/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4753582
Since pic related has to be op pic, then /alt/ is not doing too well.

>>4753582
You're the one that drew that image, aren't you?

i like the mouth

>>4753598
its just the coloring that throws it off

Thick eyebrows gang. Had fun drawing her yesterday.

posted late last thread

>>4753350
I’m too much of a coward to throw the cast shadows from the gun and ears on her body - maybe I’ll do it digi

>>4753367
I planned on making the bottom more bright and saturated to balance the top, but I wanted her to have orange hair so that plan went out the window

>>4753784
why do you keep posting this trash?

>>4753784
Maximum Garbage

>>4753784
perspective on the wheels feels wrong

>>4753730
Quit drawing and get back to work on my damned Lion King review, Adam

>>4753784
incredibly based

>>4753784
Ignoring the other replies calling this garbage, I can'f help but feel like this entire drawing is incredibly soulless. I don't know, it just has no soul at all...

>>4753784
Why do you come here? Is it some form of weird narcissism? You've been getting a lot of critiques on this thing, yet you changed nothing. It still looks like shit. His legs are still feminine. What do you want?

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>>4753922
mogged crablet cope

>>4753784
soulless

>>4753784
What style is this alternative to? It’s the most generic straightforward piece of work possible.
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>>4753960
It's alternative to soul

>>4753972
>Several people point out the fact the boobs are too low when he posted the line art in the last thread
>"I see, gonna fix it" he said
>Didn't even bother to fix it in the finished image
Why do people even post here pretending to be looking for criticism then? Just admit you want attention and (You)s and save everybody's time.

>>4753784
The individual parts are okay, some are even great... but you clearly have no idea how to put things together... It all looks disjointed and off...

You should look into gesture and the read up just a little about the principles of composition in images... really just look up 'best compositions photography' or something like that... I can tell you put a lot of work into it, and it can b discouraging when the result isn't what you hoped for... just keep at it!

>>4753981
I did retard... they were higher... I tried at least; I actually tend to do that... i really tried...

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>>4753635
Jesus fuck, tough crowd in the /alt/ thread tonight

>>4753981
Those are boobs?

>>4753992
Absolute savage posters here right now, and I love it

>>4753986
>>4753992
This board is called Artwork/Critique. Go somewhere else if you want compliments.

>>4753966
Kek

>>4754001
critique is fine... just saying that I did try to fix what was pointed out; and I will keep that in mind next time too... insulting him is just to meet 4chan quota

>>4753992
Why are you posting your work in this thread, though? You don’t really have any kind of stylization.

>>4754017
>insulting him is just to meet 4chan quota
It came off as too butthurt. You got children character anatomy well I guess, but that drawing you posted is not working.

A mix of cartoon + anime

>>4753777
I’m worried that this drawing may be too ambitious, and just become a cluttered mess.

Work on the comic continues.

Posting six pages.

1/6

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>>4754110
6/6

I have absolutely no idea how to draw textures that don't look like chickenscratch. Otherwise, I'm pleased.

Ok, I'll add clothes next, if you see anything wrong tell me pls. HELP ME FUKCIN LEARN

>>4754095
I've learned the most from my biggest failures. Keep going dude.

>>4754095
If it fails, it fails and try it again, don't drop it

>>4754111
i really hate your faces

>>4753582
I don't know what I did to deserve being put in the OP pic, but thanks. I clicked the link from the old thread to get here and seeing my drawing in the OP gave me quite a shock.

>>4754220
I left alt for a few years, but back then Choco (op), the dude that used to organize the threads, used to choose a few drawings and randomly choose one, or when a drawing was unanimously good. I don't know who runs the threads now, but its a cool drawing anon so im happy for you

>>4754220
which pen/brush is this? nice cat anon.

>>4753582
I messed up not seeing the new thread so this is a copy and paste my bad lads

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>>4749349
ty for the responses :O, your words give me extra minutes of energy to burn!
>>4749481
I try to work on something till I think its finished; sometimes it's to my absolute detriment, others I can look back on and at least say I knew how to solve a new problem in the long run even if I made the current one a little too much or too little of what I wanted aesthetically. I would say I'm slow in that regard. If I don't mind something or I can't understand a problem I try to reference loomis and teallineguy or proko. I am a huge fan of the draftsman podcast too :O

>>4754145
berry nice
>>4753972
cute as heck
>>4753672
this is awesome and way too cute.

