/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4795346
>please post better drawings than last thread, posts shit drawing as first

>>4795369
also maybe i was too harsh, style isn't my cup of earl grey.. but the shading and everything else shows it isn't a beginning.

These threads are getting worse and worse

>>4792226
This is definitely a lot cuter and appealing than your last attempts. Really the only thing I would nitpick at this point is how you draw the highlights and pupils in your eyes, it comes across as very western. I think the biggest thing to avoid is the big highlight circle+big pupil circle combo. Try looking up some more variations of how anime artists draw their highlights and inner eyes, I think that will give you the final push to get the look down.

>>4795346
Thanks for chosing my pic as op. Made my morning:)

I have no idea what I'm doing, foreshortening confuses the crap outta me.

Not sure how to position the body for this

>>4795653
>>4795369
The art isn't even bad but the subject matter is. Snape in 2020?

>>4795677
potterheads are eternal

i thought tumblr artstyle died.
it's so fucking unappealing.

>>4795656
With colors

Besides anatomy I can't figure out what makes it feel so off?

>>4795823
sorry your drawing didn't get picked for OP. Maybe next time. Keep drawing anon, I believe in you:)

>>4795823
This. OP made a really questionable choice this time.

>>4795843
I really like the colors. The soft purple line art looks really nice! Keep going

@4795846
never reply to me ever again, Beth, i might catch your gay.

Finished! Thoughts on my gay tumblr jew oc?

>>4795852
Thank you!

khorny

>>4795855
you draw the ugliest hands i have ever seen

>>4795855
I really love your hands and the hair. The wings behind on his head are a nice touch as well. His face remains hard to look for me though, he looks like a 40yo chubby man and this Jewish nose doesn't add cute points.

>>4795855
Draw him w no clothes

>>4795896
not my pure little angel:(( oh no!
ᴵ'ˡˡ ˢᵉᵉ ʸᵒᵘ ᶦn ᵗʰᵉ /ˢᵃˡᵗ/ ᵗʰʳᵉᵃᵈ

For a friend.

Also I drew this a while back for a milestone I had.

>>4795691
Harry Potter was always kinda lame and now that jk Rowling turned out to be such an embarrassment to the human race I just want my memories of reading and watching the series to be completely fucking erased.

>>4795843
>I can't figure out what makes it feel so off?
You have a poor understanding of perspective and form, so nothing really jives.

>>4796144
non armored version

>>4795855
The hands and face are awful, it's really unclear where either of the pairs of wings connect, and it is a poor choice to use a soft brush for the entire illustration, it makes it really tough to look at.

>>4795855
I like his design but I dont like the colors/coloring style used here. It makes it a bit unclear. I would also stay away from that blurry background, maybe use some kind of texture or keep it in a light color and make a square around it. I still dont like how the wings connect tho, they would be better comming out at his waist at least.

>>4796144
>>4796147
The face doesn't suit the body at all and there's a lot of visual clutter in the action shot. If one of these is supposed to be armored, that fact is extremely unclear. Proportions are badly off in the second image.

>>4796075
pretty good, how do you get so many followers

repostin this since new thread was made ten minutes after i first posted it
thoughts?

>>4796154
What's wrong with the face? Also, you're right, gonna need bigger shoulders.

>>4796175
It looks very neotenous/feminine with facial hair tacked on.

>>4794510
are u the manlnfiltch guy? I think you seriously need to study loomis for faces. The eyes are all over the place.

>>4796180
I think it's what i'm trying to go for. He's supposed to be a teenager.

>>4796187
What age of teenager? I could believe 13 for the face, but not the body and facial hair. The body and facial hair could work for a 19 year old, but not the face.
Either eay the shapes you are using for the eyes are still probably more feminine than you want, and I don't just mean the eyelashes.

>>4796196
They are very angular im noticing. Appreciate it.

https://youtu.be/2hxWO61opP0

>>4795855
i think i'm gonna throw up

>>4795346
Based op

>>4796340
Get well soon.

>>4795690
nice draw pal

>>4795346
Will op pic save /alt/?

>>4795847
i was the one doing these threads for a while after chico left. someone else is beating me and doing them now.

