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What is /ALT/?
If you're looking for a place to post your cartooning then you've found the right general. This is /ic/s 1st and only merged hub where both Eastern and Western stylization can coexist peacefully, hence the double title. However, by community demand and long history, this is favorably an Anime general.
>Rules & Guidelines
(1) Any form of cartooning is welcome; so submit and receive feedback from others. (2) Please resize your images before posting. (3) Share your knowledge and (4) Remember to not be afraid of asking for critique. Most importantly I encourage you to keep discussion at a civil level, but you're more than welcome to share your opinions.
>I came for anime. Why does the image OP say cartoons general?
To distinguish from the anime study thread (janitor supported). Please post your studies there and personal work goes here.
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>http://senshistock.com/sketch/

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>> No.4524858

>>4524569
I think it might benefit you to study some panel composition, using arrows to tell the reader where they should look is very lazy.

>> No.4524905

>my art in the OP

h-hontou

I never thought I'd see the day

>> No.4524909
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I did the Faye comic from the last thread. Working with simple colors this time.

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>> No.4525432

>>4525243
Neck is too long and your shadows looks a bit dark and muddy. Also by the way her boobs are pressed against the glass, they make the glass look angled, if that makes sense? Like they arent pressed against a flat plane in front of the viewer.

>> No.4525442

>>4525432
Neck is intentionally long, but yeah you're right about the rest. I'm still very poor with values/color and I never felt like she's actually touching the glass. I think I learned some things for next time at least??

>> No.4525448

>>4524909
dude this is fucking great, pls post more

>> No.4525452

>>4525029
Cute dude.

>> No.4525470
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i drew this guy last night
he is supposed to be some kind of space boxer
any advice?

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ehhhhhhhhhhhhh

>> No.4525545

>>4525470
reminds me of rcdart

>> No.4525569

>>4524909
I chuckled

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Shite quality but its only a work in progress. Been ms painting for fun while trying to find my groove.

>> No.4525832

>>4525826
Meant to say, if you can excuse my own laziness some pointers are appreciated. Wasnt sure where to place the arms or balance her position:/

>> No.4525840

>>4525826
Why take a photo of your screen when you have the image file on your computer?

>> No.4525856

>>4525826
Fuck off retard

>> No.4525871
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send help

>> No.4525878

>>4525871
It will turn out like shit but at least you're out of your comfort zone

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>>4525470
this is awesome, i love the flat colors of the space suit plates and the rendering of the face

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>> No.4525949

>>4525826
Can you post blog trurry(trans furry)-san?

>> No.4525977

>>4525947
blog

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>> No.4525997

>>4525947
Nice. That's a good face and there is some variation in the clothing/hair that I like. Now try drawing literally anything other than a girl from the legs up, looking off into nothing with a flat colour background.

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>> No.4526067

>>4525029
brush settings?

>> No.4526071

>>4525840
>because you have to pay for that
keep in mind that this is furry, he’s sitting on gold right now
he’s not going to just upload at full quality for you unworthy scum

>> No.4526084

>>4526067
>flats, gradients, and airbrush coloring
>texture-less lineart

>"Brush settings?"

>> No.4526153

>>4526067
Its lineart and flats with some airbrush, what kind of fucking brush do you think he used?

>> No.4526422

>>4525470
>potion seller I want only your strongest potions

>> No.4526430

>>4526084
>>4526153
pyw

>> No.4526435

>>4526430
what? dude its fucking lineart and flats, your question was stupid im not talking down on the painting...

>> No.4526460

>>4526435
>asks brush settings from a drawing that doesn't have textured brushes
>replies with "pyw"
recognize the bait when you see it, otherwise you're just entertaining a genuine retard

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tried some environment stuff even though I suck at it.

>> No.4526545

>>4526465
I really love the first drawing on the left. Blog?

>> No.4526553
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So, I was reading my Twitter and suddenly I see a video where Trump proposes his supporters to drink bleach to save themselves from Corona. Made a quick sketch. The whole world is laughing at your president, Americansky :)

>> No.4526603

>>4526545
Well it's not much but now that I've been asked multiple times, I made a twitter account:
https://twitter.com/StylizedRadness?s=09

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I'll attempt to finish this today.

