/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Wash your hands faggots.

>>4420309
Work in progress atm.

>>4420461
God, i love your stuff
>>4420382
Cool shit i love how the hair turned out
>>4420384
Nice pose and expressiong and delicious thighs

>>4420466
Thank you! I'm experimenting with texturing.

>>4420024
God damn it, i was laughing so hard at Always Sunny and i spit all over the picture before i could color it.

Anyone have that anime ab shading tutorial?

>>4420041
>do you draw sketch cards
What is a sketch card?

>>4420473
so hote??!!

>>4420476
OOOFFFF HOT... I TAKE BACK ANY BAD COMMENTS

>>4420461
im beg, so idk

>>4420483
pretty believable fish-eye anon, be strong

>>4420483
sweet! thank you for the help I agree with your changes to her head! I knew I had done something wrong...

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>>4420461
i dont think this will help at all but i had fun doing it

>>4420532
i think u did a really nice job, looks cute as heck...

Another spider

>>4420586
hotie aaaaaaaaaaaa

>>4420592
>hote
>HOT
>>4420482
>hotie
Dude go fap already

*reposting because I didn't see the link to this new thread*

>>4419788
Damn, Rockset. That Squigly animation preview looks amazing already.
Teach me your ways...please?

>>4420024
>I gave the visor a kicker in procreate with an Add layer
Post it so we can take a look at it, please?

>>4420586
Blog?

>>4420309
I can't tell what I'm doing wrong with the one on the bottom right...

>>4420586
That's a darn cute spider, anon.

>>4420627
Some things I notice immediately:

- The pupil should not be in the front area of the iris. See pic related.
- Because we can see the inside of the ear in the other two from the front, but from profile we can see the same amount, it makes it feel like the ear is bent backwards. We should see more from the side or less from the front.
- The back of the head says she's looking up, but the front and nose says she's looking forward. If she's supposed to be looking straight, the back of the head should connect with the neck at a higher point. See pic related. If she's supposed to be looking up, angle the front of the face to match.

Honestly though, it's not bad. I'm just nitpicking because you pointed out that you think there's something wrong with it.

>>4420615
I touched up a couple other spots

>>4420639
YES THIS IS EFFING HOT!!!

>>4420641
>>4420639
I meant to ask, why do people like samus so much? I mean she is kinda cool, but she has no personality.. She always seems so serious in all the fan art pictures

>>4420639
blog?

>>4420645
hot af

>>4420644
sick design and nostalgia

>>4420635
>The pupil should not be in the front area of the iris. See pic related.
Should be? Not every artist that does anime and anime-related artwork adheres to that ""rule""

>>4420662
You're not wrong. Shouldn't have used "should" :) It's just something that stood out to me. Maybe I'm used to artists who draw it that way.

Working on a reference bust of a character for a steampunk animation project...okay it's not a project its just me trying to draw an animation.

>>4420789
Sry for hugeness.

>>4420789
the thumbnail made it look like a tall chick with a tiny head with long arms and short legs

>>4420645
please anon, give me your blog

>>4420461
after corrections, tried to make the head less flat mostly...

Why does this even exist as a separate thread from /beg/

>>4420907
haha GOOD ONE

>>4420532
i need to stop drawing shitposts at 2 AM

>>4420996
super cute!! blog pls

>>4420635
Thanks anon! I'll do my best to fix those things

>>4420900
lookin good

>>4421010
dont have one, soz

>>4420586
I wanna know were you learned to draw with so much energy
I don't know the right terms for it but your stuff always has so much graphical intensity

>>4420623
@ohheythatfisher

>>4420627
Gotta keep working on anatomy...

>>4420746
Reminds me heavily of teen Obito.

>>4421148
Thank you, if it helps, I think sketches always look more energetic, so I don’t put a lot into polish. I think longer unbroken brushstrokes that span the length of a gesture help give things energy as well. Another useful thing is to keep rough sketches at extremely low opacity when drawing over them, and treat what you do on top as an almost new picture

>>4421343
EFFING BEAUtiful GIB BLOG

>>4421238
Oh boy, oh boy, oh boy, oh boy... I'm glad it's not a human.

