/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4564628
What if we don't want anything to do with Westernized /co/ tier palcomix Calarts cancer? Can we have this one as purely Hentai general instead? Western shit practically has two boards which are /co/ and /trash/ why a general thread?

New character

>>4564628
Wondering if anyone has tips for drawing dicks? I don't exactly have one to reference

>>4564890
visit /hm/, they usually have a few threads dedicated entirely to them if you want reference. other than that doxy is the only person who's made a decent comprehensive tutorial

>>4564804
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>>4564814
I like how you draw your porn characters, they are twink-ish but not overly femenine like jjfrenchie.

>>4564905
I've said this before and I'll say it again: I love you.

>>4564653
let's just keep further and further dividing the generals until we all have one for ourselves to sit in alone

>>4564905
stop posting

>>4564905
>>4564649

>>4564890
You're on the internet, you have a sea of penises at your disposal

>>4564905
While your drawing skill is pretty high, I just really hate that ugly style of "anime bastardized with western features".

>>4564890
I can show you mine, if you’re into drawing small ones.

>>4564902
Well I tried, I'd appreciate criticism though. Thanks for the advice

>>4565380
his drawing skill is among the lowest in this general lol

>>4565543
Not by a long shot, he just has odd taste that really hurts the general appeal. His fundamentals are solid and steadily improving, same for his understanding of anatomy and perspective. His figures are very hit or miss in terms of stiffness, which makes me think the stiff ones are from imagination and the more natural ones are from ref, which is exactly what he should be using right now to push things along. All in all he’s really not that bad and it’s been fun watching him improve.

>>4565781
Imagine writing this post about yourself and thinking it's not an obvious samefag.
People don't flame you because you suck, it's because your work is very distasteful and unpleasant to look at

I worked on this some more following the feedback from last thread and I think it looks better and more natural now. Thank you to those 2 anons who gave me advice, I appreciate you taking time out to help me.
May not continue this but I feel it's been good practice.
>>4565826
I agree with that post. I honestly do think anon's drawings show good understanding of a lot of things, but the aesthetic choices just aren't going to appeal to some people because they're so strong and particular, like JoJo or One Piece's styles. I think it's reasonable to say you can see real skill under it though, so I'd believe it's not a samefag.

>>4564628
I will continue to postin alt and there is nothing you can do about it

>>4565826
Not samefagging, i just think he gets an unreasonable amount of shit just because of his style

>>4564804
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>>4566007
I love these

Sketched this out today, how's it looking?

>>4566743
Looking cute

Does anyone have any study/process/tutorial from InCase?

I'm starting to really dislike doing lineart, my process is to sketch the same pose 2-3 times to refine it and then try and put consistency in the lines and then color the stuff.
I'd like to experiment with another workflow, any advice?
I liked doing thick lines but in the end the process is so tedious i'd rather paint but I paint worse than I draw.

Also i'm sketching some more male on futa

>>4567498
Try with force method for dynamic figures

>>4567498
can you make his dick smaller and her bigger?

>>4567527
Thank you for the suggestion, I watched a few videos on Proko about it. Doesn't really answer my dilemma, sure it helps on figure drawing which I need to improve but the process is still the same: sketch and lineart.
>>4567591
I can. Not sure I should.

>>4565978
Looking much better. I wish there was a better place than here for coomarts.

Getting the expression you want takes like 90% of the time spent drawing, moving on to something else after these. Could I get some crit please?

>>4568151
love it

>>4564905
Face doesn’t look repulsive. I see improvement

>>4568151
I love this, hopefully I will reach your level soon I hope I dream

>>4567121
Thank you!

>>4568151
looking great! but tuck her calf+foot on the second frame under the red dude's leg

>>4568156
Not bad, but the arms are lookin kinda tiny. I like her face

Just started sketching a starfox thing. As usual, I've been struggling a big with the forearms

>>4564628
>he's still going with this thing
I'm not posting my work in these threads.

Can I please get some other opinions on this face?
I still have some trouble getting facial expressions, especially when it comes to the eyes, and I've been staring at this for hours trying to figure out whether it's alright or not. At this point I can't even tell if the proportions and placement are too exaggerated anymore. I've tried mirroring it every way and zooming in and out but I just need some fresh pair of eyes

>>4568178
I like the direction you're taking this. I've been trying to picture how to make a sexy Fox McCloud for months and couldn't figure it out but I really like your version.

i wanna draw more pron

>>4564808
not a furry not gay but i would raw dog ol boy

>>4568384
Thank you! I had the same issue when I tried to draw him and wolf about six months ago. I hadn't touched him again until today and I like this version a lot more.