>>4526067
It's just the g-pen tool with flats, colored line work, and a bit of airbrushing right now.

I'll experiment with different tools in future commissions.

>>4525452
Thank you.

>> No.4526690

>>4526553
>owl libs by telling them to drink bleach
>they actually do it and blame you, absolute madlads

>> No.4526693

>>4526690
>Trump did something retarded? It's to own the libs, obviously, he can do no wrong :)

>> No.4526708

>>4526690
It wasn't the libs drinking bleach it was his own dumbfuck followers.

>> No.4526715

>>4525029
the right boob is way too small dude

>> No.4526741

>>4526715
Thanks, anon. I'll get it taken care of in a bit.

Anything else that needs to be fixed with these two commissions?

>> No.4527016

>>4526690
Can't cope harder than this

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>>4525997
Thanks, I know I’ve been going overboard on the waifus.

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>>4525997
Thanks, yeah I gotta switch it up now. Brain is moving slow today unfortunately.

>> No.4527042

>>4526603
Aaah finally! Keep it up man

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Just doodling right now. I'm liking where it's going but it still not quite there. how can I make my character more visually unique, interesting appealing etc.

>> No.4527205

>>4525947
>>4527041
why purposefully devalue your art with shitty memes like comfy and “dupreme”? seriously what is the psychology behind this i see so many artists do it and its nothing but cringeworthy every time

>> No.4527219

>>4527205
because people need to pander to the retarded hive mind pool of degeneracy that is people who dwell on the internet and would be interested in cartoon art.

>> No.4527240

>>4526064
whats the blawg

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Values feel messy, try again next time
>>4527205
>devalue
fuck are you on about?

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Got a new phone so I drew a wallpaper for it
I usually do colored lines but I kinda like how the black looks

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its a balloon

>> No.4527544

>>4527205
>devalue
it’s already coomer art you can only go down from there. I’m not against people drawing what they want it but it is what it is

>> No.4527552

>>4527533
Just draw the dildo, man.

>> No.4527563

>>4527552
You don't understand, the entire theme of that character of his is that she is some kind of jack in the box or clown or jester. Besides we wouldn't want to upset our resident Manginas and go on a boardwide spergout session again.

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>>4527205
Dunno man, I don’t really think about stuff like that, for what it’s worth they’re not meant to be memes.

>> No.4527677

>>4527669
Ignore that anon, your shit is great. Nothing devalued, whatever that means.

>> No.4527679

>>4527205
Implying it has any value to begin with

>> No.4527685

>>4527679
What a jealous crab

>> No.4527699

>>4527458
Head and cloak and arms look great, but everything below the shoulders really isn't working. Her boobs are very low but also sticking straight out like they're being lifted (not to mention it'd look better with them dragging behind her a bit). I'm not great at foreshortening myself but the torso and waist seem very short. Biggest issue by far though is the legs. The left leg is folded kind of uncomfortably tight, and the back leg is just dangling there; it should be pushing off the ground to propel her forward, but as it is now she's floating along a foot off the ground.

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Thoughts?

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this is a commission for a friend. thoughts?

>> No.4527880

>>4527240
@lunydoobles

>> No.4527972

>>4526603
Cheers. Instant follow. Looking forward to seeing your progress!

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>> No.4528136

>>4527533
those fingers on her right hand look massive

>> No.4528362
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Wish my drawings had more appeal

>> No.4528391

>>4527752
It's really cute but the clothing folds make it look flat and the background is empty. Got a blog?

>> No.4528418

>>4526071
based

>> No.4528424

>>4527703
cute and coomer, the perfect balance

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What do yall think?

>> No.4528957

>>4528461
looks cool, in my opinion unrendered and roughly sketched background kind of sets my eyes off to look at it instead of the tv.

>> No.4529073

>>4528362
You need to work on your fundies more, there's things I like about your style but they're being held back because the drafstmanship isn't that strong. Good appeal comes from good fundamentals.

