/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Just finished this, tried to go as fast as I could and made it in about two hours or less. Doesn't look like my regular style, though.

hey lambrey, did you draw the "ram ranch" picture from a few years back?

>>4719312
poor akari

Very mild stuff but I dunno, thought I might share it here.

>>4719318
If its this one then yes he did

it's coomer trash, but enjoy.

>>4719538
did you edit it? in my memory, there was no underwear

This coomers are SO retarded, the dick is bigger than the guy, i know it's not meant to be realistic, but cmon, that's just stupid.

>>4719684
who cares as long as it's hot and highly appealing? realismfags stay mad

>>4719684
just say they casted a spell or used some special potion/scroll

>>4719686
well that's the thing, it's not hot and it's not appealing, unless you really like giant and deformed dicks.

>>4719286
Hey does anyone know this dude's blog? >>4718810

>>4719692
I just assumed it was a fetish thing. People not into it will say "this is retarded" and people who are will shell out money for commissions of it.

ass and tiddies

>>4719765

>>4719766

escape the white woman matrix

>>4719765
>>4719766
>>4719770
>cuck shit
into the trash

Want you all to know that not a single appealing piece has ever been posted. Just wanted to let you all know that, you all severely lack a sense of aesthetics and appeal.

>>4719770
not into NTR but you're pretty damn good

>>4719779
pyw

>>4719738
looks great

>>4719779
Oh yeah, then how do you explain THIS?

>>4719779
seething over the ntr

>Tfw becoming skilled enough that I can draw my own fap material
This is a kind of satisfaction non-arters will never get. Problem is I'm horny so I won't really finish anything but I guess it counts as practice?

>>4719538
>>4719318
>years back
wow he hasnt improved

>>4719779
Based, but there were occassionally more tasteful and beautiful coom art posted. It's just more often anons repressing their desire for dicks.

>>4719880
Not really, in general /ic/ has an issue with creating something that is appealing and finding someone who has that gift of appeal is a rare gem but if you're looking for something uninspired, cheap and tumblr-esque /ic/ excels in that avenue and is a dime a dozen.

>>4717964

>>4719538
No, there was two versions he posted. Your thinking of the one where he did a drawpile with Oekaki ham. Also to note they were both done last year round august

>>4719876
Have you?
Actually, don't bother. I already know the answer.

Working on this JSR fanart

>>4719765
>>4719766
>>4719770
Bonus round.

>>4719551
Learn some perspective. That vibrator is entering her sideways.

Just can’t do damsels and monsters unless there’s slime.

But I guess I can when a little boy is involved. I have issues.

>>4720378
rise up pedos

>>4719865
Loose sketch horny, finish the drawing after cumming your brains out.

livestreamin this rn picarto dot tv/fumophu

>>4719286
>>4713211
Blog?
I couldn't find it with "nel" alone

>>4720378
based thot loli

>>4720533

>>4720378
blog?

>>4720571
@nellipher

>>4721115
Gonna explode

>>4721118
P.S. lost interest in bbw n shiet month ago. Probably coom burnout.
What is nice about fetish porn, you can easily build up your audience.

>>4721123
I have 900 followers on dA but 13 on twitter lol.

hows my anatomy/ gesture

>>4721188
Better than mine, go on lad

>>4720074

>>4721261
RAPE, CRUSH, KILL, DESTROY!
MAIM, KILL, BURN!
MAIM, KILL, BURN!
MAIM, KILL, BURN!
FOR THE DARK GODS!

>>4720728
live again

>>4721283
You okay buddy?

>>4721363
this isnt an advertisement thread

>>4721457
k

>>4721503
brap?

>>4720146
>>4720304
Nope, you suck either way.

>>4721786
ah, i see you are seeking clout

>>4721844
??

>>4721593
Dang. I thought I was getting better. Back to loomis.

>>4721261
>>4720074
>>4719770
>>4719766
>>4719765
Sure is a shame since your aesthetic isn’t bad

>>4721503
rocket asshole

>>4719443
I like the shapes. Just get better lines imo

>>4721906
lots of people on /ic/ think if what you draw happens to coincide with a trend, then you must be doing it for easy twitter followers

>>4722202
imagine not taking every opportunity for gaining a social media following, growing your audience, and actually making a living from drawing

>>4722210
Some of us have something called integrity, something which nu-males and W*men lack and therefore are shameless attention whores that can't go without posting what time of the day they have a fucking bowel movement.

