/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4665448
>OP pic

>>4665448
You faggots are really enamored with that drawing, huh?

>>4665448
Go to /trash/ , this is where you belong

>>4665448
Based OP, can't stop laughing at this shit.

>whitebox stopped posting on /alt/
>no /salt/porn threads for a while til now
>no one's overly sperging on the porn posted in /alt/
so he's the one usually making these threads huh?

>>4665642
I told you guys before he doesn't want you in /alt/ so he makes containment threads for you.

>>4665724
Why.

>>4665738
why *not*?

>>4665724
>>4665743
Whats the lore of this? I am getting curious

>>4665750
it's a series i'm doing that i call 'sororitas stories' where the cannoness of the sisters of battle tells a bunch of fujo sisters stories of the primarchs and 40k history with a twist, i've got a ton more planned planned and written down

>>4665642
If he was the one to make the threads, then that just prove a lot of you coomers are too brain dead to make your own.

>>4665816
Nah it was ok to be in the alt threads before him. We didn't need a separate thread. He just made a problem by shitposting / sperging about it, and made the solution by making these threads.

>>4665642
whitebox started doing porn so he'd look like a hypocrite if he continued bitching

>>4665838
this

these threads are basically a concession to a psychotic puritan schizoposter which is why i always post my lewds in /alt/ anyway

yay. I can finally post my degeneracy here again.

>>4665872
But he was doing porn before he became whitebox, he was pebbles or stones or something i don't remember but changed his nickname when he was utterly BTFO by a local anon who insist that the pose he did was impossible and even took the photo to prove it

>>4665917
Hardstones Mcflintcock I believe
I think he was just trying to rebrand because he said he was addicted to porn and doing nsfw commissions just made things worse. He may have found a way to balance things better now

>>4665963
Wow you think it was really that guy?? Damn that's crazy. I could kind of see some weird ass behavior coming from a guy who seemed a little too obsessed with drawing girls in hijabs getting boned. That shit was a red flag to me.

>>4665763
That's pretty cool actually, i like the idea.

>>4666557
thanks, yeah i had the idea while driving for work and realized it was an under served niche since most primarch shiping genderswaps them

>>4665724
GAINS GOBLIN DETECTED

Based gainsgob

>>4665448
>
This is going to stick on my head for quite some time, fuck you

>>4666676
ah a disciple of input2 i see

I really need to get more sex scene up in this comic.

>>4666699
Disgusting, why would you do this?

I'm not talking about your /beg/ skills, those you can improve. But why would you waste time drawing this monstrosity?

>>4666954
the subject matter isnt in any way degenerate, it looks like that because he is a /beg/ dummy.

>>4665459
>>4665465
>>4665574
>>4665576
>>4666710
>OH MY FUCKING GOD!!!!!!!!! DID THEY SEXUALIZE A..........COUNTRYBALL??????? THIS IS THE WEIRDEST THING IVE SEEN ON TEH INTERWEBZ ALL YEAR!!!!!!! R/4CHAN NEEDS TO SEE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

>>4665724
wtf!?

Porn with girls still not allowed in this thread?

>>4666954
I can ask the same about every single drawing in this thread.

>>4666969
it seems pretty self explanatory, do you not know about warhammer 40k? what is it you aren't getting?

>>4666970
? did you get butthurt about something?

>>4666975
what is Warhammer?

>>4666982
google nigger goddamn

>>4666982
it's a whole setting, space marines, imperium of man, god emperor, ripped off every goddamn thing under the sun, it's pretty fun

>>4666986
sorry i lost track of video games after the Playstation 2, except for Overwatch porn.

>>4666699
That's a pollaxe (or poleaxe, either works) not a halberd.
Also your trees don't look enough like cocks.

>>4666993
nice try, almost took the bait

I like how absolutely nothing in this thread is at least a modicum of sexy.

>>4666960

>>4666981
Well I don't see anything besides gay porn in this thread and last time I posted female nudes here I got banned.

>>4666916
some more

>>4666960
haha r/cursedimages xdddd

>>4667008
>i like how
>i think its funny that
>i love that

pyw fag

>>4667023
>>4667028
Never respond to people who post wojacks, you'll only encourage it.