>>4528453
Pretty nice, but his knee being so large and dead center makes it the only thing I can focus on. If you reduce the contrast it'll help a little.

>> No.4529080

>>4525947
Appealing face and style

>>4527155
Solid work. Lower left girl’s lower right leg looks a bit short

>> No.4529083

>>4528362
>just a front/back character mockup of a literally-who character
>"Wish my drawings had more appeal"

>> No.4529099

>>4528362
the other anons are right, no one who isn't already a personal fan of you (the artist) will give a shit about OCs. At the same time, rookie-level artwork will not catch the eye of art-savvy consumers. You need to work on your fundamentals and technical skill if you want to make more visually appealing artwork.

If you want to be popular then you have to draw fanart of characters that are popular. But if you don't give a personal shit about the fanart you draw then fanart will only get you so far as an artist.

>> No.4529102

>>4527041
You don’t have a blog?

>> No.4529362

>>4528461
I like it

>> No.4529383

>>4528461
Full of soul. Do you like the artist Remchop?

>> No.4529389

>>4529102
sure! it's fuckoffnigger.blog.com ;)

>> No.4529431

>>4529083

I get what you're saying and I do do more complex pieces but I've seen people make much more appealing art with much less than a front back shot.

>>4529099
>>4529073
I guess I can just continue to grind away at the fundies. Anything in particular you think needs done? I do figure drawing every day and I'm going through the proko anatomy course at the moment.

>> No.4529435

>>4528081
blog?

>> No.4529674

>>4529383
I don't know who that is, what platform do they use?

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>>4529435
@ohheythatfisher on Twitter

>> No.4529850

>>4529735
where's the penis?

>> No.4530011

>>4529073
thanks anon

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>> No.4530199

>>4529431
I'd say keep doing what you're doing then. Proko's good for improving construction, which leads to increased confidence which leads to more appeal. Also just be more mindful of your lines, cleaning them up so they're not going weird directions and don't have little strings sticking off will go a long way. My lines always look kinda wonky like that when I try using a brush with a lot line width variation, so I don't; I use a simple thin brush and go over it again if I want one part to be thicker. Not saying you have to do it that way, but it works for me.

>> No.4530265

>>4524909
Love the camera angles and shots

>> No.4530519

>>4530088
Like it, though the proportions of the head feel a little wonky. Maybe that's just me.

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>> No.4530610

>>4529389
Not nice

>> No.4530772
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Work in progress. Feeling pretty happy with this lineart so far

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I need guidance. Gimme gimme love now.
My backgrounds need work but how's my rendering on the main guy?

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Just watch me

>> No.4531120

>>4531046
nice thumbnail, really like the composition but the lines look a bit unconfident, you'll get there someday anon i believe in you

>> No.4531124

>>4531120
I was testing if I could get away with leaving the sketch lines there instead of redoing them, apparently not
Good to know anon!

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Mouse and MS Paint

>>4531267
Hyper cool dude

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>> No.4531673

>>4531514
you just know

>> No.4531676

>>4527533
Blog?

>> No.4531714

>>4531514
blog?

>> No.4531999

>>4531714
Thanks for the compliment
No blog yet, though, I want to get better at art before making one.

>> No.4532006

>>4531672
You hase some odd facial propotions (small forehead, small chin, long philtrum) but I really like your lineart

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working on the drawing on the left and while I like it I think it's time I change my artstyle to something less generic. I really love this more anime painterly look and think it looks really cool. any tips resources etc for drawing more like the one on the left? What could I be doing that this guy is?

>> No.4532025

>>4532017
>right drawing barely any different to the left drawing despite saying the right one is more painterly
>both drawings look like they follow the same exact pipeline of clean lineart -> flats -> render
>"I really love this more anime painterly look"

>> No.4532035

>>4532017
I really hope you aren't misinterpreting single-source lighting with contrast to lights and shadows as "painterly", because the left drawing's lighting is artificial-tier garbage

>> No.4532045

>>4532035
yeah I've always had trouble with lighting how should it look?

