/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4815737
Damn someone was quick to make a new thread.

>>4815776
Zeldafag makes it into the OP for the 48284927th time. It’s like usain bolt is running in a middle schoolers special olympics

>>4815773
i'll never understand why i don't like your drawings, I just don't like them.

>>4815880
its called envy faggot

>>4815737
why is zelda smelling his sword?

>>4815885
that's not zelda, that's metroid.

>>4815885
If Zelda is smelling his sword, then that must be Link in the background with her hands wrapped around Ganon’s micropenis

>>4815923
that's peach retard

>>4815929
Peach is even from the same anime retard. At least name another marvel character for fucks sake.

>>4815931
is spiderman in zelda multiverse too?

>>4815882
its just not appealing

I like heigh difference

>>4816731
me too

>>4816731
naked pig woman best pig woman

It's supposed to be the gynoid from GitS 2.
hope i captured her likeness.

>>4816731
>heigh difference
Heigh is for horghses.

>>4816799
alternate, more Tropical colour palette.

>>4816803
What the fuck is wrong with the eye on the right

>>4816839
it's inner part of is angled up slightly more than it should be.
i realized that after i had inked it :/

>>4816845
*its inner part is

>>4815737
Whoever drew that good job you fucking moron that looks great

>>4815871
Better than the generic animu garbage and the tumblr shit we kept getting the last few threads.
I wish Zeldafag gets the OP everytime if they're the alternative.

>>4816731
>you're not allowed to smell my lance

>>4816861
zelda is animu garbage

>>4816866
Nah, it's animu but it is far from garbage. keep coping.

>>4816868
coping what retard, are you throwing random words to see which lands?

>>4816845
It's not about angles, the eye on the right's placement is completely - COMPLETELY - off. Are you properly constructing the head??

>>4816873
I was under the impression i was?
care to redline it?

>>4815871
implying OP didn't do it himself or is sucking discord dick

>>4815737
>westerners

yikes

>>4815737
I guess i’ll choose op pic this time, since there’s still a fuss about it :)

>>4817076
shut up roastie

>>4815737
Why is Zelda coughing?

>>4817076
>make a fuss about something
>"Well since there's no agreement, I guess I'll decide for everyone next time ( :"

>>4817106
coronavirus

this was fun

>>4815885
Sometimes you just gotta smell it man

>>4815773
middle one is great

>>4816803
Back to beg

>>4817468
Something with these just feels off

>>4816803
reminds me of that mangaka who draws really good mechanical stuff. Forgot his name though.

>>4816803
SOUL

>>4816803
love the colours

>>4817491
Faggot

give me your oc NOW.

>>4817160
That explains why they called it Breath of the wild.

>>4817857
k.

>>4817857
Check out the /i/ OC threads if you wanna draw people's characters. I like to do that sometimes.
/co/ has them posted a lot too i think, /trash/ if you're a furfag, and /tg/ if you wanna draw DnD characters. And /aco/ for OC porn of course.

I've found /tg/ is almost always the nicest, most appreciative, and has a lot of cool characters posted.

>>4817530
Your work is beg. Reality hurts.

>>4818116
<-- extremely active on /i/

I've wasted so much time on this and something still feels off

>>4818755
The poses/perspective is off. I can't honestly tell what is going on. On closer inspection the pink haired seems to be performing fellatio on the other but how you choose to represent it, really doesn't work. Also, are they floating, is she jumping the guy or what is going on?
Might look weird even with a bg,

>>4817622
oh I recognize this art style

>>4818755
I like it, but it's a bit hard to read, especially the far knee.

>>4813876
Redrew it. I shredded my entire eraser. Last one.

>>4817495
That kinda seems to be the point

>>4818918
The standing pose is a little stiff, people tend to lean their weight on one leg when casually standing. Few other perspective and anatomy errors but it looks like a quick sketch so I won't harp on about them. The chest up drawings of him look lovely though and I absolutely adore your style!