>>4667028
>>4667051
i mean he is right though people are acting like redditors about it

>>4667025
You probably posted some loli and people reported you.

Also, have a broken shoulder pic. Anything else I should address?

>>4667025
Can you show an archive of the drawing that got you banned?

>>4667292
the angle of her arm that's holding up the finger is very unnatural, something like this I think.

on another note, do you ever feature other artists? I know Mode sometimes retweets fanart of his characters. This is me unabashedly asking how to get featured by you.

>>4667292
>>4667367
The arm is going to look wrong no matter what.
Make the upper body actually follow the movement/the gesture it's supposed to do in that situation
But all in all, coomer won't care because big anime tiddies

>>4667292
the angle of her arm that's holding up the finger is very unnatural, something like this I think.

I'm about to hit 1,500 followers on twitter do you have any tips for expanding your brand? How much do you think i should charge for something of this quality (but finished)
>>4666676
currently that's a 50$ commission, people are telling me its too low but im really afraid of charging more because i feel like with only 1500 followers i'll just nuke my own commission rate and go broke.

>>4667292
It's not only the shoulder the elbow is broken too. Try the pose yourself.

>>4667393
And you have broken her wrist. The palm should be partially visible.

>>4667406
i wasnt asking for the critique he was

>>4666676
nice colors, post blog
>>4666711
Your linearts are pretty good, understanding of form too. Left boob nipple feels a bit off. Post blog
>>4666916
Cool designs and the colors are appealing. Post your links so we can read your stuff

>>4667393
god I wish I could do 20$ commisions at least

>>4667402
That elbow would work if the shoulder wans't so rotated/broken. I know what I have to do with the arm to fix it. I was asking if there's anything else that looks off.

>>4667393
Thanks for the redline, but I think the wrist is not an issue per se. I need to rotate the upper arm towards the viewer and the upper arm has to follow that. I was more wondering it anything else looks off.

Also, your demand sets your prices. You don't set them based on what your art looks like. Some people with atrocious art can sell for very high prices, simply because they have a huge following.
This is what you have to strive for. Become known to as much potential clients as possible.

My commissions journey went like this:
1) I set average prices based on how much time I spent on my artworks and how much I wanted to earn per hour.
2) People were okay with them and started requesting art.
3) After some time the demand was bigger than what I could handle, so I raised my prices.
4) People still kept flooding my inbox and I kept rising my prices.

In an alternate reality where people would stop asking for my services after I raise my prices too much, I would have to lower them in order to get enough work.

This is how commission prices work. At least in my experience.

The more people know about you, the bigger the chances your demand will get bigger too. BE PROLIFIC. Improve your art for yourself, not to get more money out of it. That's not how it works.

>>4667566
>and the upper arm has to follow that
lower* arm has to follow that

>>4667566
thanks. If you're still here, any tips on content for patrons? I have one ready to launch but im having difficulty providing what i think people will want. I dont have any special brushes and the only thing i can think of is progress shots and voting on what i should draw. you seems to do things like raffles and have a lot of incentives and community tie-ins. how the hell do you manage social media so well while having time to draw.

/salt/'s back up. Fuck it, why not.
wip

>>4667794
I used to believe that by drawing gonzo tits and asses to otherwise proportioned girls, it would add a surreal quality to it. But pornstars nowadays are so Bog-pilled, it just looks like I traced a massive whore.

Also that cock is just the average size of an anon who posts on /fit/. Fantasy really is becoming reality lads.

dadders day
https://youtu.be/37dBq_4TsZI

>>4668113
linktaur
https://youtu.be/zSfMHbogn00

>>4668115
stupid twat
https://youtu.be/siIW6OS_h8A

>>4666960
You're on /ic/, the board with the highest population of normies and females aside from obvious circlejerks like /soc/. What do you expect?

>>4666954
This is literally the most vanilla thing in this thread you absolute tard

>>4667566
I love you so much bbc chan

>>4668179
I think the only board that beats us in femanon population is /cgl/

That place scares me

>>4666954
>anons in this board are so degenerate that they see a biological woman without dicks as the worst thing itt.

imagination test

>>4668383
Your imagination needs to learn what spines are. I like the gesture you were going for but my god is that uncomfortable to look at. Keep up the good work

beeg grl

>>4665448
Classic cum bag

>>4668383
wtf is she doing?