>> No.4532048

>>4532017
If you want painterly anime check out someone like @___kazo, and they do fetish shit but they've got painterly down pat. What you just posted looks like budget Krenz

>> No.4532053

>>4532017
Learn more about soft vs hard edges, that's a big part of working in a more painterly style.

Your colors are also more saturated than his overall. There isn't anything inherently wrong with bright colors, but you should be more aware of when and where you use them. Generally you want to direct the eye of the viewer through the image - values and saturation are a big part of composition.
In your "want" image, the cloak draws the viewers' eyes to her body since it's framed by red, and to her face because of the eyes. In your piece there are just saturated colors everywhere on the figure.

>> No.4532067

>>4532053
Yeah thanks My computers color calibration is rainbow fucking dog shit saturated so I'm constantly going back and forth on how the image looks on a phone so my bad.

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Does the perspective work? Anything fucky?

>> No.4532535

>>4530772
please post the finished piece! i love nights

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Does the perspective work? Anything fucky?

>> No.4532635

>>4532518
Yeah she appears to have a penis. Common beginner's problem.

>> No.4532636

>>4532633
She looks *flat*
As if she'd been flattened or was a cardboard

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i drew a Real Demon that has been Haunting me

>> No.4532660

>>4532006
Thanks? I'm trying to establish a style and I know how easy it is for someone to claim stylistic liberties in place of their own faults and bad anatomy.
So if you lr anyone think that any of the weird shifting of facial features overshadow the style and distract you I'd love to hear it.

>> No.4532674

>>4532656
bro you posted furry porn youre gonna get banned bro

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>>4531672
>>4532660
Personally I think it work as long as you can actually rotate it, I think the profile you did of that bad guy doesn't look right to his other heads. I think his noes should be more protruding and his eyes should be more sunken.

As for is it "appealing", thats hard to say, im not sure how I feel about it. I really like the hands, fingers, and torso though. From the lines work to the brushes you used for shading.

>>4532633
please

>> No.4532697

>>4524552
quak quack lol those birds in the picture are so cute :)

>> No.4532701

>>4525029
Bro, I'd destroy her if she was my gf. :(

>> No.4532703

>>4525996
crimson chin :^)

>> No.4532705

>>4527669
HUA HUH HUAAAAA I like the ninja in the middle.

>> No.4532707

>>4527752
I like it. I wish the background was a little more old-timey looking like the characters (especially the sign).

>> No.4532711

>>4528461
Makes me feel like she is going to force me to be her bf and milk me + take care of me very intensely. Kinda hot not gonna lie.

>> No.4532715

>>4531267
ASSUMING DIRECT CONTROL

>> No.4532716

>>4532633
Lol isn't she from Little Witch Academia?

>> No.4532722

>>4527669
"uuuhhh.... im like... your prrroooom date you uh, ugly sake of shit""

>> No.4532733

>>4532694
Yeah I'm still figuring out the rotary shots so I agree 100% there. There's definitely a ways to go but thanks for the feedback

>> No.4532755

>>4532633
Look at the Dylan/eric sudoku pic for reference

>> No.4532905

>>4532518
post more I wanna fap

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>>4530199
Alright, will do.

This was done last month but i think its more indicative of a more finished piece.

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Furries and painting practice

>> No.4533102

>>4524909
HAH, I fuckin like that

>> No.4533232

>>4532697
thank you friend

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Postin' before I ruin it with coloring. I feel like this is a drawing that will look better in lineart by nature, since it's all about overloading your brain with little lines and stuff.

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I think I'll drop this sketch as it does not seem to work very well.
What could make it better?

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>> No.4533523

>>4533414
Make isabell sexier and it'll be fine

>> No.4533527

>>4533414
Better gesture. Your characters are stiffer than your robot. Especially Isabelle, she looks taxidermied.

>> No.4533566

>>4531999
dont gatekeep yourself

>> No.4533601
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I'm having trouble visualizing the flow of the hair within the encircled area. Also point out any glaring mistakes.

>> No.4533605
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>>4533270
WITNESS THE INCREDIBLE CREATURE OF UNSURPASSED POWER!

