/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

how does one hide the lineart properly?

>>4517446
Who's the pic's artist? Looks awesome.

>>4517493
only use lineart in the drafting process, paint over everything in the final layer

if it's too late for that just poke around with a small brush and colorpick/blend the lines out

>>4517446
I did it with graphite. The photo is not very clear but you can still understand the drawing without any problem

Kinda pooped it on this one :/

>>4517624
i think you have some potential, learn to clean up the form a bit. the legs are messy, and it isn't in Gut's character to have his toes pointed inward like some sort of sissy powerbottom. his sword is hardly straight (it appears to be askew at the hilt)

don't be afraid of a harder draft, or repainting completely.

Thoughts?

>>4517685
Thanks, I probably won’t work on this anymore. I started with a gesture that I thought might be cool but an hour in just decided to rush and finish after reaching diminishing returns.

>>4517689
Her left shoulder looks like the joint has been dislocated

>>4517689
Some hue shift in your shading might be nice

>>4517508
ja.wc on Instagram

>>4517624
I like it! Just note that it seems you tend to move to a small brush too early (could also be just you sketching).

Cannot sit down and do studies so heres a random sketch

>>4517596
This is really nice, I like how you have simplified the plains.
>>4517624
looks dope! I think it could push the values just a little more, and dont be so afraid of colour! :)
>>4517689
same as >>4517624, looks like a cool concept! just needs more value range and bravery with the colour.

Trying to draw some extra evil looking bitch. The anorexic physique is supposed to show that she's accursed 10 times over and probably takes the bad potions.

how does this look?

>>4517787
Thanks yeah it was supposed to be a sketch but I kinda went tender crazy some places.

>>4517585
Nice. I personally use really thick sketch and i lay in flats behind, but when i go to overlay with a final coat of detail i find myself either losing edges, shape or depth if i delete the lineart completely, i even tried to make the lineart thinner and with a lighter color but its just too tough for me to pull trough, i definitely have to exercise on rendering

Trying to apply my studies

>>4518110
Latest study

Thoughts? Give me your hardest crits you bitches

>>4517980
Instagram?

>>4518249
@petes_illustration my work is kind of all over the place though lol

>>4517624
>>4517624
Needs a fuller range of values - do this and add texture in the places where the composition leads the eye for the image to pop.

Define form through lighting/rendering instead of line as where i've indicated on the sword (also added a bit of texture to the middle bit)

Also you could amp up the areas where light is emitted from the sparks (and have a clear source thereof). I've illustrated this on the face.

overall though the forms are pretty well defined and the underlying drawing pretty good too although I think the chest look far too wide, don't take my changes as anything final to leave in the finished thing as I did them bretty quickly :).

Also make the sword straight.

>>4518271
absolute trash

>>4518238
I liked it at the first glance so the colors and design are ok.
There are problems though.
1 his arms are fucking short. Remember the arms are long enough to scratch your balls. This guy would need to bend to reach his dick.
2 no neck at all. A normal neck is roughly half the head, sometimes the entire head. But this guy has his chin at his shoulder level.
3 awkward pose. Read about the counterposto, tldr people don't actually stand up vertically like they got broomstick up their ass, except the British big hat soldiers.
4 the gradient background is too bright, it looks like he's on the glowing disco floor, rather than on grey floor fading into the distance.

You can easily fix the issues with a few lasso cuts though and make it a lot better.

I’ve been trying to get back into drawing.

What do you guys think I should focus on? If it is solely improvement, then what are my weakest aspects? If it is world-building and originality, then, fortunately, that's where my current focus will be anyways, until further notice.
My current goals are actually not to get more commissions than I already have been getting (per se), but rather building and maintaining and audience.
Hopefully this belongs in the regular drawthread and not the alternate stylization thread...

>>4518700
Proportion, gesture, values, composition.

>>4518873
Shit, definitely my proportions. Yup, I see it in some of their limbs. Wish you had gone into a little more detail, but I can still take these suggestions. I can see how my composition, gesture, and values are also lacking, since I don't practice them regularly, in comparison to my rendering, which I have been focusing on lately due to commissions. Thanks.

Almost done with this line art. I'd love to get some harsh crit if you have some, or any suggestions before I move on to colouring.

>>4518981
Why is the right hand so much smaller than the left when they should be the same size?

