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Previous >>4815737


What is /ALT/?
If you're looking for a place to post your cartooning then you've found the right general. This is /ic/s 1st and only merged hub where both Eastern and Western stylization can coexist peacefully, hence the double title. However, by community demand and long history, this is favorably an Anime general.
>Rules & Guidelines
(1) Any form of cartooning is welcome; so submit and receive feedback from others. (2) Please resize your images before posting. (3) Share your knowledge and (4) Remember to not be afraid of asking for critique. Most importantly I encourage you to keep discussion at a civil level, but you're more than welcome to share your opinions.
>I came for anime. Why does the image OP say cartoons general?
To distinguish from the anime study thread (janitor supported). Please post your studies there and personal work goes here.
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>Community Resources
Hitokaku Index
>http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~zm5s-nkmr/
List of active livestreams
>Use twitch #art
>yoshikadu2011 https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCUx5dpO6d5gQ4KWNPc24CKw
FellowBro's Book Collection
>http://mediafire.com/?i44dwzkf9j9n8
Tutorial & Reference Collection
>http://pinterest.com/characterdesigh/
Japanese Tutorials & Documentary
>http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?id=59317 (0033)
>http://iradukai.com/
References
>http://www.onairvideo.com/croquis-cafe-photos2.html
>http://www.eggazyoutatsu.net/eng/atarichan.html
>http://senshistock.com/sketch/

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random sketches

>> No.4831274

>>4831203
ugly

>> No.4831282

>>4831274
pyw beg

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Finished this today

>> No.4831742

>>4831172
>my work in OP
This is a first for me, I'm very flattered

>> No.4831874
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>> No.4831877

>>4831874
cute

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Is it legit to draw with a 1 pixel meme brush? people tell me to get some normal brush, but I'm used to this one -_-

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>>4831920
same energy

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What fuck ups have I made?

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Ah, many flaws here but I still like the overall vibe :’)

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>> No.4832111

>>4831920
that's not how ass works

>> No.4832112

/beg/ part 2

>> No.4832117

Who the fuck picked the ugly ass /beg/ OP pic? Is this a joke?

>> No.4832118
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>>4832070
i love it.
i get Gits manga vibes and a hint of dorohedoro
post blog

>> No.4832121

>>4832117
maybe if you posted your work we would have used it but you didn't because you're /beg/ as well.

>> No.4832145

>>4832117
Lol yeah. Last thread we had some guy with more than 10 years of drawing expirience and that was a decent thread. But whenever you use garbage pic threads turn out shit.

>> No.4832146

>>4832145
The OP pic isn't even appealing. Beg work is fine if it at least looks good but this one looks like straight garbage

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>>4831711
Not sure if I like this one more or not

>> No.4832151

>>4832148
I get that it's abstract but it's not cohesive at all. Try a more unified palette.

>> No.4832154

>>4832070
Good luck on things, not gonna crit anymore if you don't even try to study. Obvious to me you're gonna remain on this level for years and years.

>> No.4832159

>>4832154
kind of have to agree ive also given you multiple tips and you seem very receptive and polite but your art is the same thing still

>> No.4832165

>>4832070
Agree with the other anons. Your work looks fine but you haven't improved in months and never take the advice you ask for

>> No.4832311

>>4831920
You can make 1px work, you're not making work tho

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>>4832154
>>4832159
>>4832165
I'm genuinely curious since i'm a filthy beg but how do you improve from that >>4832070 ?
How should that work in that style evolve?
pic related is my work

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>>4831172
this reminds me a lot of texhonlyze. do people on this board like abe? I don't lurk here often

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>>4832395
You got at least one abe fan here

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>>4832395
I think his artstyle and character designs are just "ok" but his background work and composition are top notch and the lightning and color choices always invoke a sense of nostalgia in me

>> No.4832424

>>4832146
While i agree it's /beg/ i don't think it's ugly at all. Appeal is subjective and i find it appealing.

>> No.4832437

>>4832018
Too much delineation, not enough structure. sibjectibely, the bulbous, over sized facial features look rediculous.
Reminds me of that 'sexy Batman' strawman comic.

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Is this any appealing? What to improve?

>> No.4832674

As a /beg/ I have to say that these threads used to me my favourite. Even when /beg/ work was posted it generally had a healthy amount of soul. Like the creator knew what he wanted and where he was going but just didn't have the mileage to get there yet.

Lately though that seems to be slipping away. Don't get me wrong there's still a lot of great stuff being posted but If things keep going this way I can see it becoming the exception rather than the rule.

>> No.4832683

>>4832674
it's the natural course of things.
/ic/ is a place you're supposed to graduate from.
most good artists here rightfully leave once they realize this board has nothing to offer them anymore.
so you're only left with ints and begs for a while, then eventually a couple of ints improve and the quality picks up again for a while, rinse and repeat.

