/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

stop making so many different GENERALS GOD DAMN IT
what's next? sfw loli alternative draw thread?

>>4820065
shut up retarded newfag

>>4820070
no

>>4820065
Kek

>>4820065
Loomis study general

oh thanks for using my pic. i havent found a lot of motivation to finish it but i worked on it a little. ill probably complete it at some point

>>4820085
Really cool man, I like it a lot :)

>>4819573
>>4819607
Not sure why I was accused of tracing, but here is the video process of me drawing from last thread.
https://streamable.com/sxgcoh

>>4819351
I’ll try soft fading it out, thank you.

I might as well ask as I’ve been accused of this multiple times here for some reason; what aspect about my art does it seem like I “traced” or like I use 3D models? Pic related is what I posted last thread.
>>4820145
Uploaded the video process here too as backup as it appears streamable doesn’t allow adult content. https://files.catbox.moe/qu2ifg.mp4

>>4820171
It just seems like a grab straight from Super Deepthroat. But your video says otherwise, so whatever lul

Finished rendering this one. This was pretty fun, got to use colors I'm definitely not as comfortable with. First time drawing explicit porn instead of just pinups, too. Lotsa fun there. I should prolly take a break from coomer art for a while and get some actual work done, but it's so much fun to do

>>4820239
Ah, I see. I was only wondering as I’ve posted other artwork of mine here on /ic/ on two separate occasions and was accused of tracing over 3D models as well both times. Was wondering if it was the way I was drawing or rendering that it made seem like I was tracing or something.

>>4820284
Yeah, I think its the way you do lineart without any weight to the lines. That's usually a telltale sign of someone who's just tracing from a 3D model

>>4820295
The shitty beg lineart really drags this down

>>4820288
Thank you, I tried fixing up the lines a bit. Does the right look better? Or should I be adding a bit more weight to it than what I have so far.

Any criticisms on my anatomy and perspective?

>>4820534
Honestly, all of it. There's too much that is anatomically incorrect to be worth redlining it. Keep studying construction proportions anatomy and keep drawing.

>>4820085
I love your work. Where I can see more?

>>4820644
I just started a twitter today but it's in my real name and i'd rather not dox myself sorry

>>4820295
Very stiff posture. Exercise dynamic posture and flow lines.

>>4820706
You can post stuff on imgbb (no account needed) and give links but no pressure.

I still appreciate your work

>>4820534
Americans, it even once.

>>4820780
post your social? i might already know you

>>4820061
>>4820085
kek I've seen those asses before
good reinterpretation

I tried posting this on the /aco/ commission thread to no avail. Hopefully I'll have better luck here

I'm looking for an artist who can draw vag in such overt and exaggerated detail (pic related)

>>4820949
no

>>4820991
"no" as in there's no one here who's interested in taking the job (because I'm confident some artists here are open to the task)
or "no" as in you personally refuse to do it?

>>4820949

Not sure what else to do with this picture, anyone got any tips for how I can make it stand out more?

>>4820949
why

>>4821196
Background wise, maybe a casino setting with blackjack tables or a changing room? That's just me, though.

For the figure, I think you've done a solid job at rendering, anon. You got a blog?

>>4821282
Yeah, @pictsel on twitter. Not the best at backgrounds but I like your idea, might try it.

>>4820253
i know she's supposed to be an alien, but her eyes are really unappealing.

>>4820949

>>4821196
Here’s my take. Thing about anime style is you can bend the rules of reality and add random light sources for fun. Don’t be afraid to fuck shit up in the name of fun.

>>4820949
just the vag? what's the context? also, are those all by the same artist? I've been meaning to get better at drawing more detailed vags

>>4821381
Man you fucked the mouth up

>>4821233
Cuz pussy, das y

>>4821418
Not just the vag, but it's obviously the focus. Yup, all done by the same dude. Drop me your gallery link/contact if you're interested in hearing moar

>>4821381
Agree with>>4821433
I can't tell if that's lip gloss or an open mouth

I imagine i'll get made fun of for posting fetish art but I think it goes here, right? I don't usually coom post on this board.

>>4821381
I like the idea behind the highlights, I'll give that a shot, thanks.

