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4656197 No.4656197 [Reply] [Original]

Draw this in your own style. Old masters edition

>> No.4656203

>>4656197
Not putting in my name but I'll do a master study, sure.

>> No.4656213

>>4656197
damn Bourgerrou had that pseudonym?

>> No.4656221

>>4656213
>Bourgerrou
Why is Bougeroughs name so hard to spell

>> No.4656224

>>4656221
sorry I'm Polish

>> No.4656242

>>4656221
>Bougeroughs
It’s spelled Bouguereau but I’m probably just falling for le bait

>> No.4656273

>>4656242
It’s pronounced Boogaloo

>> No.4656275

>>4656221
>>4656213
Burgeroo?

>> No.4656290

>>4656242
Yes it’s Bouguereau.
It’s pronounced as “boogerr-oh”.
t. French

>> No.4656296

>>4656290
I always pronounced it as boogooroh

>> No.4656342

>>4656197
Another alternative by John Singer Sargent

>> No.4656344
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4656344

>>4656342
Oops, I forgot to attach the image

>> No.4656346

>>4656344
I fucked up the first one so badly that I’m too ashamed to post it. I’ll try giving this one a shot

>> No.4656368
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4656368

>>4656344
I can’t do it... I’m ready to give up completely.

>> No.4656384

>>4656368
Lol maybe you should just stick to giving critiques

>> No.4656430
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4656430

if i spent just a little longer i can probly get a better likeless but i wana play league later homies

>> No.4656435
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4656435

>> No.4656447

>>4656430
Love this! Were you color picking heavily?

>> No.4656452

>>4656447
no but i have experience with oil painting

>> No.4656456

>>4656452
Damn, Im even more impressed now. I really like how you pushed the gesture

>> No.4656464 [DELETED] 
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4656464

Here’s my attempt

>> No.4656481
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4656481

>> No.4656495
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4656495

>>4656197

>> No.4656509

>>4656430
Kawaiiiii
>>4656435
Cute
>>4656481
Nice
>>4656495
Gross
>>4656368
...

>> No.4656513 [DELETED] 

>>4656368
Fucking kek

>> No.4656515 [DELETED] 

>>4656464
This is alright but fuck off

>> No.4656531

>>4656368
This is actually really sad. I’m hoping for your sake that you’re just a troll. Maybe try using hard round brushes and get your proportions right before you start coloring

>> No.4656535
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4656535

>>4656368

>> No.4656570
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4656570

>>4656481
fixed a few thingsu

>> No.4656578

>>4656275
Burgerrou

>> No.4656582
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4656582

i tried to go for that semi realistic manga style.

>> No.4656591

>>4656368
Anon.

>> No.4656614
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4656614

>>4656197
A little janky, but I can't be bothered to polish it up more.

>> No.4656663

>>4656614
That looks like a wood block print. ITS SOOOO GUUUDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

>> No.4656664
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4656664

this always happens man, i start off with decent linework, start laying in the colours, getting really into bringing out the features then zoom out and holy fuck it doesn't come together nicely at all
gimme some crits please boys

>> No.4656668

>>4656582
I’m getting Jojo vibes
>>4656570
The darks definitely improved it

>> No.4656671
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4656671

>>4656197
That was hard..

>> No.4656679

>>4656664
Try working the shadows in one generalized pass to unify everything. The eyes are too big and the whites are too bright. The shadow has an irregular dark patch under the chin so pay attention to the values. Nice job over all

>> No.4656682

>>4656664
the drawing is bad, the values are off and your colours are off.
learn to draw -> learn values -> learn colour

>> No.4656688

>>4656671
Good structure, looking good boss

>> No.4656699

>>4656430
>>4656614
>>4656671
>>4656664
>>4656570
>>4656495
>>4656435
>>4656368
>>4656464
I took the liberty of ranking you guys from best to worst

>> No.4656711

>>4656197
Sorry, I don't have a style

>> No.4656716

>>4656711
It’s ok I still love you anyways

>> No.4656725

>>4656688
Thanks, working on colors now...shits hard

>> No.4656727

>>4656197
No, fuck you.

>> No.4656728

>>4656679
thank you for this anon, i need to improve my workflow in that I need to work in big stages so I can make lights and darks consistent. it's really something watch those artists that can pull of a likeness with really efficient brush strokes, that's the goal
>>4656682
thank you anon, I am learning all those

>> No.4656756

>>4656727
This kinda rude, maybe take some creativity liberties and draw her full figure in all of its glory. A mere simp like myself wouldn’t be able to take it. I’m sorry if I offended you. A master such as yourself doesn’t need any practice of course

>> No.4656774

>>4656368
Thanks for the laff

>> No.4656778
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4656778

Eh, I tried, I'm not very good at recreating likeness yet and I dont wanna work on this too long. cool thread op.