>> No.4832778

>>4832674
This post is so devoid of meaningful content, you could remove all of the vowels and it would be functionally identical.

>> No.4832782

>>4832683
t. /beg/

>> No.4832787

>>4832778
Just words to the ether my man

>> No.4832800

>>4832117
OP has to be trolling.

>> No.4832808

>>4832782
Yes retard that's exactly what I'm saying.
there isn't a single work posted here that isn't /beg/ because outside of like 3 people (mainly zeldafag and tableguy), /beg/s are all that's left.

>> No.4832812

>>4832117
>>4832800
>Seething that your art wasn’t used as op pic

Try harder next time :^)

>> No.4832813

>>4832808
All the ints went to /salt/ . Splitting the general was the worst thing to happen to it.

>> No.4832825

>>4832813
Why'd that happen anyway?

>> No.4832827

>>4832808
As a /beg/ you are in no position to speculate on what more skilled artists feel compelled to do.

>> No.4832829

>>4832825
Probably because impressionable Redditors would shriek wojak memes at any sexual art.

>> No.4832832

>>4832825
Spergs acting like retards completely derailing the thread everytime someone posted a titty.

>> No.4832836

>>4832825
/begs/ complaining that sexual art isn't *real* art

>> No.4832847

>All this butthurt over the OP
The OPs have all been at around this level for a good while now with the only exceptions being zeldafag who is in no way reflects of the overall skill level of the people who post here.
you can easily fix this by posting good art but you won't because you're /beg/ yourselves which is why the OP fits you perfectly.

>> No.4832848

>>4832847
Most of us are ints from salt coming to laugh at the mess you made

>> No.4832858

>>4832848
Good. /alt/ is redundant and deserves to be made fun of.

>> No.4832863

Ironically the beg thread might be the least toxic part of this dogshit board

>> No.4832878

/alt/ really shit the bed

>> No.4832882

the dream is dead, bros

>> No.4832901

>>4831874
wtf are you doing with your life man? what the fuck is this? grow up

>> No.4832905

>>4832825
I blame whitebox

>> No.4832918

>>4832901
pyw

>> No.4832977

>>4832825
Porn threads got nuked by mods and some faggots reporting them, so someone made salt and it flies under the radar. It’s better this way because the porn in alt was more beg and cringe than the current alt. Both alt and salt/porn are the dumpsters for /ic/ where art goes to die, but I’d rather die in a hospital bed with my loved ones surrounding me in alt, than die in the streets with homeless men cumming on my wretched face while I sell my soul for one last sniff of a good life.

I do find it amusing that you actually fear being chosen as OP because your art was the most cringe in the last thread. It’s like the most delusional bad drawings are chosen that will incite the worst shit flinging. Now the best OP choice is an ironic drawing that makes the artist believe they were chosen because of high quality, but was really done to cause public shame.

These threads are truly cursed. I love it here.

>> No.4832985

Ugly OP

>> No.4833006

>>4832674
It's /ic/, people leave when they get tired of crabs when they know they can get better feedback and more positive attention elsewhere. A lot of people who used to be regulars, like the Yume Nikki guy and evilstaplers have 5-10k followers now and interact with popular artists. Why would they ever want to come back to threads like these, where they have nothing to gain?

>> No.4833009

>>4832977
I'm new to these threads and just mostly lurking for now and you made it sounds like i should avoid this general under all circumstances.
thanks for the heads up. i don't think i'll be losing anything by leaving, this general seems like the most redundant one with /asg/, /salt/ and the draw thread around.

>> No.4833012

>>4833009
Alt became shit when they started filtering out what counts as alt. Even slightly anime? Nope, have to post in asg. Nonsexual nude? Nope has to be in salt. Semi or realistic? Nope go to draw threads. All that leaves are the begs with awkward styles.

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>> No.4833024
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Im worried ill fuck it up when I color it so any advice on how I should move forward with lighting or improving the lineart provided would be appreciated. The light would be coming from the cauldron but I dont know where to start.

>> No.4833025
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>> No.4833028

>>4833025
Blog?

>> No.4833032

>>4833009
/alt/ is sick, if you are new, come back when things have gotten better. I like to stick around so I can “remember that time when...”

Alt has been around for ever. Before /beg/, /asg/, and /salt/. It was probably the first offspring of /draw/. It used to be more fun, now it’s kind of dry. Nobody really has any personalities anymore. Nothing to look forward to when some namefag or known anon posts. The only thing we do now is make a meme out of the OP - probably because some anon can’t make it as OP through the ordinary means of producing a good drawing.

But you used to come here to shit on firez wips (who basically turned into white box), see a rare jace pinup schizo post, cruise for blogs, reply to nosebro when he wanders out of /beg/, kiss some Nessie frog boys, and genuinely compete with others to make it into the OP.

Most of the time I feel like I’m just talking to myself.