>>4568486
Great stuff keep going :))

>>4568326
It's obvious that there are some fundamental issues here that I can't personally help with. The best advice I can give is to work more on learning construction and draw more real human heads to get a better understanding of the structure of a face + head.

this took way to gosh dang long to draww
https://youtu.be/OMmeKVBsOAs

>>4568486
hah, gay
seriously tho, nice work, like the tongue with pills one, been kickin idea like that around in my head for while

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>>4568151
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>>4564814
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>>4564804
dope

>>4564905
hella, love seeing you always improving, i only hope i can keep the same drive

>>4568169
>>4568682
>>4565781
thanks, glad people notice the steps i'm making in trying to improve, i know my tastes and content make me a more niche artist, but it's a niche i'm happy to fill and i just want to fill it well

>>4568718
> reading the first part

Penis feeling alive, check

> reading second part

Penis feels dead, check

>>4568800
fair lol, this one was a request from a friend who likes this kind of stuff

>>4568682
ty uwu, do you have a blog I could stalk?

I started a messy color test, how's my light source looking? I'm not used to this.

>>4567829
Thanks!
And I understand, although I feel like this place is a pretty good barometer for what's hot or not if not the best place for crit.
Speaking of which I really need to figure out how to make my stuff more fappable. I keep drawing things I think are hot but they don't seem to interest many people.

>>4569048
I haven't seen your other works, but your post in this thread has major egon schiele vibes.

>>4569048
Face > body, the number 1 rule of beauty, both for aesthetics and for fap factor. Improve the face until peeps get erection from those alone. Hot body will double the pleasure

>>4569053
I had never heard of him before but his work is nice. I think I see how my drawing resembles it. He's a lot more free and loose with his though.
>>4569076
Thanks, this seems like sound advice.

>>4569076
Actually I might as well ask since I'm here. Did you think the face on my drawing itt wasn't good? I had thought it was a nice face but I can't just go off of only my own judgement.

>>4568805
You have a very good friend.

>>4569304
hard agree, she's pretty cool

>>4564905
I don’t have any more gains for you to steal

>>4567382
I haven't seen any tutorials, but InCase streams working sessions almost weekly:
https://picarto.tv/drawingbutts

>>4568682
would love to see your process

>>4570019
Getting big Himukai vibes from this

2 minute gestures from random /hc/ images.

>>4568151
Do you post to twitter?

The eyes are the same in both poses, it implies that the second picture is not THAT ecstatic if she has this expression in her eyes every now and then.
Make her pupil small and increase the contrast by changing saturation/lightness, something like that.

>>4569274
She looks like a bored crack whore. There are 4 kinds of expressions out there, based on different personality types, which invoke different sexual reactions. Cute (cheerful, kawai ugu type), sexy (flirty, cocky, provocative type), beautiful (simply high level, aristocratic attractiveness with no poser attempts to get attention), and mysterious (2deep4u, look at my inner world pretentious type)

If a character doesn't fit any of those archetypes, then he\she will never be considered truly desirable. Most artists fail to deliver personality behind the art. Sometimes a tiny element like a thot biting her lip is more important than all the titties in the world

I'm not feeling this anatomy, can someone help me please?

>>4570447
Is she wearing a strap on or a feeldo? Have you ever looked at a penis in your life before? No? Have sex femcel.

>>4570447
I am not feeling what do you mean. She's a bit chubby and looks like a broiler in a vacuum package with those tight clothes. Realistic in a way, some folk will enjoy it

>>4570470
>a bit chubby
What

>>4570476
5 extra kilos, totally fine. Ya know, the word chubby these days became the politically correct synonym to the words "fucking obese pig". The real chubby is exactly that, 5-10 kg overweight, nothing that threatens the health. Became the norm in 21st century in most western countries. Look at the legs and that tiny piece of lard beneath the armpit.

>>4570371
>a bored crack whore
Wow, ouch.
Okay then I'll try to do better with that... I guess I'll go do some studies of women's faces. Thanks.

>>4568718
If you just took a full day of just practicing faces your art would become so much better.
Subject matter aside the only thing that's bad in this image is his face, and it's bad enough that it's ruining the entire image.

>>4570579
I'm not the anon that was critiquing you before but I think it's an interesting face. Not saying it looks like Olympia the painting but I get that kind of vibe from your face. Looks kinda like a failed seductive stare, then again I'm not sure what kind of emotion you were looking to portray. Good luck with the studies anon I can't wait to see how this piece develops.

>>4569012
@nellipher! (i guess i needa workshop my signature some of it's not legible ;-; )

>>4570032
my process sucks lol, i have difficulty going about things consistently, i jus kinda bodge things together until it works but here you go: https://files.catbox.moe/7k2971.mp4

could do this with a few other pieces mayb but those vids would be even longer

>>4570019
ver cute

>>4570765
Thanks for the encouragement anon. Yeah I guess I was kind of going for something like that painting you mentioned, something sultry. You won't have to wait long to see how it develops though because I'm abandoning it here. I'm struggling too much with it and not feeling it anymore. Maybe studies will spark some inspiration later.

I did another sketch

>>4568156
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>>4568682
Thank you.
>>4568178
>>4570095
Thanks for the crit, I'm having computer problems so I'll address those issues after formating.
>Do you post to twitter
nope

>>4569580
i think you meant gainz siphon

Is there anything here that is wrong in a glaringly obvious way? I think I've been staring at this for too long... I've been fiddling with wolf for a while now.