>>4421364
im not consistent at all with my lineart man, i would disappoint you.

>>4421378
PLEAAASEEE

>>4421238
this is gay man why you draw this

>>4421403
Your blog, hand it over.

>>4421403
BEAUTIFUL!!

>>4421445
It's gay to have a dink?

wipperooni

>>4421344
oh, huh I don't really do undersketches, maybe that's why my stuff always feels stiff
I'll try doing that and then draw over with a more unbroken quick strokes and see if that helps, thanks

>>4420473
Cute ocs, are you planning on maxing a comic of them?
>>4420476
>>4420639
You always have top tier taste in anime chicks
>>4420532
Thank you so much. This is really helpful.
>>4420586
Cute spider girl(boy)
>>4420627
I really like this, especially the eyes. Reminds me of wakfu for some reason.
>>4420645
This is awesome, love how much personality it has
>>4420746
I like it but maybe try making the lines thinner. I feel it makes it a little stiff looking.
>>4420789
That tummy holy shit, really good.
>>4420996
Best monogatari rori
>>4421123
This is so cute and the colors make it so comfy
>>4421343
Cool stuff
>>4421403
I wanna reach your level of linework, it's amazing

>>4421492
overall good but I find the heavy shading on his back leg jarring, mostly because the wolf goes much further back but has no such shading.

>>4421492
>wolflink.png
does link enjoy the knot during summers nights in the open sky?

>>4421403
Your recent stuff is excellent.
Marry me, Gamer Girl

>>4421537

>>4421543

>>4421493
yeah ur right

started a neo-classical self portrait

>>4421492
awesome!

>>4421543

>>4421537
>>4421543
>>4421546
>>4421598
if it wasnt so good id beg you to stop

maybe I animate it?

>>4421492
>bow chain tangent
mask the back of the wolf to make link pop

>>4421537
>>4421543
>>4421598
these are so cozy

>>4421485
girl is too small and detailed, but interesting comp

>>4421343
goggle eyes too wide, just make them bigger since its animu

>>4421123
cute - looks like that winter coat star girl OC that we drew in mystyle thread

>>4420900
the giant anime eye cropping is weird around the outside. why not just crop inside the black space? or make it a circle?

>>4421642
>goggle eyes too wide, just make them bigger since its animu
shit youre right, didnt even think about it.

>>4421642
>girl is too small and detailed, but interesting comp
Yea I am trying to get into more background zone and focus on it more, is it the hair? I'll post more after I lay colours. Was checking values with this

>>4421537
>>4421543
>>4421546
>>4421598
Blog?
Where did you learn to render like that? I love it

>>4421460
Beholdnika on Instagram :)
>>4421467
>>4421491
Thank you anons!
>>4421538
A-anon, thank you

>>4421642
>the giant anime eye cropping is weird around the outside. why not just crop inside the black space? or make it a circle?

I agree, will try to make it into a circle, I kinda just drew the lines not thinking of a composition and I know it looks bad...

>>4421733
Is this your character design? If so the silhouette on the right is so much stronger, and I really recommend reworking his armour to show that off more especially emphasizing the frog feet and spindly legs. I'd also recommend looking into shapes in character design. Right now hes a lanky, tall, long frog, with small round shield, and a thick square sword. I'd recommend reworking the sword to be more like a long skinny sabre, to match the frog knight's long legged nature.

he also might be a lizard? I cant tell.

>>4421815
My friend likes the right one more.

some more stuff. I live in italy, coronachan has made it easy for me tostay at home and draw.

>>4421783
Thanks, By now I'm only on Twitter, still have to learn a lot, but maybe I started practicing a lot rendering circles and simple shapes. Because I use traditional media, pencils mostly, I use a dry brush to render the pencil over the paper. But it depends on the style, others use a cross hatching style like Serpieri for expample (pic related)

On Twitter you can find me as @Toxodroid
https://twitter.com/Toxodroid

>>4422014
>I use a dry brush to render the pencil over the paper. But it depends on the style, others use a cross hatching style
Do you have some recommendable resources on shading? Especially traditional omes

>Thanks, By now I'm only on Twitter
Newgrounds, if you feel like making your higher quality pics (like the ones in this thread) available. Twitter's image compression is pure cancer.