I keep posting this pic in ded threads, fuck me

>>4519061
Between the clothes, skin, and metallic bits, aren't the values pretty inconsistent and fucked up? You have dark values on the clothes but they're super washed out in other places?

>>4519061
I had to stare at this for a while to find something useful for a WIP (this is a WIP right?), but isn't her torso kind of small? Pic related.
Also nice rendering tho.

>>4518981
His sleeve lengths and clothing folds aren't quite right. You kind of get the idea for the clothing folds but you would benefit from more study. Also the bag in perspective kind of makes the guy look flat somehow. Shouldn't it be pressing on him, pushing his coat out in front of him, or making an impression on his clothes somehow? Found image related to help with the sleeves tho. I know it isn't always easy to find good reference. My search terms were specifically: "clothing folds jacket cargo"

>>4518238
The big things: No shadow below him, pose is stiff, sword looks flimsy.
I do like the character himself, looks pretty rad.

>>4519061
gmi

>>4517980
Fuck dude I saw you post the WIP of this the other day and it turned out sick

>>4518570
>>4519231

Thanks for these chaps

>>4519509
Thank you! It took quite a bit of transformation haha

>>4517446
Draw this you cancerous fucker.

new to painting and shading and I've been attempting this portrait with no success.
How do I approach painting a portrait with even lighting/ soft shadows ?

trying to improve my composition so im doing studies of it

>>4520205
i think if you grouped the values more it'd help you determine where to blend and keep hard edges

>>4518304
Thanks for the feedback!

>>4520271
The cat and girl pic is pretty poorly composed.

Did this study in about four hours. There is so much more I could do, but with a full commission backlog I have to stop this piece.

>>4520574
post work

>>4520574
is it the values? did i make it too dark?

>>4520287
sorry, I don't know what grouping the values mean.

>>4520918
No just the composition if you break it down into simple value structure and shapes, they’re all over the place. Not appealing.

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>>4518116
Took prettylong too finish this one

This perspective check out, frens? I wanna be sure before I go any further.

>>4521196
long neck and no pelvis

>>4521196
HAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHA WHAT THE FUCK

go back to /beg/, beglet

I normally only get about 60 likes per post but this one got 750+

can I get some critique on it? I wanna know why it stood out

>>4521642
little person + big person = absolutely EPIC, you can just FEEL THE TENSION, theres no way the little person can just FIGHT the big person! HOW BRAVE!!! If that was MY FANTASY CHARACTER, he would totally win AGAINST ALL ODDS!

>>4521642
You hit all the derivative bottom of the barrel trendy shit.
>Giant figure looming in the horizon
>Person (hero) facing towards it, emphasizing the giant's size

I can literally find hundreds of drawings that look exactly like this.

>>4521694
And how do you suggest we show scale?

>>4521642
It was one of your dozen hashtags, not the work itself.

>>4521609
>no *penis
FTFY

>>4521699
Ah yes, there is no way to show the giant's scale without putting a generic hero in the bottom of the picture.
The hero can't be hanging off a cliff positioned at the side of the image, no no, he HAS to stand on either a cliff, a rock, or any platform that is slightly higher than the lowest horizon in the picture !
It simply has to be this way, otherwise it wouldn't read to the brainless consumers!

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>>4521748
Blog?

>>4520736
Saw this in the alternate style thread. You have nice, sharp lines and nice anatomy. The lines do seem to fall off slightly on the body, though. Good luck on your comms, man.

>>4521748

Hey hey hey now, you leave Rozalski out of this.

>>4521844
You should start over with construction because his torso looks like a cube, super hunchbacked. Did you have a reference for this? The idea is cool and you nailed the hair and expression.

>>4521609
Thanks anon. I'll lengthen the pelvis. The neck leaning forward is something I'm going for, like she's sliding her head forward to get her eyes behind the sights. . So long as the perception of her arm and the gun protruding out towards the viewer looks convincing, I feel good about it so far.

I feel I have a lot of issues when it comes to making faces look 3 dimensional when it comes to my anime style. If i'm wrong oh well but I need some second opinions

>>4519929

Would be nice to see this turned into a monster with legs!!

Finally finished this one for the MtG portfolio

>>4522505

Sp00ky

Finally finished this

>>4518271

ancap?

