860779
Kek

>>4860779
Good trollpost, you're doing god's work in derailing these coomer threads and impeding/deterring their progress.

Hit me, bros, what you think?...

>>4860848
:(

>>4860867
Pretty new at painting, I’m working on it...

>>4860848
I could jerk off to this, and I'm very judgmental regarding art quality

>>4860877
That is a very nice compliment, thank you!

>>4860848
As western as it could possibly be

1st attempt was before taking some critique from anons here and I just did the second. what do you guys think?

>>4860781
>>4860800
>>4860847
is it the time of year where the newfags discover 4chan and are shocked by everything

>>4860848
Meh.

>>4860924
It's worse. Look at real human beings and go back to /beg/

>>4860950
Nah i think it looks better

>>4860949
Thank you, this is the exact kind of stuff I need...

>>4860972
Neat boobies, but her face isn't exactly appealing, don't you think?

>>4860993
doesnt matter, both are still shit

>>4860779
unironically hot

>>4861121
don't care

>>4860800
why do vanillaniggas talk like this shit? like damn.

>>4860848
you draw like early Rampage.

funny, even back then, he draws better when doing safe fanart.

>>4861054
Seems fine.

Katagiri!

Christ, can you degenerates do regular porn for once?

>>4861936
he said on 4chan

Just finished drawing this one. Not gonna post the full pic since I'm not sure if the character looks too young or not, I was trying to draw trap but I suck with proportions.
https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/84337667

>>4861301
D-did he get better?...

>>4862240
so good he has to close comissions otherwise he gets drowned in work

>>4862075
this literally looks traced from the trap incubus douhinji

>>4860779

>>4860779
you always find the way to make this thread more revolting.

>>4862270
Well. Gonna take that as a compliment, then.

>>4862296
i didnt ask him to use my art, dont bully me man.

How do you guys find so sexy references for poses

All I can find on Google looks like trash

>>4862286
Blog?

>>4862347
not him, but i like how you draw the asshole.

>>4860779
that's very well drawn. Was it done by anon here?

>>4862419
me

>>4862419
nvm didn't read before post

>>4862393
Don't have one! I'll get there eventually.

>>4862433
Make one anon, youre already well enough there. Trust me.

>>4862637
>>4862638
these make me question if i should even be posting here

debating greyscale or moving on

>>4862638
shading on peach's cheek kind of makes it look like she has a mustache

>>4862813
that combined with the lines on the anus, they aren't on her face but it feels like facial hair for some reason

>>4862635
Haven't you been working on this for weeks now?

>>4862804
Well, we need people to counteract all the rampant faggotry around here. We've got womses and faggits and tranners galore.

>>4862817
it's that plus the intersection of the butt and her brow ridge making it look very steep + the arm and her frame. put together it makes her read like a very rachet crossdressing man at first glance. i assume that's not what you were going for.

>>4862829
im talking about this being weirdly detailed shit, first one text, second one visually
its disturbing

>>4862832
omg exactly. i think if the op swapped out using lines for details with shading done well it would look less grotesque

>>4862833
Stay strong. We will crush our enemies and conquer this world.
And maybe draw a bit when we can find the time.

>>4862836
im technically one of the 'fags' on this thread, tho lmaooo

>>4862286
lol what is that big ass muscle on her right forearm, are you just drawing random bumps

>>4862838
Then you will be crushed.
You may find solace in the fact that I will be enjoying an expensive, exotic cigar while you are being crushed, though I will not seek sexual gratification from your demise. That'd be pretty gay.

>>4862828
not at all

>>4860779
I want a cute boo to be my personal, private use onahole

>>4862903

>>4862847
sounds a bit gay desu

>>4862955
no u
checkmate

>>4862960
uh, duh. lol
:P

>>4862965
Das rite. Now that you know the power of heterosexuality, go be straight and make your parents proud.

>>4862638
Absolutely disgusting

>>4862638
I like this, has ren and stimpy vibes. Agree wth the other guy, that hatching gives her a stache

>>4860949
Got any more porn tutorials like this?