Hey there. Took me way too long but I finally finished the adult Nanachi art.

>>4668509
Did you use Butcha U as a ref?

>>4665724

>>4668383
It's not the spine that's the problem, it's the hips. They're completely misrepresented. Nice job though. You're getting better.

>>4668561
Saved
The wrapping lines around her stomach is bizarre though

>>4668928
Oh, I was just trying to give her a slightly pudgy belly.

>>4667296
Can't find it.
>>4667292
It was just your generic anime girl. All grown up and with tiddies only with cute face. I guess anything anime == loli in this thread.

>>4668507
How can he walk with those spikes on his heels?

>>4669060
>I guess anything anime == loli in this thread.
Nah, that's not the case. Mods don't ban people if they post according to the rules. You are doing a with hunt. As you can see we can post anime girls without repercussions.

>Can't find it.
Probably it has more to do with the fact that it wasn't your own art?

help

>>4669060
>can’t find it
Mhm, thought so

>>4669248
from ref? Still impressive grasp on volume nigga

>>4669483
spotted the uber/beg/

>>4669490
pyw

>>4669248
Left foot needs to be bigger

>>4667607
I can't really suggest you what you should do with your own content, cause each creator has it's own thing going on.

If you want to get some ideas on how I run things, just check my patreon page. The tiers are pretty descriptive.
But in general I think the main appeal of my patreon is commissions and requests. This is the only way people can get personalized art from me, besides the free raffles I do each month on stream.

>>4668902
I didn't use no reference, I don't even know who Butcha U is

>>4665763
Top kek. Never thought I’d see the day when the gains goblin became awesome. Keep at it my dude, glad to see you working on something this fun and which fits your style so well.

some fun

>>4670382
He's a dojin illustrator

>>4670459
Wow, the face looks very similar now that I see it

>>4665448
You making this thread and me having to scroll past it so many times has made me really regret drawing that thing

I'm doin some serious shit very wrong

>>4668383
>lactation
I'm rooting for you anon

>>4667027
i like this a lot. are you active in other art communities? 4chan is no place for people with actual potential

>>4670561
One of mine got picked for the /salt/ thumbnail once. I was pretty happy actually, but when I see some of the degenerate shit that slimes its way in here, it makes me not even want to post in this thread, much less be on the thumbnail.

Your image definitely makes me want to go breathe through a pistol, but at least it's a joke and all in good fun.

>>4666960
shut up fake conservative.

beep.
ain't sure if i should go with a snake bottom half, or a regular bottom half. both are kinda crude, i'll refine them later down the line when i decide

>>4670415
thanks

>>4670598

>>4668113
Are there any artists who draw like this but aren't furry faggots?

>>4671591
Stop coming here to search for porn, retard.

>>4671591
>>4668113
>>4668115
Got a blog?

>>4673077
She's cute, but her ass and pussy looks a vit weird.

>>4671342
go back to making gains goblin

>>4672611
@nellipher

>>4672611
@nellipher
https://youtu.be/2em3Lm-ssDs

>>4673077
Butthole looks weird

>>4673077
>apologizing on twitter for including pepe
How cringe can you get

>>4674132
>Indulging in and spreading drama
I think that's pretty much as cringe. Also a bit pathetic.

>>4673077
hote

Messing around looking for my own style

>>4674132
but it wasnt an apology it was just an explanation

>>4674276
tbf it's not drama if it's one sided autistic screeching over cartoon frogs

The correct answer to pepehate is laughing your ass off, which is coincidentally the correct answer to pepeposting.

Slowly getting back into animation

need help

>>4675354
Needs more oompf at the deepest hit from the dick

>>4671591
shuuut the fuuuck up

Which one, cum or no cum?

>>4676027
Yes.

>>4671394
Lazy. At least draw the metal right ffs.

>>4676059
Bonk Donk is a cute character that needs protecc

>>4676059
>the wings one
Is he on meathooks?
Do you jerk it to Hellraiser

>>4676122
fisher has a pretty fucked up brain, yes.

>>4666960
based
>>4667023
#relateable!!!
>>4671203
t. tranny
>>4671591
get used to it newfag
>>4676057
>>4676059
sauce? @?

how do i learn stylization bros, it feels like my attempts end up looking like a copy of my reference, a sloppy drawing or doodles with no form depending on how much i try to stylize.