>>4522544
nop

Any paintovers or drawovers to help push this would be awesome! Still a work in progress.

>>4522511
It's for a poster in an exhibit, I dont really have a choice, but yes. Would surely make a great monster. Lampreys are scary.

>>4521642
Don't let them get you down anon, it's good.

>>4517493
Very cute. I'd make the shading more extreme if you want to hide lineart. Otherwise I love it.
>>4521642
Size between the little guy and the trees look off, either make it obvius that the trees below are farther by making them less opaque, or put them lower.
>>4521665
based.
>>4522577
Nice use of texture.

>>4522540
nice, can't give propper critique i'm learning atm. and i'm still not that far with painting:I

>>4522503
anatomy seems a lil' bit off
, practice gesture and form maybe?

done this today... i accedantly closed it while worked at it and had to do 1 hour of work again >_>

pls give critiqu-thanks

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>>4521733
That's not critique.

>>4522931
yes it is, David vs Goliath is a lame and overdone cliche. ITs so uninteresting no amount of rendering will ever make it appealing.

>>4521733
would this count too?

>>4522949
Critiquing art by saying its bad purely because you think it's unoriginal doesn't help the person improve nor does it offer any constructive criticism.

>>4520736
Nice I just joined a server with you.
your a animator to right?

>>4523001
it does tho. Its cliche, its uninspired and boring. Youre just assuming since the critique its mean and witty it must be untrue and a bad, by telling someone to stop coming up with cliche and uninspired pices of work youre helping him, in this specific case helping him chose better subjects or, if you really want to stick with the trope, Chose at least an interesting composition and stick out from the norm.
>just because you think its x doesnt mean it is
yeah, im the fucking viewer of the painting, im entitled to say its boring.

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>>4521733
so because something is formulaic, has been done plenty before and works, that means it’s bad? I’ve seen plenty of unoriginal work here not get called out like this. would you argue porn is bad because they all use the same 3 positions?

Sketch I did at work

>>4519061
id let her fuck me up alright

>>4521748
fucking sick

>>4522577
why'd you crop it like the you retard

>>4523035

Is that death

>>4523233
kinda

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>>4521642
Why do you assume that the human figure in the foreground is a "hero" and that he has to "fight" the giant monster?

The man in the foreground has no weapons, is wearing casual clothes, there is no aggression in his stature

From what I take of it, the man in the foreground is empowered, bewildered and excited by the presence of the creature. But the creature takes no mind of him as we would take no mind of an ant.

>>4523269
because its a trope? Its like drawing a line looking like an L and wondering why people see it as an L.

>>4523271
You're just proving that you dont examine a piece and take it at face value. Look at it for more than 3 seconds and absorb it instead of sweeping it into an assumed genre

>>4523312
i see a mage summoning a demon to defeat it, so yes a hero battling a giant. Eat a dick its cliche and no amount of cope will solve it.

>>4523233
No, its Vladimir Lenin, a revolutionary leader

>>4522927
Man that screams soul

>>4523314
wheres the magical energies or any sort of evidence hes not an ordinary man?

>>4523348
the pice is too boring to deliver in anything. Thats my immagination

>>4523350
So you're saying you're too boring to imagine anything and thus apply a preexisting trope you're more familiar with

>>4523360
>So you're saying you're too boring to imagine anything
no, i literally said i imagined him being a mage summoning a demon
>thus apply a preexisting trope you're more familiar with
are you actually retarded? The trope is small guy on the foreground, big guy on the background. IT DOESNT FUCKING MATTER IF HES A HERO OR A LITERAL WHO, THE PICE IS FUCKING BORING! AND SO IS THE TROPE! ITS OVERDONE THE PICE IS BORING B-O-R-I-N-G!

>>4522927
The perspective here is my favorite part about this image: it gives me a realistic sense of speeding through the air at a high altitude, and I get an immediate sense of the lift generated by the powerful wings. The horse's head in particular bulges out in the foreground in a very satisfying way where the three-point perspective is most evident.