>> No.4656790

>>4656778
>I'm not very good at recreating likeness yet
I think it’s mostly a proportional thing that is making her look older. There’s too much space between the nose and lips making her face too long. The nose is a little too wide as well but that’s just being nit picky. Cool beans tho

>> No.4656804

>>4656368
Soul
>>4656430
Soulless

>> No.4656806

>>4656790
Oh yeah definitely, I never drew someone young, I didn't bother changing it though cause it was "draw this in your style" and i've only drawn older people. Thanks!

>> No.4656808
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4656808

>>4656197
I tried to go for the anime style.

>> No.4656812

>>4656464
Why do you keep posting that dumb shit on every thread?

>> No.4656821

>>4656808
Cuteeee! The eyebrows look a little odd being that thin and the brow seems like it protrudes too much on the right side. However take that with a grain of salt because I like all my anime grills to look like round blobs

>> No.4656825

>>4656671
epic neck anatomy, the left clavicle looks like it's angled up too much

>> No.4656827
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4656827

lazy /beg/ tier has entered...

>> No.4656829

>>4656827
Looks good, you are a good BEG.

>> No.4656830

>>4656827
at least you aren't this guy >>4656368

>> No.4656836
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4656836

>>4656197

>> No.4656842

>>4656836
Great skin tones and form. I wanna stick a finger up her gaping nostrils. She wouldn't be able to get any once I hook my fingers.

>> No.4656857

>>4656836
Those thicc underplanes for the eyelids are beast. This guy portraits.

>> No.4656895
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4656895

>>4656671
Blocking in colors

>>4656825
Yeah, that clavicle is going into outer space. Thanks, fixing it now.

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4656902

>>4656197
bleh ok

>> No.4656907

>>4656895
Really really great planey block in. Those color shifts are Taco Bell fire sauce. You should get a bit cooler temperature wise in the hair but that's only if you're going for an exact copy.

>> No.4656908

>>4656895
BLOG

>> No.4656914

>>4656895
This nigga knows facial color zones

>> No.4656921

>>4656914
Yeah but i wouldnt make the grey this obvious on a girl

>> No.4656924

>>4656921
True, it kinda looks like stubble. Perhaps they are trans

>> No.4656925

>>4656368
You havent even started anon. Now get to practice. Believe in me..

>> No.4656929

>>4656582
>>4656614
>>4656671
>>4656827
I like these a lot.

>> No.4656940
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4656940

>>4656197
lost the child aspect somehow

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4656974

>>4656925
>>4656531
Thanks guys, you inspired me to give it another shot. It's far from good but it's a lot better than my last attempt >>4656368 Please let me know how to improve. Im seriously trying my best.

>> No.4657013

>>4656671
>>4656895
Teach me your secrets, senpai

>> No.4657020

>>4656974
Still looks like absolute shit, go back to your beg threads

>> No.4657024
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4657024

WIP

>> No.4657028

>>4656940
Sheeeiiiit her neck is fucked. Take a look at >>4656671 's drawing and do it more like that.
>>4656974
I was almost proud of your improvement until I opened the thumbnail and saw how terrible it was. Learn to draw before you get into color.
>>4657024
bad line quality and proportions

>> No.4657055
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4657055

>>4656778
Small advice that you can apply to later: when trying to capture likeness for children, they will always have a short, inward chin, usually with an overbite. This is largely due deciduous teeth and their role in human jaw development. As baby teeth grow and leave the jaw, permanent teeth erupt from the jaw and skull to fill the gaps, guided by the holes the baby teeth left behind. The holes left by the permanent teeth are then filled further by bone growth. Under most normal circumstances, these holes aren't fully filled until your mid-20s. This is what gives people a characteristic "20-something" look: a complete lack of wrinkles normally reserved for those in their late 30's onward, but a fully formed "long" face and nose. Pay close attention next time to the distance between the upper lip and the bottom of the nose, the length of the chin, and the presence of an overbite when painting children.

Excellent job, otherwise. Good, clear values that read just as well as the original.

>> No.4657075

>>4656614
That's it mang

>> No.4657086
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4657086

>>4656895
Done, not the best, but whatever I'm over it.

>> No.4657093 [DELETED] 

>>4657086
pybw

>> No.4657094

>>4657086
Beautiful

>> No.4657098

>>4657086
nose is really fucked, eyes too. colors are weak overall and brushstrokes need work.

