/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4607457
Help with perspective?

>>4607457
did a commission for a friend
not my cup of tea desu but he liked it so that's all that matters I suppose

Hou can I improve this type of chibi art in the future? How can I make it more appealing?

>>4607725
stop putting wide nostrilled gorilla noses

I drew my Dark Souls 1 guy

>>4607738
you should digitize this fucker, ya did good.

>>4607735
Could you show me an example of a better styling of noses ?

>>4607725
Don't mix your whites and darks.

>>4607738
that is a big damn axe

>>4607799
Could you elaborate on that?

>>4607848
fuck niggers.

A rough dialogue loop.

>>4607463
nvm I am just gonna move onto the next thing

>>4607713
I really like the POV of this one.

The way the brighter part (beam?) of the BG lines up with the hand is unfortunate though as it makes it look like he has a thumb on either side of the hand.
Not quite sure what's going on with the table in front. It doesn't have the same perspective as all of the other table if it's meant to have a flat surface. But maybe it's supposed to be at an angle, like a drawing desk? In that case having only one slanted desk while everything else is flat tabletops is what's throwing things off since it sets a different expectation.

>>4607457

>>4607857
cope

Any suggestions for fixing her raised arm and foot?

really enjoyed with this gargoyle I did, I just ripped the latin off of Event Horizon cuz I thought it fit

>>4607725
i feel like the lips are too detailed and the blue reflective light is unnecessary

>>4608004
WHY DO YOU KEEP ASKING FOR SUGGESTION WHEN YOU IGNORE ALL OF THEM? WHY? JUST POST YOUR SHIT AND SHUT UP.

>>4608054
Why are you angry? Why event bother replying?

>>4608004
Goddamnit whitebox please fix your faces. Everytime someone asks it seems like you make them purposely worse. Do you not see the problem with the way you create expressions at all?

>>4607919
can i get some critique please

>>4607886
blog?

>>4607919
The outline just looks really chickenscratchy to begin with, and the v made out of the crotch area just looks too narrow to me

>>4607919
your art reminds me of my own from a while back. try to use contour lines in your contruction stages and imagining forms behind other forms before you start coloring. how long did this take you?

>>4608108
https://twitter.com/sovireich

>>4608120
Okay, I'll redo the lines. I wanted to do some color practice so i didn't really do it properly but i guess it'll look a lot better if i redid the lines. Is it too narrow on the right leg?
>>4608133
I don't really remember how long it took but probably like an hour or something. When you mean contour lines, do you mean like the rubberbands on skin idea?

>>4607882
Very cool. Don't know much about animation but would be cool if his shoulders moved a little bit? The face is great but the rest seems a bit stiff.

>>4607857
seethe

>>4607970
>>4608177

>>4608191
>>4607970
>>4607857
>>4607799

Go to /pol.

>>4607725
With the combination of bright pastel colors and overlay layer abuse, it's very saturated to the point of discomfort. Normally,.you'd use purple-blue shadows and blue reflective light if when going this route to ease the eye, but the reflective light (due to how flat everything looks) does not help it.

Either tone down the saturation of the piece overall or shift the hue of the shadows.

>>4607713
I like this a lot, anon. My main gripe is that the foreground is out of perspective to the background, making it look awkward and out of place.

Just general tips to keep working on your construction and fundamentals. The rendering and detail is on point. Learn to build the houses you are capable of painting here.

>>4607882
The artwork is on point, but please work on your animation. Study body language and gestures and incorporate them into your animation exercises. It will help sell your scenes.

>>4608167
>>4608236
lol it's just a loop test for the mouth animation, it's part of a larger animation. Thank you btw

>>4607738
Fucking Love This
I want to see more shit of yours anon

>>4607882
The movement of the mouth is pretty nice but I feel there's something off about the blinking, I think it's too smooth/too many frames maybe? We close our eyes fast when we blink beacuse we need to see shit. idk if it was your intention but the way the eyelids move makes him look like a robot. Otherwise it's pretty cool. The talking is neat and the drawing itself is great.

>>4607457
someone give blog for OP pic

>>4607799
kek

>>4608332
https://www.instagram.com/slendermike/

>>4608236
Fair, to be honest though, the background was slapped in last minute. The guy who commissioned me literally just wanted the character drawing, and said the background could be whatever. You still hold a point though, because the table perspective is still wonky.

