/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

i was about to give a serious reply, then i noticed the background.

hopefully your last

Who draws the bg? It looks so hot.

>>4776879
fishine/hirame

>>4776837
You need to work on construction and anatomy.
Specifically:
- The face is flat and skewed
- The breasts are formless circles
- The fingers look like sausages
- The abdominsl muscles aren't shaped correctly
- The navel is too low
- 'Butt fangs' should be visible at this angle, given the thigh gap
- Everything in general looks very flat and symbol drawn

Other than those, the patterning on the bikini makes the image look even flatter than it already is (are they supposed to be horizontal stripes? Because that is not how they would look). The press marks on the bikini, as well as the nipples and camel toe are way too defined.

You shouldn't be thinking about style at this stage in your development, and I wouldn't recommend bothering with color until you learn to draw better, but in terms of appeal, you do not need to delineate every single detail. As far as the rendering goes it looks like you've been using a soft brush for everything, which is not recommended, but if you insist on doing it, you should at least be using a much larger brush, as the small, soft brush makes everything look weird. It also looks like you used the dodge and burn tools, which you should also avoid.

And I really would not recommend using other peoples' art as a background for your own. Aside from this being frowned upon, it really highlights how much worse your art is by comparison.

>>4776972
Also the pose is extremely stiff.

>>4776879

>>4776837
subject 1/10
background 4.5/10

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