/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4704018
I skipped a few days of drawing, but I'm getting back into it. Kinda struggling with this

An anon asked me about resources to learn rendering/color in the previous thread but the thread died when i was going to post. So here it is, i hope you see it
>Advanced Lighting with Sam Nielson
This should be a priority. He goes from basic physics fundamentals of light all the way to applying this knowledge to your actual work. I don't really like his art, but he knows his stuff. Everyone should watch this eventually
>Mastering Light and Form - Dorian Iten
It repeats a lot of things from Sam Nielson's course, but it focus more on how to model form with light.
>Color Basics (Lecture) By Mike Azevedo
This is on his gumroad. It focus on color temperature and he shows how he is thinking when he's picking colors during his process. It's pretty short and his work is amazing, so it's worth your time. He also made a short tutorial on color theory for Wacom. It's on youtube: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ErI7gIWzxlY [Embed]
>Marco Bucci youtube videos
If you watched all of the stuff listed above, you'll already know 90% of what he's saying here, but it's a nice recap, he explains a different tought process in the second video and these videos are masterfully presented. Worth the watch: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7fLV5ezO64w [Embed] and https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gwLQ0cDb4cE [Embed]
>timbougami/timlochner gumroad
His color theory is top notch, but he's not a teacher. His process is pretty organized and you can learn a thing or two about layer modes. I wish Alke had a gumroad too
>Digital Painting with Craig Mullins
Honestly i don't remember most of it, it was the first one i watched and i was too /beg/ to make use of his teachings, but i remember it was good. I'm planning to go though it again soon.

It's all on cgpeers but i'm not encouraging anyone to download anything from there.

>>4704069
And there's one personal thing about processes: always think about the components of light individually so you're never lost and you can easilly identify what went wrong when the piece starts to look bad.
I've seen Mike Azevedo, Sam Nielson and Tim Lochner doing it and it helps a lot
For them it usually goes like this:
>flats (thinking only about local color and local value in relation to the elements around each object)
>occlusion
>key light (block in major shadow shapes, always remembering the temperature of your light sources)
>fill light + bounce light
>merge everything and render it
Also don't be afraid to mess with adjustment layers like curves, color balance, etc.

>>4704146

>>4704027
I think I will go to bed and see if I can be bothered to finish one of these shitty sketches

>>4704149
I like it but it looks like you drew a flat chested character then stuck on two lumps. The character has small tits, but you're treating them like large ones and it comes out looking wrong

I’m sure you fine folks of /ic are tired of this picture. I’m finally putting it to rest, after integrating a lot of your advice on fixing it.

>>4704386
Tried to do a few changes on her face (while keeping your style, somewhat), as mentioned before, she kinda looked like a goblin and her face being squished didn't help to this, she seems too squishy, it kinda works for cartoons but in this style, in particular, it throws me off a bit so tried to keep her face a bit more firm. Also moved her eyes and mouth a bit, tried to clean up some of the planes and some of the lines. I would suggest you be more careful with lines in general, a woman's face never benefits from using too many heavy lines to describe the form, especially with black, so don't overuse it.
Still, your work is pretty soulful, keep it up anon.

>>4704228
Thanks, you were right. Here’s an update.

>>4704228
Good call, here’s an update.

>>4704018
is the Image fucking SCP 682 raping a guard?

>>4704656
This is just begging for some bush.

>>4704324
>feral horse fur shit
you're on thin ice...

>>4704766
Don't worry, we have the belt-fed euthanasia darts on standby in case it makes any moves

>>4704324
Based, normies mad

Can someone just ban me from this hellhole already so I can stop posting cringe and get a life

>>4704828
no, keep posting cleetus art

>>4704846
life hurts

>>4704849
what's troubling you fampai

>>4704018
I am actually way more hyped than I should be that someone picked my work for the OP image.

>>4704678
It's whatever you want it to be bb

>>4704542
Thanks. I especially see how you changed the lighting on the cheeks. It works well. I’ll keep that in mind going forward. But I’m kind of tired of that drawing at this point. On to other smut! With less slime! Although I really enjoyed drawing the slime monster. More than boobs.
>>4705084
>It's whatever you want it to be bb
Schroedinger’s porn. Oh, can that be a thing? Subtly lewd stuff. “Oh, it’s a man and his son flying a kite! But, hey, what’s that string tied to? Couldn’t be ...”

