/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

I love the op image so much

Finished my commission, back to stoodying

>>4686546
I almost picked your WIP for the OP, maybe for next thread since this looks so awesome - nice job

>>4686828
HOTE

>>4686828

>>4686535
Dude got like 35k likes on this image. Congrats

>>4686535
wait.... that artist posts here?

Got really inspired by Hiroshi Nagai recently and butts too

>>4686873
Hot take:
Butts are for touching and looking only, tasting and smelling are gross

>>4686882
/beg/

>>4686882
I really like the plastic feel of your rendering. The face is kind of wierd and its badly positioned, making the neck too thick. Keep on working and dont get discouraged by idiots shitposting

>>4686535
I don’t know fuck about how to color my stuff. Anyone have tips/books that can help?

>>4686904
/retard/

>>4686977
I like the screentones in this adds to the texture. Looks very nice

>>4686898
I'm not going to stick my tongue in a butthole you retard.

>>4686546
how much did you get paid for this?

>>4687027
I will ;)

>>4687027
fag

>>4687027
You shouldn’t, it’s a good way to catch diseases, and smelling a butt is unpleasant at best and puke inducing at worst.

>>4687041
but my hentai says otherwise

>>4687051
Botw Zelda would never have lusty sex with link, just the sweetest of love in missionary position, so it’s not a good source

>>4687026
thanks, I feel like I should experiment more with textures. my usual approach is too sterile and digital-looking.

>>4687210

>>4687210
Giff blog acid bro

>>4686585
Thank you anon! I’m glad the current one was picked though :>
>>4687034
I charged £80

>>4686911
no u

>>4687438
this is amazing how did you achieve this look

>>4687438
kawaii

>>4687587
photoshop -> add noise

cute or cringe?

>>4687667
Dress is dope, everything else is cringe

>>4687304
should have been double anon :(

>>4686977
Did he ever surpass you, orange?

>>4687304
160$ at best. That work looks great.

back from a 7 month break

I have a subconscious bias for drawing butterflies. I don’t know why. I’ve already drawn a picture exactly like this too.

>>4680549
>>4685896
> could you post which markers u used?
Uh from memory
Green Metal: BG72, Either YG41, BG11 or YG11
Reds: RV09, RV21
Pipe Gray: V91, V95
Metal Holes Gray: T1, T2, T4
Metal Skin: B93, B41, B60, B23 (couldn’t decide)
Inside Blue; B24, B01
Bottom Gun Overlay: V12, V15
Shaders: B93, V15

>>4687714
don't take more breaks lol

>>4687714
See you in 7 months

>>4686983
Paint from life.
Learn about hue shift, perception of light. In general, if your light is cold (natural light but not in bright sun), your highlights are cold, then you have color of the object, then colder halftones and warmer shade. Simply put, light will be cold, shade will be warm. I'm bright sun, you can notice the shadows have often tint of blue, and lighted area will be warm. Same happens with artificial light, which is most often yellowish.

>>4687714
Colours are pleasant, but everything lacks structure. Back to the vilppu

>>4687714
Looks great anon, blog?

Sketch

So I was working on random sketching for ideas, Gumball on CN. Drew cute Anais brought in sketch to play with digital paints, enjoying therapeutic art, when sudden terror strikes me.
I'm not a furry, like at all (huge yuck), but really good at drawing them for whatever reason. Probably because of basic anatomy study. Do I embrace my talent or hide it in shame?

>>4688173
post blog, now.

>>4688163
gud line quality, add some punchy, flat colors and subtle textures and turn it into redbubble merch.

>>4688163
Blo? This is so cute and pleasant to look at, really aesthetic.

>>4688345
Blog*

>>4687227
>>4687229
@ohheythatfisher for sfw
@lambrey4 nsfw

>>4686535
Congrats on the 40k likes man

>>4686828
i colored her

>>4688636
butte

>>4688636
Goddamn, you're making me feel like a big creep. Good drawing though

>>4686878
>>4688490
Gee, thanks! It was quite surprising since i only had 400 followers.

>>4688691
You have only 400 followers with art like yours? ....how

>>4688708
Not quite, I have an instagram account with around 7000... but I'm starting to detest instagram, and it takes forever to grow there. I'm trying to make Twitter my main.

>>4688636
really good

>>4688716
Yea instagram is really bad to gain a following compared to twitter. Since you gotten more than 30k likes on that art you posted on twitter. You’ll definitely surpass 7k soon.