Does anyone know how I can make the floating dick look less awkward/weird? Should I just remove the ballsack completely so it’s just a dick or? I would rather not draw the entire figure as I do not want to obscure Zelda.

>>4818971
>>4794808

>>4818979
Thanks!

>>4818873
Robo bulma looks like she is enjoying the ride.

Enough procrastinating time to ink...

aihgt! say something please

>>4819574
Cool, now draw the gundam. Also, when are you going to do some gesture drawings, I like your stuff, but stop being lazy man

>>4819655
>lazy
not everything i draw gets posted here...
not even like, 10%

>>4819661
It is not about drawing a lot, don't neglect your studies. Don't get defensive, you still need to work on your gesture

>>4819655
>>4819666
Shut up crab

>>4819643
Blog?

>>4815880
probably cause he gives his characters shrunken heads and has that gay bara vibe

>>4819655
>gesture drawings
stupid retard, don't give advice

>>4819574
I like this a lot! keep it up!

>>4819574
shit taste

>>4820443
Shit, shit, shit. Gonna call it shit next time you post it too.

>>4820443
are you gonna post this everytime you add a couple of lines, either finish it or don't dude.

im trying more paint style

>>4820462
Jealous, much?

>>4820618
Be nice.

>>4820462
Sure, if it makes you happy.

>>4820701
Shit

>>4820586
maybe this is better

>>4820759
maybe this

>>4820786
maybe this

>>4820759
>>4820786
>>4820790
>Not a crude benis in front of her face with ahegao
One job /ic/.

>>4815880
I think they are fine, but maybe he needs to exaggerate a bit more?

>>4820790
needs more TEETH

>>4820790
>>4820586
The face is very flat, and warped in some places. You should be using guidelines to plot out features.

is this a good face style?
I just tried this
inspired by Kyle
what do you think
should i use this style

>>4820964
Literally do whatever style you like man. It looks fine, just focus oh what looks good to yourself while you study and learn

>>4820987
why all the cups anon

Anime looking boy studies

>>4821024
The man in the card doesn't seem to mind

>>4821104
cuties

>>4821024

just wait til you see Ten of Cups

>>4819409
Foreground done

>>4821207
I hope he's juggling them

>>4820964
who's Kyle? why are you using some dude as a reference

>>4821253
hot... but could be hotter.. if you know what i mean

>>4821267
Have you not seen Kyle?

He's about this tall.
Have you seen Kyle?

>>4821285
are you mentally ill

>>4821289
Read that post out loud and try to demonstrate with your hand a person that is much taller than you.

>>4815773
These are pretty good.

>>4820968
>>4820964
I like it, just do what you like doesn't matter if ends looking like shiet asukafag, but if you see something wrong we'll se even more so keep that in mind.
You tried pretty hard developing your own style by yourself, you have better chances if you just use more references and take what you like from other artist. Trying hard =/= trying good
I like this one btw

>>4820987
The cups doesn't follow the same perspective as the table, I know that they didn't care about perspective in this period's style, but I still don't like. And I know you been using the same cups through all the cards

>>4820087
Thank you anon. But you'll have more chances of seeing what I do here than In my blog I bearly post there
ig: baylego

>>4821415

yup! I noticed right after I posted, I changed the top of the table a bit

Refining the sketch before I give it proper linework

>>4821411
thanks the main thing i realise that i get much better results by using as little lineart as possible, ideally only for outer outline
of course painting/rendering is much more difficult but in the end that is the ultimate skill

>>4821455

>>4821253
Ink done, shenron was much faster, but i over did it with the pocket brush pen. I feel like that happens a lot

>>4821277
Do you think this is NSFW? I think its ok... i followed the golden rules of pornography and I didn’t draw any penetration or nipples

>>4821455
Better
>>4821469
Good luck
>>4821472
Is it supposed to be night? If yes add some stars, if no add some birds or something

>>4821488
Man, no one cares about nipples or or dicks, only if you're a faggot or a rostie, don't worry, as long as it isn't the main focus

>>4821488
I would call it nsfw, but I don't think it needs to be on /salt/ or anything.