>>4608120
does this look better? Should i add some lineweight or something

does this count as furshit?

Goint to post this here as well as this thread is more active. Can I get some critique/advice? I'm having issues building heads, even more so in profile view. What are the proper ratios to use in a profile view? It looks wrong and the width of the skull shouldn't be the same as the 3/4 view. Also the top of my skulls look extremely wonky. I remember someone saying when it comes to faces right ratios and proportions are key but I can't seem to nail them and results are highly inconsistent. I'm on that spot where I know there are mistakes but can't seem to pinpoint on how to correct them, Thank you.

cat portrait for friend birthday

Taking a break to rest my eyes before getting back to it.

May i get a red line for her legs? I'm not having any luck getting the proportions and foreshortening right with her. I'll probably just have to redo and change her pose to a different one.

I feel like I'm better when i'm not drawing Rei.

this is my first digital drawing, i started like a week ago, i have other drawings on the way that i think are going to end better that this one.

>>4609737
HOLY SHIT, I DIDN´T SHRINK THE IMAGE

a wip or maybe not a wip.

>>4609854
I knew it! She was a man all along...

Working on a drawing of krimzon guard shooting down metalheads, what do you guys think so far?

>>4609854
Is that a futa granny or a man with tits?

>>4607457
How do I make my phone gf look more like a dieselpunk robot?

>>4608484
yes

>>4607457
How do I make this phone look more like a dieselpunk robot?

>>4609756
I like the colors, but the hair is too cartoony and doesn't fit the face.

>>4610330
Forgot to resize

>>4608474
Not the same anon, but it feels like her head is way too large, lengthwise.

>>4607799
>>4607857
>>4608191
>>4608177
>>4607970
>>4607799
>>>/pol/

>>4607725
lack of skill covered by silly subject with some unappealing design choices.

>Hou can I improve this type of chibi art in the future?

If you really want to improve you need to go back to your fundies at first. Learn how to draw properly.
Perspective, anatomy, shapes and forms. Leave the color for now, and focus only on those.
Work on proportions and stylization. You don't draw humans with big heads. Chibi is all about ''cutness'' look. Use good refs and try to deconstruct them, realize whats working and whats not.

>>4607799
Based

>>4607725
Chibi is a really niche stylistic choice and is really hard to make look impressive. You're, really going to have to nail the facial anatomy and the best way to do that is to make it look more 3d instead of like hat kid

>>4607725
Check ibu_chuan on instagram, she's the only artist i know that can make really appealling and detailed chibi art

>>4610382
Fuck yeah dude. You have any more of this?

>>4607457
Working on a game

is there no draw thread?
anyway another take on a design

>>4610503
Nah just some warmup doodles before I started.

>>4607578
comfy

doing bgs cause someone on here told me to

pixel stuff today. helltaker cute game.

>>4609698
why do i see a lot of artists do that, after lineart they just put everything in gray
what does it mean

>>4610691
cringe

>>4610691
Coomer taker

>>4610706
It helps to separate the objects from the background, especially when there are gaps in the silhouette

>>4610715
oh ok interesting. i'm /beg/ but i've never really had that problem i guess I can just disregard it huh

>>4610691
I've been noticing you've been receiving a growing hate boner from this board, that means you are doing something right. Always remember that.

>>4610726
Thank you friend. I'm hoping by keeping up my posting people will just go back to giving crit but its seeming like that might not be the case.

>>4610581
>Appetizer being better than the main course
Need more Krimson Guard bros my dude.

>>4610726
pyw

I made Beatrice's portrait

>>4610726
Sup gainz goblin

>>4610332
man with tits

>>4610691
Faggot

Posted on /beg/ no replies or criticism, maybe ill post here.

Im a complete noob at digital, whats a good resource to blend and paint digitally?

>>4608474
Head size is fine, ignore other anon.

Either work without lines or make them much thicker. Pic for explanation.
Otherwise you just need a bunch of anatomy practice.

>>4607725
It looks great as it is. Looks like something you'd buy from a guy airbrushing caricatures at a theme park.

>>4608004
looks like the feet are pointing towards each other too much. Try pointing the raised foot away from her body more.