>>4704069
>>4704071
I'll always be impressed at how you can have useful information and right below that just raccoon girl flashing her butthole.
Thanks for the info, and screen caped for future use

>>4704069
What do you think about Gurney's book? is it useful after watching all things you mentioned?
>It's all on cgpeers but i'm not encouraging anyone to download anything from there.
why?

>>4704828
thats a joo

>>4704018
>>4705084
How long have you been drawing for? You draw good

I drew and colored my first boobies digitally today
I had trouble with the pose cause of the armpits and stuff, I still dunno how arms work so if someone could redline I'd love that.

>>4705493
I-IM GONNA COOOOOM

>>4705491
I have a really long way to go still but I appreciate you saying that. I started in August 2017.

>>4705504
thanks you too

>>4705505
Naisu, you have a year and a few months more than me but you're able to draw that good already, plus perspective.. I gotta grind harder. You definitely made more progress than many others here on this board faster

>>4705493
Her shoulders and pectorals should be blocking more of her clavicles. Take your shirt off and do the same pose in a mirror you'll see what I mean.

>>4705509
Ehhh, don't look too closely or you'll see all the errors lol especially with the perspective...

If I made good progress it was because I got a lot of good advice from people here.

Keep it up though we're all gonna make it.

>>4705511
>>4705493
Also I forgot to say that I love your rendering.

>>4705511
>>4705531
Yes, I see what you mean, thank you. Should I just redraw the shoulders?

>>4705556
Yeah probably would be a good idea. Personally I would at the very least sketch a redline on top of it so you can see the difference in your own work before committing to the rework. Not sure how done you are with this yet.

>>4705566
How does this look?

>>4705589
Waaay better

>>4705606
Alright sick, I'll get started on that. Thanks anon!

Some OC I finished today:m. Any advice on using Clip Studio Paint more effectively?

>>4705610
Anytime

>>4705485
Outstanding observation.

>>4705618
>*snap*

>>4705618
What issues are you having with the software? What would you like to improve in your workflow?
I think your drawing looks fine, I'd just change the skin color to be more vibrant and change the background color cause it's a little jarring

No slime this time! Still very wip though. Should I put my shit on hentai foundry?

>>4706391
MODS
MODS
MODS
MOOOOOOOOODS!

>>4706481
Calm down, retard. It’s covered up, so technically it ain’t loli porn. The guy is on thin ice.

>>4706485
Yeah, she may have a lewd expression and is only wearing dental floss that does little to cover her her nipples and labia... but her vagina's covered, so it's totally not porn!

>>4704228

>>4706681
i strive to do linework as crisp as yours

>>4706391

>>4706646
I don’t like it either, but i’m basing it off the rules.

>>4706889
Can you stop posting your lolishit in multiple threads? One will do, faggot. I don't want to see Loli porn in all the fucking threads, pedo.

>>4706889
two-nippled cutting board

>>4706903
> I don't want
Dilate.

>>4706889
blog?

>>4706889
Give blog too :^)

>>4706903
Just report content that is against the board rules.

>>4706889
>>4706391
Oh fuck yeah didn't know you do lolis too. Very very based.

Commission done, trying to survive through the pandemic

Let's a gooooooo

>>4707514
Please never draw again

>>4706763
thanks anon

>>4706719
What is your process like? I really love your shapes and body types

I’m having difficulty trying to draw this well in perspective. Any help would be appreciated

>>4707460
How I even supposed to coom on this?

This is ugly. Face is simply that of degenerate, and dick looks like pale woodlog from mid 90s jap hentai.

>>4707548
put her in the goddamn box in perspective

>>4707460
How much did you get pain for this? Do you get commissions often?

>>4707519
What was it?!

>>4707560
The disgusting degenerate futa comission shit up here.

>>4707556
Thanks

>>4707548
Push the shoulders back and have the neck obscured by the tits

>>4707460
>Quickfixed greta tunberg.