>>4821489
>add stars to show its night

Lmao what kind of grade school /beg/ shit is this critique supposed to be

Some Gaz Digzy from Ballmastrz: 9009

>>4821549
No, you fuckin retard, that's why i said "if". he does the sky black even when it's day, I'm saying to add something because its fuckin empty.

>>4821651
You’re /beg/ at composition.

>>4821489

Thanks for the suggestion, I added a flock of Durer doves.

I've been considering different options for the backgrounds but I think I'm going to keep on using black for all the backgrounds just to be cohesive. (It also makes for really nice silhouettes) Maybe as I keep going I'll play around with some other ideas. After the deck is complete I'm thinking I might end up colorizing it.

>>4821716

pretty happy with this boy so far

>>4821922
Love the rendering on this, anon. The masses are readable enough to stand on their own.

>>4822176
I love it, very kinu nishimura

Fuginn uh comic I just shit out to vent my frustrations with my retarded self

More B.S.

>>4822287
Okay, why is that so stupidly big

>>4816731
Oh man this is really soulful, gib blog please

helo bich

>>4815737

I can't really tell if the hands are wrong, they seem OK, but I'm never sure

I can't really tell if there's something wrong with the hands, I think they're OK, but idk

Currently working on this

>>4822823
I like it. The nose its kinda fucked, I understand that you made it big on purpose, the perspective is wrong, the apex of the bridge of the nose isn't centred, very cute tho

>>4822852
Thanks for the feedback, I'll look into that

>>4817495
>>4817468
too much of the cheek/cheekbone is showing when it should be hidden behind the nose more.

>>4815737
panel number 3, interior of a car burning.. the fuzzy dice get lost somehow, idk how to portray fuzzyness so I just slapped some grass brush on the dice

I took a lil break from anime girls.

>>4823307
Head looks a bit large

>>4821488
I finished all 8 scenes. I feel better about painting clouds and water now. I still need to work on earth, probably buildings too, colors, and mood... so much shit

Gotta take a break for a few days

>>4821522
>>4821496
I didn’t want to get flagged on twitter

>>4816731
>when even your horny art just ends up looking really pleasant and wholesome
how do i learn this power?
>>4823090
if you really want to force the perspective on this and make it more dynamic, the b/g hand could be further back and phalanges on the forward hand could be brought forward & more aggressively foreshortened for extra depth
go look at how imaishi and bengus do it basically

>>4822228
Thank you.. That's a huge compliment considering Kinu Nishimura and other Capcom artists are big influences of mine.

>>4822756
The first segments of the fingers on her left hand are too long, and diverge instead of converge as they recede in perspective.
The finger posing is stiff, and it appears that she's cocking the gun primarily with her pinky.

The angles of the gun are inconsistent, and the trigger guard is way too far out.

>>4823398
What you mean the first segment, the one connecting to the knuckles, or the tips? Just to be sure
>>4823323
aigh will try

>>4822285
I have no clue what this comic is trying to say, but i like your art. It has good form. The 3d shapes of the faces are very apparent and its an appealing style. Would follow.

>>4823634
From the knuckles, the proximal phalanx.

>>4817498
tsutomu nihei? either that or whoever wrote claymore

>>4821289
>>4821285
no no no. you have to find him.
seek kyle anon. seek kyle

>>4822756
I'm getting so fuckin frustrated

>>4824068
FUCK >:(

>>4823777
lovely, what medium?

>>4820964
Kyle looks liker a faggot

>>4823322
i don't really know what's going on here... did Bulma do this to herself on purpose she looks in pain... also is the dragonball the robots clit?

>>4821716
>>4821716
>>4821651
>>4821549


nooo you're supposed to add a sun to signify its day you newbs

>>4821866
your file name says 11, the number on the card says 8, and there's 1 cup

>>4824138

Yeah it's a holdover from the template file I'm working with, I saved over the template file on 8 of cups and keep forgetting to clear out the file; this is the Page of Cups, the 11th in the suit. Thanks!