>/SALT/ now has better artwork, while actual teenage tumblrite girls took over this general
Where did all go wrong?

>>4796571
/alt/ has always been a crab bucket driving out good artists, being filled with tumblr hobbyists is the fate it deserves

>>4796076
>Saying that a trans gendered woman is not a biological woman is akin to be an embarrassment to the human race.
I hope this is bait.

>>4796076
she didnt say anything wrong
I am following you but damn you are stupid

>>4796704
>>4796706
I assumed he was talking about her tacking on a bunch of retarded fanfic-tier ""lore"" to the HP universe via retarded twitter posts.

>>4796731
no all the tumblr shitters are crying because she said trannys arent real women (which is true) and now they hate her but still love HP idk

>>4796734
who fucking cares? everywhere I go it's "trannies" this "trannies" that. god damn nigger I do not give a single fuck about trannies just shut the fuck up my god just SHUT UP ALREADY WHY IS EVERY BOARD INFESTED WITH YOU PEOPLE WHO ARE COMPLETELY OBSESSED WITH TRANNIES?

>>4796757
tell it to >>4796076

>>4796766
Again, why would you assume it's about trannies when JK Rowling has said far more actually embarrassing things, like that wizards shit their pants then use magic to make it disappear? Or that wizard kids have group masturbation sessions with eachother?

>>4796757

Deep down they wish to be treated exceptional in a good way. They mistakenly think trannies are treated exceptionally well because some people give marginalized people extra attention or credit. Meanwhile it would be an absolutely brutal life to be someone in the margins of society sexually. If you’re straight and upset about trannies, you’re defs upset about something else. Do better and you’ll feel better and see the attention and credit you want.

Everyone should ignore obvious bait and continue to make art.

Progress >>4791917

Is hair shading and colors ok? She is supposed to be white/silver haired and the scene is supposed to be set during sunset,

>>4796845

If it's during a sunset and the window is behind her, I would imagine she would be darker overall since her face would be in the shadows. It really all depends on the exact tone and colors you choose for the sunset. Also as a VERY VERY general rule that definitely doesn't always apply, if the light is very warm (ala a sunset) the shadows tend to appear cooler.
Even if you don't do the complete background first, I'd think it would probably help to at least choose the approximate colors you plan on using for it down all at once. Then you can choose other colors and shading based on those ones, y'know?

>>4795346
/beg/ 2.0

>>4796845
The shading looks good. The only thing I do not understand is where the light source is at. It should be darker where the light does not hit.

>>4796890
>It should be darker where the light does not hit.
No shit sherlock

>>4796892
Yeah but tell him that.

>>4796908
>>4796890
Light source is behind her. Front of her face and her hair IS in the shadow her natural skin color is much lighter. I thought that bounce light would make her silver hair and her face more warm in the shadow.

Tried messing around with painting in CSP

I think i finally beat animal crossing

How did I do?

>>4797218
Ty for bringing quality art in this thread. That makes it number 3 so far.

>>4796172
Being loose is one thing, but this looks unfinished. Also even if you're going for an airy feel, there should still be more value than this.

>>4797247
post your work

>>4797339
Why?

>>4797224
>number 3
Since we’ve both already posted our work, those three must be (You), me, and >>4797218

>>4797218
isnt this by the dude that maims girls and puts cigarette butts in their cummed vaginas?

>>4797365
What? I'm intrigued

>>4797386
>>4797365
>>4797218
mossa? i mean the artstyle kinda resembles his, although i doubt as ive never seen any SFW art of his

>>4797365
Yeah it was heavily inspired by his drawings, I like him

>>4797410
>>4797218
looks really good, anon.

dont you hurt them girls, pls :c

Why are so many people posting anime shit in /alt/?

>>4797643
I'd be fine with an anime only thread. The quality here took a nose dive after tumblr decided they wanted to draw half ass Jewish TV characters. Alt used to be the anime thread about 7 years ago back when you were in elementary school.

>>4797643
I'd be in favor of making seperate anime and cartoon/stylization generals. These threads are plagued with weebs seething whenever they see something other than anime anyways, it would be better for both parties.