>still have to learn a lot
You can already depict juicy, squishy and organic elements very well. I wish I could do that (at all), ha. I'd never leave a single paper blank

>>4420900
its a circle now

>>4421973
I got my water, my food, and other foods and now I'm ready to grind away this month too.

>>4421637
ikr he is so good at shading

>>4421403
>>4421798

I'm tired of your drawings, you need to study the form and perspective, you've been drawing the same old boring crap for the last many months those figures are always flat looking

>>4421798
Do more dynamic poses like this, gal.

>>4422350
>I'm tired of your drawings
boredanon is bored again

>>4422350
Women for some reason have a harder time making things look non-flat.

>>4420476
ruined - just gotta move on

>>4422408
Not him but the biggest art problem I have with my cartoons is that they look flat and I've studied Preston Blair and other cartooning books front to back but everything I draw just looks flat and I don't know what to do about it any more.

>>4422427
Here’s the last thing I drew that I was kind of happy with.

I just had fun with color

>>4422425
...what exactly was ruined?

>>4422425
I wouldnt say ruined, but your lineart did carry a much different mood to it. Do you ever do digital?

Update, fuck she has a lot of stripes, should it be Leviathan or just a regular dick
>>4420615
>Teach me your ways
I don't really have anything to share, animation was always pretty intuitive to me, you know that stretching and moving circle exercise every new animator is doing? I guess I took it at a different level and imagine every single moving part as a stretching and moving ball. Faster movement = more distance between each frame, that's all I know

>>4422454
I over rendered the torso, hair, and legs trying to keep the body more soft than blocked, but mostly her color scheme was hard to put on paper
>some shade of red (which I never figured out)
>flesh tone, which I haven't figured out in general
>pink leggings, which I accidentally made purple

the black and white are just highlights, which are really weird for me. Samus and Spider Gwen have colors that are much simpler and more forgiving.

>>4422457
maybe I'll do digital color, I forgot I snapshot the lineart

funne hat

Light variant or dark variant?

I know this isn't the best, yet I like it quite a lot. Should I continue drawing in this style?

>>4422504
hartmanpilled

>>4422488
isnt that kirke from berserk ?
Pretty cool anyway

>>4422512
its Coco from Witch Hat Atelier

>>4422460
Sounds interesting. How did you go about learning construction? I'm still learning perspective (and rendering afterwards), so knowing how to proceed would be neat.

>should it be Leviathan or just a regular dick
My vote goes to just a normal dick

>>4422484
Honestly, I don't think it looks bad. Maybe it's different when you look at it in person, but I'd say it looks neat.

>>4422498
dark all the way m8

>>4422448
did you draw that? Idk why but I always find pixel art really niche and nice to look at it.

>>4422526
Literally just draw, I was doing that for 4 years and only few months ago took the Hampton pill, but couldn't proceed beyond the torso construction. But you know, judging by what I read here everyone has the different approach and it might not work for you

>>4422427
>>4422435
Forget the books. Try wrapping lines, and uh, wrapping your mind around perspective. In an intuitive way, not the vanishing points and all that. Think about the volume. Koki (pictured) is great at conveying form on simple figures. It doesn't have to be a cartoon, perspective is everywhere. Look for perspective clues, like the stripes or creases on a dress. Think about how objects are oriented or tilted in space, and how this effects their perspective. A good exercise is to redline like here, but for the whole figure. Start with something simple like an apple. Apples are basically lumpy spheres, but there's more going on there than you might think.
Though fwiw, many cartoonists intentionally flatten for style. Pretty common in rubberhose. But if you want a sense of depth, you need to think in terms of the 3D shape, not just the graphic/2D one. Graphical considerations come afterward.

>>4422488
think the iguin came out a tiny bit better

>>4422560
Thanks Anon, I’ll work on thinking more in 3-D and try out those redlines ontop of some past drawings.

>>4422435
I respect you so much just for actually putting your work out there.

>>4422560
Who made the left pic?

>>4422425
Study more anatomy. Your 2000s charm carries a lot.