>> No.4833033

>>4833012
From OP.
>This is /ic/s 1st and only merged hub where both Eastern and Western stylization can coexist peacefully
>However, by community demand and long history, this is favorably an Anime general.

You can post anime here. /asg is /beg but with anime.

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>>4833021
Liking the new way you draw yourself

>> No.4833123

>>4833032
>kiss some Nessie frog boys,
Shit man I miss her

It wasn't that long ago and all her stuff was really upbeat and packed with flavour.

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>>4833025
nice

>> No.4833157

>>4833021
>>4833025
I missed you bro

>> No.4833237

>>4832848
T. Beg

>> No.4833288

>>4832848
>int
Salt is /beg/ version of porn thread. Before all this /alt/ produced way better artwork than /salt/, now it’s even.

>> No.4833354

>>4832148
other one has better shape balance, the square background goes well with the characters round forms

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Working on my inking, especially on spotting blacks
pose is a bit stiffer than I hoped it'd be
>>4833025
>>4833022
love it
>>4832395
Haibane and Lain were his best works imo, very different atmospheres to portray but he does them very well

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Messing around a bit. Going to start looking for a new rendering process.

>> No.4833562

>>4833542
love the linework!

>> No.4833757

>>4833025
not sure why everyone is sucking your nuts so hard

this looks like nothing.

>> No.4833758

>>4833151
This is great!

>> No.4833790

>>4833757
Pyw

>> No.4833798

>>4833790
it looks alright but it's just some sketchy shit. it's not especially technical or interesting. people need to hop off your nuts

>> No.4833802

>>4833151
Blog?

>> No.4833852
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I don't know where else to post this so I'll post it here.

>> No.4833907

>>4833151
Don't post shit you didn't draw.

>> No.4834053

>>4833907
>He doesn't know ndr

>> No.4834085

>>4833852
I like the vibe anon, you would definitely benefit from studying figure drawing but I like the vibe

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>> No.4834357

>>4833907
hi begtard newfag

>> No.4834711

>>4834162
Good stuff man and congrats on having the balls to post the nazi girl on insta.

>> No.4834734

I'm still figuring out my own style & I want to draw both anime & celebrities.

Is it impossible to draw lineart of real life portraits and copy their likeness without resorting to blocking tones? I tried tracing and the lineart alone doesn't come even close to what the person looks like. Unlike copying anime/cartoons for instance.

>> No.4834747

>>4834734
From what you describe, it sounds like you are still too much of a beginner to be worrying about style. Focus on learning the fundamentals first.

>> No.4834751

>>4833907
LMAO

>> No.4834833
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finished this yesterday

>> No.4834841

>>4834833
Kaka

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>>4834841
shut the fuck up ill kill you

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Investigating some different faces / studies. I kind of like 4 or something in that direction, but that might actually be the same face i always draw

>> No.4834906

>>4834862
These actually all seem like the same face through the lens of different styles, with different facial expressions. Try to really push the differences in proportions. Do a super-thin, angular face, a round chubby face, a face with high cheekbones, a face with wideset eyes a face with a tiny nose, etc.
Number 2 comes closest to this type of variation, but it seems like you tried too hard to change the style rather the the proportions.

Then, after you've made a bunch of weird faces, look at what you can tweak in any given face to make it look attractive/appealing, while keeping the unique quality that it has. Spend some time iterating in this manner for a while to get more comfortable with the idea of varying up faces.

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sticker time:)

>> No.4835134

>>4835117
hurk

>> No.4835135

>>4835117
POST ARMPITS QUEEN

>> No.4835139

>>4835135
Leave her alone, she's to be respected.

>> No.4835140

>>4835117
yuck.

>> No.4835146

>post deleted
lmao

>> No.4835147

>>4835146
queen no :(

>> No.4835148

>>4835147
>>4835139
>>4835135
Man, even if you're being sarcastic with this, it's still kinda fucking embarrassing.

>> No.4835149

Stop deleting your posts and post feet queen

>> No.4835157

>>4835134
>>4835135
>>4835139
>>4835140
>>4835146
>>4835147
>>4835149
stop derailing the thread with your harassment you autistic fags.

>> No.4835158

>>4835157
Stop derailing the thread by telling people to stop derailing the thread.

>> No.4835160

>>4835157
>harassment
since when is worshipping goddesses harassment?

>> No.4835161

>>4835157
>expressing dislike for an illustration is harrassment now

>> No.4835164

>>4835158
Justice is served to tumblr attention seeking whores. She wanted attention, and this is what she gets.

She basically can never post here again. This is like anti-hero justice. All is right in the world in the weird twisted way that is /ic/

>> No.4835166

>>4835157
>stop telling me my drawings are shit
stop making shit drawings
>stop simpin
stop posting your face and attention whoring

>> No.4835167
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>>4835164
This faggot board can be pretty based sometimes

>> No.4835181

It's poetic how the only artist willing to help this shithole of a board out is a literal attention, bottom-of-the-barrell whore and perma /int who will do anything for money and exposure.