>>4753972
very cute anon

>>4754799
Don't do it

>>4754799
His tear duct is on the wrong side but who cares, he's a cartoon frog.

>>4753972
His chest anatomy is somewhat strange.

>>4753972
Study more anatomy

>>4754987
>>4754999
thanks frends... I do need to... I try to wing it... but it does fall apart when i try to draw girls naked

>>4753972
While I agree you got a long way to go (and with the other anons on this piece's issues), it's nice to see Ys fanart. I look forward to drawing Dana and Adol sometime in the future

>>4753972
I think everyone is being a little over dramatic on this, but i also think the pose looks a little , rushed ? Her left arm makes it look like she’s resting her weight on it but her back is totally straight, a little arched even. It makes her look kind of stationary like she’s uncomfortable

>>4753582
>>4754220
Do you have more drawings of the absolute hottie in the OP?

>>4754767
this could be benefitted with a larger cranium or a smaller chin

Блядь

>>4755442
Boт дeйcтвитeльнo чтo пocлeдняя шлюхa.

>>4754111
i absolutely love your stuff and your wicked style. it has so much soul. keep it up, im noticing you get better.

i wanna be able to replicate (in my own way i guess) that comfy and soulful, "unrefined," painterly japanese style. like tkmiz or something. this was more just for fun but i kinda like the colors.

>>4753972
I think you could bring the head down and make the chest plate shorter from starting from the top to fix your chest issue.

>>4755015
That's cool, you gonna get much better as you identify things you need to work on.

>tfw no big titty sphinx gf to pull your chariot

I'm having second thoughts about sticking so close to the Rider-Waite with regards to content and composition. Any suggestions? I'm worried a bit about originality as well as marketability. Some decks on the market have totally diverged from the RWT and they've done pretty well, but the art is trash (in my opinion). I definitely want this to be a tribute in some way but I don't know how far I should stray or what changes I should make before I get too deep into the cards.

TL;DR - Thoughts on style? (past cards as well)

>>4755718

here is the original chariot for reference.

>>4755044
>>4755596
I would rather move on; I also tend to draw the legs too long or have the forearms too low so I am trying to keep those issues in mind desu...

>>4755521
cute

>>4755718
your tarot cards are really cool... i like em

wip

>>4755718
I like the style but you have to feel the forms more, it feels like you're excusing it with style, you can still have volume and that style

>>4755817

thanks!

>>4755907

Yeah this card in particular feels pretty flat, I'll work on it!

twink stuff

>>4755817
Have you thought of going back to the basics and practicing human skeletons? Alongside Loomis proportions I guess.

>>4756056
>no gerudo linky

>>4755442
you're /int/ not /beg/ get out of here bootboy (just kidding it's always better to have good artists here)

>>4753784
Is he supposed to look gay

>>4756056

eyes are shitty
pls change

>>4756056
Could be sexier

>>4756110
Yes

>>4754095
Foreground inked. How do I make sure the foreground doesn’t get confused into the background? Do I just put a fat outline around her?

>>4754150
>>4754147
I don’t usually do a full scene. I need more practice so I can draw faster.

>>4756074
lol not him, but fuck off.

how can i get my shit to the next level? I want simplify things down more dynamic and more appealing .

(My BAD) how can i get my shit to the next level?
I want simplify things down more dynamic and more appealing

>>4756285
You should grind gesture

>>4756056
pls teach me how you improved your anatomy

>>4756285
Those fire effects look so cheap.

>>4756157
the linework is really nice.
but why are her legs so weird? is it intentional?

>>4755718

>VIII - STRENGTH

Pretty happy with this one so far, I think my forms are a bit more felt. I think I might have found some nice stylistic rules to follow regarding shadows, likely going to update the older cards. Crit?