>>4821452
Who is the artist?

>>4821484
It's not the only problem with the picture but easy fix here that feather under her chin looks like a beard

>>4820706
DC= Dsy#0238

>>4821484
Need to check the angle of her head, the face is too tilted towards viewer imo. Guy with same fetish btw.

Making a comic

>>4822293
It should be like “here’s a tip - next time swallow the whole thing”

>>4820085
Great pic overall, ticks off a few fetishes

In some ways this is not a step up from the previous version. Try lowering the overall contrast (harsh shadows, background figures etc) and de-cluttering the composition. Also I thought the woman was holding the hand of a 14-16 year old boy and I think that makes more sense - adding more sexual tension as well as a figure for the audience to identify with.

I finally got myself to draw something again but I feel like I've made a lot of really big mistakes in this piece and I'm not sure how to fix it without scrapping it and starting over?

>>4822639
idk, looks fine to me. Finish up the right side and call it good, move onto the next project. The more time you spend brooding over something you feel you aren't 100% perfectly happy with, the less motivation you'll have to draw the next piece.

>>4821484
You will only get made fun of your shitty art.

Not enough scrawny man ocs in this thread.

>>4820061
How the fuck do you draw boobs?
Every time I try it comes out as some saggy grandma shit.

>>4823275
I love the energy in your lineart.

>>4820145
>>4820284

>>4822293
breddi gud

>>4823682

>>4823871
Thank you thank you thank you

>>4823682
Attach them to an actual model. You won't have any sense of scale, weight, etc if they're just free floating. Draw a torso, no boobs, just clavicle + ribcage + abdomen, duplicate it a few times, and attach boobs to it

Tried to go compact, thicc and simplified... ended up halfway between that and realism. Cannot into stylisation yet!

>>4823911
It's ugly study appeal

>>4823916
Could you give me some pointers of where to start? Beside copying artists I like I’m not sure how to learn appeal - has always been the missing ingredient in any drawing I do
(This is just a rough btw)

>>4823911
looks like that pink haired girl from that burger show with pirates grown up into a midget with fake tits and diabetes judging by those legs

Current wip, trying to work out the belly deformation

>>4822293
good shit
Blog?

>>4823911
Appeal is kinda subjective anon, I personally have a folder full of artists that have art I really like and whose style choices Id like to incorporate into my own, and when i draw anything related I put those pieces up on my reference board. I sometimes straight up steal little details or or the way he/drew a foot.
TLDR: STEAL AND COPY

ughh

>>4823959
Haha, great description

>>4823967
Thank you for the help anon, I’ll try that out. Do you have any learning resources for stylisation? Every time I do it I lean towards amorphous blobs, and as you can see they’re not very appealing. Is it just intelligence and understanding of the subject matter that allows stylising? Soul?

>>4824023
Blog?
There can never be enough Draenei r34 in this world

>>4823967
Are you on Discord?

>>4824078
-Steven Silver, the silver way,
-griz and norm's tutorials
I dont read desu,
Any art book dealing with animation since they are the best at simplifying shapes down to their most appealing a basic forms.

>>4824156
Nope im a boomer
I only have twitter for now
might get discord in the future

>>4824180
And what's your Twitter nick?

>>4824180
@Grunemslut

>>4824023
Your backgrounds are gorgeous. Any tutorials/books you can recommend for achieving this kind of look?

>>4824341
uhh.. is the uncle female (male)? if so based.

>>4824534
basically, twink uncle malcador

>>4820061
>>4820085
You know I thought I was immune to a lot of fap bait, but that underwear got through my defenses. It's so rare but so sexy at the same time. God dayum.

>>4823275
Far from scrawny with thighs/hips like that

>>4824341
>>4824534
>>4824537
This is what autism looks like.

>>4820085
Kek'd the moment i got the reference

>>4824253
what are you talking about? its my first background that I did with a lot of struggle and pain, I took this screenshot as a reference and still fucked it up

>>4820085
Are they riding a box for any particular reason? Perhaps they’re washer girls scrubbing clothes, or housemaids, or fetching something, or riding in the back of a cart. What’s the story except for cooooom assssss but ye olde?