>> No.4657099

>>4656974
Y are you working so low res? Also u need to Loomis

>> No.4657105

>>4657098
Yep, not happy with the result. After the lines, my structure got fucked and it went downhill fast. Need to figure out a better approach to keep forms intact while getting good values, color, and smooth transitions. That young people skin is tough as fuck to render.

Whatever, its all just practice.

>> No.4657110

>>4657086
The whites of the eyes are too bright and the reflected light on the chin is too strong. I agree with >>4657098 it looks like you got lazy and botched the nose. For a study it's really good though

>> No.4657120

>>4657086
Soften those edges nigger like on the right shoulder especially. It looks a little unfinished so you might have just not gotten to it yet.

>> No.4657157

>>4657024
Tumblr nose and nigger cheeks

>> No.4657194

>>4656756
Sorry but every time i participate in on of this threads i get no replies at all or maybe a crab comment from a mass reply fag, that makes me feel like i'm shit, when really i'm not. So fuck /ic/ and fuck 4chan.

>> No.4657201

>>4657194
>every time i participate in on of this threads i get no replies
Fair enough, that's why I try to make sure every drawing I see has at least one comment. You should only draw what makes you happy too. If you decide to post anything Ill make sure to leave a nice comment :)

>> No.4657204
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4657204

>>4656344
Next one

>> No.4657216

>>4657204
File name should be SargentStudy69.jpg and I like the flipped image approach. I almost complimented you on coming up with a new pose. My favorite part of this is the flowy hair

>> No.4657222
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4657222

>>4656344
accidentally turned her into a 30 year old office worker from the 90s

>> No.4657233

>>4657222
CUTTEEEEEEEEEEEE!!! I love the green colors in the skin. You have are really nice organic blockiness going on. I think you went too dark around the nose area and the values are kinda patchy in certain spots. Try squinting when your looking at the ref to figure out how to group the values.

>> No.4657238

>>4656614
This is my favorite one in the thread so far. Really cool.

>> No.4657240

>>4657222
Something about the neck looks weird to me. It has the body of a veiny cock. You could darken the bottom right of it and clean up the 'natomy a bit

>> No.4657244

>>4657240
>You could darken the bottom right of it
LEFT I MEANT LEFT

>> No.4657256
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4657256

>>4657055
Thanks for the info anon. Since you took your time to inform me, I decided to go back and mess around with it a bit more. Although its not that close, it should be slightly better than before. I just started a year ago so i'm still a noobie, Once I get enough drawing hours on different faces i'll finally grasp what the forms are actually like.

>> No.4657303

>>4657233
Thanks, that's a good strategy that i somehow always forget to use when i'm struggling with my values.
>>4657240
kek i see exactly what you mean

>> No.4657357

>>4656940
fuck you need to tune up that smoothing

>> No.4657359

>>4656974
this looks like some toon from hotline miami. if it wasn't much bigger than 20x20 it could even work

please learn to draw

>> No.4657363

>>4657357
Maybe he would have cleaner lines if he wasn't jacking off while drawing

>> No.4657530
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4657530

>>4656197
my wrist is killing me... not for this

>> No.4657552

>>4656827
If you focus on making the eyes look nice, people will generally ignore everything else looking lazy

>> No.4658135

>>4657530
Yes! I was waiting for this!!

>> No.4658146

>>4657530
Do you think this is what Bougerouges models looked like after he was done painting them

>> No.4658161

>>4657530
I't would cost you $0 not to do that

>> No.4658170

>>4657530
I’m surprised this thread was as wholesome as it was for so long. What’s your problem?

>> No.4658184

>>4657530
How dare you, you stupid coomer. Please don't draw her pissing. I would be so disgusted. If you were to create such a thing I would delete my internet. Please don't do anything lewd... I must remain king.

>> No.4658191

>>4656614
unnnnhhhhh this shit slaps nigger

>> No.4658221

>>4657256
I like how you darkened that node in the corner of the mouth. The hair looks a lot better too

>> No.4658225

>>4658161
npc faggot

>> No.4658226

>>4657028
>>4657098
>>4657099
>>4657110
>>4657120
>>4657157
>>4657240
>>4657357
>>4657359
>>4657363
>>4657552
post your work

>> No.4658265

>>4658221
Thank you friend.I do all my stuff on one layer so I'm glad you like it.

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4658304

I don't know how to color, tried and failed

>> No.4658306

>>4657530
Why she's melting? She is butter.

>> No.4658318

>>4658226
i did, im >>4656430
probably the only one in here that will be as accurate as it gets.

>> No.4658321

>>4658226
No fuck you, just know that Im better then all of you combined
>>4658306
Some people like to eat butter heheheh

>> No.4658325

>>4657530
based and ahegaopilled

>> No.4658354
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4658354

>>4656197
I give up. Likeness is fuckt and and I can't make a face look cohesive to save my life.