Lad, you have a graphic tablet, and here I am on my h**wei fixing your stuff.

>>4707591
Could have fixed the eyes too, but was feeling rather lazy for this.

>>4707587
Ty. I need to practice more extreme perspectives. I think this is a bit better already
>>4707460
How come you made the glands of the penis that color btw

>>4707598
He watched too much old obscure jap hentai, where cocks look like monochrome woodlogs.

>>4706889
I don’t like this

>>4707598
Slight tilt to the left of the upper torso n boob

>>4707601
report this pedo

>>4706460
Just post a little larger pictures if you go there. Cause it's barely over thumbnail in size.

>>4707591
Looks much better now, anon

>>4707606
seething.
Also doesn't violate board rules, she's clothed.

>>4704324
Are you the guy that posted a Centaur girl some time ago?

>>4704018

>>4704018
which coom artists draw the best pussy?
i need money

>>4707961
Probably, I only know one other person who consistently draws centaurs here.
>>4707545
Thanks, I can try to post the replay later. Tend to just keep redoing everything until it looks right

>>4707977
Unironically lolichads draw the best pussies

>>4708027
Unironically you are a retard if you think that's true and it instead doesn't entirely have to do with the artist's skill alone.

Progress so far

>>4708036
Unless you use that skill to draw hairy, 2d roast beef

>>4708027
Lolichads are always the best, so it comes to no surprise.

>>4708049
Her face needs a rework.
If it weren't for the shorts and her headband, I wouldn't have known that this is supposed to be Bea.

>>4704831
cute, gmi

Footfag here trying to make it look normie enough for non fetichists to not feel awkward. Did I succed?

>>4704656
nice, I like it
>>4704831
cute
>>4706681
cute
>>4707460
disgusting lmao, glad you got paid for it

>>4708076
try not pushing the perspective with the feet so hard; it has that characteristic foreshortening that screams "foot fetish". other than that it looks good. you're trying to appeal to both audiences still, correct?

>>4708076
desu just including well drawn feet makes people think you're into them

>>4708076
Learn your fundamentals if you want to trace without people noticing it.

>>4708267
I'm so confident in my understanding of fundamentals that I'm proud of tracing. It's fast as fuck

>>4708289
you cant be serious

>>4708289
all of your shit has this weird mix of flat "how2draw animu tutorial" details with nearly perfect anatomical structure from the models you trace. the crotch area has no depth, the face is perfectly facing forward and symetrical, eyes are animu symbols, hair has no depth, the tits are tacked on, etc.

stop tracing retard

>>4708289
Back to your containment, /asg/tard.

>>4708289
>I'm so confident in my understanding of fundamentals
>even with a fucking 3d model he's fuck

>>4708289
The absolute state of /ic/

wanna draw this character, anybody happen to know what her name is or what series/game she's from? i'm just trying to find more references.

>>4707964
There's barely any physical contact or energy put into it. You can see the people in the image are physically fucking, but there's no gesture, no emotion, they're barely touching each other.

>>4704018
WITNESS ME, BROTHERS!

>>4704656
Excellent

>>4706391
Do studies on Atamanman's pieces

Can I get some feedback on this sketch? I’m trying to draw a character being pulled by a leash but the proportions and gesture feel off. I also want to improve her expression. The concept is that this character (Lorelei from BL3) has been taken captive by a group of enemy soldiers.

>>4707964
I love your lines and I think the girl is pretty much fine, but there’s no energy from the guy. It looks like he’s just holding her. It’s ok for the girl to look a little passive (cause she’s just sitting there getting fucked) but the guy needs to look like he’s really thrusting. There’s also small details you can add to the girl like tiny motion lines to make her look more into it too.

>>4707961
>>4707986
hi i'm the other person who draws centaurs, were u talkin bout this one?

might redraw it, was about to post it on twitter but it felt a lot lower quality than what i can do now

>>4708707
is this don's tape head girl?
cute regardless~

>>4708707
Wtf, the thumbnail looks colored but the actual picture is not

>>4708834
Yes it is! Love her design and thought it would be fitting to turn an Imaishi study into fanart of her.