>> No.4533611
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sketchan

>> No.4533634

>>4532905
Nice shit taste

>> No.4533686

>>4532025
stupid blind /beg/

>> No.4533720

>>4533601
Why is the anime bitch throwing gang signs

>> No.4533735

>>4533601
la puta

>> No.4533740

>>4533611
Draw boys

>> No.4533742
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>>4533720
It's from sailor moon

>> No.4533895
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>>4531031
It's me again. I fucking love the magnetic lasso tool. Finally, the linework has a purpose

>> No.4534038

>>4533895
looks like shit though?

>> No.4534093
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>> No.4534196

>>4534038
What did you expect? It's a WIP. Expound on your evaluation though. I want your opinion. It is important to me.

>> No.4534267
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Ahh I finally managed to finish something, I know I should be studying but I’m desperately trying to keep my motivation alive by drawing things I’m passionate about lol. I’ll try to do some tonight

>> No.4534279

>>4534196
He won't say anything because he's a beginner.

>> No.4534318

>>4534267
Cute mermaid! I should be studying too but same as you just end up drawing stuff I want lol. Undisciplined :(

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>> No.4534344

>>4534267
Blog?

>> No.4534348
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This is the cover of my current comic I’m making. First time posting it on the internet, I don’t have any social media. Sorry I don’t own a scanner and this is zoomed in. Not sure if /beg/ since I never practice or intend to reach some goal.

>> No.4534373
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Is the anatomy and pose alright ?
If not, how can i fix it ?

>> No.4534377

>>4534332
getting there, but not yet.
his left shoulder is fucked and there is no sense of volume on the face; head seems attached to neck from the chin upwards

>> No.4534414
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>>4531676
@_98fumi

Latest fanart thing

>> No.4534442
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>>4534377
yeah i was kinda screwing around with long chin, but its still broken. ill try to learn heads better

>> No.4534619

>>4533096
That's cute as hell breh, tell me how to draw like you.

>> No.4534625
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some friggin bass glasses

>> No.4534636

>>4534414
>>4527533
What is it about this art that so casually 10k follower appealing?

>> No.4534643

>>4534636
Appeal. It's what you don't have.

>> No.4534645

>>4534636
do you really wonder why ecchi gets you followers?

>> No.4534646

>>4534636
A cute girls face

>> No.4534659

>>4534646
>>4534645
ngmi response, lots of sub 100 follower cute girl face artists

>> No.4534677

>>4534636
Pixel art niche + semi-memorable OC.

>> No.4534683

>>4534659
Lmao youre such a faggot

>> No.4534689

>>4534683
u 2

>> No.4534702

>>4534643
It’s not that appealling. Honestly it’s a little boring and ugly.

>>4534625
add some contrast between the glasses and the head

>> No.4534891

>>4534267
>>4534344
seconding, really like the rendering!

>> No.4534900

>>4534702
>It’s not that appealling
Where are your 10k followers? Got you

>> No.4534911
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4534911

.

>> No.4534978
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It's not yaoi, I'll draw on the costumes. Just hoping the construction doesn't look too bad

>>4534625
Only thing I'd point out is the box not lining up with the straps, besides that it's pretty cool
>>4534414
you pick some really nice colors
>>4534348
Line-weight is a bit dead and I'm not sure what's going on with the background but the characters are cute, would read
>>4533519
cool as fuck god damn

>> No.4535223

>>4534978
Construction is very nice but the gestures themselves are weird. It looks like they're acting out this scene on stage rather than it actually happening; with his one leg sticking straight out and arm not actually resting on the other guy's, it comes across like he's presenting to the audience that he has collapsed, if you get what I'm saying. Hopefully those are simple fixes of just repositioning the limbs a bit. Also the dude in the back is missing his left leg.

>> No.4535228

>>4534978
>it's not hot Nanashi x Dagda yaoi
It's trash, anon.
Move Dagda's head more forwards (neck too short) and move his entire body more upwards. You can tell that his thighs are too different in length, with his left leg being too short. You could also need to redraw the right leg so it can properly connect to his hip.