>> No.4658375

>>4658354
I like the dotted shading for the hair. You should have done the same thing on the shadow of the face. Also the hatched shading on the temple next to the left eye is unnecessary, it reads as an shadow even tho its in the light family still. Also the left eyebrow could be tweaked upwards so she doesnt look like a gross Mexican

>> No.4658395

>>4658354
You should just copy what >>4656614 did

>> No.4658399
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>> No.4658413
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4658413

Crit me boys I'm >>4656664

>> No.4658439

>>4658413
The nostril holes are too big and round and the lip is mishapened. Also the jaw looks a little wide. You absolutely killed the hair and the note of orange on the left eyebrow is lowkey savage. Overall very adorable

>> No.4658440

>>4658399
qt poo

>> No.4658443

>>4658413
Right side of the neck is bending the wrong way, awesome job with the bg

>> No.4658453

>>4658413
Good likeness and shape accuracy. Nose is a little fucked but overall solid and a lot better than your other one.

>> No.4658501

>>4658146
yes

>> No.4658516
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4658516

>>4656197

>> No.4658520

>>4658516
You win the style award, it's absolutely seeping in soul. Her expression made me get the chills.

>> No.4658523

>>4658516
Josh you're a cutie pie but this looks like shit

>> No.4658524

>>4658516
wow....soul...cant say anything but wow...

soulll SOULLLL literally better than 99% of /ic/

>> No.4658527

>>4658516
Soul.

>> No.4658533

>>4658439
>>4658443
>>4658453
thank you anons I make a copy of these crits and they're helping me along

>> No.4658546
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4658546

>>4656197

>> No.4658553

>>4658546
She blue, da ba dee da ba daa

>> No.4658557

>>4658553
How old are you? 50?

>> No.4658569

>>4658557
Old enough to have fucked your mom and creampie her loose pussy while I suck on her saggy tits and she sticks a finger up my anus to help me finish

>> No.4658599

>>4658501
>>4658146
No

>> No.4658624

>>4658399
Ilya is that you?

>> No.4658628
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4658628

I'm trying again, but i don't know if I'm going to finish this one.

>> No.4658636

>>4658628
Eyes aren’t on enough of a tilt and your drawing isn’t cute enough... I’m sorry

>> No.4658641

>>4658546
She looks kinda like bitch and the red background is making me angry. I only feel frustration when I look at this

>> No.4658668

>>4656614
SOOOOOO KAWAIIIIIIIIIIII DESUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU

>> No.4658677

>>4658628
Ugly ass hoe
>>4658546
Bad
>>4658516
Worse
>>4658413
Downsyndrome
>>4658399
Generic anime grill
>>4658354
Bad
>>4657530
Cum brain
>>4657256
0 Likeness
>>4657222
Bad
>>4657204
Stupid
>>4657086
Just take a photo
>>4657024
Bad
>>4656974
Literal autism
>>4656940
Poorly done
>>4656895
Mediocre
>>4656836
not cute
>>4656827
Beg
>>4656808
Bad
>>4656778
Meh
>>4656671
Meh
>>4656664
Gay
>>4656614
You just used the posterize filter
>>4656582
Gay
>>4656570
bad
>>4656495
Chonker
>>4656481
Bad
>>4656464
Biggest retard of all
>>4656435
Meh
>>4656430
No originality
>>4656368
Best one in the thread

>> No.4658685

>>4658677
Pyw

>> No.4658696

>>4658677
Where’s your drawing?

>> No.4658704

>>4658677
So wich one is yours? I'm guessing it's >>4656368

>> No.4658706

>>4658677
>No originality
studies dont need originality you retard.

>> No.4658707

>>4658677
pyw

>> No.4658708

>>4658677
based

>> No.4658718
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4658718

>>4656197

>> No.4658719

>>4658696
Mass reply retards never post their work.

>> No.4658723

>>4658718
more soul in 15 minutes than the rest of us got in 1-2 hours :(

>> No.4658726

>>4658677
>0 Likeness
>Just take a photo

>> No.4658728

>>4656778
lolol you made her Jewish

>> No.4658729

>>4658718
I love these so much, the cuteness levels are off the goddamn charts. They're very Disneyesquc

>> No.4658735

>>4658718
Cute
>>4658723
Probably because ya'll are autistic and immediately jump into doing something terribly, elaborately awful rather than just focusing on your prelim rough sketch and the fuddamental skills required to produce said "soul"

>> No.4658743

>>4658685
>>4658696
>>4658704
>>4658707
I'll post one after I get out of work
>>4658726
You can have a good likeness without being a Xerox machine. None of these pieces have good brushwork or form
>>4658706
The prompt says to draw it in your own style you soulless faggot

>> No.4658756

>>4658641
i'm sorry, i guess......