>>4422425
Eh - no more turd polishing, i need to be more bold with the marker colors - I’m too scared of losing white space, but i should just fill it in and go for broke
1) original
2) original on multiply over color blocks
3) BG on exclusion
4) BG on difference

Any favorites?

>>4422733
>i should just fill it in and go for broke
May your wallet rest in piece.

>>4422733
>Any favorites?
1 & 2

>>4422730
>anatomy
Yea, i was struggling with the tummy, then the legs, then i realized the shoulders were off, at which point i was like fuck it - i need to study

>>4422528
I need a better photo setup, the drawings are actually more fun to look at in person because you can pick them up and look at it from different angles

>>4422560
Who are you, based redliner?

>>4422733
1st with the skin tones of the 2nd one would be ideal imo

>>4422307
done

>>4422425
love it!
>>4422733
I prefer 2...

>>4422512
>>4422488
>>4422448
cute!

>>4422498
>>4422460
c-cute...

>>4422828
epik

Recommendations regarding how to shade her hair?

Comments are welcome.

>>4422881
U aren't thinking of forms and just pillow shading, shading is very easy and intuiti e when you know what you are doing... u should study more from life... read the sticky my frend...

>>4422881
Well, you sure do like Joey...as a trap

Sorry, I couldn't resist

Trying to work on color and shading.

sketfhch gbeeb bribrll

>>4422891
>still no gf
:(

>>4422883
I'll try to think more 3 dimensionally. I was asking for recommendations regarding the shape of the shiny parts of the hair - simple (edge only) shading, or shading according to the shape?

Sorry if this is hard to understand, replies with reference images (shaded anime/cartoon hair) would be appreciated. Or artist suggestions.

>>4422884
No prob bro, I hadn't realized myself.

>>4422881
very lazy tegaki. add clipping mask to the shadows, and turn it more purple using watercolor tool, usually works. Not straight up purple, push the hue in a red purple blue direction, good on any color.

the shines are a bunch of H shapes / variants. Top right is super easy to do, but it's kinda bad

>>4422960
Oooh thanks, very helpful! I used to shade like the top right, I thought it was less-than-great so I assumed I'd ask for help. Will definitely keep this.

Inbetweens. Still don't know about speed, every time I finish something people say it's too slow. Is it fast enough now?

>>4423100
there needs to be more impact when he hits deep. looks like she is the one doing the work right now, and he just going up and down.

>>4423100
HOTEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

>>4422541
Thanks. The dark variant is actually the original, but I wanted to make an 80's workout Bowsette and fuck me, trying to coordinate those nasty ass fluorescent colours and patterns is a nightmare. I wasn't sure the dark one looked okay.

>>4422350
Sorry anon, I’ll work on it
>>4422353
I actually had a lot of fun with this, dynamic poses scare me off easily cause of my weak knowledge but I’ll study more to draw them ^^


Finished this, cringe concept and broken perspective but moving oooon

>>4423182
Wahmen drawing! Reminds me of Lavigne's Sk8ter boy song.

>>4423100
Blog?

>>4422542
Yeah I did, and I agree, I felt like there werent enough anime pixel artists so I got really into it... now I realize there are tons on japan twitter but I still feel like Im getting pretty okay at it.

New fag. I nead opinion on these sketches

>>4422846
This is fantastic. I have to try doing something with that perspective myself

>>4422881
Are you actively trying to go for that 2000s western anime drawing book look

>>4423437
thank u frend! you should, it is fun...

I'm trying to make storybook illustrations

>>4423463
One more

>>4423463
So much soul

>>4423463
>>4423468
they are beatufil anon!!

gj!

>>4423469
>>4423474
Thank you, friendly anons~

>>4422846
That use of perspective is pure quality

pls no bully

Not being overly concerned with end result is a good way to stay productive and try things you rarely would.

Critique away.

>a
>b

>>4423649
You handle the cartoony forms really well, nice work

>>4423582
>Not being overly concerned with end result is a good way to stay productive and try things you rarely would.

Yes, this is key. Focusing on your process more than the product leads to growth and discoveries about art.