>>4721261

>>4722219

>>4722219
you might as well have turned this into a full comic, try that next time

>>4722216
nobody will care about your gay ass integrity when you're in a ditch in 10 years because you committed suicide from failure to monetize your shit

some of us out here are here to take it all. and you'll be left in the dust once we do start drawing purely shit we like with our following we decided to grow strategically

>>4722234
I sincerely doubt you're even good enough for the lowest of the low coomer bottom feeders, stop kidding yourself.

>>4722223
I’ll consider it, I find I get more burned out on comics. But I wasn’t as proficient when I tried it so maybe it’ll be easier now.

>>4722254
Did you try doing a storyboard/script first?

>>4722249
i make 50k a year on commissions alone suck my cock

>>4719795
Beat this

>>4719888
Some updates.

>>4722259
Nah that would be too smart lol. I always went right into drawing with no plan so that was a big problem. I think that’s why I’ve taken to this format cause I can work fast and think stuff up on the fly. Was never one for planning, unfortunately. For example, this “vacation” series started with that first drawing of her in the bikini but I thought of the scenario and it kind of took off in my brain on what to do next and it’s been really fun fleshing out this story organically. Maybe I’ll try the planning out phase before I jump into a comic next time and see how it pans out.

>>4722312
i realy fucking love this

>>4722312
>>4722370
samefag.

>>4722312
tits on right girl have really unappealing shapes, and left tit goes inside her armpit

>>4722312
Yeah those tits are weird and growing from clavicles

>>4722691
>>4722543
disagree, this is pretty realistic, you're just not used to seeing tits realistically drawn on an anime character

>>4722903
Tits do not go in armpit

>>4721118
finna bust

>>4721188
The balls in lower left are comically undersized but I think you're aware of that. Pretty nice gestures

>>4721786
love your shapes
>>4722505
The contrast between face and body is really off putting

some practice. Gonna start branching into lewds a bit. though mostly for personal draws.

>>4722222

Any advice? I’m trying to use very little reference and I have no idea what the fug I’m doing. I wanted the POV to be kind of from the wall she’s against

>>4723218
You can start by actually drawing the fucking wall.

Any tips for make the ass more?

wtf is wrong with her face?

>>4723375
i tried rendering but her face looks like ass and i cant tell what it is

>>4723375
Her left eye could be too far to the (her) left I think? Nothing otherwise really

>>4723390
her eyes are dead and cold

>>4723391
>>4723399
hows this? i moved it to (her) right and gave the eyes more shiny spots

>>4723020
Your art is kind of cool but i also hope you dont make it because why the fuck would you do nigger ntr shit when you could have made this into a nice wholesome hand-holding story. You really think people want to see that shit? or is it just some fucked up retarded cuck fetish that you have?

>>4723441
More lively for sure

>>4723020
Don't listen to anyone complaining. For all the whining people do about it, cuck shit is kind of niche in the western coom artist sphere. The top artists flirt with it at best but there's only one or two who really focus on interracial and it's not even cuck, just interracial.
Keep to a nice and you'll probably see moderate success eventually.

>>4722280
pyw

>>4722916
Hey, >>4722312 here, I actually observes both A and B when I go searching, although I distinctly remember observing mainly A on middle age women while I was in life drawing back in the day. I suspect people find A shape unappealing because they often appear on women with what's equivalent to sagging moobs.

>>4723218
it doest look like a wall pov it looks like a side pov. youde have to draw them frontally. also the face looks a bit wonky

Think I’m on a better track now
>>4723228
Thanks, I need powerful tips like this sometimes

>>4721786
Look at some legs and feet references. Nice appealing lines though. Keep it up.

>>4722543
>>4722691
>>4722916
Virgins spotted.

>>4723441
perspective looks fucked, i can't figure out your horizon

>>4723619
>i can't figure out your horizon
>A figure in the void of space
No shit.

>>4723456
It’s not the only genre I’m interested in, and who’s to say she can’t have a happy ending? Thanks anywho.
>>4723520
Thanks, this is actually the first time I’ve done anything like this.

>>4723656

>>4723622
You don't know how perspective works do you? It's not just for city scenery.