>>4797654
>>4797681
But did /asg/ die? or maybe that was just a joke. I'd understand why no one would want to post there anymore though. I've always thought /alt/ was for anything besides anime and realism.

>>4797643
>>4797654
>>4797681
>>4797740
>What is /ALT/?
>If you're looking for a place to post your cartooning then you've found the right general. This is /ic/s 1st and only merged hub where both Eastern and Western stylization can coexist peacefully, hence the double title. However, by community demand and long history, this is favorably an Anime general.
Does nobody even read the OP anymore?

>>4797643
Anime is here to stay

>>4797643
always has been

>>4797746
>>4797821
Haha now I feel stupid. My apologies

face cute?

>cute?

>>4797844
very cute
>>4797842
not cute

>>4797842
Face is fine, but the skull is a little fucked. Torso is fucked too, particularly the breast placement.
Hand looks stiff, and the forearm is too long. With her hand where it is, her upper arm would have to raised toward the camera and foreshortenned. Try the pose yourself in a mirror, and keep in mind that girls usually have proportionally shorter forearms than men do.

>>4796184
huh, yeah! I'm not a good sketcher

It's me again. Tried drawing something that isn't a gay jewish man for once. How did I do?

>>4797740
/asg/ is a worse /beg/

>>4797941
Looks comfy, like something I’d like to be smothered with

>>4797941
Badly, your drawings are totally formless.
Study the planes of the face in particular.

>>4797941
Hnnnnrg would

>>4797941
dont listen to this crab >>4798117 this is good, however what he said might hold true for lighting if you do it

>>4797941
much better.
was that so hard??

Not liking this face, I think I need to study some before continuing this

>>4798185
Shading looks good tho
Unlike literally /beg/ me

>>4798185
Wtf asukafag

>>4798210
Naw I'm not him. I see what you mean though lol.

>>4798210
>>4798084
hey you got the wrong guy here is my new drawing!

>>4798230
Jesus that completely different compared to your usual style, nice job.
>>4798214
Be careful around the waist area and face too, or people will mistake you as asukafag.

Op pic is ugly af

>>4798271
Creator of Op pic here. I know already. That's why I drew it ;)~

how can i make this better bros ?
https://i.imgur.com/Am6GTPw.jpg

>>4798353
newgrounds animation based tier

>>4798367
NGMI i know

>>4798373
hell no, youre good, anon. I just thought you should try animation. You already got the general web cartoons animation right.
The model reminded me of Shin Megami Tensei stuff, look up Kazuma Kaneko's work

Is this /alt/ or deviant art?

The fuck happened to all of the good artists that were posting a few months ago?

>>4798379
oh in that case thanks alot fren
here is another of my works
https://i.imgur.com/lZp8Azw.png

both characters belong to @HellOnEarthIII on twitter

>>4798396
Last thread was dreadful. There was only 3 decent/good artwork posted. 2 of them even got reposted in this current thread.
These are the only saving graces rn
>>4797218
>>4797197
>>4796075

>>4798353

https://i.imgur.com/gQhQ6NI.png

>>4797941
Your stuff is nice, I like this one more in special. I think you could be painting your drawings in a different way, with better and stronger color combinations and a more realistic rendering, it would enrich your style. Do you have a blog?

>>4797901
do you intentionally space the eyes really far apart or is it just style at this point.

>>4798396
once you reach /int/ level you realize /ic/ is a terrible place that has nothing to offer you

>>4797197
It is very hot in my house right now. I see this ghastly figure wandering around the halls

>>4798161
Dumb hugbox /beg/.

>>4798415
One of these things is not like the others.

>>4798415
>>4798396
How about make something instead of whining.

>>4798713
Not bad honestly.
>>4798404
Not bad either. I know other anon called it Newgrounds tier but I know he meant it in an inspiring way.

>>4798353
>>4798404
You know this is an imageboard, right?