>> No.4835186

>>4835181
the board is fine outside of /alt/.
even /beg/ gets better art.
No one needs the tumblerite.

>> No.4835221

>>4834711
Thanks! So far only Newgrounds deleted one nazi girl.

>> No.4835222

>>4835221
Hope they all get deleted. Rope yourself disgusting nazi sypmathizer. You're not edgy or quirky.

>> No.4835229

>>4834711
>>4835221
Oh wow! What a transgressive and very novel act! I'm sure the man will go down with this this time!

>> No.4835232

>>4835222
>>4835229
It's just a drawing, no meaning behind that. I don't mind if they'll get deleted or not.

>> No.4835273

>>4835222
Settle down jewboi

>> No.4835281

>>4835166
>posting your face
People keep saying this but I've never actually seen it.

>>4835221
>Newgrounds deleted one nazi
Wait really? Kek.

Either way, can't wait to see more from you man.

>> No.4835287

>>4835222
>>4835229
#triggered

>> No.4835312

>>4835281
It was a blurry pic of half a face for banter. People are acting as if she posted nudes with her @ and a paypal link attached.

>> No.4835448

>>4835281
Can't wait when they'll delete another one. But I don't mind, I'll still draw what I want.

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haven't been on here in months, how's everyone doing? are we on our way to making it bros?

>> No.4835485

>>4835161
>forgot this is an artwork/critique board
Kys faggot.

>> No.4835500

>>4835462
pleasant

>> No.4835504

>>4835462
you made this? u got a blog?

>> No.4835687

>>4835448
>I'll still draw what I want
God bless man.

>>4835312
kek, what a bunch a panzees

Still, wouldn't mind seeing it if anyone has link. A cute?

>> No.4835696

>>4835687
no, a generic tumblr nosed face

>> No.4835703

>>4835696
So she uses RL refs then? Good on her.

>> No.4835707

>>4835703
this is not /asg/

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>>4835703
definitely, reminds me of your twin brother

>> No.4835718

>>4835707
Wait

Are you telling me she's an rl 2dqt2p2t?

>>4835709
>tfw no real life twin
The suffering is real man

>> No.4835803

>>4835485
Your thought procesesses are really incoherent. Take some midol, you silly bitch.

>> No.4835834

>>4835803
Ntayrt but expressing dislike for a drawing without any motivation behind it =/= critique. Now kys faggot.

>> No.4835853

>>4835834
Never said it was, you silly bitch.

>> No.4835915

>>4835853
T. /beg/

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>>4835915
Could you make it any more obvious that you're butthurt? lmao

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>> No.4836087

>>4836081
Anatomy choices are bizarre and unappealing but aren't unacceptable. Color choices are bland and boring. The eye is drawn to the weapon and hair and both are fighting for attention

>> No.4836088

>>4836081
Better than goblin lolis at least

>> No.4836130

>>4836081
boobs too far from the center, weird abdomen shapes

>> No.4836263

>>4834862
2 is interesting it kind of looks like a fish

>> No.4836266

>>4836081
The brushes you use make things look so cheap.

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rendering this

>> No.4836403

>>4835504
only instagram
https://www.instagram.com/acamaca_1/

>> No.4836433

>>4836266
Brush has nothing to do with it.

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face soul?

>> No.4836621

>>4836599
i saw it, it was good

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>> No.4837360
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4837360

Drew my miis that i made a few years ago on tomodachi life

>> No.4837362
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4837362

>>4837360
originals

>> No.4837665
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4837665

>> No.4837704
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4837704

doodlin

>> No.4837948
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4837948

crit pls

>> No.4837973

>>4833757
You are obviously a noob, which is fine. But please don't put others down because of your dunning kruger. If you don't see why this image is top .1% of this board in at least a few years, just quit.

>> No.4837976

>>4837948
Pose looks like she’s gonna fall over
Left armpit anatomy is awkward and too flabby
Her left tit should be pulled up with her arm (remember tits are attached to the pecs & collarbone)
It looks like you only did midtone and shadow on the hair, it needs light areas and highlights
The rim light looks weird, I would take it out altogether or apply it to the rest of the the right side of her body

Something something hard round brush something something Loomis

>> No.4837997

>>4837976
thanks

>> No.4838081
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4838081

I have to keep working on it, clean up and details (fix the sneakers) but could use some C&C.