>>4708776
Some of your concepts are good but please...learn proper anatomy and faces. The world doesn't have enough bara top Link on Sidon

>>4708707
I think I saw this on twitter, you drew it for don right?

>>4708447
>>4708433
>>4708415
>>4708402
I could do shit like this when I was like 4 months into painting. It's boring as shit. See ya when I'm making big bucks tracing animu waifus kek

Forgot there was a horn there when making this pose

>>4708949
Yes, but I still haven't posted it yet.

>>4708959
that's quite bad looking. it is unfinished, the proportions are off, the values are wrong and there is no texture or interesting brushstrokes
sorry to see you have developed such an ego

>>4708289
That doll doesn't have normal human proportions, or you did something fucky with the FOV/lens. It reads like she has lower legs that are longer than her entire upper body. Her waist is not bending forward when it should, you forgot to stretch her shoulders forward when she does on the doll (and it makes sense in this position).

>BEHOLD THE POWER OF TRACING

Not impressed.

>>4708529
>>4708697
thanks for the advice anons

>>4709369
Ew why is her pussy on the front of the pubic bone instead of underneath it? Jesus Christ man please for the love of all things lewd learn where it goes. Learn about the pussy box. It's so disgusting she has a belly pussy like a fish.

>>4708289
See, that's your problem. You don't understand the fundamentals at all. This is why your 3d model looks like shit to begin with. You can't set the camera and perspective properly, and the end result is shit, that looks like it's out of proportion instead of having an extreme perspective.
You can't trace. You are shit at it.

>>4708959
And it also turns out you have dunning kruger syndrome lol.

photobashed porn?

>>4709369
Jesus Christ

wip, actually livestreaming this rn if anyone wants to hang out
twitch.tv/fumophu11

>>4708959
you know, i had the intention to help you and find the true meaning of traicing but you are just delusional.

Did you really think that people will pay for these pinups? lmao no, at most you will end drawing the most degenerate subjects to get around 30 bucks per commission. Why? Because anime waifus pinups have: good anatomy, persistent style or good render, sometimes a combination of 2 or 3 of these. But what you have my boi? just your ego, because your art will be lose in the ocean of shitty artists that are forced to sell drawings of girls shitting with 20 inches horse cocks covered in smegma.

>>4709947
Kyle does it and look at him, with his plastic looking shit.

>>4709955
im kyle you moron.

>>4708289
YIKES sweaty

Drawing pussy is literally impossible ARGGHHH at least I'm not this guy though >>4709369

>>4708529
>>4708697
is this any better?

>>4708059
Better

i feel like i'm gonna vom so is break time
https://youtu.be/FkjvFNNwxFE

>>4709369
gender reassignment surgery be like

>>4709394
>>4709749
>>4709947
OMG look at all that cope. Cringe

Accept it kids, I'm better than any of you. And drawing is only one of the many, many, many skills I'm really fucking good at. You're talking to someone who read "Thinking In Java" in one week at 13 yo. Of course I'm a narcissist, everyone has praised my skills since forever and I can back them all up

Post your work and let me laugh at how garbage y'all are

Cringe ^

>>4710467
You also need to trace the face because what you've drawn looks really horrific.

oh no... it's beyond saving...

>>4708059
Better?

>>4707977
Best in what way? You can always go with John K. Pe-ta for a start and then branch off his work.

>>4708059
Is this better?

>>4708059
Is this better?

>>4710709
I-IM GONNA MAKE COOOOOMY

Is it just me or sound effects just don't work in non-japanese pieces. They are silly instead of hot.

>>4710467
You aren't good at tracing. Here's my latest artwork.

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

>>4710883
Do you use 3D models when making art?

>>4710883
Nice. But turning the head a little with girl looking at the viewer from the corner of her eye could have added some oomph.

>>4710883
bbc chan how the heck do I get good

>>4710883
Bretty nice, mind sharing techniques?

>>4710883
face is way too symmetrical, i like this piece but maybe just give her a smirk or something to break up how monotonous her face is. Even just making her look in a different direction would help.

