/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4498241
her left arm is totally dislocated from her shoulder
that should help you out

>>4498246
Or she ate this

>>4498246
pls redline it

am /beg/ so im probably extremely wrong. but something with her left arm don feel right

>>4498299
Nailed it.

>>4498299
How you did it

>>4498299
In my opinion this redline is the correct perspective if you leave the legs intacts, or close enough. The artist forced the perspective to make the face visible in this pose at the viewing angle. It's not a wrong move imo to create an appealing coomart.

Perfect 90° asshole, but slightly tilted pelvis.

>>4498241
Even if it isn’t perfect it isn’t nearly as bad as other examples I’ve seen on here, at least enough so I’d give it a pass. I always think it’s weird when the pussy is the exact same color as the rest if the skin. I get wanting to omit details in order to simplify and idealize but it makes the end result more sterile and less sexual. It’s just missing a little oomph. Maybe a different facial expression or details like sweat or something would help.

Quit mapping the boxes,
Draw a simplified version of the skeleton on top.
Like it or not the body isn’t dictated by cylinders and boxes.

FEEL the form! Also look at real people and not anime. There are tons of pics on /s/ with this pose.

>>4498299
>>4498477
You have the right ideas and are thinking in the right way. Except you need to practice some more before you can actually pull this off.

Frankly it seems you're studying anatomy before you learned to draw a good box.

>>4498241
I always say loomis for a reason

>>4498241
As usual when some coomer retard draws this pose, they tried to fit the asshole and veejay in along with a front on home plate face with the torso being not far from those just standing there anime dolly upper half. This is what happens when you cant draw anything in perspective especially home plates with pasted on eyes.

>>4499206
What?

>>4499208
From the head to the waist is from a body standing.

From the hips to the feet is a body laying down.

They dont fit together.

>>4498241

>>4498299
So this... is the power... of fundies...

>>4499206
Seethe harder, dilate, rent free, pyw

>>4499228
Fucking master gimme some advice please

>>4498241
How the hell does one "map" a piece

>>4499238
Are you even saying anything apart from meme speak catchphrases?

>>4499228
If this is true why is the tit on the side of that box?
>>4499251
Learn how not to draw?
>>4499368
Seems like some bullshit to me.

>>4499228
Literally how is this helpful in any way to anyone

>>4499408
Coomers are just like npcs.

>>4499434
I’m unsure what you mean.

>>4499440
What is the point and how does it help you draw

>>4499440
I also want to know. Also, those boxes dont even fit the original drawing let alone correct it. What’s the point of it?

>>4499444
Drawing in boxes helps me, may not be for everyone.

>>4499460
Blog?

>>4499228

>>4499228
This is what I think is wrong here

>>4499555
You made it worse by infusing western pig.

>>4499146
>You did a good job at anatomy but your boxes are not perfect.

wat

>>4499573
That poster might be a cat

>>4499573
That job wasn't good but you get props for trying,

>>4499555
likeability beats accuracy. sorry but that stumped torso looks weird even if it's "correct"

>>4499855
>likeability beats accuracy.
It took me over 5 years to learn this. Only other artists care if you did it "correct". Appeal is far more important for everyone else and you can produce some very accurate but completely unappealing drawings if you don't realize this.

>>4499771
Anatomy of that redline seems fine to me. I don't know why people get so caught up in making a perfect box when it's only a placeholder to help construction. The only thing I'd correct is that maybe the head could swing a bit more to the right.

>>4499202
lol did no one read this or if it's not an anime grill no one cares?

>>4499886
Show this to /asg/.

>>4499886
The ass and the hand are not sharing the same floor btw. It looks like her pelvis is in an invisible pillow

>>4498241
This is as close as I could muster the pose. Perhaps I'm not flexible but if my legs were any higher I'd not be stable.

>>4499886
you did it friend? can you give me some advice? your level seems amazing, please

>>4499555
But that looks fucking terrible anon maybe you should stick to doing redlines on The Mary Sue.

>>4499934
Great effort anon

>>4499934
thot

>>4498241
I tried the pose on my bed, maybe I'm just fat but it seemed really awkward to have the legs pulled up while also posting on my elbow. Felt much more natural to lay on my back.

>>4499934
>>4499969
I just tried this pose and I can confirm that you are unflexible fatties. I'm not even a girl or young.

>>4499880
>a placeholder to help construction.

The construction shapes are a lot moree complex than a box.

>>4499555
Ahahahahaha holy shit
Remember this is where boxes and Proko will get you

>>4500029
so what do you recommend instead, and show what that other path made you achieve, how you can do it better than the anon you are laughing at

>>4500032
Just to let you know that copying anime is better than any loomis head shit.

>>4499547
@lilramune

>>4499976
> I'm not even a girl or young.

You are immature though. Otherwise you would not make that post.

>>4500073
You sound like a woman

>>4500043
show your anime copying

>>4500078
You're just furthering his point with that post

*Ehem* trying to stay on topic. The main anatomical flaw if we compare the pose anon with the girl pic is the rotation of the ribcage and angling of the clavicles. The origninal Pic has the clavicles parallel to the flor where pose anone has them in a bit of a 45 degree angle, mainly because of the rotation of the ribcage. And from that, the head is also angled.

>>4500029
>>4499886

>literally multiple different interpretations of what people believe is correct
how would i know if I am learning correctly or incorrectly by studying this or is there just a "close enough" answer

>>4500448

It's up to you to find what works for you. Each example in this thread works for that specific artist.

>>4499934
LONDON?

>>4500892
LONDON IS BURNING!!1!

>>4499460
How do you learn to do it?

>>4498241
Why do I keep staring at the butthole for 5 minutes every time I open this image.

>>4502177
because soft buttholes are a patrician-tier fetish

>>4499934
Cute! I wanna slap that butt.

>>4502977
Asshole is about shit. And shit is for pigs and plebs, degenerate fagot.

>>4502977
Based and lovepilled

>>4503050
Cringe and hatepilled

>>4503050
More for me then, anon

>>4503050
If you ever fuck a girl in the ass who loves it, you will change your mind.

>>4499855
How do you measure “likeability”?

>>4499934
>LONDON
Kek good one

debating over the HUMAN accuracy of a ANIME character. the state.

it looks good. and people will like it. that's all that matters when drawing a cartoon.

>>4502177
the asshole is the best part of a woman

>>4502177

I keep looking at her feet instead. I wish they'd be pressed against my face.

cylinders bro

>>4498241
Try to the best of your abilities first, if you did this for 3 hours then it is fine to trace it and deconstruct it, then you can compare the trace with the other drawings you did and figure out where you're furthest off (whether that is proportions, construction or something else). The next time you do a pose just keep in mind how it was in the trace and try and see if you can now do those proportion/constructions/ect.

>>4499202
>>4499886
i read loomis but i dont even understand what he is talking about

>>4504861
pussy to puffy

>>4505200
Bottom image shows everything he talks about, on top of that he just says to make the near parts bigger and far parts smaller.

>>4505207
no i see what he did
i mean i dont unterstand loomis explanations

>>4505200
then it's not a drawing problem but a reading comprehension one.
There is literally drawings with texts..how can anyone not understand this is beyond me.

>>4499934
LONDON

>>4499976
Post yourself then, puss.

>>4499934
GMI