>>4862903
beautiful comic. Would read

that's it, i'm going into H so i'll be joining this thread i guess.
anyone else here that has made the switch? or did you all start off drawing porn from the get-go?
i want to work on some H-manga shorts in the coming months.

any random tips and pointers appreciated.

>>4860949
Babe lab is good. Any more resources like it?

>>4863256
Check out babelab.blogspot.com it has Paul Richards tutorials.

>>4863277
Not for porn. But autodestructdigital is Paul Richards blog and he has some additional tutorials there and a shitton of sketches. Including nudes and porn, mostly lesbian.

>>4862637
you don't need to fill your writing with that many adjectives; sometimes less is more

>>4863285
>>4863292

Thanks.

Erotibot for porn tutorials is the only thing I've found.

Took a break from my big piece and doing this lil study. I haven’t even started on that arm lol so ignore that.

>>4863714
Anyone have advice for drawing gems? I just slapped a sparkle stamp on there for now by that’s not a real solution

>>4860779

Time to get back on the smut commission train. Here are my practice roughs from this morning.

>>4863266
just have fun with it

>>4863847
Commissions eh? What's your twitter/da/hf account? How good are you at drawing vag?

>>4863893
DA: catnippinups message me what you had in mind

>>4863847
Looks alright. Anything else to share?

>>4863924
Nothing porny until I do more roughs (can't share actual past paid work obviously).

I did a soft pinup yesterday afternoon as a rendering exercise.

Am gan tae hell liek.

I decided to change the lower half last minute so don't laugh at my scribbles pls.

>>4864170
Really cool man, old school tawna would be neat in your style...

>>4864238
Cheers! I was actually thinking of doing New Tawna fucking Old Tawna. Might put it in the queue.

opinons?

>>4864446
Genatalia are just a smidge too high taken into consideration the perspective. Lasso that shit down a tad.

>>4864428
Awesome, can’t wait!...

>>4864472
looks fine to me?

>>4864170
Fuckin hot

>>4862903
I was wondering what happened to you, hadn’t sent you in a while. You got a blog or something?

>>4860848
It’s mostly well done but you’re lacking in some contrast and harsh edges everything’s a little too soft. Is that AOC on the right!? Her pupils should be darker.

i forgot how to draw and shade dicks v_v
i think next time i wont try so hard because it ends up being rlly stiff lol

>>4860779
Squeezing in one more today...

Prolly fucked a few things up, but I'm still really happy with the direction its going

>>4862903
The order of your text on the right side of the page makes no god damn sense.

>>4864702
It's not. Look at the placement of the labia in contrast of the alignment with the pelvic girdle. Yours is too high.

>>4864958
>harsh edges
I’m working on that, thanks man.
>>4864170
Love this, post more

>>4865173
Anon who drew her here, you mistook that anon for me. Ive made corrections based on what you pointed out though.

>>4865040
originally, they were just a series of descriptions in a single large panel. I decided to break them up and give them individual visualization spread across two pages. They were group differently previously, and I am in the process of rewriting them.

is this rendering servicable?

>>4866625
what rendering?

>>4866631
very minimalistic that i did cause i dont know how to do it better

>>4866625
Yes, I actually enjoy the minamalism of it. I would recommend adding some blush tones to those cheeks, elbows, shoulders etc., and maybe some very subtle highlights to accentuate form.

>>4866625

now, I actually have tried to use lasso & airbrush
but I dunno if this is better

>>4866644
That looks like a big improvement to me.

Still working on rendering practice in grey. The physique came out a little loli-esque on this one but it is supposed to be a gnome...

>>4864446
pretty based, wish my sketches looked this clean.

>>4866734
I like her a lot!

>>4860848 great stuff man. Less softness and I'll blow two loads.

>>4867038
Thanks man, I appreciate it. Tried to clean my edges a bit more with this one...

>>4866644
>>4866625
study itto
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=list&tags=itto_%28mentaiko%29

Brah where's gains goblin?

>>4860779

>>4867229
AH FUCK, MY EYES ARE IN PAIN

Is the barrier for NSFW animation actually lower than NSFW art when it comes to having a following ?
I was checking the top patreons for each category and some animators are honestly /beg/ tier at drawing people, but still manage to make popular content (like Hinca-p).