>>4571414
Weird hand on the left. Looks like an attempt at foreshortening gone wrong. Either it's broken, or his forearm is extremely short

>>4570984
Well it's good to not to stagnate on a single piece for too long, as long as you got something out of it and learning. Pls keep us posted on your studies, I love the gesture in your characters. And hey you can always revisit old work once you have leveled up if so inclined.
>>4570888
Checked
Not the anon who asked for blog but thank you. I tried a couple letter combinations and was having difficulties finding you. The video was very insightful for me and would love to see the process of other pieces. Do you use reference for the poses? They're really dynamic. Something about how you draw the hip region and back arch plus the variation between slim and thicc areas really gets to me.

>>4570491
Oh you are right, i didn't notice it was supposed to be weight

>>4571233

Hey there, finished drawing another baphomet, I think this is my best work so far. Critique is super welcome.
Before I started to learn drawing a year ago, I had tried request multiple times in writethreads a story about a mature Baphomet becoming a virtuous nun, but people always answered me with "it's not canon MG lore, baph is loli, etc". I'm glad I was finally able to draw her.

>>4571813
My references, for lulz sake.

>>4571813
halal

>>4571813
Make the tummy sexier, and the text letters less computer generated looking. Otherwise - dayum you are gut

>>4571813
>learnt to draw to say fuck off to writefags
Pretty based

>>4571813
This is so fricken sexy and im not even into preggos. I wish I could give you some good crit but all I have to say is you improve so fast, every pic is leagues better than the last.
It would be nice if her legs and crotch (with thick bush) were visible through the semi transparent sheer dress. Even better if there was a dick bulge.
If you do take this anons advice>>4572077
I would suggest some type of gothic or medieval font.

Keep up the amazing work anon

>>4571480
glad i could help! spent most of today learning davinci resolve so i could make these lol, man video editing is almost as big a pain in the ass as drawing =w=
here's another tho: https://files.catbox.moe/3fvfp5.mp4

unfortunately i'm not really smart enough to tell you why i make most choices i do, at least not yet (fingers crossed lol), i jus kinda know what i want when i see it, the rest is jus the drawing equivalent of monkey's with typewriters. really horny monkeys. really, really horny typewriters. like all the keycaps are textured like those "realskin" dildos an the ink squirts out with every keystroke, an it's like, water based lube? an the paper's that gross edible panties material an i as;fj i need to go to bed i odon't even remember were i was going w ith this

Hit me

>>4564628
there is one nsfw thread why do you need more of the same garbage but under a different title

>>4570888
>here you go:https://files.catbox.moe/7k2971.mp4
Wow thanks. Appreciate the insight. Nice to know you pretty much work the same as me, in layers refining repeatedly. I thought you just drew these in one take for some reason.

>ver cute
thank you!

>>4572757
forgot my today's sketch

>>4572364
blog

>>4572364
Blog please

>>4572887
Is that desk massive or is that girl tiny? Either way, you'd be falling backwards trying to lean back on a desk like that.

>>4572994
what lol

>>4572541
wHEN THE FOUR CORNERS OF THIS COCOON COLLIDE

>>4572994
It's a school desk, so it really is 1.5 times bigger than it should be

>>4564628
I was inspired by that murder hornet vs mantis gif, thanks for viewing

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>>4572077
>>4571872
Thanks, finding proper fonts is bit harder than I thought, previous baphomet pic was going to have a title but I gave up since all fonts I tried looked shitty.
I think I'm going to draw a kappa fishing with legs spread open or something like that next.

Yes, I know it’s bad. One day I’ll learn proper line weight control and how to obey lighting rules.

>>4573315
thick black lines are too distracting imo, try setting line layer to multiply and changing its color to something warm and dark

>>4573315
Tbh linework is more than fine already, it's the overall colors that need a lot of learning. I have a professional monitor, and the pic really hurts my eyes, it's all glossy and artificial. Focus on improving colors and you will get to the next level, right now it reminds me of those old caricatures in newspapers, lol. Otherwise great work

>>4573223
Really creepy, but thumbs up for the fetish. Long tongues are just so sexy

Can /ic/ settle a debate between my bf and I?

He says I should change the water bottle to either a tube of tennis balls or a washcloth. I'd like to keep water bottle because I'd like something connecting with the edge of the canvas and inject a little movement into an otherwise static image.

Which would look better in your opinion.

I'd appreciate some help with the hair and dildo?

>>4573572
If you decide of a tube of tennis balls then you could have them falling out towards the edge of the canvas.
I think a water bottle would look better though.

>>4571014
love your work. if you want a critique, it's a little stiff.

>>4572887
>>4573025
Those desks can only be lain on if you're lying vertically. They're too small to support a human horizontally, and even then it's a squeeze.

>>4573587
>then you could have them falling out towards the edge of the canvas

Oh shit your brain is way bigger than mine.

>>4573572
Cloth/towel would make the most sense and not break the composition. Having the water bottle with liquid spilling breaks the vertical gesture and ends up taking attention because of that, which I assume isn't the focal point of the image.

>>4573633
Honestly I hadn't really thought much about composition or focal points. I'm just doing this gay little furry AI meme, but you're right. Cheers for the advice.