>>4824850
idk dont need a story. its a meme painting to begin with

>>4823275
how r my forms?;)

>>4825700
pretty good, id say you could define the left buttcheeck a bit more desu,
Id also thin out the torso and thicken the neck and wrist a bit

Can a chad help me by redlining this?

>>4823925
You’re following the rules too much. Bend the rules of anatomy and reality a little bit. Exaggerate forms while simplifying them. Study artists you find appealing and trace their works to see how they break the rules. Appeal does require a solid fundies foundation but you should always break the rules of what you learned if it improves the overall aesthetics of the piece. Simply put, if it looks good it is good.

While I like the feel of this gauche pen set I can’t shake the thought that it’s just a crutch for the fact I suck at inking.

Oink oink.

>>4820303
Why beg? Maybe they just have an entry level tablet

>>4828047
Blog?

>>4828078
I'm at https://twitter.com/vshtone

I figure this is a decent place to ask.
Where do you guys go to for lewd reference material?
I've been wanting to do some larger boob practice but skimming through porn is a bit tedious. I thought maybe instagram models but most pictures are boring front shots and really non dynamic.

>>4828305
quit looking for reference and learn the body function instead.
>I've been wanting to do some larger boob practice but skimming through porn is a bit tedious.
JUST FUCKING DRAW

>>4820253
The eyes ruin it, which is a pity because everything else is good.

>>4828054
>blaming the pencil for a bad drawing

LOL SHIGGY DIGGY

>>4824023
looks cheap af

>>4822739
I spent too much time fixing it but I'm just glad I finished it. You're right, but idk I've been unable to focus on art recently

>>4829015
Hell yeah anon! It looks great. Hope you learned a lot while making it

>>4824023
Why does tree have a cock?

>>4829298
at first it was placed like this, but client wanted the dick shooting a load, so i had to move it further, gotto fix the tangent

This is my WIP. I tend to have really bad problems with symmetrical images being really skewed - does this look too much to one side? Or is It ok so far?

>>4829717
Sorry if too big - I don’t know how to tell on my phone...

>>4824023
The background mostly matches the ref you used, but the characters are ultra saturated and almost pillow shaded with no clear indication of the light direction. White haired one seems to be lit from the upper right and the purple haired one looks to be lit from the upper left. The highlights are max saturation and so are the shadows. Tone down the saturation on the shadows a little bit and tone down the light area saturation alot. Typically the light areas will be a bit less saturated than the base skin color. On normal white person skin it would be lighter, less saturated and slightly more toward the yellow hue than the base skin color. Save the saturation for the border between light and shadow just adding a little strip of color. If they are being lit by moonlight remember your cast shadows since moonlight will cast shadows just the same as the sun. Also try to paint the grass. Grass clone brushes just end up looking like fur. It's a pain in the ass but it'll look lots better and if you are stuck just study how the blizz environment artists did it.

someone in last thread (i think, i got banned lol, it's been a minute) asked about the brush i use for lines, it's just the procreate equivalent of hard round with pressure on opacity but also on roundness, so the lighter i press the more wedge shaped the tip gets an vice versa, which mimics the way i like to draw with mechanical pencils (i tend to let the tip get chiseled so that i can get diff kinds of line thickness out of it just by how i press it to the page and angle as well as rotate the barrel)

>>4829717
love the render, really cute well done nipples, teach me ur sneakrits

>>4831112
That's hot as fuck, do a short comic with these two! The gal's intrigued, don't leave her hangin'

>>4831112
Ty! I guess my secret is I shade with triangles and try to have a balance of hard and soft shade transitions? Lots of pink and blend with opaque paintbrush with the blur tool - and get the stronger shapes with a highlight. I dunno if that’s illuminating or anything tho.

>>4831112
How do you draw feet? - they freakin kill me

>>4829717
Do you have twitter or somewhere i can follow you?

>>4828086
>https://twitter.com/vshtone
You retweet and post too much non art shit. Your art is appealing, but there's too much clutter in your blog and I don't want that shitting up my timeline.

.

>>4820065
it's the only reason this board is no longer shit

>>4831578
retard alert retard alert

>>4831607
pyw

>>4831381
Ah - not really. This is my first sort of foray into this. I made a deviant art tho
https://www.deviantart.com/bagelbags/

Is Twitter the preferred site?