>>4608491
Skull isn't too bad, a little too big maybe.
Back eye in 3/4 should only be shortened horizontally, while staying the same size vertically.
Faces from the bottom are difficult, but also never truly look good. Even looking at a real life face from below looks a bit derpy.
Profile shot's chin is too for forward, especially for an effeminate face. You don't see nearly that much of the eye when looking from the side. You almost took a front facing eye and slapped it on the side of the face with the pupil to one side, that's not how it works.

The minimalist anime style overall doesn't give a lot of tools to suggest complex facial angles with, as it doesn't have all the shapes a normal face does.
Maybe this one helps a little: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QBv5z0Y2odE

>>4609688
Either those legs are too long or her torso is too short. Her thighs alone are the length of her entire torso, and the lower leg + foot should be longer than the thigh. She also has no ankles.

>>4610723
You can use clipping masks or locked pixels so you never paint outside the outline. Can be useful, but it's just one way to do things.

>>4609756
Pretty decent, but I dunno what your goal was.

>>4610356
Rivets, tubes, grime..

>>4611052
Most programs can do it. Photoshop still the most used. Set pen pressure to opacity, and the opacity to like 30%. There are more paint oriented programs, but I dunno what the flavour of the month is with those.

>>4610795
Haha I'll probably add more btfoing metalheads zulu (60s movie) style

>>4607457
Is there something wrong with the anatomy here?>>4610350

>>4609652
u have potential your lines are really pretty.. study fabric in motion

>>4610726
people shit on him because if you have an ounce of technical skill you will see that he's only focused on making something marketable to normies & actually has very little care for art. soulless coom garbage

>>4611671
Dislocated shoulders. Collapse them into the body a bit more. Thigh seems to be clipping into her crotch/isn't attacked properly. Distance from navel to crotch should be similar as distance from boobs to navel, thus the pelvis is too long. Because of this, you also drew her adductor longus too large to compensate. Front leg's thigh seems to be squished and the lower leg seems too long by comparison. Her heel should be able to hit her square in the butt if her leg was folded further.

Dig the subtle colours and face btw.

>>4611692
So what? Making a consumable product is a completely valid endeavour. No one is required to make "art".

>>4611706
>isn't attacked properly
*attached

>>4611687

Thanks anon, I appreciate it. Do you by any chance have any resources you know about that I could turn to? Or should I just look at any old picture?

>>4611692
But I dont even take comissions or make money off my art, I do it purely as a hobby for now.

>>4611177
Oh sorry maybe I didnt explain it right, I wanted to know if there are any videos or books that explain how to digitally paint? Its really overwhelming with all the brushes and shortcuts and stuff like that, I mean, in trad its just pick it and paint

>>4611965
Hard and soft round are perfectly usable for starters, and shortcuts are also just to make things faster.
You using photoshop?

>>4611994
not finished with this yet btw. gotta de-stiffin the hat and do other stuff with it.

>>4612002
Notice the lack of difference in value between the her clothing and the background?

>>4612010
ah yeah , i didn't think to check grey scale or anything. will add some more value ranges .
thanks anon.

>>4612023
Just make a top layer of full white and set it to colour, makes it really easy to check values once in a while.
Sky also blends into the trees btw. Face and hair are good though.

>>4612034
will try that method . usually i just use the saturation slider on a correction layer.

>>4607457
please send help, her face just looks retarded and I'm not sure how to fix

>>4612071
check your proportions of the head.

>>4612071
Nose too low, expression kind of vacant, not that bad.

>>4611849

anyone know why my clip studio is missing the default milli pen?

>>4612178
Jesus Christ kill it with fire

What are your alt artist references?
For me:
>@o___8
>@hwm4to7A3IFRHPR
>@ma_sakasama
>@tzsl
>@_GLASSRUNNER
>@op_na_yarou
>@baDombibangbigi
>@rabbitcapsule
>@gerph_art
>@yamada_9000
>@MIMIMI__R18
>@KXII
>@kutibashi3
>@RE_yomawari
>@moyashiseizoujo
>@trcoot
>@smymji6
>@hrnrx
>山田2 (24948 on pixiv)
>@rariatoo
>@otagoth

I'm sorry about the coomart, some of these are just really good

Please share your inspiration with me, I'm eager to know some artists

>>4612416
stop using generic e-celeb artists for inspiration, your work will turn soulless

>>4612416
>references
real life, because i don't ape styles like a retard
>inspirations
blinkbai
keiichi arawi
fuccosan
irri

>>4612470
I really like your style, blog?