I'd redline it but I can only phone post atm. I like the way you construct the arms

>> No.4535306
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>>4534267
I seriously fucked the proportions lmao
>>4534318
Ahh thank you and good luck anon! Let’s work hard together >:)
>>4534344
>>4534891
Thank you! ^^ it’s @beholdnika on instagram

>> No.4535390
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4535390

Still doing art of player characters for my game project. Though no matter where I post it feels like yelling into the void. Either way the work is its own reward.

>> No.4535408
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>>4533611
You have a super cute style, you could do a story with this.

>>4533414
Is that an armored core? Nice to see someone else here who draws mecha.

>> No.4535774

>>4534636
Coomers. Did you really have to ask?

>> No.4535916

>>4534978
Thanks for the input. As for the line-weight, indeed, since I only use one single pen. The background is based on the “continental drift” in Iceland. It’s an unusual rock formation.

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>>4534702
>>4534978
thank you for the criticism! I this any better?

>> No.4536042
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Faces

>>4531999
You’ll never make one then because you’ll never feel good enough.

>>4534619
Thanks and idk just draw lol

>> No.4536044
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>> No.4536055

>>4534093
I fucking love you man. Keep drawing those busty shorties

>> No.4536059

>>4527458
I like boobies a lot

>> No.4536369

>>4536044
I like that thick line work. That has to be ink pen.

>> No.4536382

>>4533611
Please try going outside your comfort zone more often.

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>> No.4536517
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hawk hunter
wip

>> No.4536592
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how do you make eyes more interesting?

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>>4536592
adding in details like the iris pattern, pupils and giving them interesting colors is one thing that catches my eye a lot.

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I drew a halfling.

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>> No.4537109

>>4537085
The armor is nice, the face looks like the female pink-haired wojack with how disconnected it appears from the neck.

>> No.4537239

>>4537085
head looks skewed

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>> No.4537259

>>4537256
>kankers
oh its a kanker alright.

>> No.4537269

>>4537259
it says cankers, are you blind?

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>>4537085
>>4537109
Better?

>> No.4537386
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>>4534978
>>4535228
Hopefully this looks more natural, will try to finish soon.

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I really wanted to color this sketch but I suck at painting and result was lackluster. I am afraid I have waste it for nothing, and post the sketch instead

>> No.4537446
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I really wanted to color this sketch but I suck at painting and result was lackluster. I am afraid I have to waste the sketch for nothing but the painted version would look worse

>> No.4537456

>>4537323
yes i make that same mistake all the time, haha
nice work anon

>> No.4537524

>>4536793
The combination of a cutesy body and very detailed face is really off-puting. Like the linework though.

>> No.4537525

>>4537524
It's like reverse anime

>> No.4537564
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>>4537446
Gotta make those mistakes to get better, just try the painting and go as far as you can with it.
After that try and get some crits on it or try to see if you can figure out what you need to improve on.
I've been dealing with the same issue and have been really stressed over how to progress further too.
Copying pieces from people better than you is also another method that helps too.

>> No.4537678

>>4537446
You'll never learn if you never let yourself make those mistakes. Likewise, you'll never improve if you never notice your mistakes. Every artist you've ever looked up to has started off making shitty paintings without exception, and they grew better by doing so. Stop letting your ego and pride get in the way of improving and honing your craft, stop giving a shit about the possibility of hurt feelings and fucking paint. Do your future self a favor and fucking fall down, fail a couple times, learn from it.

Imagine being a kid and trying to ride a bike for the first time, but then you stop trying because "I suck at balancing and I keep falling. I am afraid I have to waste this good bike for nothing but I just can't ride it"

>> No.4537815
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It's been a while !

>> No.4537998
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I just realized something. A while ago, the guy who went on a shitposting spree across dozens of animation+alt threads and led a moral crusade against pornographic art on /ic/, always referring to himself as ''we'' and even making a /qa/ thread, it was whiteboxstudio. The way I know is the guy always proudly posted this animation of a punching dude to show his skill. The exact one that's on whitebox' twitter. I always wondered why there was a handful of guys that so vehemently disliked him. It's because they knew, they knew the entire time

>> No.4538007

>>4537998
But that guy makes pornographic art too

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>>4537998
Damn you are slow.