>>4573647
we get it, you're gay, shut the fuck up

>>4573531
Thank you. If you really wanna be creeped out tho, watch the gif/webm on >>>/an/
>I did hornet-Chan a kindness

>>4573572
I think bottle in her hand doesn't really look like a water bottle for, it's too wide and with a weird shape. You could also tip it a bit more so it's almost falling from her hand, it would bring a bit more dynamic to your picture and also increase the flow of water. The way the water is flowing out in your pic is too artificial and unrealistic.

>>4573657
You really don't get it at all if you think that's the case.

>>4573577
This is just personal preference, but although the dildo is accurate to real life products, I always found the the straight, pole-like strap-ons to be chronically unsexy. Adding a little more upward movement + girth would help a lot imo. Otherwise I like it.

>>4573522
Different anon, but what kind of monitor would you recommend for that? I'm looking at it and noticing some gloss, but nothing outstanding..

>>4573690
Anything that comes close or covers 100% sRGB, preferably more, reaching into Adobe RGB color space. I use a Dell Ultrasharp, those dependent on the model cover from 100 to 110% of colors. With 3 different monitors standing nearby, i can assure you it's extremely noticeable. Having a nice monitor is a must for anyone doing color critical work. Obviously we are in a learning thread, so nothing too serious, but in the future every artist must consider researching all that crap and getting decent hardware

>>4573709
I honestly doubt most of the people here are going to drop $500-700 on a monitor desu.

>>4573712
Anything that's not utter garbage will do. Most artists don't even bother researching, and trying to color with old dimmed VA, or god forbid TN monitors. It's even more pain for those who want a cheap screen tablet, those are usually even worse than a bad monitor.

Imho color proofing is less of a perfectionist douchebaggery, and more of a "i sleep well because i know that my work looks objectively correct" type of thing. Nothing is as heartbreaking as changing hardware and finding out that those pics you loved for years are actually quite a bit different than you thought...

>>4573572
To match the color theme I would pick the tube of tennis balls and have them falling out like the other anon suggested.

>>4573749
Sick, I'll go with that then. Cheers.

>>4573315
I think the art is fine, but the way you finished it wasted it's potential by making it look like a cartoon made in flash due to the combination of lineart and colors.
There's lines with size variation in you work, but they are too thick so it's distracting and no really noticeable. Usually thick lines are better when used to create an outline of the character. Thick lines on her fac and eyes are too distracting.
There should have a bit more color contrast in her hair. and better use of shadows, there's literally no shadows in your work and that also makes it look flat. Colors are also super saturated.

https://youtu.be/yBZgHVXGyBg

>>4572757
no probabo!

>I thought you just drew these in one take for some reason.
i often do that when drawing traditionally an can occassionally pull it off digitally but usually i'm too indecisive an perfectionist-ish to avoid falling into the pattern of working something until i've gone insane lol
>>4572887
cute again!

>>4573587
>>4573749
thirding this

>>4573895
Cheers Nelli lad.

>>4573675
Thanks heaps, anon. I'm done now but if you have any more advice, I'm all ears.

tried making a comic for the first time

page 2

>>4573960
>cut

REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
But yeah, looks loads better. Gj.

page 3 (I don't know if this counts as gore if it's something you'd see in Rick and Morty or a video game)

Can I get a redline on the vagina/everything in the right panel? It just doesn't look right

What do you guys think?
I'll finish polishing clothes, hands and spear and I'll call it done.

>>4574046
Honestly, I like it, but your perspective is broken on a fundamental level. Everything from the waist up is on a totally separate plane.

>>4573975
Dragons don't exist, so i can only assume it was an attempt on human vagoo. Most of the space under urethra is just a wall of meat, in reality that's where the hole starts. It's not a perfect circle fleshlight, but more of a triangle opening. Also balls don't hang that low usually. The beef curtains, i dunno, probably fits the dragon theme

>>4574062
Thanks! I knew there's something wrong with perspective, but I didn't know how to fix it :/
It's really mind boggling to me. I just hope typical coomer won't care that much.

Do you guys have any book/tutorial recommendations about drawing people in perspective?

>>4574105
You must know where the character stands. Basically, try to draw the ground beneath, even if it won't be shown in the end, and create a grid to avoid the char having broken legs. From there you can simply draw a box and put people inside. Boxes don't help with rotation of individual parts, unless you make a box for every single body part, which is inconvenient, hence why nobody does it, but it will give you the overall perspective, fixing the most crucial mistakes

>>4574105
Break it into simple forms and then use perspective.

Anatomy for sculptors plus scott robertson or any other perspective book that clicks with you.

>>4574046
It's a mix of bad perspective from down below and bad proportions. Her arm looks huge, her torso is also very small, etc her lower half is inclined, top half is not. Lance disappears into somewhere beside her body, where's the rest of it?
In a short tl;dr, if you want to use this angle, you are supposed to redraw her entire top half and other stuff. You could also try to fix the drawing by lazily adjusting the proportions slightly to something like this shitty edit and unbutton her dress at the waist so her pussy is visible.