>>4756285

holy shit that right-most hand is so bad m8

>I want simplify things down more dynamic and more appealing

just keep chugging along, I'd recommend studying other animu artists that you want to emulate

>>4756324
you're so right It looked way more dynamic in the sketch I should've not been so lazy and just fixed it.

>>4756157
I fucked myself for the rest of the drawing. Taking a break - please send help

>>4756314
>weird
She’s wearing carrot stockings, but if you mean their noodle-like qualities, I’m going to have to fall on muh style sword.

>>4756359

time to start smoking cigarettes and drinking black coffee anon

Not done yet, but would love some critique for next time

>>4756359
Holy SHIT dude you're pretty good

Am I accidentally falling into some neon colouring trend

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>>4756649
looks dope keep at it

>>4756373
it just looks extremely flat, for example the arms have no sense of foreshortening despite the pose

>>4756317
love this one!

>>4756677
u are the guy from op right? u are really

both give blog please...

>>4753730
Why does his shirt say AN3YH?

>>4756696
>pantsu is asking for blog qwq
but nah im not op although our line quality are similar, this is also me though >>4753649

>>4756896
ooh okay... well that one is really awesome too...

>>4756107
Wut.

>>4756677
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>>4756922
Super cool stuff, this thread is on fire right now

>>4756186
why? it's good advice you clown.

quickie piece a little while ago

>>4753783
paint is very pixelly, 2d. The thumbnail looks great but when you open it you are thrown off because the figure is much more detailed / 3d. Make the figure flatter in the same style as blood and this would be a++

When my cat Ging went to sleep none of us knew he'd wake up to an untimely death. I love you friend, for now I can only draw you.

>>4757016
sleep tite, kitty

wip

>>4754646
I have completed my quest for Hylics 2 fanart, god bless the lads

>>4757054
Who's that character?

>>4755442
Are you the guy who drew fallout guro few years ago

>>4757137
Uejini on twitter

>>4757016
SOUL

>>4757364
RETARD

just because something is badly drawn doesnt mean its soulful you dense fucking barking seals

>>4757371
>just because something is badly drawn
Give actual reasons why it's bad you cum guzzling retard.

>>4757385
>DUHHH IM STUPID ON THE INTERNET A HYUCK HYUCK BAD IS GOOD PROVE ME RONG LOOOOOL

why would i ever fall for that. bye gonna go draw now, something you wouldnt consider doing

>>4756307

>FoTM waifu, for the bazillionth time

Why? Is there no other character in the entire world that you want to draw than the one everyone wants put their dick in?

>>4757392
How embarrassing.

>>4757400
What character is that supposed to be?

>>4757405


Twitter bait MHA woman

>>4757392
>>4757371
souless

>>4756373
You're just trying to simulate drapery as lumps, and your arms shows your proportional weaknesses on blast. Always pay attention to the elipses on your limbs too. I'd also look for the art you're taking inspiration from (toriyama) and see how he handles heads and take some cues from that as how you handled the chin on the young man just makes for a less appealing shape.
I appreciate your effort but in your shoes I would try to sit down and work on Hampton and take his solutions to creative work: rinse and repeat.
My drapery is weak as shit wish I could show you something there.

>>4756157
this looks awesome

>>4757415
>Twitter bait

Exactly.

>>4757254
I can confidently answer that with a no. Not into gore.

>>4755442
Beautiful gun

Go to choice of any self respecting S.T.A.L.K.E.R.

>>4757441
I like it

Insta?

>>4756677
I think I understand, the forearms to hands don't overlap, especially that right arm further back
>>4757460
I agree with everything, the chin does need for fixing, and so does thee connection of limbs but I don't want to 100% ape the toriyama art style. I'll definitely do more anatomy and drapery study work, been lacking at that recently. I drew this to understand what you mean by the chin and inspo

>>4757600
I think you're coming across the right idea, espeically when you're doing trace overs with guidelines. the more you take time with those the better.
the thing about the "more tori" head you made is you basically combined a krillin head with a jaw and you also gave it a perspective tilt while keeping the back of the head in a profile view. your less tori is in profile and the jaw connects at the mid point of the head's shape
i think it looks pretty not bad otherwise.

when you get to your studies, really try to find the key characteristics that in views while also being able to break things down into their perspective components. get great at drawing cylinders so you can break the limbs into those: krenz has some great videos if you look into the warosu/cgp for them: he has some good advice too about figuring out what kind of curves an artist is using etc

the thing with toriyama is that he's very good at getting these cues together for the view he wants to show you and he also simplifies it at that.

that's why i urge you to look at irl heads even more so, and then see how the artists you like simplify those features and those perspectives to get the results they want.

like you gave the ponytail of the man a perspective that would suggest it's in profile and it muddles your effort.