>> No.4538068

>>4537998
You just realized? Late is better than never I guess.

>> No.4538123

Is this the right place to post mspaintish stuff?

>> No.4538133

>>4538123
Nevermind I read the op

>> No.4538201

>>4537524
>>4537525
Hmmm. I am trying to avoid dipping too much into anime type stuff so thats good. Guess I have to work on my bodies.

>> No.4538288
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>waaah berserk is digital now
Why do all the shadows on her face look so traditional then.

>> No.4538295

>>4538288
I don't know the context but that looks like a screentone

>> No.4538332
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>> No.4538358
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4538358

Practicing perspective :0

>> No.4538372

>>4538358
Perspective's pretty good, great motion. That's not at all how someone looks when they're running though, it looks like she's slumping along with a stomachache. She has to be redone entirely, I think.

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doodles from imagination

>> No.4538461
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Armor practice

>>4538377
I like

>> No.4538512

>>4538377
nice, i like the fluidity. got a blog?

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>> No.4538623
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I'm often criticized on my lighting am I doing it right this time?

>> No.4538642

>>4538623
Looks mostly okay, but there shouldn't be more shadow on top of her breasts than at the bottom since your lightsource is coming from above.
Actually, shadows on the neck are strange too, they should point away from the lightsource, not towards it.
(Realistically, the nose would also cast a shadow, but I assume you're leaving that out on purpose to make the face look softer.)

>> No.4538743

>>4538623
Yeah right

>> No.4538829

>>4538603
im gay now

>> No.4538836

>>4537446
do a study on what you're failing at and try again

>> No.4539025
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>>4533895
Finished it. I will ascend. I will make it. I will create things only a few can. But for now. I'll hone my skill.

>> No.4539404
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4539404

I struggle a lot when it comes to making a background. Most of the time I end up with something extremely simplified and flat. What should I do to fix this problems?

>> No.4539477

>>4536369
Looks like digital.

>> No.4539659
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Brown or Blue?

>> No.4539663

>>4539659
Brown

>> No.4539805
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I don't like the hair. which of these hairstyles do you find preferable obviously the original is more rendered but don't let that cloud your judgement which is the best?

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>> No.4539823

>>4539822
bruh no offense but that's not nearly detailed enough to warrant that fucking resolution.

>> No.4539859

>>4539823
Yea Forgot 4chan displays the actual size of the image.

>> No.4539865

>>4539805
To be completely honest with you sempai
From left to right
3 > 1 > 4 > 2

>> No.4539874

>>4539805
I like the second one best, it's a bit more elegant and we can see her face properly

>> No.4539875
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>>4539822
I think the picture would work better if she wasn't looking at the viewer, you know? Just a simple mundane picture of a cute girl. I think those are often better than simply having the girl look at you and then the BG was drawn because she needed something to do.
Pic related, she's comfy, enjoying the moment instead of being a sort-of "pinup"

>> No.4539907

>>4539805
I don't know if it's just me but the shadows on her tits and thighs look way too intense, like it goes from cheesecake to Basque cheesecake.

>> No.4539998

>>4539907
So would you say that the contrast in the girls complexion is to dramatic? How would u draw it?

>> No.4540014

>>4539907
that's the point. Coomer art is often high contrast. If you compare how advertisers prepare and market food against how artists like to display coomer art you'll find that both people incorporate similar techniques in order to maximize the coom/hunger factor.

>> No.4540030
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4540030

That's pretty much done. My entry for the Character Design Challenge

>> No.4540064
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>> No.4540149
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Tried to do something in a completely different approach of what I would normally do, trying to find some soul in it. Although her chin is fucked up (being watercolor I really cant do anything out of a mistake like this), im really satisfied with it

>> No.4540184

>>4540064
That looks really nice, what is your process?

>> No.4540200

>>4539404
Use a lot of reference. Really think of where this character would be, and pull up any image that's even slightly relevant. Shikieiki looks like there should be mountains in the distance, Alice there should obviously be other houses around (though maybe still far away), Kino it's cropped too close to really add much but you can always fill it with giant anime clouds. No reason to rely on your visual library, the work is already done for you in the real world.