If you want an easier answer, just search for a photo of a woman being viewed from this angle or pose a doll to use as reference, you are going to have a WAY easier time drawing and will be able to understand exactly what you did wrong.

>>4572887
hey man, i wanted to give you a redline because i think this piece has a lot of promise but i feel like you didnt pay attention to a lot of details. this is by no means an objective correction, this is just what i would do.

>>4574181
Proportions and perspective are different things, anon. I can see this work in simple perspective, with horizon and composition center set at her pussy. The only thing that's really incorrect is her leg. No need to invent the wheel

rape my shit

>>4574181
>>4574046
Or, if you want it to be even easier, you can just use design doll from terawell for a quick reference. The program is free, you can't save whatever you create unless you pay for the program, but you can just quickly pose something then take a print of the screen. You can also adjust the FOV of the camera to make more exaggerated angles.

Just blank characters for now, does anyone have any artists I can look at to figure out stomach bulges?

>>4574175
What a shitty tutorial. Mostly just bragging. 2 tiny advises, and 10 repeats of "you can't do it, there are no shotcuts, go study until you are kewl like me"

why is it that everybody in the sex thread is much better than the rest of the board ?

Anyway seeing you guys work is motivating, just finished flat colors on a tifa piece. will do shading tomorrow because it's getting late here in europe

>>4574310
looks super traced from porn

>>4574286
Your picture makes me confused. What happened to that left breast? Has she suffered a mastectomy?

>>4574321
it was a really lazy last minute addition, and the other breast wouldnt really show unless I changed a lot too, I think.

>>4574316
I used a video as base reference. Is that a good thing or should I try to ditch the reference for more dynamic drawings?

>>4574380
it looks like you followed the reference really closely without really understanding why you drew those lines

I'm not really sure why it looks like that though. Everything just feels really flat somehow

>>4574442
Lens distortion

>>4571414
Yeah wolf's left hand is off somehow, but otherwise I love it

>>4572541
The shading is very flat and uninteresting. Also the body is strangely cartoonish

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>>4574235
Thanks for the tips!

>>4574194
very nice

>>4574455
>>4571448
Thank you!

>>4574915
>>4574916
would be hotter if the first picture in these sets had more of a visible prepuce/foreskin, the tapered end

>>4574931
sorry i should add, thats only my preference. very nice stuff.

>>4574933
Makes sense, I’ll add it

>>4574936
very based.

>>4574940
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>>4574962
bro
blog

>>4574964
Sorry I don’t have a nsfw one

>>4574962
you draw really appealing big dick furry bishounen. i will never draw 0.01% as good as this and i'm fucking pissed.

How do you guys come up with dynamic poses that still let you see everything you need to see but not feel stiff or forced?

>>4574974
you just have to keep at it, i've been doing this a long time

>>4574975
TOBLERONE!

>>4574286
It always feels unnatural but I usually draw it while * cough * guiding cock through all intestine like it kinda should be. You can do whatever you want really, but always try to keep clear direction of where cock goes without zigzagging too much.

Alright y'all. I just found about this thread and I hope your ready to see the garbage I come up with as I try to git gud at drawing.

>>4574975
Gesture.

>>4573960
NTA but I like your lines, blog?

>>4574936
>>4574962
Love your stuff, you are a great inspiration.

>>4575801

>>4564628

>>4574936
What is your drawing process like?

>>4573587
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>>4573895
Better?

>>4576106
Great bawls, but the tube looks like a condom, lol

>>4576163
I just googled tennis ball tube ¯\_ (ツ)_/¯

>>4575075
This is helpful, thanks. One one the right is closer to what I'm going for.

>>4574936
I am not into anthro stuff, but these are amazing. I really need to rework my figures.

>>4576328
your lines and drawings are fine but the panel layout and coloring ruin it

>>4575818
looks like something snapesnogger, or whatever her name is now, would draw

>>4576106
You can move the lowest ball over some, and this will create a line that leads towards the edge of the page. Right now it looks like it is not aligned beneath the other one above it.

Hit me

I don't read or watch capeshit, but I love Marissa Tomei. WIP/sketch
> Wha, what's happening, Aunt May?

>>4576430
Absolute dogshit. Learn to crawl before you can run. You are at the point where you may learn more from a week of figure drawing quick sketches than investing any time polishing turds.

Fck this shit. Oil pastels is definitely not a medium for sane humans to use.

>>4576448
The thumbnail reads very well so at least there's that.

>>4573968
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>>4573974
blog? i liked this.

>>4576448
have you looked at any kind of "how to use oil pastels" ?

>>4576448
Looks about 33% done. Will be great if you finish it.

>>4576442
Thanks

>>4576448
Smoke weed everyday reimu chan

>>4576410
idk who that is

I wasted a shitload of time trying to fix wolf's arm then finally decided just to change it. Now I have a bunch of poses that I'll narrow down and arrange into a little narrative w/ dialogue.