>>4862807
Underrated, nice shapes, finish it up and post!

>>4867229
no i hate prolapse sorry.

>>4867654

im getting closer to finishing, check 4864976 (for some reason cant link it, im on mobile)

>>4864976

>>4867229
that is so fucking gross and yet i cant stop looking at it

>>4865036
i like the vibe of this but not the execution.

Just polishing this up but I'm gonna slap it here before it's finished. Thought I'd try some negative space on the shorts since it looked neat. Pee pee still needs some work though.

>>4868248
Yup, I’ll be jerking off to that...

>>4868248
great work
faggot mods might ban you for posting furry though

>>4868288
I'm not actually a furry but whichever way you look at Tawna's design, it's kemono. She's basically a thick human with brown skin, animalistic ears and a snoot.

>>4868279
First time anybody's ever said my work was fappable. I feel proud.

>>4867229
kino alert

>>4868300
>I'm not actually a furry but whichever way you look at Tawna's design, it's kemono.
"im not a furry but i drew this furry"
kemono is furry weeb bitch nigger

>>4868307
still hot tho ill probably jerk off to it

>>4868300
it’s just an attractive drawing. Love it.

>>4868307
>kemono is furry
Big disagree. And whilst I drew it, I'm not really sexually enticed by or attracted to it. Like, the midriff is pretty saucy I guess, but it's not really my jam.

>>4868308
Lad.

What are the best books on drawing appealing porn?

>>4868462
why there would be a book like this
and more importantly, why do you need books for everything?

>>4868480
The best information is in books you illiterate fuck.

>>4868534
You can't learn everything from books Anon, especially with art, where visual language is such an integral component. If you want to learn to draw visually appealing porn you're better off first learning how to draw visually appealing art.

>>4868534
books won't teach you anything beside basics
you have to figure out what your art is lacking on your own, study it from real life, see how other artists do it, find how-tos on specific subjects (like "how to draw boobs" or "how to shade like this")
written word is inferior form of language, language is inferior form of art
ask any accomplished artist, majority of them never seriously studied from books, and for those who did it contributed less than 5% to their total growth

also you will never find porn books because:
>everyone has different tastes
>genre changed rapidly over time
>too degenerate for typography or amazon store (duh)

>>4868462

>>4868630
Legit what book is that?

>>4868650
This is just basic female anatomy in mango form Anon. Don't fall for it. Study real anatomy if you want a better understanding of it, don't study stylised echoes of it.

>>4868664
You're not wrong - but I do study trad. figure and anatomy, it's not about that. It's hard to find great academic stuff for figure with that sort of monoline japanese dip pen look, so I definitely want to know what it is.

>>4860779
Who is artist in OP?

i’m not too interested in coomer art, but i want to draw big, luscious tiddies. where do i start? is it all about the rib cage?

Trying to get better at digital inking
>>4867229
...
>>4864170
>>4868248
Sugoi!

>>4868480

So I can progress with a proven method.

>>4868620

>too degenerate for typography or amazon store (duh)

for now the only option seems to be twitterfags posting their processes.

>>4868872
This is really hot. I keep clicking on it when I scroll by. Her right arm is a little short, but I’m staring at the balls

Blogu?

>>4868248
y tf is this so hot

starting new dbd drawings
someones gotta rule34 the new guy

>>4865036
First time actually putting thought into a background before, actually making it a part of the scene rather than something I just tack on at the end. Rough colors are laid out so I have a feel for what I'm coloring before I actually put work into the outline. Learning a lot with every new drawing is a nice feeling

Actually, giving it another look now that I've readied the roughs, I think I need to make the table in the background a bit bigger. Perspective is weird

>>4860972
nice work! I think you nailed her.

I'm not sure what I wanna do with this, but I think it basically looks alright so far.

>>4870144
Oh god, that spine and ass. Please use some references my dude, even with exaggerated forms the body doesn't look like that

>>4870150
I did lol, I'll study more then

>>4870163
Here, hope this helps. The trick to using a reference like this and not outright tracing it, while still having the general flow and form is to blur the reference image heavily, then correct after you've done soft lineart

>>4870179
thanks, appreciate it! :)

>>4868703
Not that other guy, but it looks similar to one of my books.