>>4612491
But I did say inspiration

>>4612384
thanks

>>4612178
Yeah.. not to burn you, but the realistic nose and mouth mixed with the uwu eyes is unpleasant. It looks like an animu granny or somesuch.

>>4612416
It's not all anime/alt style but I just draw anime characters ,

,dowman seiman
,seth mcghee
,kawayoo
,honjou raita
,yang-do
,hirame
,bruce timm
,yves tanguy
,max ernst
,lucian freud
,egon schiele
,kandinsky
,goya
,zorn
,bilibin
,hieronymous bosch
,alma tadema
,booger oh
,picasso (unironically)
,wyndham lewis
,umezawa kazuki
,franticek kupka
rembrant
gustav moreau
vrubel
bocklin
,fkey
,singer sargent
,leyendecker
,sorola
,mossi
,redi n8
,krenz
,hxxg
,dean cornwell
,min yum
,leyendecker
,horikwawataru
,nade gata
,watanabe akio
,unxxi
,lm7
,tkmiz
,kotoyama
,john william waterhouse
,qingyi 33
,thdark
,moebius
,redjuice
,neco
,sevnzel
,reoen

>>4612625
eh, fair enough

Just a doodle for today. I've been experimenting with style lately but something about this seems kinda bland / soulless imo. Curious to others' thoughts.

>>4612091
>>4612136
tweaked here and there but I feel like something is just not working

>>4611692
>actually has very little care for art.
speak for yourself, fag. Let the poor guy do comfort zones and enjoy his art hobby

having a lot of fun with my new tablet

>>4608004
>>4608054
He used to do this in the Porn thread too back when he was known as Hardstones McFlintcock. He never accepted critique and it got to the point where even some anon posted pics of himself to prove Whitebox's anatomy was whack af. Still, he ignored it and then everyone decided to cast him out and stop replying.
It's why he doesn't drawn nsfw anymore and only posts here and spurgs out against other nsfw artists.

Been gone for a while and was wondering if some of my favourite Alts still posted here.

I've seen Fisher and Beholnika but haven't noticed Orenji or Nessie Fynn. Also there was this one guy that drew cartoon lewds but I never got his handle. One of his characters was a Buzzcut haired looking dyke with pupils the shape of '+'. Any ideas?

>>4612416
>>4612491
>>4612640
Thanks for posting these. Always nice to have new artists and styles to check out even if they're not my thing.

Been gone for a while and was wondering if some of my favourite Alts still posted here.

I've seen Fisher and Beholnika but haven't noticed Orenji or Nessie Fynn. Also there was this one guy that drew cartoon lewds but I never got his handle. One of his characters was a Buzzcut haired looking dyke with pupils the shape of '+'. Any ideas?

>>4612416
>>4612491
>>4612640
Thanks for posting these. Always nice to have new artists and styles to check out even if they're not my thing.

>>4612960
Overall I like it but the hairline is too even for my taste.

>>4613124
>where even some anon posted pics of himself to prove Whitebox's anatomy was whack af

Was that the drawing of Sami from advanced wars? I actually liked it.

>>4613124
Lmao you'd think he'd learn how to take critique like a man by now. What a retard.

dang entered wrong thread last time

>>4613314
very cool

>>4611992
Procreate

What can I do to make this better? I feel like the concept is okay but it just doesn’t seem appealing to me at all. I made this in Paint 3D bc I’m broke

>>4613542

>>4613166
Fisher posts here sometimes. Him and nessie are both active on the las site

>>4607457

idk why this cringe is the only shit I ever feel like drawing

>>4607457

pillow forts are fun yo.

>>4613542
Soul

>>4613676
Is that your autistic oc? Reminds me of those country humans things, i like your drawings.

>>4613763
It is countryhumans

>>4613769
Is that like Hetalia for non weebs?

>>4613676
cute..
I'd lewd him..

>>4613772
Yeah basically. It's more like humanised polandball though, imo

>>4613773
thanks senpai

>>4612510
instagram.com/chriskeoghart

:)

>>4613863
Very nice

>>4608205
>>4610402
>>4608177
>>4607970
go back to r/eddit

>>4607882
very nice! you should try make him blink faster.
>>4613039
cool stuff dude. wait... that's a penis

>>4610416
I get it but it could be really helpful to understand what exactly is unappealing at the moment, saying "everything" doesn't really help me see my mistakes. :(
The image you have attached to the post, for example, has a different head to body proportion is that one of the things that you find unappealing ?