>>4670602
Did you use a reference for this? From what I can see you're drawing forms 3-dimensionally but your proportions and anatomy are off in a lot of ways. I think if you stick with practicing and working from references it should clear that up in time. Feel free to do imagination work from time to time though, both for fun and to test yourself. Faggot.

WIP. Any recommendations on font for the floating computer screens on either side? My handwriting is awful.

Wanted to try making a manga page with little to no planning of panel and layout, this is what I got. Idk I like how the drawings themselves came out, but the flow is pretty fucked because of panel 4. Even though it didn't get much of a reception on any of my socials, I decided I'm going to keep it going, maybe have a mini doujin. Hopefully my panels and pacing are better by the end of it.

>>4677251
I really like this, but the text is a little jarring, I don't know how else to fix it besides writing it by hand.

>>4673077
cute! but I feel like the nose and eyes don't really match the rest? Might just be me though

>>4676057
>>4676059
so good!

>>4677251
>distant *woof woof*

>>4677311
Aaaaaaaah I'll try lol. I guess if I'm learning how to draw I should learn proper penmanship while I'm at it.

That is absolutely fucking adorable by the way and I love it.

>>4677316
Not sure if this is a good or a bad distant woofing lol

>>4677251
more than the font I'd fix her ass, it looks flat

>>4677371
This is my worst nightmare. I'll see what I can do thanks!

Wanted to give her a different facial expression but I'm still struggling with head drawing. Other than that, what should I work on the most and how?

>>4677512
>Other than that, what should I work on the most
Your sense of aesthetic. This is nasty to look at.

>>4677521

>>4677311
I don't understand what's going on in the 4th panel

>>4677331
thanks man. Yea fonts are a bitch, but if your learn to do em your that much more of a better draftsman.
>>4677585
Yeaaaa man I feel ya on that. Dawns supposed to be doing a funny dive or a leap onto May, but I totally should have gone with a different angle or something else. Kinda what I get for not planning shit, but hey its a pretty throw away comic so its w/e. Do better next time.

>>4677187
You dont. Dont worry about style just try to learn how to draw. Style can be either intentional or unintentional and it's best if you understand why your drawing looks the way it does. Think about style as though you're a racer on a track. Everyone is taking shortcuts, but to the uninitiated they are randomly driving off the track. You dont get the best lap time by randomly driving off the track. So take your time and learn the track first that way you know which corners to cut and which ones are essential.

>>4677248
It's a reference free drawing- I'm glad that I'm at a point where people have to ask though

>>4677769
drew a goblin titty

>>4677769
i drew a goblin tiddy

>>4678128
HR!!! GOBLIN LADY IS SEXUALLY HARRASSING ME AGAIN!!

>>4678149
I was thinking I'd follow it up with "Office whipping boy"

Opening an audience suggestion poll can show a cruel reality where the only character people ever want to see nude is a 40lb imp from a decade old game.

>>4676539
@lambrey4

cant draw nice lookin tits to save my life

>>4678345
Looks like you like faces more than tits. You might be a faggot

more polandball porn for you

I fuck up foreshortening /poses when I either robo bean and or attempt gestures a lot. Any tips?

>>4678828
desu it's mostly an anatomy problem

>>4679018
Right, which is result of my poor gesturing and construction trying to foreshorten. So.

>>4679021
I'd recommend looking at how the torso works, especially the ribcage. Drawing that should help you work out where to put folds to show how the body is twisting. I'd also recommend drawing a line where the middle of the front of the body goes and another line for the side of the abs as guides. I'm really not good at explaining this shit, sorry. Do more muscle and skeleton breakdowns of women in complex poses like this and it should help

>>4679035
Thank you, appreciated.

Comments on my Inking?

>>4679305
She's missing a hand, a feet, a leg and apparently an arm.

>>4679382
And? what does it have to do with my inking?

>>4679386
He's what is known as a crab (a beginner trying to feel superior). Ignore him.