Onto the crits:

The perspective is convincing for 2/3rds of the picture until the horizon line. Beneath that some of the figures look properly scaled to my eye, such as the small ones closest to the portcullis, but others are not, such as the hot babe at the bottom. While I think her face is fine in itself, she looks like she's standing in a hole in the ground when she should actually be completely in the frame. According to Loomis, all figures of the same height standing on the same ground plane should be intersected by the horizon line at the same point on their bodies. Pic related.

While the castle does a good job of establishing the perspective, the building itself looks incomplete. What's already there isn't necessarily bad but it looks like you drew a castle from imagination instead of from reference. But you seem fully capable of drawing good castles if you spent more time on it.

This is a pretty fun sketch otherwise. The dragons have a lot of movement and character--I can tell you must have studied them from reference first. The magic energy sparking off the sceptre also adds a lot of movement to the piece and divides up the composition in a pleasing way, nicely separating the knights from the fearsome beasts. And I like the girl knight in profile a lot.


Your work is very good anon, keep it up!

>>4423649
d a t b u t t

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>>4422846
Glad i asked, i liked 3, but i was blinded by novelty layer modes

>>4422738
I need refills on B24, B02, Y02 and i blew through the whole bottles of R000 and T4, waiting to accumulate $50 worth of materials to do a blick order

>>4422425
I was supposed to draw mechs, but i did these studies / color tests instead. I just discovered popman3850, so much quality content to study

>>4422828
I feel like u've posted a drawing similar to this before - you got any new material?

>>4422846
this came out great with the colors

>>4422889
not bad, if you want to focus on a single thing like shading then just do like a torso study instead of full body. The weightlessness of the figure is distracting - divide and conquer

>>4423182
always a fan of your stuff - do you do construction with pen before rendering? or do you just go for it?

>>4423436
do 10 more pages, check your proportions. Not horrible

>>4423463
>>4423468
is this WC? the coloring looks a bit stiff being contained inside the lifework. Loosen up a bit, sometimes if you color before you ink it makes it more dynamic

>>4423533
looks like a wip, finish it or move on

>>4423646
face is nice, but body language isn't matching the scenario. Maybe he can be lazy punching since he is a giant, or his whole body needs to be plowing into the punch

>>4423692
>I was supposed to draw mechs, but i did these studies / color tests instead
Perhaps you need some motivation/reference. The link below has some mech artbooks

https://archive.org/details/manga_artbooks?sort=-publicdate

>popman3850
Aye, I like his stuff as well. The only problem that I have with his drawings is that the faces are way too similar. Perhaps it's intended and I just didn't know.

>>4423707
>is this WC? the coloring looks a bit stiff being contained inside the lifework. Loosen up a bit, sometimes if you color before you ink it makes it more dynamic

Yeah it's watercolor over linework. I'm new to WC so I get that horrid patchy texture when painting wet on dry and I'm still trying to figure out how to get an even tone. That's a good suggestion, I'll get used to painting first and applying lines later. I also found that painting wet-on-wet helps smooth out the brushstrokes. I'm more comfortable with oil, watercolor is a foreign land to me.

>>4423692
More studies, idk where to draw the head on the right one, the original ref didn’t look correct either

>>4423711
My stuff has been kind of stiff recently, trying to loosen up

>>4423828
I thought u were leaving?

>>4423715
keep practicing - when I do WC it feels like a performance art. It's a bunch of planning and thinking, then like 10min of intense coloring while the paper stays wet, then I just chill and watch it dry so I can do another layer

>>4422498
dark looks like ganon, maybe try a different color palette for the light variant?

>>4423913
Never said anything like that. I just gave everyone an update with where I was heading in life.

>>4423921
ah it sounded like you finally made it, so I assumed that you left

glad to see you sticking around

>>4423921
More robo stuff, please.

Experimenting with some different stuff

Spiky gold dragon man. Did it at work in 5 hours. Gonna shade and color in digital some other time.

>>4420641
pyw or go coom

>>4420644
I prefer the armor and Dark Samus porn over Samus Aran herself, to be honest.

>>4424302
>Dark Samus porn
nigga wat?