>>4723622
Bro

I know this is in a very rough sketch phase but how could I make it better? Anatomy is hard

>>4723676
get references

>>4719286
I don't mind the giant penis but why must his external oblique be so TINY, it's great aside from that

>>4723657
what is wrong with you

>>4723657
This shit would be hot if it wasn't cuck shit. Girls getting fucked silly is great.

>>4723657
>>4723656
good shit. tracking these, looking forward to the conclusion

What's with the BLACKED spam

>>4723619
>>4723441
Different guy here, trying to figure out what's making it look so weird. I think a big part of it is that her torso curves so far back yet you can clearly see the tops of her shoulders. That, and the lack of a background makes it hard to pinpoint where her limbs are ending up. Also, if you're gonna make her feet be shapeless blobs you may as well just give her socks or something.

>>4723599
>>4723599

thanks for the adivce. I might have put all of my eggs in one basket and studied hands for like 4 hours before being statisifed with what I had.

I struggle with feet so I guess I'll have to look at a lot of feet now, naturally

>>4719443
Save yourself, leave this place, your work is better than to be here. Don't ask where, I'm still looking for an answer.

>>4723622
Haha, /beg/ spotted.

>>4720013
I like the perspective but how is it sexual?

>>4723375

>>4723920
Wtf god
Any trick to learning good eyes?

bah im almost done here

>>4723939
i just draw a circle smaller than the head and i just add what i think, loomis head is retarded to follow

>>4723963
Dick is too high
Hands too small
Weird shoulder
I'd recommend to blur and darken the background so focus remains on the characters

>>4719538
Oh look its jjfrenchie 2.0

>>4724013
ty frendo

Not really a coom artist but I made a sketch for this renaissance themed nude that im thinking of turning into a painting. Found a nice ref and made slight pose adjustments. Lineart isn't really my thing so I might go with a more painterly approach. Might make a fun exercise

>>4723441
tried a fix for her face, a huge change was pivoting and warping her mouth so it follows face perspective (and rendering a smile a bit nicer but that's optionnal).
Change the eyes so they look less like globes.
Well the changes are I guess to my own taste but if it gives you some directions then good.

>>4724176
ewwww wtf???

>>4724812
Shut your hole roastie

>>4724814
based based based

>>4724814
Go away, disgusting tranny.

>>4724812
I don't know what I was thinking either.

>>4724176
Make sure you construct the body carefully, especially things like the ribcage/pelvis. The poor dude has no ribcage so his entire torso looks off, for instance.
>>4724814
Go back to /pol/

>>4723622
are you fucking serious

>>4723622
pls be bait

>>4724888
Redline it pls

>>4723731
kek ill just draw a blanket or something to cover it up. i really really hate feet

>>4723619
ill try adding something pretty basic it may help add context

>>4723920
m8 that just takes away the personality and cute vibe i gave her. and the eyes are too far down. thanks tho

>>4724798
yeah ig the mouth i drew wasnt in perspective thanks b

>>4722976
Is that a fucking grapefruit reference??
Nice work anyways anon. Fruit looks tasty

>>4724905
Someone else already provided guidance on construction so here's what may be helpful for appeal. The way you rendered her abs made her look like a mother of triplets. Some people may be into that but a look like pic related would be more widely attractive.

Sorry for no help on abs, I'm still learning how to render that myself.

>>4724995
Why is it so hard to just look up for a reference?

>>4725025
Are you asking why I didn't look up a reference for abs so I can poorly help this stranger on this tiddy drawing?

>>4724818
based on what?

>>4723657
>>4723702

>>4725162

>>4725163

>>4725165

>the cuck fetish guy draws more than 90% of /ic/

>>4725162
>>4725163
>>4725165

>>4723287
>for make the ass more
"More" as in?

>>4719286
i dont understand do you mean salt is this thread or is there a website?

>>4719312
what application and OS did you use to create this

>>4719286
Remember to say what they did right along with what they did wrong when you critique

>>4725175
Eh it’s just for this one story, many things can get me going. To be honest I could care less for cuck shit IRL, same goes for blacked. But there’s a lot of kinks I find better suited to hentai. That’s why I draw it.