>>4823322
The mecha Bulma feels like it lacks the dynamism that I find in most of your work.

The design is great but it looks really stiff.

>>4824350
>dynamism
its a giant 90s anime robot..

>>4823322
Trying out a new face. I recently found some faces i like, but they from different artists and are wildly different shapes

>>4824118
She mech’d herself since she lost all her limbs collecting the other Dragonballs.

>is the dragonball the robots clit?
Yes. Was it too explicit? I was trying to be subtle, I made sure the carpet matched the drapes...

>she looks in pain
There is a fine line between pain and pleasure. The mech seems to be enjoying herself

>>4824350
Honestly, i think that was the most difficult thing that I’ve had to draw. I probably drew it 40 times in a dozen different poses. It took 4-5 tries just to get the bulma::mech scaling ratio to minimize the uncanniness and match the size of shenron. They were originally supposed to be building sized.

But the frustrating part was try to align the 2 gestures and the limbs. I tried to draw the mech, then fit bulma inside, but i couldn’t get their hips to line up. So i flipped it and drew naked bulma first and constructed the mech around her which probably made it stiff. I usually build poses from the shoulders down.

There were also iterations of her getting yanked out of the mech, everyone holding someone else’s torso / head, matryoshka doll incepted bodies escaping from mouths, everyone impaling someone else, but they were all too busy and the scaling was off

Sorry for blog, I’m bored

/beg/ here with a question; can stuff like this be considered stylization or is this too chicken scratchy? Letting myself loose and just creating my marks chaotically feels good but I'm unsure if it's just me using a crutch and displaying a lack of discipline, or if letting my instinct take over should be encouraged

>>4824676
If you're a /beg/ you shouldn't be worrying about style.

>>4824068
You're trying to fit a square peg into a round hole here.
The hand anatomy is still a bit fucky, but with where you have placed the arms you can't really do the pose you're looking for and have it make any sense. I would recommend miming this action and studying how your arms, hands, and fingers would have to be posed IRL.

face cute?

>>4824632
What's your twitter? Love your style

>>4824898
The ear should start around the eye line and end at the base of the nose at smallest. Why is her neck cut off in the front? Its not attached to her skull properly. I guess the face is ok aside from the nose pointing forward while everything else is 3/4... but everything else wrong with it is throwing me off

>>4824906
thanks

i think i am going to use this face style finally resolving the face problem

>>4824942
Much better.

Anything to fix before I begin detailing and flatting the design out?

Refining the sketch before giving this some proper linework.

>>4824898
cute.

Any suggestions for her palette?

>>4825560
You can't go wrong with purple and gold!
The light purple on her boots and belt kinda clash with the reddish-brown, though.

>>4825110
>>4825560
Hands are really screwed up, and the arms a bit too long.

>>4824846
I took the pictures myself with an airsoft gun, thats how I release the slide the arm and hand position is the same, it should be OK, maybe I'm just retarded.

>>4820964 I like this one more.
>>4824942

>>4826215
If that's the case, then I would say look more carefully at the reference, because the pose is unnatural. In fact, do a construction redline over the photo so you can see where you differed. From what you drew it looks like she's pinching the slide between her pinky and palm only, which would not give you very good leverage.

i want to do a little hip thrust but if it looks bad i'm gonna crop out the legs

>>4826637
If anything, I'd move the left leg back a little

>>4823037
cute

>>4822285
And then you realize you have to get up in 3 hours but if you stop now you're gonna forget where you were planning to go with the picture and you're already in the zone so eh fuck it might as well keep going I guess. Not that I've ever done that no way.

>>4822285
When it hits you, you obey. I've gotten my best ideas that way, doesn't matter if I was tired the next day.

>>4826709
I usually just write myself some notes if I have to stop and don't want to forget something.

how do I improve this

thoughts?

Working out some outfit designs.

>>4824898
get a life dude

>>4827522
#Fun #shopping #summerlife

>>4826820
I'll do that too but usually it's just an excuse not to stop.

im doing a webcomic

Wish i had patience for more than quick doodles

getting back into drawing

>>4827862
You can have more patience by having more patience. Nothing to it but to do it.

