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One Page Thread Anonymous Tue May 12 23:43:59 2020 No.4572154 [Reply] [Original]

Draw a single comic page and post. Can be as finished or as rough as you like, just draw lads.

>>	Anonymous Tue May 12 23:47:39 2020 No.4572158 Sure. You first OP

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 01:27:21 2020 No.4572289 >>4572154 I’d do it but I don’t wanna get bullied

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 02:09:10 2020 No.4572345 >>4572289 Post it! We can help set you on the right path. Who wants to be stuck making art that they're embarrassed to show?

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 02:10:02 2020 No.4572346 File: 2.15 MB, 4032x3024, 0xeePAK.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] funny valorant comic

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 02:27:04 2020 No.4572370 hello?

Anonymous Wed May 13 02:32:11 2020 No.4572379

I've been struggling with this question for a long time but I could never find how you would write a comic that is less than 5ish pages. There are so many tutorials and instructors on writing everything from full length movies to typical 22 page comic books, but nothing on something that is just several pages or less. The only stories I can find in this format would be comedic stories but I'm looking for more serious stories.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 02:38:48 2020 No.4572387 >>4572379 The japanese have a story structure called Kishotenketsu. It was developed from 4 line poems, and can be used from 4 panel comics to long-form serials. Try checking it out. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pPxjTVpY55w

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 02:46:41 2020 No.4572402 File: 646 KB, 1626x1104, 20200513_014551.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Lol sadfag.jpg

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 02:48:44 2020 No.4572404 File: 26 KB, 800x600, Untitled8.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 02:59:37 2020 No.4572426 >>4572404 Black hole suUuUuUUUn

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 03:10:13 2020 No.4572449 File: 1.23 MB, 832x900, cojfdskre.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4572154

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 03:46:29 2020 No.4572495 How many of this threads are we gonna have?

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 03:49:39 2020 No.4572499 >>4572387 I never heard of this, cool find.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 04:24:23 2020 No.4572542 >>4572495 I’d rather have these than eceleb or shitpost threads plus I like looking at everyone’s work.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 05:05:09 2020 No.4572591 File: 1.02 MB, 3024x4032, a7cEpy6.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] this gon be dope

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 05:10:20 2020 No.4572598 File: 137 KB, 786x1260, scene.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4572154

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 05:15:15 2020 No.4572605 >>4572154 is this manga any good? (Kakukaku Shikajika )

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 05:16:56 2020 No.4572607 >>4572591 why is he sucking off a ghost?

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 05:18:36 2020 No.4572610 File: 487 KB, 1280x958, C23B4D33-7895-4840-B33A-2BE1B00D7868.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 05:18:45 2020 No.4572611 >>4572605 Not amazing but breddy good. The sensei character is based on her actual teacher and he’s pretty motivational.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 05:29:36 2020 No.4572622 >>4572607 ghosts are hot

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 05:33:58 2020 No.4572626 Haven't we already got a thread like this? >>4553673

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 05:39:24 2020 No.4572635 >>4572598 has it been proven that spongebob can bleed?

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 05:49:19 2020 No.4572649 File: 249 KB, 786x1260, scene2.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4572598

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 05:59:35 2020 No.4572667 >>4572649 spongebob harnessing his nucluer superpowers?

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 06:20:54 2020 No.4572701 File: 114 KB, 712x872, scene3.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4572649

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 06:27:06 2020 No.4572718 File: 1.41 MB, 1855x1391, sovaass.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4572591

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 09:31:12 2020 No.4572960 >>4572542 Happyboy?

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 09:41:13 2020 No.4572982 File: 441 KB, 595x842, TreSIdorOMW.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 10:17:22 2020 No.4573026 File: 1.39 MB, 2192x3508, landing.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 15:24:39 2020 No.4573695 >>4572387 Interesting

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 15:54:03 2020 No.4573744 >>4572960 What did he mean by this?

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 15:54:05 2020 No.4573745 >>4572982 hmm, the arrow kind of ruins it. It's like you just put a big huge sign on the fact that your layout isn't perfect.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 15:56:56 2020 No.4573761 >>4572667 Its sasukes mangekyou sharingan, but the illustrator fucked up because its the left eye that summons amaterasu (the eternal black flames you see in the next page)

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 16:39:46 2020 No.4573898 >>4573745 hmm... yea might remove it next pass anything you liked?

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 16:40:27 2020 No.4573901 >>4573898 everything else

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 16:45:46 2020 No.4573911 File: 919 KB, 597x900, reTWJKFD.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Drew some panels and filled them in for practice.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 18:15:06 2020 No.4574140 >>4572370 Hi anon!