>>4757546
thank you

my insta hasn't been updated in a long time
yuca797

my twitter is probably better
@danyookaa

>>4757869
I like it

>>4757869
Is this a scene inspired from a book or entirely original?

>>4757872
ty. wish i had patience to push it further.

>>4757890
yes! heidi!

>>4756285
For what it's worth, I think it looks cool anon

>>4756359
My productivity is so low when I wander outside the comfort zone. I stare and agonize over every line, and the drawing gets so stiff and over worked.

Fuck buildings man so painful. I’ve been redrawing them all morning. I want to enjoy drawing them, but I hate them.

>>4756365
Lol wut

>>4756393
>>4757472
I’m glad someone is enjoying it

>>4757016
May your cat chase infinite birds in kitty heaven
>>4757869
This is great, hope you take it to completion!

More Linktwinks that I totally didn't reference porn for.

>>4758036

>he doesn't know about ingesting naturally occurring stimulants
>NGMI

It's looking good anon

>>4756664
fuckin great, those feet showing look derpy af, extend the rove to the floor or shorten it and make bigger boots

>>4758258

yeah now that you mention it, they do look a bit silly. I think I'll make the robe longer and have a toe poking out

>>4757371
Both of you are retarded, but soul=/=objetively good.

>>4757869
Ah bro, I miss Heidi :(

>>4757120
The poses are a little awkward but they have alot of energy and character looks cool dude

>>4758352
Cute, try harder with the hands

>>4758036
Guys, I just discovered some new tech. I used a straight edge for the first time. It’s so amazing. You can draw straight lines. I take back everything i said about shitty buildings.

I’m so excited, I think i will draw more buildings now

>>4758090
I’ve had 3 coffees today

>>4758494
Hands are a weakness. I'll keep trying though. Thanks anon

>>4756994
i dig it brah.

>>4758043
>Linktwinks

Linktwinks best Link and best twink all in one!

>>4758043
Are you a girl or a gay?

>>4753582

>>4758876

yum

head might be a little small, but damn that's some nice work man

>>4756922
my bad, I was gonna post blog but I didn't, here it is https://www.instagram.com/_xiet_/

>>4757600
good luck anon

>>4756965
thanks

>>4757592
i like this deeply, keep it up!

>>4754231
Thanks
>>4754516
It's a very simple custom brush with med-low flow and a ink blot shape as the brush texture. There's no pressure sensitivity whatsoever because it's on the Draw With Me app for Android and the painting tools are very limited, but I kind of like having to figure out how to use them effectively. I've got some sort of complex going on right now where I almost have to be using a stupidly limited toolset to make anything worthwhile. I have an app with a literal infinite canvas and nice brushes but the freedom is weirdly stifling.
>>4755063
She's not actually my character, I drew her for someone else. I don't know any of her social media accounts unfortunately.

>>4756677
Drawpile, based
>>4756922
I really like your rough little pixelly illustrations, I'll have ro take a page from your book
>>4757120
I gotta play Hylics sometime, the art and music from the trailers is kino. Your fanart is good, too.

>>4758584
Done

>>4755063
I have a couple really rough sketches of her but that's it.
>>4756696
blog is @moogdoodles on Insta but I haven't posted there in months, sorry.

I was very bussy with work but in learned a lot. I'll do colors when I have time

>>4759177
I want this thing to suck my pee pee so bad

>>4759171
It was pretty messy before the colours, much better now, it ended upvery easy to read, good job

>>4758985
The sword is sharing a parallel with the column, make the columns bigger or move them

>>4758442
cute

>>4759386
Wait a minute, that's my room

>>4759388
is that you, too?