However I am a little confused about what is happening to the rider's arm and how he is positioned in space. I can tell something magical is happening with his arm, as if in the middle of transforming into the horse or fused with it, but it's a little hard to tell what the smoky effect is supposed to indicate. The same is true of his lower body as well. To my eye it looks like his legs are concealed by the horse's rump, but it also kind of looks like his lower body is doing the same thing that his arm is doing, which would make him kind of like a centaur. That would make sense, but it isn't completely clear. There's also too much detail throughout the piece, particularly in the canyons around where the horse's head is, which distracts me from the otherwise well-constructed head. I think if you drew the same image with a little less rendering/linework (especially in the background) the image would read a little more clearly.

Overall you have pretty strong draftsmanship and a great sense of perspective--keep it up anon!

>>4523368
Lmao why are you so upset bro it's literally a picture on the internet

>>4523422
>i was marely pretending to care
sure me too lmao bro :)

Testing out a new process. How's the color here?

>>4523413
lmao at /beg/ trying to give advice

>>4523155
Should I include the whole figure? Originally this was painted to bit below the shins. Is there anything else that I could do make this piece better?
>>4522540
Very nice work. The only thing that jumps out at me is that his arm looks slightly too long (either that or his legs are too short).

>>4523586
Stop projecting, stupid beg.

>>4523413
heyo, thanks for the advice- ye it is hard to tell - but that's the point of it - the one who is looking at it should play with his imagination and think what is happening
Maybe?
Hoes he took the orse from land and "fuse" with it to show the horse the landscape?
Or maybe the orse is a form of him and the scene got captured whil he got out of it - so normally the horse would be a pegasusu.
you are right it is hard to read i agree - anyays thanks.

Now to your image, is is heavy stylized but it has a nice painterly look - i suggest if that's not your intend to use different edge-varieties,
For the gesture. she would look more believeable if you woulld draw her legs like shes flying (like charackter from DBZ) Legs are behind

But as a whole the piece look soothing to the eye :)

>>4523413
Holes moving castle except if Sophie was uggo

It's a work in progress ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

>>4520981
Kinda went lazy on the left side drawing desu

>>4524282
Nice keep it up

>>4517624
soul desu tbo

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>>4523639
I decided to paint some more, feel free to give any more suggestions bros

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>>4523816
Angle of the ear looks weird, like it is just barely attached to the face, and the left boob is not quite sitting comfortably in the dress. Otherwise I really like it, will you please be my friend

study, i tried to use as little lineart as possible and building up skin tone visual library.

>>4524282
Making immense gains buddy

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>>4525547
Very strange synthesis

>>4524997
love this, I really like the skeleton cook on left in particular

>>4518648
What's inside the suit?
Could it be Ragemelon?

>>4526355
bro why he looking like an egg LOL!

>>4525506
some issues with perspective

>>4523571
maybe a bit less yellow?

>>4526567
Why would you ever use super black for eyes?

Anything look off with this piece so far?

>>4525619
Thank you for the critique, anon. I'll see what I can do for her ear and breasts.

>>4526776
not the owner, but it seems to me more like a dark blue

>>4526809
The value is a super stark contrast though.

>>4525893
I love how you've coloured here great job!
>>4526567
I agree with anon about the eyes, use a dark version of a colour, brown works best imo.
>>4525953
I love it so far, left upper arm looks a little weird like it's bending the opposite direction but it looks stunning anon good job!

Here's my recent piece.

roast pls

>>4527168
Idk...bigger titties?

>>4527070
legs not long enough

>>4527168
I don't like them big :(

>>4527212
I like medium size tits. Big tits is too cartoony

>>4527246
I couldn’t find a fault, they’re good so...yeah bigger titties bro.

>>4527256
Thanks man. All been doing so far are this small studies everyday.
Not very confident with my skill yet to do proper bigger works.

Glad to know i'm doing good

>>4527264
For sure.
I’ve had a look again and I reckon working on depth a bit more in the hair.
Good luck.

>>4526355
I like to believe variously smaller suits until you get to the rich chewy nugget of a extra tiny man.
Also turned it into a rough animation for the fun of it.

thanks for everyone who helped in the other thread last night

Started this drawing today

Work In Progress

>>4527326
Wonderful linework and flow of action. However the pelvis and legs, particularly the rear leg, need to be reworked

>>4524946
Thanks, friendo

>>4527441
looks great! you should post more

>>4517446
Recent image under refinement process.

>>4528093
render your shit out. WH40K art is about detail form, and edges

Please give crit bois

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>>4523046
This is so cute. Blog/insta?