>>4688656
>>4688717
Thank you :,)

>>4686828
>>4688636
Blog?

>>4688636
>>4686828
>Remember all GB3 related content such as lolicon, shotacon, furry pornography, furry and bestiality are banned on ALL boards, including red boards, except /b and /trash.

>>4688755
Shes legal tho

>>4688755
here we go again

>>4688755
That post is on thin ice, only showing a bare butt and she’s not even doing a suggestive pose.

>>4688755
Isnt lolicon unacceptable only when the body is clearly prepubescent? Marnie doesnt have a defined age in canon anyway

Talent.

>>4688787
She is too old no matter how you look at her.

>>4688463
cleaner looking stuff lately

>>4688463
oh you have 2 now?

cool stuff!

>>4688181
don't have one. hate social media, can't find decent outlet for good artistic peer critique, likes and trolls are not a good measure to improve by

thoughts?

>>4688998
whoops too big

>>4688998
>>4689000
Yea, go to /beg/

>>4689024
ok

I wish I had a mentor/someone to give me homework and or a good grasp on what to improve and look at. Obviously my shit is fucked /beg/ tier, but if anyone has a PDF of drawing practices and a regiment I'd be happy to know of it.

>>4689043
well for starters, tits connect to the armpit, so that tit ontop of the other one needs to be moved waayy more to the right

>>4688755
>only brings up that rule when responding to loli but never sexualized furshit

>>4689086
thanks.

>>4689098
Furshit never gets posted here. Even if it does it gets removed. The furfags are more reasonable than you lolifaggots.

>>4689112
>The furfags are more reasonable than [HEADCANON]
That photo shows no penetration, genitals, etc.
Besides, the rules are gay.

>>4689112
fur shit literally got posted ITT. Put some more effort if you want to piss people off with epic trolls my guy, otherwise you just look retarded.

>>4689130
>besides the rules are gay
Don’t sperg when your shit gets removed.

>>4689152
Where? Show proof

>>4689158
here >>4688463
here >>4688125
here >>4688173
here >>4687667

>>4689180
Please tell me your trolling. Because there’s no way you’re this brain dead. How the fuck is any of this shit porn? Read the bloody rules you dumb fuck.

>>4689189
>furry pornography, furry and bestiality are banned on ALL boards,
I wonder, why are furry porn and furry listed separately?

>>4689195

>>4689206
huh, nevermind then. I thought anon was quoting rather than just making shit up

>>4689189
how is original post pornography either. Or loli. Because Marnie isnt a loli

>>4689241
I’m only responding to this >>4689098
retard. I don’t think marie counts as a loli.

face practice. Thoughts?

>>4688755
Is it only when it includes EXPLICIT SEXUAL CONTENT that art apparently falls into one of those categories, or just when you personally disapprove? Because most of the posts are tame character pieces. Go back to church. Or look for your coom and titties elsewhere kid.

I always get good advice, but when I see all the work I need to do in order to fix my drawing I just don`t have the patience to backwards.

Fuck me.

>>4689313
You don't have to go back and complete rework a drawing. When you get critique, you should apply it/keep it in mind for the next drawing. Always keep moving forward, and experiment as you do

>>4689356
I like that. I'm having to reeducate myself that not every drawing is a precious thing that I need to work up to completion, and I can let some go at half finished.

drew a frat boy

>>4689206
Bye bye tower girls thread

>>4688125
Are you the anon with the chalk sisters comic?

>>4689623

Like. Blog?

>>4689623
your lineart is to die for.

>>4689623
the girls face is unnervingly flat. think there might be some shadows you're missing on her

>>4689623
Man why are all your female faces flat?

>>4689623
Almost perfect height difference for her to suck his cock.

>>4689628
Here you go.
https://twitter.com/WhiteBox_Studio

>>4689633
Thank you.

>>4689652
>>4689687
Cleaned it up a little. I'll work the rest out after I work in the shadows for the plant girl piece.

>>4689733

Thanks bro! Followed!

>>4686535
Did this, been busy moving to work on any of my major projects.

>>4689738
>Thanks bro! Followed!

>>4689770
jesus dude

>>4689733
ENDLESS TRASH

>>4689594
no, what is that?

test

>>4689786
It was a quirky looking comic that looked like it was done in flip note. Unfortunately I don't have any photos of it

>>4687753
I liked coloring the butterflies. Tried to push the values harder this time

>>4689915
This is nice. Are you the one who always draws spiderman characters?

another cumic

>>4688345
@pyros0me on Insta and Tumblr

Made some progress on this

>>4689623
guys thumb is fucked

I'm new to /ic/ and /alt/. What are the general rules on image resizing?