>> No.4838101

>>4838081
post blog

>> No.4838107

>>4838081
cool stuff dude

>> No.4838118

>>4838081
The far side of her face looks wonky (flip the canvas and you’ll see what I mean)
Nose isn’t centered on face compared to the eyebrows
Her hairline (and hair in general) doesn’t really match up with her head
Her arms look like they might be slightly different lengths
Something about her right lower leg looks weird- remember knees can’t rotate, any rotation of the leg comes from the hip
The fingers on the hand holding the mask don’t quite match up with the palm imo
Compositionally the left side of the frame feels too empty, either crop the canvas a little or extend out the right side of the canvas to balance it out

I’m kinda nitpicking desu, it’s great work anon

>> No.4838138

>>4836266
stop giving advice, beg retard

>> No.4838175
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4838175

would appreciate some critique on this pose. I've always had trouble with how big the back side should be in this case. The goal is to obviously push this some more once I get the anatomy right.

>> No.4838188

>>4838101
Don't have one yet.
>>4838107
Many thanks!
>>4838118
Oh! Super helpful thank you I actually had forgot fixing that cheek and fixed the hand and nose, touched the hairline (damn did not had seen that one). The leg I think it was the reflection wobbling but might be something else, there's something fishy there but can't say, is somewhat hidden I feel. Composition wise is working for me, I tried cropping it from the left but then it doesn't feel right, but if you can crop it in a way that looks good to you I'll check it out.
Thank you!

>> No.4838384
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4838384

Practicing lighting skill

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>> No.4839637
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4839637

how do i do anatomy sketches before drawing the final lineart

>> No.4839705
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4839705

Ayyyye fuck it, just going to succumb to debauchery and draw this lewd thing, unless someone can figure out what kind of shirt she should have she’s going to be topless

>> No.4839710
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4839710

i most likely messed up the proportions and perspective
but i wanna be transparent with you bros this is what i drew i dont wanna hide it..

>>4838384
i love this blog

>> No.4840042
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4840042

>>4834162

>> No.4840049

>>4840042
>>4834162
Blog?

>> No.4840086

>>4839710
go back to that anime style

>> No.4840122

>>4840049
https://www.twitter.com/stellarnyart
https://www.instagram.com/stellar.ny/

>> No.4840128

>>4833024
Maybe make the characters' lines more consistent with the pot by thickening the outermost silhouette lines, also the poofy haired girl's arm to make it stand out from the rest of her hair.

>> No.4840175

>>4831203
Cool do u have a twitter?

>> No.4840177

>>4839710
Asuka is best with freckles

>> No.4840323

>>4838081
>>4838188
>Don't have one yet.
Make one right now so i can follow

Really like how you did the sneakers. Something that should be worked is how the back of the head looks very bulged out. Moving the ear back a bit and the back of the head down would fix it.

>> No.4840351
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4840351

>>4835139
>>4835135
>>4835149
>>4835147
>laughing my ass off at this stupid shit as the sun is coming up
Sometimes your alright /ic/

>> No.4840420
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4840420

>> No.4840607
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4840607

>> No.4840657
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4840657

made some more stickers. What did you do today?:)

>inb4 post feet/armpits/queen/etc
Choke on my sweaty nuts pls.
I also feel like clearing some things up bc arguing is pointless and I don't want to create a new thread about myself.
>My art is bad
I am aware. That's why I'm here to learn and improve. I'm trying my best.
>attention whore
Yes I know It was stupid of me to post my face here even if it was only for fun. I really didn't want attention like that and didn't consider the consequences. What is it you want? An apology? If so, I'm sorry and I know I'm really dumb and made a mistake. It wont happen again. I really enjoy posting art here and seeing other peoples art and I've learnt a lot. And I really hope I can continue to do so in the future. Thanks for reading.<3

>> No.4840669

>>4840657
Not your blog, fuck off.

>> No.4840737

>>4840657
QUEEN FORGIVE US FOR MAKING YOU GRUMPY
PLEASE STEP ON MY BALLS AS PUNISHMENT

>> No.4840743

>>4840607
Eyes are too far back on the profile, and the nose should have less of a slope. Aside from that looks good anon, keep it up.

>> No.4840751
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4840751

some sketches I scanned and colored

>> No.4840753

>>4840751
cute!

>> No.4840807
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4840807

>>4840753
Thanks anon! :)

Here's some more

>> No.4840894
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4840894

>>4832096

>> No.4840934

>>4840420
Your stuff is really nice but you should try using a different pen; the lines are not very appealing in the way they taper off.

>> No.4841012

>>4832459
No, needs more stylization

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4841016

>> No.4841029

>>4840934
>you should try using a different pen
Retard.

>> No.4841146
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4841146

Trying to draw some fun poses from imagination. Would love a redline

>> No.4841158

>>4841016
Cool

>> No.4841184
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4841184

No, I won't give you my blog

>> No.4841193

>>4841184
https://twitter.com/KunoMD

I found it myself

>> No.4841197

>>4841184
ribcage is too long, and the background rendering is messy

>> No.4841198

>>4841184
Meh, don't want it anyways.