>>4528431
https://www.instagram.com/_mou_art_/

>>4528331
more detail in the shadows, especially figure, that is not how trees look, meme particles

>>4528449
I gotchu, thank you senpai

>>4528331
I get what you're going for and it kinda works. The griffin has almost the same value as the foreground though. I get that it's meant to be a hard cast shadow against the sun but I think the values could go down a little, or desaturate more.
And the foreground doesn't have enough contrast to really push it out against the rest of the backdrop, like the other guy says, needs more detail

drew urien

>>4518648
Whats the context

>>4522879
whats the languge

any critiques?

>>4528668
>tit shot
>bunny girl
>anime

besides you being a robot?

>>4528682
that's not kind to robots, robots can actually do math on the fly unlike me

I've been struggling with the legs on the bottom right figure - how does she look? general crits appreciated too.

>>4526304
thanks my dude

>>4528570
Noted, thanks anon!

>>4528586
is that red saddle or a slice of meat coming out?

>>4528748
clearly her dress are you blind

>>4528331
I dig it. Geralt's silhouette could use more work though, unless he's wearing ursa armor set or something.

>>4528206
no it's not. it's about grim and dark.

>>4528645
Hazmat man checking radiation levels of an odd plant, what does it look like?

Update

Dont know what I should do with this now. Either color it or add a background. These things always seem cooler when you have layers of sketch lines under it but im happy i got this result regardless.

>>4529177
Your use of colour is actually really nice, rendering style is fairly mature also but man do you need to read up on perspective AND anatomy BADLY. This girl looks like a quarter-downs Elvis right now.

I've done a redline to illustrate the main changes that need to be made. Although, somewhat hypocritically, the anatomy isn't perfect but will hopefully give you some idea on where you're going wrong.

Protip: constantly flip your work to highlight your mistakes

>>4529620
Posted wrong version

>>4527441
I need to make her not look like she's floating damn

>>4529663
Ya gotta show some of the seat in the light and not shaded. Great though Anon.

>>4522540
I really like your rendering, but a few things that popped out to me: 1) The arms are in an awkward position. They don't seem to be close enough to the body to feel like they have a sturdy hold on the axe, yet they aren't quite far enough to show a sort of uncontrolled, violent energy. So they're in that awkward in-between pose that seems to be unsure of what it wants to convey. 2) The composition flows really weirdly, so it's kind of hard to see what exactly is going on at a glance. The separation of the dude and wolves from the book is nice of course, but the shapes themselves are just not organized neatly. It seems that the gingerbread guy is a main part of what is going on, so he should probably take up more of the frame. I've reorganized your silhouettes to show you what I mean. Hope this helps, also, Blog?
I just looked up Garruk, cool magic the gathering artwork. It seems Garruk was likely meant to be the centerpiece, where maybe this artwork would serve as card art. In that case, your original composition makes more sense--however you might still benefit from a change like this if you change something about the gingerbread guy to make them pop out less (reduce contrast, simplify lighting? slightly darken? etc). The main reason I placed the gingerbread guy as such is because the size-perspective seems off.
Anyways, you're done with the piece so maybe next time.

>>4529663
Well when you sit your butt kinda sinks into the seat a little so she looks like she’s floating coz her rear isn’t sinking into the seat.

>>4529987
Gorgeous colours and lighting dude!

>>4529772
heyhey, i would recommend to you - to rly study perspective and anatomy a bit
If you look at er hand you will see how flat it is, it still doesn not look right to the eye - i think you choose a hard perspective here - you did not even drew the hand larger than the left one (the one which is facing down).
It faces down so everything will shrink in size
Work on head -construction too - no, i would recommend you from my heart to practice cylinder, boxes and place bodyparts in them.
Go with gesture do some everyday so you get a feeling for proportion, than practice gesture in perspecctive - i could only explain this personally..

anyways you draw with "symboly", since your eyes are flat and look like from old egypts-symbols.

Start easy you will have much more joy later on, i promise - but you have to fight through some painful excercises (but still with some of your own work to not get a burn-out).

Other than that, the atmospere you build in the picture is nice, but the technical-excecution is poor

Keep it up.

>>4530631
thanks for taking the time to crit man you're spot on with that analysis and I really appreciate it

Instead of going to sleep at a reasonable time, I ended up sribbling together something tonight. Didn‘t really have any plan on what I wanted to draw, so just went with fleshing out shapes that kinda reminded me of something. Kinda unsure how to make it better though, aside from rendering everything out more and make a clearer distinction between horizon and sky.