>>4825265
blog?
>before giving this some proper linework
thats a sketch?!

>>4828005
I prefer bulkier musclegirls but this is nice.

What sucks the most?

>>4828005
Nice job! I like what you've done with the coloring, though I can see some issues that pop up with your anatomy. Here's a draw over I've done with some parts labelled that I think you should read up on. You seem like you want to do something with art and you put in a lot of effort, so I wanted to help you out!

>>4822292
blog?

>>4828479
You're absolutely right, I need to brush up on my anatomy.
I really appreciate the effort you put into helping me out, thank you!

>>4828479
post butt

>>4828563
for felicia in particular, there's tons of good official resorces, model sheets etc in all the darkstalkers artbooks. there's also a street fighter anatomy guide by ikeno that was made for capcom's artists. i think it might be in the artbook megas, if not look for street fighter anatomy

>>4826685
Lovely, I like how you approach the shadows, got blog?

>>4827201
Vanishing point is too close imo, they should be far away from the edges of the paper so things dont look distorted. You can try these with a photo reference. (Also use photo ref if you're doing bg, make things way better)
>>4827334
Reminds me of those older european comic which is pretty nice, that being said I think making the coat look more 3D instead of straight line down from the neck would be great.

>>4827838
Love the colour combo!
>>4828447
Needs more sharp edges in focal point imo

A quick character design for the morning. Moya, a half-dwarven priestess.

>>4827201
I would just choose a better, more interesting camera angle and positioning.

wip face cute?

>>4828479
gay.

>>4828970
why arent you using the short hair cute face you made before ?

>>4828970
this one
>>4824898

also i feel like its just androgynous
enough i don't feel gay looking at it

unlike
>>4828479
FAGGOT

>>4828992
i dunno i didnt like it in the end
i mostly liked the new rendering tricks i discovered

>>4828479
First of all, pecs don’t overlap the clavicle, the originate on the anterior surface of the clavicle and will tuck under it unless you are extremely built and even then only with a pump.
Second, and this is a nitpick, but sternocleidomastoid is a single word.

>>4828005
sorry anon... this anon
>>4828479
is CLEARLY homosex
and wrongly gave you a diagram of the male anatomy while you were working on a female anatomy (albeit a pretty manly (gay) looking one)


im including a diagram of correct female anatomy and how it works I didn't diagram the arms and legs since women don't need them to work.

>>4827201
- Edges that should be straight are curved.
- Putting your vanishing points IN the canvas is unnatural and not recommended.
- You have visual tangents everywhere.
Not s single object in this image overlaps the horizon line. This makes the horizon look less like a horizon and more like a border between the top and bottom of the drawing.
- One triangular mountain in a completely flat environment is also unnatural.

>>4829009
soemthing important i didn't include since not visible... there's a hole around the back on her butt where women get pregnant if you stick your penis in... I don't think wowmen can impregnate them selves with their own penis but i'm not sure why..

i hope this helps anon

>>4828998
it was the only face uve done i thought were cute

i was going to show u i saved it but 4chan says duplicate...
file name is "anonmadeacuteface.jpeg"

>>4829031
im sorry
i felt it was too soulless :(

>>4829035

Study faces/heads (with line only) before you continue please, your proportions, perspective and placement of facial features are not working.

>>4827334

set your line art layer to multiply and /or expand the selection of your fills on your flat color layer so that you don't get that white grain around your line art

Hoping to render this in some cool way

>>4828999
>the originate on the anterior surface of the clavicle and will tuck under it unless you are extremely built
Yes they originate on the anterior surface, therefore overlapping the front face of the clavicle. They will never "tuck under" though. Just because someone has a thin pectoralis, doesn't mean it suddenly decides to tuck. If it's thin, you just see more of the underlying bone structure.
>sternocleidomastoid is a single word
Yeah, it is. I wrote it like that because I found it easier to remember.