>>4690508
image height should be at around 800 to 1000 pixels imo. but as you can see just in this thread alone there are plenty of retards who post full-sized canvases, so even if you fuck up I wouldn't worry about it.

redrew an oc

>>4690518
Thank you anon. It's hard to post in that size when you have a really detailed piece though. Where did this resize idea come from? Is it to help people with slower connections?

>>4688691
>>4688708
Not enough braindead normie fanart trash of generic anime characters probably

>>4690528
that's only relevant for mobile nowadays, the main reason is that it fits in with the sites interface. similarly, reaction images are usually no larger than 500x500 pixels, since they're simpler and made to be readable at low resolutions.

>>4689282
just curious u black?

>>4690528
exporting canvases at anything bigger than like 1080p wide is just a waste since insta compresses anything larger than that, and when you're viewing fullsize on twitter interface it's still zoomed out so there's no benefit of the higher rez

>>4690522
Gun is the best part of this image.

>>4690508
Just dont post something too large

>>4690670
What classifies as "too large"?

>>4690730
Just resize it to 1000 pixels and convert to .jpg

>>4690745
Ok, so here it is. It looks a bit bad resized since I can't make out a lot of the details.

If anyone has any crits or opinions please share. I worked pretty hard on this one.

>>4689958
I feel like I only spend half my time on photoshop actually painting, and the other half just zooming in and out and thinking it's shit

>>4690422
cute, you should do more isometrics and perspectives, they look great in this flat colors and hard edges style

>>4690773
I like the overall ambience in the picture and how you did the shadow/light work. The composition and the pose are kind of weird, the sword is cropped really badly - maybe make it smaller? Make the diagonal elements appear more parallel, it really bothers me that the bright shape in the bckg is not aligned with the sword. Nice job on the details, layout could use some work.

>>4690809
>cute, you should do more isometrics and perspectives, they look great in this flat colors and hard edges style
Yeah, that's a good idea! Thanks

I feel like a hack sometimes

how to be less of a hack

Do these Gestures look kosher? I think starting with the head is gimping me, but regardless I don't know how tobridge the problem of neck length/head placement (even though that not what gestures are entirely for).

>>4690840
basically, you don't have the skill to produce the kind of illustration you want to just yet.
go to figure drawing class, learn2perspective and clothing folds, and keep trying.

sketch

>>4690840
>how to be less of a hack
just copy more artists fr

>>4690940
Your art is grimy in a good way. weeb influence with some graffiti influence gives me Boondocks vibes (comic strip/ maybe season 1). Can't wait to see how this will turn out.

>>4690957
Let me rephrase it to 'gritty'.

>>4690422
Why did you just make your twitter private :3
I was just prowling through your posts and suddenly they were gone. Do you fear us so much? Why the sudden change? You posted here so often.

>>4691076
Ohh I privated because it's most likely going to be inactive, from this point on. </3 I want to stick to using Instagram, Tumblr and Dribbble as my main platforms, Twitter is too chaotic for me.

>>4691093
probably the right move. Twitter is just a drama machine.

I will take the ring into mordor

>>4691315
Cute and comfy!
I'm not sure the thick lines work to your advantage though. Try a bit thinner?
Also, practice hands more.

>>4691426
Thanks mang. I'm aiming for line quality similar to mid-late bleach, but you're right, the line weight variety here is too much in places, and it doesn't synergize that well with the simple rendering.

>>4691493
I think it would help to get rid of the opacity then, too. Would make it look much more bold.

>>4690847
I'd recommend using more ellipses in your gesture. (Or at least something to indicate depth & direction in space) You don't really have anything to indicate direction of form in space and as a result your gestures suffer a little. That guy sitting on that chair, his weight isn't convincingly on that chair. The person standing on the right, we don't know if his torso is bending backwards or forwards. For the person on the bottom left, we don't know if their left thigh is coming towards us or away from us. It's not a crutch to draw those things out, in fact drawing it out strengthens your thought process, and eventually you won't need to rely on ellipses to indicate depth and direction in space.

Your strongest gesture is the top left one. That one is great. but the rest of them suffer in 3 dimensional awareness.

>>4691516
>ellipses in your gesture
Would you recommend the 'curved triangle' method as well? I feel using elipses/that alone could help sell what im trying to convey. Also how long should I spend on each gesture?