Thoughts? What could be improved?

>>4531023
bro i love your submission so much,it has so much soul and personality while staying true to the topic! if I weren't such a shy retarded fuck I would spam your comment section with praises.

>>4531064
I'm so happy you like it! :D

>>4529769

THANK YOU

>>4531023
Nice! I’ve been meaning to ask you this for quite a while on the site, but what learning material(s) did you use for drawing, and how would you recommend studying them?

>>4527388
damn. This is really damn solid. Good job

>>4531187
moar

A study

>>4531279
really nice, feel like you could benefit from some harder edges in the light side of the face, and maybe a flat brush

Any help with overcast lighting/color?

>>4531358
um no his problem is hard edges he needs to blend

>>4528639
I'm not a particular fan of your style or even your designs, but I have to say that I really admire your tenacity and persistence. It's been nice seeing you regularly upload and develop.

>>4531254
thank you

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>>4531392
Thanks to both of you for the crits though, appreciate it

>>4531187
blog?

>>4531279
wickz?

>>4531196
Thanks!
>what learning material(s) did you use for drawing
I feel like the most helpful to me, the ones after which I visibly "levelled up" were:
- Keys to Drawing, really great if you're at the beginning of your artistic journey
- Basic Photoshop Rendering from ctrl + paint, as a great introduction to digital painting
- and Fundamentals of Lighting by Sam Nielson - an excellent explanation how to render your drawings from imagination.

>how would you recommend studying them?
All of these have assignments already included :^)

Thank you anon who helped me with anatomy yesterday, trying to fix this trouble, new update

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>>4520980
That composition is worth 20k m8

>>4531710
Oh, it's cute! Lovely rendering on the fur. Something you should bear in mind however is that deer very rarely stand with their legs straight like that.

Because they're prey animals they're usually in a position that would help facilitate an escape if threatened, which is typically with a single, or both, hind legs extended.

>>4532104
This is why values are often not a good indication.
You can't keep out of the equation the hue and saturation and here they are pretty much essentian for the composition,

Worked on this today. No reference, just from imagination. Trying to focus on good line art with varying line weight. Until recently I had been using vector layers, 100% opacity, and black for the line art. Thanks to critiques, now it's a render layer, 75% opacity, and dark grey. Hopefully the changes show, frens.

tried to follow a ref

>>4531515
buddykaroon actually, but wickz is a cool guy

>>4531363
Just slightly blue. not too much.

>>4532265
can i give you some constructive criticism

>>4532481
you're on 4chan on the critique board dummy

>>4532481
Guy who posted the artwork here. Please do.

My last shit.

>>4531402
I think I've only posted like 2 other drawings on /ic/ in the past month maybe u got me confused w/ some other dude but ty

Trying to improve my linework

>>4533688
your linework will improve once you improve your fundamentals

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>>4532265
i made an edit of what i thought would be more appealing, the major changes are larger torso (she looks 3’6 in the original), pink nipples, less striated arms, changed colors and added a background. i hope this helps!!!!!!!
also im mobile posting so the colors

might look washed out, heres the full edit
https://files.catbox.moe/rnptxj.jpg

Had plenty fun while doing this

>>4533746
ok perma/beg/

>>4533770
Very helpful and nice edit, anon. I was actually adding a beach background when you posted, kek. I tried out the stroke and may try it a few different ways before deciding. I'll experiment with the proportions later. I do actually want her to be a little short, and not caucasian (for the nipples). Thanks for the input and good stuff

How do you like? Is supposed to envoke strong emotion. I call it "getting punched in the dick"

>>4533688
its sweet already, but wanting to improve is something righteous.

>>4534092
not really. Dick is too big for a flaccid one, aslo circumcised - eww. The punch doesnt look strong - the effect doesnt help. The fist looks pretty bad and clenched weakly.

>>4534092
Anon you inspired me to try a quick sketch. Maybe it will accentuate the impact if it comes from down low and appears to rearrange the dick and balls.

>>4534184
This looks like you’re fist bumping a half erect cock

I drew senna from league

Update, I gave to goat more power

>>4534317
O, дapoвa, бpaтишкa. Toжe тyт cидишь?

did this today...