>>4829035
here asukafag, tried keeping a simillar style
jaw and eye socket placement were a bit fucked
i'm not marmalade mum but this should help a bit

>>4829245
thank you i love you
i went too hard on the indent eyesockests i used to do back in the day

>>4829235
>Yes they originate on the anterior surface, therefore overlapping the front face of the clavicle
Look at your own picture, the muscle doesn’t cover the collarbone. You drew them as attaching to the superior surface. You will always see the collarbone outside of transverse flexion.

>>4829235
> They will never "tuck under" though. Just because someone has a thin pectoralis, doesn't mean it suddenly decides to tuck. If it's thin, you just see more of the underlying bone structure
No, you just have a fabricated worldview because you look at shopped images of posing bodybuilders on horse steroids in perfect lighting during a pump.
Pic related, you can clearly see the plane changes on the medial clavicle where the connective tissue tucks under the collarbone before facing out as the clavicular head fills out. This is common sense when you consider where the head originates and inserts and how the clavicle sits on the ribcage.

>>4829292
It varies from person to person, obviously.

>>4829245
>i'm not marmalade mum but this should help a bit
I think you did a really good job. I like the line variation a lot.

>>4829296
Why are you so mad?
It's just an underdeveloped part of the pectoralis. There are three distinct sections, and the top section in the picture you posted just happens to be more underdeveloped than the other two sections. Also, like I mentioned at the beginning of this post, it varies from person to person. Everyone can have more or less tendon from the collarbone, I drew what I consider the most appealing.

>>4829317
>y-you’re mad here’s a shopped photo of a bodybuilder rolling her shoulders forward during a pump
literally seething
>i-it’s underdeveloped
lmao imagine thinking fucking klokov has an underdeveloped clavicular head
imagine thinking you can target a head in a muscle for development

>>4829328
It's not about targeting the muscle, it's about genetics. Like I said, not everyone is the same. The photo isn't shopped, and there are plenty of other examples of this on google.
Post your work or shut up.

>>4829331
fuming lol

Shut the fuck up autists

>>4829336
>Discussing anatomy is autistic
t. beg

>>4829331
Hey MM I don't follow you but I enjoy your stuff and I've noticed that the few times I've seen you post it's generally helpful if not downright friendly.

So why do you get shit? I assume there's a reason for it but I just haven't seen it.

>>4829365
blatant attention seeking behavior

>>4829369
On who's part? MM's or the people that seem to have an issue with them?

>>4829365
literal attention whore trying to get a following by emulating teal

marmelade mum = based and cute

>>4829372
>teal
I've only been here for 18months or so and am not familiar with that name.

>>4829374
I like to think that they're an RL thicc futa with an apron and mother demeanour

>>4829378
Motherly*

is it possible to be fast and draw well

is this any good?? thinking of killing myself

Some quick character concept sketches.

>>4829575
Not really, but you won't be able to make it better if you kill yourself.

>>4829575
i think this is really cool, keep going

>>4829623
can you tell me why?

>>4829211
nice

Worked out an older piece.

>>4829732
cuz ull b ded dummy

>>4829919
why is the drawing bad

>>4829917
Blog?

>>4829942
Here you go. https://twitter.com/WhiteBox_Studio

>>4829934
Symbol drawing with little understanding of form, anatomy, and proportion. In short, you need to practice your fundamentals.

>>4829570
wheres her bulge

>>4829570
This is genuinely hideous, man.
You need to use construction, because this is a complete mess.

>>4829999
you're right I'm sorry
i neglected construction again thinking i can just exaggerate a photo
i failed myself and my friends on ic once again and i have already deleted the file

>>4830022
>i have already deleted the file
Don't do that you idiot! You need that to compare yourself for a year from now.
Don't neglect construction. You can do it.

>>4829917
Leave, Hardstones McFlintcock.

>>4829960
I drew it from my head without references if that makes a difference...

>>4830047
It doesn't really. If you have a firm grasp on the things I mentioned, you don't need reference for every little thing.

>>4830061
can i c ur art....

Oh look, another conflict is brewing

>>4829405
Yes, with mileage and solid fundamentals.