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>>4574915
I love you. Please make more

>>4577057
JAAAAANNIES

>>4576106
some stuff about this bothered me- the torso is way too long

>>4577086
looks worse imo

>>4577086
This is definitely a worse :/

>>4575212
Loomis, sticky etc etc.

>>4577086
You made the head too small for the long-ass ribcage and made the hips too narrow as well as the torso is too short.

What the fuck am I looking at it's definitely not better...

>>4577074
Are you saying that bc it's furry or something else.... bc if it's bc fox looks too young I'm trying to fix that rn :|

Have to traditionally ink this.

>>4577336
clean it up until there is no double lines if you are a /beg/ in inking

>>4577074
NOOOO YOU CAN'T POST ANYTHING BESIDES TITTY MONSTERS TO /IC/
YOU'RE ONLY ALLOWED TO DRAW TITTY MONSTERS AND BIMBOS!!!

>>4577336
>easy mode
use a really fat pen to ink it

>>4577348
this but unironically

>>4577086
I disagree. The artist tried to make her a very slim girl with big tits, but her pose plus saggy tits made her body look like a noodle. Giving her a bit of more curve at her waist and butt would help.

>>4577403
c'mon, you don't need to copy and paste. push yourself harder than that!

>>4577057
i really like these a lot even if furry isn't allowed here; i love it when relationships are depicted rather than when its solo or just a mob on a character

>>4577086
Nigger what are you doing???

>>4577448
Her belly button is also too high on her torso. Here's a shitty edit.

>>4577450
they're only for placement right now, i'm going to do 4 different little sisters in the inking process

Finished inking.

>>4577525
do not rush inking, it takes a lot of time and patience. avoid the chicken lines by doing long lines and connecting them carefully.

>>4564649

>>4576106
The bottle and tennis racket are forming a bad tangent. I'd suggest transforming the racket net bigger to clear up the silhouette and add still more rhythm to the pic.

>>4577540
how bout now?

Does anyone else feel like they take too long to get sketches done? When people say a sketch it typically takes them 30mins to an hour tops, but this one took about 2 or so. Maybe it's because I'm fumbling around so much before my art finally looks closer to what I had envisioned in my head.

>>4577675
It unironically takes me 8 hours of nonstop drawing to produce what someone else can produce in 12 minutes

>>4577686
Comes with experience, don't worry about it. Year ago it took me 4 hours to do what i can do in 30 minutes today

Can someone give me some suggestions on how to make this pose look more visually interesting?
The character is supposed to be floating just above the ground and just want to make the character look serene and angelic.

Well, what was once going to be a two-pose thing has now grown into a two page sequence. I wish I had this much motivation to work on non-coomer art so I can have pieces in my portfolio for college. Oh well.

>>4577453
Thank you friend, this means a lot to me. I find it more enjoyable as well, but it's definitely a lot more time-consuming. I probably owe my propensity to the fact that I've read twelve gajillion hentai doujinshi.


>>4577686
>>4577675
Don't worry,
>>4577717
This guy is right. Just keep practicing and you will get faster.

>>4577690
Fun. I'm interested in seeing how this progresses.

>>4577470
I like this edit, good stuff.

Hey brothers, we're allowed back in /alt/ now. No more containment thread keeping us from those precious (you)s and quality critiques.

>>4577947
quit trying to start shit with whitebox. this isn't a containment thread, its a specialized general thats existed in some form or another forever. Im here for porn art and advice, if i want to see alternative art and stylization I'll visit that general.

>>4577947
Fuck off I like it here

>>4578019
Sure, let him rule you. Be complacent. That's fine.

You people never fail to give someone power over yourselves and let them lead you like sheep into containment, starvation, and death. Is it in your DNA or something?

>>4572364
gotta do the nipples later

>>4572888
>>4572954
I used to post on @pokinha, but it's been a while. I'm planning to become active again once i figure out what's going on in my retarded brain

>>4578045
This has to be the weakest attempt at gaslighting I've ever seen.
The porn threads were a staple before the /alt/ threads even were.

>>4576430

If you traced, dont make it too obvious next time.

>>4576394
I understand there are problem with the layout, but what's the problem you are seeing with the coloring?

>>4578084
Get the bolter, brother.
The HEAVY bolter.

>>4578285
The values are all very grey in the main pic, and the frame borders are too small for how much of the page you are seeing at once.

Your figures also need more big shadow shapes overall to help show off where in the panel you want the viewer to see. Doxxy has a nice tutorial on cell shade shapes in comics that you might find interesting.

I changed the speeh bubbles to white just to make them stand out in value more, but any color will do if they are more visible.

>>4578933
>>4578285
also, your most successful panels in the originals in terms of value are actually the last two incomplete ones. They are very easy to read, and the yellow of the text bubbles stands out very nicely. That third to last of the woman in front of the windows is very nice too for the drawing values.

>>4576430
stop tracing porn, the camera lens distortion makes it really obvious.

>>4577734
Stupid question, but what books/vids did you use to get better at art?