>>4798745
I used to a while back, but hardly got any feedback so I fucked off.
Was just checking back to see what's been up. Looks like quality took a nose dive, save for a 2 or 3 of decent posters still hanging around

>>4798713
it's amazing how much nicer your drawings look when you don't just fill the whole fucking canvas with unnecessary detail. the hair in particular is really good

>>4798750
banned from uploading files obviously

>>4798230
>>4798084
>>4798124
A challenge is nice, inspiring even, now I sure will draw Reichan cuter than ever.

>>4798798
Then fuck off.

>>4798353
Side ones look like a gigachad

>>4798764
>cope

>>4797941
Much better, desu just getting rid of the big crook nose on all of your drawings would improve, except for when a big crook nose is appropriate (like the Snape drawing).

>>4798713
I drew this from memory. I came back after a run, and I found my housemate hogging the fan. It looked exactly like this.

>>4798831
no

>>4798925
If you got banned from posting images, you probably deserved it.

>>4798976
i dont even know what i did to get the ban, its only on /pol/ and /ic/ which i rarely post on both

>>4796175
soul

>>4799015
What the fuck am I looking at

>>4798883
so humblebrag or you want to fuck your sister?

https://discord.gg/RNfkUFu

>>4799022
why not both?

>>4796845
First time rendering a background. It's so fucking hard.

Do you guys know the best way to draw and render floorboards? Is there a way to use tiled texture to do so in Krita?

>>4798883
She was fanning the pussy?

>>4799015
Rad. Only real issue I see are the hands. Her left hand is too small and the palm looks like it's just missing, the hands are 2 completely different sizes, and her right hand connects strangely to her forearm. But otherwise nice work.

>>4798883
Last one, maybe i’ll draw another if it gets hot again

>>4798786
Yea, i am working on the whole background thing

>>4799022
>>4799038
Wife

>>4799083
Unclear, it was too hot to sit together near the only fan.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=08SILSkNJNM

>>4799237
She looks like that overwatch ice chick

>>4799237
>calling your wife your housemate

she fucks other guys

>>4799346
He could have been trying to conceal personal information. I usually slightly change information about myself anytime I post online.

>>4799388
Oh yes, the very unique feature that could identify you called having a wife.

>>4799391
Not very good at 20 questions, are you?

>>4799576
Looks like Gundam.
Not much to say about a rough sketch like this.

>>4799590
>Gundam
based. hiroyuki kitazume is my favorite artist

>>4799576
Heads and faces look fine, but work up on gesture and the body in general. Guy's pose is awkward. Hampton's figure drawing book is pretty nice if you haven't read it already.

>>4795346
Lambdadelta goes to the only place that has not been corrupted by capitalism... SPACE!

>>4799576
Gundam but good.

not dead yet

>>4799787
Wow that is amazing! Very inspirational.

>>4799015
The stylization is turned up way too high for my liking but cool stuff nonetheless. Makes me wanna draw hawt nazi girls too but I’ll probably get crucified on social media for it

>>4799015
I did not know that was a boot at all for a few minutes.

>>4798579
yes

>>4799576
i'm really starting to like your art anon. maybe it's just because you paint the best boys though

God fucking damn it I broke my glasses and cannot draw without seeing my monitor

How to make her more unique

>>4800075
Color the line art

>>4800075
Upgrade your OS to Yosemite

>>4799020
Nazi girl!

>>4799172
Thanks! Yeah I noticed how bad the hands are after I uploaded it. I'll try to fix it later.

>>4799905
Thanks anon and screw social media, draw hot Nazi girls!

>>4799045
Thank you for nothing /ic/

Figured it out myself, block_bristles brush is the answer.

>>4800075
bigger tits

i changed face

good anime face?
cute?

>>4800244
Simplify the teeth
Hair is too big

>>4800244
The face wasn't the problem.

i dont know what to think about this...

>>4800209
Blog?

>>4800288
It's a cool design.
The detached sleeves don't make a ton of sense, but the costume definitely needs the breakup of color, and it echoes the face hole.

>>4800298
I still don't have a blog.
I plan of using this piece as my first post on social media.

>>4800316
Create Twitter as well, so that I could follow you too

>>4796172
Is the mouth there on purpose

>>4799689
You ignored everything everyone said. Good FUKCIN job.