>>4830022
Stop being such a massive bottom faggot.

drawpile gets the pressure off

>>4829365
/ic/ hates namefags and also more in general people who are above /beg/

>>4829372
>oh man someone helping people improve art in a board dedicated to improving art
>we should definitely put all our effort into driving them away and lowering the quality of the board overall

>>4818918
Love your approach to hair. Feels pretty...hairy. Try to capture that even with cleaner lines if you can.

>>4830231
If youre above /beg/ and /ic/ notices you they name you/learn your social media name/real name and will call you by one of the 3 anyways, basically making you a namefag even as an anon. I think /ic/ hates pets they can't name themselves.

Recent comms I did, what can I improve upon this?

>>4830089
Why, would that improve your art?
If I'm shit at art does that justify you being lazy? If I'm great will that make you want to quit? If I'm better than you, but not great, will you delude yourself by going "psh, he's not that great, look at this mistake here"?
You need critique to grow, and you need to keep your ego in check so you can take that critique. Wanting to see someone's work when they critique yours is just your ego talking, and it's holding you back.

Look at your work, look at the critique you got: does it ring true? Can you honestly say you have a good understanding of form and anatomy? Can you honestly say you have put in the time to master the fundamentals?

>>4830262
you kind of compressed the arms too much trying to keep the in the frame. using a slightly wider angle lens/ subtle forced perspective would be a way around this( john carpenter does that a lot). or you could make the frame slighly bigger. try doing the pose in front of a mirror/camera and see how your arm foreshortens & which angle feels the most naturalistic.

>>4830262
In addition to what >>4830418 said, the thighs appear to be way too long,and there does not appear to be enough space in the chair to fit the tail. That plus the color of the tail is very close to the color or the hair, which is flattening it out.
The foreshortening on the arms also looks skewed, as if you rotated a flat image in perspective instead of a 3D form. Draw bands around the arms and you should be able to see what I mean.
Additionally the shoulders seem detached from where they should be meeting the torso.

>>4830475
>That plus the color of the tail is very close to the color or the hair
y-yes, that's how hair works.

>>4830479
The image is flat. It is a flat image.
If you want it to pop out more, you need to push the values and the contrast.
The drawing is the bigger problem here, but the coloring is not helping with the flatness.

>>4830494
then why do you have to go and say dumb shit like "the color of the tail is close to the color of her hair", at least take a couple minutes to re-read your bullshit before you make yourself look like a NGMI

>>4830479
not necessarily my pubes are black, my beard is blond/red and my hair is brown.

>>4830506
i should also say i'm 21 and identify as sharmalem my pronouns are chey, clar, mard, and vey... and its your job to know how those work.

>>4830498
What are you on about? I said what I meant and meant what I said.
Why are you so defensive?

>>4830512
You're kind of a bitch, aren't you?

>>4830506
iktf ;_;

>>4830418
>>4830475
Gotcha, thanks for the crits anon(s), I appreciate it.

marmalade scum

Tried a style I'd never done before using adobe illustrator (which i've never used either). Sort of a vague mural for a little story idea I use for art insp. What'd you guys think?

(also yeah its very kurzgesagt, ik).

>>4830627
marmalade's cum

>>4831036
The yellow bowls and hands and basically all the yellow on the second plane are kinda blending into background. Maybe make them darker or make the background darker to get more contrast.

>>4829909
this is cool

>>4831036
I like it, please continue making esoteric vector art

>>4830399
because then you could redline my drawing

>>4831078
Good point. I think I'll keep it as is for this piece since I spent way too long fiddling with the background - but I'll keep it mind for future pieces.

>>4831107
Thanks anon, will do.

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>>4831105
thanks brother

>>4831150
My art isn't a redline.
But more importantly:
Can you honestly say you have a good understanding of form and anatomy? Can you honestly say you have put in the time to master the fundamentals?

>>4824079
Thank you! It was digital :)

>>4831804
no, i don't consider myself a beginner but not a pro either. somewhere in the middle