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 18:18:16 2020 No.4574145 >>4572449 anon... the snow looks like a bukkake

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 18:27:03 2020 No.4574160 >>4574145 fug...maybe I should have a giant jizzing all over him in the next panel.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 18:42:00 2020 No.4574186 >>4573911 this actually pretty good

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 18:59:11 2020 No.4574226 No theme, no motivation to participate. Freedom means indifference!

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 19:07:16 2020 No.4574253 >>4573901 well thanks man!

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 20:05:06 2020 No.4574362 >>4574226 Do a page about having no motivation to participate and freedom meaning indifference.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 21:05:57 2020 No.4574485 >>4574186 Thanks anon

>>	Anonymous Wed May 13 22:34:56 2020 No.4574630 >>4572289 Don’t be a pussy

>>	Anonymous Thu May 14 00:48:02 2020 No.4574837 >>4572626 This is probably for people just making random pages for practice, that one seems to be for people who are working on an actual comic.

>>	Anonymous Thu May 14 04:41:05 2020 No.4575287 >>4572610 I loike it.

>>	Anonymous Thu May 14 14:10:06 2020 No.4576404 >>4572701 Reminds me of narmak

>>	Anonymous Thu May 14 15:35:00 2020 No.4576634 >>4572404 Prometheus deleted scene?

>>	Anonymous Thu May 14 17:00:12 2020 No.4576876 >>4576634 Having that drawing in the middle of that gobshite movie would actually be an improvement.

>>	Anonymous Fri May 15 05:53:26 2020 No.4578287 >>4572718 Are those pastels?

>>	Anonymous Fri May 15 08:20:19 2020 No.4578480 File: 1.19 MB, 867x1196, Ambush 01.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4572154 here's one I'll ink later.

>>	Anonymous Sat May 16 00:58:03 2020 No.4580335 >>4578480 Lookin good, I like it.

>>	Anonymous Sat May 16 14:10:13 2020 No.4581587 Bumping because I really like this thread

>>	Anonymous Sat May 16 17:47:35 2020 No.4582028 File: 1.27 MB, 3541x5016, Harnessing the harness.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Saw a theory I liked about sigma, so thought that putting my part to it would be fun. Haven't drawn for ages so this will be a challenge

>>	Anonymous Sat May 16 17:49:30 2020 No.4582031 >>4572495 I have never seen a thread like this in the past 5 years on /ic/, so chances are a lot of others haven't either. Can't be on here 24/7

>>	Anonymous Sat May 16 17:57:34 2020 No.4582045 File: 1.08 MB, 688x1000, paguuueeee.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Trying to into buildings.

>>	Anonymous Sat May 16 19:58:31 2020 No.4582283 >>4573026 This has got some soul to it.

>>	Anonymous Sat May 16 22:38:14 2020 No.4582551 >>4582028 I believe in you lad. Do it.

>>	Anonymous Sat May 16 23:57:04 2020 No.4582708 >>4582045 what is the panel order on the bottom right?

>>	Anonymous Sun May 17 00:12:41 2020 No.4582745 >>4582708 Top one then bottom two (left to right)

>>	Anonymous Sun May 17 00:17:37 2020 No.4582755 >>4582745 what wee you trying to convey there? I'm trying to see it like a camera moving through his head like in a movie, but I never saw it focusing on the eyes, then lapel and then his mouth

>>	Anonymous Sun May 17 00:22:52 2020 No.4582764 >>4582755 Yeah I was basically trying to convey what you described. First the reader focuses on his eyes, then across the lapel over to his mouth but maybe it didn't work as intended. Do you think it would've been better if I just used one panel?

Anonymous Sun May 17 00:41:53 2020 No.4582796
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>>4582764
It felt like there was something there for me to look, so I got confused
Usually what I see is just the camera pan down to focus on the smile (I'm guessing that is what you're focusing on)
I'm no expert, my feedback is from a readers perpective. Give Framed Ink a read, what I know I got from there,

>>	Anonymous Sun May 17 00:42:45 2020 No.4582799 >>4582045 Read perspective made easy

>>	Anonymous Sun May 17 00:48:54 2020 No.4582811 >>4582796 I see what you mean, thank you for the feedback, I'll look into it. >>4582799 What's wrong with the perspective? I used a grid to draw the building and stuck pretty close to it.

>>	Anonymous Sun May 17 01:18:14 2020 No.4582854 >>4572718 I’m sorry but your style is atrocious garbage

>>	Anonymous Sun May 17 03:34:56 2020 No.4583002 >>4582811 Your perspective for that scale is wrong and your hallway wonky. The roof is also not looking great or realistic

>>	Anonymous Sun May 17 03:53:46 2020 No.4583009 >>4583002 okay I'll study more. Thanks for the feedback.

>>	Anonymous Sun May 17 08:07:49 2020 No.4583325 File: 361 KB, 1100x1400, R34BotSk.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Maybe I'll work on this later - zero ambition today. I like the idea of the thread though.