>>4578084
>>4578295
https://youtu.be/xrJVZZLv2GE

>>4578084
Can I ask what is the point of your art? If you are trying to be offensive or degenerate with your muscular dickbulge goblins, know that it's a valid choice, but at the endpoint, I think you are just sabotaging yourself with some stylistic/thematic choices that make your art look like jarring western shit that is unpleasant to look at even for people that love this kind of stuff -- and this is coming from a guy that loves offensive and degenerate shit.
You obviously got the skills and have been showing a lot of improvement, but you insist on shoving down everyone's throat a bunch of results that just look like a massive waste of time.
That saddest thing is that you only need some minimal changes to make your style pleasant, but you are never going to acknowledge that.

Am i gonna make it?

>>4578933
Fantastic color edits. It's interesting to see how subtle changes help a lot.

>>4578961
Not stupid, but I wish I had a better answer for you bc honestly I haven't really studied any videos or books, though I've been enjoying the moderndayjames bridgman videos recently. I've been doing a lot of reference studies for the last twoish months, which has helped me significantly.

>>4578961
pay some teacher. it's better

>>4580075
Bruh you fell for the boob-butt meme. Her spine is broken.

Just wanted to draw something on yellow background.

>>4568718
I agree with >>4570636, the faces are an absolute turn off. The eyes are far too wide and nose juts out too much on the dude. I suggest shrinking the eyes and adding a short line above the top of the eyes to denote eyelids, it helps the face reach a level where the mind can process it more easily without freaking out.
That, and work on the eyebrows.Very few people just have a single line as their eyebrows and it's very eyecatching in a bad way

And that dong is just absolutely a violation of the Geneva Convention, but it's your art and it looks fine enough.

>>4572541
Absolutely mongoloid face. I can tell you traced the form from some shitty western porn shot and drew the draenel (or whatever those homos are called) details on top of it. The eyes are fine, but the horns completely lack any depth and are attached to the forehead in a visually unpleasing way. The biggest problem here is the lower half of the face, where the outlined lips look amateurish, the jaw is completely asymmetrical and if you got rid of the penis in front of it, the mouth is way too big, leaving no space for a reasonable chin.

The shoulders don't read clearly and it's hard to understand that the left arm is supposed to be holding the dick, mainly because there are no forearm to give spacial context to the hand. The fingers themselves look like a fat baby's fingers, mostly because the fingernails look like shit and you can't see the knuckles of the finger, so it just looks really short.

The penis has way more detail on it than anything else in this picture, yet has an absolutely minuscule glans and is distractingly veiny. The body that the penis is attached to has so little detail and is tilted for some reason??? and completely ruins the composition.

>>4577599
There is so much to this it's hard to know where to begin.

-The whole form is a giant mess and defies any known laws of anatomy. You need to plan out the body and be absolutely sure of where everything goes. No point in putting in all these fancy drapings if it makes your anatomy worse
-I can tell by the pencil sketch that you can make decent lines, but the inking reveals that you don't have the skill to make consistent smooth lines. The chicken scratch looks ruins any chance of fluidity in the picture and looks unprofessional.
-Specific point of note in anatomy: The neck looks like it was plugged into her shoulders and should be craned inwards, not some complete tube. - There is no place for the hips and it looks like her stomach immediately transitions into her thigh - The thigh is way too fat for the rest of her physique and her knee is too defined, making it look muscular or boney. - The covered thigh is much too long and the foot looks to be reversed, the big toe should be the largest, with the toe next to it peeking out from the side, but no more than that. - The left hand is a abomination and you should really just take a picture if your hand in the desired pose to understand how to foreshorten the digits properly. The right hand is way too big and looks bigger than her face - I can't stop you from doing a 90's esque animu face, but at leas make sure the nose is facing the right direction, and lose the Ask ketchum cheek marks. - Breasts lay on top of the ribcage and should conform along those lines when laying down

AND CARNINAL SIN #1 - NEVER USE LINES TO DEFINE NIPPLES. It makes them look like crusty pepperonis and make me wanna vomit. Nipples should be hinted at using darker coloration

>>4580075
Spine is FUCKED bro

>>4580163
Nice.

>>4578105
HOLY FUCK IM GONNA COOOOOOOOOM

>>4578084
Boner gone.

>>4578933
>>4578936
I really appreciate you taking the time, I felt its been very helpful. Although I don't know if I can follow the advise completely because the way I prefer to limit shading to maybe one or two steps. At this point I am wrapping up on this particular page, but I will keep your comment on the value and focus on a compositional level in mind from now on.

something small I did for a friend

>>4579479
it's pretty simple, i draw the content that i like, i'm not drawing twinks getting their stomachs bulged out by elf cock to be shocking, i'm doing it because i like that content, if you have any recommendations and can provide visual examples of ideas for how i can improve, i guarantee i consider every idea put in front of me, it's why i started adding some cheek bones, and did a bit of brush up on forms and muscles, and why i do my best to make sure i have propper forehead space, the noses i don't think i can help much with since a massive pointed nose is one of firnez's character traits even in universe
>>4580260
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=siPxyOxeQBc

>>4577599
this >>4580240 guy is technically right, but listen
you're trying to draw a fairly complex pose with foreshortening and lots of drapes over a figure. that's extremely difficult to pull off when you're in the process of learning anatomy and form.
https://youtu.be/22XYoenU-0c?t=611
FZD has a great video about what you should be worrying about at your level, which is getting comfortable with observation and sketching imo.