>>4710899
Never.
>>4710907
Just draw.
>>4710905
>>4710924
I dunno. I really like the calm vibes this creates. I draw too many faces for an opinonable thing like this to bother me.
I prefer to fix objective mistakes. Like in this one for instance, I think her right shoulder should be lower and her left upper arm a bit longer. I don't think the face is an issue at all.

>>4710961
Do you use reference much or mostly imagination? I have difficulty finding references for the poses I want to do.

>>4710961
opinionated*

What kind of critique is "face is way too symmetrical"?

>>4710317
Nice! The motion lines are a good addition, and I like how you changed the guy’s posture (you could probably push his gesture line even further, but that’s your call). I also like the lines you put around the girl’s face to draw more attention to her expression. Good job anon!

>>4710965
I'd say I use references about 10% of the time. Most of the time I don't get pose references, or my clients send me pose refs just as an idea. In those cases I always do everything from memory. Sometimes they want me to be very specific, and in those cases I follow the references more. And in some very rare cases I just prefer to use a pose ref as kind of a study.

All this said, using references is a smart thing to do. But you must be able to use them in a way where you don't over reference your artwork and you are still able to give it your own note. I'm very bad at this and my referenced stuff always turns out kinda boring.

>>4710961
>Like in this one for instance, I think her right shoulder should be lower and her left upper arm a bit longer. I don't think the face is an issue at all.
You put a pillow and a comparatively soft bed around the girl. So you can get away with a lot especially with arm at this angle and partially obscured. Raising the shoulder even more and moving a pillow just a little forward should also be viable.

>>4710968
It's the ramblings of a /beg/tard that can't find anything wrong but still feels the need to nitpick. Ignore him

>>4710983
Thanks man. I appreciate the detailed response.

>>4710467
here is my work unironically

>>4710994
fix le eyes

live again rn
picarto.tv/fumophu

>>4710883
interesting triskelion you've got here

>>4711009
nearly phimosis

>>4711009
yikes

>>4711017
I think you mean paraphimosis, but thats not what phimosis or paraphimosis looks like. Thats just a comically small glans

>>4710467
I hope this is a joke anon

>>4711042
When post like these are possible, he’s probably not.

>>4710968
>>4710986
Not that anon

Full perfect symmetrical front facing angle is a big nono if you want your shit to not look robotic.

She has that insanely intricate pose but her face is just sitting in literal 2D on her body, it's very weird and it jumps at me immediately when i look at the piece.

Giving her an asymmetric expression is a quick way to fix this, but i would change the angle of the face.

>>4711052
I dunno bro, it looks good to me. It’s probably the best face itt, while op’s is second best.

>>4711050
This image is depressing

>>4711021
i made it bigger

>>4711239
Looks nice! I'm only beg but Ive spent a lot of time looking at dicks. (Purely research purposes)

I'm definitely glad that semi-retracted foreskins are becoming more and more frequently drawn. They're very erotic! If I can make a comment, I think the ridge/corona of the glans would be visible even under the foreskin here.

>>4711272
Thank you!

>>4710883
bbc how do i lineart like you??

>>4711307
Not BBC here, but watching him stream it appears that aside from grinding, theres a lot of trial and error to get just the right line.

Which base hair shadow is better?

>>4711333
I like right better.

>>4711307
Set your stab to 15 and ctrl+z a lot

>>4711307
Years of grinding.
However I don't think your style really needs a solid lineart. This is some really neat painterly stuff you have going on.

>>4711318
I would say it's a regular amount of trial and error.

>>4711401
Stabilizers suck cuase they make your brushes sluggish. Never used one.

>>4710883
The weird pose ruins the entire composition, maybe if you add another element, just to not have a huge blank space on the bottom.

>>4710883
Was drawing human swastika a part of your plan?

>>4711451
>Stabilizers suck cuase they make your brushes sluggish.
I meant the stabilization setting/slider. I use Clip Studio and that doesn't happen.

>>4711964
I think that setting is what he's referring to. You're talking about the thing that smooths out your lines/makes them less jagged right? For experienced artists who don't need that automatic smoothing it just feels annoying. The sluggishness happens because the program needs extra time to compute how to streamline/simplify the line you're drawing. You'll notice the slowness if you max out the stabilizer setting and try drawing really fast, sweeping lines.