Fuck procastinating.
If this guy made it so that someone pirated his work and uploaded it to sadpanda so can I!

aight bros what do you think
im trying interesting sexual scenes

>>4832174
>interesting
To make a scene you need to make the subjects interact with each other.
Put on paper with the intention to interact with each other.
You just drew the girl and a dick and added an hand to connect them.
Yer gonna need a lot more than that.

Relapse

>>4832835
The girl is cute

>>4832840
blog now

>>4832835
where the fuck did you learn anatomy? wwhaaat did you use to learn plss anon.

>>4832963
Your style is so gross and unappealing

>>4832852
JUST FUCKING DRAW

>>4832968
He knows that

>>4833011
Then why continue? It's vaguely anime inspired it's not like that's hard to change.

>>4832996
No shit. Draw studying what specifically?
Ic keeps reminding me this place is full of brainlets

>>4833072
>brainlets
You are the one asking stupid questions. You have dozens of books on anatomy for artists out there. All you need to do is to use google and then go buy them, you fucking imbecile.

how to make this rendering better?

>>4833429
Start with cleaner, crisp lines

>>4833483
nah it always looks like shit when i do that
i want sth like this now

>>4833429
>how to make this rendering better?
use references

>>4833520
values, he has much stronger value separation

>>4833429
Block out larger areas of shadow with more red - toss in some brighter intensity into those blocks to illuminate and keep the idea this is a being with blood in there. Add some sharp lines of white height on the edges?

>>4831780
what does my work have to do with the conversation at hand in any way. surely you're not just reflexively typing that every time you disagree with someone like a retard?

hmmm

>>4833429
Start by fixing her upper torso, jesus

>>4833429
Try practicing contrast with just rendering in grayscale with references. Also hard round brush meme.

>don't lewd the bean don't lewd the bean don't lewd the bean

well whatever this is over
this is still the best thing i've drawn

How should i go about making coomer money?
First i need following on some social media. thats a given

Lewd popular characters that i find interesting

also what should i consider paying more attention to while drawing smut?
I detest the usual whorish poses and stuff, but i feel as if it isnt enough to suggest the act, but that i need to have explicit angles that depict the penetration with vivid detail

one annon suggested that i do the little comic book panels that show detailed penetration, but i find that solution lacking,

any advice, fellow sickos?

>>4820061
I made this a while back. I'm not really happy with the composition and other bits, but I just stuck with it. I enjoy the process, but I still feel like a /beg/ in many, many ways. Maybe I need to overhaul the way I do this and start to plan things out more?

>>4834621

>>4833726
>retarded hands and feet
>broken wrist
>that shoulder to hip ratio lmao
>ribcage is missing and spine is broken.
>spent all focus on drawing the tits and the rest of the body looks like shit.
Try again and look at some references. Fucker.

>>4832835
more like prolapse amirite

>>4834725
Your colours are too vibrant and there's a lack of cohesion in them. The girls appear as if they're in broad daylight, but your goblin thing is melting into the background and needs more attention on the values. The background and foreground feel like they're fighting for dominance. Other than those problems though it is good.

>>4835243
you are using the wrong b&w but your point still stands

How do I learn to follow through with something?

>>4835259
Phoneposting so had to change it to B&W with a gallery filter.

>>4822639
a blog?

>>4835243
Thanks for the input. I don't have a strong intuition about color and composition, and I haven't really developed it. My thought was to have the girls be the focus, eyes can rest on the devil guy. But the high chroma/contrast in the background distracts from that? What should the b&w show me beyond values?

>>4832835
>>4832840
lambrey you keep killing your twitter man, is there anywhere you have all your stuff?

>>4820171
I noticed that you've had a tenfold increase in your Twitter following recently. Congrats.

>>4835290
struggling with this myself... it's kind of helped me to have art I really like as reference/on a mood board so I can look at it and say; "that's my goal, to get it to that level of 'completeness'" and that helps visualise the end goal. otherwise it can seem vague and aimless and easy to give up on. good luck anon

>>4828086
Yep, I decided I like all your art.