>> No.4841202

>>4841184
generic anime style, meh

>> No.4841204

>>4841193
Had a feeling it was him. That long body and persona face gave it away but I didn't think he posts on 4chan. Probably just some larper.

>> No.4841210

>>4835164
Is it the one with the really ugly tumblr noses on her characters that likes Harry Potter? Fuck, I just realized how generic that sounds

>> No.4841218
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4841218

>>4840737
Ok this made me kek ngl

>> No.4841233

>>4841202
>>4841198
>meh
Holy shit kill yourself.

>> No.4841238

>>4841210
What do you have against people thatjust have different tastes than you?

>> No.4841239
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4841239

>>4841238
I’m just trying to identify which bitch they’re speaking of, although their interests are dog crap in my eyes

>> No.4841243

>>4841239
Ok. Does that make them any less of a person though? There are probably lots of people who think your interests are dog crap too. No one is perfect anon. No need to shit on someone just because of what they enjoy

>> No.4841250
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4841250

>>4841243
Ok. I understand my words may have been harmful, and I’ll be more conscientious in the future of other people’s feelings. I’ll try to keep an open mind when dealing with others from now on.

>> No.4841308

>>4841193
Ain't he the same dude who was horribly ripping into an emote artist with his gf?

>> No.4841349
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4841349

r8 my doodle I made from imagination

>> No.4841371
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4841371

>>4833025
>>4833151
>>4838081
>>4841184
nice

>> No.4841401
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4841401

I wanted to try and stylize the cloth folds to be more geometric, but to make them flow and be geometric was too much for me it seems. Always next time!

>> No.4841404

>>4841349
the eye is way too low, its on the same height as the nosebridge

>> No.4841410

>>4841404
I think youre mistaking the glasses for the eye?

>> No.4841415

>>4841410
i guess so. idk maybe make the sketch a bit clearer next time. if you use less blurry lines it will be seen better. otherwise I like your art but you could work on your coloring

>> No.4841463

>>4841243
>>4841238
Fag.

>> No.4841472

>>4841029
Not really sure what was stupid about my comment, I used to have the same issue with my lines looking like that both traditionally and digitally and I found that I improved a lot by switching to a different pen. Obviously this doesn't apply as much if it's traditional, but that art looks digital to me. They're putting to much pressure and not tapering the end of their lines, making it feel blocky. There's obviously some knowledge of line weight as you can see on the shirt but it's not being used effectively in other areas.

>> No.4841508

>>4841472
'Use a different pen' is not an intelligent or insightful critique.
The pen isn't making his lines look bad, he is, and that's what should be critiqued.

>> No.4841730

>>4841184
of course you don't, hack

>> No.4841850

>>4832070
GET
OUT
OF
YOUR
COMFORT
ZONE

>> No.4841853

>>4833022
>>4833025
Really cool

>> No.4841859
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4841859

>>4833757
niggas be HATIN' lol

>> No.4841865

>>4833907
SEETHING crab

>> No.4841870

>>4833542
Emotive. Like the black and white as well

>> No.4841945

>>4840657
>I am aware. That's why I'm here to learn and improve. I'm trying my best.
bullshit.
not even once did you show initiative and try to improve. in fact, I'd wager you like that your art is repulsive because it gets you (you)s. you're only here because you love the attention.

now post feet queen I'm real horny rn and could use some help.

>> No.4841991
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4841991

im trying
longer face
smaller eyes
more defined nose

>> No.4842005

>>4841991
i like it Alot more than generic animu face
try giving more texture to the eyebrows, like make some hairs standout so it doesn't look like just a thick line above the eyes
outline on the nose seems too thick and uniform and it's too pointy near the end, makes it look like plastic surgery

>> No.4842021

>>4841991
also could use some deeper values for shading overall. especially on the left side of the nose/under her lower lip

>> No.4842031

>>4838175
I think the arm looks kinda like it sticks out rather than is a part of the body

>> No.4842037

>>4839637
Hi Dante long time no see. Try lowering the opacity and doing some quick shapes to figure out what you want the end product to be like. then make a new layer to draw over.

>> No.4842065
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4842065

dear elliot

>> No.4842074

>>4841991
Go. Back. To. Your. Anime. Style.

>> No.4842098

>>4841991
>>4842074
don't listen to this retard. last thing you want to be is generic animunigger artist #36215889. you're 100% heading in the right direction.

>> No.4842114

>>4842074
>>4842098
too many cooks in the kitchen...

>> No.4842116

>>4842098
Because being generic western artist is such a great fate.

>> No.4842117

>>4842114
That's not what that phrase means.

>> No.4842120

>>4842116
He didn't say anything about that, you insecure retard.

>> No.4842130

>>4842116
his current artstyle doesn't look neither generic western nor generic anime, it hits a nice balance and just needs to be more polished.
you are the worst type of crab, the crab that doesn't even know he's giving bad advice.