>>4868703

>>4870189
>>4870190
Book is Houtengeki's "How to draw women" book. There's pdf copies of it floating around everywhere, and its being translated slowly

https://exhentai.org/g/1525737/8ccf90eb3b/
https://exhentai.org/g/1506290/3a32c20909/

>>4868703
One more.

>>4870244
Cool, blog?

>>4860848
Know when to use a hard brush. Right now it looks better scaled down to 30% than it does in its native resolution.

>>4870204
Thanks, my dude!

>>4860848
Reminds me of the strange airbrushed art you find on the side of rides at fairground. You would really benefit from learning how to utilise a hard round brush.

>>4870179
COOOOOOOOM
she is the best jav star in existence.

>>4870396
why is this everywhere? who started this trend

>>4870396
>>4870588
>everywhere

It's pretty specific to UK travelling fairgrounds, isn't it? I'm 33 and they've looked like that as long as I can remember.
Wouldn't be surprised if most of them have be painted by the same guy all my life.

>>4870630
I see the same art here in eastern europe

>>4870634
Maybe that's just what you get when your instructions are 'spray paint a bunch of pop stars'

>>4870713
who gave that instruction

>>4870630
in america there's stuff like that too

>>4870244
girls head seems a little small but other than that, really good. not enough couple-focused art here

>>4870144
Not sure what this >>4870179 anon is talking about, but I see a couple of things that stand out right away. Her head does not match the angle of her face. We are looking slightly up at her, while her face looks like we are looking down. She's overall tilted to the right and feels off balance. I actually don't mind the sharp curves, but I would work them out a bit better in places. Otherwise, good job. Line quality looks real good. Hope that helps.

>>4868853
I like it

>>4871202
good succ, though the dudes pelvic area seems all kinds of fucked.

>>4868248
How do you color? Do you have a tutorial on how you make your drawings coloring look so “soft”?

>>4871181
thanks for your feedback, will take that into account!

>>4871231
I'm in bed phoneposting but I happened to upload a 4-set of my process before I came off my PC so I can actually show you.

I use PaintTool Sai and I pretty much only use 2 brushes—airbrush set to 90% opacity and a brush called knife blend that mimics oil spread on a cavas.

Lines

>>4871595
Flats.

>>4871597
Lazy fucking multiply layer because I still haven't learned how to render proper yet.

>>4871599
Fin.

>>4871475
blog?

>>4871601
Now make one without dick

>>4871606
Was thinking about it. I'm not really into furry, but fluffy Tawna vag sounds kawaii.

>>4871599
so you turn off colors when you do your multiply layer? Any reason for that?

>>4871618
I have all the colour layers in a folder, and on top of that folder I clip a layer of plain grey onto the folder, and then ontop of that I clip the multiply layer.

I often find that if you try to shade using a multiply layer on top of colours they can interrupt and confuse the process. It's harder to see what's going on in some areas that are darker. Doing it on top of a light monotone let's you see exactly what's you're doing in every spot.

>>4868853
Looks like Rudeus Greyrat

>>4870774
The Bogdanoffs

>>4871623
Good idea, i'm going to try that.

>>4871601
Thank you, anon.

>>4871634
Who?

>>4871775
>>4871819
np, always happy to help where I can.

>>4872334
u forgot to draw the genital

>>4872334
blog?

>>4872612
https://twitter.com/ArtKlinck
I don't draw coom though

>>4860779
Dont have tablet. Only method of digital inking is pen tool with mouse.. So no line variety and can't properly color. Hands arent steady enough to ink trad, always comes out worse than my sketches. But I want to continue doing rule34. Or just draw smut of my own.

>>4872634
>I don't draw coom though
>posts in coom thread
bruh

>>4860779
I’m very inexperienced with making OC’s. But I named her Olive.

>>4872743
I guess I've meant to say I don't usually draw explicit nsfw and rarely draw nudes. Posted here in hopes of some anatomy crit

>>4871627
the girl looks like him? because of the hair? lol.

>>4871197
>>4870838
thanks, i tinkered with them a bit more afterwards.

Anything look super off here? My ass anatomy isn’t exactly good

>>4873203
What are those three bold lines underneath?