This belongs here

Underneath the standing desk I just added a glass top with a grid underneath for cutting and printmaking. I'm really excited to break out my ink's again!

How do I make a butt look this soft?

I luv fishchan

>>4837384
Fug I Forgot to resize

>>4832837

give blog now

>>4837396
>>4837384
There's no real reason to resize or compress an image if it's below the file size limit.

>>4835670
Stop following mentally ill artists. The content he creates should be a red flag on its own.

not too sure how to show the neck

i tried to put a little bit more effort into face but feels like i went straight into uncanny valley

>>4838810
Anon, her arms are fucking broken and dislocated.

>>4838810
Are her arms piercing through her tits?

>>4838810
You also made her arms too short by around half.

>>4838810
you can't just randomly slap features on to a head that isn't even structured correctly. Also the breasts look like balloons that are about to pop lmao.

>>4838810
I'm beg asf but I tried. The pose is just dumb to begin with.

>>4838901
>>4838810
Your arms really don’t like bending out like that. They can but it’s not comfortable or natural. Give the pose a try and you’ll see. Joint limits are a never talked about but critical part of learning anatomy.

>>4838810
My take. You would render the lips more subtle, or else it'd look really weird.

>>4838901
beat me to it

Oh well

>>4838901
>>4839016
the state of this board

>>4839042
great apart from her right shoulder and nose

>>4820949
what is with artists adding horse assholes to human girls?

>>4839079
Please pyw too. We would love to be blessed by your godly art. But a mere crumb for a humble /beg/.

>>4839090
i'm beg too but you don't need to be a chef to know the cooking is shit :)

>>4839042
hucow

>>4839096
Ok but you are just shitting on drawings for no reason. As if you could do better or at least give constructive critique. Kys

thanks for replies, i was focused on face too much and kinda forgot about the rest
>>4839016
this one is nice, similar to what i had in mind except different shape of eyes (and no ahegao lol)

>>4839016
>cute mommy with thick lips and playful eyes vs
>nu-anime 1000 yards stare monkey lips

Try to learn to digital paint

>>4839016
lips look much better but the eyes are dead now

>>4839016
You don’t understand how eyes work that’s why it looks fucked up

>>4834725
Finally a woman who doesn't look like her hips and legs got filled with lard

It's trash bandit Peach.

>>4837218
Usually people tell me it's too ugly so this made me happy, thanks. Hope you like m my Peach when it's finished >>4839478

>>4837290
hard round brush

>>4839478
I like your style anon! But something is going on with her pelvis, it looks disconnected from the rest of the spine. Like her left hip & obliques area are way longer than they should be. I’m kinda shit at anatomy or else I’d red line it for you

>>4839478
The face and hair is amazing
the body looks to bendy for me, the arms especially.

still, really nice work
looking forward to the finished piece

>>4839505
I scotched some stuff around in photoshop, maybe this will help you see what I mean

>>4822293
Finished line art

>>4839522
Thanks Anon, appreciate it.

>>4839523
Oh fuckkk you're right. This stuff is never as obvious when you've been staring at it in a large screen for 3+ hours.

Probably can’t post this one to Facebook.

>>4839243
Cute!

>>4839936
do it. dont be a bitch

>>4839936
Oh, look an envious racist dicklet lol.

>>4839936
This is why i love this board. It isnt /co/mblr infested. Well except for this anon >>4840314

>>4840332
A racist piece of shit can actually understand the concept of love? Wow.

>>4840573
They think they do

>>4840573
nigger lovers fuck off

>>4840573
hi bbcchan

>>4840130
Please change your art style. It’s not the subject matter that makes it repulsive, it’s the style choices

>>4839478
Blog?

>>4840590
Can a person just change their art style at the drop of a hat (or because some faggot complains)?

>>4840619
there's been numerous complaints

>>4840591
I'm at https://twitter.com/vshtone, thanks!

>>4840633
Yeah. But this is /ic. The complaints are probably all just memeing.

>>4840578
Seriously. That tranny needs to dilate.

>>4839478
Your things are becoming more appealing and cute

>>4839478
Fantastic work! The eyes are very Bluth-esque. The upper arms don’t look quite right. Maybe a little too chubby and short for the rest of the body?