>>4691531
are you talking about Ethan Becker's lemon slices? That's a bastardization of the straight vs curve in Disney design, I think. I used to do that but it's just a crutch, a type of symbol drawing. (not familiar with curved triangle method desu)

I got ellipses from Glenn Vilppu. He recommends a gesture to be done between 10 seconds to a minute. All the same things go of course, while you're not drawing the ribs and pelvis anymore, you're still imagining where they are and how much they're bending and twisting, even if you're not indicating them.

You also don't need to draw ellipses throughout the entire figure, only where you change forms, like from upper arm to lower arm, or ribs to hips, etc.

>>4691548
Ooo, so like ellipses to show contour like the figure in your pic on the left? I see a lot of people start with a line of action (for example the spine curving) and then build on that, but as I see it I think my main issue is priority (ie, focusing on the head, how it's facing, where does the neck go), basically stuff I shouldn't have to worry about until the construction phase.
Also, I appreciate your input. Thank you.

Drew this while I was horny but remake this as a more refined piece. What do you think?

>>4691618
nice

>>4691618
Best itt

>>4691618
hands down the best thing I've ever seen in my entire life

>>4691618
Holy based

Deleted the original post, here I am again. Horny drawing, might remake it into something more refined. Critique?

>>4691643
never thought i'd live to see the day when trollface got into the porn industry

>>4691650
Unfortunately I've seen too many bad lewds with worse faces.

>>4691637
>>4691628
>>4691624
>>4691621
What was it?

I did a thing in a thread.

drew an anime fight

concept in my head outpace my ability to execute, its frustrating.

>>4692091
hey man good to see you again

>>4689915
Quickie pony tail mech

>>4689970
Probably, i like spidergwen a lot

>>4687714
I recognize that background from an anime book

>>4690542
>>4689282

Mixed, but yeah. How'd you know?

>>4692162
Fingers too long

>>4692222
i want to change that arm pose, but thanks

>>4692188
because shounen appeals to small nigger brains

trieng to be creative

>>4692169
what anime book? the background idea came from sotc

>>4692252
I wouldn't tell "man with boobs" much creative.

finally got round to finishing my cordyceps necromancer

>>4687077
this is really nice but I think the clouds looks like plastic, maybe just a flat color with no outline could look better, also I think you could make some reflections on the water with simple brush strokes, it looks like clay. Her legs looks off to me, to long to be bended at the knee I think

>>4688163
>>4690422
I think you are the same anon who hass been posting similar ones, really like this one, maybe you could move a little bit the right cactus so its line its not barely touching the line of the tall one

this one is for my game, crits welcome

>>4692147
Fucking sailormoon is pretty cool. Will draw again tomorrow

I don’t think this quite counts as furry

>>4692633
I wish these robots actually existed in real life.

>>4692722
how is this not furry?

>>4692633
can I draw this design and credit you my man?

>>4692722
How exactly is this NOT furry?

>>4692730
>>4692743
I was aiming for kemono or just an animal human hybrid, not western anthro, but I guess the distinction doesn’t really matter

>>4692760
Doesn't matter to you maybe, but this falls squarely into western furry.

I've been doing some studies from FLCL for the past few weeks in /asg/. it's autosaging right now so I thought I'd post a more 'finished' drawing I did today in this thread instead.
>>4692722
looks great, the ground plane works really well here. I dunno how I feel about the toe bean way back on their heel, though
>>4692563
awesome, I like the ant heads on their belt. kinda nitpicky, but the black background is a little harsh.
>>4692416
this is great, your hatching works really well for all the feather details. the style, to me, seems to be pulling in a bunch of directions... almost audubon-y, almost woodcut, almost hanafuda, pop art colours... I think you could be more bold with your approach

did this for the other thread

Started out as a hand and feet study but then I didnt study hands and feet at all.

I just wanted to come here and say I love you guys.

>>4691621
>>4691624
>>4691628
>>4691637
fuck what did i miss...

>>4692550
is that a dog or a boy, is he beating it or petting it ?

>>4692727
stop wasting your time drawing and take robotics engineering and help humanity by building sailorsexbots

>>4692760
it's still awful degenerate shit even if you use a japanese word for it

>>4692977
A post that said something like "made this while horny" or something, but the post didn't have an image attached

>>4690840

>>4690865
Hopefully this is more passable. I felt I could do a lot better after reading your post anon, so thank you

>>4692812
foolycooly bro
Nice clean lines but they're too even imo. Have you tried applying various line weights?
Might be good if you add a simple shading on him too

>>4692760
"Kemono" IS jap word for western "furry". It means and defines exactly the same thing as furry.