>>4610453
Ooooh makes a lot of sense, recently I've been looking at those ball-jointed dolls for reference.
Thanks for the advice <3

>>4610468
>ibu_chuan
That's some awesome artwork :0 !! Thanks

>>4611128
Not so sure if i should take it as a comment, but thanks anyway xD !

drew some faces

>>4614783
obama nostalgia critic and ben shapiro's sister?

I tried to do rendering but it looks like shit :/

>>4614786
yes

starting to color

>>4614811
What about other three? Guy from the office, G-man and yanderedev?

>>4614796
Probably because you made up many of those shadows so the lighting doesn't make any sense.
Grab a simple portrait and use its lighting as a reference.

Trying really hard to improve. Give me all you got.

>>4615009
guy from the office is actually also yanderedev

>>4611692
ah! it’s the art gatekeeper! RUN!

>>4613827
neato

>>4611692
>he's only focused on making something marketable to normies & actually has very little care for art. soulless coom garbage
>Normies
>Coom garbage
>Caring this much about a drawing
Normalfags like you are the worst cancer on this site. Not only because your existence is hollow and you do not lurk moar but due to the sheer fact you try to enforce normalfag culture on here using baby words and trying to gatekeep like anyone gives a fuck.

>>4615147
He's completely right though, what he said isn't normalfag culture, normalization of porn and giving it any value is normalfag culture

>>4615163
You can stop defending yourself. Words that sound like a child wrote them and trying to enforce us all to adapt to his own delusional worldview is asinine. As for porn that is a different subject entirely lewd drawings are not pornographic, in fact i often notice those that make Porn and Lewd things that same are often disingenuous themselves pretending to be puritan and not trying to notice the difference to get responses and to troll for (you)'s.

My heart wasn’t in this one, took a week of procrastinating to finish it

>>4615047
Makes sense, thanks. I'm going back to my usual stuff now though lmao

>>4615171
>trying to enforce us all to adapt to his own delusional worldview is asinine
Nobody is enforcing anything on you dude. I don't care about degenerates, merely stating my own opinion
I like Schiele for example, his stuff is pretty erotic but I think it still has an artistic merit to it that generic animu blobs don't

>>4610382
>Jak and Daxter
Based

>>4610691
That's really good, hi-res pixel art is underrated

>>4615098
It's got nice gesture and expression, I like it

>>4615098
it's a bit off balanced like the bottom half of the left leg should be further left If you have a full length mirror I'd suggest doing the same pose and see what feels right and what feels off

also since this is clothing heavy I'd think about the material of each fabric how heavy or light it is and look at the different types of folds, this is just first google result but there are plenty of books to go more in depth https://brightlightfineart.com/six-types-of-folds-when-drawing-drapery/

>>4607457
Trying to do more stylised lines and jagged forms and I like how this came out. Might shade later. Critiques welcome

>>4615217
Love your stuff. There's just so much, for lack of a better word, 'soul'. But it's soul that's backed up by competency and imagination. Good job man.

been having fun with flat colours lately

>>4616208
that's neat, anon. nice work
i really like the setting.
>>4613738
i always dig artstyles with linework like yours, also the top one is comfy

So I'm trying to draw the shape to the right of the figure as giant handcuffs, struggling with how to angle them here - Help please and thank you

>>4615217
Dark mode bitches

>>4616070
Thanks! I’m happy you’re happy

>>4617084
>"Dark mode bitches"
>character wearing night vision goggles
>bright and colorful drawing
Listen, I generally like your drawings, but this one is clearly lacking in ambience/atmosphere

>>4607457
How long it took you to find your own style? I keep trying and trying different figures, shapes, nothing is what I'm looking for, I have an idea in my mind but its shrouded in mist, I can't...draw it....

>>4617168
find your style in 3 steps - BOOM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NEvMHRgPdyk
Ethan Becker, just watch his shit

>>4609413
cute

>>4616063
Eyes too close together, always fit one eye between the eyes.

>>4615248
One trick pony.

>>4615098
Oh no, the back of his head fell off.

>>4607725
I think that the mouth and the nose is too big in the left one. I like the right one tho.

>Drawing same characters since march
>They always look different
Toei might just hire me

I miss drawing on paper, I was much better there than on digital so I might do it later.