>>4704656
Put the bush back, lad

>>4711239
That's adorable. Good work, Anon.

>>4711729
I like what's going on with the thighs. Everything else is kind of unappealing though.

going for the bible black anime's coloring style.

>>4704656
blog?

>>4711628
I don't think the pose really -ruins- the artwork, but I agree about the empty space.
>>4711964
>>4711984
What this anon said.

>>4711628
I don't think the pose really -ruins- the composition, but I agree to an extent. Especially about the empty space. The problem was more about the lack of time to refine the background more.
>>4711964
>>4711984
What this anon said.

>>4710883
How much time goes for
- idea
- sketch
- line art
- flat color
- shading
- what else?

>>4712590
99% of the time I draw stuff for other people (patrons/clients). Times vary dependin on how complex the request is.
- idea is usually provided by client. If they give me free reign it's just a matter fo coming up with an interestin pose that suits the character(s), so that time is usually added to the sketch time, cause I tend to build ideas up while I shape the forms. In this particular artwork, they asked me to make a stocking, high heels and feet centric artwork, but gave me free reign on the pose.

- sketch ~ 1 hour (I tend to make my sketches pretty clean)
- line art ~ 30 min
- flat color ~ 30-40 min
- shading/rendering ~ 2 hours

I added the approximate times I spent on this one particular artwork.
I don't spend the same amount of time on every artwork, but I do timed slots where the limit is about 3-4 hours (most of the time I go overboard tho). If somebody wants a more complex or detailed and polished artwork, I add another time slot.

>>4712590
99% of the time I draw stuff for other people (patrons/clients). Times vary dependin on how complex the request is.
- idea is usually provided by client. If they give me free reign it's just a matter fo coming up with an interestin pose that suits the character(s), so that time is usually added to the sketch time, cause I tend to build ideas up while I shape the forms. In this particular artwork, they asked me to make a stocking, high heels and feet centric artwork, but gave me free reign on the pose.

- sketch ~ 1 hour (I tend to make my sketches pretty clean)
- line art ~ 30 min
- flat color ~ 30-40 min
- shading/rendering ~ 2 hours

I added the approximate times I spent on this one particular artwork.
I don't spend the same amount of time on every artwork, but when it comes to commissions (which is the case here) I do timed slots where the limit is about 3-4 hours (most of the time I go overboard tho). If somebody wants a more complex or detailed and polished artwork, I add another time slot.

Cute?

>>4712612
appreciate the answer
cheers and good luck

would love to see more ass / anal related stuff in your works

>>4712366
That dialogue is awful man you really need to work on that. Nobody fucking talks like that.

>>4712612
I know you're a professional with much more mileage than me but holy fuck it took me over 4 hours just to do my most recent com sketch. I can't believe you line in 30 minutes. FUUUUCK

I'm guessing just mileage and knowing what you're doing cuts the time down a lot.

im not very happy with it

done?

>>4712612
how the fuck do you render in 2 hours, it takes me like 15

>>4713210
RISE UP PEDOS

>>4712679
With a nose like that?

>>4713234
Tortoise one, to be precise

>>4713211
FUCKIN DICK SCHNORCHEL

>>4713210
man, you went full rendering on her face
the way you lit the right half makes it look like its bent inward

>>4713210
One thing about you niggers is that you over render thinking that by doing so you will have a better product by adding more but that is not the case as you can see you have a simplified face with many planes for the figure and even the face. Less is more, if you want to achieve a pleasant and smooth transition from a realistic figure slapped on together with an amawu face you have to simplify the figure as a whole.

>>4713210
Stick to your more flat coloring.

>>4713277
What this anon said.

>>4713317
>>4713277
>>4713268
thanks ill do better

>>4711729
Your artwork is so unappealing

>>4712695
What do you expect from a fucking virgin?