>>4800210
Unironically great idea

>>4800368
The answers I got were related to color theory, am I supposed to spend a week watching/reading/learning that and then redraw the almost finished thing? I said there's only hair, background and animation to add.

>>4800045
Like it.

>>4799045
Draw where you think the skeleton is supposed to be in this.

>>4800379
That's fine, but then you don't need to post it again. You're not intending to fix anything and people have already told you what to work on.

>>4800629
Hundreds of people post WIPs and later finished works in /alt/. I am intending to fix what I can. The advices I got were either hair or the color theory, the latter I can't change without studying and then redrawing the whole picture

>>4800642
You can do that, since this is /beg/ 2.0. At least fix the other issues other than color theory.

>>4800659
What issues? When I asked for specific problems, no one said a thing, except the guy with hair.

I'm not used to drawing without lineart, but I think this came out alright. I wish I hadnt been so focused on the rendering portion, I normally would have pushed the pose further.

>>4800616
I guess it's like this? Still working on anatomy.

She is leaning forward. Her pelvis and legs are fucked.

>>4800764
Her pelvis and legs are indeed fucked.
But also, try drawing the ribcage with ellipses. Do you see how squashed it is? I know it's an anime style drawing, but try putting a skull in there too. Draw a ball to fit around the corners of the eye. Do you notice anything?

>>4800693
>I think this came out alright
I think you're too close to it.

Look at flipped. Are you noticing errors?

>>4800789
thanks anon. always forget to flip.

>>4800075
add a penis

>>4799237
This was supposed to be a stupid sketch, now it is going to be a drawing. If I draw the nipples is that NSFW? I feel weird if I have nipples and she does not have nipples shouldn’t it be equal opportunity?

>>4799295
Never played overwatch

>>4799346
Even if she did she hasn’t done it recently... we have not been more than 20ft apart for the past 8 months

This is one of my more recent sketches

>>4800244
Yes, getting a lot cuter. I think you still need to blend out the blush a bit more (or use airbrush for it) but you're definitely improving. One other thing is maybe flipping your canvas more, the left eye (circular part/pupils) is kind of a different shape from the right one.

what do you think bros

>>4801671
ah, yes.

>>4801671
I like it

>>4801696
Like it. Very much of the old world style.

>>4800883
That I will not do, but if it makes you feel better she was initially gonna be a trap

>>4801671
i question why you put watermarks on your art, as if it's worth watermarking.

>>4797247
Yeah, i was messing with the levels on PS for a while and definitely upped the general contrast, but i dont think i went far enough.
Thanks for responding

>>4800348
Yes. I always like simplified side-mouths like that. What else does it look like?

idk if I'm getting tunnel vision, but it think is OK so far

>>4800379
You never fixed the hair really
>>4801920
idk, I never liked it, it almost feels like that line you make when doing the loomis heads, you could make it work with more defined cheeks or pointer nose. Right now it just feels like a wierd tangent

Working on this rn, I'm still not done with filling in/redrawing the frills
Are there any proportional/major issues I'm missing?

>>4801696
Really nice. I like how the coloring looks.
I feel like the perspective doesn't really match up on all of it though. The boxy car part seems tilted a little more towards us compared to almost everything else, and the back wheels look like they're being viewed almost straight on rather than at an angle like the rest.
Possible those things are just an illusion due to the shading style, but i think it could be more clear. I'm curious if anyone else agrees or if its just me.

>>4801139
what r u holding looks like a spatula attached to a frisbee

>>4797118
You have a lot of potential, but I'd recommend looking at reference, or even doing some loomis heads and placing the features, I did a quick paintover to show you what needed adjusting. I tried not to edit too much of the base of the style (though I am a sucker for eye shines)

Form studies, loomis heads, and facial form studies would do you a lot of good.

>>4801987
looks like a frying pan in one hand and a spatula in the other. are you blind anon?

>>4800288
wremny?

>>4801942
no your right, thank you for catching that. Ill wont rush the drawing portion next time

>>4801995
lmao looks like you need loomis

>>4802029
i was trying not to completely repaint the entire thing. I didnt wanna shift too much around but the nose was the most glaring issue since it looked like a zit.