I might start just doing warmups with memes cause they get me more followers than random shit sketches that I don't show anyone

>>4617361
What’s this meme called again I forgot how cute it was

>>4617382
ponyo loves revolution

>>4613681
Why do you keep doing the stupid circle heads?

>>4617576
He's purposely trying to make the country ball characters suitable for R34

>>4614796
what, it looks like you are going in a good direction, keep going!

Feels like I've fucked up the vertical perspective on the face but can't figure out exactly where. Any advice?

>>4617361
God i hate zoomers

>>4617302
lol'd/
i'd hire you broski I respect the grind

>>4617905
whats the key to making cartoony blobs look good. I tried and they look retarded

>>4617361
>>4617382
>>4617399

>>4607457
stuff

>>4607457
.

sorry about the chromatic aberration thing. i don't know how to colour and everything looks kinda stiff. really trying to improve but at the same time i don't know what to study exactly. i've been trying to draw and paint faces but the second i go back to anime i don't know how to use and apply that knowledge

>>4607457
Anything before i begin to clean-up / paint?
I'd appreciate critiques on the clothes/hair since i'm mostly struggling with those

>>4618293
>Tiny AR15 barrel
/k/ is coming for you.

>>4618127
work more on volume, the key difference between yours and the other anons is that they've been able to properly convey 3D shapes using folds. I'm not sure what the english word is for a quick difference you can make, but their angles are more... obtuse?

>>4618297
Pose is v stiff but well done on tackling one of her hands, at least. Her other arm would presumably have to be quite far back to hide behind a frilly dress like that.

>>4618451
Something doesn't sit right about the skirt - I think it's the fold in front of her left leg. It looks like it's going around the right leg, but it doesn't interact with her left leg at all. Hair's good imo, but I think the pose is a little bit stiff. I'm not sure what you were going for with it, so maybe it's intentional, but I think you could exaggerate it a little to make it more interesting.

>>4618483
thanks, yes i'm clueless when it comes to drawing skirts, i'll see if i can find a ref to study
As for the pose, pic related is the base sketch for it, the fact that it looks stiff, i think maybe is something to do with her arms, or the head angle?

face cute?

>>4618503
you could probably just make it look like it's wrapping around her leg and it'd work, I'd redline it but I don't have my ipad to hand rn. I wouldn't necessarily stress about the pose too much as it comes down to what you're trying to achieve. I think it just comes down to not a lot of movement; aside from the arms being up and the leg slightly to the side, there's not really any implied motion or anything. You could push the boat out and make it a lot more dynamic if you wanted, but it's definitely not necessary.

Oh also I feel like there should be more folds on the sleeve around the wrists but that's very minor, I only just noticed

>>4614119
Awesome

>>4618512
ok thanks, i'll redo the skirt and see what i can do about those folds. Like i said, i'm struggling with clothing stuff, that's in fact the reason i made this drawing

>>4618510
no

>>4618542
why
how make cute

>>4618556
You have been drawing the same face for 3 months, you could've figure it out by now

>>4618563
pls tell me i am not smart

>>4618568
Don't you have favorite artists that you want to draw like? I know you're not into anime but it's not like you have a choice

>>4618510
Removed the strange ear, the baldness, the nigger lips and the weird eyes, and a smaller nose.

can i make my arts more readible withouth sacrificing color saturation? What does it look like to you?

>>4618574
>dude just steal other's stylization!

>>4618732
why yes i will steal that style you stole from someone else

@4618510
Youve been drawing the same face for months. If you don't know you're ngmi or go ask redditors that can tolerate you

>>4618732
>dude just came up with your own style by drawing from imagination without observing different styles!
Based retard

>>4617361
CRINGE

>>4618624
good self-criticism. try to group the shades of gray. your drawing has a chaotic grouping.

The OP has pinterist as a reference place, but is there anywhere else? My drawings are getting too anime.
Is there a tag on pixiv or artstation or something where I can see some good anime x western mix.
I need inspiration

>>4607738
this is good, you def have an eye for anatomy getting better will be easier for you than the average beginner

>>4611032
looks racist

bump.

I made a knight based on Gaudi's Basilica

>>4618127
I try to use natural smooth lines that connect well with eacother. If possible and try to convey that there is some mass there. Also trying to push that with simple rendering too.
>>4618483
What they said a bit too.