>>4758043
how old r u

>>4759171
you're getting scary good at playing with perspective man, i'm jealous of your work ethic

>>4758939
I'm gay for Link!

>>4756056
good twink very nice

>>4758043
do you have/post your timelapse vids anywhere?

I got a flat color commission for this. Ended up being a lot harder than I thought, so there is some problems here, but the reactions were really good.

How do I avoid fucking up like this in the future? Never drawn characters eating before either, lots of practice.

>>4759171
Finally, an actual good picture from you. Very interesting picture and perspective, I like it even if it's impossible to focus on any individual part of the picture itself. Your eye goes all over the place, but I like that chaotic feel.

>>4758043
Do you use references for most of your art?

>>4759177
Requester here, top waifu material, 10/10.

>>4759177
I remember complimenting your aliens/merfolk in another thread now that I see your gallery. You have a rather distinctive style and nice character ideas, you should not squander this by making only doodles. You need to make a comic or a more committed project.

>>4759206
cute girl

>>4759171
This turned out fucking sweet dude.
Colors really brought it together.

>>4759171
incredible early 2000s energy

>>4759325

fattened em up a bit towards the middle, thanks

>>4759540
my main 2 issues:
- isometric perspective (very unnatractive for drawings)
- lack of line weight variety

>>4759171
i used to bash on your work a lot but you are genuinely starting to improve. i'm happy to see you putting in the effort and pushing past the block of doing a lot of the same thing. keep trying things you aren't comfortable with!

>>4759924

>>4753784

Thoughts?

Wip. Does her hair and face look recognizable?

>>4760254
>face
the ass is good and recognizable

>>4759950
You're right about my perspective, I am a complete novice at it desu which is very unfortunate. The line weight though is just my thing. All I ever do are thin lines like this.

>>4760248
Looks like an old character portrait for a mech game in the 90s or early 2000s. The very first thing I thought of when I saw that though was 'fur fighters'

>>4756727
..yeah... forgot to flip him

>>4760380
should have said the mirror is actually a window

>>4760254
The face isn't recognizable, the outfit only does. Like a cosplay

>>4760254 #
The face isn't recognizable, the outfit only does. Like a cosplay
also wtf is going on with her hand?

>>4760272
>>/beg/

>>4759540
The perspective is actually fine. There are many artists that do isometric and you did a pretty decent job at it!
the real issue is the absolute lack of gesture in their figures... you should practice gesture. They look very very rigid and souless.

A bit of advice would be to not just draw over your sketch layer, copy it, set the original at 50% and then just clean the lines/redraw on the new one.

>>4760383
nah im man enough to own up to my mistakes and do better next time

>>4760387
Whats with her hand

The more I advance the longer the road gets...

>>4760421
Yes, I can see what you're talking about with the stiffness. Practicing gestures for more complex stuff like this is a good idea desu, I should do that. Thank you friend

>>4759171
Grabbing a bunch of flat chested carrots rubber banded together

>>4759320
>>4759551
>>4759792
Thanks!

>>4759844
> 2000s energy
I still dont know what this means, and so I fear that I will always be trapped in this era

>>4760107
Ah perhaps you are bored anon, I look forward to your insatiable crits

>>4759400
> jealous of your work ethic
This is all I’ve ever wanted

>>4760996
I feel bad for you, cause I'm seeing more fetish fags commenting on your shit.

>>4753582
Anyone using this feature in clipstudio paint? I've been using this program for 2 months now and today is the first time i heard about this. Kinda neat.

Clowns are kind of cool

>>4761100
thumbs too thin and short

>>4761137
Lol I’m a dumbass how did I not notice that, I’ll practice some more

>>4761100
Your style reminds me a lot of Ayami Kojima. Are u a girl too? wanna be my gf?

>>4761182
She's underage, faggot

>>4761214
4chan is 18+ sweatie :)

>>4760254
One day I'll master cel-shading.

>>4760996
more flat chested carrots please.

>>4759171
thatss hot. insta?

Look anon! I'm your biggest fan!