>>4692760
Stfu, closet furfags are worse than regular ones. Embrace your degeneracy like any other furfag.

>>4692232
faggot

watching ed edd n eddy

>>4690422
>>4691076
I find it bizarre that someone with this kind of style would post here in the first place. Why exactly do you post here? This board is 99% porn and anime and AFAIK nobody else here draws in the mobile app style. Aren't you worried that posting here will bite you in the ass?

Taking a break to rest the eyes.

>>4693853
was she born without a neck

>>4693853
Go back to /beg/ or /asg/

>>4693904
these are getting really old really fast

>>4693904
Hetalia but even faggier

>>4693950
wish I could get bored of them so I could move onto something less cringy

>>4693959
at least it isnt anime

>>4693968
>at least it isnt anime
it's worse... it's western anime

>>4693977
This
>western anime
Western gay anime

Dude you're basically furry tier.

>>4693968
Country humans are worse than weebshit. Country humans are spawned from 15 year olds.

>>4694047
Waifu tier. I want to worship her

>>4692880
Is the birdman okay? He looks so scared.

>>4693865
pyw /beg/tard or go back to /beg/

>>4693865

/beg/ and /asg/ are not the same thing, even if a bunch of /asg/ anons can't draw for shit.

>>4694066
Seethe more /beg/shitter

>>4693421
thanks, I tried another but with some thick and thin lines... might still be a little too slight. I agree, in the anime they all have that single line weight, but for solo illustrations there's no good reason for me to necessarily adhere to that
>>4692880
looks cool, even if you didn't do what you set out to. the toucan head looks sick. I like the tiny like line dashes all over his body, makes him look kinda fuzzy/feathery without going overboard with the details
>>4693290
wow, really solid construction, the fabric is really nice too. you should finish this one up, you've already taken it so far
>>4693655
I thought this was a screenshot from the thumbnail, you nailed the style I think. I don't remember the hands looking quite like that, but that's a little nitpicky.
>>4693720
awesome colours, the characters have a lot of personality. I think it would be worthwhile to tie this one down a little more, too.
>>4693853
the back view works really well here, the backward rotation of the arms reads nicely without much detail. the folds on the fabric seems a little random, I think you could pick a few that you think are most important and get rid of the rest

Gonna do a 4chan exclusive comic series, main characters on the right, generic female on the left.
Artwise aiming for simple and easy, it will be very dialogue driven.
Thoughts?

>>4694095
>4chan exclusive comic
what, are you going to post it on /qst/?

>>4694095
can you turn the right character into a femboy?

>>4694123
I was thinking /co/
>>4694136
We'll see what happens. It's gonna deal with some gender bending shit.

practicing lineart

>>4692097
Thanks, I have been around, but mainly in /salt/, though.

>>4694084

>>4693853 here. Ok, will try to simplify the folds on the clothing. Still trying to improve on drapery studies.

>>4692091
I wish I had your problem

>>4692633
Warm up and color pencil undersketch test

>>4692740
Sure, do as you please

>>4692727
>>4693000
Don’t fret, I spent 20yrs of my life building and programming robots - I can do it.

>>4692995
It's a living teddy bear and he's just holding it up. he's supposed to be sitting in a workshop with a pile of other stuffed animals on the ground but I never got around to finish it

finishing the pictures is excruciating.

>>4694797
Heh boob holes

>>4694797
frick off back to your russian board buddy

>>4694797
You're so fucking bad. How come you haven't improved in all these years? holy fuck

>>4694797
Flip your canvas and weep.

Not sure if this is the right kind of thread but I sure could use a few good critical eyes!
(Can post more images if your intrested in judging those too)

>>4694584
maybe I should have said that I had a lot of ideas, but I lack sufficient skills to bring it to life properly.

>>4694926
NTA but how do I notice mistakes besides flipping canvas? If I draw something and come back to it the next day, I see a little bit of problems. But if I come back to it a week later, I see a ton of problems. How do I speed up this process of seeing errors

>>4694981
>How do I speed up this process of seeing errors
Post your work.

doodle

>>4692162

>>4695014
head construction is a little weird, if you wanted a crit

>>4695023
help i'm still struggling

>>4694999
Are you telling me to post my work right now or that posting my work will give me criticism and therefore accelerating my error correcting?