>>4725165
>babe? you home?
oh shit senpai, godspeed

>>4725205
>drool
Oh hell yeah >:)

>>4722960
don't bother, gains goblin has literally never taken advice

>>4724176
Based and hotpilled

>>4725162
>>4725163
>>4725165
I don't mind the cuck shit but giving birth? Dude wtf

>>4719766
>>4720074
niggered

>>4719765
>>4719770
Blog? but I hope your blog isn't full of nigger shit.

>>4725609
https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/16041920

This is the only of its kind. I don’t update too often though cause I try to focus more on non-smut related things.

>>4725165
...hey buddy? You doing OK?

Insane cuckery going on here
>gasenwagen time

>>4719455
>filename
gave me a healthy little kek

>>4725609
post your work, genius. lets see how good you are

>>4725162
>>4725163
>>4725165
Based degenerate

wip
what do you think bros

>>4719986
kek

>>4725933
mud of Verdun

>>4725933

>>4725165
lol
loving the ganguro babies

>>4725933
From the thumnail it look as if she has the face of an old man.

>>4725162
what the fuck????

>>4725165
YEAH
GALO SENGEN

i hope i can finish this before my thumb will give in…

>>4725165
>even in a comic, the melanin charged father isn't present

>>4726288
kek

>>4725165
>>4726403

>>4726548
HEAR THE SONG OF SLAANESH

>>4726557
kek

>>4726450
Finally someone with some sense of good taste.

>>4726557
GO GO GO GO GO GO GO

>>4723533
that character is really fit so I think her boob is fine because she has large pectoral muscles.

>>4726800
oh no he's back

>>4727089
who is he?

>>4725165
You guys are kinda sensitive. It’s cool though.

Where can I get crits if I draw loli?
It's not allowed here for some reason.

>>4727132
Go to /b/, dumbass.

>>4725165
You guys are pretty sensitive, it’s all good though.

>>4727135
Do you think going to /b/ for critique is a good idea?

>>4727141
don't make them mistakenly fuck their -now fat and old- dad

>>4727141
he mad

>>4727142
Yes, mikufag can critique you there.

>>4721127
I'm happy for you but disgusted

>>4727152
Nah man, it’s all right. I expect to be greeted this way on here, just the way it goes.

>>4719286
what can i do to give this image more sex appeal/fix the lighting and shading?

>>4727141
What kind of person masturbates with the drawing of a girl giving birth?

>>4727183
Delete it

>>4727146
>fat old bastard incest
oh yes

>>4727183
Lower body is really small.
Why does the shadow start at the thighs? They protude forward, right? Look at the shadows in your reference.

>>4727183
Thinner waist to contrast with the wide hips.

>>4727203
i was trying to go for a spotlight effect with the spotlight being pointed down from on top of her. But forwards a little bit.
>>4727206
Yeah in hindsight i should have done that. When i was drawing it i originally thought having semirealistic hips would make the image sexier. That it would make goodra appear stacked 'n all and that would give goodra a "slampig" feel but it just looks weird now imo.

>>4727183
you're making this shit too human, stop
those arms aren't cute, that waist isn't cute, those breasts aren't cute, she lacks gesture in general making her antennas look like mickey mouse ears and her face too symmetric

I think I fixed most of the more awful rendering choices made in the last attempts.

>>4727274
in general this looks nice, lovely rendering, gesture, and linework, but there are some caveats I can see:
>her belly button sinks a bit too deep, looks like a deep crevice
>eyes are too close together, maybe too low as well
>clavicle appears to be a bit misshapen

>>4727266
besides gesture what could i do to make her breasts, waist, etc cuter. More appealing and less human?

>>4727314
the character design you're referencing makes heavy use of S-curves, spherical forms, and lots of flow. the design has very few hard stops, look at how her feet curve into her legs
to be frank it looks /beg/ level, if you want a short explanation then draw lots of spherical forms over gestures and connect them together (or blot down large curved forms and sculpt them into something smooth), for a very long explanation look into Vilppu

>>4727183
This is fucking hot

>>4727274
the belly looks as though she has that extra skin from being overweight and then losing the weight...

>>4727379
Not him.
Do you ever render bellies too? Pyw, I'm curious

>>4727346
>to be frank it looks /beg/ level
to clarify, the drawing looks /beg/ level, not the design

>>4727346
ight, will do. And you're right it is /beg/ tier the picture i drew, i haven't seriously drawn in like a year. And the year before that was the first year i got seriously into drawing. I'm going to redraw the image next year around this time and see how i do.

