/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4659529
So... polished turd thread?

>>4659529
No, fuck off

>>4659532
Yes, if that's the term for it, I apologize, I'm a newfag to this board

>>4659536
The anatomy here isn't even that off
What do you even draw? Post your own work instead of picking on others you shallow shit

>>4659549
>the anatomy here isn't even that off

>>4659549
I entered this thread to see what people would say.

And I'm not going go on a tirade but. Never give anyone advice. I'm out

>>4659571
Your redline looks like dogshit. Nuke yourself

>>4659549
Bro it’s not that serious. Don’t worry so much. We aren’t picking on artist we’re just looking st examples of bad anatomy in other wise good art.

>>4659554
Miku is not racist and loves trans people. That’s that on that.

>>4659585

>>4659571
Don't embarrass yourself, beg

>>4659571
LMAAAAOOOO

Our boy.

It's always threads like these where more experienced artists on their high horse think they're in the place to be an outright cunt because they think they're just better than everyone else

>>4659615
and that's a good thing!

>>4659616
t. more experienced artist

>>4659571

Extremely cursed

>>4659615
Nah, we just make fun of ourselves in past, it just easier to do using today's /beg/ art. Feels more fresh.

>>4659668
Holy shit...
Could be actually good if drawn in curve-linear perspective with ass as focal point.

>>4659673
Yeah, it's really obvious that they drew the ass first and then attempted to draw the rest and then combine it later. What a fucking waste of good rendering.

>>4659549
I agree with you these threads are annoying as shit

but the arms are too short and there is no way that titty in the back should be showing with the way the torso is rotated

>>4659549
There's a lot wrong, you're just not educated enough to see it.

>>4659791
Twitter? Blog?

>>4659791
Oh hey i follow you. Nice. Do you have any advice on how to get better anatomy like that?

Whenever I play this game and see Jinx' art, her left leg always fucks with me.

>>4659529
>good art with bad anatomy
how's that possible?

>>4659536
Sakimichi?

>>4659791
Mum can you give us a breakdown on heads?

>>4659529
I'll start

>>4659839
Girls can bend leg that way, not everyone but young enough can

>>4659600
>if Egon Schiele drew anime

>>4659529
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>>4659541
these would be bad even without anatomy mistakes

>>4659571
>chicken scratch
>short non-confident lines
>overall a faggot
kys

>>4660079
Ah yeah Gtunver, classic.

>>4660208
>chicken scratch
on the half-assed hand maybe
>short non-confident lines
looks fine for a sketch
>overall a faggot
true

>>4659585
Miku is a statistical puppet robot that lives to not give a millimeter of shit about fetishized and idealized delusions

>>4659571
What the fuck is with that hand man and the forearm is too short retard.
You just completely butchered this.
The anatomy in it is fine, simple but nice and effective for what it is (anime art)

>>4659529
>ITT: Good Art
Pic unrelated?

>>4660946
>good art bad anatomy
You can’t just take half of a title and change the meaning completely.

>>4659668
Unfortunate she was cut in half.

>>4661884
But the drawing in op isn't well made in ways outside the anatomy either

>>4659791
What guide are you using for the head? Reilly?

>>4659558
Anon, she clearly requested not to be bullied.

>>4660004
>>4659839

Absolutely everyone can do it at any age with low stretching exercices or mild yoga. It's called hyperextended knee, it's just a matter of elasticity on the legs muscles that "locks" your knee preventing it to bend backwards

>>4659536
>>4659549
>>4659571
pic related
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>>4659595
I agree
>>4659791
this is also a good redline but its more like a redraw.

>>4663374

>development of toes turning out

Not the guy youre replying to, but gymnasts and dancers tend to have larger, overdeveloped quadriceps because they use them to keep a center of balance, especially with explosive leg movements or generating power from the hips.
It has nothing to do with your feet sticking out. (Unless youre squating, that is. And if you are, thats literally the point)
Im not sure who made that diagram, but they are super loopy.
t. fit autitst

>>4663754
could just be skeletal development because of posture. look at weight distribution.

This seems like a good example OP

>>4663978
I can see how the artist thought it might have been good, but this is exactly what happens when you tunnelvision

>>4659586
whats wrong with it? maybe the torso is too long?

>>4659571
>completely messed up the relative length of the humus for both arms
i love this shit lol

>>4659791
ditto. the waist doesn't work that way

>>4659816
>Twitter? Blog?

>>4664464
You can fix it if you want.

>>4659668
put her out of her misery

>>4664464
>>4666533
Oops. My smooth brain misread that.

5.5k hearts on twatter

>>4666614
her boobs are escaping!

>>4659530
>>4659536
>>4666614
Y'all bitch about anatomy on pictures like this acting like these people are NGMI or it makes the art bad but these people get thousands more likes and RTS than 99% of you are busting your ass making some perfect anatomy l00mis masterpiece.
Face it, the only people who care about minor anatomy issues are other artists and autistic faggots. Not the normies and weebs who you want looking at your art and giving you likes and money.

>>4666650
>y'all
fuck off to a BLM protest

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>>4664473
>>4666682
N/ic/e guys really will bitch and complain about extremely trivial and unrelated things even more than /v/, huh.