>>4712366
Buff guy getting fucked by a twink is probably my favorite content you've drawn so far. Link's arms just look too big for his body size. Like always you overdo the muscle definition

>>4710436
hot

>>4711348
Since only one anon weighed in on it, this should be the winner, but I'm still torn.
I really like white haired anime girls and I like how the left shows off her white hair more. But I know the right will probably be more visually appealing to more people.
Damn it I hope after slogging my way through finishing more things I can just fucking know what the right choice is in these situations.

>>4711348
Also thank you for trying to help me decide, anon. Forgot to say that in my last post.

take the oekakipill man

>>4713515
thanks for pointing that out, made a few tweaks to link's arm and hand size to make it less ridiculous, i blame it being 3 in the morning when i was looking at it

>>4713787
The thing is, the shading on her face on the left doesn't make much sense. Her hair wouldn't cast that large of a shadow.

>>4713854
I want to but have no confidence

>>4707601
ok

>>4713934
The shadow on her face wouldn't just be from her hair though it's from the light only hitting the top of her head and not her face. Maybe I'd need to tweak it a bit to make sure it reads that way but either way it could be made to make sense. Both right now are just a block in that I was going to refine anyway once I picked which to go with.

Why does lineart take so goddamn long? Am I doing something wrong? It takes at least 3 times whatever the sketch took me.

>>4714154
if you're too autistic try just cleaning and reinforcing the sketch instead of inking lines on a separate layer see if youd like that better

>>4713897
You should consider doing furry, the whale creature looks far better in your style than the human one.

i really hate feet so idk how to draw them. does something else feel off?

1/2

sketch WIP to be lined. crit appreciated

>>4714402
2/2 alt version.

I like doing stupid dialogue exchanges like this. Not sure if the commissioner will let me keep it as is lol

>>4714402
wtf is going on there?

>>4714405
I like when dialogue is added too. It gives it a little more personality.

>>4714260
i rendered it. pls critique

>>4714639
Obviously you're still working on the rendering but it's looking solid so far.

Watch out for those highlights on the legs, you want to try and control your range of values.

A couple of issues regarding your anatomy with the hips, hands and feet. Planning your composition can help you avoid this on future. Also maybe go over those areas of anatomy.

All and all you have talent anon and keep at it.

Feel free to crit my stuff, lol huge learning curve for me here.

Thoughts?

>>4715307
>spend a lifetime learning how to draw
>just to draw spreading wet loli cunny
teach me senpai, o based one

If I don’t draw women being menaced by slime it’s women being dominated by boys. Is that any better?!

testing workflow/style

does this look good bros?

>>4715557
Jesus Proko go back to drawing kangaroos.

>>4715557
Focus a bit more on perspective. The placement of those nipples kinda shows, that you don't really know how to do convincing perspective.

>>4711729
Not sure about those hard vertical highlights on the jaw, maybe soften them up?
Boob squish is good although seems the shoulders, boobs, and centerline of torso aren't lining up right. It looks like her lower torso is twisting but the boobs and shoulders don't read that way.
Neck seems very wide and the reflected lighting seems off. Her neck looks tensed as hell.
I like the rendering on the hands and arms although the shape of her left forearm looks a little off.
Hips seem very short, not sure if it is the lighting. I want to be crushed by those thighs.
Dem feet doe.

>>4707598
Thanks for helping me a bit with this frens
Tried my best finishing it

hey salt, /beg/ here. I showed the linework to a friend and he pogged, but after I did the colors, he said that it was somehow worse. Anyone got amy idea what he means and how I could avoid that? Thank you.

>>4715905
>he pogged
...what?
Anyways, it looks worse because you couldn't commit to a single light source, shadows are spread out seemingly randomly.

>>4715905
>he pogged

>>4715905
Please be a shitpost

>>4715905
the shading on the skin looks really splotchy and too complicated to fit with the cartoony lineart, try simplifying it and make it about big general shapes instead of trying to define each little muscle

>>4715305
if the "plap plap plap" is supposed to represent her footsteps, it sounds a little too "wet" to be coming from heels on a rigid floor. try something lile "tap" or "clop" instead (though I get why you would want to avoid "clop"...)

>>4715933
>>4715947
>>4716158
I'm the friend in question. I apologize for my friend's extreme autism.