>> No.4658775

>>4658743
>The prompt says to draw it in your own style you soulless faggot
then why have a good chunk of people made just studies of it ITT? a style is just for retards ITT that dont know how to do studies.

>> No.4658783

>>4658743
>None of these pieces have good brushwork or form
>>4656430
is the only one with good brush strokes, the fuck are you on about? not a single one has even come close to it.

>> No.4658788
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4658788

Is traditional ok? From what I'm seeing everyone uploads only digital.

>> No.4658802
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>> No.4658803

>>4658802
Ayy lmao

>> No.4658823

>>4658788
Nice job breaking out of the mold my fellow sharpie connoisseur. I’ll try to do one too
>>4658802
She reminds me of some model with fetal alcohol syndrome. Cute non the less

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>>4656344

>> No.4658855

>>4658850
Cute

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>> No.4658867
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You stupid retards, never respond to mass repliers, they are always insincere and only looking for attention.
Give it to them and they will only be encouraged to do it again next time around.

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/beg/ here I'm just trying to get the proportions right.

>> No.4658887
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>>4658875
Have you tried enveloping first to get the most important angles down? (red lines on pic related)
You can later measure the features in relation to the marks you've made, and to other features as draw them (green lines)

>> No.4658903

>>4658887
Yeah the approach I took was starting with a sphere "Loomis style" and drawing the eyes, nose and chin (you can even see a hint of the two principal arcs).
I'll try and redo it the way you say later and compare results, thanks for the suggestion.

>> No.4658918

>>4658865
Her left eye looks too wide so it looks like her head is turned more than It really is and the shadow is too light on the chin. Nice value control and color overall

>> No.4658922

>>4658850
Nice, it's stylized but you didn't lose the likeness. The hair could be improved by some directional lines that follow the from but this was probably just a quick sketch

>> No.4658978

>>4656582
Really good, dude.

>> No.4658983

>>4656974
It's okay. You'll improve with more practice. Just keep going.

>> No.4659069

>>4658704

dude, i was lurking this whole thread and its indeed the best.

learn esthetics

learn

>> No.4659077

>>4658677
grow up!

>> No.4659081
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4659081

I used a fooking pencil and I can't get very good lighting for photographing. Spoiler: it looks like dogshit in person also.

>> No.4659093

>>4659081
You should get the drawing correct before you even start with value. Try what this anon said >>4658887 you'll have much better results if you start with doing a construct. Your drawing will have no choice but to fall into place if you get the large measurements right https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zZ0lz7W0CYs

>> No.4659170

>>4658718
Kawaiiiiiiii~

>> No.4659182

>>4658743
>I'll post one after I get out of work
I can't wait to see the work of someone behind such insightful critiques

>> No.4659213

>>4659182
I wouldn't hold your breath...

>> No.4659258

>>4658413
Great job massing in that hair

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>> No.4659316

>>4659289
Love the light pupils and compressed values. Why is everyone making her look like an adult?

>> No.4659319

>>4659316
Sameface syndrome

>> No.4659322
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4659322

>>4657204
Blocking in this bullshit

>> No.4659323

>>4656368
retarded and unfunny
>>4656430
boring and souless
>>4656435
/beg/
>>4656481
poorly executed
>>4656495
/beg/
>>4656582
/beg/ and NGMI
>>4656614
interesting but poorly drawn
>>4656664
boring and poorly executed
>>4656671
needs way more work
>>4656778
you didn't even try to get the likeness
>>4656808
original but poorly drawn
>>4656827
terrible
>>4656836
awfull
>>4656895
interesting but to /beg/
>>4656940
horrible
>>4657024
back to school kido
>>4657086
trash
>>4657530
coombrain
>>4658354
/beg/tard
>>4658399
a mix bag of styles with no sense
>>4658516
great
>>4658546
disgusting
>>4658628
eternal /beg/
>>4658718
actually cute
>>4658802
you should be ashame
>>4658865
wtf?
>>4658875
/beg/
>>4659081
/beg/
>>4659289
interesting but poorly executed

>> No.4659329

>>4659316
Thanks. I guess i got used to drawing adults to avoid pedo calling

>> No.4659349

>>4659323
>I have nothing better to do
the post

>> No.4659355

>>4659323
>>4658677
Wow I'm still waiting to see your drawings guys

>> No.4659360

>>4659322
Your brushwork is awesome! Really great start, it'll looking very fleshy and natural

>> No.4659362

>>4659323
anything remotely decent = souless
anything poorly drawn and poorly executed = omg talent and style!