>>4679386
>>4679412
samefag

>>4678195
the way she's sitting her pussy shouldn't be this visible. I'd move the right leg more to the right so the legs look more spread

had to bullshit my way out with that hand because it's a commission and it was my second attempt, so i was running out of time

>>4679826
right was the first try, now i kinda like it more but yesterday it felt really off
left is a portrait i did as a gift for the client

>>4678272
Are you transcending from drawing twinks to drawing hunks? Great work as always btw, iamglad you are back

>>4679826
>>4679828
what the fuck
blog?

How do I draw the male form

>>4670670
I am not really part of a specific art community per say, Its all kind of on discord nowadays, but its mainly for fandom or fetish related stuff, and not art specifically. Otherwise I sign up to places mainly so I can park my stuff.

>>4675354
nice

>>4677564
hote

>>4679826
Her arm is quite strange

Hi anons

Any advice on this will be helpful

>>4679702

>>4680853
Why does her tit have its own panel

>>4681034
Because have to explain her tattoo

anime really did make me gay. irl i still like women only but in porn, at this point, i can only get off to drawings of femboys taking it in the ass. if you arent at this level yet, get out while you can. dont be a coomer. i think its reversible to a certain point but for me? i doubt it. i imagine this is why people kill themselves. i wouldnt do that but i will end up alone forever because i cant get off without the ninja death grip and porn and edging for like half an hour. im warning you. be careful.

>>4680853
Post blog

>>4680612
What do you have against Sasuke?

I can't do it

>>4681185
Is this americaball?

>>4680853
i appreciate your passion for these characters anon

>>4681227
yes

>>4680853
Pretty cool anon, the first panel is confusing, at first i thoug it was part of her bed.

>>4679828
Right one looks like a trace of one of kyles works

I'm gonna go to bed

>>4682268
What did you draw before this raging hard-on for country balls

>>4682268
Is that Shadman?

>>4680612
can i follow you anywhere?

>>4682268
I admire your bravery of submitting us to your cringe without feeling embarrassment. Nice line weight and anatomy as always, keep the good work countryballfag.

calling this done

calling this done

>>4682297
Humanised political ideologies
>>4682331
I wish
>>4682444
Thanks dood

>>4682595
I like your rendering those fingers and ears have my envy.

>>4675354
I hope you'll read this - the transition of movement is fucked, so it looks like the body is weightless, you can fix this easily by moving the dick's loop a few frames forward.

>>4682995
>>4683162
delete your photoshop and throw arwa yyour talbet

>>4683292
>arwa yyour talbet
Aprende ingles de mierda antes de ser un pedazo de mierda en línea. Ademas, publica tu trabajar.

>>4665448

i'll paint cyancapsule's oc
>>4679859
i post on pokinha
>>4680670
yeah i had to rush it and now i realise how flat it looks. It needed better planning
>>4683162
your expressions are appealing

>>4683432
just realised her right latissimus shouldnt be showing from that angle

>>4683446
the fucks a latissimus lmao

>>4683446
have you seen Bruce lee?

>>4681106
Not in particular, I resents sakura more.

>>4682438
@ac120rfw

>>4683496
Her hair really should be affected by gravity. Unless they are against a wall.

>>4683509
Well , my excuses was that she had just barely fling her head upward so it hasn't fell over yet. Although at the time I was just try to maintain the "look" of the character. I am considering how I should fix that in the final draft though.

>>4683526
Go for more dynamic hair always

>>4683526
What kind of logic is that? That's like saying if I drew Rouge's big bat tits to sag because they're affected by gravity, makes rouges unrecognizable (especially if you're making a multipart series)/

>>4683496
>have you seen Bruce lee?
kek, i get it but she isnt supposed to be flexing it

>>4683509
pretty sure anime girl bangs are never affected by gravity

>>4683536
I was having trouble keeping her "on-model" so to speak, so I left it at that in the thumbnail, but I do intend to draw her hair fall over in the final draft.... if I get to that stage.

>>4683545
anecdotal, shit anime/manga you read and or watch doesn't mean mediocrity is ok. Contrary to belief Japanese artists know their fundamentals and studied from life. Just because you followed some "How 2 Draw manga" rhetoric doesn't mean that's how it is.

>>4676027
Cum

>>4683558
Congrats, you have just posted an example of bangs unaffected by gravity.