>>4840890
Sorry. Meant the lower arms.

Sketch WIP. Perspective makes me feel like an idiot I hate it but I also want to master it

>>4840578
I'm a people lover and you are a racist pieace of shit.

>>4840583
I wish.

>>4840997
The lower half seems a little disproportionate and is the whole picture is hard to read.
The leg seems broken off/detached.
Although i'd say, vision: 9/10
Could be a really interesting image if you cleaned it up and fixed the glaring mistakes.

>>4841050
Thank you, those are the parts I've been trying on-loop to fix. I'm scared to continue using my eyes to fix it and turn it into another flat piece, abandoning my attempts at doing perspectice. That's usually how it feels like it goes at least. With that in mind, gonna have to bust out some mannequins to try and figure out the proportions because trial and error clearly aint working.

This will be cleaned up with lines / color soon ish. I do have a bad habit of making images overly cluttered with effect lines, hearts, SFX, and dialogue, so I'm trying to be more mindful of it in this one from the start. Well see how it ends up I guess

what do you think bros

>>4841063
Anon, don't be afraid of making mistakes.
Keep going, you'll eventually get where you want to go.
Although, if you don't mind a few more nitpicks:
The left arm holding the head of the girl is too small, out of place and the pose is unnatural.
You shouldn't be able to see the deltoids from that perspective.
Also, If he was going for a choke, he'd do it like pic related.
The girl's arm that is free is barely visible.
I guess you were going for
>she's holding herself unto the dude's head
or something but make her do something else. more consistent with the pose and current action.
The other hand shouldn't be there because of the tail, wrapped around her, pressing her shoulder and arm inwards/behind.
An easy fix imo would be to push the leg outward and make her forearm visible and hand grip to the tail.
Lastly, the hand gripping the leg.
Make it bigger to be more consistent with the dude's proportions and perspective and push it down towards the thighs.

Take my words with a grain of salt though
It's your work after all, if my words help you, i'm glad they do.

>>4841137
Thanks anon, I appreciate you taking the time to write all that out. I'll do my best to fix as much of this as I can before I jump into lines tomorrow. A lot of the big pose changes are probably off the table though because the client already (enthusiastically) approved the sketch. With that said though, I'll be happier with it if I make those improvements so I'm gonna do my best.

>>4841175
No problem, anon.

>>4841066
The only mistakes i see is the left shoulder being too big, her right hip bone standing out too much and her right leg.
For the leg try making a single slight curve outwards, from her butt to the knee.

I cachinnate vociferously at your assertations.

>"looks at you lewdly"
wat

Will I make it?

>>4841388
thanks for redline
sorry for bad english
Im polish

>>4841066
I'm not entirely sure if her hips are supposed to be turning away from us, her breasts seems attached too high as well

>>4840997
little too messy. unsure whats going on here. its hard to read

>>4841600
i used this ref for the boobs dunno to me it looks like on here
youre right about the hips should have constructed that better

>>4841606
Thank you anon. Hopefully with color and cleaned up lines I can improve it's readability but I've gotten that feedback from a few people now so I'm definitely keeping it in mind

Can someone redline my pikachu rule 34?

i torrented clip studio paint earlier this afternoon. this is the first thing i have drawn (its a trace, I know, I just wanted to get a feel for the controls) this is the first digital art ive done. I used the aoc see thru pic but changed it to be completely disrobed.

am I fucking this up

Still can’t sleep. Can only draw shitty coom art.

>>4842592
Breasts attached to collar bone

>>4841395
Not by shitposting on 4chan.

did this a while back, not a complete coomer but its refreshing sometimes!

>>4823361
Cute

>>4823911
Shitty redline, but I think ur main issue is just that it’s stiff, needs more gesture so the forms flow into one another

any tip on dripping cum?

>>4843009
how the fuck do i pull out the still images?

>>4820061
>>4820085
This is awesome. Love stuff that has some wider context/story to it. Really inspiring.

>>4825966
upper leg part (femur) looks too long in relation to the rest of the body. Femur length is more or less equal to the distance between nipples and the top of the head, see my pic for more info. Collar bone looks like shirt v-neck. it seems that you don't know anatomy and just try to guess where the bones are

I love Byleth....