>>4727389
I've been focusing heavily on design when it comes to art moreso than actually drawing. Thats probably my mistake lol.

>>4727384
from time to time

>>4727274
this piece confuses me because while the rendering is good, it’s malformed and ugly

>>4727141

>>4727419
Don’t skip leg day

>>4727424

>>4727274
You're a haveThird Rate Render, With a Fourth Rate Anatomy!

>>4727401
...to clarify, by "the design" I meant the reference, but here's an example of using spherical forms to make you feel better

>>4727424
>>4727426
>Brown girl with blonde hair
boner n-no!

>>4727183
draw goo mommy

progress on frien's catboi

>>4727451
>>4727454
cute

>>4727451
the goo itself could use thinner lines since they're a bit eyecatching at that thickness (keep in mind you're already basically drawing two parallel lines very close together to represent each bit of goo, which makes them catch the eye even more), but otherwise well done

>>4727141
Redrew their faces

>>4724176

unironically based

>>4727496
So, where is the father?

Any good resources for drawing pussies? It's not something that would be covered in all these artbooks

This is the first coomer piece I've ever attempted, might make some more after this one. It's a wip and I'm hoping to color it something like Afrobull. Any tips, advice, critique welcome.

>>4727512
All I can think of is doxy when it comes to tutorials for stylized genitals

>>4727565
Yea I'm aware of Doxy's tutorials but I was hoping for resources that are more primary rather than potentially muddled by Doxy's shorthands

>>4727530
Boob size is too small to use black lines to show where fingers push into it. At such sizes you need to use subtler shading or the boobs look off.

>>4727302
thank you, ill heed this

>>4727787
Each nose is an egyptian pyramid

>>4727787
is this your mind on hogarth?

ok bros i redid most of it

>>4727426

>>4727931
what a twist
are you trying to illustrate american history or something

>>4727940
I am sure he does

>>4727959
niggerization of western world be like:

>>4719286
do i have it in me to draw coomer shit ?
this is the first time i've drawn something original coom

>>4727931
I am sure that he transmits his arousal while drawing this into "getting gud" fuel

>>4719770
>>4721261
>>4725162
>>4725163
>>4725165
You have some potential, remind me off BBCchan not in quality or style but in subject matter, personal biases to said subject matter aside if you ignore /ic/ I think you'll make it.

>>4727591
Ok thanks, that makes sense. I'll probably end up fixing that when I color it, while also making it more coomer like, with anime blush and drool

>>4727926

I tried something like in OP image is this better?

>>4727964
Indeed, drawing porn has helped me make some pretty big leaps over the years.
>>4727973
Thanks, I’ve actually been posting probably as long as BBC-Chan, I remember him from a while ago when he was coming up. Not trying to make it through NSFW means though, so I don’t advertise or monetize this stuff. This is purely for fun.

assuming you're not garbage, how do you actually grow as a porn artist?

feels like growing from the bottom is impossible

>>4728249

>>4728249
gitgud.

>>4728249
to prove you how easy is to be relevant in social media, i will start a new twitter account this month.

>>4725165

>>4728249
Pretty easy, there’s no difficulty from drawing coom. I make 4-6k a month from drawing porn. It only took me 2 years to reach that.

>>4728249
have a weird niche fetish and draw lots of porn of it

ok what about this bros

>>4727931

>>4728673

>>4728685
Perma-virgin here, always wondered do people actually like and get stimulated from having their nipples suckled on or is it just more of that unrealistic porn acting?

>>4728685
I wish I could muster up mental strength to draw as much as you do

>>4728249
Why would drawing porn of popular characters be any different from drawing them doing something cool?
>>4728708
lol

>>4728708
Depends on the girl I think. Some women with bigger breasts aren't stimulated much by nipple suckling.

>>4728708
No, it doesn't give any stimulation. It's only as nice as maybe kissing. Stop being addicted to porn and just draw.

>>4727787
for all the shit you get, your proportions and anatomy understanding have definitely improved. i think your faces need the same level of attention though because their cartoony look is starting to mismatch the bodies

>>4727425
Redline my legs, I always have issues with proportions there

First attempt at rendering.