>>4801939
the bottom half of the legs could be a touch longer

>>4801938
far arm/hand looks awkward, try removing it and see how it looks

>>4801292
work on your line work. if you are taking a picture, screenshot it so the file wont be so big

>>4800693
is that a pec or a boob? his pointed foot looks uncomfortable, make it more relaxed and have the toe point toward the viewer

>>4802029
pyw

>>4801939
im no expert on anatomy myself, but something thta immediately stuck out to me is i think her feet are pointed down too much,as if she's standing on a ramp or something.. and the shoe on the left (her right foot) seems to point down more than the other and the one .... also looks like her shoes dont match

>>4801996

ahh now i see it... i thought the handle was part of her leg.. not the handle, will be readable when colour.
>>4801996
>are you blind anon?
geez.. i hope not,,,, i'm pretty high on fentanyl and drunk though... so maybe thts part of the cause.. ha\ving trouble typing...as many typos as this post has it took me like 9 minutes to write it out so far and be this decipherable...
>>4800075
the background is okay, maybe you should just stick to landscapes anon.

>>4799015
Why are all your characters ugly?

>>4801995
I like it

>>4802244
>>4802056

How are the legs/feet looking now, lads? I always struggle with the lower half of the body

>>4802303
better... still kind of bothering me her right knee is facing inwards and the foot faces out though, looks uncomfortable

>>4802268
Why do you think so? I wouldn't consider them ugly nor beautiful, just average.

>>4802315
Average? You have a really low standard for ugly i'm guessing...

>>4795346
the absolute state of /alt/

>>4802318
>>4802268
Garbage taste.

>>4802360
Lol. What? How ugly are you exactly if you think rat-trap and nazi chick are average ?

>>4800244
Alot better, the blush shouldn't be so obvious though, looks like a kid that doesn't know how to use makeup

>>4799015
Why is one of the swazzis backwards on the collar, at first my thought was maybe it's visible on both sides and the outside of the collar is what's important... but then the correctly orientated one would be wrong.

>>4802382
Retard.

>>4802392
You're probably right. I didn't know where to draw them, but perhaps it'd be better to be outside of the collar.

>>4802422
i'm retarded because I find ugly people ugly? That makes no sense anon, attractiveness and intelligence are partially correlated due to them both being in good gene stocks, as well as intelligent people being capable of generating more wealth and stable lives and being able to get more attractive wives, leading to more attractive children with more intelligence.

>>4801873
Why do you care?

>>4802056
saw you post on the other board. Cute stick boy anon

>>4801873
cuz he steals my old shit and puts his watermark on it.

>>4801696
trad?

>>4802303
Blog?

>>4801139
I don’t usually make comic things. It took me longer to place the text boxes than to ink and color

>>4801987
>>4801996
This anon is correct it is a spatula and frying pan

Need half finished pictures of random crap?
Don't worry I've got you covered

>>4795346

>>4800244
i miss your old autistic style at least it was interesting

>>4799689
> the only place that has not been corrupted by capitalism... SPACE!
what was the space race and who won it you absolute fucking mouthbreather

i'm back after they banned me for posting my furry art, i drew this

>>4801696
despite what has been said about the perspective, this looks really cool and I could definitely see in on a whisky label or something

>>4802056
>>4802268
>>4799015
It’s the nose that makes it ugly.

>>4802757
Not the guy you're responding to, but this is a tim curry quote from a movie im forgetting right now. Relax.

Hopefully I can pull off this later

>>4802355
pyw, I'm trying my hardest here insteed of crabing around. Maybe if you actually posted it will elevelate the thread level

>>4802966
oh yeah that one from c&c doesn't make it any less fucking cringe that he's a nazbol larper with shitty art using it unironically

>>4802692
Very cool, I like it, maybe the feet on the left it's to tiny
>>4802839
Naiz, as the other Anon said the pelvis feels like it shouldn't be pointing like that, did you use a reference? Was it like that? L

>>4795346
Finally a good op pic for /alt/. I was worried this general would continue to go downhill. I can finally post my art here.