>>4424355

How much of this stuff do you guys draw from pure imagination and how much do you use a reference for?

>>4420309
How do I make this look more 90s inspired?

>>4424410
I use some sort of reference for almost everything, except for doodles. I'd rather spend some time trying to look at my own hands to get a pose right to make a better piece than to do it from 100% imagination and make a weaker piece

>>4424410
My stuff's not itt at the moment, but I almost always start with some kind of reference nowadays. Even if the pose is out of my head, it's highly unusual for me to not reference for some small part of it. Head-on, eye-level shots are easy, heavy stylization is "easy." Pointless to try to draw a new or difficult pose without reference imo.
>>4424445
90s in what way? I'm getting some SWAT Kats/Ninja Turtles vibes from it, but "90s" by itself could mean something different from that.

didnt have any ideas today so i drew some art of people i like or characters i like.
funnnnnnn

>>4424463
Like 90s American streetwear

>>4424445
>>4424477
Look at old skatebaording and hip hop videos for reference

>>4423847
Casual mechs, I’m burned out

>>4424410
I almost always use a ref to start a drawing. It’s good inspo and gets the ball rolling. For example, i drew pic related from imagination, and they look lifeless

>>4424471
They all look like the same character. Try varying your faces a little.

>>4424511
The following is meant to help and give insight on how I feel about this picture.
>and they look lifeless
The poses are boring. They convey nothing of life. In a sense fitting for a machine, but not for one that is animated in its literal sense.
How well versed are you in gesture drawing?

I drew some concept art for my goat game

>>4420384

>>4420466
thanks man

>>4422498
both look good but the hand is really distracting

>>4424157
>5 hours
damn, try to be more efficient

>>4424610
My speed is ass in all things. I obsess over details too much cuz of my ocd.
What do, I need to get faster!

>>4422488
>>4422565
finished the page

>>4421641
Wow! This is sooo cute. I love how you shaded it, I’ve never seen pixel art like that.

>>4421558
I like the way you painted the face a lot. I don’t know anything about neoclassicism but I like how the colours in your painting are really soft.
It’s hard to tell what the rest will look like but I’m sure it will look great when you finish it!

>>4424385
This rendering is lovely

>>4423654
Wow, thank you so much.

Yeah, I totally winged it. I just wanted to focus on an interesting comp, draw things I wanted without stressing over how bad I am at it, and I also just wanted more than a few figures in the comp.

Everything was from imagination. I'm not saying that to brag, you've already noticed how the castle design suffered for it. As for the dragons, I just got lucky. I spent a day grinding dragons about a month ago, and I guess some of it stuck.

The girl that seems to be in a hole was not intended to be standing because I didn't want to cover the soldiers behind her. But I think I could have conveyed that she's not supposed to be standing better.

Again, thank you. I'll try to amend some of the weaknesses this sketch poses in my next drawing. I'll pay closer attention to the perspective from now on.

finally got around to finishing

hi /ic

New to this digital sketching stuff, but here's a WIP. Working on the background next

>>4424608
I love how efficient this looks

>>4422846
Always love to see your work, really need to try more of these fisheye perspective sketches myself

>>4422425
>>4423692
>>4423847
fuck these look good, I really need to get out of my comfort zone and try sketching with pens + copics.

>>4424696
Now this is sexy.

Went back to the values

>>4424445
Nice choice on the parachute windbreaker, Needs more jyncos and backpacks riding super low. Maybe some sweet ass kswiss sneaks, and a belly bag / fanny pack to hold your MIB sunglasses

>>4420382
Gotten this far. Anything I should revise?

>>4424792
is he on a ledge overlooking the monster? if so, maybe have the foreground elements overlap the bottom edge of the monster to better show distance

wip, not a fan of the eyes but trucking along.

>>4422846
Love your stuff man, probably my favorite artist on /ic/ rn.

>>4424696
another one lost to the lewd side.

>>4424687
You got this, my guy

>>4424>>4425524
Not bad, a bit more polish and id say thats all that

drew this today

>>4425529
linework and shading has potential but your anatomy has issues, ear is too big, forearm is too long and the perspective fails to convey any depth on the upper arm because there's no proper foreshortening to give the feel of perspective. Left foot looks broken and the pose is kinda stiff overall. You have potential but try and draw with more references to study figures/fundies. You can do this while applying ur style ofc.