Layout for a new drawing I'm doing

wery fast 20-30 mins

>>4580124
Ah, another goblina enthusiast. Do you post anywhere?

>>4577947
>>4578019
I fucking knew whitebox was behind this shit.
To this day, i still post my porn in /alt/ just to spite that narcissitic faggot.

He isn't going to control me and force his arbirtrary containment rules on pornography on me. get FUCKED

>>4580657
gigawix on twitter :DD

>>4580283
its already a lot easier to see whats going on, good changes.

>>4564628
I like how this one turned out

hit me before i polish another turd

>>4580815
hot

>>4581285
thanks anon

Could someone redline this for me please? I feel like I've fucked up somewhere but idk where

What you guys think? Still trying to figure out shadows and highlights

>>4580546
Nice. The cloth on the left forearm kinda makes it look fucked up. Should be easy to deal with in painting stage but something to look for.

And boobs look too round and firm, like really, really fake. Maybe squish and droop them a little vertically to show mass and pliability.

>>4581556
Yeah they are fake looking, I like them aesthetically but see what you mean. How about these?

>>4581264
i mean this in the nicest way possible: learn what a human body looks like

>>4580546
Nipples tend to not point in the same direction. They should angle away from eachother to look more natural. Also, the leg with the cross on it looks like we're looking at it side on. This could work if it was just a normal pose, but since she's walking it makes it awkward. It would be better if her leg was going in the same direction as the other or even pointed slightly inwards.

>>4581582
My thought was her showing off the cross tattoo but I'll see if I can make it more natural.

Still not at the final drawing, any input is welcomed

>>4581620
Good job with the nipple angles, that looks a lot better.

>>4580303
From the top of my head, your lines have variation but are still a bit too thick which makes them unpleasant to look at, you also use a solid black, saturated color on your linework which makes it even more contrasting and also it them a very digital look. You could try using a brush with tiny a bit of texture, so your lineart will feel a bit more natural.
You have a good grasp of anatomy, but whenever I look at your naked characters I feel they are a blocky, or dollish for the lack of a proper word. This is caused by the heavy and somewhat stiff outline of all of their muscles, features and clothes..Also by some other minor stuff like composition, pose and in the case of this picture>>4578084 too much symmetry.

And by all that, I meant that you should try to use a bit more of visual noise to make your drawings more pleasant to look at. There are some scribble and doodles in this thread that look better than your finished stuff because of that. Try to study them.

>>4578084
>>4564649
>>4564905

Maybe read this. I mean REALLY read it and understand it... This looks stiff.

>>4580577
I don't bewieve wu

>>4564814
Hot

>>4564804
Blog? Twitter? Tumblr? FA? DA?

>>4581926
This book is beautiful

>>4581264
Loomis.

>>4582091
Really cool idea, but poor execution. Will steal it and redraw as furry porn /10

>>4582122
Yeah, I'm posting for critique for a reason. why you're posting is beyond me
Thanks I suppose

>>4582159
I was posting to point out that your idea was decent, inspired. Knowing what you did right is important.

>>4582168
You are right, but saying that the idea is good doesn't really point me in any direction to fix what's not working. You mentioned poor execution, should I just change everything?

>>4581816
you make a good point about the way i draw muscles, i'm unsure of how to move forward but i'll try experimenting to make them look less like they're drawn on like borderlands, as for the occasional symmetrical pic, that's fair, but i did actually ink in both sides seperately

Thoughts? Is the post natural looking and in correct perspective?

>>4582277
Then, the best advice I can give you is to search for a artist whose style is close to what you are aiming for and take lessons from their art.
Not sure if that's what you like, but pic related is canvas solaris on pixiv. He draws girls with some very defined muscles, gigantic dicks, exaggerated proportions and thick lines. You can see that the muscles on the picture are very defined, but thanks to the soft lines of varying thickness and shading they aren't unpleasant to look. Even the giant dick is nice, it's very detailed and gross but without relaying on thick lines, feels natural.

>Remember all GB3 related content such as lolicon, shotacon, furry pornography, furry and bestiality are banned on ALL boards, including red boards, except /b and /trash.
>15% of the drawings in this thread are furry
Lol

>>4582487
Looks like it's time to get reporting.

>paperfag OC
>be gentle...

Moving sort of at a snail's pace as this project expands into four pages of poses. Here's the first two.

>>4580577
Nice.

>>4581111
I love your furry stuff so much.

>>4581620
This is looking really cool... I gotta start learning how to do perspective stuff.

>>4582122
lol

>>4582488
This. Unless the janitors are f*rries...

>>4564628
Could just call it coomer thread

>>4582581
Let's stick with /SALT for the next couple of threads. Play it by ear and see how it goes.

>>4582618
>/salt/
Forced meme by a faggot op

>>4582581
that would be SO EPIC.

New Thread

>>4582623
>>4582623
>>4582623