/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4466279
Yes.

having a soul is important too

>>4466279
>good

what did OP mean by this?

>>4466285
Are you saying proko is soulless?

>>4466293
proko is the epitome of an empty xerox husk

>>4466293
>>4466311
talk about something else ffs

>>4466279
No

Is the joke that he found polygons instead of guns or that he thinks polygons are called "polyguns"?

>>4466381
Yes

>all panels are frontviews or 3/4 views of the characters

The absolute state

>>4466381
Give proko a break, this was a comic he made for his wife about their dog.

>>4466293
more that he isnt human

>>4466279
You need art that fit the visual story telling, it needs to show the setting, characters, movement, emotion, even if it is not particulary good. See Maus for exemple, most people on /beg/ could draw better than that, but it isn'tjust about the technical skill.

>>4466279
Nope, but you need to know how comics work in order to make comics.

>>4466639
>Moonstruck
Why do tumblrtards have no sense of visual appeal and good writing?

>>4466647
because they're not writers, they're fujos who fetishize homosexuality

>>4466661
True. I like how in that comic the writer tried hiding her fujo-ness by saying the obviously male centaur guy is "non-binary". And of course he's also effeminate and only lusts after buff dudes.

>>4466647
They just copy whatever is "hip" at the time (like Steven Universe in this case) without any consideration about if it looks good or not.

>>4466517
i wish i had a wife

>>4466279
No.
Writing is the base of comics, the base of everything really.
Just look at one punch man.

>>4466706
Me too. One day I will get good at art make a life sized sculpture and marry it

>>4466639
>>4466682
this is fine, though. it's understandable and clear, the text bubbles placement works, the art communicates what it needs to, the panel placement could be more organic but is more a matter of taste. nothing about this lacks function as a comic.

>>4466804
Its creator lacks function as a human.

>>4466682
>frat boy inviting shy awkward (fat) girl to a party
let me guess it ends with rape doesn't it

>>4466517
This is really by proko? I thought it was a joke he couldn’t draw outside of copying but wow.

>>4466812
>boy
I though it was a girl for some reason

>>4466817
>he doesn't recognize Stan Prokoneko's iconic signature at the bottom
NGMI

>>4466279
Unpopular opinion, but I think this is charming in a normie-kinda way, like those dumb minion posts on facebook.

>>4466279
>Polyguns

Disregarding EVERYTHING about the comic's art itself, who in the right mind would think that's a good joke?

Nobody would call polygon-shaped objects they find on the ground as "polygons", sane people would refer them as "polygon-shaped tiles/cardboards" not fucking polygons.

>>4466639
The amount of webcomic protagonists who wait tables is impressive, buncha deadbeat ameridebts.
When I go out to buy stuff in my 3rd world shithole, cashiers are either women or gay men (sometimes maybe hetero but full of piercings and tattoos), I'm always astounded by it.

>>4467325
I've also noticed too many webcomics focus on wagecucks working shit jobs (usually with a self-insert main character).
Say what you will about capeshit, but at least their main characters typically aren't average losers you'd see working in stores/restaurants.

>>4466682
>>4466639
I feel like I am finally getting the feeling when women sees men portraying women that's sterilely-cute and faultless in fiction.

Real guys don't behave like that, not even when they are gay.

>>4467372
Will you make a subreddit where you post edits of this comic trying to portray this character in a more centaur-realistic way?

If not, you're not even close to seeing things as a woman.

>>4466279
At the contrary, good art is detrimental. It's a curse in disguise if people are attracted by the art. People will expect the level of quality to stay the same, and it will take longer to churn out pages then they will complain about the wait, get bored and read Questionnable Content instead.