Does it look appealing?

>>4728770
No. Don't shade with black or gray faggotti

>>4728770
No, because you are pillow shading which does not define form and shape at all. Do not be afraid to push your values and use the hard round brush. As a matter of fact stop using the airbrush all together and learn how to work with values using the hard round brush first. If you have trouble understanding values try rendering in black and white using a limited palette of halftones such as 10, 20, 30% grey etc. and only use the hard round brush to block in forms.

>>4728708
I was with a girl that went absolutely apeshit for it, but she had relatively small boobs. Probably depends.

>>4728708
I was with a girl that went pretty wild from it, but she had relatively small tits. Probably depends. Sex is also a very cerebral act, it’s not just all physical stimulation, if you’re in the right mindset all kinds of things can be stimulating.

>>4728808
>was
Story?

>>4723676
Get a reference, whether it be pics of real people or by using a 3D model app. Pose the figures how you wish then find the line of action for the figures. Draw it using the line of action. Lower opacity and redraw the line of action on a new layer but this time exaggerate it. Pinch or stretch or curve the line more the draw the figure again following the new line of action. By exaggerating the line of action it will prevent the figures from looking too stiff and lifeless.

>>4728770
skin colors are pretty nice
clothes shading is pretty meh
idk how important feet in this composition since i can't see the whole pic, but its anatomy is weak and also the other feet should be visible
don't be afraid to reference your favorite artists for colors and
post the whole picture
>>4728781
nigga what the fuck are you talking about
pic related is rendered with "pillow shading", with airbrush and no dark values, doesn't make it any less appealing
muh academic realism is not the only way to paint anime girls

>>4728713
Keep drawing! You’ll be able to draw just as much eventually. The trick is to get to the point that you’re proficient enough that you don’t get frustrated when things aren’t working out. It’s also very important to have fun when you draw, that might sound kinda dumb but people often forget that drawing should be a pretty joyful experience. If something isn’t jiving with you try and shift gears and do something silly and easy just to work that muscle. It’s all cumulative, so do whatever you can.

>>4728770
No, and the drawing looks traced. start over.

>>4728849
It's not traced I used construction but I still suck at it. Pic rel.

>>4728841
The difference between the two is that the one you posted understand how to transition from hard to soft without sacrificing form, once you understand how to refine form with light and shadow you are able to manipulate it and keep a fine balance between soft and hard edges depending on what type of form you are describing. You don't know shit.

>>4728842
>It’s also very important to have fun when you draw, that might sound kinda dumb but people often forget that drawing should be a pretty joyful experience.
You forgot to mention that when you're having fun and a joyful experience that also means you are confined to a comfort zone and not trying anything new therefore not learning. Stop having fun.

>>4728914
I agree that remaining in a comfortable place is probably not good, but having fun doesn’t necessarily equate to being in a comfort zone. You can have plenty of fun exploring new territory, as you should.

>>4728726
>Why does sex sell?

>>4727274
Pretty, but her eyes kill some of the effort you put in the rest of your picture. Other anons are going to bash me, but the problem is that you made a big-eyed anime girl with eyes that are very tiny on her face making it very awkward to look at, also, her right eye (on the left of the pic) looks squashed as fuck. Her mouth also got the same problem. For me, it seems like her face was a bit of an afterthought from your part.

Got a blog?

>>4729119
Why are you telling this to me retard, I'm not the anon saying "it seems like it's impossible to grow as porn artist"

>>4719692
>it's not appealing unless it appeals to you
gee no shit?

>>4729154
that's not what i said stupid cunt.

>>4729232
Yes it is.

>>4729123
https://twitter.com/itsukarine
facial feature placement was something i put too much time into, heres the first attempt which i felt was too big too

>>4729251
I think you are missing the point, this attempt wasn't too big, it was extremely angular and with a weird shape, terrible compared to the rest of your drawing it

>>4729150
Aw, shit. my bad anon

>>4729243
No it's not, learn to interpret what you're reading and stop doing retarded quotes.

>>4724877
Make me, nigger.

>>4723228
hard pass

>>4729280
Yes it is.

>>4728685

>>4729280
pyw

new thread
>>4729582
>>4729582
>>4729582

>>4729352
pyw

>>4729322
your stuff consistently gets me off, my friend. thanks for the cooms