>>4795346
Finally a good op pic for /alt/. I was worried this general would continue to go downhill. I can finally post my art here.

>>4803011
Where’s your work?

>>4803012
Your seething is music to my ears

>>4803012
Ugh. Okay dude you win. Be as angry as you want

yeet

>>4795690
cool

>>4803304
fin

>>4802998
>>4802839
Really solid I like these.

>>4802998
durp

>>4802839
You didn't fix anything.

>>4803298
Panels 5, 6, and 7 are very unclear. Giving the panels themselves breathing room would help a lot, but the drawings should be redone with clarity in mind.

Panel 7 in particular I can't make heads or tails of. Whose face is it?
It also feels like a page is missing between this and this >>4803304
Additionally, the shot reverse shot here is making it really hard to work out which face is which in the second page.

>>4803487
yeah lol i posted it to twitter before i read any of the critique sorry

>>4802998
hey welcome back friend

>>4803505
aside from clarity (the monologue and text will help a lot, they haven't been added yet)...
does it look cool?

>>4802511
Too hard to read, lets see where this goes

>>4802692
uhhh at first i was like who the fuck holds a cigarette like that... and then I noticed his left hand is actually a right hand... i'd probably hold a cigarette weird too if i suffered from that.

>>4803044
kek

>>4803308
so is he going to become another hand or w.e

>>4803894
What the fuck are you talking about?

>>4803692
I tried to cross the orientation of the lines to see if it could be more readable. I think I also inked this too fast

>>4803905
No lol but the comic read start to finish makes clear of that. Those are pages 26-29

>>4800209
I am studying anime backgrounds too you should hit me up and we can discuss ref, books, tuts etc.

https://www.pixiv.net/users/4967174

What do I need to focus on improving? My brain shoots all over the place when drawing, so I'm not entirely sure where to aim my practices this month

>>4804121
jesús anon, this is really good

>>4802505
yeah i did all the black and white drawing by hand and scanned it

>>4804121
Hot diggety that's good

I want to finish this but it honestly feels like I just need to redo it completely and approach it from another angle

>>4803911
his hand holding the fucking cigarette, duh

>>4804171
Not being a furry

>>4804293
yeah i thought.. the colouring looked dig but i the line weights and whatever else didn't make sense otherwise. i like it though, good work

>>4804461
your call anon but I'm hard already

>>4804507
You are pretty dumb dude...

Can someone help with the foot/leg I know it’s fucked up

>>4804556
Looks like a knee is off on the right.

wip

trying harder lines and celshading and not-soulless anime face as kings suggested

>>4804717
if you're the polish nigga then you did well, keep developing this style. looks kawaii

>>4804592
It's the whole thigh, it's too thin compared to the other, especially since it's closer to the camera.

>>4804507
His middle finger and pointer finger are holding the cigarette, which would make his palm turned up, which would make that his left hand. What are you confused about?

anyone knew what artsyle is this? i like the way he uses the line to make the shading

>>4804457
really good energy in this sketch, blog?

>>4804854
That's called hatching, anon, something that artists have been doing for hundreds of years. Look up Rendering in Pen & Ink by Arthur Guptill, it's a great book on this.

>>4804854
Most art styles don't have names. We have a stupid question thread already.

>>4804461
It's just in the sketch stage, so why not redo it?

>>4804881
>Rendering in Pen & Ink by Arthur Guptill
thanks a lot

>>4804881
Is what /beg/s mean when they ask about an art style? They just want to know what technique is being used?

>>4804898
exactly, most beg doesnt even know what they are looking/asking for, so it comes out as a stupid question to most people

>>4804907
>>4804907
>>4804907
please post better drawings than last thread.

>>4804854
That's a nip girl artist anon.

>>4804121
anon please post blog

Im looking to learn the "east" europe style of ilustration like Sergey Kolesov, Kacper Swat or Luca Boni. They seems to rely a lot in basic forms, geometrization, design and moody colours. Is not purely stylization but abstraction too.

I guess I just had to apply all the terms above, but sometimes I feel I miss something or Im just comparing my works with theirs. Anyway, if somebody knows any resource or practice related with the art mentioned, would be great.