>>4873219
Just a pattern/design in reference to the character

>>4873235
Honestly it's not bad, good work on the folds of the clothes. But the lines make it look like lumpy butt shading. I guess thats just because I dont know the character.

>>4870244
Your pose inspired me. Hope you don't mind if I use that as reference for something.

>>4872746
love it. Use the same brush from the hair, make it lighter and draw the bush.
Blog or twitter?

Hey, salt. I'm working on some shit with the Treasure Chest Girl from Ocarina of Time. I was wondering if you use any particular site to get hardcore sex references. I appreciate the criticism of this sketch although its just my rough chicken strips to "feel" the forms.

>>4872737

having a mouse is not really an excuse for no line weight. you can make line weight by combining lines and erasing what you don't want

>>4873450
i mean, i just use pornhub, pornpics & boyspornpics
idk if the latter two are virus-ridden but i use adblock so :P

on that topic though, is it a bad thing to make an oc or fanart drawing based on a picture? they help me a lot with figuring out form and stuff but i dont know if it degrades the art.

for that reason i usually get several refs, some from porn, some from proko's figure photos. i combine several of them together by having the refs of that body part and then getting another reference for the next part.

>>4873267
sure, no worries.

>>4872737
>>4873666
To add on to that, get Clip Studio or something. Its vector tools allow you to grow/shrink line thickness, so you don't need a tablet to get nicer varied lines

Is the basic structure alright?
If anyone has or knows where I can find a similar pose ref I'll also gladly take that.

>>4874140
Is the basic structure alright?
If anyone has or knows where I can find a similar pose ref I'll also gladly take that.
Reposting with actual image this time.

>>4873759
>is it a bad thing to make an oc or fanart drawing based on a picture?
i dont see anything wrong as long as its for reference and a full trace. Tracing works to learn how the body looks, but you should insist on using references only. Then you develop your imagination and start drawing non-human things

is there such a thing as a nsfw equivalent of webtoons? where do you post your coomics?

>>4874576
Tapas has a mature section now, you might be able to try there.

>>4872746
I'm very interested to know how you paint like this.

>>4872904
>>4874667
Good stuff. Best of the thread.

>>4868739
me. i dont have social media though, sorry.

>"No Link! You can't surrender yourself to Ganon's enormous, fertile Gerudo cock! You're the Champion of Hyrule Link! REEEEEEEEEEE"

WIP

>>4875344
nice work.
her arms seem stubby though.

>>4875362
yeah now that you mention it is a bit off, thanks

>>4875103
ver2

>>4875103
>>4875472
Would be good if not that muddy airbrush

>>4875472
Overall it's not bad. I would fix the rim light to get more volume out of the figure. Right now it's pretty even throughout and flattens the form. Try thinking about how it would affect different shapes in 3D space.

The other thing is the ears and the curves on some of the clothing. It feels a bit flat. I think her right ear would point back a bit more at that angle of the head.

Here is how I would do it.

>>4875722
thank I will consider this

>>4875630
yes, there no clear shadows

>>4875843
Anon that's not the angle the pinkslim goes in the vajoojoo

>>4875843
>resize.png
More like recalibrate your fucking (literally) angles she's about to bore through to her lower intestine and into the sand through her asshole

>>4872904
Daaamn daddy that's a lot of /asg/ amirite
(Good work)

>>4875843
do people actually find this arousing? am I growing to old and shriveled for this shit?

>>4875722
Fix

here we go. wish me luck bros

>>4870630
Mexico is full of those too.

>>4869077
ROFL
this is your brain if it's in your dick

>>4875919
not him, but it would improve tremendously if you warp the beehive stockings to follow the form of her thighs. the way they look now adds to some of the flatness he's pointing out

Could someone let me know if the anatomy on this has any glaring issues? Thanks kindly

>>4876883

that hand!
also her head is too big.

>>4874944

beautiful and really hot.
i love the detail of the hand pulling that sticker off of her boob, idk it just makes it incredibly hot for some reason

do you mind telling/showing your process when making a drawing?

>>4876896
Which hand? The one on the belly or the one facing behind?