>> No.4659371

>>4659322
Cutest one yet! That chroma is on point.

>> No.4659374

>>4659362
>remotely decent
>this thread
ok /beg/

>> No.4659387

>>4659323
Why do you hate fun?

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>>4659387

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>>4656197
I spent the last 2 days just working on this

>> No.4659422

>>4657530
Based and bestpilled, everyone else itt ngmi

>> No.4659426

>>4659415
Holy shit this is incredible! I thought you just reposted OP's image. The shadow on the ear could be reddened up more and the nose looks a little too boxy. But seriously this is amazing

>> No.4659433

>>4659415
You spend two days copying an image for a thread on /ic/?

>> No.4659434

>>4659415
its a bit dark and lacks some color, work on those two for that and it will be great

>> No.4659447

>>4659433
Imagine having such a ngmi mindset. It's not for /ic/, it's for the anon who made it. It is called a study for a reason.

>> No.4659466

>>4659447
Ok, two years for a study, what did you learn? i bet it's a lot... i mean two fucking days.

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>>4659433
>he can't set his mind on something for two days

>> No.4659564

>>4659355
They'll never post shit. Those types of retards show up, insult everyone then dip.

>> No.4659661

>>4659433
You are dumb as dirt aren't you?

>> No.4659674

>>4659466
What does this even mean? Are you so retarded that you can’t speak proper English? It’s incredibly impressive what that anon did with just one layer of oils. Post your work dumbass

>> No.4659676

>>4659661
Probably, i spend my time in my own projects, not in stupid /ic/ threads.

>> No.4659768

>>4658887
Is there a “redlining” for painting? I really suck at it...

>> No.4659993

>>4659768
Paintover

>> No.4660175

>>4659415
>Draw this in your own style
i think you failed....

>> No.4660360

>>4659433
The state of this board

>> No.4660369

>>4660175
derp....

>> No.4660424

>>4659415
Leave this board, no-one here can give you any decent input. The crabs just want to drag you down

>> No.4660440

>>4660175
"Style" doesn't exist, just a cute way of saying "artistical level".

>> No.4660500

>>4660440
NGMI

>> No.4660616

>>4660440
you are obviously /beg/
style is the result of "shortcuts" you develop to work ore efficient.

>> No.4660632

>>4660500
I'm a working professional artist. People pay for my art dumbass. I'm better than you. Wanna prove it? draw a guy jumping with a sword slashing down towards the viewer's perspective in foreshortening - put the inscrption 4chan on the sword to prove it's your work.

Once you post yours, I'll post mine so that I can expose your dumb beg ass. Any response you make that's not a 'yes' will just prove that you're a worthless beg who do nothing but talk shit on anonymous image boards - you talentless trash.

>> No.4660643

>>4659374
yes mine was decent and so was >>4659415 blind retard

>> No.4660660

>>4660632
'tism

>> No.4660699
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this was a bit rushed since i have work soon, but i accidentally made her look sad, shit

>> No.4660783

>>4660699
Very beginner like but it has a lot of charm. The chicken scratching looks kind of cute

>> No.4660799

>>4660783
thank you. what can i improve on to be less /beg/?

>> No.4660808

>>4660632
>I'm a working professional artist
Same
>>4660632
>People pay for my art dumbass
Same
>>4660632
>Wanna prove it?
No I'd never post anything that isn't a quick sketch here. I don't want to have my name attached to this site with faggots like you around. I regularly sell my work for thousands. I'm a classically trained artist and I can't really draw that well from imagination but there's no need because I can mock things up in photoshop to get around that. I'm 100x the artist you'll ever be. You don't know who the fuck youre talking too. I've won many national contests and accomplished more than you ever will. I'm here just so I can laugh at gay retards like you :)

>> No.4660814

>>4660799
No problem and you should try doing what >>4658887 and >>4659093 said. There's some surprisingly good advise in this thread

>> No.4660823

>>4660814
thank you very much! i’ll keep that in mind next time

>> No.4660836

>>4660808
this reeks of that kid in school who was bullied for being a bit weird so he would think up these big megalomaniac speeches to deploy in front of everyone once he finally 'made it', with his cape fluttering behind him and some light gleaming off his glasses as he pushes them up with >that anime smile

reeks of COPE AND LARP

>> No.4660844

>>4660808
you don't
>>4660808
have to keep quoting
>>4660808
the same post
>>4660808
chuuuuuuuummmmmm
>>4660808
p