>> No.4842215

>>4839705
still no ink ?? can't wait :XX

>> No.4842303

>>4841991
Looks nice. Try working on a larger canvas, it might make it eaier for you to do your lineart and rendering, I notice that you make it wierdly thick sometimes, when your style would benefit from thin/no lineart.
You're going in a good direction, keep it up

>> No.4842329
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4842329

am I a good artist yet, ffs

>> No.4842428

>>4842329
reminds of that one fag that keeps posting his "[slutty female dnd race] x [relunctant male dnd race]" comics on /v/. you know the ones.

>> No.4842470

>>4842428
On /v/? That must have been before my time. At the very least I hope my art is better then his

>> No.4842488
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4842488

>>4838175
>>4842031

an update. Shoes are currently my art achilles heal but I'm working on it.

>> No.4842503
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4842503

Opinions before I move on?

>> No.4842599

>>4841991
Seriously just get off /ic/ already. It's just slowing down your progress.

>> No.4842602
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4842602

>>4842215
>>4839705
I liked inking the mech parts, but i kinda fudged up the rest. Added too many details on the back. She never got a shirt since nobody had any recs

>> No.4842603

>>4841945
You must've not seen my older art. Progress doesn't happen overnight you know, and some develop slower than others. Besides, I draw other things that aren't "disgusting tumblr nosed characters" For example >>4841146
I also draw a lot of things that I don't post.:)
>also footfag kys

>> No.4842606

>>4841991
Getting real tired of your shit

>> No.4842607
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4842607

>>4842602

>> No.4842626

>>4842603
Who are you quoting? Go back to Tumblr, you stupid fucking tourist.

>> No.4842632

>>4842603
>feet
ew
>armpits
now we're talking

>> No.4842636
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4842636

doodle between studies

>> No.4842639

>>4842602
fucking grotesque
i like it

>> No.4842646

>>4842626
I'm sorry I don't know how to type properly because I can't multitask. p-pwease forgive me o holy oldfag! Why are you freaking out over some green text on a screen? Does it bother you that much? Relax.

>> No.4842648

>>4842646
You are so obnoxious, holy fuck, why do you always type like a smug bitch? Turns me on, queen.

>> No.4842655

>>4842648
Didn't mean to come across as obnoxious or smug. Why are you so angry all the time though? It's like I angered the Cerberus of 4chan. Sorry I intruded on your safespace. But don't worry! You know what website has plenty of those.;)

>> No.4842723
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4842723

>>4842602
Can’t decide on a color scheme / shirt size, leaning towards A, but usually my instincts are wrong on these. Any other recs?

>>4842607
Sorry bro, one must know both the light and the dark to be a master

>>4842639
It’s a little grungy, i don’t know how the coloring is going to turn out, since Mario is usually bright and bubbly

>> No.4842749

>>4842723
i like c the best
everything about this is sick though gj dude

>> No.4842901

>>4842646
>>4842655
Kill yourself, you annoying, whiney cunt.

>> No.4842935

>>4842723
:O i luv this... C ?

>> No.4842936

>>4842901
Seethe harder

>> No.4842938

>>4842936
Recall that this reply chain started when you got upset about people calling your art shit.

>> No.4842959

>>4842938
I never said that. I don't care wether you like my art or not and youre allowed to think and say what you want about it. I was never angry/triggered/whatever you wamt to call it. Just felt like clarifying a few misconceptions. It's really not that serious and I'm mostly just joking around:) Just too bad my tone doesnt come across via text. Please relax, it's just harmless banter.

>> No.4842968

>>4842959
You never said what, Tumblr?
You have demonstrated repeatedly that your feelings are hurt. Hell, you even deleted your own post.
So kill yourself, you sensitive cunt.

You don't belong here and you never will.

>> No.4842973

>>4842968
YOU BETTER RESPECT QUEEN, INSECT
THERE WILL BE CONSEQUENCES IF YOU DONT

>> No.4842974

I hate derailing the alt thread. Should I just start a new thread if you want to keep this chain going? Or would that be dumb?

>> No.4842992

>>4842968
You seem more upset than I ever was to be honest. But go ahead. Keep deciding how I feel for me, based on a few rows of text. There is no winning with you guys because you've already decided that you don't like me. I really don't feel like arguing over this any more. Its stupid. Make a new thread if you want to continue or whatnot. I'll just keep posting my art here because thats what I like doing. <3

>> No.4842995

>>4842973
Ironic shitposting is still shitposting.

>> No.4843005

>>4842992
Every single post makes it more and more obvious that you are a defensive, moody bitch.
Nobody is buying it.

>> No.4843013

>>4842065
This is great

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>> No.4843018

>>4843013
No it isn't.

>> No.4843020

>>4843017
Another fucking head

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>>4843020
i have drawn these in the past 3 days
i am testing face/rendering styles i can use

>> No.4843026

>>4843017
Stop focusing on the face for a while, you're just amplifying your mistakes and misunderstandings. Spend some time drawing from reference and studying anatomy. Do some gesture drawings too, because all of your poses are stiff.