>>4425597

>>4425685
good

>>4424700
t-thank you!!
>>4425023
t-thank you too!
but holy crap your art looks way fucking better!! any blog?

>>4424608
>goat game

I dont know how much I like this

>>4425755
s-stop s-stuttering you pinhead. What are you 12? Cringe af neckyourself shit taste on vidya too

>>4425840

>>4425832
The right side looks really weird, you basically made the shoulder and arm nonexistent.
Did you use references?

>>4425845
I did, but I failed. I went for a kind of extreme perspective but that gets lost because there isnt any context (pic related is how i wanted it to feel sorry for shitty sketch)

>>4425832
>>4425889
it reminded me of this one

Jesus, what is this pose... I havent drawn non pixel for a while and it shows

>>4425988
Very sexy is it

>>4425988
Yummy butt

First part of a larger composition I hope

>>4425988
>I havent drawn non pixel for a while and it shows
You don't sketch something before you make pixelart?

>>4426220
No, I actually don't.

>>4423707
Here’s some new stuff

>>4422014
wew

>>4425988
God I love butts, just kill me

Worked on the Ram today

>>4423100
It's not too slow, it's too smooth. You gotta remember that key frames are your action points, and in betweens are transition frames. That choppy anime style is so iconic, because there's certain things the human eye can't detect, and rendering action sloppy actually feels more true to life than if it were smooth. Past a certain point, you don't detect speed anymore. That's where stylistic choices like speed lines and stretch and squash come in. You should probably be letting your keys do more of the heavy lifting.

I actually like how smooth your animation is if that's what you were going for. But if you're worried about it being too slow, I'd maybe break down a favorite animator of yours frame by frameto see what I'm talking about.

>>4424792
>>4424803
Finished. Feels like I'm stuck somewhere.

sketch

>>4425988
hot

ok so i added stuff but im not yet done cleaning it up. just placing things and such

>>4426688
hayabusart?

>>4427133
blog?

>>4427164
@lowres12

>>4426988
yup

>>4424155
this is cute anon you have a very good eye for shading! the only thing that kinda detracts from the image to me is the mid-right of the image, that part in the pond reflection where it's clear you used the same colour a bunch on lower opacity. it doesn't fit with the rest of the picture desu. ideally the water in general would be more detailed to give more atmosphere to the piece (and for added coziness). overall, very nice tough. you clearly have talent.

>>4421558
you look Russian

i wanna warp the perspective

>>4426935
your values are great, thumbnail looks fantastic, but when you enlarge ... things get hairy on the forehead and underneath the eyes. Good on you for being bold and using hardbrush though

>>4427450
Imagine

What do you guys think?

>>4426734
i feel like this ones pretty bad but not sure what went wrong...

>>4427769
I think is good, maybe the line art is a little messy but overall good storytelling.

>>4427769
>not real hardware componets.
>(((female))) fixing god knows what with a welder.
>cock zero

>>4427836
i am lazy for such details, it is meant to be some military radio equipment; i get you tho its just pretty uninspired

>>4427769
it' really messy and loose, sort of takes away from it.

hows this composition

i like frogs

>>4427883
you honestly should just crop it 16:9, things looks pretty empty and awkward like that

>>4427887
How is she gonna swallow that fish anon?

>>4427908
probably in cartoony exaggerated way with throat bulge

>>4427890
yeah that does work better, thank you

>>4427716
ever done a king J-der, mechanon?

hmmm

>>4427913
Love it even more now

>>4427933
HOT AAAHHHH MMMNNNN

>>4428036
I like this.

>>4427887
i like you

>>4427769
I love your concepts so much, kinda wanna try lining your sketches for fun to see how it would look with different line styles.

>>4428051
>>4427935
thanks gays

she's so cute

hopeless image

>>4428216
hopelessly cute

>>4428216
these eyes are souless and confused

This back ground sucks dick. what's wrong with it and how do I fix it -__-.