>>4761245
Yeh... But she isn't. Newfag

>>4761270
the Promised Neverland face is a detriment to this piece... not sure if that was what you were going for or not

>>4761307
Not that anon but MAYBE she SHOULDN'T FUCKING BE HERE

>>4760996
>>4761276
Gotta be fair, you know with the twin tails v pony tail

>>4761024
Is that what is happening now? I was wondering why there was so much activity recently. Now I’m not sure if carrot girls are going to attract the wrong crowd...

>>4761281
I only have twitter https://twitter.com/tableguyart

I don't know if I'm going to keep this background or try something else, I'm not too good at doing indirect light shading yet, especially not in a tunnel.

>>4761365
This is starting to border on some DeviantArt tier body modification weirdness and I don't know if that's a good thing or not.

>>4757054

Another iteration.

Would appreciate some feedback on the anatomy here.

gonna ink this dude when I wake up

Not sure what else to add here. bg texture or drop shadow or something like that?

>>4761337
"Promised Neverland face" LMAO

>>4761669
Slick. Drawing anime always felt harder to me because it seems like mistakes stand out more. Your illustration reminds me I need to vary my line thickness more.

>>4761599
Of the two choices, I imagine going with a drop shadow. Of course you could always try both and if they don't jibe with each other, delete one of them.

>>4761594
Any specific meaning/symbolism behind it? Gonna add some shading/detail or just stick to inking the line work?

>>4761695
So cool, but hate the pidgin toe

>>4761182
I adore her art! thank you anon
>>4761214
>>4761245
>>4761307
>>4761350
I had my 18th birthday this month :D finally allowed to post

wip

face cute?
line weight good?

>>4761695
Nice to see you doing something different.

>>4762020
Neat

>>4761478
Best gunfu

>>4761270
>DAT BULDGE

Hot

>>4762030
flats

>>4762013

Stop posting lewd selfies in discord

I like boobs

>>4762120
and I finished

>>4760139

>>4761337
>Promised Neverland face
Darn. I was going for the exaggerated face like in the manga. Guess it didn't worked out.

>>4762258
what's up with the shadow under right eye

>>4762451
well it was supposed to be a squished cheek

>>4762427
If it didn't work then fix it you lazy cunt

>>4762402
The background is too bussy, erase some mountains or remove some of those "texture" lines. Also, there's no reason to make the plume fall off the canvas, make it a lil bit smaller. You're doing good just try to pay more attention to the composition, tangents and clearer silhouettes

>>4762258
Do some skin studies, looks too red, in a bad way

>>4761701
Shut up retard.

>>4762427
If you really can't tell the difference maybe you should work on basics first before any type of a render?

>>4762713
im gonna do that thanks
but out of respect to you here is an attempt at simpler rendering
I think this is better
I also fixed areas where lineart was too low opacity or messy

would this level of quality be acceptable?

>>4762427
Here u go niggy
Horikoshi draws mouths low and wide and you did the exact opposite, you scrunched the nose and mouth really high and made the mouth really tiny. You must have had a bit of a short circuit up in the noggin there.

>>4762833
Thanks. Yeah, I have a problem with faces and making them too small. Don't know why but I like them that way even if they look dumb, but I'll try to fix it the next time.

>>4761214
The simp

>>4762258
I don’t like the outer glow. I would maybe make the background lighter if you want her to stand out. Also, personal preference, I would add blush to the feet.

Fanart of Brian Bear's Jinx (the cute mute harlequin) and Garadrobe (the little dragon/goblin)

>>4761594
>>4761693
For now, I did the linework, and im going to scan that in before I go into shading and more detailed linework.

>>4762013
So there's a chance of being my art gf?

>>4762795
I wouldn't consider it more than coloured sketch. You don't do line art on a different layered do you? If no, use an eraser to model and carve out the lines. Also you're using greys on the face and it isn't working.
On different note, have you tried painting your lines? Even if a litle may help

>>4762869
Have you tried... loomis?

>>4762255
Too big I won't even try to open it.