>>4534250
at first glance i couldn't see what it is - put your line-weight stronger on some parts of the drawing to - and the original one has more "force/power", even if it looks stiff

>>4534396
blog?

Yes

>>4534396
>>4534317
>>4530832
>>4529663
>>4527072
>>4523413
>>4522540
>>4517980
Amazing concept art!
>>4534302
Beautiful drawing. Hair looks kinda phallic??
>>4533206
Love your paintings! You have a a very unique vision.
>>4531279
I agree with that other anon who suggested more defined edges, I think it would add up to that dystopian ambience.
>>4522927
I don't really understand the relation between the man and the horse's body... Looks a little weird to me.

I know how much you guys love corporate illustration so here's something for you.

>>4534488
Yoo the polish girl is alive. Nice ilustration and thanks for the good vibes do

Di you listen to music when you draw?

>>4520736
Four hours dude? Seriously? Don't waste your time like that

>>4533938
Sorry but >>4533770 is leagues ahead of what you’re doing. The torso is totally out of proportion, the colors are muddy and ugly, and it’s not sexy. Look at what you did versus what he did and study it. Also, this should be in the sexual /alt/ thread.

Inking this for fun and experimenting with different brushes.

Done on my phone with Ibis Paint X.

>>4534748
i would not have the patience to do a piece like this on my phone

>>4535340
that's a really pleasant artstyle

>>4532104
this img would work better without the dumb cat. like jinx just blew somethingu p and annie and some peeps are angry about it(?) and then the cat is just literally slapped on there, what is she adding to the image?

>>4517446
Wanted to do something a bit different. Looking to start committing to figuring out lineless rendering. Any tips or videos would be helpful.

>>4535340
such a cutie, but i have to ask for legal reasons if she shaves or not.

Drew the villain of my ocs today, I really love how he turned out <3

>>4531363
Nice work anon.

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>>4536270
Dude, chill

>>4536270
kys pwy

>>4536270
Show us your art then you fucking moron kys

>>4536270
pyw

some face practices

>>4536282
These are great anon!

@4536270
>his board
>hasnt posted a single pice
>wall of replies
>DRAW thread of all /ic/ generals where its all about giving advice to eachother
bayt, dont give (you)

>decide to check on /ic/ after months
>see this @4536270

Its really guys like this that take away all the fun from these threads.

>>4536453
>runescape

cringe

self portrait

>>4536590
are you ok anon?

>>4536453
figure mostly done, effects and bg
>>4536574
Yes.

>>4536635
why? has my Harper, tooth, face Mark... im trying to learn drawing

Have been Playing Call of Cthulhu so decided to make a Drawing based on one of the NPCs

>>4536648

Could I get a redline on this wip? I feel like perspective is wrong, but I'm not sure how to fix it.
I'm trying to make it look like viewer is on the ground and looking up at her. The bottom edge of this stiff, cone shaped coat is supposed to be parallel to the ground and low enough that only from this very low angle her crotch would be visible.

Draw anime gilrs but actually in love with militarysm.

On going, oil over paper

Can I get your opinions on this? I don't usually do landscapes, but I thought I need to start working on things.

I very intentionally avoided details on ground as I'm not particularly great at them and this exercise was mostly to practice shapes and colour.

>>4537765
not enough contrast, looks like one long blotch of color. Try again with a more conventional image ratio so you can actually see what youre doing wrong

>>4537975
Maybe that's what he's going for, I think it looks appealing

>>4537765
Id say the rock silhouettes need more detail. Its mostly round shapes but you could put in some straight lines in between to make more interesting shapes.

Female body practice

>>4536301
Thanks!

Sketching some cinematic stuff

>>4534691
workout music. keeps me focused

>>4535340
Really like this! Blog?

Wip. I know the horns are overlapping and need to be moves a little bit.

>>4538508
what the fuck

>>4517596
Ever heard of edges my man? I get that you like planes and value but edges signify forms as well as value relationships

>>4538634
twitter.com/twxwx7

>>4538602
I love this anon. It's beautiful

>>4535340
tifa

>>4533688
i like the variation in lineweight, most people just make pen pressure do the brush size but having one unform weight for silhouette and on for detail is pretty cool, it looks like how draftsmen and designers do