>> No.4660920

>>4660836
Suck my hard throbbing cock you faggot. I don't even watch jap toons so idk wtf you're talking about. Can you even make a post that isn't anime related? Keep seething cunt
>>4660844
I just discovered this site last week from reddit so Im still learning.
>>4660844
Please be patient

>> No.4660981

>>4660699
You need to improve your linework but it's pretty kawaii

>> No.4660991

>>4660920
your posts are either bait or obvious case of missing an hero

>> No.4661015

>>4660991
His posts seem to be a reasonable response to >>4660632 he has such an obsession with anime that he wants to have a
>guy jumping with a sword slashing
as a way to measure artistic prowess. Then he continues to talk about anime tropes in an autistic roast. I think that anon wins the mental illness award

>> No.4661039

>>4660632
Cringe
>>4660808
Based and GMI pilled

>> No.4661064

>>4660808
Cringe

>>4660632
Cringier

Kys everyone fuck it.

>> No.4661073

>>4660808
>>4660632
>>4660808
>>4660836
What the fuck did this thread turn into. You both have advanced autism. I'm hoping at least one of you is trolling

>> No.4661101

>>4659415
Very good anon, I love this so much

>> No.4661142

>>4661073
Fuck you

>> No.4661149

>>4661073
Someone copypasta'd a wall of text from another thread and it killed this one is what happened

>> No.4661160

someone please find another good ref pic and make another thread
these threads are the only reason I ever draw nowadays :(

>> No.4661187

>>4661160
Yeah someone needs to make another cute mastercopy prompt thread. This one was surprisingly active

>> No.4661189

>>4661039
Cringe

>> No.4661194
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>in your style
>90% of /ic/ decides to attempt a 1:1 copy
The absolute state of creative bankruptcy.

I win with a 3 minute mouse sketch.

>> No.4661203

>>4661194
I like the annoyed expression, that's what I felt when I read your comment. I thick most people were just doing mastercopys which is a good way to improve. Not to mention most people still have a style because they're interpreting in in their own special way

>> No.4661226

>>4661194
I think both a copy and an original interpretation can be useful, many of us went straight for the copy though, which is telling; I think it means we fear the failure of discovery/invention/being mocked for our ideas so we go for the easier option of copying

>> No.4661252

>>4661160
>>4661187
Just made a new thread. Feel free to add your own prompts >>4661251

>> No.4661262

>>4661252
Thanks and you should do another Sargent one

>> No.4661269

>>4661262
You got it big dog :)

>> No.4661280

>>4661194
I like the vibes of this, it has soul

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>>4656344
Just finished this one as soon as the thread died

>> No.4661287

>>4661194
Im going to do studies of the next ones just to spite you.

>> No.4661290

>>4661226
Except copying is harder especially copying master studies. So in this situation making a shittt muh style is in the wrong.

>> No.4661295

>>4661284
You can always post it in the next thread and It looks really good and the proportions are solid. Your color temperatures are too cool over all. You're lacking a lot of really warm browns

>> No.4661303

>>4661284
You saved it in absolute dogshit quality which makes it unappealing to look at but that aside the face looks good. The eye/brow on our right looks a little skewed but you captured her likeness and expression well. Work on defining things outside of the face though, the hair and everything from the chin down look like an afterthought.

>> No.4661304

>>4661189
Ok nigger, go fuck yourself. Just know you'll never come close to my skill with your underdeveloped monkey brain

>> No.4661307

>>4659415
get a tripcode faggot, i want to see more of your creations

>> No.4661318

>>4661284
Eyes are kinda fuckt, the whites shouldn't be so blue they should be closer to skin color and the top lid shouldn't be so cool in chroma either. It should be a dark brown

>> No.4661381

>>4661295
>>4661303
>>4661318
Thanks for the great suggestions, ill try to fix those things

>> No.4661389

>>4660808
Biggest cope in this thread.

>> No.4661396

>>4660632
Biggest downey knuckle dragging retard in this thread

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>>4661287
>I'm going to do exactly what you said I would just to spite you!

>> No.4661434

>>4661425
That drip... can you just leave?

>> No.4661447

>>4661434
?

>> No.4661474

>>4661425
ah so you literally have autism.

>> No.4661516

New thread
>>4661251
>>4661251
>>4661251

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>> No.4661583

>>4661559
I assume you did that as a joke but it's actually great.

>> No.4661584

>>4661559
Woah this is actually really cool! You somehow managed to keep her likeness. This managed to keep my attention for nearly a full minute which is the biggest compliment I can give

>> No.4661585

>>4661559
trying too hard m8

>> No.4661588

>>4661559
b-boxman??