>>4695029
both works

>>4695014
it seems like you could have made this a lot cuter, but chose not to

>>4694177
colored

>>4695045
If by colored you mean black

>>4694084
I did another more finished drawing based on some FLCL studies I did
>>4694634
super expressive line work, looks great.
>>4694956
looks cool, I love all those technical details on the backpack. the simple values make everything read pretty well too
>>4695045
looks a lot better with some colours in there. I think taking some time to clean up the dangling lines with an eraser could help
>>4695039
the lines a super crisp, great work on the clean up. the features on the face seem a little misaligned or flat, especially on the mouth
>>4695051
very nice retro style, those loose lines for the wispy hair work really well. the body on the left seems a little stiff, though I'm not sure how I'd make a praying pose very exciting. maybe spreading the knees apart?

>>4695014
fix little bit

>>4695076
fix little bit

>>4695051
Cuute :-:
Blog?

>>4695021

>>4695014
>>4695024
I am only a shitty beg, but it is my sole life purpose to ensure more cute boys are drawn. I have tried to correct what I would have done differently for most of the head. I can write an explanation later but I need to do something for a few hours

I feel retarded and the shirt looks fucked up, but how do I stop myself from falling in love with the anime women I draw

>>4695098
I prefer right

>>4695098
It shows. Don't ever give advice again.

>>4695116
Are you the artist?

>>4695108
I WANT LEAVE

>>4695127
Then you help them. Begs like me only try to help others when no one else does.

>>4695132
Awww fuck you're right. I'll have to fix the letters when I'm done crying

>>4695128
>>4695098
Just wagie draftman

>>4695142
I dont understand people who dogpile beginners who are asking for help. If someone asks for help, i will try to help them and i will pre empt my help with a disclaimer declaring my skill level. If other people want to dogpile me thats fine, just do it with explanation or a drawing so the original anon gets help

I take these slings and arrows gladly for the cause of more cute boys being drawn

>>4695171
Bless you. You're a good man.

>>4695171
i didn't intend to that i can help you if you need
i'm still learning too

>>4695176
I just want to see where people think the artist of the smoking boy went wrong in head construction. I posted my take, i dont see anyone else offering theirs

>>4695024
dont make the silhouette harder to read

>>4695193
thanks.

>>4695193
knees should be up further, shouldn't they? thighs seem really long to my (untrained) eye

>>4695262
you are right, i wasnt paying attention to what i did with the legs.

>>4693290
damn dude this looks like a one year improvement pic compared to your first try

Something I painted yesterday and something I'm working on now. Am I gmi, anons?

Something I painted yesterday and something I'm working on now. Am I gmi, anons?

repost, forgot to remove signature...

>>4686546
Really nice, the bodice looks great and the overall concept looks cool.
Maybe try adding some cooler gold tones to the bouncelight in her hair and under her chin?

>>4694797
ahahahaha

Need critiques for this please

>>4695423
Was the body traced?

>>4695450
No none whatsoever

>>4695457
The body looks really good to me, everything else makes me think you are on drugs

>>4695379

>>4695423
wheres the chin

Hello anons! I have somethings to do still, Im not 100% done but I wanted to post this before I went to bed so I could wake up with fresh eyes and consider anything you guys feel is wrong with it. Any improvements etc. Since the last time I was here I was told that I needed to go back in it the fundamentals again. I read a couple of books re watched a couple of lectures got some new ones and took a college class so I hope that I would have improved slightly.

>>4695572
Anime side mouth with rendered lips gives me a feeling I do not like

The shading on the arm that's held up also ends up making look a bit flat

>>4686546
>>4686585
are you fucking discord faggots

>>4695572
he cute<3
gib blog please

>>4695629
https://www.pixiv.net/users/4967174
@explosive_art

drew a mech

I think i need better fold next time

>>4695763
Nice

>>4695880
samef4g lol

>>4695868
just work on something else now. i'd never spend so much time on one simple drawing like that

>>4696724
Lash was best girl

Sami a close second though

>>4695521
>>4695379
Lazy even by your standards.

go go go
>>4696762

>>4696750
I have no standards frend

>>4690522
Give her proper trigger discipline, and the character will feel more legit.

>>4695521
>>4695379
simplistic and charming, I like them a lot. They have that oldschool drawfag vibe to them. Soul.

>>4697764
thanks!