>>4427866
i agree, always struggled with messy style, i am trying not to rush my drawings, thank u...
>>4428069
thank u anon, i would love to see them too..

>>4428277
More like both the figure and the bg suck. Its an image ive seen a thousand times by now.

>>4428277
idk about fixing that, you probably need to redraw it... i think it looks alright as is.

you should try working on a canvas thats bigger than the frame, and then block the basic shape of your subject so that you can see the perspective, then slowly block in the rest of the objects.

>>4428277
I like it, although I think it might be cause the light from the bright red couch isn't reflecting onto anything else strongly. So jealous of your skill. You must be getting thousands of views, hundreds of likes and bookmarks on pixiv.

>>4428216
>>4428227
i give up

>>4428314
I like it. Don't give up just yet.

>>4428284
What's wrong with the figure?

I’m tired of trying to fix this

>>4428616
Here’s my take on the perspective at least

>>4428603
ewk, but good

>>4428630
hot

>>4428036
blog? looks great

>>4428630
Thanks this really helps

>>4428603
Is that what your room look like fisher?

>>4428652
Yeah I’m not very creative with my interiors

>>4428659
draw more sailor girl she cute...

>>4428662
Someday..

;-;

>>4428603
wtf did you do to your chair

yeah I sketch bunnies over my stuff - chad

flats

>>4428716
Ur-Devil?

>>4427926
No, I like his theme though

>>4428679
Cute design

>>4428716
This is really cool

>>4428677
Probably just drew it poorly, it’s pretty beat up though I got it from my roommate.

>>4427933
hey your art is pretty cool, how did you manage to get so popular so fast on twitter though its kinda crazy, mind sharing any tricks you learned ?

>>4428932
What are you even talking about
>draws HOT clown girl
that's it

>>4428314
>>4428315

>>4428840
good enough i guess

>>4428716
good shit, please draw more hot lolis

>>4429029
I honestly love it, has a lot of soul!!

>>4428932
>how did you manage to get so popular so fast on twitter though its kinda crazy
>draws lewd anime girl
check out the big brain on this guy

>>4429029
Thank you very much for completing this. It's gorgeous.

>>4429219
post this shit in the porn thread, not here.

>>4427933
Hey man that looks pretty good, but I feel like I'd poke my eye out on that ass if you catch my drift.

>>4428932
I got my first 2k doing non-lewd stuff. Most of that 2k are just other pixel artists, the pixel art community really is quite small and we all follow each other. I got seen in the pixel art community doing pixel dailies, which are just daily challenges where you can get retweeted by a 60k follower account. Once I started doing lewd a few weeks ago I quickly gained 3k, because coom. I've seen people grow faster though. If youre looking for growth pixel art isnt the way to go- it's niche and most people don't want their porn in a 150x150 grid.

Doing fanart of other artist's OCs is really good for getting a big surge of followers- I didn't intend for it or go into doing fanart expecting or thinking about retweets, I just really have fun drawing other people's characters. A good amount of people unfollowed me when I started posting butts though kek

>>4429240
There are no more porn generals anymore. Thanks to tranny jannies

where's the fresh bread, this one is stale

>>4428847
danke

>>4429254
>niche and most people don't want their porn in a 150x150 grid.

im not really into drawing porn haha, but i appreciate all the tips.
I recently got retweeted by artist i love, after i retweeted his work he just did that, really made my day and i understood what twitter is about.
It is about that ability to make connections with many wonderful artists around the world, ability to be recognized by my idols is worth much more than followers or likes will ever be.
I will try drawing some fanart, mainly because i saw people receive them be so happy about it

>>4429410
Truly this! Ive had 3 of my top 10 favorite artists follow me back and that feeling is still truly crazy. No amount of followers could give me that cozy satisfaction that one of my idols not only noticed me, but liked my art enough to follow. I wish you good luck with twitter my frend.

>>4429286
love the moto-compo, nitpick though is that its missing the part of the fork that should attach to the front tire

>>4420309
goooo >>4429454

>>4429423

>>4427769
The lighting doesn’t feel convincing, maybe it’s the super saturated shadows that are throwing me off? I like the sketch a lot