>> No.4661618

>>4661588
I go by niggerman now, part man part nigger

>> No.4661619

>>4661588

i never left ;)

>>4661618

sir i have nothing but respect for the black man

>> No.4661622

>>4661619
Proof?
Pose for us one last time

>> No.4661623

>>4661619
>sir i have nothing but respect for the black man
I have new respect for you, you are a true ally of the black community

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>>4661559
Excellent.

>> No.4661632

>>4661629
Is this niggerman?

>> No.4661642

>>4661559
Ok now this is epic
>>4661632
No that’s boxman

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>>4661622

sigh

ive gained weight
still wouldn't mind doing another thread
seemed to boost morale round here imo

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:)

>> No.4661793

>>4661713
Great work Dravis, it kinda reminds me of the mc of "My life as a villainess". The smugness is a nice touch

>> No.4661802

>>4661713
That linework is neato and really helps with the form. Really nice job it has a lot of soul

>> No.4661808

>>4661713
>>4661559
>>4659415
>>4657256
>>4657086
>>4656614
>>4656430
Woah there's some surprisingly good work in this thread. You guys would be best off leaving /ic to find a better community

>> No.4661828

>>4661713
Cool

>> No.4661832

>>4659415
I want to learn to paint like this, do you have any process pics or methods you'd reccomend?

>> No.4661851

>>4661832
buy oil start painting

>> No.4661855

>>4661851
Too much work I give up

>> No.4661881

>>4661713
This is going in my "top ten photos moments before getting spit on" collection

>> No.4661906

>>4656430
Dreamy

>> No.4661941

>>4661808
I wish I knew another place but the artbook threads are literally how I learned everything so I'll stay for another year until I'm good enough to start an IG or whatever.

>> No.4661943

>>4661855
got to do everything here myself *mumbling to himself*

>> No.4661955

>>4660643
Yours is a stupid photocopy, massive retard.

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>>4661955
>photocopy on a master study
>master study
you do realize that copying a master study is suppose to help you pick better colors and make efficient strokes right? this isnt a fucking photo. you failed when you thought you were in the right to take the easy route and make it " muh style" and you failed to call anyone out studying it. check mate retard. not to mention i literally spent 30 mins minimum on that study. my 30 mins of trying > your 5 second doodle.

>> No.4662086

>>4661793
>it kinda reminds me of the mc of "My life as a villainess"
I was literally just watching that. I’m still waiting for the final episode to get released

>> No.4662105

>>4661997
you do realize that the idea of this shitty thread is to make the picture in your own style, right?

>> No.4662116

>>4662105
>noo you cant study master studies you have to do it in your own style!

>> No.4662249
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4662249

posting my WIP. I keep falling into the trap of trying to make a 1:1 copy in digital studies instead of just learning

>> No.4662431

>>4662116
>masters study
>photocopy

>> No.4662786

>>4662249
>keep falling into the trap of trying to make a 1:1 copy in digital studies instead of just learning
Don’t listen to all these retards, trying to make an exact replica is a great way to learn. It’s better then just half assing it and then calling it style. Your skin looks monochromatic and that tuft of hair on the forehead isn’t very convincing. It just looks like a dark line on her head

>> No.4662883

>>4661997
Based and cute pilled

>> No.4662991

>>4662431
seething

>> No.4663005

>>4662431
Dilate

>> No.4663041

Is this the best /study/ thread this board has ever seen?

>> No.4663066

>>4663041
I've never saw this amount of quality work in one thread before. Where tf did all of these people come from? They're definitely not /ic regulars

>> No.4663134

>>4659289
whoa.

>> No.4663168

>>4659415
Make me your apprentice, please please please please please please

>> No.4663169

This thread has officially hit the bump limit, new thread is >>4661251

>> No.4663185

>>4662105
>shitty thread
Which drawing is yours? Oh wait you don't even draw you fucking faggot. Stay out of my study threads you monkey brained nigger

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Incoming

>> No.4663243

>>4663213
Rob I can tell you are trying to kill this already dead thread. The Buddha earlobe is a nice touch, perhaps giving the piece a serene appearance

>> No.4663394

>>4663213
Looks gross
>>4662249
Y tf r u flipping le canvas?

>> No.4663449

>>4663185
>S-stay out of m-my threads
ok incel fag

>> No.4663495

>>4663449
Did I fucking s-s-stutter bitch? Go back to r/iamafaggot

>> No.4663938

>>4661713
Im gonnnnaa simp

>> No.4663945

>>4663213
This sucks man, why would you even bother posting this shit

>> No.4664087

>>4658677
pyw fag

>> No.4664423

>>4663394
You don't flip canvas to check if you're skewing the proportions? Old painters used mirrors to do the same thing

>> No.4664558

>>4664423
No, I have autism