>>4683566
Congrats, she's standing up so that bullshit won't fly nigger.

rate please

>>4683568
>she's standing up
>parts of her bangs point upwards thus defying gravity

>>4683592
stagnating/10

>>4683600
And the other 500k+ strands are behind her back facing the ground. Try again.

>>4683592
Her wrist looks dislocated. Might want to fix that, anon.

>>4682218
but kyle traces everything so what does it really look like

>>4683558
>Contrary to belief Japanese artists know their fundamentals and studied from life.

which ones? all of them? even the shit ones that dont? which is most of them?

>>4683614
So all of them draw hair that defies gravity? Or just the ones that you consume?

>>4683615
i dont know asshole im not the person you were talking to but yes MOST of them probably do since MOST of them are shit just like any large sample size of artists.

>>4683620
MOST is still a huge claim from some literal who gaijin like yourself dildo. Just because you watch lucky star doesn't means you know the nuances of ALL of japanese artists as of today.

>>4683607
Her hair seems to be illustrated with about 20 spikes, not 500k+ strands. Four of these spikes are clearly pointing upwards. The hair behind her head is also curved up in an unrealistic way.
Plus, the topic was bangs specifically, and most of her bangs are blatantly unrealistic. All of it, in fact, given the way they stay out of her face and are, most importantly, fucking see-through.
I have nothing against anime styles, but arguing they can generally do realistic hair is ultimate retard take.

>>4683625
fuck you retard. i never once said there werent good anime artists but to argue that 99% in a given field arent mediocre or below is moronic. sorry you're an autistic weeb not my problem.

>>4683638
You must be the autistic weeb to know what most artists do to such a degree.

>>4683638
Found the autistic weeb

>>4683639
>>4683641
Are you guys fucking dumb? Do you understand the concept of a bell curve?

>>4683657
Show us the literal bell curve on anime artists the defy gravity with hair. I'll wait.

>>4665724
I like gains goblins art. the lineart is great. the artstyle is unique. dont know why everyone is bitching

>>4683980
I dont like the way he draws muscles, every character looks like they were made of pillows

>>4683077
Yeah I fixed it right after posting, lining inbetweens right now

wipper

>>4684133
bonus salt enf tits

>>4683162
I won't enter the /SALT/ threads any longer. Bye

new wip

face cute?

>>4682595
Good rendering, but her face is retarded and the dick disgusting.

>>4684134
I like this - it's funny

Cute? Also how the fuck do I draw legs???

>>4684212
Face really cute

>>4684152
No. Ugly bitch

>>4684241
where's the critique Smalls?

>>4677251
blog?

>>4684212
Ew not cute at all. Less Tumblr in your style would help.

>>4681944
I like the style of this! However i think the lineart in >>4683315 kinda ruined it. Blog?

>>4682595
I dont really like her face and the dick is kinda disgusting, but nice rendering.

>>4684247
>>4684285

>>4666996
How do you figure the difference

>>4684152
legs look stubby

>>4684285
How do I make my artstyle less tumblr? I'm really trying here. Is anything thats not straigt up anime or realism ugly tumblr art to you?

>>4684348
You're talking to people who would unironically use the term 'cal-arts'.

>>4684348
Not that anon, but it’s the design of the nose that’s the problem. And no don’t make the nose non-existence

>>4684212
I can respect what you're going for with the hands, but the reality vs the style youre going for is, Yhe fingers themself come off as chubby and a bit jarring. Also the 'tumblr' comments I see in regards to the nose I think is the trend of huge pear shaped faux pixar noses I see in a lot of cringe threads. Be a bit more focused on fundes and then implement your style on top of it. Other wise it just seems iffty (to me that is.)

>>4684387
Also yeah, the mouth placement is a bit derpy and doesn't help with the nose, (think the buckteeth are cute though).

>>4684355
>pre-2010 stuff
lol ok buddy back to /co/mblr

>>4684432
>lol this term coopted by retards that have no foot in the animation industry, is from a whack job B grade animator turned lazy creeper
>said term will be used ad-nauseum despite the fact the shows that term is referencing to has no cal-art graduates for show runners (SU, tAWoG, etc).
>willfully ignorant to artists as individuals that came from an institution and succeeded
kys dumb gitd nigger.

>>4677251
absolutely retarded.