>>4666650
I could easily get 20k+ hearts on twatter if I pander to flavor of the month animu and geimu characters but unfortunately it's not my cup of tea. Also I will not pmw here for free for you fags and ngmis to see

>>4666727
Whatever helps you sleep at night.

early shinkiro

>>4666650
>The art is good because it gets lots of likes on social media
Jesus Christ you're like a real life version of those "technology bad" art pieces boomers make

>>4666808
>comparing these two completely different things
Are you having a stroke, anon?

>>4666808
B-but its bad!
>15k likes

The anatomy! The technique! Its shit! All shit!
>30k retweets

Fucking normies cant they seeeee?!?!
>3k a month on patreon

REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!

Seeth harder you NGMI CRAB!

>>4666832
Dilate

>>4666727
Based and GMI

>>4666650
imagine making content for the lcd

>>4659529

>>4668080
nothing about this is good.

>>4659541
this style is fascinating. I kind of love how unsettling it is.

>>4659791
agree with everything but the tits and the forearm/hand. Youre so close but small things like that really show.

>>4668080
longdog

>>4659791
>>4659816
Are you just advertising yourself?

>>4659529
It is not good art then. Pretty much the entire beastars manga.

>>4666783
That arm looks like he deleted the sleeve layer but kept the multiply layer with all the folds

>>4659554
Based

>>4666727
>I could easily get 20k+ dollars at my job if I pander to the flavor of the month and what my customers expect from me but unfortunately it's not my cup of tea.

>>4669247
Freedom has a value too.
I have a lot more fun and inspiration drawing what I care about than chasing latest memes and pandering to the braindead Twitter zombies whom I despise.

The very idea of drawing for the normie basedboys with their open mouths disgusts me. You would say it's lost money but so is sucking dick. Why aren't you earning 200$ per hour anon?

>>4659536
>>4666614

Both of these are serviceable. They set the bar low and hit it. That's what's important in art and you autists should learn that your work only needs to be good enough to convey your subject.

If the subject is simple the work can be simple too, if the subject is boring your work is shit no matter what technical perfection you make out of it.

>>4666832
B-but he's bad!
>33% of votes

The political program! The ideology! Its shit! All shit!
>43%

Fucking normies cant they seeeee?!?!
>92%

seethe harder commie :^), the majority's always right.

>>4669312
Good point, anon. Sorry about being a dick. You do you!

I might wanna add, that not all Twitter people are actually braindead in that aspect. A percentage of those might really enjoy you doing their favorite characters too.

>>4668253
Yeah, I'm aware I made some changes to those, but for a good reason. The arm was creating a tangent with the waist and made it look wider, but not in a natural way. I was trying to consider the silhouette of the character. As for the breasts, I made them perkier and changed the shape completely mostly because I was thinking that it'd be more appealing and a younger female like that would less likely have saggy grandma breasts than something perkier. The placement of the breasts on the original drawing was too low though and the breast from the other side wouldn't be showing, if that's what you mean as well.

>>4659571
this is an elaborate troll right?

>>4659529
everything ShinDoL

>>4659839
lol, they changed her splash? why?

>>4659600
Is this the guy I'm thinking about? I forgot his name.

>>4670096
>>4659600
Seems like he improved a ton, still shit though.

>>4668216
kinda psychedelic though

>>4669521
I too like Zimbabwe

>>4668080
looks like something you'd see on a guy's webpage in 90s, only needs a comic sans signature with embossed 3d style text in the corner

>>4666650
True
Plebs here don't understand appeal

>>4659529
The new /ic/ hero
The wii remote artist

Stop using bad anatomy as a blanket statement for badly drawn figures.

>>4659529
Bad perspective.
>>4659530
Elongated torso and no bend.
>>4659533
Same, and the throat is not placed in the middle of the torso.
>>4659536
Short arms and breasts out of perspective.
>>4659540
Head and body doesn't match at all, two different styles mashed into one.
>>4659541
Creepy rendering on left, flat symbol drawing on right.
>>4659558
This one is an actual anatomical mistake, as she is missing her shoulder.
>>4659600
Biggest sinner here is the weird posing and expressions, making them look like they were drawn after poseable art dolls with no thought for gesture.
>>4659668
Elongated torso.
>>4659839
As mentioned before, hyperextended knee looks unflattering, but not a anatomical error.
>>4660079
Elongated torso with no twist, looks like it was drawn from two different photos.
>>4663978
Arguably anatomical error, though I still see both the knee and shoulder as a simple proportion mess.
>>4664393
Long torso, and no this one would still be fucking terrible as hell even if it was fixed.
>>4666580
Exaggerated proportions with ass being three times as wide as her waist.
>>4666614
Perspective problem not properly showing overlap in her torso, as well as no deformation in the bed despite her ass would clearly be digging into it in this pose.
>>4666783
Fair.
>>4668080
Construction, posing and rendering.

>>4669907
It's from the card game

>>4663978
looks like the artist referenced an improperly weighted 3d posing doll

>>4671637
fair enough

one thing I learned pretty quick in anatomy is that it's pretty hard to show butt and boobs without breaking the character's spine or doing some other cheating in anatomy