>>	Anonymous Sun May 17 08:15:07 2020 No.4583342 >>4572346 soul

>>	Anonymous Sun May 17 21:15:42 2020 No.4584712 >>4583325 Looks interesting, I like it.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 18 03:14:47 2020 No.4585259 Fuck the mods

>>	Anonymous Mon May 18 17:16:19 2020 No.4586619 File: 1.03 MB, 1518x2000, R34BotBKSM.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I don't have enough hours in the day, so considering this done. Hope more decide to share, I like seeing what everyone else has been working on.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 18 17:20:40 2020 No.4586630 >>4586619 that's stupid. i like it.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 18 17:42:29 2020 No.4586689 >>4586619 This is a perfect graphic rendition of that add

>>	Anonymous Mon May 18 18:06:57 2020 No.4586757 File: 296 KB, 800x1209, pg_32_rough.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I'm entering the webtoon contest and doing rough sketches of all of the pages before I draw a single finished line. Here's one such rough

>>	Anonymous Tue May 19 15:21:55 2020 No.4589318 >>4586757 I’m also thinking about entering, good luck lad!

>>	Anonymous Tue May 19 21:21:48 2020 No.4590145 File: 527 KB, 1400x786, kishotenketsu.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4572387

>>	Anonymous Tue May 19 21:22:50 2020 No.4590146 >>4590145 there are better story examples

>>	Anonymous Tue May 19 21:56:04 2020 No.4590222 File: 97 KB, 627x1000, drifting_classroom_suspense....jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I guess Umezu's Drifting Classroom was the inspiration for Ito's Dissolving Classroom...?

>>	Anonymous Tue May 19 22:01:55 2020 No.4590233 >>4572387 This isn’t directly related to manga but I’d recommend this if you’re looking to learn about story structure. It’s a short lecture by Kurt Vonnegut. https://youtu.be/oP3c1h8v2ZQ

>>	Anonymous Tue May 19 22:21:14 2020 No.4590259 File: 98 KB, 631x1000, drifting_classroom_v01_001.dc_v01c01_016.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Tue May 19 22:39:29 2020 No.4590283 File: 251 KB, 611x724, merc wip sketch.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4578480 Wait a minute, is that...?

>>	Anonymous Tue May 19 22:42:08 2020 No.4590290 >>4583325 You should swap the positions of the first and second panel

>>	Anonymous Wed May 20 00:03:59 2020 No.4590460 >>4589318 You too! I'm a slow artist so I'm worried about time constraints the most, but here's to hoping we both make the deadline and make it well

>>	Anonymous Wed May 20 00:32:08 2020 No.4590507 File: 148 KB, 583x1971, icComic.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4574226 >>4574362 Not the originator of this but I had liked this idea.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 20 00:45:36 2020 No.4590538 File: 25 KB, 779x608, testc.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Wed May 20 00:56:41 2020 No.4590554 >>4590507 Originator here. Me on the picture.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 20 01:10:48 2020 No.4590580 File: 13 KB, 262x349, 1584399032938.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4572387 Le Journey of the Hero but with chink ginseng flavor. Idealest should just not write at all, fucking barren retards.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 20 01:13:25 2020 No.4590589 >>4590580 dummy

>>	Anonymous Wed May 20 01:15:23 2020 No.4590593 >>4590554 You look like that? London?

>>	Anonymous Wed May 20 01:22:09 2020 No.4590611 >>4590593 No I have long wavy hair, round glasses and a jew nose.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 20 01:36:42 2020 No.4590644 >>4590611 Ah I see, you mean you just reacted like that. Well, thanks for the idea.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 20 14:16:34 2020 No.4591835 File: 420 KB, 940x1216, E4AF4C8C-DC20-4339-A96D-3B4A8B27ED04.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I just finished rough drafts of my next two pages.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 20 14:17:22 2020 No.4591838 File: 623 KB, 940x1216, 0C8A605E-C82F-41AF-A499-EE2D53D2CA05.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4591835 I need to move the bubbles in the first panel here to the left, I know.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 20 14:54:04 2020 No.4591906 File: 547 KB, 1280x958, 6102473F-1411-4480-BAEE-A01C48D453D4.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4572610 I’m back. 75 pages.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 20 17:38:32 2020 No.4592238 >>4591906 >75 pages God damn, good job anon!

>>	Anonymous Thu May 21 01:18:33 2020 No.4593282 File: 2.45 MB, 1500x2125, ic comic.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] first time drawing a comic on this new tablet

>>	Anonymous Thu May 21 02:00:24 2020 No.4593339 File: 45 KB, 625x640, I DONT CARE IF ITS THE MIDDLE OF THE NIGHT KEEP THAT DRAWING QUOTA UP.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4590283 still gives me a smile everytime i see it

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