>>4684442
>a single boomer debunks this easily observable trend of what the newer graduates are putting out
whatever helps you cope with wasting that 150k lol

>>4684468
>>said term will be used ad-nauseum despite the fact the shows that term is referencing to has no cal-art graduates for show runners
Also I attend the DAI.

>>4680853
Post the full comic here when done. I want to see it.

I know I'm probably not someone to throw stones but...
>half of the shit in here

drew it last night lol

>>4684867
This is /beg/, but for coom shit. Why do you think pornfags post in /alt/, well the decent ones?

bee femboy

>>4684867

>>4680853
I'd make the boob in the boob-centric panel sag a bit, and maybe move thenipple a bit lower. Right now I get the impression that it's floating. Otherwise this is looking pretty solid

idk really quick drawing

>>4685560
oops I think this looks better

I'm kinda liking that I'm getting so much faster, this only took like half an hour

why do the guns look like s.h.i.t..?

>>4685695
Because they're mysteriously floating and have no sense of placement. Looks obviously done after you drew the girl and it looks stupid. Also her pose looks stupid as fuck without some kind of bed under her because right now it looks like she's mid-rock climbing.

>>4685695
It's not like the rest doesn't.
Learn some proper anatomy and perspective and stop polishing turds.

>>4682268
>>4682995
How did you learn to draw male feet? I can't find good refs for it.

>>4685798
Porn, there's millions of possible references anon. See a still in a video? Pause/screenshot/save draw. You're in a google era internet ran world take advantage of it.

>>4685798
I just draw female feet and say they belong to men

>>4685695
Use reference, hell, boot up Garry's mod, spawn in an ak47 prop and draw that from different angles

hey i actually finished something this month

>>4686631
congratulations anon

>>4686631
How did she step out of the stringkini

>>4686631
>High tension strings holding up bikini at top
>Loose strings at bottom of bikini, connecting to back of the bottoms instead of the front
You understand this would just make the bikini hang up around her neck, right? You're about as bad as sakimichan at understanding how clothes work.

>>4686631
I give it a good/effort.

>>4686686
>>4686875
thanks lads
>>4686691
>>4686766
back string is supposed to be loose because she is twisting her torso (maybe not that loose, but whatever)
as for the front string, i uh, kinda forgot about it
picril is more or less how it's supposed to be

face cute?

>>4687008
I dont get what you're trying to convey with her expression (or lack there of). The pose is interesting though I'll give you that.

>>4687022
Nvm, saw you in /v/. Given that the post itself matters the most, I approve.

>>4687056
>>4687022
im trying new things maybe if someone tells me what to draw ill get more motivation to make it better
I will change the expression to better

>>4687065
Yea man, given the context the placement is fine. Also I suggest Makoto, but this isn't the draw thread ;)

>>4687008
Head too big the face is fine

>>4684293

https://sys.4chan.org/derefer?url=https%3A%2F%2Ftwitter.com%2F_mou_art_

I fixed it after some kick ass advice from an anon actually
>>4683824

>>4684293
https://twitter.com/_mou_art_
I did fix it with great help from an anon
>>4683824

>>4687112
and adding onto this guy she looks like someone crumped her like a can

>>4684348
Along with fixing the nose and mouth, a better defined, less round face and other features would help. To look less tumblr-y draw more classically beautiful. Also a clean lineart instead of a rough sketch would help with the presentation looking too much like it was pulled straight from some tumblr blog.

>>4684212
In the middle of rendering and trying to work out some flaws while still keeping the key features of the character.(chubby, big nose, slight overbite) I'm still young and I have a long way to go. pls no bully

>>4675354
Thinking about what to do with the face. Can't post it with the hair

>>4686811
color

>>4687408
>pls no bully
You should know you're asking for it when you draw tumblr shite like that. It's not cute at all.It's actually genuinely ugly. You have a lot to reevaluate in your life if that's what passes for "cute" to you.

>>4688957
you sound like a lot of fun.

>>4688993
but he's right, that drawing is fucking ugly

NEW THREAD

>>4689097
>>4689097
>>4689097

>>4687408
really nice, got a twitter or something?

>>4687549
the movement of the breasts at the apex looks a bit jerky, you may already be working on that though. love your work btw