>>4540030
Great colors, though the design itself is too balanced and kinda flattens everything out. The body is a big, solid pill shape which would be pretty striking if it was just that and a couple small embellishments, but it also has these giant arms that are as big as the body itself. It completely splits the focal point so neither of them have the impact they should. And I do know that if it had tiny arms it wouldn't be able to grab anything, but it's better to lean on the "it just looks cool" side in the design stage.

>> No.4540251
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trying to design the look for my android girl oc. something feels off with the eye

>> No.4540304

>>4540184
thanks, for that pic i was kind of experimenting with this guy's process, learn from him instead of me
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCreeBpDVEMWTJ6MEkUSOjRg/videos

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>>4540304
Thanks for the link fren

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>>4540498
Is that a character from ff14?

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>>4540498
Yeah. Y'shtola Rhul.

An update, along with some corrections.

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An update, along with some corrections.

>>4540532
Yeah. Y'shtola Rhul.

>> No.4540698
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4540698

You guys always told me I need to work on perspective and anatomy and I am in the middle of it rn and wow you were right. I had read a bunch of books and watched a bunch of videos but I still hadn't retained it all.

Thanks.

>> No.4540894
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4540894

my guy and sandalphon chillin playing some Animal crossing, any thing look funky before I color?

>> No.4540933

>>4539659
How did you make that highlight on the hair?

>> No.4540954

>>4540933
By making it lighter.

>> No.4540974

>>4540894
Really? No ones going to shout Loomis at this guy?

>> No.4541086
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I broke my stylus and it's taking a while for my replacement to ship so I did this with paint bucket and lasso tool

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>>4541086

>> No.4541095

>>4540200
Thank you so much for the feedback. Some valid points were made, I will need to reconsider,
I'm the pill shaped spaceship guy

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Feedbac

>> No.4541105

>>4540532
>>4540498
Why do they insist on calling the games 'final fantasy' when they keep making new games of it? Call it Continous Fantasy, god damnit!

>> No.4541124

>>4540954
Thanks I get that yeah, I was asking about what brushes/layers you used.

>> No.4541164

>>4541104
Source/blog?

>> No.4541172

>>4541105
Perpetual fantasy? Ceaseless Fantasy? Unending Fantasy? Infinite Fantasy?
They sound like chuuni attacks from a JRPG . . .

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>>4541172
Neverending Fantasy

>> No.4541230

>>4541104
does that little girl have a dick?

>> No.4541264
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Still rusty

The more I try to get back into drawing, the more I fall out of love with it

Doesn't hurt to see where I stand currently though

>> No.4541272

>>4541264
It looks pretty good Anon! Better than what I could do if that means anything.

>> No.4541328
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>>4524552

>> No.4541331
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>>4541328

>> No.4541334

>>4541328
>>4541331
Always nice to see your work here. I'll probably commission you when I get an idea that suits your style.

>> No.4541383

>>4541328
cute
blog?

>> No.4541387
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>> No.4541444

>>4541334
thanks anon! glad that you like my stuff

>>4541383
https://twitter.com/pantsu_ripper/

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>>4524552
Heres a drawing of my seaslug character guys haha

>> No.4541585

>>4541572
looks like a cat

>> No.4541592

>>4541585
really???

>> No.4541664

>>4540974
Make a redline or get lost.

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>> No.4541746

>>4533605
thighs and inward turned feet are basically all it takes for me to find something attractive

>> No.4541802

>>4540894
that foot, anon. Don't forget heels exist

>> No.4541814

>>4541331
if you centered the face up a little maybe

>> No.4542164

>>4541802
Ah, that makes sense. Thanks for actually giving something I can work off of.

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What needs to be fixed before I start lining it?

>> No.4542876

>>4541104
Very nice I love it.

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>>4541572
Also some character designs for a comic

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i made an avatar

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i feel like shit, my body and mind crave things my subconscious despises, im in costant conflict with myself. Coming here and seeing your works really cheers me up.