>>4831199
maybe, if attempting consistency on those two doesn't make me want to hurt myself

>>4831294
shapes, go look at boondraws, i am aping the way they draw feet here hard. i'm always really bad at explaining anything but i like really chonky proportions, think street fighter or mha or even fuckin sonic designs, big feet n big hands, solid forms, heavy emphasis on shape design without forsaking a sense of depth an form

>>4831246
can never under estimate triangles, plus it's a unique stylistic choice, it works really good in my opinion, ver pleasing shape play while also giving you two shadow edges in multiple directions to show off formmmm, ace

>>4842859
surprisingly solid feedback for the person who keeps drawing shitpost doodles of pikachu with a massive hardon (not that i have any room at all to speak...)

>>4843710
cyoot

>>4843769
>>4831112
Really like your stuff

>>4824537
Nice

>>4841757

wondering if is too busy the draw and how to do that effect i'm trying to get

My new WIP.

>>4844026

>>4844269
Is that star and jackie?

I would omit some of either the top or bottom motion for clarity, doesn't look like she's moving, more like she has two asses

>>4844304
I wish people like you died all at once.

>>4844505
aren't the folds a little overkill?
Even then, it shouldn't have that many folds if the shirt is tight

>>4844551
supposed to be wet, adding that effect as I render

>>4843769
Blog?

>>4844580
Yeah, explains it. Looks good then.

for all the hate he gets, shadman has a very unique style that everyone knows from a glance.

>>4844821
>shadman

>>4843769
Why do you keep doing this?

>>4844821
shouldn't the neeko-lul bitch be shorter than both of them?

>>4844821
Hes definitely gotten a lot better thats for sure. Although lately hes gone back to his "overly detailed with unnecessary shading" art style that looked like shit years ago and still looks like shit today. But at least hes not saving his images in shitty jpeg formats and compressing the living hell out of his images until theyre filled with a million artifacts anymore.

>>4843769
Based

>>4844516
Thank

>>4844866
Can you show an example of one of the overly shaded ones? I always have a hard time deciding when to stop adding details.

>>4842733

Nice stained glass design.

>>4844920
Birds of a feather...

>>4845170
what the fuck is this

>>4820061
draw more sniffing

>>4845425
Broken collarbone

>>4845170
Please, keep using reference. Don't attempt to draw from imagination yet or you'll end up doing this kind of abomination again.

>>4845655
it's not that bad. There are some parts that need to be fixed but overall it's not an "abomination". No need to demoralize a guy

>>4839936
blog/ insta ?

>>4844505
yes is star and jackie, im trying to do a 3 page comic lol

>>4845425
this I guess

>>4845916
yeah and now attempt to redline shoulder muscles in that guy's pic and you'll see what's wrong

>>4840666
>>4840619
The dude's been told "Your style is horribly unappealing" by just about everyone for months and months, if he was going to listen to criticism he'd have done it a long time ago.

I decided today I'll become a coomer artist. This is the first time I've ever drawn something like this but fuck it. I'm just gonna do it.

>>4846058
My 2nd attempt.

>>4844580
even when wet there shouldn't be folds like that on the tight breast area.

Imagination

are the legs too long?
i always make em too damn long,
they were already longer then this but i shrank them twice already.
fuckin twice!!! AAAAHHHHHHH

>>4846160
Enjoy the shit of is this.

>>4846288
learn perspective pls

>>4846272
i made boobs bigger, legs shorter, shoes bigger.

>>4846288
>>4846292
>>4846292
im not gonna be able to fix the perspective but i can fix the backwards foot

Anyone have good references on commission pricing? Opened a NSFW twitter recently, and am already getting comissions requests. I don't wanna be like those guys on deviantart who are billing like, 2$ an hour (Had enough of that after doing actual graphic design stuff)

Here's a gallery of my stuff so far
https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/7661852

>>4846328
Why not just leave the bg empty instead of that lazy thing you did?
Also eyes too close together

>>4846125
Number 3

new thread
>>4846657
>>4846657
>>4846657

>>4839243
lol

>>4820534
kys faggot

>>4820949
Cunts look disgusting