>> No.4843027

What the fuck is up with this insecure post deletion shit?
If you can't handle criticism then fuck off.

>> No.4843044

>>4842130
Yes it does. He is literally ripping off Kyle.

>> No.4843049

>>4843044
Looks nothing like Kyle's art.
The problem isn't that it looks 'too western' or 'too eastern', the problem is that he is ignoring advice and putting too much focus on the face.

>> No.4843129

Jamie, pull up that thread of asukafag posting that kyle and norasuko are his biggest inspirations

>> No.4843131

>>4843129
Why did you drop out of the reply chain? Again, his art looks nothing like Kyle's. He may be inspired by Kyle, he may even want to emulate him, but the art looks nothing alike.

>> No.4843161

>>4843044
>>4843049
>>4843129
>>4843131
i did say i was inspired by Kyle previously which was true but i realized i cannot yet recreate it so i searched for something simpler i can recreate

>> No.4843164
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4843164

better?

>> No.4843168

>>4843164
stop trying to seek their approval. For your own good, leave /ic/ and just do whatever you want and you like. 99% of every one here are spergs who think anything that isn't anime is disgusting. You have the skills necessary to do what you want. Don't let these crabs pull you down.

>> No.4843174

>>4841184
I really wish you would stop with those overly long torso's. Also bring the left eye (her right eye) a bit closer to the other one and move it down a bit. It looks weird af as it is now.

>> No.4843179

>>4843168
i didnt post this it look at the filename
this anon fixed the neck i think which i made too long

>> No.4843185

>>4843179
sorry my bad. Word still stands though

>> No.4843192

>>4843164
Face and hairline are doing two different things. The face is appealing though

>> No.4843206

>>4843185
well ill try but desu im addicted
from imageboards in general

>> No.4843214

>>4843206
I should leave too to be honest but I suffer from the same addiction. Best of luck to you though!

>> No.4843388
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4843388

Anyone know where I can find resources on that sort of late 1800 fairytail or woodblock looking art? The sort that features lots of hatching. Witch Hat Atelier feels a lot like a modern take on that style and I'm interested in looking into it more.

>> No.4843395

>>4843388
You're really into that manga, huh? Check out Dürer.

>> No.4843457

>>4842470
He means Baalbuddy probably. And no, you are not better.

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>> No.4843475

>>4843388
unironically guptill.
he lists a shit ton of great inkers in in his books.
also franlkin booth, charles dana gibson etc...

>> No.4843562

>>4842992
Go away pendeja!

>> No.4843566

>>4842723
C is the most Mario-like

>> No.4843567

>>4843473
Study how folds and clothing work. These long robes should have more fold and should feel looser.

>> No.4843627
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Does anyone have any traditional looking brushes they can recommend for achieving a painterly look digitally? I'm looking for oil style as well as a brighter more pastel or watercolor look, but it seems nigh impossible to find any brush that's trying to look like actual paint and isn't dogshit.

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Can't seem to get the legs right. What am I doing wrong?

>> No.4843655

>>4843650
>What am I doing wrong?
Posting here.

>> No.4843661

>>4843650
a r m p i t s

>> No.4843668

new thread >>4843664
go now, it's a good op pic

>> No.4843671

>>4843668
Wrong previous thread link.

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>>4843164
Gave it a shot, perhaps something like this?

>> No.4843754

>>4833022
>>4833021
nice lil doodles

>>4833034
stylish...

>>4833151
ur shadiing is so appealing

>>4833542
your brushwork one hunnid

>>4834162
>>4840042
>>4843388

<3

>>4835462
aeshetic as hell

>>4837360
i wanna call this cute but the nazi vibes lmao

>>4843388
cool shit


wait this threads done? i need yalls social media pls

>> No.4843799

>>4843388
Kamome Shirahama was inspired by Moebius, not extremely heavy on the hatching but you can tell what she took from him.

>> No.4844001

>>4841991
Improving I don't like the jaw tho

>> No.4844003

>>4842636
Use a reference the face isn't concave

>> No.4844343

>>4833852
post it on Tumblr where it belongs

>> No.4844843

>>4835462
I hate the perspective on this. kys

>> No.4844870

>>4843388
exceptionally gay.

>> No.4844872

>>4843388
also the knees don't make sense. fag.

>> No.4844875

>>4843388
sry... its not really the knee.. but the legs intersect.... I know your gay and all about intersection but legs shouldn't run through each other nice try covering it with a skirt though..

>> No.4844921

>>4844870
>>4844872
>>4844875
man, shut your cocksucking mouth.

>> No.4845049

>>4842488
Looks better anon

>> No.4845050

>>4842503
The head is kinda short

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Inking flat shadows has proven to be quite fun.