>>4761365
This was supposed to be a sketch, but now I just have to finish it

>>4761494
Aye, yikes... much regret

>>4763140
thank you
with the lineart, i constantly change what I do cause when I do it on a separate layer I often (due to incompetence) lose forms and it becomes flat, but if I don't do it it becomes messy

>>4762402
>>4762712

How's this? I think this definitely pops the silhouettes in the fore a bit more. I helped out the hoof silhouette and lost a bunch of gray in the priest too

>also I'm getting drunk while working on the Temperance card
>doomed

>>4763230
Is she stabbing herself?

>>4761100
I did an art challenge for a server, theme was "strand"

>>4763548
Oh, now that is sick dude. Gorgeous hatching.

Woah, it's Crow

>>4763230
Wtf are the rabbits eating her why is she stabbing herself???
>>4762881
Cute!
>>4761695
Cool!
>>4761100
Also really cool! I'm jealous of those beautiful inks, your art is so good. Is that ballpoint?
>>4760520
Comfy

>>4759780
That actually means a lot to me, I really appreciate it.

>>4763548
Big brain head but nice hatching.

>>4763548
how much time do you typically spend on a piece?

Wip

I did another style study from FLCL. the drawing ended up pretty wonky, but I like how I drew the face. crossposting from /asg/
>>4763844
looks cool, very expressive gesture. I like the arm connections, they flow very naturally. the head looks maybe a little separated from the rest of the body, the front view seems to go against the rest of the pose. the hair is a little formless as well, but maybe that's just because it's a sketch
>>4763548
awesome drawing, reminds me of Angel's Egg. looks like it took a lot of time. the hand with the strings attached to it is a little doughy, the fingers don't feel like they quite fit right with the rest of the palm. it's hard to explain... it just doesn't feel as well defined as the hand in the foreground, it's very meaty. that's just a very small nit pick though. the atmosphere and everything else about the illustration works really well
>>4763348
I like how restrictive you are with the lines you use on the face, it's like you have exactly the lines you need and cut out all the chaff. I think the hair would benefit from the same scrutiny, there's a lot of stray lines that don't really add anything and make the texture all messy.
>>4763273
great gesture and pose, everything looks really well built and constructed. the hat especially, those weirdly shaped pirate-ish hats are confusing but it's done well here. I definitely think the illustration would have benefited from a few more skull studies, especially since it's such a focal point and stand out feature for the character. the lack of skill there is just a tad bit obvious lol

So tracing over an image while try to do construction over it.. Is just a meme or is actually useful for practice?.

>>4763947
Useful, but not in a vacuum. You have to apply what you've learned in a drawing of your own, otherwise it will be in one ear and out the other.

>>4763930
Thanks. I was trying to go for a slightly hunched posture with her neck craned forward and looking to her left a bit. As for the hair... yeah, that's definitely a weak point of mine.
FLCL is based, you're doing a good job.

>>4763973
Whoops, posted the wrong one.

>>4763953

I'm pretty bad at correcting my mistakes even if percieve

>>4763930
you're really good at nailing the style... amazing!

>>4763828
>>4762258
hote

>>4763548
love it!

wip

>>4764127
whoops forgot image...

>>4763360
I think you wrote 12 on that flag.

>>4764129
hard to draw the clothes and hair underwater desu... and no idea how feathers should even look; but I think it looks okay; the one on the left was a year ago...

>>4763930
Thanks but to be fair its not a normal skull, its a specific fantasy character non-realistic skull.

>>4764192

thank you so much

just finished this up, i think it turned out pretty alright. Anything you notice that I could do better the next time i draw something?

>>4764799
very cute! what would make things look more interesting imho is if one of the hands was closer to the viewer

>>4763360

>>4753582

>>4763360
>>4764920
digging these

>>4765056
glad to see you back!

>>4765067

>>4764920

not quite done with the devil yet

>>4763347
>>4763348
>>4764799

I like these.

>>4764799
c-cute

>>4765691
and done...

go my children >>4765807

>>4765817
hote

>>4764111
Look ma, no arms!
still cute

>>4763983
The thumbnail looks like it belongs in /salt/

>>4758090
>caffeine
>nicotine
>doesn't use cocaine and ephedra sinica natural stimulant highs.

>>4758043
great.. now do him as a trap pls

>>4759171
pls tell me copic colours used ._.~