>>4619212
how did you mess up the shape of a cereal box

>>4618935
I don't like it as much as your other stuff. Not that I think it's bad but it just feels like it's lacking something.

>>4619079
Blog?

>>4617302
Were you posting on /beg/ a year ago? If you're the guy I'm thinking of you've done good man.

>>4619506
mpitchkites on Instagram. Here's another

Finished these 2 today

>>4619548
Thanks man. Really dig your creativity.

>>4619011
there's a lot of potential here

if you clean some of the messy splotches here and there, and straighten out your shadow shapes, this would look 5x better instantaneously

Here's the latest page of a shitty comic I'm making.

Just needs a few changes and it'll be ready for tomorrow's release.

>>4618510
You're getting close, but the face is a little long and the mouth is too far down it. If you moved it upwards and made the face a little more squat I think this could work out.

>>4618451
hey that's pretty good

>>4618469
They make ARs in pretty much every caliber you can think of, although one like that would be pretty weird to bring into battle.

>>4618935
what's your blog?

>>4618510
Yeah it's cute, but the right cheek looks chubbier than the left. Don't listen to >>4618594 either because their corrections look like shit

Why did whitebox complain about coomers when he draws every woman like this >>4619740
Is it self -hatred?

>>4618935
>>4619506
Oh dang it. Thanks anon, I felt like there was something missing or wrong, but I decided to finish it anyway. I'll try to draw something better next time.

>>4619775
https://twitter.com/stellarnyart
https://www.instagram.com/stellar.ny/

>>4619810
Because a certain clique nearly turned /ic into another /b or /trash, until anons got fed up and reported their threads en masse.

>>4619832
talking bout yourself whitebox?

>>4619011
fix her dumb derpina face

>>4619814
Your art has soul, who'd you learn from reference wise

>>4618851
yeah thats fair, i dont like working with grayscale, i prefer starting with color, i think i could make grayscale copy of image im working on, to manage it better, thanks for the graphic

>>4614280
nice!

>>4620377

Thanks, anon.

>>4620760
Cute. Your rendering is nice and all but it's lacking in either depth of shadows or colors in your local values. You decide which you want to focus on there.

>>4618510
Are you still mad that /ic/ made fun of your kangaroo Proko? Don't you have shitty youtube videos to make?

>>4615098
Ok so I made a more refined sketch and worked a few things out!

>>4618515
thanks.
>>4614280
dude i think you should see about cloth folding. anyways i like her, pretty cute.
>>4617302
you don't seems puting much focus in make them look the same, try it harder. it's far better than toei by the way lol
>>4618510
cute.
>>4619011
ICO feeling in that one. love it.

>>4620760
Is this ruri?

>>4620907
damn you got a blog?

>>4619660
Thank you, anon

burned out

>>4620760
how'd you do this

>>4621663
a lof of the stuff on the bottom left should be flatter, no?

>>4621500
I really like your interpretation of a mage like that

>>4619011
u have a loooooot of potential but your faces and bodies are complete trash

>>4610544
>>4615098
>>4618624
BLOG

>>4620841
Yeah, I always end up losing local values of my colors. Is it mainly on the hair or all over the face?

>>4621376
Some random cosplayer. Maybe she's cosplaying this Ruri?

>>4621670
For the eyes, I just followed one tutorial I found on twitter. For the hair, I just tried to copy artists I like.

>>4621944
>Yeah, I always end up losing local values of my colors. Is it mainly on the hair or all over the face?
It's the face. Though the hair could use a little variation too, it's definitely more solid than the face.

>>4607457
I hate this but I gotta jump on board the pride month stuff

>>4621993
Aside from that complete mess of crosshatching on the vest, this is nice and comfy.

>>4621986
very cute style, blog?

>>4622038
https://twitter.com/sovireich

>>4621993
Study how folds work, those sleeves are a mess.

>>4618297
Are you a female?

gonna go to sleep so might as well do the new thread now
go go go >>4622403

>>4621993
I actually think the sleeves look nice and fiery, it helps give the character some identity about having a hidden savage side

>>4622342
chicken scratch bad

>>4622000
Ahh, I really struggled with the vest lol. Thank you anyway
>>4622072
I tried to mimic this one style but don’t think it worked ;_;
>>4623772
I’m glad you think so anon ^_^ thank you