>>4876899
nothing fancy really, I just draw sketch, laying out forms and design, then I just refine lineart - sometimes on another layer, in this one I used the same layer. During this I mostly focus on line weight - adding weight with a brush or thinning out lines with an eraser.That's pretty much it

>>4876896
Is this better?

>>4863258
Thanks, although it is taking me too long, however, its generally 90% procrastinating.

>>4864841
nothing, just work, video games and procrastinating. @ac120rfw

>>4877112
That paneling is much better now, glad you fixed it

>>4873419
Haha. Thanks so much. It’s so relieving to get positive feedback. twitter.com/koshirkgk is me! I’m trying to post more.

>>4874676
That’s a huge compliment since I don’t have too much experience. I use procreate. I got some really hard square brush from some free pack (I don’t remember which! I’m really sorry!) and I paint on a very low opacity.

>>4877361
based and hagpilled

>>4876985
looking better already
just make sure to look at proportions, unless your character is a halfling or something

>>4875344
progress

>>4877645
her head is way out of proportion

>>4877645
NIIIIIIIIIICE
>>4878484
no, its fine. she is a petite

>>4877645
Virginity is good too.

>>4867229
fuckin' hell boofag you've gone too far this time. Why the fuck would you do this

>>4867229
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6tpCJ2zAAbY

>>4867229
every day we stray further from god.

>>4874944
I like the way you did the legs. I don't know about that face though

crotch tits

fun ball

muscle bitch

>>4879225
>>4879205
>>4879202
blog?

>>4879202
>>4879205
>>4879225
FURRIES, ALARM
FIGHT BACK BROTHERS
CLEANSE THE SINNERS

>>4879335
I got banned from Twitter for being racist or something. no gallery
>>4879345
got one of them lole

>>4877486
Cool hands, blog?

I feel like this was just really unsavory, but it's done.

>>4872904
>>4874667


I agree with >>4874765 you are doing good

>>4880214
>>4874765
thanks. i want to make a doujin and i recently started preparing for it by practicing. it's the first time i'm actively drawing these things in this way so i'm still trying to adjust. i feel like it lacks sexiness/eroticism. like i need to be careful about being drawing too angular and bony characters and try to use more soft curves.
and maybe more intensity in expression and stuff.

any feedback on this would be helpful.

Study of recent cutesexyrobutts

Whoever is OP do you have contact info? I'd love to commission you.

>>4880289
For the second drawing you posted, I think maybe the girl's neck is too long. I don't see anything wrong with the images in the first picture you posted, other than the dude's weird giant smiley face is distracting, lol. I'm not an artist though.

How long have you been drawing like this? For whatever reason I want to start drawing erotic stuff, but I'm not very experienced in drawing.

>something I made years ago for a friend

Going to the tavern, you guys want anything?

Still a lot of sketch lines to clean up. Keep going with this?

>>4880666
forgot to resize

been working on this, the only difference is that right have longer legs. wich one looks better

>>4875291
His nose smushed on it is really cute
>>4880671
You draw like the Behind The Dune guy

>>4880704
Just did a search on that. Cool, Thank you!
Also, just noticed the dude in my drawing looks like a Mega-Chad Paul Atreides.

>>4880726
This is so hot. Do you have a blog, Twitter, or something like that?

>>4880732
Me
>>4872634

>>4879335
i take that back. i just memed an irl friend to give me his phone number for a new account. heres what i have up so far.

https://twitter.com/HEAVENSEVEN31

>>4880704
>You draw like the Behind The Dune guy
Bullshit. Compared to how Balsamique stylises his characters these mechanical couplings are absolute dogshit. You need your eyes checked.

>>4881231
followed, looking forward to more of your work fren

Thoughts?

how's this going?

>>4882683
>>4882836
be specific when asking for critique

also you are both shit

>>4882858
not asking for critique just thoughts

also calling someone shit isn't critique.

ᵃˡˢᵒ ᵖʸʷ

>>4882683
Are you the guy who drew the hobbit porn?

>>4883273
nope

>>4883301
Ah, I thought the style seems kinda similar. Good work, though.

new thread
>>4883772
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first digital porno drawing

>>4885982
Damn that bitch ate his whole skull