>>4716367
who the fuck are you and who asked

>>4715831
that vagina is vile

>>4713317
>>4713277
>>4713268
pulled this shit in like 30 mins since im on lunch break; i realize the overrendering bit and also mightve rendered incorrectlly on the face especially, but not when it comes to the "less is more" approach mentioned in these critiques, i dont know how to proceed, any examples? am i supposed to be using less blue? more hard edges?

>>4716361
I'm gonna change that, thanks

>>4706681
Your art seems similiar to this ytber who had a artist do his thumbnails who also does the orange thing and the cross

>>4709943
You're understanding of appeal is very good. Just a bit more practice on faces and you'll be amazing

Something I drew the other day...

>>4716899
Your understanding of appeal is not very good.

Still drawing slime. Sorry.

>>4710436
That fat cock looks fucking delicious.

>>4716992
>nigger
ewwww

>>4717016
>racist
ewwwww

>>4716992
cute

Does this count?

>>4717168

>>4710436
this style of drawing retracted foreskins is strange to me, its like the penis is degloved

>>4717250
probably just a result of me drawing my take of memories of other people's stylistic choices, drawing from imagination based on like nth levels of removal from the actual subjects can sometimes lose the plot a bit, every once in a while gotta refresh my mind with actual references again

>>4716473
blog? what resources did you use to study?

>>4715307
please make a blog

>>4717931
Get better taste

>>4713210
oh god, I wanted to do nofap

>>4704069
>An anon asked me about resources to learn rendering/color in the previous thread
Dude I think that was me. I’ll watch your vids, thanks. Critique this garbage please, tell me how to get to sakimachan level

>>4712158
definitely very appealing, the arms might be too stiff though. loosen up the curve of the elbow

how much would this kinda thing go for as a commission? also is it appealing? is it fappable?

>>4716899
Are you by chance a roastie with no taste

>>4717424
itsukarine

i looked at a picture of a midriff or two, but the rest was imagination
i dont know what the fuck im doing

>>4706719
>Size difference with a cute twink involved
uh yeah do you have a twitter

>>4718034
Wait, haven't i seen this before?

>>4718358
i posted it in the commission thread but got ignored :,(

>>4718418
$40

>>4718422
>3 characters colored for 40 bucks
Wtf lol?

why the fuck did this guy delete his twitter https://twitter.com/lambrey3

>>4717931
https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/16041920

>>4718484
ive been selling this for 20 lol

>>4710883
Looks good, only thing off i really notice is her palms are a bit long.

>>4718506
Sad he’s always struggling with mental health. I hope he’s ok

Don't you hate it when you can't find reference for a pose.

>>4717368
Sorry I should have phrased things better. Wasn't trying to sound harsh. It's a nice piece , much better than a lot of art I see on here. And it's much much better than anything I can produce. I have a fixation/fetish for foreskin and I spend an inordinate amount of time looking at pictures of it. I wrote "style" because you're not the only artist who draws it that way. The manner in which slack prepuce/foreskin bunches up is complicated to draw.

>>4718810
then use a 3d model

>>4717052
sorry i don't like chimp porn.

>>4718034
Like $10-20

>>4718613
Well that fuckin sucks, I had no idea
>>4718810
I would honestly just get a mirror and a basket and take a picture of myself. Also blog?

>>4718506
...because it's lambrey4, not lambrey3

>>4718903
why would you change your name like that lmfao

>>4718034
40$

Sketchy line art, flat colors, but 3 characters. Many people charge 50% more per additional character, if it was just the racoon girl with that quality it would be around 20$, 50% of 20 is 10, then a third character for another 10.

>>4717957
Sakimichan has process videos you can learn from on their patreon.

>>4719218
Ya but I’m fucking retarded and also working too much to get gud... :(

>>4719265
What do you think is better, us to randomly give you 1 or 2 tips a month that help you emulate what we think Sakimichan is doing or to just go straight to Sakimichan to learn what they're doing?

>>4718909
i think he got banned from all the shotaposting

New thread:
>>4719286
>>4719286
>>4719286

>>4719274
No man you’re right, I blame only myself.

>>4715905
>he pogged
kek